Sensualdango wrote:

Este sera un mod en español, ya que yo y tu hablamos ese idioma ._.

Foro

Deberías cambiar todo por:

 [b]Artist:[/b] Intoxicados
[b]Title:[/b] Esta Saliendo El Sol
[b]Tags:[/b] Rock Classic Hanjamon -FireThunder-
[b]BPM:[/b] 123
[b]Filesize:[/b] 3398kb
[b]Play Time:[/b] 03:03
[b]Difficulties Available:[/b]
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Este mapa forma parte del proyecto [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/132047/start=0]osu! needs more Spanish songs[/url], La siguiente es la lista de los que ayudaron en el mapa (No incluye dificultades):

[profile]Sensualdango[/profile]: SB, Mod
[profile]Popner[/profile]: Timming
[profile]Gero[/profile]: IRC mod
[profile]ErunamoJazz[/profile]: Mod
[profile]AkagamiNamikase[/profile]: Mod
[profile]Pife1[/profile]: Mod
[profile]BrujoAzu[/profile]l: Mod
[profile]Kuron-Kun[/profile]: Mod
[profile]-FireThunder[/profile]-: Mod
 


[box=Letra]Está saliendo el sol 
Que es sin duda mi dios 
Pero no estoy apto 
Para aprender, hoy de su sabiduría 
Porque la luna apareció 
Y me invito a estar con ella 
Hasta que vuelvas vos. 

Ya está saliendo el sol 
Que es sin duda mi Dios 
aunque no cierre el ojo en toda la semana 
Y tenga ganas de desmayarme en la cama 
Voy a salir a recibir su bendición, oh Dios. 

Padre sol nuestro que estás en los cielos 
Guíame si no esta bien la vida que llevo 
No dejes nunca de brillar 
Porque eso me pone bien 
Cuando estoy un poco mal 
La luz nuestra de cada día 
Dánosle hoy que así sea amén. 

]Ya está saliendo el sol 
Que es sin duda mi Dios 
aunque no cierre el ojo en toda la semana 
Y tenga ganas de desmayarme en la cama 
Voy a salir a recibir su bendición, oh Dios. 

Padre sol nuestro que estás en los cielos 
Guíame si no esta bien la vida que llevo 
No dejes nunca de brillar 
Porque eso me pone bien 
Cuando estoy un poco mal 
La luz nuestra de cada día 
Dánosle hoy que así sea amén.[/box]

SB

El SB, como yo lo hice, creo que esta bien. no se, aqui estan las verciones:

1.0

Esto cuenta como mod

Kurokami wrote:

[CtB]

2,20x Slider velocity. o.o Thats way too high. Even 2,0x is high. Please change it to at least 1,9x-2,0x. ok

00:58:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps are good sometimes but you are using them too many times. Please try out other patterns too since you have almost infinite possiblities. ok
00:59:464 - 01:04:830 - This part kinda makes no sense, just some 1/2 slider and circle. Yes, tre rhythm is simple but you can still able to use repeat slider too (with 1,2,3,... repeat) to make the patterns a bit different. No e.e
01:34:830 (1,2,3,4,5) - You missed some good part of the song. Remove the whole combo and try to map something which is fit more to the rhythm. no, it's fine as well
01:51:903 (3,4,5) - Remove (3,5) please, there is nothing in the song. No , I hear 2 hits: v
01:52:635 (1,2) - Delete (2), make (1) longer with 1/4 with a repeat at 01:53:000. And add a slider to 01:53:732 - 01:54:098. No e.e
01:54:342 - Circle. ok
01:57:269 (1) - With this slider you missed two important map of the song at 01:57:513 and 01:58:000. Change the rhythm please according to this. No, looks good with the sound of the harmonica
01:59:464 (4) - Again some good point missed. Same as above e.e
02:02:147 (5,6,7) - To be honest a repeat slider should be better here. No
02:03:122 (1) - Same as I told you already before.
02:06:293 (4) - Shorten this slider with 1/4 and just add a note at the end. Ok

Lastly, you used too many HDash which is a bit annoying. Try to use them at where they really belong. How should I describe it...its like when you feel you want to do something bigger. 00:37:269 (10,1) - This part of the song for example is a good point for a HDash. Its a bit different from the others since here you can hear a change in the song. For most of the times you can find like these at long white tick but not always. Just feel the music and you should be fine. Ok :3


I won't say more since I think this diff is enjoyable but needs some adjustment. The ryhthm is a bit of sometimes but the bigger problem is the too many HDash as I said before. Try to use most of the HDashes during kiai, it gives a good chill.
The other thing is the too many 1/2 rhythm. Currently this map is kinda borring due the lack of rhythm. Try to use more 1/4 (with circle or slider) and it should be fine. Its enough if you just concentrete on the kiai parts since there the rhythm needs to be different from the other part of the song. Just add some circle or remove a slider and 3 circle instead and it should be fine. Ok :3

I will make a re-check once you finished everything above. I will mod the standard diff that time too.

1. General: Revisa tu Aimod, tienes muchos objetos fuera de lugar o.o
2. 00:06:537 (1,1) - Nunca deben estar muy juntos un spiner con un circle o slider, siempre tienes que dejar 1 tick de 1/2
3. 00:22:635 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - Saltos de hyperdash innecesarios D: haz algo mas sencillo.
4. 00:26:537 (1,2) - Aquí no hay hyperdash pero el salto aquí también es innecesario, deberías de acercarlo mas a (1).
5. 01:18:732 (1,2,3) - En estos 3 circles parece una parte "sobresaliente" y por ende deberías mejorar estos saltos que ya va muy bien con esta parte de la canción. (Tal vez a uno de ellos un hyperdash).
6. 01:26:049 (4,5,6,7) - Saltos innecesarios nuevamente D:
7. 01:29:708 (3,4,5) - ^
8. 01:31:415 (1,2,3) - ^
9. 01:41:171 (3,4,5,6,7) - Abusando nuevamente del hyperdash ;___; algo un poco mas simple pls, no es una parte donde alguien esperaría tales jumps.
10. 01:46:537 (4) - Acercalo un poco mas a 01:46:049 (3) - porque se siente muy lejos.
11. 01:47:757 - hasta aquí 02:07:269 - no sentí nada de ritmo D:! creo que se escucha una armonica en esta parte de canción, tal vez podrías seguir esa parte del instrumental. Tal como está ahora con sliders largos de repeteción es sinceramente muy pero muy aburrido jugar esta parte, podrías remapear todo esos segundos.
12. 02:10:196 (1,1) - A esto me refería hace un momento o3o tienes que dejar siempre un pequeño espacio después de un spiner. (Lo digo por si no me entendiste lo que te había dicho anteriormente xd)
13. 02:37:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - Este parte me gusto, sólo que recomendaría juntarlos un poquito pero sólo un poquito más. Estos saltos encajan muy bien en esta parte de la canción.
14. 02:46:538 (1,2,3,4) - Nuevamente aquí hay otros saltos sin sentido u__u no veo necesidad de colocar unos saltos de este tipo en esta parte.
15. 02:52:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Esto fue algo raro xD! Esta parte 02:52:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - esta todo muy junto y luego de la nada aparecen estos saltos 02:53:855 (8,9,1) - y pues es un poco randon xd. Primero deberías separar un poco mas a 02:52:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - y después juntar a 02:53:855 (8,9,1) - para que no tengan saltos de hyperdash.

[Yue] wrote:

Mod from my queue~

Rain:

1. General: Revisa tu Aimod, tienes muchos objetos fuera de lugar o.o
2. 00:06:537 (1,1) - Nunca deben estar muy juntos un spiner con un circle o slider, siempre tienes que dejar 1 tick de 1/2 No, vi un map en el que hiceron lo mismo uwu yo quiero el spin ahí XD
3. 00:22:635 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - Saltos de hyperdash innecesarios D: haz algo mas sencillo. Eso intento Q_Q
4. 00:26:537 (1,2) - Aquí no hay hyperdash pero el salto aquí también es innecesario, deberías de acercarlo mas a (1). Bueno
5. 01:18:732 (1,2,3) - En estos 3 circles parece una parte "sobresaliente" y por ende deberías mejorar estos saltos que ya va muy bien con esta parte de la canción. (Tal vez a uno de ellos un hyperdash). Listo owo
6. 01:26:049 (4,5,6,7) - Saltos innecesarios nuevamente D: Modificiado -u-
7. 01:29:708 (3,4,5) - ^ Listo
8. 01:31:415 (1,2,3) - ^ Listo :c
9. 01:41:171 (3,4,5,6,7) - Abusando nuevamente del hyperdash ;___; algo un poco mas simple pls, no es una parte donde alguien esperaría tales jumps. Okey *n*
10. 01:46:537 (4) - Acercalo un poco mas a 01:46:049 (3) - porque se siente muy lejos. No e.e Queria que este lejos :I
11. 01:47:757 - hasta aquí 02:07:269 - no sentí nada de ritmo D:! creo que se escucha una armonica en esta parte de canción, tal vez podrías seguir esa parte del instrumental. Tal como está ahora con sliders largos de repeteción es sinceramente muy pero muy aburrido jugar esta parte, podrías remapear todo esos segundos. No, bueno yo si creo que le di ritmo a esa parte, por lo menos por parte de la armonica por eso es que hay muchos slideres con repetición pero bueno no se, voy a ver si puedo cambiar algo e.e
12. 02:10:196 (1,1) - A esto me refería hace un momento o3o tienes que dejar siempre un pequeño espacio después de un spiner. (Lo digo por si no me entendiste lo que te había dicho anteriormente xd) En este si te hago caso
13. 02:37:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - Este parte me gusto, sólo que recomendaría juntarlos un poquito pero sólo un poquito más. Estos saltos encajan muy bien en esta parte de la canción. Oki
14. 02:46:538 (1,2,3,4) - Nuevamente aquí hay otros saltos sin sentido u__u no veo necesidad de colocar unos saltos de este tipo en esta parte. Ya lo cambie e.e
15. 02:52:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Esto fue algo raro xD! Esta parte 02:52:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - esta todo muy junto y luego de la nada aparecen estos saltos 02:53:855 (8,9,1) - y pues es un poco randon xd. Primero deberías separar un poco mas a 02:52:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - y después juntar a 02:53:855 (8,9,1) - para que no tengan saltos de hyperdash.Listo

