Hi :3
[General]
- You forget to add video in K.Penguin's Normal diff xD
- 00:12:730 (3,4,1) - You can move (3) to x:156 y:228. Then move (4,1) to make these are equilateral triangle like this picture.
- 00:19:757 (2) - Add whistle on slider repeat, because I heard melody sound of song that, and if you think this is too loud, you can reduce volume.
- 00:45:163 (1,2) - This flow is weird for me. I suggest that make like this picture. Then move (2) to x:144 y:140 to cause 00:44:082 (3) blanket this circle would be flow better?
- 00:52:730 (5,1) - I thought that making like this picture would be better imo.
- 01:13:271 (1,1) - Draining Time between this spinner until next note was too short, which it may difficult for newbie player to reading. So I suggest that remove slider (1). Then move end of spinner at 01:15:433 instead. After that, don't forget to add a NC in 01:16:514 (2) - too.
- 01:16:514 (2,3,4) - You can make these pattern to look better by may make like this picture, which you can copy this code.
182,133,76514,6,0,P|212:110|260:103,1,79.9999999999999
328,148,77595,2,0,P|340:184|332:232,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: - 01:19:757 (4) - Please add NC here.
- 00:01:920 (1) - Add whistle on slider end to follow the melody, which it would be better than no have hitsound.
- 00:04:082 (1,2) - ^
- 00:05:163 (2,1,2,3,4) -
- 00:06:784 (2) - The reason same with 00:01:920 (1) - Add whistle here, too.
- 00:08:947 (2,3) - Have 2 notes here. So you must remove a circle, and I suggest that move last point of this slider like this picture would be better imo.
- 00:21:379 (1,2) - You use regular drum hitsound in following the rhythm, which different with next notes. So please change these are normal sampleset in slider repeat of (1) and slider begin of (2).
- 00:37:325 (2,3,4) - Make these notes like this picture would more fit with the vocal and melody than. Then add NC on 00:39:217 (2) - if you fix these.
- 01:00:028 (5) - This flow and pattern is so weird. Please move this to x:148 y:272 would be better.
- 01:24:217 (1) - I thought this spinner end at 01:26:244 would be better, because that has heavier sound than 01:26:109 - .
- 00:04:082 (1,2,3,4) - I thought these are look better if you add a circle at 00:06:109, and make these like these picture.
- 00:10:298 (1,2) - I thought putting note (2) here doesn't good idea. So I suggest that move (2) at 00:10:163 instead, because it would more fit with the rhythm than, and please add drum-finish in both note to follow the rhythm. Then if you fix it, please switch NC between 00:10:298 (1) - and 00:10:568 (3) - .
- 00:17:055 (1) - Please add finish in slider begin, to follow the cymbal sound of song.
- 00:34:892 (4,5,6) - Make this slider to pattern 00:34:082 (1,2,3) - and use Ctrl+G in (5,6) like this picture. Then please don't forget to check the hitsound in slider (5,6) after use it.
- 00:52:190 (1) - Normal sampleset doesn't fit in slider repeat. Please change is soft sampleset.
- 01:00:028 (1,2,3) - Move these to left a bit to blanket slider end of 00:59:217 (3) - that better.
- 01:09:487 (4) - Move thios to down 2 grids and left 1 grid. It would look better about pattern of (4,5,6,7,8).
- 01:12:325 (4,5) - move both to down like this picture would be look better imo.
- 01:21:920 (1,1) - First spinner should end at 01:24:082. So you should move second spinner, too. By start at 01:24:217 instead. Another one, I thought that second spinner end at 01:26:244 would be better, because that has heavier sound than 01:26:109 - .
Good luck~