shankishiro wrote:

Hola , mod ( tenes todo el derecho de ignorar mis sugerencias , ya que son eso SUGERENCIAS , no soy muy bueno esto )

Easy:

00:18:488 (3) - sinceramente esta nota nose , como que no queda muy bien ahi no fluye bien , trata de moverla hacia abajo Oki :3

00:23:854 (1,3) - estas 2 notas nose , no queda bien imo , talvez asi? es solo porque hacer volver las notas hacia el comienzo del slider nada mas xD Bueno aunque hice otra cosa xD




00:32:635 (1) - remove nc --- 00:34:098 (1) - nc se siente mas imo Ok e.é

00:36:049 (4) - remove nc --- 00:38:000 (2) - nc lo mismo de arriva Ok -3-


01:27:269 (4,5) - no queda muy bien en una easy , asi talves? es una forma , pero hay varias busca la que mas te guste :p Lo tendré en cuenta




01:33:122 (2,3,4,5) - esta mal el spacing , y es medio aburrido el combo asi , trata de cambiarlo Oka :v

01:51:659 (4) - esta nota nose si te te coloco sola o que , no queda bien movela a el anterior tick blanco y en el siguiente en 01:52:147 - te recomiendo que pongas una nota , quedaria asi Bueno ewe



02:38:976 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - aburrido (? , trata de poner 1 slider al menos xD Vale :v

Not bad imo

Normal :

Te recomiendo fuertemente que el spacin lo cambies a 0,8 o 0,9 (tene en cuenta que si haces esto tenes que mover todas las notas) para hacerlo apreta alt y en donde dice "Beat snap divisor" saldra distance spacing

hp -1

00:15:561 (4) - movela a x:292 y:156 queda mas bonito Lo cambie de lugar ewe

00:34:098 (1) - remove nc --- 00:34:098 (1) - nc better imo Ok

00:59:464 (1) - remove nc No

01:25:074 (1) - remove nc No

01:49:220 (3) - *nazi * esta feo D: mejor asi ? Lo cambie xD algo parecido a lo tuyo :v





02:13:610 (1) - remove nc Nope

02:29:708 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - aburrido imo , algun slider de tick a tick capas? Naaa así esta bien

02:37:513 (1) - el clap drum del final removelo el tambor suena en el tick rojo anterior , sino acorta el slider hasta ese tick (no te recomiendo lo ultimo) Oka :v

02:45:562 (1) - remove el nc XD

02:49:709 (1,2) - esto es mas mio.. no recomiendo stackear en easy y normal , ya que son dificultades mas para nuevos , se supone.. wtf ._.

no te recomiendo mapear "esquivando" el spacing determinado al menos en normal y easy , pequeño tip xD



Hard:


00:19:708 (5,1) - este salto , un poco extremista no? move el 5 a x:240 y:184 Un poco de dificultad no le viene mal al mapa :3

01:10:561 (3) - este tres esta de mas creo , y el salto lo mismo de arriva un poco extremista No, yo también creía lo mismo hasta que escuche mejor la canción

02:28:488 (10,1) - ^ Lo mismo de arriba :v

no pienso decirte de los nc porque tenes un quilombo barbaro en la hard , y tampoco profundice mucho ya que como te habia dicho no se hacer hard

Gracias por todo :3



Suerte y espero haber sido de ayuda

1. Muy bueno
2. Me encantó la animación de la letra :3

SPOILER

Cosmolade wrote:

Hola o3o)/
Aqui te dejo el mod que me pediste (*ﾉ´□`)ﾉ
(las coordenadas de cada nota son opcionales, tu decides si ponerlas exactas o no~)

[General]