En este mod sólo puse las cosas mas relevantes que noté, en mi opinión necesita mas trabajo uwu. El 90% del mapa esta mapeado en 1/2 y es muy aburrido así :l todo es muy simple y casi la mayoria del ritmo es solamente moverse de izquierda a derecha y viceversa. Vi tu perfil y noté que eres player ctb, así que yo supongo que debes darte una idea de lo que es "divertido" para nosotros los players de ctb, pero esta diff Rain no era divertida, todo lo contrario, me parecio muy "sencilla" (me refiero por la forma de colocación de los sliders y circles) y aburrida :c.
Otra cosa es que el mapa es algo tranquilo y la mayoria de los saltos no van con el mapa, por el hecho de que sea una diff Rain no significa que vas a poner saltos de hyperdash por todos lados D: y por último, casi todos tus sliders sólo eran horizontales y eso no es bueno, trata de variar un poco.
Yo te recomendaría tal vez mirar algunos mapas Rains que hay en osu y darte una mejor idea de como hacerlas y eso.
Creo que fui un poco duro contigo ;ww; gomene. Perdón por todo soy noob en esto del mapeo D: Y quise hacer la diff de ctb porque justamente juego ctb uwu y quise hacer algo dificil y si supongo que exagere en muchas cosas >.< Tengo bastante que aprender

Puedo darte un re-check cuando hagas algunos cambios o3o
Suerte en el rank.

yikao wrote:

Taiko Oni
00:08:244 (24) - add finish
00:16:537 (54) - red -> blue
00:23:122 (79) - red -> blue
00:24:220 - add 1 red note
00:32:391 - add 1 red note
00:34:098 - red -> blue
00:37:025 (131) - blue -> red
00:41:537 (151) - can be deleted
00:43:610 (161) - red -> blue
00:43:854 (162) - red -> blue
00:44:586 (167) - red -> blue
00:44:830 (168) - red -> blue
00:45:074 - add 1 red note
00:47:147 (176) - red -> blue
01:03:854 (39) - red -> blue sounds better in d
01:04:098 (40) - red -> blue
01:04:342 (41) - red -> blue sounds better in d
01:05:318 (45) - red -> blue
01:06:903 (55) - can be deleted(not fit the rhythm)
01:08:488 (61) - blue -> red
01:08:976 (64) - red -> blue
01:09:220 (65) - can be deleted sound here
01:09:342 (66) - can be deleted sound here
01:10:196 - add 1 blue note
01:10:561 (71) - red -> blue
01:11:415 (75) - blue -> red
01:11:659 (76) - move to 01:11:903 -
01:12:635 - add 1 red note
01:13:854 (83) - to 01:14:586 (88) - red and blue swap
01:17:269 (97) - blue -> red
01:18:000 (99) - red -> blue
01:18:976 (104) - red -> blue
01:19:952 (107) - red -> blue
01:20:074 (108) - red -> blue sounds better kdk
01:21:903 (113) - red -> blue
01:22:391 (115) - blue -> red
01:23:366 (118) - blue -> red
01:23:732 - add 1 red note
01:25:196 (125) - can be deleted
01:25:439 (127) - blue -> red
01:25:561 (128) - red -> blue
01:27:269 (136) - blue -> red and move to 01:27:513 -
01:27:757 (137) - red -> blue
01:28:000 (138) - blue -> red
01:28:244 (139) - blue -> red
01:28:732 (141) - red -> blue
01:28:976 - add 1 red note
01:30:074 - add 1 blue note
01:30:683 (149) - red -> blue
01:30:927 (150) - blue -> red
01:31:903 (156) - red -> blue
01:32:025 (157) - can be deleted
01:32:147 (158) - add finish
01:32:391 (159) - move to 01:32:635 -
01:34:586 (169) - red -> blue
01:34:830 (170) - blue -> red
01:35:561 (172) - red -> blue
01:35:927 (174) - red -> blue
01:37:879 (183) - can be deleted
01:39:708 (191) - move to 01:39:586 - nope, but added a red note here 01:39:464
01:39:830 (192) - can be deleted ^
01:39:952 (193) - add finish ^
01:42:635 (206) - blue -> red
01:42:757 (207) - can be deleted
01:44:586 (216) - red -> blue
01:46:781 (3) - red -> blue
01:46:903 (4) - red -> blue
01:52:391 - add 1 red note
01:52:513 - add 1 red note
01:52:635 (26) - red -> blue
01:52:757 (27) - can be deleted denied
01:52:879 (28) - can be deleted ^
01:53:366 (30) - can be deleted ^
01:53:488 (31) - can be deleted ^
01:53:610 (32) - move to 01:53:732 - ^
01:53:854 (33) - can be deleted ^
01:56:049 (42) - red -> blue
01:56:293 (43) - blue -> red
01:58:244 - add 1 red note
01:59:342 (56) - red -> blue
01:59:707 (58) - move to 01:59:952 -
01:59:952 (59) - move to 02:00:196 -
02:00:439 (60) - can be deleted no, but changed to d
02:02:147 - add 1 red note
02:02:391 (69) - can be deleted same.. no, but changed to d
02:02:879 (71) - red -> blue
02:04:586 (77) - blue -> red
02:05:318 (80) - blue -> red
02:05:561 (81) - move to 02:05:805 - and red -> blue
02:10:683 (92) - red -> blue
02:11:415 (95) - blue -> red
02:11:659 (96) - red -> blue
02:12:513 - add 1 blue note
02:13:122 (101) - add finish
02:18:854 (125) - can be deleted for the moment no :c
02:24:586 - add 1 red note
02:24:708 - add 1 red note
02:26:293 (160) - red -> blue
02:28:244 (171) - red -> blue
02:28:732 (173) - blue -> red
02:34:098 - to 02:34:342 - and 02:59:464 - to 02:59:708 - can use 1/6 (dddk or kkkk)
02:37:879 - add 1 blue note
02:46:537 - add 1 red note
02:46:781 (60) - red -> blue
02:49:708 - add 1 blue note
Good song
For snare drum notes in the music I recommend using blue because its tone is higher.
Muzukashii is good enough I think, so I didn't mod it.

eLtigreXXx wrote:

mod request in Shinsei mapuu team queue

Difícil
00:07:269 (1,2,3,4,5) - x:64 y:184 Ok, pero más que eso trate de corregirlo o3o
00:01:659 - creo que aquí debería de haber una nota va con el ritmo No se que paso ahí se me olvido xD ya la agregue
00:01:171 (2) - el punto final del slider x:248 y:120 oka
00:08:732 (1) - as que este cubra bien a 00:09:464 (2) - así o parecido http://puu.sh/6GFSn.jpg listo o3o
00:10:439 (1) - puede ser igual que lo de arriba http://puu.sh/6GG4Y.jpg o mover el punto de al final a x328 y240 Nop, así esta bien como esta, bueno para mi xD
00:14:830 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/6GGdF.jpg 00:15:318 (3) x:84 y184 00:15:561 (4) - x40 y268 Oki
00:44:586 (8,9) - puedes Hacer la misma distancia de estos dos igual que estos dos 00:44:830 (9,1) - No e.e

son sugerencias buena suerte con el mapa

Dariano wrote:

Hola

[General]

En todos los mapas en español que he jugado, la dificiltad "Normal" la llaman "Medio", y no sé, pues en mi opinión para mantener la tradición podrías cambiarle el nombre. Revise los mapas en español y solo encontre Mediano >.> capaz te confundiste XD en la mayoría decía Normal ademas :3

Al parecer estas imágenes no están siendo usadas en el mapa, y están dentro de la carpeta de la canción:
- lyrics13.png
- lyrics16.png
- sb\lyrics9.png

En la carpeta además, solo una parte de las letras están dentro de la carpeta SB. Para arreglar ese desorden, entra todas esas imágenes dentro de la carpeta SB, y luego, entra al archivo .osb ubicado en la carpeta de la canción, y sustituye los nombres de las imágenes, de la forma:

SB/"nombre de la imagen"
Ejemplo:



Como puedes ver hay una llama SB/Lyrics1.png <--- Está bien
y la de más abajo se llama Lyrics10.png <--- Está mal
Deberia quedar SB/Lyrics10.png

Entra todas las imágenes excepto el fondo del mapa, en la carpeta SB y haz lo que te acabo de explicar.
Voy a hablar con Sensualdango porque no entendí nada XD


[Timing]

En todas las dificultades el offset es 440 excepto la "Normal" que tiene 462.

Kiai time

El kiai time se le pone normalmente en el coro del mapa, que es donde está la mejor parte de la canción, la que tiene más emoción.
El correcto para tu mapa sería:

Kiai1: Comienza en 00:58:976 (5) - y termina en 01:21:171 - .
Kiai2: Comienza en 01:24:342 - y termina en 01:46:537 - .
Kiai3: Comienza en 02:38:488 - y termina en 03:00:683 - . Ya lo corregí :v

[Difícil]

00:35:805 (1,1) - ¿Por qué 2 new combo? Con 1 basta, y además estos sliders se ven algo raros, te recomiendo que los intercambies de posición en el tiempo, o sea, el 1ero de los 2 ponlo de 2ndo, y el el 2ndo de 1ero. Oki :33 se me paso lo del NC y cambie la forma >_<
00:39:220 (4,5) - Ese salto es un poco exagerado, además esto es "Dificil/Hard", hazlo menos grande. No está bien así :c
00:41:171 (9,1) - Tambien algo exagerado, intenta ponerlo en x:64 y:40. Ok -3-
00:44:830 (9,1) - Lo mismo ^ Oka ewe
Ya no te diré cuales más, tú sabes cuales son, para esos saltos, usa el Distance snap spacing en x2.0 Lo tendré en cuenta ewe

[Normal]

00:32:657 (1) - Esto no está snappeado, te das cuenta porque el slider está fuera de los tick. Oka, se me paso XD


[Fácil]

01:25:074 (1) - Difícil de tocar, porque está en un tick rojo, y eso es más para hards e insane. Mueve ese slider a 01:25:318 - y terminalo en 01:26:293 - oki
Y agrega un círculo en 01:24:830 - . listo
01:45:805 (1) - Mueve eso a la marca blanca anterior, para que el espacio entre spinner-nota sea más grande, porque los noobies no pueden girar un spinner y clickear una nota asi de rápido. bueno XD
02:10:318 (1) - Mueve el spinner a la marca blanca anterior, haz que termine en 02:12:147 - y borra este slider 02:12:147 (1) - Nope D:


Bueno, espero que esto haya ayudado en algo. No me fije mucho en la apariencia del mapa, porque esos son toques finales, me concentré más en cosas generales.

Felicidades, buen mapa, tienen el ritmo perfecto, los circulos y sliders van muy bien con la canción. [b]Gracias por todo o3o/
[/b]

Raiku wrote:

Couple of playability issues thats all

NC = New Combo.

[General]

The end is missing the rest of the song, add the complete file in so it isn't cut short at the end. Do not know how to do >n<

[Difícil]

00:23:610 (10) - This should be moved up as pictured to fit in with the spacing of the rest of that combo (http://puu.sh/6VgSH.jpg). Ok xD

00:30:439 (1) - New combo here, has more impact (http://puu.sh/6VhHR.jpg). Ok, not bad :3

00:42:879 (5) - I feel this shouldn't repeat and the combo should start on the note that comes after, something like this (I added a little syncopation to fit his voice - http://puu.sh/6VhqF.jpg). no, that's good > __ <

00:51:171 (6) - NC splits the phrase up better. Do not think it's necessary

00:55:805 (1) - Stands nicely as a new combo (http://puu.sh/6VhDw.jpg).

