Raiku wrote:

Couple of playability issues thats all

NC = New Combo.

[General]

The end is missing the rest of the song, add the complete file in so it isn't cut short at the end. Do not know how to do >n<

[Difícil]

00:23:610 (10) - This should be moved up as pictured to fit in with the spacing of the rest of that combo (http://puu.sh/6VgSH.jpg). Ok xD

00:30:439 (1) - New combo here, has more impact (http://puu.sh/6VhHR.jpg). Ok, not bad :3

00:42:879 (5) - I feel this shouldn't repeat and the combo should start on the note that comes after, something like this (I added a little syncopation to fit his voice - http://puu.sh/6VhqF.jpg). no, that's good > __ <

00:51:171 (6) - NC splits the phrase up better. Do not think it's necessary

00:55:805 (1) - Stands nicely as a new combo (http://puu.sh/6VhDw.jpg).

01:39:545 (5) - Triplet needed. Copy how I did it, it is the solo after all so variation is welcome (http://puu.sh/6Vi0O.jpg). It is not too well

01:42:635 (1) - Slider felt so wrong so I shortened the end of it as shown in the screenshot (http://puu.sh/6Viet.jpg), I also added a note after it to start the new combo which I feel fits the song a lot better (http://puu.sh/6Vif9.jpg). Change that part 2 sliders, so I think is better XD

01:46:537 (3) - NC. Ok n.n

01:47:757 (1) - Much better alternative, again the slider feels strange and the repeat doesn't hit the rhythm. This is a better flowy alternative (http://puu.sh/6ViqW.jpg). Try to improve it >_<

02:09:952 (4) - NC =) (I LOVE the way u mapped the harmonica solo) Ok, thanks >w<

02:12:635 (3) - Raise this, it fits the descending tones then ascending up to the A major chord (http://puu.sh/6ViE2.jpg). Ok, I like owo

02:16:537 (1,3) - No new combo on 1. Start on 3 (slider). Ok :3

02:20:196 (1) - No new combo here. No, there okay n3n

02:33:854 (5) - Change to this, fits the guitar (http://puu.sh/6Vjdz.jpg). I do not hear any guitar sound there XD

02:35:317 (4) - NC! ok n.n

02:37:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - I might be insane but the timing sounds like 1ms off somewhere in that combo? Almost sounds like 3 is a little late to the beat. I think it's because the bass and drums are mixed in that part > _ <



Great map! Will star.

Hola, Aqui te voy a dejar mi mod

1. 00:41:415 (1) Trata de evitar que tus slidders se salgan del campo del map.
2. Te Recomiendo que pongas el circle size en 2
3. Y por ultimo que pongas Overall Difficulty en 2.

1. Luego de 00:30:439 (4) te recomiendo que pongas un break time.
2. 00:35:561 (4) Lo mismo que en Facil, te recomiendo que tengas cuidado con que tus circles y slidders se salgan del campo del map (mas que todo no es por darte mas trabajo, si no que algun BAT te puede dar complicaciones).
3. 01:08:244 (3) Lo mismo de arriba.
4. 02:49:709 (1) Lo mismo de arriba.
5. 03:00:684 (3) Recomiendo un break time.
6. Cambia el HP Drain Rate a 4
7. Por ultimo cambia el Overall Difficulty a 4.

1. 00:12:025 (6) Agrega un circle aqui, suena mejor.
2. 00:37:391 (6) Agrega un circle aqui.
3. 01:10:561 (3) Agrega un circle aqui.
4. 01:14:464 (4) Agrega un circle aqui.
5. 01:51:903 (10) Se encuentra fuera del campo.
6. 02:15:927 (9) Agrega un circle aqui.
7. 02:16:903 (13) Agrega un circle aqui.
8. 03:00:684 (5) Break time
9. El HP Drain Rate lo cambiaria a 7.

1. 00:13:610 (8) Ponle Clap.
2. 00:13:732 (9) Eliminalo.
3. 00:25:439 (47) Eliminalo.
4. 00:25:561 (47) Ponle Clap.
5. 00:25:805 (48) Quitale el Clap.
6. 00:26:293 (51) Ponle Clap.
7. 00:28:610 (59) Eliminalo.
8. 00:29:342 (62) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
9. 00:29:708 (64) Ponle Clap.
10. 00:29:830 (65) Eliminalo.
11. 00:29:952 (66) Quitale el Clap, pero dejale el finish.
12. 00:31:171 (68) Ponle Clap.
13. 00:40:196 (11) Agrega un Circle.
14. 00:43:732 (23) Eliminalo.
15. 00:44:830 (27) Agrega un circle aqui y ponle clap.
16. 00:45:074 (28) Eliminalo.
17. 00:52:635 (55) Ponle Clap.
18. 00:54:586 (62) Ponle Clap.
19. En el Offset 00:58:976 (1) te recomiendo que cambies el audio ''Soft'' a ''Normal'' y que despues en el Offset 01:21:171 (87) , lo devuelvas a ''Soft''.
20. 00:59:220 (2) Quitale el Clap.
21. 00:59:464 (3) Ponle Clap.
22. 01:08:000 (37) Quitale el Clap.
23. 01:08:244 (38) Ponle Clap.
24. 01:11:659 (51) Ponle Clap.
25. 01:11:903 (52) Quitale el Clap.
26. 01:21:903 (88) Ponle Clap.
27. 01:27:757 (13) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
28. 01:43:366 (20) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
29. 01:45:318 (26) Ponle Clap.
30. 01:58:000 (33) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
31. 01:58:244 (34) Quitale el Clap.
32. 01:58:488 (34) Ponle Clap.
33. 01:58:732 (35) Eliminalo.
34. 02:10:561 (77) Muevelo a 02:10:683 (77) y ponle Clap.
35. 02:18:732 (103) , Este Slidder acortalo a 02:18:732 (103)
36. 02:19:586 (104) Muevelo a 02:19:464 (104)
37. 02:21:903 (113) Ponle Clap.
38. 02:36:049 (169) Ponle Clap.
39. Nuevamente te recomiendo que en este offset 02:38:488 (177) cambies el audio de ''Soft'' a ''Normal'' y despues en el offset 03:00:683 (262) lo devuelvas al ''Soft''.
40. 02:51:659 (226) Ponle Clap.
41. 02:52:025 (228) Agrega un Circle aqui.

1. En Timing, cambia el Slider Velocity a 1,40, pero para hacer ese cambio tendras que ajustar el slider 02:07:269 (88) , para que se encaje bien con el Timing ya puesto por Hanjamon.
2. 00:02:391 (6) Quitale el Clap.
3. 00:02:879 (7) Ponle Clap.
4. 00:05:561 (15) Ponle Clap y Finish.
5. 00:05:805 (16) Ponle Clap.
6. 00:16:537 (54) Ponle Clap.
7. 00:17:757 (59) Quitale el Clap.
8. 00:18:000 (60) Ponle Clap.
9. 00:18:976 (64) Quitale el Clap.
10. 00:19:220 (65) Ponle Clap.
11. 00:22:391 (76) Ponle Clap.
12. 00:35:074 (125) Ponle Clap.
13. 00:35:318 (126) Quitale el Clap.
14. 00:35:805 (127) Quitale el Clap.
15. 00:36:049 (128) Ponle Clap.
16. 00:41:537 (151) Quitale el Clap.
17. 00:41:659 (152) Ponle Clap.
18. 00:51:659 (197) Ponle Clap.
19. 00:57:513 (15) Ponle Clap.
20. En este Offset 00:58:976 (20) , te recomiendo cambiar el audio de ''Soft'' a ''Normal'' y luego en el Offset 01:21:171 (112) devuelvelo a a ''Soft''.
21. 01:02:391 (32) Ponle Clap.
22. 01:04:098 (40) Ponle Clap.
23. 01:25:196 (125) Ponle Clap.
24. 01:25:318 (126) Ponle Clap.
25. 01:25:439 (127) Quitale Clap.
26. 01:25:561 (128) Ponle Clap.
27. 01:27:025 (135) Ponle Clap.
28. 01:27:269 (136) Quitale el Clap.
29. 01:44:464 (216) Ponle Clap.
30. 01:44:708 (218) Quitale el Clap.
31. 01:58:976 (53) Ponle Clap.
32. 01:59:219 (55) Quitale Clap.
33. 01:59:464 (57) Ponle Clap.
34. 02:09:952 (91) Ponle Clap.
35. 02:10:683 (92) Ponle Clap.
36. 02:21:781 (141) Agrega un circle aqui.
37. 02:26:659 (163) Ponle Clap.
38. 02:36:293 (12) Quitale el Clap.
39. En este Offset 02:38:488 (20) ponle el audio ''Normal'' y luego en 03:00:683 (119) vuelve a ''Soft''.
40. 02:46:415 (59) Ponle Clap.

1. Tu Storyboard, esta muy buen de acuerdo al timing.
2. Ya le hice un chequeo al BPM y al timing y esta perfecto, yo no le haria ningun cambio.
3. En general tu mapa esta muy bien echo, los diffs de taiko los encontre un poco desfasados, pero con esto espero que se arreglen.

