Asumi Kana - Hanagonomi (TV Size) · forum

Suimya

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-13T02:08:32+00:00

Thanks for the nice diff Yomi :3

Added it!

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2014-05-13T12:55:35+00:00

K.Penguin's Normal

osu file format v12

[General]
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Hanagonomi (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:はなごのみ (TV Size)
Artist:Asumi Kana
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:K.Penguin's Normal
Source:ニセコイ
Tags:Nisekoi False Fake Love Ending ED4 Tachibana Marika Sekai Tsukuyomi baldrace koreapenguin
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done :3

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-13T14:47:58+00:00

Added! thanks baka penguin-san >w</

now it's ready for mods <3

Akemi_Homura

1,509 posts

Joined February 2011

Akemi_Homura 2014-05-13T16:55:36+00:00

Hi~~! Sekai~! :3
From your request~!

[General]

Fine~! :3

[Yomi's Easy]

00:35:433 (4) - I think this slider should end 00:35:974. because vocal is end here.
00:42:190 (2) - remove this slider and just add note 00:42:460. I think It's more follow to easy for beginners.
01:24:217 (1) - Please change this spin end 01:26:109. like other diffs.

[K.Penguin's Normal]

HP 4, AR 5, OD 4은 어떠신지요. Hana 난이도랑 차이가 너무 많이나는것 같네요~
00:08:946 - 여기에 노트가 있어요 실수로 안지우신듯..
00:19:217 (1) - 사소하지만 블랭킷을 좀더 완벽하게 할수 있을것 같네요~ㅎ 귀찮으시면 이 코드 복붙하세요~
```
304,288,19217,6,0,P|416:268|460:156,1,240,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:51:649 (1) - 슬라이더 끝부분이 00:50:028 (2). 이 슬라이더 시작부분이랑 좀더 완벽하게 겹쳐주세요!

[Hana]

00:20:298 (2) - (nazi) move this note to 246,236. make perfect overlap~
00:32:730 (1) - clap here~ (end of slider). to make consistency of clap.
00:37:055 - clap~!
00:38:136 - ^
00:47:325 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think this rhythm is more fit to vocal~

It's already nice map~!
I can't find anymore.. orz
GL to Rank~!

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-05-13T20:05:04+00:00

Quickie~

[General]
Tags: I don't think ED4 is really needed for a tag. When people search for this. I think they would just use "Ending" like you already have to find it easy enough.

Combo color 7: how about a lighter shade of red instead of brown? Maybe something close to this:

Combo7 : 64,193,255

[Tsukuyomi]

00:08:406 (3,4) - How about following the chimes a bit better? Try something like this. Since this is a low 111bpm song. Red ticks won't be much of an issue for newer players. http://puu.sh/8KYwf.jpg | If you don't want to follow the red tick, a 3/2 slider would even fit nicely. Note the first slider starts where the (3) circle was.
00:17:055 (4) - Move this to x495 y188 so it properly matches the slider from (2).
00:19:217 (1,2) - I highly recommend a pattern change here. Try making a slider from (1) to 00:20:298 - (where the reverse is) and leaving 00:20:838 - empty.
00:21:379 (3) - You should consider breaking your Consistency on combos here. This part marks the start of a new rhythm and is obviously very different. Because of doing this. you'll have to change ALL of the NCs on the upcoming notes (such as NCing on 00:25:703 (3) - and removing the NC from 00:23:541 (1) - ). Please consider this, as I really recommend it.
00:43:001 (3) - Consider changing this to a slider that lasts until 00:43:811 - ?
00:45:163 (1) - Maybe move this with distance snap to the left a bit to flow better? If you draw a slider with the same curve as the previous, it's pretty far off. | Try somewhere around x264 y171 or near it.
00:47:865 (2,3,4) - If you do the above, consider curving these a bit more as well. Instead of stacking (2) where the tail of (4) was, put it off to the left more, then adjust the (3,4) to fit.
00:50:568 (2) - A bit nazi, but you should consider moving this up a bit to accommodate the curve from the previous slider.
00:53:811 (1) - extend this by 1/2? Since nothing plays on the tail but there is some noticable lyric and music sounds on 00:54:622 -
01:19:757 (5) - Missing NC.
01:17:595 (3,7) - Consider removing the whistle from the end of (3) and the reverse of (7) as these aren't really powerful parts compared to the other whistles. It breaks consistency but I think it overall supports the song better (mostly because of following vocals I guess)

[K.Penguin]

00:08:946 (2,3) - TWO NOTES PLACED IN THE SAME SPOT. REMOVE THE CIRCLE! I think Akemi mentioned this, but I can't read Korean ;_;
00:14:622 (3) - I think this circle supports the music much better at 00:13:541- Consider moving it there!
00:18:947 (4) - Consider lowering the volume of this normal hit. Maybe by about 20%?
00:21:379 (1,2,1,3) - I find it a little strange you start with a drum sampleset but immediately go to the Normal sampleset on the next combo. Maybe stick to the drums for a little longer? Not really sure how you decided to use this.
00:26:784 (3) - I believe you are missing a whistle here. According to your patterns anyways.
00:38:676 (1,2) - You should consider making this a 3/4 slider instead of two 1/1 notes. http://puu.sh/8L0Sa.jpg
00:40:838 (5) - Another possible rhythm idea. Try reducing the length of this slider so that the reverse happens on 3/4 instead of 1/1. Then add a circle (or join to (6) with a slider) | http://puu.sh/8L10t.jpg | PS. NC here
00:52:460 - maybe consider adding a circle? There is a bit of a beat here, and the lyrics are pretty heavy. It just seems to be a perfect spot for one.
00:53:811 (3) - NC to keep your NC every big white tick patterns?
01:00:028 (5) - Maybe try x145 y269 for better flow?
01:06:784 (1) - move to x454 y206 for a better tail stack.

[Hana]

00:10:433 (2) - Try moving this (2) to 00:10:163 - so it adapts the drums better instead of a lead-in which I don't think it really exists at this point.
00:14:082 (5) - How about a curve so it flows smoothly into (6)? It feels like it would match up with the nice slider you had at 00:12:730 (1) - for looks. Since the next section is mostly straight sharp sliders.
00:17:055 (1) - Add a finish on the head here? It fits well with the cymbal crash in the background.
00:26:649 (3) - It might be fine, but I really don't feel anything playing or singing at this note. It might suit the song better with this deleted.
00:32:190 (1) - hit control+g twice on this since the shape got changed slightly when you used control+G on the (3)
00:27:865 (7) - and 00:36:514 (7) - Optional NC's depends if you want to maintain consistency or not.
00:40:838 (1) - Consder moving the red tick a bit to the left. So that it the ball hits clean in the center when you are at 00:41:109 - | Example: http://puu.sh/8L3nR.jpg
00:48:947 (4) - Blanket? | Right now you have http://puu.sh/8L3wr.jpg (I just dragged the (4) back a bit so I could use the approach circles to show. make sure to move it back if you decide to do something similar XD)
00:53:271 (1) - Normal sample, and soft addition? It just sounds kind of strange the normal hits start 1/4 later instead of on this key.
01:04:622 (9) - Same as 27 seconds. This combo actually does get a bit long, so consider doing it here, even if you didn't on the previous ones.
01:17:595 (6) - ^
01:21:920 (1) - consider removing this whistle. Since the bell chime happens 1/4 later, or extend this spinner by 1/4 and shorten the next by 1/4.

Just a quick mod. Sorry if it feels a bit rushed.

Good luck. Have a

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2014-05-13T21:20:52+00:00

Hi :3

[General]

You forget to add video in K.Penguin's Normal diff xD