01:39:545 (5) - Triplet needed. Copy how I did it, it is the solo after all so variation is welcome (http://puu.sh/6Vi0O.jpg). It is not too well

01:42:635 (1) - Slider felt so wrong so I shortened the end of it as shown in the screenshot (http://puu.sh/6Viet.jpg), I also added a note after it to start the new combo which I feel fits the song a lot better (http://puu.sh/6Vif9.jpg). Change that part 2 sliders, so I think is better XD

01:46:537 (3) - NC. Ok n.n

01:47:757 (1) - Much better alternative, again the slider feels strange and the repeat doesn't hit the rhythm. This is a better flowy alternative (http://puu.sh/6ViqW.jpg). Try to improve it >_<

02:09:952 (4) - NC =) (I LOVE the way u mapped the harmonica solo) Ok, thanks >w<

02:12:635 (3) - Raise this, it fits the descending tones then ascending up to the A major chord (http://puu.sh/6ViE2.jpg). Ok, I like owo

02:16:537 (1,3) - No new combo on 1. Start on 3 (slider). Ok :3

02:20:196 (1) - No new combo here. No, there okay n3n

02:33:854 (5) - Change to this, fits the guitar (http://puu.sh/6Vjdz.jpg). I do not hear any guitar sound there XD

02:35:317 (4) - NC! ok n.n

02:37:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - I might be insane but the timing sounds like 1ms off somewhere in that combo? Almost sounds like 3 is a little late to the beat. I think it's because the bass and drums are mixed in that part > _ <



Great map! Will star.

Hola, Aqui te voy a dejar mi mod

1. 00:41:415 (1) Trata de evitar que tus slidders se salgan del campo del map.
2. Te Recomiendo que pongas el circle size en 2
3. Y por ultimo que pongas Overall Difficulty en 2.

1. Luego de 00:30:439 (4) te recomiendo que pongas un break time.
2. 00:35:561 (4) Lo mismo que en Facil, te recomiendo que tengas cuidado con que tus circles y slidders se salgan del campo del map (mas que todo no es por darte mas trabajo, si no que algun BAT te puede dar complicaciones).
3. 01:08:244 (3) Lo mismo de arriba.
4. 02:49:709 (1) Lo mismo de arriba.
5. 03:00:684 (3) Recomiendo un break time.
6. Cambia el HP Drain Rate a 4
7. Por ultimo cambia el Overall Difficulty a 4.

1. 00:12:025 (6) Agrega un circle aqui, suena mejor.
2. 00:37:391 (6) Agrega un circle aqui.
3. 01:10:561 (3) Agrega un circle aqui.
4. 01:14:464 (4) Agrega un circle aqui.
5. 01:51:903 (10) Se encuentra fuera del campo.
6. 02:15:927 (9) Agrega un circle aqui.
7. 02:16:903 (13) Agrega un circle aqui.
8. 03:00:684 (5) Break time
9. El HP Drain Rate lo cambiaria a 7.

1. 00:13:610 (8) Ponle Clap.
2. 00:13:732 (9) Eliminalo.
3. 00:25:439 (47) Eliminalo.
4. 00:25:561 (47) Ponle Clap.
5. 00:25:805 (48) Quitale el Clap.
6. 00:26:293 (51) Ponle Clap.
7. 00:28:610 (59) Eliminalo.
8. 00:29:342 (62) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
9. 00:29:708 (64) Ponle Clap.
10. 00:29:830 (65) Eliminalo.
11. 00:29:952 (66) Quitale el Clap, pero dejale el finish.
12. 00:31:171 (68) Ponle Clap.
13. 00:40:196 (11) Agrega un Circle.
14. 00:43:732 (23) Eliminalo.
15. 00:44:830 (27) Agrega un circle aqui y ponle clap.
16. 00:45:074 (28) Eliminalo.
17. 00:52:635 (55) Ponle Clap.
18. 00:54:586 (62) Ponle Clap.
19. En el Offset 00:58:976 (1) te recomiendo que cambies el audio ''Soft'' a ''Normal'' y que despues en el Offset 01:21:171 (87) , lo devuelvas a ''Soft''.
20. 00:59:220 (2) Quitale el Clap.
21. 00:59:464 (3) Ponle Clap.
22. 01:08:000 (37) Quitale el Clap.
23. 01:08:244 (38) Ponle Clap.
24. 01:11:659 (51) Ponle Clap.
25. 01:11:903 (52) Quitale el Clap.
26. 01:21:903 (88) Ponle Clap.
27. 01:27:757 (13) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
28. 01:43:366 (20) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
29. 01:45:318 (26) Ponle Clap.
30. 01:58:000 (33) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
31. 01:58:244 (34) Quitale el Clap.
32. 01:58:488 (34) Ponle Clap.
33. 01:58:732 (35) Eliminalo.
34. 02:10:561 (77) Muevelo a 02:10:683 (77) y ponle Clap.
35. 02:18:732 (103) , Este Slidder acortalo a 02:18:732 (103)
36. 02:19:586 (104) Muevelo a 02:19:464 (104)
37. 02:21:903 (113) Ponle Clap.
38. 02:36:049 (169) Ponle Clap.
39. Nuevamente te recomiendo que en este offset 02:38:488 (177) cambies el audio de ''Soft'' a ''Normal'' y despues en el offset 03:00:683 (262) lo devuelvas al ''Soft''.
40. 02:51:659 (226) Ponle Clap.
41. 02:52:025 (228) Agrega un Circle aqui.

1. En Timing, cambia el Slider Velocity a 1,40, pero para hacer ese cambio tendras que ajustar el slider 02:07:269 (88) , para que se encaje bien con el Timing ya puesto por Hanjamon.
2. 00:02:391 (6) Quitale el Clap.
3. 00:02:879 (7) Ponle Clap.
4. 00:05:561 (15) Ponle Clap y Finish.
5. 00:05:805 (16) Ponle Clap.
6. 00:16:537 (54) Ponle Clap.
7. 00:17:757 (59) Quitale el Clap.
8. 00:18:000 (60) Ponle Clap.
9. 00:18:976 (64) Quitale el Clap.
10. 00:19:220 (65) Ponle Clap.
11. 00:22:391 (76) Ponle Clap.
12. 00:35:074 (125) Ponle Clap.
13. 00:35:318 (126) Quitale el Clap.
14. 00:35:805 (127) Quitale el Clap.
15. 00:36:049 (128) Ponle Clap.
16. 00:41:537 (151) Quitale el Clap.
17. 00:41:659 (152) Ponle Clap.
18. 00:51:659 (197) Ponle Clap.
19. 00:57:513 (15) Ponle Clap.
20. En este Offset 00:58:976 (20) , te recomiendo cambiar el audio de ''Soft'' a ''Normal'' y luego en el Offset 01:21:171 (112) devuelvelo a a ''Soft''.
21. 01:02:391 (32) Ponle Clap.
22. 01:04:098 (40) Ponle Clap.
23. 01:25:196 (125) Ponle Clap.
24. 01:25:318 (126) Ponle Clap.
25. 01:25:439 (127) Quitale Clap.
26. 01:25:561 (128) Ponle Clap.
27. 01:27:025 (135) Ponle Clap.
28. 01:27:269 (136) Quitale el Clap.
29. 01:44:464 (216) Ponle Clap.
30. 01:44:708 (218) Quitale el Clap.
31. 01:58:976 (53) Ponle Clap.
32. 01:59:219 (55) Quitale Clap.
33. 01:59:464 (57) Ponle Clap.
34. 02:09:952 (91) Ponle Clap.
35. 02:10:683 (92) Ponle Clap.
36. 02:21:781 (141) Agrega un circle aqui.
37. 02:26:659 (163) Ponle Clap.
38. 02:36:293 (12) Quitale el Clap.
39. En este Offset 02:38:488 (20) ponle el audio ''Normal'' y luego en 03:00:683 (119) vuelve a ''Soft''.
40. 02:46:415 (59) Ponle Clap.

1. Tu Storyboard, esta muy buen de acuerdo al timing.
2. Ya le hice un chequeo al BPM y al timing y esta perfecto, yo no le haria ningun cambio.
3. En general tu mapa esta muy bien echo, los diffs de taiko los encontre un poco desfasados, pero con esto espero que se arreglen.

Kibbleru wrote:

from our poro queue

[General]
Well some of your drain times are inconsistent, not sure why but i suggest you make them consistent

can only mod standard

[Dificil]
00:06:293 (10) - nc here? Oki, Not bad o3o
00:01:171 (2) - i recommend angle this up or some sort to flow better onto 00:01:903 (1) - Ok
00:05:074 (6,7,1,2) - stack? cuz why not I do not like is
00:09:708 (3,4,5) - why the slight curve here? Okey
00:11:171 (2,4) - (2) is at x427 and (4) is at x426, i recommend making them the same?
00:11:415 (3,5) - ^ What? XD if it is not well
00:13:610 (5) - i recommend you rotate it counterclockwise a bit (maybe like 20 degrees or so) to improve flow a bit Ok
00:32:635 (1,3,5) - these 3 are not level I did not understand what you meant
00:50:683 (5,6) - the flow here. Ok
01:33:854 (1,2) - ^ Ok
00:49:952 (2,6) - blanket.? No ._.
01:12:635 (6,1) - ^ Ok
00:53:854 (4,4) - stack? No
02:17:757 (2,6) - ^ No
00:59:952 (2,3) - blanket better No xD
01:17:269 (1,2) - ^ No -3-
01:34:830 (3,1) - ^ No
01:10:683 (3) - when you make sliders like this, try to have them blanket something, they look a bit weird alone ok, I'll get it
01:39:586 (5,6) - ctrl g for better flow ok
02:23:610 (9) - ^? No
02:34:098 (1) - ^ Ok
01:52:635 (1,2) - why not just ctrl hj one..? Ok :v
02:04:342 (2,4) - stack better No >-<
02:21:659 (4,5,6) - rhythm here could be done better with sliders Okay so xD
02:56:050 (9) - curve the second part Ok n.n

also add more NCs, keep combos below 10
and use more sliderss

[Normal]
00:02:391 (4,5) - blanket better? I think not
00:08:244 (3,5) - stack better It is so very wrong ._.
00:08:244 (3,5) - dont overlap. Ok
00:29:220 (1,2,3) - ^ Ok
look for the rest yourself
00:47:269 (6) - slider is ugly Yes D: change it
01:28:976 (1,2) - this jump is a bit high Ok nwn
01:40:439 (8) - don't reverse this 2 times, makes it confusing No d:
02:19:708 (4,1) - bad flow
02:49:221 (6,2) - stack ok o3ó
02:56:050 (4) - ctrl g

flow could use some work in this diff

[Facil]
00:34:098 (2,4) - move these to the same level? No
00:43:854 (2,4) - ^ No


bleh thats all, gl!