Kibbleru wrote:

from our poro queue

[General]
Well some of your drain times are inconsistent, not sure why but i suggest you make them consistent

can only mod standard

[Dificil]
00:06:293 (10) - nc here? Oki, Not bad o3o
00:01:171 (2) - i recommend angle this up or some sort to flow better onto 00:01:903 (1) - Ok
00:05:074 (6,7,1,2) - stack? cuz why not I do not like is
00:09:708 (3,4,5) - why the slight curve here? Okey
00:11:171 (2,4) - (2) is at x427 and (4) is at x426, i recommend making them the same?
00:11:415 (3,5) - ^ What? XD if it is not well
00:13:610 (5) - i recommend you rotate it counterclockwise a bit (maybe like 20 degrees or so) to improve flow a bit Ok
00:32:635 (1,3,5) - these 3 are not level I did not understand what you meant
00:50:683 (5,6) - the flow here. Ok
01:33:854 (1,2) - ^ Ok
00:49:952 (2,6) - blanket.? No ._.
01:12:635 (6,1) - ^ Ok
00:53:854 (4,4) - stack? No
02:17:757 (2,6) - ^ No
00:59:952 (2,3) - blanket better No xD
01:17:269 (1,2) - ^ No -3-
01:34:830 (3,1) - ^ No
01:10:683 (3) - when you make sliders like this, try to have them blanket something, they look a bit weird alone ok, I'll get it
01:39:586 (5,6) - ctrl g for better flow ok
02:23:610 (9) - ^? No
02:34:098 (1) - ^ Ok
01:52:635 (1,2) - why not just ctrl hj one..? Ok :v
02:04:342 (2,4) - stack better No >-<
02:21:659 (4,5,6) - rhythm here could be done better with sliders Okay so xD
02:56:050 (9) - curve the second part Ok n.n

also add more NCs, keep combos below 10
and use more sliderss

[Normal]
00:02:391 (4,5) - blanket better? I think not
00:08:244 (3,5) - stack better It is so very wrong ._.
00:08:244 (3,5) - dont overlap. Ok
00:29:220 (1,2,3) - ^ Ok
look for the rest yourself
00:47:269 (6) - slider is ugly Yes D: change it
01:28:976 (1,2) - this jump is a bit high Ok nwn
01:40:439 (8) - don't reverse this 2 times, makes it confusing No d:
02:19:708 (4,1) - bad flow
02:49:221 (6,2) - stack ok o3ó
02:56:050 (4) - ctrl g

flow could use some work in this diff

[Facil]
00:34:098 (2,4) - move these to the same level? No
00:43:854 (2,4) - ^ No


bleh thats all, gl!

-[ SooHanZ ]- wrote:

Hola, Aqui te voy a dejar mi mod


Facil

1. 00:41:415 (1) Trata de evitar que tus slidders se salgan del campo del map. Ok :3
2. Te Recomiendo que pongas el circle size en 2No >:c
3. Y por ultimo que pongas Overall Difficulty en 2. ok

Normal

1. Luego de 00:30:439 (4) te recomiendo que pongas un break time. Listo xD se me había olvidado
2. 00:35:561 (4) Lo mismo que en Facil, te recomiendo que tengas cuidado con que tus circles y slidders se salgan del campo del map (mas que todo no es por darte mas trabajo, si no que algun BAT te puede dar complicaciones). Oki, no sabía eso lo tendré más en cuenta >-<
3. 01:08:244 (3) Lo mismo de arriba. Ok ^^
4. 02:49:709 (1) Lo mismo de arriba. Ok
5. 03:00:684 (3) Recomiendo un break time. Ok
6. Cambia el HP Drain Rate a 4 No >_>
7. Por ultimo cambia el Overall Difficulty a 4. no uwu

Dificil

1. 00:12:025 (6) Agrega un circle aqui, suena mejor. Ok ouo
2. 00:37:391 (6) Agrega un circle aqui. No hay nada ahí e.e
3. 01:10:561 (3) Agrega un circle aqui. Ok
4. 01:14:464 (4) Agrega un circle aqui. No hay nada ahí e.e
5. 01:51:903 (10) Se encuentra fuera del campo. Si ya lo corregí >_<
6. 02:15:927 (9) Agrega un circle aqui. Otra vez no hay nada ahí e.e
7. 02:16:903 (13) Agrega un circle aqui. Ahí si o3o
8. 03:00:684 (5) Break time No se porque lo pongo y no se guarda uwu
9. El HP Drain Rate lo cambiaria a 7. ok

-FireThunder-'s Taiko Muzukashii

1. 00:13:610 (8) Ponle Clap.
2. 00:13:732 (9) Eliminalo.
3. 00:25:439 (47) Eliminalo.
4. 00:25:561 (47) Ponle Clap.
5. 00:25:805 (48) Quitale el Clap.
6. 00:26:293 (51) Ponle Clap.
7. 00:28:610 (59) Eliminalo.
8. 00:29:342 (62) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
9. 00:29:708 (64) Ponle Clap.
10. 00:29:830 (65) Eliminalo.
11. 00:29:952 (66) Quitale el Clap, pero dejale el finish.
12. 00:31:171 (68) Ponle Clap.
13. 00:40:196 (11) Agrega un Circle.
14. 00:43:732 (23) Eliminalo.
15. 00:44:830 (27) Agrega un circle aqui y ponle clap.
16. 00:45:074 (28) Eliminalo.
17. 00:52:635 (55) Ponle Clap.
18. 00:54:586 (62) Ponle Clap.
19. En el Offset 00:58:976 (1) te recomiendo que cambies el audio ''Soft'' a ''Normal'' y que despues en el Offset 01:21:171 (87) , lo devuelvas a ''Soft''.
20. 00:59:220 (2) Quitale el Clap.
21. 00:59:464 (3) Ponle Clap.
22. 01:08:000 (37) Quitale el Clap.
23. 01:08:244 (38) Ponle Clap.
24. 01:11:659 (51) Ponle Clap.
25. 01:11:903 (52) Quitale el Clap.
26. 01:21:903 (88) Ponle Clap.
27. 01:27:757 (13) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
28. 01:43:366 (20) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
29. 01:45:318 (26) Ponle Clap.
30. 01:58:000 (33) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
31. 01:58:244 (34) Quitale el Clap.
32. 01:58:488 (34) Ponle Clap.
33. 01:58:732 (35) Eliminalo.
34. 02:10:561 (77) Muevelo a 02:10:683 (77) y ponle Clap.
35. 02:18:732 (103) , Este Slidder acortalo a 02:18:732 (103)
36. 02:19:586 (104) Muevelo a 02:19:464 (104)
37. 02:21:903 (113) Ponle Clap.
38. 02:36:049 (169) Ponle Clap.
39. Nuevamente te recomiendo que en este offset 02:38:488 (177) cambies el audio de ''Soft'' a ''Normal'' y despues en el offset 03:00:683 (262) lo devuelvas al ''Soft''.
40. 02:51:659 (226) Ponle Clap.
41. 02:52:025 (228) Agrega un Circle aqui.

Hanjamon's Taiko Oni

1. En Timing, cambia el Slider Velocity a 1,40, pero para hacer ese cambio tendras que ajustar el slider 02:07:269 (88) , para que se encaje bien con el Timing ya puesto por Hanjamon.
2. 00:02:391 (6) Quitale el Clap.
3. 00:02:879 (7) Ponle Clap.
4. 00:05:561 (15) Ponle Clap y Finish.
5. 00:05:805 (16) Ponle Clap.
6. 00:16:537 (54) Ponle Clap.
7. 00:17:757 (59) Quitale el Clap.
8. 00:18:000 (60) Ponle Clap.
9. 00:18:976 (64) Quitale el Clap.
10. 00:19:220 (65) Ponle Clap.
11. 00:22:391 (76) Ponle Clap.
12. 00:35:074 (125) Ponle Clap.
13. 00:35:318 (126) Quitale el Clap.
14. 00:35:805 (127) Quitale el Clap.
15. 00:36:049 (128) Ponle Clap.
16. 00:41:537 (151) Quitale el Clap.
17. 00:41:659 (152) Ponle Clap.
18. 00:51:659 (197) Ponle Clap.
19. 00:57:513 (15) Ponle Clap.
20. En este Offset 00:58:976 (20) , te recomiendo cambiar el audio de ''Soft'' a ''Normal'' y luego en el Offset 01:21:171 (112) devuelvelo a a ''Soft''.
21. 01:02:391 (32) Ponle Clap.
22. 01:04:098 (40) Ponle Clap.
23. 01:25:196 (125) Ponle Clap.
24. 01:25:318 (126) Ponle Clap.
25. 01:25:439 (127) Quitale Clap.
26. 01:25:561 (128) Ponle Clap.
27. 01:27:025 (135) Ponle Clap.
28. 01:27:269 (136) Quitale el Clap.
29. 01:44:464 (216) Ponle Clap.
30. 01:44:708 (218) Quitale el Clap.
31. 01:58:976 (53) Ponle Clap.
32. 01:59:219 (55) Quitale Clap.
33. 01:59:464 (57) Ponle Clap.
34. 02:09:952 (91) Ponle Clap.
35. 02:10:683 (92) Ponle Clap.
36. 02:21:781 (141) Agrega un circle aqui.
37. 02:26:659 (163) Ponle Clap.
38. 02:36:293 (12) Quitale el Clap.
39. En este Offset 02:38:488 (20) ponle el audio ''Normal'' y luego en 03:00:683 (119) vuelve a ''Soft''.
40. 02:46:415 (59) Ponle Clap.
41. Los mods de taiko se los dejare a los creadores >-<

General

1. Tu Storyboard, esta muy buen de acuerdo al timing.
2. Ya le hice un chequeo al BPM y al timing y esta perfecto, yo no le haria ningun cambio.
3. En general tu mapa esta muy bien echo, los diffs de taiko los encontre un poco desfasados, pero con esto espero que se arreglen.