[Yomi's Easy]

00:12:730 (3,4,1) - You can move (3) to x:156 y:228. Then move (4,1) to make these are equilateral triangle like this picture.
SPOILER
00:19:757 (2) - Add whistle on slider repeat, because I heard melody sound of song that, and if you think this is too loud, you can reduce volume.
00:45:163 (1,2) - This flow is weird for me. I suggest that make like this picture. Then move (2) to x:144 y:140 to cause 00:44:082 (3) blanket this circle would be flow better?
SPOILER
00:52:730 (5,1) - I thought that making like this picture would be better imo.
SPOILER
01:13:271 (1,1) - Draining Time between this spinner until next note was too short, which it may difficult for newbie player to reading. So I suggest that remove slider (1). Then move end of spinner at 01:15:433 instead. After that, don't forget to add a NC in 01:16:514 (2) - too.

01:16:514 (2,3,4) - You can make these pattern to look better by may make like this picture, which you can copy this code.

SPOILER

182,133,76514,6,0,P|212:110|260:103,1,79.9999999999999
328,148,77595,2,0,P|340:184|332:232,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:19:757 (4) - Please add NC here.

[K.Penguin's Normal]

00:01:920 (1) - Add whistle on slider end to follow the melody, which it would be better than no have hitsound.
00:04:082 (1,2) - ^
00:05:163 (2,1,2,3,4) -
SPOILER
00:06:784 (2) - The reason same with 00:01:920 (1) - Add whistle here, too.
00:08:947 (2,3) - Have 2 notes here. So you must remove a circle, and I suggest that move last point of this slider like this picture would be better imo.
SPOILER
00:21:379 (1,2) - You use regular drum hitsound in following the rhythm, which different with next notes. So please change these are normal sampleset in slider repeat of (1) and slider begin of (2).
00:37:325 (2,3,4) - Make these notes like this picture would more fit with the vocal and melody than. Then add NC on 00:39:217 (2) - if you fix these.
SPOILER
01:00:028 (5) - This flow and pattern is so weird. Please move this to x:148 y:272 would be better.
01:24:217 (1) - I thought this spinner end at 01:26:244 would be better, because that has heavier sound than 01:26:109 - .

[Hana]

00:04:082 (1,2,3,4) - I thought these are look better if you add a circle at 00:06:109, and make these like these picture.
SPOILER
00:10:298 (1,2) - I thought putting note (2) here doesn't good idea. So I suggest that move (2) at 00:10:163 instead, because it would more fit with the rhythm than, and please add drum-finish in both note to follow the rhythm. Then if you fix it, please switch NC between 00:10:298 (1) - and 00:10:568 (3) - .
00:17:055 (1) - Please add finish in slider begin, to follow the cymbal sound of song.
00:34:892 (4,5,6) - Make this slider to pattern 00:34:082 (1,2,3) - and use Ctrl+G in (5,6) like this picture. Then please don't forget to check the hitsound in slider (5,6) after use it.
SPOILER
00:52:190 (1) - Normal sampleset doesn't fit in slider repeat. Please change is soft sampleset.
01:00:028 (1,2,3) - Move these to left a bit to blanket slider end of 00:59:217 (3) - that better.
01:09:487 (4) - Move thios to down 2 grids and left 1 grid. It would look better about pattern of (4,5,6,7,8).
01:12:325 (4,5) - move both to down like this picture would be look better imo.
SPOILER
01:21:920 (1,1) - First spinner should end at 01:24:082. So you should move second spinner, too. By start at 01:24:217 instead. Another one, I thought that second spinner end at 01:26:244 would be better, because that has heavier sound than 01:26:109 - .

I think this map want more mods yet, but however, it also nice mapset :3 Give a star

Good luck~

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2014-05-14T01:17:06+00:00

thanks mod

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if come mods fix plz about my normal, sekai nyan

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-14T01:42:06+00:00

Thanks so much for modding guys >w</ Fixed everything on your mods <3

and updated baka penguin's normal! =w=

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-05-14T02:38:42+00:00

Akemi_Homura

Akemi_Homura wrote:
[Yomi's Easy]
00:35:433 (4) - I think this slider should end 00:35:974. because vocal is end here. if you listen carefully, vocal ends at 00:36:244.
00:42:190 (2) - remove this slider and just add note 00:42:460. I think It's more follow to easy for beginners.
i think it is fine for newbiie, BPM is really low
01:24:217 (1) - Please change this spin end 01:26:109. like other diffs.k

Lanturn

Lanturn wrote:
[Tsukuyomi]
00:08:406 (3,4) - How about following the chimes a bit better? Try something like this. Since this is a low 111bpm song. Red ticks won't be much of an issue for newer players. http://puu.sh/8KYwf.jpg | If you don't want to follow the red tick, a 3/2 slider would even fit nicely. Note the first slider starts where the (3) circle was. i think pattern i use now fit the song better, actually i follow the sound on white line
00:17:055 (4) - Move this to x495 y188 so it properly matches the slider from (2). k
00:19:217 (1,2) - I highly recommend a pattern change here. Try making a slider from (1) to 00:20:298 - (where the reverse is) and leaving 00:20:838 - empty. nope, i can hear sound like soft hitnormal on whitle line like 00:08:406 (3,4),that's why i put this slider here
00:21:379 (3) - You should consider breaking your Consistency on combos here. This part marks the start of a new rhythm and is obviously very different. Because of doing this. you'll have to change ALL of the NCs on the upcoming notes (such as NCing on 00:25:703 (3) - and removing the NC from 00:23:541 (1) - ). Please consider this, as I really recommend it.k
00:43:001 (3) - Consider changing this to a slider that lasts until 00:43:811 - ? umm.. i try it but sounds not very good, so i keep the pattern now
00:45:163 (1) - Maybe move this with distance snap to the left a bit to flow better? If you draw a slider with the same curve as the previous, it's pretty far off. | Try somewhere around x264 y171 or near it. change a bit lol
00:47:865 (2,3,4) - If you do the above, consider curving these a bit more as well. Instead of stacking (2) where the tail of (4) was, put it off to the left more, then adjust the (3,4) to fit.
00:50:568 (2) - A bit nazi, but you should consider moving this up a bit to accommodate the curve from the previous slider. k
00:53:811 (1) - extend this by 1/2? Since nothing plays on the tail but there is some noticable lyric and music sounds on 00:54:622 - nope, sounds bad
01:19:757 (5) - Missing NC. added
01:17:595 (3,7) - Consider removing the whistle from the end of (3) and the reverse of (7) as these aren't really powerful parts compared to the other whistles. It breaks consistency but I think it overall supports the song better (mostly because of following vocals I guess) k

Nichiyouk

Nichiyouki wrote:

[Yomi's Easy]
00:12:730 (3,4,1) - You can move (3) to x:156 y:228. Then move (4,1) to make these are equilateral triangle like this picture.
SPOILER
looks not very good for me
00:19:757 (2) - Add whistle on slider repeat, because I heard melody sound of song that, and if you think this is too loud, you can reduce volume.
k
00:45:163 (1,2) - This flow is weird for me. I suggest that make like this picture. Then move (2) to x:144 y:140 to cause 00:44:082 (3) blanket this circle would be flow better?
SPOILER
i prefer current shape xD
00:52:730 (5,1) - I thought that making like this picture would be better imo.
SPOILER
ok