-[ SooHanZ ]- wrote:

Hola, Aqui te voy a dejar mi mod


Facil

1. 00:41:415 (1) Trata de evitar que tus slidders se salgan del campo del map. Ok :3
2. Te Recomiendo que pongas el circle size en 2No >:c
3. Y por ultimo que pongas Overall Difficulty en 2. ok

Normal

1. Luego de 00:30:439 (4) te recomiendo que pongas un break time. Listo xD se me había olvidado
2. 00:35:561 (4) Lo mismo que en Facil, te recomiendo que tengas cuidado con que tus circles y slidders se salgan del campo del map (mas que todo no es por darte mas trabajo, si no que algun BAT te puede dar complicaciones). Oki, no sabía eso lo tendré más en cuenta >-<
3. 01:08:244 (3) Lo mismo de arriba. Ok ^^
4. 02:49:709 (1) Lo mismo de arriba. Ok
5. 03:00:684 (3) Recomiendo un break time. Ok
6. Cambia el HP Drain Rate a 4 No >_>
7. Por ultimo cambia el Overall Difficulty a 4. no uwu

Dificil

1. 00:12:025 (6) Agrega un circle aqui, suena mejor. Ok ouo
2. 00:37:391 (6) Agrega un circle aqui. No hay nada ahí e.e
3. 01:10:561 (3) Agrega un circle aqui. Ok
4. 01:14:464 (4) Agrega un circle aqui. No hay nada ahí e.e
5. 01:51:903 (10) Se encuentra fuera del campo. Si ya lo corregí >_<
6. 02:15:927 (9) Agrega un circle aqui. Otra vez no hay nada ahí e.e
7. 02:16:903 (13) Agrega un circle aqui. Ahí si o3o
8. 03:00:684 (5) Break time No se porque lo pongo y no se guarda uwu
9. El HP Drain Rate lo cambiaria a 7. ok

-FireThunder-'s Taiko Muzukashii

1. 00:13:610 (8) Ponle Clap.
2. 00:13:732 (9) Eliminalo.
3. 00:25:439 (47) Eliminalo.
4. 00:25:561 (47) Ponle Clap.
5. 00:25:805 (48) Quitale el Clap.
6. 00:26:293 (51) Ponle Clap.
7. 00:28:610 (59) Eliminalo.
8. 00:29:342 (62) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
9. 00:29:708 (64) Ponle Clap.
10. 00:29:830 (65) Eliminalo.
11. 00:29:952 (66) Quitale el Clap, pero dejale el finish.
12. 00:31:171 (68) Ponle Clap.
13. 00:40:196 (11) Agrega un Circle.
14. 00:43:732 (23) Eliminalo.
15. 00:44:830 (27) Agrega un circle aqui y ponle clap.
16. 00:45:074 (28) Eliminalo.
17. 00:52:635 (55) Ponle Clap.
18. 00:54:586 (62) Ponle Clap.
19. En el Offset 00:58:976 (1) te recomiendo que cambies el audio ''Soft'' a ''Normal'' y que despues en el Offset 01:21:171 (87) , lo devuelvas a ''Soft''.
20. 00:59:220 (2) Quitale el Clap.
21. 00:59:464 (3) Ponle Clap.
22. 01:08:000 (37) Quitale el Clap.
23. 01:08:244 (38) Ponle Clap.
24. 01:11:659 (51) Ponle Clap.
25. 01:11:903 (52) Quitale el Clap.
26. 01:21:903 (88) Ponle Clap.
27. 01:27:757 (13) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
28. 01:43:366 (20) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
29. 01:45:318 (26) Ponle Clap.
30. 01:58:000 (33) Agrega un Circle aqui y ponle Clap.
31. 01:58:244 (34) Quitale el Clap.
32. 01:58:488 (34) Ponle Clap.
33. 01:58:732 (35) Eliminalo.
34. 02:10:561 (77) Muevelo a 02:10:683 (77) y ponle Clap.
35. 02:18:732 (103) , Este Slidder acortalo a 02:18:732 (103)
36. 02:19:586 (104) Muevelo a 02:19:464 (104)
37. 02:21:903 (113) Ponle Clap.
38. 02:36:049 (169) Ponle Clap.
39. Nuevamente te recomiendo que en este offset 02:38:488 (177) cambies el audio de ''Soft'' a ''Normal'' y despues en el offset 03:00:683 (262) lo devuelvas al ''Soft''.
40. 02:51:659 (226) Ponle Clap.
41. 02:52:025 (228) Agrega un Circle aqui.

Hanjamon's Taiko Oni

1. En Timing, cambia el Slider Velocity a 1,40, pero para hacer ese cambio tendras que ajustar el slider 02:07:269 (88) , para que se encaje bien con el Timing ya puesto por Hanjamon.
2. 00:02:391 (6) Quitale el Clap.
3. 00:02:879 (7) Ponle Clap.
4. 00:05:561 (15) Ponle Clap y Finish.
5. 00:05:805 (16) Ponle Clap.
6. 00:16:537 (54) Ponle Clap.
7. 00:17:757 (59) Quitale el Clap.
8. 00:18:000 (60) Ponle Clap.
9. 00:18:976 (64) Quitale el Clap.
10. 00:19:220 (65) Ponle Clap.
11. 00:22:391 (76) Ponle Clap.
12. 00:35:074 (125) Ponle Clap.
13. 00:35:318 (126) Quitale el Clap.
14. 00:35:805 (127) Quitale el Clap.
15. 00:36:049 (128) Ponle Clap.
16. 00:41:537 (151) Quitale el Clap.
17. 00:41:659 (152) Ponle Clap.
18. 00:51:659 (197) Ponle Clap.
19. 00:57:513 (15) Ponle Clap.
20. En este Offset 00:58:976 (20) , te recomiendo cambiar el audio de ''Soft'' a ''Normal'' y luego en el Offset 01:21:171 (112) devuelvelo a a ''Soft''.
21. 01:02:391 (32) Ponle Clap.
22. 01:04:098 (40) Ponle Clap.
23. 01:25:196 (125) Ponle Clap.
24. 01:25:318 (126) Ponle Clap.
25. 01:25:439 (127) Quitale Clap.
26. 01:25:561 (128) Ponle Clap.
27. 01:27:025 (135) Ponle Clap.
28. 01:27:269 (136) Quitale el Clap.
29. 01:44:464 (216) Ponle Clap.
30. 01:44:708 (218) Quitale el Clap.
31. 01:58:976 (53) Ponle Clap.
32. 01:59:219 (55) Quitale Clap.
33. 01:59:464 (57) Ponle Clap.
34. 02:09:952 (91) Ponle Clap.
35. 02:10:683 (92) Ponle Clap.
36. 02:21:781 (141) Agrega un circle aqui.
37. 02:26:659 (163) Ponle Clap.
38. 02:36:293 (12) Quitale el Clap.
39. En este Offset 02:38:488 (20) ponle el audio ''Normal'' y luego en 03:00:683 (119) vuelve a ''Soft''.
40. 02:46:415 (59) Ponle Clap.
41. Los mods de taiko se los dejare a los creadores >-<

General

1. Tu Storyboard, esta muy buen de acuerdo al timing.
2. Ya le hice un chequeo al BPM y al timing y esta perfecto, yo no le haria ningun cambio.
3. En general tu mapa esta muy bien echo, los diffs de taiko los encontre un poco desfasados, pero con esto espero que se arreglen.

Este es mi mod, espero que te haya servido :3

shankishiro wrote:

Hola , mod ( tenes todo el derecho de ignorar mis sugerencias , ya que son eso SUGERENCIAS , no soy muy bueno esto )

Easy:

00:18:488 (3) - sinceramente esta nota nose , como que no queda muy bien ahi no fluye bien , trata de moverla hacia abajo Oki :3

00:23:854 (1,3) - estas 2 notas nose , no queda bien imo , talvez asi? es solo porque hacer volver las notas hacia el comienzo del slider nada mas xD Bueno aunque hice otra cosa xD




00:32:635 (1) - remove nc --- 00:34:098 (1) - nc se siente mas imo Ok e.é

00:36:049 (4) - remove nc --- 00:38:000 (2) - nc lo mismo de arriva Ok -3-


01:27:269 (4,5) - no queda muy bien en una easy , asi talves? es una forma , pero hay varias busca la que mas te guste :p Lo tendré en cuenta




01:33:122 (2,3,4,5) - esta mal el spacing , y es medio aburrido el combo asi , trata de cambiarlo Oka :v

01:51:659 (4) - esta nota nose si te te coloco sola o que , no queda bien movela a el anterior tick blanco y en el siguiente en 01:52:147 - te recomiendo que pongas una nota , quedaria asi Bueno ewe



02:38:976 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - aburrido (? , trata de poner 1 slider al menos xD Vale :v

Not bad imo

Normal :

Te recomiendo fuertemente que el spacin lo cambies a 0,8 o 0,9 (tene en cuenta que si haces esto tenes que mover todas las notas) para hacerlo apreta alt y en donde dice "Beat snap divisor" saldra distance spacing

hp -1

00:15:561 (4) - movela a x:292 y:156 queda mas bonito Lo cambie de lugar ewe

00:34:098 (1) - remove nc --- 00:34:098 (1) - nc better imo Ok

00:59:464 (1) - remove nc No

01:25:074 (1) - remove nc No

01:49:220 (3) - *nazi * esta feo D: mejor asi ? Lo cambie xD algo parecido a lo tuyo :v





02:13:610 (1) - remove nc Nope

02:29:708 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - aburrido imo , algun slider de tick a tick capas? Naaa así esta bien

02:37:513 (1) - el clap drum del final removelo el tambor suena en el tick rojo anterior , sino acorta el slider hasta ese tick (no te recomiendo lo ultimo) Oka :v

02:45:562 (1) - remove el nc XD

02:49:709 (1,2) - esto es mas mio.. no recomiendo stackear en easy y normal , ya que son dificultades mas para nuevos , se supone.. wtf ._.

no te recomiendo mapear "esquivando" el spacing determinado al menos en normal y easy , pequeño tip xD



Hard:


00:19:708 (5,1) - este salto , un poco extremista no? move el 5 a x:240 y:184 Un poco de dificultad no le viene mal al mapa :3

01:10:561 (3) - este tres esta de mas creo , y el salto lo mismo de arriva un poco extremista No, yo también creía lo mismo hasta que escuche mejor la canción

02:28:488 (10,1) - ^ Lo mismo de arriba :v

no pienso decirte de los nc porque tenes un quilombo barbaro en la hard , y tampoco profundice mucho ya que como te habia dicho no se hacer hard