1. Muy bueno
2. Me encantó la animación de la letra :3

[Fácil]
Buen uso de patrones owo

- 00:06:293 (5) -Esa nota podrías ponera un poco más al centro :3 (x:256 y:176) Oki nwn
- 00:21:415 (1) -Demasiado cerca del slider, separa esa nota un poquis (x:336 y:300) Oka ewe
- 00:31:171 (3) -¿Por qué tan recto el slider? xD Hácele una forma bonita, que siga el ritmo de la música (en forma de rayo no quedaría mal(?) Te haré caso .3. con lo del rayito XD
- 01:06:781 (1) -Ese slider debería terminar en el tick blanco D: Es verdad D: se me escapo T_T
- 01:18:488 (5) -El slider no debería salirse de la cuadrícula :c Vale
- 01:24:342 -Añade una nota~ Dale
- 01:45:318 (1) -El spinner debería comenzar aquí > 01:45:805 Vale -3-
- 02:34:098 (1) -Muévelo a > 02:33:854 - quítale la reversa, y añade una nota aquí > 02:34:586 -(me suena mejor :3) oka :v


[Normal]
Me parece que el CS está mal, debería ser 3 o3o
Ten sumo cuidado con las notas en 1/4, es preferible siempre empezar a mapear un normal con 1/2 aunque quede easy, para luego agregarle notas xD

- 00:00:440 (1) -No hagas tan puntiagudas las notas D: curva un poco el slider :3 No los puse para variar ~w~
- 00:08:732 (4) -^ ^
- 00:14:098 (3) -^ ^
- 00:16:049 (1) -^ ^
- 00:32:635 (1) -^ ^
- 00:53:122 (1,2,3,4) -Mal timming. Puedes reemplazar el mini slider por un círculo, y empezar el pequeño stream en el tick rojo > 00:53:366 asdasasd oka XD
- 00:58:000 (1) -Puntiagudo xD Ok -3-
- 01:12:635 (5,6,7,8) -Mal timming denuevo D: > 01:13:122 (7) -Conviértelo en un pequeño slider que termine en el tick rojo, y pon una nota aquí > 01:13:610 -(suena mejor) ok :v
- 02:52:147 (5,6,7,8) -^Same
- 01:27:025 (5) -Elimina la reversa, y pon una nota aquí > 01:28:244 oka :v
- 01:28:976 (1) -No va al ritmo, el slider debería comenzar en el tick blanco > 01:29:220 -y quítale la reversa. ok
- 01:32:879 (2) -Debe comenzar en el tick blanco~ y > 01:35:561 -ahí añade una nota :3 dale :v
- 01:35:805 (3) -Debe comenzar en el tick blanco owo bueno
- 01:39:220 (8) -Acota un poco el slider, de forma que termine en el tick blanco
- 01:43:854 (1,2,3,4) - ¿Qué tal esto? Me gusto o3ó

SPOILER

- 02:12:147 (1) -Puntiagudo~ Lo dejo así
- 02:15:561 (5) -^ Lo dejo así
- 02:37:513 (1) -^ Lo dejo así


[Difícil]
Hm... no soy experta en "difíciles", pero que más dá :3

- 01:10:439 (2,3,4) -Es un pequeño stream, por lo cual "no debes separarlos" xD Ya los junte >-<
- 01:32:147 (3) -Puntiagudo~ Lo dejo así no está mal para variar un poco e.é
- 01:52:635 (1,2) -Esa forma no se ve bien :c Yo creo que si XD
- 02:15:805 (8) -NC Oki n.n

Y pues, yo no puedo modear Taiko xD ni tampoco ctb porque no mapeo frutas (aunque lo juegue xD) :3 No importa con las de Standar basta :3

¡Mucha suerte con el mapa! ٩( ᐛ )و

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue

[General]
* The Kai time at 01:24:342 isn't necessary... usually it's used for the chorus, or after the bass drops in a song. Ok
[Difícil]
00:15:927 - needs a note here for consistency, since the rhythm matches 00:11:903 (5,6,1) - Ok
00:35:805 (1) - Move lower so it isn't attached to 00:34:830 (4,5) - Ok
00:19:830 - ^ Same suggestion as above, it sound a bit awkward here. Ok
00:23:732 - ^ Ok
00:27:635 - ^ No D:
00:58:976 (5) - Don't put this in the middle, it'll only mess up the DS consistency. You could've just made a star formation with all the notes 00:58:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - (like 02:37:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) ok :v
00:59:952 (2,4) - Move more apart. ok XD
01:27:025 (8) - NC ok
01:32:147 (3) - Add finish on the head. o: ok
01:47:757 (1) - ^ ok
01:59:464 (7) - NC ok
02:20:805 - Needs a note here this rhythm cycle matches the one before with notes 02:16:781 (4,5,1) - . no
02:28:610 - ^ ok :v