01:13:271 (1,1) - Draining Time between this spinner until next note was too short, which it may difficult for newbie player to reading. So I suggest that remove slider (1). Then move end of spinner at 01:15:433 instead. After that, don't forget to add a NC in 01:16:514 (2) - too.
i think it's fine..
01:16:514 (2,3,4) - You can make these pattern to look better by may make like this picture, which you can copy this code.
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01:19:757 (4) - Please add NC here.added before

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215,260,21379,6,0,P|178:235|166:195,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,115,22460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
223,59,23001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,55,23541,2,0,P|353:49|397:75,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,138,25163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,207,25703,6,0,P|418:255|415:289,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,348,26784,2,0,P|328:336|278:346,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,332,27865,2,0,P|156:322|125:279,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,337,29487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,328,30028,6,0,P|417:300|431:266,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,201,31109,1,2,0:0:0:0:
457,114,31649,2,0,L|417:80,1,40
389,66,32190,2,0,P|344:63|301:89,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,150,33811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,228,34352,6,0,P|276:274|221:285,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,273,35433,2,0,L|127:165,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,122,36514,2,0,P|146:93|190:75,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,164,38136,1,8,0:3:0:0:
258,228,38676,6,0,P|297:238|341:224,1,79.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,206,39757,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,291,40298,2,0,L|385:334,1,40,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,354,40838,2,0,B|309:375|309:375|263:328|205:336,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,326,42190,2,0,L|132:278,1,40,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
92,218,43001,5,4,0:0:0:0:
154,53,44082,2,0,P|193:69|224:105,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
279,159,45163,2,0,B|326:204|326:204|388:183|430:221,2,160,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,94,47865,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,159,48406,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,246,48947,1,2,0:0:0:0:
199,320,49487,2,0,P|239:338|283:334,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,322,50568,2,0,L|405:301,2,40,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,265,51649,5,4,0:0:0:0:
311,178,52190,1,2,0:0:0:0:
238,128,52730,2,0,P|205:95|196:54,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,55,53811,2,0,L|378:42,1,79.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54892,12,8,57595,0:0:0:0:
335,216,58136,6,0,P|306:167|278:152,2,79.9999999999999,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,238,59757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
171,278,60298,2,0,P|125:289|76:280,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,215,61379,2,0,L|68:135,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,57,62460,5,2,0:0:0:0:
179,92,63001,2,0,P|230:104|266:94,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,85,64082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
394,156,64622,2,0,L|445:219,2,79.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,125,65974,2,0,L|313:146,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,205,66784,5,2,0:0:0:0:
228,285,67325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
262,365,67865,2,0,P|313:369|353:356,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,301,68947,2,0,L|428:206,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,137,70028,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,158,70568,2,0,L|312:169,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,176,71109,6,0,P|246:131|211:121,2,79.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,204,72730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73271,12,8,74892,0:0:0:0:
252,268,75433,6,0,P|196:248|182:226,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,145,76514,2,0,P|235:106|261:105,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,148,77595,2,0,P|340:184|332:232,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,191,79217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,245,79757,6,0,P|101:256|43:193,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,173,81379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,119,81920,2,0,P|254:97|347:128,2,160,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84217,12,2,86109,0:0:0:0:

Sylphi

osu! Alumni

3,298 posts

Joined February 2012

Sylphi 2014-05-14T03:14:04+00:00

Sorry for short mod. but i really don't know how to mod DX

[K.Penguin's Normal]
00:21:379 (1,2) - 다른곳은 노말 힛사를 사용하셨는데, 여기만 드럼으로 사용해서 뭔가 매치가 안되는 느낌이네요
00:32:190 (4) - 큰 흰색틱마다 NC 넣으시는것 같은데, 여기엔 NC 안되어있네요
00:53:811 (3) - 일관성을 위해서 NC
01:08:947 (4) - 동일한 이유의 NC

[Hana]
00:40:838 (1) - Add drum finish on slider's start
00:49:487 (4) - Add new combo for consistency
01:21:649 (6) - It would be better to remove this or change 01:20:838 (5) to repeat slider imo

Vicho

887 posts

Joined May 2009

Vicho 2014-05-14T03:28:20+00:00

little irc mod<3

22:54 *Sekai-nyan is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/421464 Asumi Kana - Hanagonomi (TV Size)]
22:54 Vicho: oh lol
22:56 Vicho: haven't play your version though o.o
22:57 *Vicho is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/421156 Asumi Kana - Hanagonomi (TV Size) [Hana]]
22:57 Sekai-nyan: my ver is kawaii!
22:57 Vicho: VIDEO OFFSET IS 1600
22:57 Vicho: GOSH
22:57 Sekai-nyan: omg
22:57 Sekai-nyan: i'll fix it asap xD
22:58 Vicho: FIX IT PLS
22:58 Sekai-nyan: lol
22:58 Vicho: it kinda bothers me lol
22:58 Vicho: I told the same to Andrea btw
22:58 Vicho: xD
22:58 Sekai-nyan: lol
22:58 Sekai-nyan: omg
22:58 Sekai-nyan: i didn't know you play with video xD
22:58 Vicho: ofc <3
22:59 Vicho: but if it gives me lag I disable it xD
22:59 Vicho: but yeah, I like playing with video <3
23:00 Sekai-nyan: =w=
23:00 Sekai-nyan: loli Marika <3
23:00 Sekai-nyan: so cute...
23:00 Vicho: she looks like Rin-chan ww
23:00 Sekai-nyan: yeah kinda xD
23:01 Sekai-nyan: i still need to watch ep3
23:01 Sekai-nyan: orz
23:01 *Vicho is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/421156 Asumi Kana - Hanagonomi (TV Size) [Hana]]
23:01 Sekai-nyan: ok fixed and updated =3=
23:02 Vicho: this ending is so cute <3
23:02 Vicho: love it
23:03 Vicho: also, the map is so good
23:03 Sekai-nyan: =w=
23:04 Sekai-nyan: make it perfect \:D/
23:04 Vicho: 00:38:676 - this triple kinda bothers me o-o
23:04 Vicho: it doesn't fit very well
23:04 Vicho: I would do this http://puu.sh/8Lwlh.jpg
23:04 Sekai-nyan: why xD
23:06 Sekai-nyan: ok =3=
23:07 Vicho: also, why you follow the vocals here 00:47:595 - and not here 00:51:649 - o.o?
23:07 Sekai-nyan: i guess it fixed other wise
23:07 Sekai-nyan: i followed the music here
23:07 Sekai-nyan: lol
23:07 Sekai-nyan: finishs
23:08 Vicho: lol
23:08 Sekai-nyan: and it fits xD
23:08 Vicho: it feels like you first followed vocals, because those "sharara sharara" xD
23:08 Sekai-nyan: oh well
23:09 Vicho: well, yeah it kinda fits xD
23:09 Sekai-nyan: Vicho pls
23:11 Vicho: sure