Gracias por todo :3



Suerte y espero haber sido de ayuda

1. Muy bueno
2. Me encantó la animación de la letra :3

SPOILER

Cosmolade wrote:

Hola o3o)/
Aqui te dejo el mod que me pediste (*ﾉ´□`)ﾉ
(las coordenadas de cada nota son opcionales, tu decides si ponerlas exactas o no~)

[General]

1. Muy bueno
2. Me encantó la animación de la letra :3

[Fácil]
Buen uso de patrones owo

- 00:06:293 (5) -Esa nota podrías ponera un poco más al centro :3 (x:256 y:176) Oki nwn
- 00:21:415 (1) -Demasiado cerca del slider, separa esa nota un poquis (x:336 y:300) Oka ewe
- 00:31:171 (3) -¿Por qué tan recto el slider? xD Hácele una forma bonita, que siga el ritmo de la música (en forma de rayo no quedaría mal(?) Te haré caso .3. con lo del rayito XD
- 01:06:781 (1) -Ese slider debería terminar en el tick blanco D: Es verdad D: se me escapo T_T
- 01:18:488 (5) -El slider no debería salirse de la cuadrícula :c Vale
- 01:24:342 -Añade una nota~ Dale
- 01:45:318 (1) -El spinner debería comenzar aquí > 01:45:805 Vale -3-
- 02:34:098 (1) -Muévelo a > 02:33:854 - quítale la reversa, y añade una nota aquí > 02:34:586 -(me suena mejor :3) oka :v


[Normal]
Me parece que el CS está mal, debería ser 3 o3o
Ten sumo cuidado con las notas en 1/4, es preferible siempre empezar a mapear un normal con 1/2 aunque quede easy, para luego agregarle notas xD

- 00:00:440 (1) -No hagas tan puntiagudas las notas D: curva un poco el slider :3 No los puse para variar ~w~
- 00:08:732 (4) -^ ^
- 00:14:098 (3) -^ ^
- 00:16:049 (1) -^ ^
- 00:32:635 (1) -^ ^
- 00:53:122 (1,2,3,4) -Mal timming. Puedes reemplazar el mini slider por un círculo, y empezar el pequeño stream en el tick rojo > 00:53:366 asdasasd oka XD
- 00:58:000 (1) -Puntiagudo xD Ok -3-
- 01:12:635 (5,6,7,8) -Mal timming denuevo D: > 01:13:122 (7) -Conviértelo en un pequeño slider que termine en el tick rojo, y pon una nota aquí > 01:13:610 -(suena mejor) ok :v
- 02:52:147 (5,6,7,8) -^Same
- 01:27:025 (5) -Elimina la reversa, y pon una nota aquí > 01:28:244 oka :v
- 01:28:976 (1) -No va al ritmo, el slider debería comenzar en el tick blanco > 01:29:220 -y quítale la reversa. ok
- 01:32:879 (2) -Debe comenzar en el tick blanco~ y > 01:35:561 -ahí añade una nota :3 dale :v
- 01:35:805 (3) -Debe comenzar en el tick blanco owo bueno
- 01:39:220 (8) -Acota un poco el slider, de forma que termine en el tick blanco
- 01:43:854 (1,2,3,4) - ¿Qué tal esto? Me gusto o3ó

SPOILER

- 02:12:147 (1) -Puntiagudo~ Lo dejo así
- 02:15:561 (5) -^ Lo dejo así
- 02:37:513 (1) -^ Lo dejo así


[Difícil]
Hm... no soy experta en "difíciles", pero que más dá :3

- 01:10:439 (2,3,4) -Es un pequeño stream, por lo cual "no debes separarlos" xD Ya los junte >-<
- 01:32:147 (3) -Puntiagudo~ Lo dejo así no está mal para variar un poco e.é
- 01:52:635 (1,2) -Esa forma no se ve bien :c Yo creo que si XD
- 02:15:805 (8) -NC Oki n.n

Y pues, yo no puedo modear Taiko xD ni tampoco ctb porque no mapeo frutas (aunque lo juegue xD) :3 No importa con las de Standar basta :3

¡Mucha suerte con el mapa! ٩( ᐛ )و

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue

[General]
* The Kai time at 01:24:342 isn't necessary... usually it's used for the chorus, or after the bass drops in a song. Ok
[Difícil]
00:15:927 - needs a note here for consistency, since the rhythm matches 00:11:903 (5,6,1) - Ok
00:35:805 (1) - Move lower so it isn't attached to 00:34:830 (4,5) - Ok
00:19:830 - ^ Same suggestion as above, it sound a bit awkward here. Ok
00:23:732 - ^ Ok
00:27:635 - ^ No D:
00:58:976 (5) - Don't put this in the middle, it'll only mess up the DS consistency. You could've just made a star formation with all the notes 00:58:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - (like 02:37:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) ok :v
00:59:952 (2,4) - Move more apart. ok XD
01:27:025 (8) - NC ok
01:32:147 (3) - Add finish on the head. o: ok
01:47:757 (1) - ^ ok
01:59:464 (7) - NC ok
02:20:805 - Needs a note here this rhythm cycle matches the one before with notes 02:16:781 (4,5,1) - . no
02:28:610 - ^ ok :v

[Normal]
00:04:342 (6) - NC ok
00:12:147 (8) - ^ Instead of 00:13:122 (1) - , because this object lands on the big white tick mark (which emphasizes a new rhythm cycle) No, I think so better listen
00:19:952 (7) - ^ Instead of 00:21:415 (1) - ^
00:23:854 (4) - ^ ^
00:53:122 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't do this, it looks confusing enough as it is and players will mistake it as a stream. ok :3
Consider making this simpler rhythm instead.

01:23:366 (1) - Add finish on the tail at 01:24:342. ok n.n
01:32:147 (1) - Add finish on the head. ok :v
01:39:220 (6) - Sounds really off, consider using this rhythm instead: ok XD
And add the NC too.
01:47:757 (1) - Add finish on the head. ok .w.
02:38:489 (2) - Should be NC instead of 02:38:977 (1) - not, so okay
02:52:148 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Too difficult to read, please remap this part. No, some difficulty will not affect anyone XD

[Fácil]
00:04:830 (4) - NC ok
00:47:269 (6) - ^ ok
01:02:879 (6) - ^ ok, not bad d_d
01:11:171 (5) - ^ ok :v
01:24:342 (1) - Add finish ok
01:39:952 (1) - ^ On the head. ok
01:47:757 (1) - ^ On the head. ok
01:57:025 (4) - NC ok
02:09:220 (2) - Add finish on both head and tail. ok
02:20:927 (1) - Tail doesn't end at 02:21:903 ok XD
02:33:854 (1) - Tail doesn't end at 02:34:342 or 02:34:098. Make sure the hits end on either white or red tick marks, to keep the rhythm simple in this (easy?) diff. ok e.é
02:38:976 (2) - NC, since it's the new object in Kai time. ok
02:50:683 (4) - NC ok

Hope this helps.

toybot wrote:

hello, mod request Thanks for modd >W<

[General]
Well actually, just remember to put a clap on all objects that land on the upbeat. The upbeat are on the white lines of 2 and 4.

If a slider lands on one of these lines, you have to double click on that exact part of the slider to be able to put hitsounds on it.

[Facil]
00:08:244 (2) - put a clap on the tail ok
00:19:952 (5) - make this NC instead of 00:21:415 (1) -, to continue the pattern ok
00:27:269 (1,2,1) - remove NC from the first (1), and add NC to the (2). After that, it might be better to remove NC from the next (1) also No, that's fine
00:29:220 (1) - and speaking of this note, put a finish on the last beat of the slider ok d.d
00:37:025 (4,1) - put claps on the head of both sliders ok XD
00:54:586 (1) - finish on last beat also ok
00:55:561 (2) - you should shorten this to a 1/2 slider, because thats when an actual beat is. it could look like this: ok XD

SPOILER

put a finish on the tail of the slider if you do this.

01:19:952 (1) - put a finish on the last beat of this slider ok :v
01:21:903 (1) - move this spinner to 01:21:415 - , keeping the same time the spinner ends No, I think if I do it will make it very difficult
01:26:781 (4) - NC this ok
02:10:439 (1) - remove this spinner, too fast for beginners to comprehend NOOOOOOO XD
02:33:854 (1,1) - just extend this slider by 1/2 beat, and remove the circle. This is the only 1/2 distance i've seen i believe in this diff ok
02:33:854 (1) - once you've done that suggestion above, put a finish on the tail of the slider ok
02:37:513 (1) - remove NC ok :v

[Normal]
00:08:732 (4) - NC ok
00:12:147 (5) - add NC to this, then remove NC from the object after it No D:
00:54:098 (3) - remove this note, its confusing and does not fit into the music. instead, you can add a circle here: 00:54:342 - No, If you go with the music
01:12:635 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - this combo should probably be arranged. (8,1,2,3) do not look neat inside it, since its just stacked. how about replace (1,2,3) with a reverse slider? ok :33
01:39:464 (7) - this should be in distance with (6).. and make it reverse too ok >.<
01:40:439 (8) - make this slider look better, like this: Ready!

02:09:220 (1) - remove NC? ok
02:54:099 (1) - put a finish on the head? ok n.n
03:02:635 (1) - make this spinner as long as the one in Facil I don't understand :v

[Dificil]
00:33:854 - add a note? No XD
01:10:439 (2,3,4) - this stream is too spaced out and ruins the consistency. make the spacing smaller? ok :3
01:18:244 (5) - make this into a 1/2 slider no :L
01:21:171 (5) - put this on the center y line ok XD
01:52:635 (1,2,3,4) - these 4 sliders create the wrong beat. it should be 3/4 beats, like this: no, this is perfect e.e

02:20:927 (3) - this should be NC'd, instead of the (1) previous to it ok XD
02:33:610 (5) - this sounds awkward there, remove? ok :v
02:44:343 (9) - NC ok
02:54:099 (4) - ^ ok
03:02:635 (1) - same thing about the spinner what?

Good luck!
(

• I can't mod ctb well, as i found out

. lol)

Erina wrote:

From my mod for voice queue!

