Akemi_Homura
Akemi_Homura wrote:
- [Yomi's Easy]
- 00:35:433 (4) - I think this slider should end 00:35:974. because vocal is end here. if you listen carefully, vocal ends at 00:36:244.
- 00:42:190 (2) - remove this slider and just add note 00:42:460. I think It's more follow to easy for beginners.
i think it is fine for newbiie, BPM is really low- 01:24:217 (1) - Please change this spin end 01:26:109. like other diffs.k
Lanturn
Lanturn wrote:
[Tsukuyomi]
- 00:08:406 (3,4) - How about following the chimes a bit better? Try something like this. Since this is a low 111bpm song. Red ticks won't be much of an issue for newer players. http://puu.sh/8KYwf.jpg | If you don't want to follow the red tick, a 3/2 slider would even fit nicely. Note the first slider starts where the (3) circle was. i think pattern i use now fit the song better, actually i follow the sound on white line
- 00:17:055 (4) - Move this to x495 y188 so it properly matches the slider from (2). k
- 00:19:217 (1,2) - I highly recommend a pattern change here. Try making a slider from (1) to 00:20:298 - (where the reverse is) and leaving 00:20:838 - empty. nope, i can hear sound like soft hitnormal on whitle line like 00:08:406 (3,4),that's why i put this slider here
- 00:21:379 (3) - You should consider breaking your Consistency on combos here. This part marks the start of a new rhythm and is obviously very different. Because of doing this. you'll have to change ALL of the NCs on the upcoming notes (such as NCing on 00:25:703 (3) - and removing the NC from 00:23:541 (1) - ). Please consider this, as I really recommend it.k
- 00:43:001 (3) - Consider changing this to a slider that lasts until 00:43:811 - ? umm.. i try it but sounds not very good, so i keep the pattern now
- 00:45:163 (1) - Maybe move this with distance snap to the left a bit to flow better? If you draw a slider with the same curve as the previous, it's pretty far off. | Try somewhere around x264 y171 or near it. change a bit lol
- 00:47:865 (2,3,4) - If you do the above, consider curving these a bit more as well. Instead of stacking (2) where the tail of (4) was, put it off to the left more, then adjust the (3,4) to fit.
- 00:50:568 (2) - A bit nazi, but you should consider moving this up a bit to accommodate the curve from the previous slider. k
- 00:53:811 (1) - extend this by 1/2? Since nothing plays on the tail but there is some noticable lyric and music sounds on 00:54:622 - nope, sounds bad
- 01:19:757 (5) - Missing NC. added
- 01:17:595 (3,7) - Consider removing the whistle from the end of (3) and the reverse of (7) as these aren't really powerful parts compared to the other whistles. It breaks consistency but I think it overall supports the song better (mostly because of following vocals I guess) k
Nichiyouk
Nichiyouki wrote:
[Yomi's Easy]
- 00:12:730 (3,4,1) - You can move (3) to x:156 y:228. Then move (4,1) to make these are equilateral triangle like this picture.
looks not very good for me- 00:19:757 (2) - Add whistle on slider repeat, because I heard melody sound of song that, and if you think this is too loud, you can reduce volume.
k- 00:45:163 (1,2) - This flow is weird for me. I suggest that make like this picture. Then move (2) to x:144 y:140 to cause 00:44:082 (3) blanket this circle would be flow better?
i prefer current shape xD- 00:52:730 (5,1) - I thought that making like this picture would be better imo.
ok- 01:13:271 (1,1) - Draining Time between this spinner until next note was too short, which it may difficult for newbie player to reading. So I suggest that remove slider (1). Then move end of spinner at 01:15:433 instead. After that, don't forget to add a NC in 01:16:514 (2) - too.
i think it's fine..- 01:16:514 (2,3,4) - You can make these pattern to look better by may make like this picture, which you can copy this code.
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328,148,77595,2,0,P|340:184|332:232,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 01:19:757 (4) - Please add NC here.added before
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