23:12 Sekai-nyan: i'm so evil lol
23:12 Vicho: anyways, the last thing I would do is moving 00:51:649 (1,1,1) - to 00:51:920 -
23:12 Vicho: and then add a single note here 00:51:649 -
23:14 Sekai-nyan: but the stream D:
23:14 Vicho: hmm
23:14 Vicho: you're right
23:14 Vicho: hmm
23:14 Vicho: damn
23:14 Sekai-nyan: lol
23:16 Sekai-nyan: ok
23:16 Sekai-nyan: i think i fixed the last slider with a single note
23:16 Sekai-nyan: it also fit
23:16 Vicho: yay
23:16 Vicho: then, this is perfect now =w=
23:16 Vicho: perfect map <3

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-14T03:32:38+00:00

Thanks bakaflow for your mod and Vicho for the nice irc mod :3

fixed everything on my hard, and updated Yomi's diff o3o/

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

-Teina- 2014-05-14T03:34:36+00:00

hey~ nyan-san.

From as request.

Black : suggestion

[General]

Colours : left two colours which is similar?

Hana ( flower ? )

01:12:325 (4) - move to X:236 Y:162. You used straight triple except here. I think it is strange.
01:26:244 - change volume more lowly? around 15%~20%

Some tips.
About the Stack Leniency. 00:09:217 (3,4,5) -

You can move right and down one grid. I may be move smooth.

K.Penguin's Normal

00:50:028 (2,1) - Do you want to overlap that?
00:52:460 - add note? this part is feel up and down (in the rhythm). But I think it is not same to 00:47:325 (1,2,3,4) - . I feel that 00:51:649 (1,2) - is faster that 00:47:325 (1,2,3,4) - .Do you like to add note here or you can make this two part different.
01:06:784 (1) - move to X:453 Y:206 to overlap with 01:04:622 (1) - ?
01:26:244 - change volume lowly? around 15%~20%

Yomi's Easy

Video offset 0 > 1600
Remove Widescreen Support
01:26:244 - change volume more lowly? around 15%~20%

Nice map~
(╯°□°)╯彡

Last edited by -Teina- 2014-05-14T03:56:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-14T03:44:17+00:00

Thanks Teller for your mod and star <3

Fixed everything on hard and normal owo/

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-05-14T04:00:09+00:00

Hi again.

[General]

fine

[Yomi's Easy]

00:19:757 (2) - add whistle on return? and volume down -10%
00:22:460 (4) - remove whistle and 00:23:001 (5) - add whistle better?
00:38:676 (3) - add whistle on end.
01:06:784 (1) - add Finish. same as other diff.
01:19:757 (5) - Missed New combo on purpose? I think a New combo fits better anyhow.

[K.Penguin's Normal]

00:37:325 (2) - Try an arrange like this. I think more fit this song.
00:43:001 (1) - why stop blue line? It's not fit. Please change different patterns.

[Hana]

00:04:082 (1,2,3) - More better placement~

img

188,156,4082,6,0,P|152:124|96:116,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,244,4622,2,0,P|237:228|272:184,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,204,5163,2,0,P|102:251|123:303,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:30:433 (3) - overmap? remove note better.
01:01:379 (6) - add Sampleset : N ?

Nice mapset ~ owo/ Good luck.

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-14T04:06:40+00:00

Thanks Satellite for your mod <3

fixed everything on normal and hard!

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Delis 2014-05-14T05:43:53+00:00

I'm here for NISEKOI

[General]

The BG looks low quality a bit however okay for me and that was my avatar on skype for a while
The current offset is kind of early, try out offset: 1910 (-10) this offset better for None and DT to me, but I suppose this is not perfect offset for the song, you need few opinions about the offset from others.

[Hana]
00:10:153 (7) - add drum-clap at here, and add drum-finish at 00:10:163 (7) - , these will follow back sound of drums, it sound better=3=.
00:13:947 (4) - you can add clap or something to follow the sound of ....drum? I don't know what this sound is, anyway ignore this if you want to keep the consistency of hitsounds, or don't want to add clap and whistle at same point.
00:20:298 (2) - the stack doesn't comfortable to play for me, move to about x:392 y:340 with spacing x1.0, it feels better now!
00:40:838 (1) - I guess you forgot to add finish here

.
00:49:487 (4) - You have to add NC here, make a consistent with other 2 reverses sliders.
00:54:622 (2) - add Sampleset : Normal?, I guess forgot to add here too.
00:54:892 (4) - add a drum-clap or finish on the tail, to follow the drum sound. both are match to the sound, I think.
01:04:612 (9) - ...was okay to play, I suggest you to reduce one reverse though. it seems will not cause to hard to read, but it would better if you make following back sound from 01:05:693 -. I mean, try out like this:

SPOILER

or make a triple at 01:06:379, both would nice for here=w=, if you apply above mod,add Sampleset : Normal on the tail and at 01:05:828 (10,12,13) - and add NC at 01:04:612 (9) -.
01:12:720 (6) - now this looks and flow to 01:12:720 (6) - from here is bad a bit, you can improve this like an image of below, sorry I'm really not good at make blanket orz.

SPOILER

01:14:207 (3) - you can add Sampleset : Normal here, since here is kind of similar sound as 01:14:072, it would be fit here!
01:14:082 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - personally don't like these 3 triplets, better to make 2 of streams of 5 if follow the back sound perfectly, but it will be quite hard for this diff, so I recommend this:

SPOILER

[K.Penguin's Normal]
00:07:325 (3,4) - I recommend you to make a square for Normal diff, hah I personally don't like look randomly circles pattern, just a suggestion.
00:08:947 (2) - I'm not sure, add a drum-clap on reverse arrow? there's a similar sound as drum clap, but it louds for quiet part, reduce the volume by10 - 20 if you add it.
00:21:379 (1) - why Sampleset : Drum on the reverse and on the head at 00:23:001 (2) - ? only these were setting Sampleset : Drum in this part, maybe change them to Sampleset : Normal! and, make a symmetrical stright slider as 00:23:001 (2) -

SPOILER

00:37:325 (2) - add a whistle on the tail, nothing to say to add it, just i feel sound good!
00:43:001 (1) - you can make a same rhythm as 00:39:217 (2,3) - for consistency, and I prefer that one!
01:13:811 (1) - add Sampleset : Normal on the tail, it would match to drum sound here.
01:15:163 (3) - same as above.

[Yomi's Easy]
00:49:487 (1) - add a whistle on the head.
00:53:811 (1) - why 1/1 slider here, it slider's end should be at 00:54:622 -, it follows the vocal and drum sound, you can add Sampleset : Normal on the end if you change this
01:19:757 (5) - add NC

go

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-14T06:56:53+00:00

Thanks so much for the mod Delis :3

Fixed everything on it for normal and hard www

Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2014-05-14T09:28:50+00:00

hi nyan :3
I'M NOT BAKA

General

remove widescreen support only Easy

Yomi's Easy

00:21:369 (3) - NC?
00:30:018 (3) - ^
00:34:342 (3) - ^
00:34:342 (3) - ^
00:38:666 (3) - ^
00:42:450 - add clap
00:51:639 (3) - NC?
01:06:774 (1) - add finish
01:19:747 (5) - NC
01:21:910 - add finish?

K.Penguin's Normal

00:40:018 - add note
00:55:693 (6,1) - make spacing
01:14:882 - add clap

Hana

00:17:045 (1) - make beautiful blanket with 00:15:964 (3)
00:47:315 (1) - remove NC
00:47:585 (2) - NC
00:52:450 (1) - remove NC?
01:04:612 (1) - how this rhythm?
SPOILER

kawaii song!
good luck~

Asagi

1,020 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 2014-05-14T09:33:10+00:00

Hello Sekai-nyan :3
in-game PM req

[Hana]