Nice map, good song too! I'm learning spanish at school and I love how I can understand some of this song now It's good! I love this song >w<

Hmm, I guess I'll mod in both English and Spanish to practice my Spanish haha

[General]
I don't think this is really a problem, but the song ends a bit too abruptly. I would recommend that you fade out the song in the end instead of having it suddenly end like that. If you need someone to do that, I can do it for you! (no pienso que este sea un problema, pero la cancion termina demasiado pronto. Yo supiero que deba dejar poco a poco de oírse en vez de termina tan abruptamente. Si necesitas alguien para hacerlo, yo puedo hacerlo.) La verdad yo he tratado de arreglar eso, pero no puedo ya que el timing queda mal por alguna razón ):

[Dificil]

ok nvm modding in spanish is too hard

00:08:732 (1,2) - Consider moving the second note to (x:192 y:136) no thanks
01:17:757 (3) - Consider moving this note to (x:400 y:136) to create a blanket with the previous sliderok, not bad :3
01:27:025 (1) - I don't like the sliders like these with a repeat, they don't seem to fit the music too well. Plus, try changing the design of your long sliders too - they all look the same I'll see what I can do
01:27:025 (1) - Remove NC no
01:31:415 (1) - Remove NC ok
01:32:879 (4) - Add NC ok
01:33:854 (1) - Remove NC ok
01:49:952 (1) - Add NC (I usually don't like combo lengths over 10) ok D:
01:52:635 (1,2) - I think this looks better: http://puu.sh/7A8l4.jpg ok, nice idea :3
01:52:391 (8,2) - Overlap these two notes exactly, I think you're off by a littleok
02:17:757 (2,6) - Consider overlapping these two notes ok o3o
02:52:879 (4,6) - Overlap these notes exactly ok :3

[Normal]
00:07:269 (1,2,3) - Consider moving these three notes up by ~15 pixels so it looks better with the next slider no, I like and this
00:23:854 (4) - Add NC ok
00:53:366 (2,3,1) - This spacing is too hard to read for a normal difficulty, use distance snap!ok XD sorry
01:39:220 (6) - Repeat one more time, fits with rhythm better ok n.n
01:58:488 (2,3) - Consider blanketing these two sliders ok :3
02:48:720 (5) - Object isn't snapped! That rare

[Facil]
00:27:757 (2,3) - Use distance snap here Ok
02:13:122 (2) - Add NC ok
02:20:927 (1) - Consider ctrl+g for better flow (then move the note after it to be properly distance snapped again) ok
02:28:732 (4) - Add NC ok

Nice map! Contact me later about what you're going to sing! Ok >w<

Raisa12 wrote:

Hello~
Manuxz Sixx speaks Spanish as leave aside the English xd
[Easy]
00:54:586 - intenta esto (? creo que es mejor ... Oka

01:19:952 - ^ No, ahí me gusta así uwu
01:39:952 (1) - mover este slider x:312 y:4 y despues mover el nudillo del final del slider a x:248 y:128 así cubrirá mejor Oki ouo

SPOILER

02:16:537 (5) - Distance snap error ok
00:56:537 (3) - ^ ok
02:37:513 (4) - ^ No. Ahí está bien o.o
[Normal]

Revisar Aimod D: (ctrl + shift + a ) Hablare con Kurodragon ;-;
02:48:732 (5) - object snapped ubique lo bien Ok d_d
01:40:439 (7) - distance snap error Ok
01:59:464 (3) - ^ oka o3o

[Hard]
00:03:854 - NC Oki :3
00:18:732 (2) - Ctrl + g ? Not bad :3
00:59:952 (2) - porque no utilizar este mismo slider para esto 01:00:439 (3) ? No, así como está es mejor :3
01:45:805 (4) - agregar finish (? No? XD
01:46:049 (5) - agregar clap oki

Buen map
Espero que sirva de ayuda el algo ;_; Todo sirve, muchas gracias !!!
Bye ~

NaxelCL wrote:

Bien sabes que necesitas el icono de taiko y CTB verdad(? y luego el bubbled y ranked:c?

1. 00:36:049 (5) - X: 96
2. 00:36:293 (6) - X: 256
3. 00:36:537 (7) - X: 152
4. 00:36:781 (8) - X: 48
5. 00:37:025 (9) - X: 360
6. 00:37:269 (10) - X: 464
7. 00:37:513 (1) - X: 152

1. 00:47:147 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 328
2. 00:47:269 (1) - Muevele al X: 400

1. 00:58:000 (1) - X: 400
2. 00:58:244 (2) - X: 88
3. 00:58:976 (3) - X: 400

1. 02:58:488 (3) - X: 480
2. 02:58:732 (4) - X: 160

Drafura wrote:

[Rain]
Unrankable issues:
00:54:586 (1) - modifica el slider para que se ponen bien los beats en los timing ticks. Ok
02:08:732 (1) - ^ Ok
02:34:098 (1) - ^ Ok

Suggestions:
Usas demasiado el hyperdash, y con gran spacing. A ver que se puede hacer para rectificar eso.
00:11:903 (3) - Muevele al X: 128 Bueno o3o
00:15:927 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 288 ^
00:16:049 (1) - muevele a X: 160 ^
00:23:732 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 288 ^
00:23:854 (3) - muevele a X: 416 ^
00:36:049 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Al principio le falta un poco de movemiento, y al final hay demasiado movemientos, intenta con eso: Me gusto mucho o3ó

1. 00:36:049 (5) - X: 96 ^
2. 00:36:293 (6) - X: 256 ^
3. 00:36:537 (7) - X: 152 ^
4. 00:36:781 (8) - X: 48 ^
5. 00:37:025 (9) - X: 360 ^
6. 00:37:269 (10) - X: 464 ^
7. 00:37:513 (1) - X: 152 ^

00:38:976 (3,4) - Ese hyper no sigue bien la cancion. mejor no ponerlo. Oki
00:41:293 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 96 ^
00:47:269 (1,2) - Ese hyper no sigue bien la cancion. intenta con eso:

1. 00:47:147 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 328 Oki
2. 00:47:269 (1) - Muevele al X: 400 ^

00:48:488 (3) - Muevele al X: 144 (el hyper esta muy lejo) ^
00:49:952 (1,2,3) - El hyper no sigue bien la cancion, intenta con eso:
00:49:952 (1) - X: 240 Ok
00:50:196 (2) - X: 144 ^
00:50:439 (3) - X: 336^
00:50:683 (4,1) - Ese hyper no sigue bien la cancion. mejor no ponerlo. ^
00:51:903 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:54:098 (5,6) - Ese hyper no sigue bien la cancion, intenta con eso:
00:54:098 (5) - X: 96 Ok
00:54:342 (6) - X: 256 ^
00:54:586 (1) - X: 416 ^
00:58:000 (1,2,3) - Demasiado grande spacing aqui, intenta con eso:

1. 00:58:000 (1) - X: 400 Ok
2. 00:58:244 (2) - X: 88 ^
3. 00:58:976 (3) - X: 400 ^

01:02:269 - Pon un circulo aqui (para cambiar un poco la timeline) ok
01:02:757 - ^ (haga terminar el slider antes) Ok
01:02:879 - ^ No ):
01:04:830 (1,2) - No utiliza tan grandes hypers Ok >.<
01:05:561 (4,5) - ^ Ok
01:14:342 (8,9) - ^ ^
01:18:732 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:33:610 (4) - Muevele al X: 224 (Queda mejor con la cancion) Ok o3o
01:35:805 - Podrias poner beats aqui. Ok
01:36:049 - ^ Ok owo
01:41:903 (6,7) - No utiliza tan grandes hypers Ok
01:44:098 (3,4,1) - ^ ok
01:44:586 (1,2) - Ese hyper deberia estar entre 01:45:805 (2,3) - esos circulos Ok xD
desde 01:47:757 - hasta 02:07:269 - deberia poner tu movemientos en el instrumento que se oye el mas (y la timeline en la bateria) Bueno lo intentaré TuT
02:16:781 (10,1) - No utiliza tan grandes hypers Ok
02:24:708 - Pon un circulo aqui Ok
02:27:512 (10,1,2,3) - No utiliza tan grandes hypers Ok
02:35:074 - Poner une circulo aqui con un clap suena bien. ^
02:37:879 - Podrias poner un circulo aqui. Oki o:
02:42:879 (3) - Mas movemiento ? Ok
02:43:611 (5) - ^ ^
02:50:074 - Podrias poner un circulo aqui y quitar el hyper Oki
02:58:488 (3,4) - Los hypers de esa parte no suenan muy bien con la cancion, intenta con eso:

1. 02:58:488 (3) - X: 480 Ok
2. 02:58:732 (4) - X: 160 ^

02:59:952 (4) - Ctrl-H y X: 376 Ok

English tldr; Trying to add some triplets to vary the timeline and nerfing hyper distance (almost all of them are using near max hyper range, wich is quite annoying to play in a so relaxing song). Also corrected snapping issues with 3 sliders. Gracias por todo

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue

3 ~ 4 minutes = 3 diffs

Rain

00:01:171 (3,1) - Erm, try to move these more apart please, so they don't look attached to each other. Plus, you want to keep the spacing between your objects consistent, yes? Ok

00:14:098 (6,7) - This is cheap, and it's not a good overlap, because 00:14:098 (6) - completely covers 00:14:830 (7) - . Please re-position these objects. Ok

00:16:049 (11,1) - Another bad overlap.ok XD

00:18:732 (6) - Looks really...weird. Here's something you can try:

*you'll need to move 00:19:220 (7) - further away from the slider as well

00:30:439 (5) - Looks really messy being placed under the previous triplets 00:29:220 (1,2,3) - . I'd say just stack it under 00:29:708 (4) - 's tail. No, put it below xD

00:47:269 (1,2) - ....remap these objects please. Same reason as 00:14:098 (6,7) - ok D_D

00:54:098 (5,6) - ? ok i like it

Completes the stretched hexagon formation.

00:58:244 (2) - CTRL + G and re-position, it looks funny how the reverse end is more closer to the previous object then the head itself. no, I like as well is

01:10:683 (5) - Make it a 1/2 slider, so its tail can hit the strong lyrics "Po" in Pone on 01:10:927. ok x'D

01:24:098 (2) - CTRL + G No xD

02:09:220 (2) - Forgot to add a finish on the head. o: you have reason
02:34:586 (2) - ^ ^

02:17:025 (7,1) - Can't you tell this is a bad overlap? ok XD

02:59:952 (4) - Forgot to add a finish on the head.ok uwu

Dificil

00:35:074 (5) - Turn it into a 1/2 slider, so that it's tail will hit the lyrics "Sol" heard on 00:35:318. ok o3o i liike it :3

01:02:391 (6) - Stack on 01:02:879 (1) - to create this cool sprouting flow: Good o3o


01:08:488 (6) - Turn it into a full 1/1 slider so that it will run smoothly through the vocals long hold on the "de" I did not understand very well, sorry u.u

02:09:220 (2) - Forgot to add a finish here. ok
02:34:586 (2) - ^ ok

02:38:488 (6) - NC instead of 02:38:976 (1) - , because it's the first object to appear on Kai time. ok

02:38:732 - Sounds empty, it needs a note here to complete the lyrics Padre, where "dre" is heard here. I'll remember but for now no uwu

02:59:952 (4) - Forgot to add a finish on the head. ok

03:00:684 (5) - NC? ok

Normal

00:29:708 (2) - Needs a finish ok
00:55:074 (2) - ^ On the head. ok ewe

01:04:830 (5,6,7,8) - Might be a little too hard to read for standard to beginner players. Try simplifying it to this rhythm: ok owo


01:12:635 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ Same issue as above. Try this rhythm? ok

Where the long slider at 01:12:391 will follow very well with the vocals long hold on the "stoy" in estoy. ok ewe

01:20:440 (2) - Forgot to add finish on the head. Ok >n<

01:31:415 (3) - and 01:31:903 (5) - Please remove these notes. Again, try to refrain from making the rhythm look to complicated. Ok u.u

01:39:220 (6) - Needs a finish on the last tail at 01:39:983 ok

01:40:439 (7) - Move to 01:40:683, then extend it so it ends at 01:43:122. That way, it will be consistently spaced between the previous and next note (being 1 1/2 beats apart from both sides). ok o:

01:59:464 (3,1) - Too far apart, check your DS. No o.o

02:09:220 (2) - Forgot to add finish on the head. ok
02:34:586 (2) - ^ ok

02:44:343 (5,6,7,1) - Same suggestion as 01:04:830 (5,6,7,8) - ok

02:52:392 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Same suggestion as 01:12:635 (5,6,7,8,9) - ok

02:59:953 (2) - Forgot to add finish on the head.