Este es mi mod, espero que te haya servido :3

shankishiro wrote:

Hola , mod ( tenes todo el derecho de ignorar mis sugerencias , ya que son eso SUGERENCIAS , no soy muy bueno esto )

Easy:

00:18:488 (3) - sinceramente esta nota nose , como que no queda muy bien ahi no fluye bien , trata de moverla hacia abajo Oki :3

00:23:854 (1,3) - estas 2 notas nose , no queda bien imo , talvez asi? es solo porque hacer volver las notas hacia el comienzo del slider nada mas xD Bueno aunque hice otra cosa xD




00:32:635 (1) - remove nc --- 00:34:098 (1) - nc se siente mas imo Ok e.é

00:36:049 (4) - remove nc --- 00:38:000 (2) - nc lo mismo de arriva Ok -3-


01:27:269 (4,5) - no queda muy bien en una easy , asi talves? es una forma , pero hay varias busca la que mas te guste :p Lo tendré en cuenta




01:33:122 (2,3,4,5) - esta mal el spacing , y es medio aburrido el combo asi , trata de cambiarlo Oka :v

01:51:659 (4) - esta nota nose si te te coloco sola o que , no queda bien movela a el anterior tick blanco y en el siguiente en 01:52:147 - te recomiendo que pongas una nota , quedaria asi Bueno ewe



02:38:976 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - aburrido (? , trata de poner 1 slider al menos xD Vale :v

Not bad imo

Normal :

Te recomiendo fuertemente que el spacin lo cambies a 0,8 o 0,9 (tene en cuenta que si haces esto tenes que mover todas las notas) para hacerlo apreta alt y en donde dice "Beat snap divisor" saldra distance spacing

hp -1

00:15:561 (4) - movela a x:292 y:156 queda mas bonito Lo cambie de lugar ewe

00:34:098 (1) - remove nc --- 00:34:098 (1) - nc better imo Ok

00:59:464 (1) - remove nc No

01:25:074 (1) - remove nc No

01:49:220 (3) - *nazi * esta feo D: mejor asi ? Lo cambie xD algo parecido a lo tuyo :v





02:13:610 (1) - remove nc Nope

02:29:708 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - aburrido imo , algun slider de tick a tick capas? Naaa así esta bien

02:37:513 (1) - el clap drum del final removelo el tambor suena en el tick rojo anterior , sino acorta el slider hasta ese tick (no te recomiendo lo ultimo) Oka :v

02:45:562 (1) - remove el nc XD

02:49:709 (1,2) - esto es mas mio.. no recomiendo stackear en easy y normal , ya que son dificultades mas para nuevos , se supone.. wtf ._.

no te recomiendo mapear "esquivando" el spacing determinado al menos en normal y easy , pequeño tip xD



Hard:


00:19:708 (5,1) - este salto , un poco extremista no? move el 5 a x:240 y:184 Un poco de dificultad no le viene mal al mapa :3

01:10:561 (3) - este tres esta de mas creo , y el salto lo mismo de arriva un poco extremista No, yo también creía lo mismo hasta que escuche mejor la canción

02:28:488 (10,1) - ^ Lo mismo de arriba :v

no pienso decirte de los nc porque tenes un quilombo barbaro en la hard , y tampoco profundice mucho ya que como te habia dicho no se hacer hard

Gracias por todo :3



Suerte y espero haber sido de ayuda

1. Muy bueno
2. Me encantó la animación de la letra :3

SPOILER

Cosmolade wrote:

Hola o3o)/
Aqui te dejo el mod que me pediste (*ﾉ´□`)ﾉ
(las coordenadas de cada nota son opcionales, tu decides si ponerlas exactas o no~)

[General]

1. Muy bueno
2. Me encantó la animación de la letra :3

[Fácil]
Buen uso de patrones owo

- 00:06:293 (5) -Esa nota podrías ponera un poco más al centro :3 (x:256 y:176) Oki nwn
- 00:21:415 (1) -Demasiado cerca del slider, separa esa nota un poquis (x:336 y:300) Oka ewe
- 00:31:171 (3) -¿Por qué tan recto el slider? xD Hácele una forma bonita, que siga el ritmo de la música (en forma de rayo no quedaría mal(?) Te haré caso .3. con lo del rayito XD
- 01:06:781 (1) -Ese slider debería terminar en el tick blanco D: Es verdad D: se me escapo T_T
- 01:18:488 (5) -El slider no debería salirse de la cuadrícula :c Vale
- 01:24:342 -Añade una nota~ Dale
- 01:45:318 (1) -El spinner debería comenzar aquí > 01:45:805 Vale -3-
- 02:34:098 (1) -Muévelo a > 02:33:854 - quítale la reversa, y añade una nota aquí > 02:34:586 -(me suena mejor :3) oka :v


[Normal]
Me parece que el CS está mal, debería ser 3 o3o
Ten sumo cuidado con las notas en 1/4, es preferible siempre empezar a mapear un normal con 1/2 aunque quede easy, para luego agregarle notas xD

- 00:00:440 (1) -No hagas tan puntiagudas las notas D: curva un poco el slider :3 No los puse para variar ~w~
- 00:08:732 (4) -^ ^
- 00:14:098 (3) -^ ^
- 00:16:049 (1) -^ ^
- 00:32:635 (1) -^ ^
- 00:53:122 (1,2,3,4) -Mal timming. Puedes reemplazar el mini slider por un círculo, y empezar el pequeño stream en el tick rojo > 00:53:366 asdasasd oka XD
- 00:58:000 (1) -Puntiagudo xD Ok -3-
- 01:12:635 (5,6,7,8) -Mal timming denuevo D: > 01:13:122 (7) -Conviértelo en un pequeño slider que termine en el tick rojo, y pon una nota aquí > 01:13:610 -(suena mejor) ok :v
- 02:52:147 (5,6,7,8) -^Same
- 01:27:025 (5) -Elimina la reversa, y pon una nota aquí > 01:28:244 oka :v
- 01:28:976 (1) -No va al ritmo, el slider debería comenzar en el tick blanco > 01:29:220 -y quítale la reversa. ok
- 01:32:879 (2) -Debe comenzar en el tick blanco~ y > 01:35:561 -ahí añade una nota :3 dale :v
- 01:35:805 (3) -Debe comenzar en el tick blanco owo bueno
- 01:39:220 (8) -Acota un poco el slider, de forma que termine en el tick blanco
- 01:43:854 (1,2,3,4) - ¿Qué tal esto? Me gusto o3ó

SPOILER

- 02:12:147 (1) -Puntiagudo~ Lo dejo así
- 02:15:561 (5) -^ Lo dejo así
- 02:37:513 (1) -^ Lo dejo así


[Difícil]
Hm... no soy experta en "difíciles", pero que más dá :3

- 01:10:439 (2,3,4) -Es un pequeño stream, por lo cual "no debes separarlos" xD Ya los junte >-<
- 01:32:147 (3) -Puntiagudo~ Lo dejo así no está mal para variar un poco e.é
- 01:52:635 (1,2) -Esa forma no se ve bien :c Yo creo que si XD
- 02:15:805 (8) -NC Oki n.n

Y pues, yo no puedo modear Taiko xD ni tampoco ctb porque no mapeo frutas (aunque lo juegue xD) :3 No importa con las de Standar basta :3

¡Mucha suerte con el mapa! ٩( ᐛ )و

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue

[General]
* The Kai time at 01:24:342 isn't necessary... usually it's used for the chorus, or after the bass drops in a song. Ok
[Difícil]
00:15:927 - needs a note here for consistency, since the rhythm matches 00:11:903 (5,6,1) - Ok
00:35:805 (1) - Move lower so it isn't attached to 00:34:830 (4,5) - Ok
00:19:830 - ^ Same suggestion as above, it sound a bit awkward here. Ok
00:23:732 - ^ Ok
00:27:635 - ^ No D:
00:58:976 (5) - Don't put this in the middle, it'll only mess up the DS consistency. You could've just made a star formation with all the notes 00:58:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - (like 02:37:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) ok :v
00:59:952 (2,4) - Move more apart. ok XD
01:27:025 (8) - NC ok
01:32:147 (3) - Add finish on the head. o: ok
01:47:757 (1) - ^ ok
01:59:464 (7) - NC ok
02:20:805 - Needs a note here this rhythm cycle matches the one before with notes 02:16:781 (4,5,1) - . no
02:28:610 - ^ ok :v

[Normal]
00:04:342 (6) - NC ok
00:12:147 (8) - ^ Instead of 00:13:122 (1) - , because this object lands on the big white tick mark (which emphasizes a new rhythm cycle) No, I think so better listen
00:19:952 (7) - ^ Instead of 00:21:415 (1) - ^
00:23:854 (4) - ^ ^
00:53:122 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't do this, it looks confusing enough as it is and players will mistake it as a stream. ok :3
Consider making this simpler rhythm instead.

01:23:366 (1) - Add finish on the tail at 01:24:342. ok n.n
01:32:147 (1) - Add finish on the head. ok :v
01:39:220 (6) - Sounds really off, consider using this rhythm instead: ok XD
And add the NC too.
01:47:757 (1) - Add finish on the head. ok .w.
02:38:489 (2) - Should be NC instead of 02:38:977 (1) - not, so okay
02:52:148 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Too difficult to read, please remap this part. No, some difficulty will not affect anyone XD

[Fácil]
00:04:830 (4) - NC ok
00:47:269 (6) - ^ ok
01:02:879 (6) - ^ ok, not bad d_d
01:11:171 (5) - ^ ok :v
01:24:342 (1) - Add finish ok
01:39:952 (1) - ^ On the head. ok
01:47:757 (1) - ^ On the head. ok
01:57:025 (4) - NC ok
02:09:220 (2) - Add finish on both head and tail. ok
02:20:927 (1) - Tail doesn't end at 02:21:903 ok XD
02:33:854 (1) - Tail doesn't end at 02:34:342 or 02:34:098. Make sure the hits end on either white or red tick marks, to keep the rhythm simple in this (easy?) diff. ok e.é
02:38:976 (2) - NC, since it's the new object in Kai time. ok
02:50:683 (4) - NC ok

Hope this helps.

toybot wrote:

hello, mod request Thanks for modd >W<

[General]
Well actually, just remember to put a clap on all objects that land on the upbeat. The upbeat are on the white lines of 2 and 4.