00:09:882 - try to add a circle here, i can hear a drum sound on that blue tick, and it fits the drum roll
00:14:612 (6) - why this circle isnt on the center? wwww
00:16:774 (4) - ^
00:17:045 (1) - nazi, better blanket here
00:25:693 (1) - i think this slider is kinda bit off? let say it that, maybe you can move this more on left, for smoother flow, and just adjust the other circles next to it
SPOILER
00:34:882 (4) - nazi, better blanket
00:35:423 (5,6) - try curving this slider, it looks nice and better flow for me
SPOILER
00:36:504 (1) - this slider can improve more, try to put the red anchor and tail anchor on the center of the grid
SPOILER
00:48:126 (1,1) - try to remove NC here? since they are on the same stanza, better not to overuse NC ,try to consider it
00:52:450 (1,1) - ^same as here
00:48:937 (3) - nazi, poor blanket
00:49:477 (1) - ^
00:54:882 (4) - why dont you make it symmetrical with 00:53:801 (1) - ? i think it has a better flow that the straight slider you have
SPOILER
00:55:964 - try to add note here with NC, to emphasize the spinner well, dont forget to readjust the spinner
01:17:585 (1,1,2,3) - looks like the pattern here is forced to put here, i know you can make a better pattern here
01:22:180 (1) - if this spinner is following the vocals put the spinner start here, 01:22:045 , dont forget to adjust

I checked the other diffs, just a very minor stuff and i didnt mind to point out www

ヾ(･ω･*)ﾉ
Good Luck

Chirony

390 posts

Joined June 2012

Chirony 2014-05-14T10:43:13+00:00

Hi~
from PM request!

[Hana]

00:05:693 (4) - add whistle (tail)
00:34:882 (4) - better to use same DS before.
00:46:234 (3) - change sampleset to auto and use normal sampleset to 00:46:369 (4)
00:49:477 (1) - blanket use is good 00:48:937 (3)
01:22:045 - spinner start is here?

[K.Penguin's Normal]

00:52:450 (2) - sampleset is normal?
try this. I think flow is better
example

[Yomi's Easy]

try this
example
00:42:180 (2) - add whistle (head)?
01:19:747 (5) - NC?

short mod sorry...
I hope the mod helps you!
good luck~

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-14T11:08:32+00:00

Thanks for modding guys, so much helpful suggestions <3

fixed most of the stuff on normal and hard =w=b

Laurier

1,785 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2014-05-14T12:08:54+00:00

yo

General
you should use more many "moe" to name of mp3.

Easy
00:11:639 (2,3,4) - try symmetrical pattern. like this http://puu.sh/8LQla.jpg
00:21:369 (3) - add NIC to here. and you should change NC pattern. like this http://puu.sh/8LQCU.jpg
00:40:828 (1) - add clap with Drum Additions.
01:11:099 (1) - a little strange flow. try another one. http://puu.sh/8LQMR.jpg
01:13:261 (1,1) - too near with spinner. try this one. http://puu.sh/8LRe5.jpg
01:19:747 (5) - NC from your patterns

Normal
00:13:531 - add note to follow the vocal ?
00:32:180 (4) - add NC from your patterns
00:32:180 (4) - move to x148y321 . it makes perfect stack with 00:50:018 (2) -
00:59:747 (4,5,1) - try this flow ? http://puu.sh/8LREZ.jpg
01:06:774 (1) - move to x454y206 same issue as 00:32:180 (4) -

Hard
00:06:234 (1) - how about this form ? those curves are pretty fit to song. http://puu.sh/8LROi.jpg
00:12:720 (1) - make a blanket with 00:11:369 (2) - . it will be good art for your map. http://puu.sh/8LRSZ.jpg
00:14:882 (1) - same as 00:06:234 (1) - It looks better if you arrange something. http://puu.sh/8LS0x.jpg
00:19:207 (1) - blanket issue. move to 1~2 grid right.
00:52:991 (4) - use sampleset normal ?
00:54:882 (4) - end at 00:55:693 - with follow the vocal ? http://puu.sh/8LScv.jpg

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-14T12:20:24+00:00

Thanks for modding Laurier o3o/

Fixed everything on your mod! on hard and mostly on normal too =w=/

And yes i should've used more moe on the mp3 ;w; orz

Genkishi

566 posts

Joined September 2010

Genkishi 2014-05-15T01:34:45+00:00

Yo Sekai-nyan :3

From in-game pm request

[General]

-I don't see any problem here

[Yomi's Easy]

01:05:964 (5) - Add a clap at the head of the slider? Like it's a clap clap sound
01:15:433 (x) - I think the volume here seems a bit loud. Try copying the volume in this timing point 00:21:379, it's more relaxing to hear for me since the song is about to end.
01:15:423 (x) - This part is like the sound in 00:01:910, so why don't you put whistle on all the notes and sliders just like you did on 00:01:910?

[K.Penguin's Normal]
-Why don't you put Penguin's Normal instead? it's much cuter haha

..Well it's up to you, just a suggestion.

00:17:855 (2) - Move this to the middle line so it aligns with circle (4)
00:53:801 (4) - Add new combo here
00:40:288 (5) - I think it's bad to have a spacing problem if it's easy or normal..so i guess use distance snap for this
01:05:964 (2) - Just like i said in yomi's easy diff, put a clap on the head of the slider?

[Hana]

01:01:639 (7) - Add clap here just like i said on the other diffs
01:14:882 (1) - Remove new combo here then add one on 01:15:423 (5)

That's All i can find!

GoodLuck Sekai~!

Lust

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2,667 posts

Joined January 2013

Lust 2014-05-15T01:50:34+00:00

[General]

Looks fine to me

[Yomi's Easy]

00:01:910 (1,2,3) - Blanket can be improved. Use 00:03:531 (2) - 's approach circle to help you in fixing this
00:13:261 (4,1) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved. Use 00:14:882 (1) - 's approach circle to assist you in fixing this
00:19:747 (2) - Flow is a bit awkward with this reverse slider, try this to improve the flow and make way for some nice structure as well
SPOILER
00:23:531 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 00:25:153 (2) - 's approach circle to help you fix this
00:58:126 (1,2) - ^
01:11:099 (1) - Remove NC to be consistent with the next combo?
01:24:207 (1) - I would use the default whistle here

[K.Penguin's Normal]

00:21:369 (1) - This object goes up pretty high, to improve flow I would try something like this as well as avoid any potential overlap with the lifebar. The reverse makes a sling in to the next pattern, and I found it plays really nicely!
SPOILER
00:32:180 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. Use 00:33:801 (2) - 's approach circle to fix this
00:39:207 (2,3) - I would try to avoid the stack. There is a lot to read here, and the stack will make it significantly more difficult for players to well, hit accurately. This is put in consideration with 00:40:018 (4,5) - . Also you rarely have stacking in the difficulty, so to keep consistency its best to unstack
01:24:207 (1) - Same hitsound suggestion as in Easy

[Hana]
Really clean hard at this point, nothing much to say!

00:04:072 (1,2,3,4) - I really like how this pattern plays with this song!
01:24:207 (1) - Same hitsound suggestion as in Easy

Good luck with the speed rank ;o

Hinsvar

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3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-05-15T05:41:54+00:00

Hello; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Yomi's Easy

00:06:234 (1,2) - These notes look kinda messy... at least for me. Try moving (2) to (352,140) to make them look like this? Looks neater and creates a better flow. You might need to rearrange the objects after this a lot, though.
00:21:369 - Don't you think you should restart the combo pattern here (by NC-ing 00:21:369 (3), removing the NC at 00:23:531 (1), then NC 00:25:693 (3) and so on; basically, start to use NCs every two stanzas from 00:21:369 (3) instead of 00:19:207 (1))? It's hard to explain (I keep using this line...), but I think the rhythm of the music is also restarting here, so it would make more sense for the combo to follow it.