Looks like you still need to work on the flow more in your Hard/Insane diffs Atm, they look really messy, unorganized and there are bad overlaps found as well.

Normal diff looks alright.

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod

neonat wrote:

Normal

00:19:952 (7) - I think if you rotate it slightly, and move it further away from 00:18:976 (6) it would look and play nicer as you reduce the angle between them ok owo

SPOILER

00:43:854 (5) - rotate slightly again and shift so it looks more spread out equally to both 00:43:366 (4) and 00:42:879 (3) ok

SPOILER

01:28:244 (6) - NC here instead? Up to you No o-o
01:40:683 (7) - the repeat is at a very weird spot, maybe change the rhythm at this portion No, I like staying with guitar :3
02:05:318 (4,5) - having 02:06:293 (5) not so close would look nicer and the angle to move to the next beat would not be too acute, and easier to flow ok >.<

Dificil

00:01:903 (3) - wouldn't recommend a jump here, doesn't seem like it needed one ok XD
00:44:342 (2,1) - you could cover 00:44:342 (2) better with the end of 00:45:318 (1) ok owo
00:47:147 - add a note to go with the drums ok qwq
01:18:488 - add a note for the vocals ok
02:29:952 (4,5) - swap positions so circle before slider ok

SPOILER

02:46:294 (1) - add a softer sounding Normal hitsound finish on the start of the slider Ok o:
02:52:391 (2,7) - stack nicely? ok XD
02:58:000 - I think you should map to this vocal too ok
02:59:220 - ^ ok

I preferred the structure of Normal better though, anyways good luck (the audio is cut so abruptly though, so weird lol)

Kurodragon wrote:

Fue divertido esto de osu pero no me deja seguir con mis estudios, en especial cuando tengo exaemes y esas cosas, haci que teme la decicion de retirarme. Como fuiste de los pocos que conoci te doy mis 10 estrellas.

Por favor consiguete a alguien que siga con el mapa, puedes cambiarle el nombre a la diff y quitarme todos los creditos

Me retiro

Posdata, si un moderador esta viendo esto, puede eliminar mi cuenta, no hay problema

Neku okazaki wrote:

Que triste historia la de kurodragon TwT, si manu, te ayudare con el mapa TwT... Buen nombre el de kurodragon, lo usare de ahora en adelante en otros juegos xD

CLSW wrote:

[Rain]
* Overall, boring patterns are quite often. Better make them more jumpy and fun. Here's some bored :
00:03:122 (4,5) Ok
00:09:952 (5,6,7) No
00:12:879 (1,2,3) No
00:19:220 (7,8,9) No
00:24:586 (4,5) Ok
00:42:635 (3,4,5) Ok
00:51:171 (1,2) No
01:03:610 (4,5) Ok
01:08:000 (3,4,5) Ok
01:15:562 (2,3) before fix, make same x position for these sliders ok
01:35:805 (2,3,4) Ok
01:48:732 (3,4) No
01:56:537 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) No
02:29:464 (2,3,4) No
02:38:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6) No
And you should fix unbalanced NCs like 00:16:781 (1) this one.. No

00:00:440 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544448 try this Ok o3o
00:09:952 (5) - increase this jump. x: 320 would be nice. ok XD
00:16:781 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544452 try this ok
00:38:244 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544463 ^ ok
00:59:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544470 ^ ok o:
01:06:537 (7) - x : 64. ok
01:14:342 (8,9) - add hyperdash. No xD
01:36:049 (4,5) - seems out from rhythm. delete 01:36:049 (4) and make 01:36:293 (5) this slider starts from here. Ok XD
01:38:244 (8) - x : 476. ok
01:40:683 (2) - x : 480. ok
02:00:927 (1,2,3) - more jumpy, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544482 this. Also fix the sliders' shape as same. ok
02:15:317 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544484 try this ok
02:16:903 (6) - x : 160. ok
02:17:756 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544485 try this ok
02:21:659 (2) - x : 80 for jumpy. ok
02:24:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544487 try this ok
02:26:049 (6,7) - add hyperdash. Maybe x : 432 would be good. If you wanna fix, set 02:26:537 (8) - as 208 and 02:26:781 (1) - as 432.
02:31:415 (1) - x : 136. no
02:32:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ctrl+h. ok
02:45:562 (6) - x : 280. ok
02:46:293 (7) - x : 37. ok

Good luck to your improvement!

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

1. 00:03:854 (12) - hay un sonido fuerte y debe ir un k
2. 00:04:342 (13) - sigele el ritmo y ahí va un d
3. 00:06:293 (19) - aparte que es un sonido fuerte es como el fin del inicio del tema por eso debe ir un D
4. 00:08:244 (24) - sonido fuerte y con eco K
5. 00:29:342 (103) - un k porque los kdk o al revés, no son muy comunes en las muzukashii
6. 00:29:708 (105) - k, 00:29:952 (106) - d, 00:30:439 (107) - K
7. 00:35:561 (12) - d, 00:37:513 (20) - k
8. 00:54:098 (80) - k, 00:55:074 (85) - k, 00:55:318 (86) - d, 00:55:805 (87) - K
9. 00:58:976 (5) - D sonido fuerte :3
10. 01:02:879 (20) - k, 01:04:830 (27) - k, 01:06:781 (34) - K eco
11. 01:19:952 (82,83,84) - primero que nada ya te explique que estas combinaciones no son muy comunes en las muzu, y le iria bien unos kkk
12. 01:21:171 (87) - D
13. 01:24:342 (92) - K
14. 01:28:000 (101) - ?? no suena nada borralo y si insistes en ponerlo al menos muevelo al 01:28:244 (101) -
15. 01:31:171 (108) - ?? no hay nada ahi borralo
16. 01:37:269 (125) - ^
17. 01:46:781 (155,156,157) - kkk ya te explique porque
18. 01:47:757 (160) - k
19. 01:48:244 (161,162,163,164,165) - quedaria mejor asi? kkddk
20. 02:22:879 (42) - k
21. 02:30:683 (70) - k
22. 02:34:098 (82,83,84) - kkk ya te explique porque
23. 02:46:293 (34) - D
24. 02:52:147 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - sinceramente no se que tratastes de hacer pero esta horrible xD, lo mas facil es esto aver si lo consideras sabiendo que es una diff muzu: 02:52:269 (57) - muevelo al 02:52:391 (57), - 02:52:757 (60) - borralo, 02:53:000 (60,61) - muevelo al 02:52:879 (60,61) - , 02:53:610 (63,64) - lo mueves al 02:53:488 (63,64) - , 02:53:854 (65) - agregas un d y 02:54:098 (66) - lo cambias por un k
25. 02:59:464 (83,84,85) - kkk ya sabes porque

1. Primero que nada en el song setup no se que quisistes hacer porque no le hacen efecto al Taiko excepto el Overall Difficulty que es para la velocidad del Spin:
   
   puedes dejarlo asi pero te recomiendo que uses siempre default
2. Igual aqui
   creo que le iria mejor un 1.60 de Slider Velocity
   El Slider Tick Rate dejalo siempre en default osea en 1, piensa en los DT players -.- siempre se paran quejando de eso xD... bueno ahora si procedo al mapa
3. que buen mapa pero lo que no me gusta son estos 02:34:098 (5,6,7,8) - osea no digo que no vayan, pero deberían ser todos del mismo color, en este caso es un sonido de bateria asi que deberian ser kkkk
4. 02:59:464 (118,119,120,121) - ^

-Sh1n1- wrote:

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

[Hanjamon's Taiko Oni]

1. Primero que nada en el song setup no se que quisistes hacer porque no le hacen efecto al Taiko excepto el Overall Difficulty que es para la velocidad del Spin:
   
   puedes dejarlo asi pero te recomiendo que uses siempre default arreglado
2. Igual aqui
   creo que le iria mejor un 1.60 de Slider Velocity no veo la necesidad de ponerle un 1.60 de sv, le quita un poco la gracia a la taiko diff y hace que parezca mas una diff de std convertida a taiko
   El Slider Tick Rate dejalo siempre en default osea en 1, piensa en los DT players -.- siempre se paran quejando de eso xD... bueno ahora si procedo al mapa Si lo pongo en 1 aumenta los hits que hay que darle al slider asi que seria mas molesto aun para los DT players, de momento lo dejare como esta
3. que buen mapa pero lo que no me gusta son estos 02:34:098 (5,6,7,8) - osea no digo que no vayan, pero deberían ser todos del mismo color, en este caso es un sonido de bateria asi que deberian ser kkkk nope
4. 02:59:464 (118,119,120,121) - ^ ^

Tanto escuchar la canción ya me gusto :3 suerte Manuxz Star (y)