If a slider lands on one of these lines, you have to double click on that exact part of the slider to be able to put hitsounds on it.

[Facil]
00:08:244 (2) - put a clap on the tail ok
00:19:952 (5) - make this NC instead of 00:21:415 (1) -, to continue the pattern ok
00:27:269 (1,2,1) - remove NC from the first (1), and add NC to the (2). After that, it might be better to remove NC from the next (1) also No, that's fine
00:29:220 (1) - and speaking of this note, put a finish on the last beat of the slider ok d.d
00:37:025 (4,1) - put claps on the head of both sliders ok XD
00:54:586 (1) - finish on last beat also ok
00:55:561 (2) - you should shorten this to a 1/2 slider, because thats when an actual beat is. it could look like this: ok XD

SPOILER

put a finish on the tail of the slider if you do this.

01:19:952 (1) - put a finish on the last beat of this slider ok :v
01:21:903 (1) - move this spinner to 01:21:415 - , keeping the same time the spinner ends No, I think if I do it will make it very difficult
01:26:781 (4) - NC this ok
02:10:439 (1) - remove this spinner, too fast for beginners to comprehend NOOOOOOO XD
02:33:854 (1,1) - just extend this slider by 1/2 beat, and remove the circle. This is the only 1/2 distance i've seen i believe in this diff ok
02:33:854 (1) - once you've done that suggestion above, put a finish on the tail of the slider ok
02:37:513 (1) - remove NC ok :v

[Normal]
00:08:732 (4) - NC ok
00:12:147 (5) - add NC to this, then remove NC from the object after it No D:
00:54:098 (3) - remove this note, its confusing and does not fit into the music. instead, you can add a circle here: 00:54:342 - No, If you go with the music
01:12:635 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - this combo should probably be arranged. (8,1,2,3) do not look neat inside it, since its just stacked. how about replace (1,2,3) with a reverse slider? ok :33
01:39:464 (7) - this should be in distance with (6).. and make it reverse too ok >.<
01:40:439 (8) - make this slider look better, like this: Ready!

02:09:220 (1) - remove NC? ok
02:54:099 (1) - put a finish on the head? ok n.n
03:02:635 (1) - make this spinner as long as the one in Facil I don't understand :v

[Dificil]
00:33:854 - add a note? No XD
01:10:439 (2,3,4) - this stream is too spaced out and ruins the consistency. make the spacing smaller? ok :3
01:18:244 (5) - make this into a 1/2 slider no :L
01:21:171 (5) - put this on the center y line ok XD
01:52:635 (1,2,3,4) - these 4 sliders create the wrong beat. it should be 3/4 beats, like this: no, this is perfect e.e

02:20:927 (3) - this should be NC'd, instead of the (1) previous to it ok XD
02:33:610 (5) - this sounds awkward there, remove? ok :v
02:44:343 (9) - NC ok
02:54:099 (4) - ^ ok
03:02:635 (1) - same thing about the spinner what?

Good luck!
(

• I can't mod ctb well, as i found out

. lol)

Erina wrote:

From my mod for voice queue!

Nice map, good song too! I'm learning spanish at school and I love how I can understand some of this song now It's good! I love this song >w<

Hmm, I guess I'll mod in both English and Spanish to practice my Spanish haha

[General]
I don't think this is really a problem, but the song ends a bit too abruptly. I would recommend that you fade out the song in the end instead of having it suddenly end like that. If you need someone to do that, I can do it for you! (no pienso que este sea un problema, pero la cancion termina demasiado pronto. Yo supiero que deba dejar poco a poco de oírse en vez de termina tan abruptamente. Si necesitas alguien para hacerlo, yo puedo hacerlo.) La verdad yo he tratado de arreglar eso, pero no puedo ya que el timing queda mal por alguna razón ):

[Dificil]

ok nvm modding in spanish is too hard

00:08:732 (1,2) - Consider moving the second note to (x:192 y:136) no thanks
01:17:757 (3) - Consider moving this note to (x:400 y:136) to create a blanket with the previous sliderok, not bad :3
01:27:025 (1) - I don't like the sliders like these with a repeat, they don't seem to fit the music too well. Plus, try changing the design of your long sliders too - they all look the same I'll see what I can do
01:27:025 (1) - Remove NC no
01:31:415 (1) - Remove NC ok
01:32:879 (4) - Add NC ok
01:33:854 (1) - Remove NC ok
01:49:952 (1) - Add NC (I usually don't like combo lengths over 10) ok D:
01:52:635 (1,2) - I think this looks better: http://puu.sh/7A8l4.jpg ok, nice idea :3
01:52:391 (8,2) - Overlap these two notes exactly, I think you're off by a littleok
02:17:757 (2,6) - Consider overlapping these two notes ok o3o
02:52:879 (4,6) - Overlap these notes exactly ok :3

[Normal]
00:07:269 (1,2,3) - Consider moving these three notes up by ~15 pixels so it looks better with the next slider no, I like and this
00:23:854 (4) - Add NC ok
00:53:366 (2,3,1) - This spacing is too hard to read for a normal difficulty, use distance snap!ok XD sorry
01:39:220 (6) - Repeat one more time, fits with rhythm better ok n.n
01:58:488 (2,3) - Consider blanketing these two sliders ok :3
02:48:720 (5) - Object isn't snapped! That rare

[Facil]
00:27:757 (2,3) - Use distance snap here Ok
02:13:122 (2) - Add NC ok
02:20:927 (1) - Consider ctrl+g for better flow (then move the note after it to be properly distance snapped again) ok
02:28:732 (4) - Add NC ok

Nice map! Contact me later about what you're going to sing! Ok >w<

Raisa12 wrote:

Hello~
Manuxz Sixx speaks Spanish as leave aside the English xd
[Easy]
00:54:586 - intenta esto (? creo que es mejor ... Oka

01:19:952 - ^ No, ahí me gusta así uwu
01:39:952 (1) - mover este slider x:312 y:4 y despues mover el nudillo del final del slider a x:248 y:128 así cubrirá mejor Oki ouo

SPOILER

02:16:537 (5) - Distance snap error ok
00:56:537 (3) - ^ ok
02:37:513 (4) - ^ No. Ahí está bien o.o
[Normal]

Revisar Aimod D: (ctrl + shift + a ) Hablare con Kurodragon ;-;
02:48:732 (5) - object snapped ubique lo bien Ok d_d
01:40:439 (7) - distance snap error Ok
01:59:464 (3) - ^ oka o3o

[Hard]
00:03:854 - NC Oki :3
00:18:732 (2) - Ctrl + g ? Not bad :3
00:59:952 (2) - porque no utilizar este mismo slider para esto 01:00:439 (3) ? No, así como está es mejor :3
01:45:805 (4) - agregar finish (? No? XD
01:46:049 (5) - agregar clap oki

Buen map
Espero que sirva de ayuda el algo ;_; Todo sirve, muchas gracias !!!
Bye ~

NaxelCL wrote:

Bien sabes que necesitas el icono de taiko y CTB verdad(? y luego el bubbled y ranked:c?

1. 00:36:049 (5) - X: 96
2. 00:36:293 (6) - X: 256
3. 00:36:537 (7) - X: 152
4. 00:36:781 (8) - X: 48
5. 00:37:025 (9) - X: 360
6. 00:37:269 (10) - X: 464
7. 00:37:513 (1) - X: 152

1. 00:47:147 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 328
2. 00:47:269 (1) - Muevele al X: 400

1. 00:58:000 (1) - X: 400
2. 00:58:244 (2) - X: 88
3. 00:58:976 (3) - X: 400

1. 02:58:488 (3) - X: 480
2. 02:58:732 (4) - X: 160

Drafura wrote:

[Rain]
Unrankable issues:
00:54:586 (1) - modifica el slider para que se ponen bien los beats en los timing ticks. Ok
02:08:732 (1) - ^ Ok
02:34:098 (1) - ^ Ok

Suggestions:
Usas demasiado el hyperdash, y con gran spacing. A ver que se puede hacer para rectificar eso.
00:11:903 (3) - Muevele al X: 128 Bueno o3o
00:15:927 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 288 ^
00:16:049 (1) - muevele a X: 160 ^
00:23:732 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 288 ^
00:23:854 (3) - muevele a X: 416 ^
00:36:049 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Al principio le falta un poco de movemiento, y al final hay demasiado movemientos, intenta con eso: Me gusto mucho o3ó

1. 00:36:049 (5) - X: 96 ^
2. 00:36:293 (6) - X: 256 ^
3. 00:36:537 (7) - X: 152 ^
4. 00:36:781 (8) - X: 48 ^
5. 00:37:025 (9) - X: 360 ^
6. 00:37:269 (10) - X: 464 ^
7. 00:37:513 (1) - X: 152 ^

00:38:976 (3,4) - Ese hyper no sigue bien la cancion. mejor no ponerlo. Oki
00:41:293 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 96 ^
00:47:269 (1,2) - Ese hyper no sigue bien la cancion. intenta con eso:

1. 00:47:147 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 328 Oki
2. 00:47:269 (1) - Muevele al X: 400 ^

00:48:488 (3) - Muevele al X: 144 (el hyper esta muy lejo) ^
00:49:952 (1,2,3) - El hyper no sigue bien la cancion, intenta con eso:
00:49:952 (1) - X: 240 Ok
00:50:196 (2) - X: 144 ^
00:50:439 (3) - X: 336^
00:50:683 (4,1) - Ese hyper no sigue bien la cancion. mejor no ponerlo. ^
00:51:903 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:54:098 (5,6) - Ese hyper no sigue bien la cancion, intenta con eso:
00:54:098 (5) - X: 96 Ok
00:54:342 (6) - X: 256 ^
00:54:586 (1) - X: 416 ^
00:58:000 (1,2,3) - Demasiado grande spacing aqui, intenta con eso:

1. 00:58:000 (1) - X: 400 Ok
2. 00:58:244 (2) - X: 88 ^
3. 00:58:976 (3) - X: 400 ^

01:02:269 - Pon un circulo aqui (para cambiar un poco la timeline) ok
01:02:757 - ^ (haga terminar el slider antes) Ok
01:02:879 - ^ No ):
01:04:830 (1,2) - No utiliza tan grandes hypers Ok >.<
01:05:561 (4,5) - ^ Ok
01:14:342 (8,9) - ^ ^
01:18:732 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:33:610 (4) - Muevele al X: 224 (Queda mejor con la cancion) Ok o3o
01:35:805 - Podrias poner beats aqui. Ok
01:36:049 - ^ Ok owo
01:41:903 (6,7) - No utiliza tan grandes hypers Ok
01:44:098 (3,4,1) - ^ ok
01:44:586 (1,2) - Ese hyper deberia estar entre 01:45:805 (2,3) - esos circulos Ok xD
desde 01:47:757 - hasta 02:07:269 - deberia poner tu movemientos en el instrumento que se oye el mas (y la timeline en la bateria) Bueno lo intentaré TuT
02:16:781 (10,1) - No utiliza tan grandes hypers Ok
02:24:708 - Pon un circulo aqui Ok
02:27:512 (10,1,2,3) - No utiliza tan grandes hypers Ok
02:35:074 - Poner une circulo aqui con un clap suena bien. ^
02:37:879 - Podrias poner un circulo aqui. Oki o:
02:42:879 (3) - Mas movemiento ? Ok
02:43:611 (5) - ^ ^
02:50:074 - Podrias poner un circulo aqui y quitar el hyper Oki
02:58:488 (3,4) - Los hypers de esa parte no suenan muy bien con la cancion, intenta con eso:

1. 02:58:488 (3) - X: 480 Ok
2. 02:58:732 (4) - X: 160 ^

02:59:952 (4) - Ctrl-H y X: 376 Ok

English tldr; Trying to add some triplets to vary the timeline and nerfing hyper distance (almost all of them are using near max hyper range, wich is quite annoying to play in a so relaxing song). Also corrected snapping issues with 3 sliders. Gracias por todo

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue

3 ~ 4 minutes = 3 diffs

Rain

00:01:171 (3,1) - Erm, try to move these more apart please, so they don't look attached to each other. Plus, you want to keep the spacing between your objects consistent, yes? Ok

00:14:098 (6,7) - This is cheap, and it's not a good overlap, because 00:14:098 (6) - completely covers 00:14:830 (7) - . Please re-position these objects. Ok

00:16:049 (11,1) - Another bad overlap.ok XD

00:18:732 (6) - Looks really...weird. Here's something you can try:

*you'll need to move 00:19:220 (7) - further away from the slider as well

00:30:439 (5) - Looks really messy being placed under the previous triplets 00:29:220 (1,2,3) - . I'd say just stack it under 00:29:708 (4) - 's tail. No, put it below xD

00:47:269 (1,2) - ....remap these objects please. Same reason as 00:14:098 (6,7) - ok D_D

00:54:098 (5,6) - ? ok i like it

Completes the stretched hexagon formation.

00:58:244 (2) - CTRL + G and re-position, it looks funny how the reverse end is more closer to the previous object then the head itself. no, I like as well is

01:10:683 (5) - Make it a 1/2 slider, so its tail can hit the strong lyrics "Po" in Pone on 01:10:927. ok x'D

01:24:098 (2) - CTRL + G No xD

02:09:220 (2) - Forgot to add a finish on the head. o: you have reason
02:34:586 (2) - ^ ^

02:17:025 (7,1) - Can't you tell this is a bad overlap? ok XD

02:59:952 (4) - Forgot to add a finish on the head.ok uwu

Dificil

00:35:074 (5) - Turn it into a 1/2 slider, so that it's tail will hit the lyrics "Sol" heard on 00:35:318. ok o3o i liike it :3

01:02:391 (6) - Stack on 01:02:879 (1) - to create this cool sprouting flow: Good o3o


01:08:488 (6) - Turn it into a full 1/1 slider so that it will run smoothly through the vocals long hold on the "de" I did not understand very well, sorry u.u

02:09:220 (2) - Forgot to add a finish here. ok
02:34:586 (2) - ^ ok

02:38:488 (6) - NC instead of 02:38:976 (1) - , because it's the first object to appear on Kai time. ok

02:38:732 - Sounds empty, it needs a note here to complete the lyrics Padre, where "dre" is heard here. I'll remember but for now no uwu

02:59:952 (4) - Forgot to add a finish on the head. ok

03:00:684 (5) - NC? ok

Normal

00:29:708 (2) - Needs a finish ok
00:55:074 (2) - ^ On the head. ok ewe

01:04:830 (5,6,7,8) - Might be a little too hard to read for standard to beginner players. Try simplifying it to this rhythm: ok owo


01:12:635 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ Same issue as above. Try this rhythm? ok

Where the long slider at 01:12:391 will follow very well with the vocals long hold on the "stoy" in estoy. ok ewe

01:20:440 (2) - Forgot to add finish on the head. Ok >n<

01:31:415 (3) - and 01:31:903 (5) - Please remove these notes. Again, try to refrain from making the rhythm look to complicated. Ok u.u

01:39:220 (6) - Needs a finish on the last tail at 01:39:983 ok

01:40:439 (7) - Move to 01:40:683, then extend it so it ends at 01:43:122. That way, it will be consistently spaced between the previous and next note (being 1 1/2 beats apart from both sides). ok o:

01:59:464 (3,1) - Too far apart, check your DS. No o.o

02:09:220 (2) - Forgot to add finish on the head. ok
02:34:586 (2) - ^ ok

02:44:343 (5,6,7,1) - Same suggestion as 01:04:830 (5,6,7,8) - ok

02:52:392 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Same suggestion as 01:12:635 (5,6,7,8,9) - ok

02:59:953 (2) - Forgot to add finish on the head.

Looks like you still need to work on the flow more in your Hard/Insane diffs Atm, they look really messy, unorganized and there are bad overlaps found as well.

Normal diff looks alright.

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod

neonat wrote:

Normal

00:19:952 (7) - I think if you rotate it slightly, and move it further away from 00:18:976 (6) it would look and play nicer as you reduce the angle between them ok owo

SPOILER

00:43:854 (5) - rotate slightly again and shift so it looks more spread out equally to both 00:43:366 (4) and 00:42:879 (3) ok

SPOILER

01:28:244 (6) - NC here instead? Up to you No o-o
01:40:683 (7) - the repeat is at a very weird spot, maybe change the rhythm at this portion No, I like staying with guitar :3
02:05:318 (4,5) - having 02:06:293 (5) not so close would look nicer and the angle to move to the next beat would not be too acute, and easier to flow ok >.<

Dificil

00:01:903 (3) - wouldn't recommend a jump here, doesn't seem like it needed one ok XD
00:44:342 (2,1) - you could cover 00:44:342 (2) better with the end of 00:45:318 (1) ok owo
00:47:147 - add a note to go with the drums ok qwq
01:18:488 - add a note for the vocals ok
02:29:952 (4,5) - swap positions so circle before slider ok

SPOILER

02:46:294 (1) - add a softer sounding Normal hitsound finish on the start of the slider Ok o:
02:52:391 (2,7) - stack nicely? ok XD
02:58:000 - I think you should map to this vocal too ok
02:59:220 - ^ ok

I preferred the structure of Normal better though, anyways good luck (the audio is cut so abruptly though, so weird lol)

Kurodragon wrote:

Fue divertido esto de osu pero no me deja seguir con mis estudios, en especial cuando tengo exaemes y esas cosas, haci que teme la decicion de retirarme. Como fuiste de los pocos que conoci te doy mis 10 estrellas.

Por favor consiguete a alguien que siga con el mapa, puedes cambiarle el nombre a la diff y quitarme todos los creditos

Me retiro

Posdata, si un moderador esta viendo esto, puede eliminar mi cuenta, no hay problema

Neku okazaki wrote:

Que triste historia la de kurodragon TwT, si manu, te ayudare con el mapa TwT... Buen nombre el de kurodragon, lo usare de ahora en adelante en otros juegos xD

CLSW wrote:

[Rain]
* Overall, boring patterns are quite often. Better make them more jumpy and fun. Here's some bored :
00:03:122 (4,5) Ok
00:09:952 (5,6,7) No
00:12:879 (1,2,3) No
00:19:220 (7,8,9) No
00:24:586 (4,5) Ok
00:42:635 (3,4,5) Ok
00:51:171 (1,2) No
01:03:610 (4,5) Ok
01:08:000 (3,4,5) Ok
01:15:562 (2,3) before fix, make same x position for these sliders ok
01:35:805 (2,3,4) Ok
01:48:732 (3,4) No
01:56:537 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) No
02:29:464 (2,3,4) No
02:38:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6) No
And you should fix unbalanced NCs like 00:16:781 (1) this one.. No

00:00:440 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544448 try this Ok o3o
00:09:952 (5) - increase this jump. x: 320 would be nice. ok XD
00:16:781 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544452 try this ok
00:38:244 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544463 ^ ok
00:59:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544470 ^ ok o:
01:06:537 (7) - x : 64. ok
01:14:342 (8,9) - add hyperdash. No xD
01:36:049 (4,5) - seems out from rhythm. delete 01:36:049 (4) and make 01:36:293 (5) this slider starts from here. Ok XD
01:38:244 (8) - x : 476. ok
01:40:683 (2) - x : 480. ok
02:00:927 (1,2,3) - more jumpy, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544482 this. Also fix the sliders' shape as same. ok
02:15:317 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544484 try this ok
02:16:903 (6) - x : 160. ok
02:17:756 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544485 try this ok
02:21:659 (2) - x : 80 for jumpy. ok
02:24:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544487 try this ok
02:26:049 (6,7) - add hyperdash. Maybe x : 432 would be good. If you wanna fix, set 02:26:537 (8) - as 208 and 02:26:781 (1) - as 432.
02:31:415 (1) - x : 136. no
02:32:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ctrl+h. ok
02:45:562 (6) - x : 280. ok
02:46:293 (7) - x : 37. ok

Good luck to your improvement!