00:41:910 - Add a whistle here since the instrument on this tick is similar as the one at 00:40:828, and that one has a whistle too? This tick also feels empty without any hitsounding, IMO...
00:49:477 - Add a whistle to continue following the piano's sound like 00:47:855 (2,3,4)? I can't see why should you break the pattern here.
00:58:666 - Add a whistle to emphasize the instrument other than the one you've emphasized with a clap?
01:02:991 - ^ (Applies to similar cases.)
01:19:747 (5,6,7) - Not too important, but you might want to make a cool blanket pattern like this instead of the current pattern, which looks kinda dull compared to the patterns that you've made before.

>K.Penguin's Normal

00:08:937 - I think using the Drum's whistle is too much to emphasize the instrument here. Just remove the whistle and keep the Drum sampleset?
00:11:639 - Use Soft addition and add a whistle? I just think that it fits with the instruments here very well, alongside the Normal sampleset.
00:13:261 - Add a whistle? Kinda the same reason as the suggestion above.
00:14:882 - ^
00:47:315 - 00:53:261 - Try to use Soft addition with whistles for every object on the white ticks? Again, I think they fit the instruments nicely. Up to you, though.

>Hana

00:05:693 (4) - Try to change the slider to three circles like this? A triplet at 00:05:964 (5,6,1) fits with the song well. It just feels weird to leave 00:06:099 out for some reason...
00:25:693 (1) - Make it curved like this for a better flow from 00:25:423 (6)? You only need to move the node in the middle of (1) to (36,200).
00:38:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why don't you try to make a triangle like this? Looks neater, I think.
00:47:855 - 00:53:261 - Replace all finishes on the white tick (except 00:51:639) with a whistle? I feel that a finish is too heavy compared to the sound of the instruments that are being played here. Whistles would fit better.
00:53:801 (1,4) - Make them look like this for neatness (again)?
01:03:261 (4) - Move to (476,148) for a better flow from 01:02:450 (3)? You'll definitely have to rearrange a few objects to do this, though.
01:14:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move them to (224,100) so the spacing at 01:14:612 (5,1,2,3,4,5) will be consistent while playing? Because of the stacking effect at 01:14:882 (1,2,3,4,5), 01:14:612 (5,1) is too close to each other right now.

...This is why I don't want to mod unmotivated; even when I'm feeling like it, my mod is still crappy lol

Well, that's it.

Good luck on the way

Last edited by Hinsvar 2014-05-15T09:31:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Suimya

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-15T08:02:48+00:00

Thank you guys for your great mods <3 owo/

fixed everything on hard and normal =w=b

ShiraKai

534 posts

Joined September 2010

ShiraKai 2014-05-15T10:11:32+00:00

hello=~=

[Yomi's Easy]

00:29:477 (2) - add whistle?
01:05:964 (5) - add clap ? same as Normal diff.
01:19:747 (5) - add NC

[K.Penguin's Normal]
nice diff

[Hana]

00:35:423 (5,6) - change to Smooth form? (http://puu.sh/8N4ZU.jpg)
00:48:666 (1,2,3) - move it x207,y201 ?
00:48:937 (3) - add whistle on end? follow the vocal

very very very cute song & nice mapset!!!
Good Luck

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2014-05-15T10:17:05+00:00

[Hana]

00:09:477 (5) - make a bit curve for better flow? http://puu.sh/8N4Mg.jpg
00:19:207 (1) - don't make this slider slow like 00:17:045 (1) too? 0.0
00:51:910 (2,3) - I think triple circle is more fit with vocal like you did earlier.
00:55:964 - what about this rhythm. add whsitle on 1 2 3 and clap on 4, I think it's more fit than spinner ;w; http://puu.sh/8N57z.jpg example pattern: http://puu.sh/8N5aP.jpg
01:04:072 (8) - better blanket?
01:09:477 (4,5,6,7,8) - what about make it more symmetry? http://puu.sh/8N5pA.jpg
01:13:261 (1) - better blanket? D:
01:14:612 (5) - 1 grid right? spacing here feel not balance.
01:22:450 (6,7) - add this instead of first spinner? http://puu.sh/8N5JZ.jpg

[Penguin]

00:13:531 (2,3) - hmm move to 496|164 , 464|116? to make a bit curve for better flow.
00:32:180 (1) - remove NC? the combo will too short imo.
00:40:288 (5) - make it parallel with 3? looks a bit weird :X

[Yomi]

00:19:747 (2) - whistle on reverse and clap on tail?
00:22:450 (4,5) - swap whistle?
00:23:531 (1) - add whistle on reverse?
00:25:153 (2) - add whistle?
00:54:882 - add another 1/1 slider and start the spinner on the next 1/1 beat instead? it's more fit imo.
01:19:747 (5) - NC? it's almost end and the combo is too long so I think it's not a problem.

that's all good luck!

Suimya

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Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-15T15:45:31+00:00

Thanks for your great mods Pan and kaCha owo/

Fixed almost everything on your mods <3

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-05-15T16:57:04+00:00

most mods are modding what i changed but didn't be uploaded...
anyway fix some patterns

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: moemoemoe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58136
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11649,86244
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Hanagonomi (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:はなごのみ (TV Size)
Artist:Asumi Kana
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:Yomi's Easy
Source:ニセコイ
Tags:Nisekoi False Fake Love Ending Tachibana Marika Sekai Tsukuyomi baldrace koreapenguin
BeatmapID:421464
BeatmapSetID:174429

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-16T08:40:18+00:00

updated Yomi's diff :3

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-05-16T20:03:55+00:00

PM request for my little World-Meow <3

Unrankable Issue
Comment/Opinion

General

I would go for a consitent end of the spinner since the one in the Easy ends on the blue tick. I don't know which I consider the best to end it on. As I've already modded this song 2 times I can say that I've seen both variations but well, I'd at least go with one equal decision over the mapset :V
Rest seems clean! C:

Easy

Mod

00:06:234 (1) - Hm, maybe you could let this Slider point a bit more in 00:07:315 (2) - 's direction to get a fluent movement here. So the player could follow the curve of 1 to hit 2 which would create a smooth movement here.
Screenshot
00:13:261 (4) - You could replace this with an y-flipped version of 00:11:639 (2) - to get the feeling of symmetry here.
00:27:855 (3) - How about placing this somewhere around 201|362
00:35:423 (2) - The rhythm here feels pretty weird to me. I think mapping the red tick here is unneeded, instead I think ignoring the white tick before the red tick feels so odd due to the strong sounds (Vocals, Instrument and Drum). Shortening this by 1/2 could help to make the rhythm and the playability way better here.
Screenshot
00:42:991 (1) - I would go for the rhythm as 00:38:666 (1,2,3) - here because it feels like it catches all the notes the best. You could ctach the background noise with a 1/1 slider at 00:42:991 (1) - as you did it at 00:38:666 (1) - . 00:44:072 (2) - sounds a bit odd as well since I was expecting the 1/2 Slider you've used before. I know variety is something pretty important but for Easies you should go for similiar rhythms for not to confuse newer players :/