Gracias por el mod Shini :33 Y También por la estrella >w<

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

1. 00:03:854 (12) - hay un sonido fuerte y debe ir un k
2. 00:04:342 (13) - sigele el ritmo y ahí va un d
3. 00:06:293 (19) - aparte que es un sonido fuerte es como el fin del inicio del tema por eso debe ir un D
4. 00:08:244 (24) - sonido fuerte y con eco K
5. 00:29:342 (103) - un k porque los kdk o al revés, no son muy comunes en las muzukashii
6. 00:29:708 (105) - k, 00:29:952 (106) - d, 00:30:439 (107) - K
7. 00:35:561 (12) - d, 00:37:513 (20) - k
8. 00:54:098 (80) - k, 00:55:074 (85) - k, 00:55:318 (86) - d, 00:55:805 (87) - K
9. 00:58:976 (5) - D sonido fuerte :3
10. 01:02:879 (20) - k, 01:04:830 (27) - k, 01:06:781 (34) - K eco
11. 01:19:952 (82,83,84) - primero que nada ya te explique que estas combinaciones no son muy comunes en las muzu, y le iria bien unos kkk
12. 01:21:171 (87) - D
13. 01:24:342 (92) - K
14. 01:28:000 (101) - ?? no suena nada borralo y si insistes en ponerlo al menos muevelo al 01:28:244 (101) -
15. 01:31:171 (108) - ?? no hay nada ahi borralo
16. 01:37:269 (125) - ^
17. 01:46:781 (155,156,157) - kkk ya te explique porque
18. 01:47:757 (160) - k
19. 01:48:244 (161,162,163,164,165) - quedaria mejor asi? kkddk
20. 02:22:879 (42) - k
21. 02:30:683 (70) - k
22. 02:34:098 (82,83,84) - kkk ya te explique porque
23. 02:46:293 (34) - D
24. 02:52:147 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - sinceramente no se que tratastes de hacer pero esta horrible xD, lo mas facil es esto aver si lo consideras sabiendo que es una diff muzu: 02:52:269 (57) - muevelo al 02:52:391 (57), - 02:52:757 (60) - borralo, 02:53:000 (60,61) - muevelo al 02:52:879 (60,61) - , 02:53:610 (63,64) - lo mueves al 02:53:488 (63,64) - , 02:53:854 (65) - agregas un d y 02:54:098 (66) - lo cambias por un k
25. 02:59:464 (83,84,85) - kkk ya sabes porque

lZenxl wrote:

Mod from Queue

The Mp3 cuts off very abruptly, I'm surprised that you haven't fixed it yet:
Here's the Mp3 that I fixed using audacity, I added a fade out at the back, the offset of the .mp3 might be incorrect though : http://puu.sh/8DFvH.mp3

Turn off widescreen support for all difficulties, the BG doesn't stretch out for the whole screen, it creates weird black bars at the side


[Hanjamon's Oni]
00:04:342 (14) - k > d | The intro is just creating a foundation kat rhythm, I don't think you need to vary the kat rhythm here with a kat, it feels out of place in my opinion no change
00:11:659 (37) - d > k | I think it is suitable to have a kat here before the pattern 00:11:903 (38,39,40) - as the kat rhythm here will sound a bit late
00:26:293 (96,97) - Swap | The high-pitched drum falls on 96 instead of 97 thus I suggest to swap it
00:33:610 (123) - k > K | The note here is the start of a new section of the song I suggest to emphasize it so that the player will know that the section started no change
00:41:659 (156,157) - Swap | The high-pitched drum falls on 157, I suggest to swap it so that it fits better
01:32:025 (162,163) - dk > (Remove) K | You might want to emphasize this note here as it has a cymbal in the music
01:33:610 (170) - d > k | The high-pitched drum appears in the music, you might want to have this a kat
01:48:976 (11) - k > d | I don't think 4 kats in a row here is needed, you might want to vary it a bit
01:53:854 (35) - Move Right by 1/2 ? | The drum falls on 01:54:098 - You might want to map it in
01:54:342 (36) - k > d | Vary this a bit, the amount of kats in a row is pretty high
02:03:854 (79,80) - Swap | The high-pitched drum falls on 79
02:17:512 (126,128) - Swap | ^
02:20:683 (143,144,146) - dkk > k(Remove)(Remove) | The kat rhythm here sounds really messed up, I suggest to got for a more rigid rhythm no change for the moment
02:30:195 (192,194) - Swap | The high-pitch drum falls on 192
02:41:903 (37) - d > k | High-pitched drum here
02:54:586 (98) - ^

lZenxl wrote:

The kat rhythm here is pretty inconsistent, I can't seem to feel any rigid kat rhythm here

Suggestions

00:03:122 (9) move to 00:04:098 ?
00:04:830 (14) k instead of d, it sounds like for the other k :c
00:05:074 (15) del or move to 00:06:049 ? and change 00:06:293 (19) to K
00:08:244 (24) a D could be better here, it sounds really higher atm.
Well now if you really want to follow the instrumental, there’s a lot of changes to do, but they’r pretty easy, just like place a k whenever it sounds like the others part you placed k earlier.
For example : - 00:08:732 – 00:11:659
00:08:732 (25,26) swap colors
00:10:196 (31) d instead of k
00:10:683 (33) k instead of d
I know it feels repetitive, and since this is a muzu, I would’ve del some notes to keep something cool to play, like (if you keep the changes I suggested there) deleting 00:09:220 (27) – 00:10:439 (32) – 00:11:415 (36) -. Well if you do this you’ll need to do a lot of changes earlier and after to keep the diff consistency ;_;
Now I’m gonna suggest changes that follow the way you mapped this and that follow also a bit the way I would’ve mapped this, like my previous suggestion. Mostly about the instrumental.
00:13:610 (45) change to k ?
00:17:513 (59) ^
00:18:488 (62) ^
00:29:708 – 00:30:439 ok here you have to chose if you follow the vocal or the instrumental, something that would fit more the instrumental would be like : - 00:29:708 (105) change to d, - 00:30:196 add k and - 00:30:439 (107) change to d and add finisher.
Now the vocal : - 00:29:708 (105,106) swap colors and – 00:30:439 (107) change to d and add finisher.
00:32:635 (1) change to d ?
00:34:098 – 00:37:513 again you’r not really following the song there imo x_x … something like that would’ve fited more the song to me : (- 00:34:098 – 00:37:513 -)
_____________________
Well now I’m gonna continue the normal mod and just point when there’s a huge amount of notes that not follows the song to me. Try to change it if you did the changes I suggested before :c (or just pm for more explanation :c)
00:42:879 (39,40) swap colors ?
00:43:854 (41) change to k ?
00:46:537 (51) change to d ?
00:47:269 (54) maybe add finisher ? and maybe also delete the previous note ? sounds loud atm
00:48:244 (57) change to d ?
00:51:659 – 00:54:342 refer to 00:34:098 – 00:37:513
00:54:586 (82,83,84) kkk as you did earlier fits still better the song imo
00:55:074 – 00:55:804 refer to 00:29:708 – 00:30:439
00:58:000 (1,3) change to d and add d at 00:58:366 ? there’s a ¼ rhythm here
00:59:464 – 01:02:879 refer to 00:34:098 – 00:37:513
01:03:366 (21) change to k ?
01:05:318 (28) change to k, - 01:05:805 (30) change to d and then – 01:06:293 (32) change to k ?
01:07:269 – 01:10:196 refer to 00:34:098 – 00:37:513
01:11:171 – 01:14:586 ^
01:15:561 (68,70,71) swap colors ?
01:17:513 (75) change to d, - 01:18:732 (79) move to 01:18:488 and then 01:18:976 (80) change to k ?
01:19:708 add d ?
01:20:439 – 01:21:171 refer to 00:29:708 – 00:30:439
Alright it should be enough x_x I guess you noticed that if you applie my suggestions, it always sounds the same more or less, it’s the best way to map this song to me ,_, idk what else I can suggest sorry…
If you applied the changes, you have to do the same thing on the rest of the song! If you did and you need some help, as I said earlier just pm me.

Nofool wrote:

Hi, mod req from Manuxz
I modded only the Muzu atm sorry ;_; I'll edit/repost for the Oni mod as soon as i can (prolly no before 1-2 days tho)

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Hanjamon's Oni]
00:04:342 (14) - very obvious downbeat so I suggest changing to d no change
00:05:561 (17,18,19,20,21) - ookay this might be unrankable as well. try k ddk D this is not unrankable, no change
01:46:537 (2) - remove finish fixed

good luck for rank~

Nofool wrote:

Here's the Oni mod ;_; really sorry for the delay... (no kudosu since you already gave me one on my first post x_x)
I hope it'll be usefull'

[Oni]

00:08:732 (27) change to k ? it sounds like the others moments you placed k :c
00:10:927 (34) d would fit better the song imo ;_; but you did this too much times so I can’t really suggest to change this one and not all the others, as you prefer. I would’ve removed the next d at 00:10:196 to keep something cool to play also. no change
00:13:610 (45) change to k ? and see how it sounds if you also remove 00:13:122 (43) and change 00:12:879 (42) to d, just as I suggested below. I won’t point these moments now, it’s up to your choice é_è.
00:17:513 (60) change to K ? fits more the instrumental imo ,_, and the way you placed the others k ofc. no change
00:19:464 (68) ^ ^
00:27:635 (101) ^ ^
00:29:220 (108,109) ^, or maybe only (108) to k sounds better for me with ddk here
00:32:635 (119) change to d ? no change
00:36:781 (135,136) swap colors ?
00:38:488 (142) change to d ?
Following my first suggestion, something like that would’ve fited more the song imo : -00:43:976 (167,168) swap colors, and then also 00:44:342 (169,171) swap colors ? => kkd ddd instead of kdk kdk. no change for the moment, is not bad idea

00:46:537 (178,179) swap colors ?
00:47:757 (185) change to k ?
Mmmm to be honest the rest of this long “pattern” sounds good, you did well, but there’s maybe one problem, -00:48:488 (189,190,191,192) there you should’ve done dkdk instead of kdkd to keep consistency with the way you placed the others k, at least what you did still sounds well ‘cause the instrumental is a bit different atm, just wanted to point it but no need changes I guess. i know >.<, hmm i will add a finish at k notes, K d K d

00:54:708 (6) change to k ? same in 00:29:220 (108,109)
00:58:366 add k ?

Ok, ‘bout the kiai I think all these ¼ patterns are good, maybe not all perfect x_x but kiai is cooler to play this way so np. I think you just broke all your d and k’s usuall placements on the ½ beats lol. I would’ve suggested waaay to much changes to keep consitstency with the previous part on the map :c so I really suggest you to do some changes ‘bout that (k/d’s ½ rhythm on kiai).
Well the rest of the map is pretty much the same, I just won’t suggest everytime the same changes. If you already applied a lot of all my suggestions, you have to do the same on the rest of the map. I don’t think so there’s that much things to change at least. gl
This is one of my first diffs.. this is the reason of why is a bit weird >.<
(ho and you can PM me if you did the changes and need some help with the rest of your diff)

Serena- wrote:

From my modding queue~

[General]
I'm not exactly sure about this, Facil diff's name should be Easy even it means easy in spanish. same with Dificil. not sure, ask a bat about this I'll check :s
The SB is not that visible in the ctb mode. how about moving the lyrics to the top?(only for the Rain diff) I'll try D:

[Rain]
01:06:049 (6) - how about x:128 Ok o3o
01:37:513 (5) - a bit edgy jump and it doesn't fit here imo+NC ^
02:08:000 (3) - x:256? ^
02:10:074 (1) - this is unrankable. the spinner has to start at 02:10:074 (pretty sure its unrankable) I moved to the next tick '-'


i really like this diff, so not much problems imo, fits my taste, so have some stars