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

1. 00:03:854 (12) - hay un sonido fuerte y debe ir un k
2. 00:04:342 (13) - sigele el ritmo y ahí va un d
3. 00:06:293 (19) - aparte que es un sonido fuerte es como el fin del inicio del tema por eso debe ir un D
4. 00:08:244 (24) - sonido fuerte y con eco K
5. 00:29:342 (103) - un k porque los kdk o al revés, no son muy comunes en las muzukashii
6. 00:29:708 (105) - k, 00:29:952 (106) - d, 00:30:439 (107) - K
7. 00:35:561 (12) - d, 00:37:513 (20) - k
8. 00:54:098 (80) - k, 00:55:074 (85) - k, 00:55:318 (86) - d, 00:55:805 (87) - K
9. 00:58:976 (5) - D sonido fuerte :3
10. 01:02:879 (20) - k, 01:04:830 (27) - k, 01:06:781 (34) - K eco
11. 01:19:952 (82,83,84) - primero que nada ya te explique que estas combinaciones no son muy comunes en las muzu, y le iria bien unos kkk
12. 01:21:171 (87) - D
13. 01:24:342 (92) - K
14. 01:28:000 (101) - ?? no suena nada borralo y si insistes en ponerlo al menos muevelo al 01:28:244 (101) -
15. 01:31:171 (108) - ?? no hay nada ahi borralo
16. 01:37:269 (125) - ^
17. 01:46:781 (155,156,157) - kkk ya te explique porque
18. 01:47:757 (160) - k
19. 01:48:244 (161,162,163,164,165) - quedaria mejor asi? kkddk
20. 02:22:879 (42) - k
21. 02:30:683 (70) - k
22. 02:34:098 (82,83,84) - kkk ya te explique porque
23. 02:46:293 (34) - D
24. 02:52:147 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - sinceramente no se que tratastes de hacer pero esta horrible xD, lo mas facil es esto aver si lo consideras sabiendo que es una diff muzu: 02:52:269 (57) - muevelo al 02:52:391 (57), - 02:52:757 (60) - borralo, 02:53:000 (60,61) - muevelo al 02:52:879 (60,61) - , 02:53:610 (63,64) - lo mueves al 02:53:488 (63,64) - , 02:53:854 (65) - agregas un d y 02:54:098 (66) - lo cambias por un k
25. 02:59:464 (83,84,85) - kkk ya sabes porque

1. Primero que nada en el song setup no se que quisistes hacer porque no le hacen efecto al Taiko excepto el Overall Difficulty que es para la velocidad del Spin:
   
   puedes dejarlo asi pero te recomiendo que uses siempre default
2. Igual aqui
   creo que le iria mejor un 1.60 de Slider Velocity
   El Slider Tick Rate dejalo siempre en default osea en 1, piensa en los DT players -.- siempre se paran quejando de eso xD... bueno ahora si procedo al mapa
3. que buen mapa pero lo que no me gusta son estos 02:34:098 (5,6,7,8) - osea no digo que no vayan, pero deberían ser todos del mismo color, en este caso es un sonido de bateria asi que deberian ser kkkk
4. 02:59:464 (118,119,120,121) - ^

-Sh1n1- wrote:

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

[Hanjamon's Taiko Oni]

1. Primero que nada en el song setup no se que quisistes hacer porque no le hacen efecto al Taiko excepto el Overall Difficulty que es para la velocidad del Spin:
   
   puedes dejarlo asi pero te recomiendo que uses siempre default arreglado
2. Igual aqui
   creo que le iria mejor un 1.60 de Slider Velocity no veo la necesidad de ponerle un 1.60 de sv, le quita un poco la gracia a la taiko diff y hace que parezca mas una diff de std convertida a taiko
   El Slider Tick Rate dejalo siempre en default osea en 1, piensa en los DT players -.- siempre se paran quejando de eso xD... bueno ahora si procedo al mapa Si lo pongo en 1 aumenta los hits que hay que darle al slider asi que seria mas molesto aun para los DT players, de momento lo dejare como esta
3. que buen mapa pero lo que no me gusta son estos 02:34:098 (5,6,7,8) - osea no digo que no vayan, pero deberían ser todos del mismo color, en este caso es un sonido de bateria asi que deberian ser kkkk nope
4. 02:59:464 (118,119,120,121) - ^ ^

Tanto escuchar la canción ya me gusto :3 suerte Manuxz Star (y)

Gracias por el mod Shini :33 Y También por la estrella >w<

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

1. 00:03:854 (12) - hay un sonido fuerte y debe ir un k
2. 00:04:342 (13) - sigele el ritmo y ahí va un d
3. 00:06:293 (19) - aparte que es un sonido fuerte es como el fin del inicio del tema por eso debe ir un D
4. 00:08:244 (24) - sonido fuerte y con eco K
5. 00:29:342 (103) - un k porque los kdk o al revés, no son muy comunes en las muzukashii
6. 00:29:708 (105) - k, 00:29:952 (106) - d, 00:30:439 (107) - K
7. 00:35:561 (12) - d, 00:37:513 (20) - k
8. 00:54:098 (80) - k, 00:55:074 (85) - k, 00:55:318 (86) - d, 00:55:805 (87) - K
9. 00:58:976 (5) - D sonido fuerte :3
10. 01:02:879 (20) - k, 01:04:830 (27) - k, 01:06:781 (34) - K eco
11. 01:19:952 (82,83,84) - primero que nada ya te explique que estas combinaciones no son muy comunes en las muzu, y le iria bien unos kkk
12. 01:21:171 (87) - D
13. 01:24:342 (92) - K
14. 01:28:000 (101) - ?? no suena nada borralo y si insistes en ponerlo al menos muevelo al 01:28:244 (101) -
15. 01:31:171 (108) - ?? no hay nada ahi borralo
16. 01:37:269 (125) - ^
17. 01:46:781 (155,156,157) - kkk ya te explique porque
18. 01:47:757 (160) - k
19. 01:48:244 (161,162,163,164,165) - quedaria mejor asi? kkddk
20. 02:22:879 (42) - k
21. 02:30:683 (70) - k
22. 02:34:098 (82,83,84) - kkk ya te explique porque
23. 02:46:293 (34) - D
24. 02:52:147 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - sinceramente no se que tratastes de hacer pero esta horrible xD, lo mas facil es esto aver si lo consideras sabiendo que es una diff muzu: 02:52:269 (57) - muevelo al 02:52:391 (57), - 02:52:757 (60) - borralo, 02:53:000 (60,61) - muevelo al 02:52:879 (60,61) - , 02:53:610 (63,64) - lo mueves al 02:53:488 (63,64) - , 02:53:854 (65) - agregas un d y 02:54:098 (66) - lo cambias por un k
25. 02:59:464 (83,84,85) - kkk ya sabes porque

lZenxl wrote:

Mod from Queue

The Mp3 cuts off very abruptly, I'm surprised that you haven't fixed it yet:
Here's the Mp3 that I fixed using audacity, I added a fade out at the back, the offset of the .mp3 might be incorrect though : http://puu.sh/8DFvH.mp3

Turn off widescreen support for all difficulties, the BG doesn't stretch out for the whole screen, it creates weird black bars at the side


[Hanjamon's Oni]
00:04:342 (14) - k > d | The intro is just creating a foundation kat rhythm, I don't think you need to vary the kat rhythm here with a kat, it feels out of place in my opinion no change
00:11:659 (37) - d > k | I think it is suitable to have a kat here before the pattern 00:11:903 (38,39,40) - as the kat rhythm here will sound a bit late
00:26:293 (96,97) - Swap | The high-pitched drum falls on 96 instead of 97 thus I suggest to swap it
00:33:610 (123) - k > K | The note here is the start of a new section of the song I suggest to emphasize it so that the player will know that the section started no change
00:41:659 (156,157) - Swap | The high-pitched drum falls on 157, I suggest to swap it so that it fits better
01:32:025 (162,163) - dk > (Remove) K | You might want to emphasize this note here as it has a cymbal in the music
01:33:610 (170) - d > k | The high-pitched drum appears in the music, you might want to have this a kat
01:48:976 (11) - k > d | I don't think 4 kats in a row here is needed, you might want to vary it a bit
01:53:854 (35) - Move Right by 1/2 ? | The drum falls on 01:54:098 - You might want to map it in
01:54:342 (36) - k > d | Vary this a bit, the amount of kats in a row is pretty high
02:03:854 (79,80) - Swap | The high-pitched drum falls on 79
02:17:512 (126,128) - Swap | ^
02:20:683 (143,144,146) - dkk > k(Remove)(Remove) | The kat rhythm here sounds really messed up, I suggest to got for a more rigid rhythm no change for the moment
02:30:195 (192,194) - Swap | The high-pitch drum falls on 192
02:41:903 (37) - d > k | High-pitched drum here
02:54:586 (98) - ^

lZenxl wrote:

The kat rhythm here is pretty inconsistent, I can't seem to feel any rigid kat rhythm here