Screenshot
00:58:126 (1) - I didn't expect the turn here. I've rather expected this to follow the curve as the slider at e.g. 00:48:937 (3,4) - . Maybe CTRL+G could help, but I dont know how the flow to the next objects would be. Otherwise with better flow you could do what I show you in the screenshot below.
Screenshot
01:13:261 (1,1) - This is maybe not that well readable for newbies. Even though it's low BPM I would give some more recovering time for the player since spinners are often confusing for newer plays :/ You could also just replace the spinner with a slider to avoid this problem.
01:21:910 (3) - I'd go for a 4/1 Slider here because the sound you've placed the repeat on isn't really strong and could be followed perfectly without the reverse arrow. I think the whole sounds could be covered by a slider like this (see the Normal as an example)

Opinion
Hmmm, I don't like this diff as much as the others. It's not bad but I just think the other diffs are way cleaner. I disliked the flow at some points but I also don't want to ruin your style. I guess it's just not my preference. The whole diff feels a bit monotonous to me compared to the others. I know it's an Easy but you could have been more creative. The rhythm is okay, I've liked most of it. Good job on this. I don't know what to say about the aesthetics, it could be a bit tidier imo but nothing you have to fix. Well, as said before the diff is not bad but could take some more improvement if you ask me. Good luck on that! ;D

Normal

Mod

00:13:531 (2) - Wow, the spacing is messed up owo
Screenshot
00:22:991 (2) - Why is the spacing so low to the next object? Your usual spacing is 1,00. Why did you do such a low distance here? It's maybe really hard to read for nwer players. (Also there's the same gap at 00:24:612 (3,1) - where you've mapped with your usual DS)
00:26:504 (2) - I know there isn't a big issue here but I'd make some adjustments though since the little inconsistency looked abit weird. I mean it's 0,05 difference in the DS to the previous and the following object.
00:30:018 (1,2,3) - Maybe it's just me but the flow felt a bit weird to me here. This is due to (2) being so much left. The point is that I have to turn left to get (2) and then have to turn again pretty abrupt to get to (3). This would be easily fixable if you just simply let (1) point to (2) to have a smooth movement for the player here. It would also create an equal triangle. (Move the last anchor point to 64|171)
Screenshot
00:38:666 (1,2) - Hmm, I'd maybe go for a 1/1 Slider here as you did at 00:42:991 (1) - . This would catch the background noise better, the gap feels a bit weird due to that sound :/
Screenshot
00:55:693 (3,1) - I dunno, I don't think the stack feels right here. A new kind of section starts at 00:55:964 (1) - so the two notes don't belong together imo.
01:00:018 (5) - Watch your spacing here. The previous object is spaced 1,00 as you normal DS is, but the following has a spacing from 0,85 which is 0,15 less than you normal spacing. It looks really weird and maybe decreases the playability for newer players.
01:19:477 (4) - I would suggest you to either remove this note or replace 01:19:207 (3) - with a 1/2 Slider. There's just such a quiet sound here which feels really awkward to be a clickable action. Also the stack doiesn't feel intentional to me (I'm missing here xD)

Opinion
Almost nothing to say here. The flow and the whole composition of this map was pretty well done. An awesome Normal, I love your rhythm! I just disagree with some of your stackes. Otherwise, the aesthetics are great. The only thing I dislike here are maybe the non-parallel slider because I like parallelity but well, I guess that's your preference so there's no reason to list aynthing. The only thing that bothers me a bit on this diff are the spacing inconsistencies which are present a few times over the map. (Differences up to 0,15 from your normal spacing). I mean spacing differences are really hard to read for newbies and the spots where you've used them weren't really reasonable for me since you've mapped all the similiar parts with an equal spacing of 1,00. Nothing else to say, good job!

Hana

Mod

00:09:477 (5) - I dislike the flow here a bit. It's just nitpicky but I don't like the little zigzag movement from 5 to the triplet and back to one especially because it looks like you've tried to do a fluent curvy movement to the following triplet. You can rotate this about -5° Selection Centre for a better flow.
Screenshot
00:14:072 (5,6) - I would personally go for CTRL+G in terms of the rhythm here. The reason is that equally what we are following, the tick at 00:14:342 - is pretty loud and strong, don't you think so? A placement example is seen in the screenshot below.
Screenshot
00:25:693 (1) - I would use this as a connection between 00:26:504 (2) - and 00:25:423 (6) - to create a smooth movement here. The reason why I dislike this is the fact that the movement from 1 to 2 bothers me a bit because it stops me which breaks the flow here a bit imo. I'd go for something as seen in the Screenshot for a fluent movement here.
Screenshot
00:32:180 (1,2,3) - I dislike the shape of these two sliders. (3) actually breaks the flow for me because I expected it to go up but instead I had to go down a bit first which felt so weird to me (see Screenshot #2). You could easily fix this by dragging the 4th anchor point into the middle of its section.
Screenshot #1
Screenshot #2
00:39:747 (5) - I would place this somewhere around 93|129 to make the spacing between this and the last objects look even.
00:41:910 (3) - I don't know, maybe it's just me but I don't like the transition hear: I'd personally let the slider follow the curvy movement if you aim its head. You could change that by moving it to 486|254 or to rotate the slider about -20° Selection Centre.
00:51:639 (1,2,3) - Well, the music is increasing in here so I'd go with triplets because triplets are giving a higher emphasis imo due to every note being clicked. The reason why I don't like these repeat sliders here is that you've used triplets at 00:47:585 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - but this section isn't as, how can I explain, loud and strong as the following one. I just simply think the repeat sliders are giving too little feedback here ><
00:58:126 (1,2,3) - ~~YOUR SYMMETRY IS MESSED UP AS YOU CAN SEE IF YOU CTRL+G ;____________________;~~
01:04:612 (1) - Hm, when I first saw 01:06:774 (1) - I thought these two were supposed to create a circular shape but they aren't. I think it could give a neat feeling if you replace 01:04:612 (1) - with a 120° rotated version of 01:06:774 (1) - . I mean it's almost such a rotated version but it isn't if I overlay them. The main reason that they don't look like a circle is the actualy position of 01:04:612 (1) - though. Try to move it to 293|129.
Screenshot
01:20:828 (5) - Consider using the rhythm as suggested in the screenshot below. I think you don't get enough feedback on the big white tick with the sliders end. It's basically the end of the map and has such a strong note on it. It's a pretty loud and clear noise so I'd map it with a clickable action ><
Screenshot

Opinion
Wow this was pretty nice. I really loved how you've composed this map in terms of rhythm, placement and aesthetics. Especially these often repeated Sliders were so awesome, I loved them. Some slider shapes could be improved in my opinion but well I guess that's your preference, so you should keep it! Everything fits together and feels really nice. The whole map is in harmony with the music which is pretty awesome. I've also enjoyed your use of symmetry. It was always used so wise and fit perfectly. Great job! C:

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3

Suimya

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Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-17T08:33:40+00:00

Mao wrote:

Normal

00:55:693 (3,1) - I dunno, I don't think the stack feels right here. A new kind of section starts at 00:55:964 (1) - so the two notes don't belong together imo. I honestly think this stack kinda fits with music here and i don't see anything wrong with it o.o/ so i'll keep it for now

Hana

00:58:126 (1,2,3) - ~~YOUR SYMMETRY IS MESSED UP AS YOU CAN SEE IF YOU CTRL+G ;____________________;~~ No, I totally liked the flow here so, and its honestly good while playing as well, and well i don't like the much copy and paste so i making something small jump out of this is kinda great o3o/
01:04:612 (1) - Hm, when I first saw 01:06:774 (1) - I thought these two were supposed to create a circular shape but they aren't. I think it could give a neat feeling if you replace 01:04:612 (1) - with a 120° rotated version of 01:06:774 (1) - . I mean it's almost such a rotated version but it isn't if I overlay them. The main reason that they don't look like a circle is the actualy position of 01:04:612 (1) - though. Try to move it to 293|129. ^
Screenshot

Thanks for modding Mao :3 Fixed mostly everything on your mod but those suggesting above!

Luna-

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Joined June 2012

Luna- 2014-05-17T18:15:46+00:00

Mod by request~
forgive me for my laziness ;w;

[Hana]

There are some parts in the beginning that feels empty and make me feel confuse when I'm playing following the rhythm
00:10:018 (6,7,8) - This stream feels like it's late, add a circle on 00:09:882 - , something like this: http://puu.sh/8Q09e
00:17:855 - add a circle here, the space between (1,2) break the rhythm (at least for me, always got a 100 on that tripet orz)
00:18:666 (5,6,7) - same as the other stream, don't feel complete, add a circle on 00:19:072 - and you can accommodate it like this: http://puu.sh/8Q1mu.jpg
00:19:207 (1) - bit nazi, move the tail 1 grid left

[K.Penguin's Normal]
nothing to say~

[Yomi's Easy]

01:24:207 (1) - spinner end on 01:26:234 - for consistency with the others diff

orz why people ask me for mod if I don't know how to mod
good luck <3

Suimya

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Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-17T19:48:24+00:00

Thanks for modding Dark, but fixed one thing the nazi stuff xD

and cus i don't want to make this diff harder then it should be www

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-05-18T07:47:48+00:00

reomve the spinner and map the part
thanks for modding!

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Suimya

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Topic Starter

Suimya 2014-05-18T07:55:09+00:00

updated Yomi's diff :3

riffy

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

riffy 2014-05-18T11:25:58+00:00

Yo, as requested.

[General]

Please, disable Widescreen Support. It makes no sense to keep it enabled unless you have a Widescreen Storyboard!

[Yomi's Easy]

00:19:207 (1,2) - your pattern here goes of the music a bit. From 00:19:207 - and untill 00:20:288 - there's a reptive sound + some instrument at 00:20:828 - which feels VERY different from the instrument before. So, try to emphasize it with a 2/1 slider and a circle. Example
Note: alternatively, you can just swap them on the timeline by pressing Ctrl+G, but it'll requere some changes in your flow.
00:31:639 (3) - I'm pretty sure that you can avoid using 1/2 beats in this diff. The slider looks so short and it may confuse/trouble some beginners. Anyway, 1/2 patterns are not really recommended. Just replace 00:31:639 (3) - with a circle at 00:31:639 and see if you like it!
Note: 00:40:288 (3) - pretty much the same here. Try to avoid using 1/2 beats as much as possible to make your diff more playable for the beginners!
00:34:342 (1,2) - both of these sliders can be shotened and finished at the white ticks. (00:34:882 - and 00:35:964 - respectively). It will give you more consistent rhythm and it will also be more fitting and playable!
01:21:910 (3,1) - the diff is meant to be playable in all modes. (since there're no taiko/o!m specifix diffs). The 1/4 pattern will not be playable in o!m r taiko. which means that you should not use this pattern here. It is also overmapped, so.. Why don't you go with something like this? It seems to be more playable and fits with the song pretty good, too!

I disagree with some of your 1/2 patterns but everything else seems to be quite alright. You did a good job with the diff!

[K.Penguin's Normal]

You're placing NCs way too often. Try to place them every 2nd big white line (downbeat) instead, it will hlp you to make your comboing look prettier + it will fit really nice with your patterns!
Note: disagree? Add a new combo to 00:38:666 (4) - then
You should consider using AR5 and OD/HP4 to make the diff spread a bit more balanced. The song is not THAT slow, so AR5 will fit pretty cool, try it!
00:07:315 (3) - you're overusing the 1/2s a bit. There's no beat at 00:07:585 - I see what you're trying to do, but it feels like overmapping.
00:11:369 (2,2,4) - to be honest, I am not a fan of the 1/2 circles here. They sound suitable, but your rhythm actually feels better without them! Please, try to remove the circles and see if it sounds better or not, the song is meant to be relaxing, after all.
00:17:855 (2) - same again, you're overusing the 1/2 beats. There's no need to place it here. Listen to the beat 00:18:937 (4) - here. It is loud and 1/2 works here really well. Other 1/2 parts in the beginning are way too quite comparing to this one
00:39:477 (5,7) - minor - making them parallel would be awesome. Take a few seconds and do this for the sake of appearance, please!
01:21:910 (3,1) - the diff is meant to be playable in all modes. (since there're no taiko/o!m specifix diffs). The 1/4 pattern will not be playable in o!m r taiko. which means that you should not use this pattern here. It is also overmapped, so.. Why don't you go with something like this? It seems to be more playable and fits with the song pretty good, too!

I feel like you've oerused the 1/2 beats. The song itself is relaxing and calm, there is no point in making a Normal diff so hard! Consult some BATs/modders and see if there's any way to simplify the diff. Your flow and hitsounding are nice, but I feel like you should work on your rhythm more.

[Hard]

00:25:693 (1,3) - minor - you could fix your blankets. It is not a big deal, but improving them would look really good! It will ake ut to 10 minutes, but the result will look amazing!
00:37:855 - this beat shouldn't be ignored! Come on, the music goes really intense here, it would be awesome to have this beat mapped! example
Note: 01:05:964 - whoops, the same.

The diff is really good! Great job!

I feel like the mapset needs a few more mods for the easier diffs since both Normal and Easy can be improved. Your Hard seems really cool, good job!

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Best of luck!

Last edited by riffy 2014-05-18T13:26:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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