Suggestions

00:03:122 (9) move to 00:04:098 ?
00:04:830 (14) k instead of d, it sounds like for the other k :c
00:05:074 (15) del or move to 00:06:049 ? and change 00:06:293 (19) to K
00:08:244 (24) a D could be better here, it sounds really higher atm.
Well now if you really want to follow the instrumental, there’s a lot of changes to do, but they’r pretty easy, just like place a k whenever it sounds like the others part you placed k earlier.
For example : - 00:08:732 – 00:11:659
00:08:732 (25,26) swap colors
00:10:196 (31) d instead of k
00:10:683 (33) k instead of d
I know it feels repetitive, and since this is a muzu, I would’ve del some notes to keep something cool to play, like (if you keep the changes I suggested there) deleting 00:09:220 (27) – 00:10:439 (32) – 00:11:415 (36) -. Well if you do this you’ll need to do a lot of changes earlier and after to keep the diff consistency ;_;
Now I’m gonna suggest changes that follow the way you mapped this and that follow also a bit the way I would’ve mapped this, like my previous suggestion. Mostly about the instrumental.
00:13:610 (45) change to k ?
00:17:513 (59) ^
00:18:488 (62) ^
00:29:708 – 00:30:439 ok here you have to chose if you follow the vocal or the instrumental, something that would fit more the instrumental would be like : - 00:29:708 (105) change to d, - 00:30:196 add k and - 00:30:439 (107) change to d and add finisher.
Now the vocal : - 00:29:708 (105,106) swap colors and – 00:30:439 (107) change to d and add finisher.
00:32:635 (1) change to d ?
00:34:098 – 00:37:513 again you’r not really following the song there imo x_x … something like that would’ve fited more the song to me : (- 00:34:098 – 00:37:513 -)
_____________________
Well now I’m gonna continue the normal mod and just point when there’s a huge amount of notes that not follows the song to me. Try to change it if you did the changes I suggested before :c (or just pm for more explanation :c)
00:42:879 (39,40) swap colors ?
00:43:854 (41) change to k ?
00:46:537 (51) change to d ?
00:47:269 (54) maybe add finisher ? and maybe also delete the previous note ? sounds loud atm
00:48:244 (57) change to d ?
00:51:659 – 00:54:342 refer to 00:34:098 – 00:37:513
00:54:586 (82,83,84) kkk as you did earlier fits still better the song imo
00:55:074 – 00:55:804 refer to 00:29:708 – 00:30:439
00:58:000 (1,3) change to d and add d at 00:58:366 ? there’s a ¼ rhythm here
00:59:464 – 01:02:879 refer to 00:34:098 – 00:37:513
01:03:366 (21) change to k ?
01:05:318 (28) change to k, - 01:05:805 (30) change to d and then – 01:06:293 (32) change to k ?
01:07:269 – 01:10:196 refer to 00:34:098 – 00:37:513
01:11:171 – 01:14:586 ^
01:15:561 (68,70,71) swap colors ?
01:17:513 (75) change to d, - 01:18:732 (79) move to 01:18:488 and then 01:18:976 (80) change to k ?
01:19:708 add d ?
01:20:439 – 01:21:171 refer to 00:29:708 – 00:30:439
Alright it should be enough x_x I guess you noticed that if you applie my suggestions, it always sounds the same more or less, it’s the best way to map this song to me ,_, idk what else I can suggest sorry…
If you applied the changes, you have to do the same thing on the rest of the song! If you did and you need some help, as I said earlier just pm me.

Nofool wrote:

Hi, mod req from Manuxz
I modded only the Muzu atm sorry ;_; I'll edit/repost for the Oni mod as soon as i can (prolly no before 1-2 days tho)

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Hanjamon's Oni]
00:04:342 (14) - very obvious downbeat so I suggest changing to d no change
00:05:561 (17,18,19,20,21) - ookay this might be unrankable as well. try k ddk D this is not unrankable, no change
01:46:537 (2) - remove finish fixed

good luck for rank~

Nofool wrote:

Here's the Oni mod ;_; really sorry for the delay... (no kudosu since you already gave me one on my first post x_x)
I hope it'll be usefull'

[Oni]

00:08:732 (27) change to k ? it sounds like the others moments you placed k :c
00:10:927 (34) d would fit better the song imo ;_; but you did this too much times so I can’t really suggest to change this one and not all the others, as you prefer. I would’ve removed the next d at 00:10:196 to keep something cool to play also. no change
00:13:610 (45) change to k ? and see how it sounds if you also remove 00:13:122 (43) and change 00:12:879 (42) to d, just as I suggested below. I won’t point these moments now, it’s up to your choice é_è.
00:17:513 (60) change to K ? fits more the instrumental imo ,_, and the way you placed the others k ofc. no change
00:19:464 (68) ^ ^
00:27:635 (101) ^ ^
00:29:220 (108,109) ^, or maybe only (108) to k sounds better for me with ddk here
00:32:635 (119) change to d ? no change
00:36:781 (135,136) swap colors ?
00:38:488 (142) change to d ?
Following my first suggestion, something like that would’ve fited more the song imo : -00:43:976 (167,168) swap colors, and then also 00:44:342 (169,171) swap colors ? => kkd ddd instead of kdk kdk. no change for the moment, is not bad idea

00:46:537 (178,179) swap colors ?
00:47:757 (185) change to k ?
Mmmm to be honest the rest of this long “pattern” sounds good, you did well, but there’s maybe one problem, -00:48:488 (189,190,191,192) there you should’ve done dkdk instead of kdkd to keep consistency with the way you placed the others k, at least what you did still sounds well ‘cause the instrumental is a bit different atm, just wanted to point it but no need changes I guess. i know >.<, hmm i will add a finish at k notes, K d K d

00:54:708 (6) change to k ? same in 00:29:220 (108,109)
00:58:366 add k ?

Ok, ‘bout the kiai I think all these ¼ patterns are good, maybe not all perfect x_x but kiai is cooler to play this way so np. I think you just broke all your d and k’s usuall placements on the ½ beats lol. I would’ve suggested waaay to much changes to keep consitstency with the previous part on the map :c so I really suggest you to do some changes ‘bout that (k/d’s ½ rhythm on kiai).
Well the rest of the map is pretty much the same, I just won’t suggest everytime the same changes. If you already applied a lot of all my suggestions, you have to do the same on the rest of the map. I don’t think so there’s that much things to change at least. gl
This is one of my first diffs.. this is the reason of why is a bit weird >.<
(ho and you can PM me if you did the changes and need some help with the rest of your diff)

Serena- wrote:

From my modding queue~

[General]
I'm not exactly sure about this, Facil diff's name should be Easy even it means easy in spanish. same with Dificil. not sure, ask a bat about this I'll check :s
The SB is not that visible in the ctb mode. how about moving the lyrics to the top?(only for the Rain diff) I'll try D:

[Rain]
01:06:049 (6) - how about x:128 Ok o3o
01:37:513 (5) - a bit edgy jump and it doesn't fit here imo+NC ^
02:08:000 (3) - x:256? ^
02:10:074 (1) - this is unrankable. the spinner has to start at 02:10:074 (pretty sure its unrankable) I moved to the next tick '-'


i really like this diff, so not much problems imo, fits my taste, so have some stars

Serena- wrote:

[General]
I'm not exactly sure about this, Facil diff's name should be Easy even it means easy in spanish. same with Dificil. not sure, ask a bat about this

Winek wrote:

Mus confirm. osu! Is an english community game. Have exemple for this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/136207 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/74313 . They are spanish songs but still have english difficulty name.

By the way, the desc is a bit selfish, only spanishes can understand what it means :c


Good luck on your map. Star.

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Taiko Moding Queue

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.

[General]

1. Sampleset change. SC:1 >> Normal
   http://puu.sh/9imBm/516be6fbc0.png

Neku okazaki

[Muzukashii]

1. Many kdkdk,kdddk can changes kd ,dk. kd,dk can follow the guitar accent or vocal accent. Sounds better than plays.
2. 00:00:927 (2,3,4,5,6) – kd dk
3. 00:02:879 (8,9,10,11,12) - kdkdk >>> k,ddk sounds better imo.
4. 00:04:830 (13,14,15,16) - ^
5. And, 00:04:098 (11) – add d?
6. 00:10:439 (31) – delete? vocal doesn’t hit clear.
7. 00:14:586 (45,46,47,48,49) – kd dk
8. 00:18:488 (58,59,60,61,62) – kd dk.
9. 00:20:439 (64,65,66,67,68) – kd dk
10. 00:26:293 (86,87,88,89,90) – kd dk
11. 00:29:952 (101) - k?
12. 00:35:805 (13) – delete?
13. 00:39:952 (27,28,29,30,31) – kd dk
14. 00:48:976 (58) – delete? vocal stopped.
15. 00:53:366 (74) – delete?
16. 00:55:805 (83) – finisher
17. 00:59:464 (6,7,8,9,10) – kd dk
18. 01:02:147 (16) – delete?
19. 01:03:854 (21,22,23,24,25) - kd dk
20. 01:08:000 (35) – delete?
21. 01:08:244 (35,36,37,38,39) – kd dk
22. 01:11:171 (46,47,48,49,50) – kd dk
23. 01:12:147 (49,50,51,52,53) – kd dk?
24. 01:28:976 (95) – delete, unnecessary for the guitar.
25. and, 01:29:220 (95) - k?
26. 01:32:635 (104) – delete.
    01:33:610 (107,108,109,110,111) –dkddk?
27. 01:39:586 (122) – k
28. 01:40:927 (125) – delete
29. 01:45:318 (138,139) – move to 1/2 left. (01:45:074 -)
30. 01:48:244 (149,150,151,152,153) – kd dk
31. 01:50:196 (155,156,157,158,159) – kd dk
32. 01:52:635 (164) – k?
33. 01:53:122 (165) – k?
34. 01:53:854 (167) – move to 01:53:610 (167) –
35. 01:54:098 (168) – add k
36. and, 01:54:586 (170,171) - k?
37. 01:55:805 (173) – d
38. and 01:56:293 (174) – change the k + move to 1/2 left.
39. 01:58:000 (182,183) - (k,delete)
40. 02:05:074 (202,203) – (d,blank,d)=> k,d,blank)
41. 02:15:318 (13) – delete?
42. 02:19:464 (28,29,30,31,32) – kd dk
43. 02:29:220 (62,63,64,65,66) – kd dk
44. 02:38:976 (6,7,8,9,10) – kd dk
45. 02:43:366 (22,23,24,25,26) – dk kd? Or kd dk
46. 02:47:513 (36) – delete.
47. 02:47:757 (36,37,38,39,40) – kd dk
48. 02:53:366 (56) – delete.
    
49. needs more modders.

Hanjamon

[Oni]

1. 00:01:415 (4) – delete , for (3) sounds accent
2. 00:03:122 (8) – delete
3. 0:18:488 (62) - d? 00:18:366 – add d?
4. 00:21:659 (75,76) – dk? Vocal is up.
5. 00:28:000 (102,103,104,105) – kkdd>>dkdk ?
6. 00:51:903 (202) – d ,,,, d, kd, dk~~
7. 01:03:122 (37) -d?
8. 01:06:171 (50) – delete?
9. 01:07:269 (56) – k snare sounds.
10. and, 01:06:781 (54) - ~~01:08:732 -
    how about? http://puu.sh/9ipi8/987d27bde1.jpg
11. 01:09:220 (65,66,67,68,69) – k ddk d >> d k kkd ?
12. and, 01:10:439 (72,73,74) – kdk?
13. 01:12:513 (81) – add d?
14. 01:22:147 (118) – delete?
15. 01:26:537 (137) – d?
16. 01:29:586 (150,151) – dk? Pitch is high.
17. 01:33:366 (169) – d?
18. 01:37:513 (186,187,188,189,190,191) – kkd kdk? Or kkd kkk?
19. 01:38:976 (194) – delete?
20. 01:40:439 (199) – k, snare.
21. 01:41:171 (203,204) – swap?
22. 01:41:659 (205,206) – dd?
23. 01:43:122 (213) - k?
24. 01:44:464 (219,220) – dk? Pitch is up.
25. 01:59:464 (60) - d? pitch becomes low.
26. 02:14:830 (117) - d? k k d~~ d d k~~
27. 02:18:244 (129) - k? can make the linked 02:18:488 (130) -ddk~~stream.
28. 02:28:488 (184) - k? pitch still keep to high.
29. 02:44:586 (51) - d
30. 02:45:317 (54) - k?
31. 02:42:635 (41) – d
32. 02:43:854 (47) - k?
33. 02:42:391 (40,45) - d?
34. 02:46:415 (61) – delete rhythm suddenly reversed, but music pattern doesn’t change.
35. 02:47:512 (66) – d
36. 02:48:488 (71) - k?
37. 02:57:025 (108) – add d vocal sounds.

if you want to give more explanation on my suggestions, please tell me that.
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through
Good Luck!

mliencheng wrote:

Taiko mod via request

Hanjamon's Oni

01:59:464 k no change, before was k

cant find much to mod XD

xLoupGarou wrote:

From xLoupGarou's Modding Queue

MOD

[Normal]

01:39:464 Blanket? maybe No
01:47:757 ^ ok
02:00:927 Add a note Ok
02:01:415 ^ Ok
02:06:293 Blanket? Ok
02:07:513 Remove NC? Ok
02:13:610 ^ No
02:15:561 ^ ok
02:19:708 Blanket? No

[Hard]
00:30:439 Remove NC? No
00:55:805 ^No

The Mapset seems Fine to me * shoots a star *
Good Luck~

1. Desactiva el widescreen support ya que el storyboard es a 1024x768, es innecesario tener activado la alerta de epilepsia porque el sb no contiene ningún efecto mas que solo lo lyrics.
2. Siento que el final del mp3 es un poco random, creo que podrías hacer un efecto fade en el final para que no suene tan mal el final de la transición, si necesita ayuda con eso eres libre de preguntarme cuando me veas online.
3. En la carpeta hay unos archivos que están duplicados y eso hace que el peso del mapa sea mayor lo cual es innecesario, tienes que eliminar los siguientes:
4. "Lyrics14"
5. "Lyrics15"
6. "Lyrics17"
7. "Lyrics18"
8. "Lyrics19"
9. "Lyricshoy"
10. "Lyricsojo"
11. "Lyrics11"
12. "Lyrics12"

1. 00:41:659 - "Lyrics10"
2. 00:41:659 - "Lyricsojo"
3. 00:49:708 - "Lyrics12"
4. 01:17:513 - "Lyricshoy"
5. 03:04:342 - "Black"
6. 03:04:830 - "SB"

1. 49464 el efecto fade de lyrics 2 deberia de comenzar en 00:49:342 - ya que si lo dejas como esta ahora mismo crea una inconsistencia porque tiene un retraso de unos segundos.
2. 00:53:732 - para mantener consistencia deberías de realizar el mismo efecto del final al igual que aquí 01:19:464 -
3. 02:58:610 - ^
4. 02:20:927 - este es el unico objeto que esta mas al centro de la pantalla lo cual crea inconsistencia con los demás lyrics, te recomiendo mover esto un poco mas abajo.
5. 02:46:293 - ^
6. 02:49:342 - esto realmente se ve muy mal, seria mucho mejor que el "Lyrics17" desapareciera en 02:49:220 - para no impedir la vista del siguiente, otra cosa que cabe mencionar es que a este también le apliques lo mencionado anteriormente acerca de mover esto mas abajo.
7. 03:04:342 - siento que el efecto "Black" no necesita un ampliación muy grande, considera la reducción de esta para evitar cualquier sobre carga en el storyboard.

1. 00:11:659 (5,1) - voy a hacer un poco nazi en este aspecto que tal hacer la curva de este slider mas detallada, algo como esto:
   
   Ejemplo

   
2. 00:13:610 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:52:635 (4,5) - ^
4. 02:04:342 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:17:513 (2) - mueve este circulo a X: 269 Y: 270 para un perfecto apilado con 00:15:561 (4) -
6. 00:19:952 (5,1) - Intercambia el NC
7. 02:24:830 (5,1) - ^
8. 00:54:586 (1,2) - el flujo entre estos dos es demasiado malo a mi parecer, ya que regresar a un lugar que ya fue asignado le quita consistencia al mapa, podrías considerar hacer algo asi para evitar cualquier tipo de confusión y hacerlo mas legible a los jugadores no experimentados. (recuerda que si aplicas esto, no olvides re acomodar las notas siguientes con el espacio que les corresponde)
9. 01:13:610 (1) - Elimina el NC y agrégalo en la siguiente nota.
10. 01:33:122 (2,3,4,5) - muchos círculos en un plazo corto de tiempo podría ser demasiado duro, para bajar un poco la dificultad te recomiendo cambiar estos dos 01:34:098 (4,5) - por un slider.
11. 01:45:805 (1) - considera la adición de un Finish con clap, suena bastante agradable en mi opinión.
12. 01:49:220 (2) - Agrega un Finish aquí ya que en la instrumental se destaca un sonido fuerte.
13. ^
14. 01:52:635 (1) - Sonaría muy bien si le agregas un whistle en la reversa del slider ya que seguiría muy bien la armónica.
15. 02:10:439 (1) - Clap?
16. 02:10:439 (1,1) - en las dificultades mas fáciles no esta permitido este tipo de cosas en un tiempo corto, esto se debe a que un jugador no experimentado no puede recuperarse tan rápido tras un spinner, lo solución seria eliminar este slider y adicionar un circulo en 02:12:635 -
17. 02:17:025 (1) - olvidaste agregar un whistle en el inicio & en el final del slider.
18. 02:20:439 (4,1) - ^ lo mismo solo que en este cambia el whistle por un finish en el inicio de este.
19. 02:44:342 (3) - Un CTRL + G a este slider seria fenomenal ya que si fluiría mas natural y facilitaría el movimiento del cursor para los siguientes objetos.
20. 02:52:147 (4) - clap en la reversa.
21. 02:46:293 (1) - finish en el inicio.
    
    Nota: en la mitad de la dificultad haz olvidado agregar varios whistles considera agregarlos para mantener consistencia con la primera parte.

1. 00:12:147 (1) - whistle en el inicio de este slider.
2. 00:14:098 (4) - ^ 00:16:049 (1) - ^ 00:19:952 (1) - ^ 00:23:854 (1) - ^ 00:49:220 (1) - ^ 00:51:171 (4) - ^ 01:02:879 (2) - ^ 01:06:781 (1) - ^ 01:10:683 (2) - ^ 01:12:391 (5) - ^
3. 00:31:327 - elimina el break de aquí es bastante extraño e innecesario.
4. 00:56:049 - ^ 02:35:561 - ^
5. 00:36:049 (5) - NC
6. 01:40:683 (6) - ^ 02:08:732 (4) - ^
7. 01:10:196 (1) - Elimna el NC de aqui y ponlo en la siguiente nota ya que en esta parte todavía no termina de formular la frase.
8. 01:40:683 (6,7) - Nazi* Este patrón en mi opinión personal no se mira muy bonito, le falta un poco de estetica al slider, Intenta lo siguiente:
   
   Blanket

   
9. 01:45:805 (1) - Misma sugerencia de hitsounds para este spinner.
10. 02:04:830 (3) - Finish. 02:46:294 (1) - Igual que aquí.
11. 02:38:489 (2,1) - Intercambia el NC.