[Normal]
00:04:342 (6) - NC ok
00:12:147 (8) - ^ Instead of 00:13:122 (1) - , because this object lands on the big white tick mark (which emphasizes a new rhythm cycle) No, I think so better listen
00:19:952 (7) - ^ Instead of 00:21:415 (1) - ^
00:23:854 (4) - ^ ^
00:53:122 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't do this, it looks confusing enough as it is and players will mistake it as a stream. ok :3
Consider making this simpler rhythm instead.

01:23:366 (1) - Add finish on the tail at 01:24:342. ok n.n
01:32:147 (1) - Add finish on the head. ok :v
01:39:220 (6) - Sounds really off, consider using this rhythm instead: ok XD
And add the NC too.
01:47:757 (1) - Add finish on the head. ok .w.
02:38:489 (2) - Should be NC instead of 02:38:977 (1) - not, so okay
02:52:148 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Too difficult to read, please remap this part. No, some difficulty will not affect anyone XD

[Fácil]
00:04:830 (4) - NC ok
00:47:269 (6) - ^ ok
01:02:879 (6) - ^ ok, not bad d_d
01:11:171 (5) - ^ ok :v
01:24:342 (1) - Add finish ok
01:39:952 (1) - ^ On the head. ok
01:47:757 (1) - ^ On the head. ok
01:57:025 (4) - NC ok
02:09:220 (2) - Add finish on both head and tail. ok
02:20:927 (1) - Tail doesn't end at 02:21:903 ok XD
02:33:854 (1) - Tail doesn't end at 02:34:342 or 02:34:098. Make sure the hits end on either white or red tick marks, to keep the rhythm simple in this (easy?) diff. ok e.é
02:38:976 (2) - NC, since it's the new object in Kai time. ok
02:50:683 (4) - NC ok

Hope this helps.

toybot wrote:

hello, mod request Thanks for modd >W<

[General]
Well actually, just remember to put a clap on all objects that land on the upbeat. The upbeat are on the white lines of 2 and 4.

If a slider lands on one of these lines, you have to double click on that exact part of the slider to be able to put hitsounds on it.

[Facil]
00:08:244 (2) - put a clap on the tail ok
00:19:952 (5) - make this NC instead of 00:21:415 (1) -, to continue the pattern ok
00:27:269 (1,2,1) - remove NC from the first (1), and add NC to the (2). After that, it might be better to remove NC from the next (1) also No, that's fine
00:29:220 (1) - and speaking of this note, put a finish on the last beat of the slider ok d.d
00:37:025 (4,1) - put claps on the head of both sliders ok XD
00:54:586 (1) - finish on last beat also ok
00:55:561 (2) - you should shorten this to a 1/2 slider, because thats when an actual beat is. it could look like this: ok XD

SPOILER

put a finish on the tail of the slider if you do this.

01:19:952 (1) - put a finish on the last beat of this slider ok :v
01:21:903 (1) - move this spinner to 01:21:415 - , keeping the same time the spinner ends No, I think if I do it will make it very difficult
01:26:781 (4) - NC this ok
02:10:439 (1) - remove this spinner, too fast for beginners to comprehend NOOOOOOO XD
02:33:854 (1,1) - just extend this slider by 1/2 beat, and remove the circle. This is the only 1/2 distance i've seen i believe in this diff ok
02:33:854 (1) - once you've done that suggestion above, put a finish on the tail of the slider ok
02:37:513 (1) - remove NC ok :v

[Normal]
00:08:732 (4) - NC ok
00:12:147 (5) - add NC to this, then remove NC from the object after it No D:
00:54:098 (3) - remove this note, its confusing and does not fit into the music. instead, you can add a circle here: 00:54:342 - No, If you go with the music
01:12:635 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - this combo should probably be arranged. (8,1,2,3) do not look neat inside it, since its just stacked. how about replace (1,2,3) with a reverse slider? ok :33
01:39:464 (7) - this should be in distance with (6).. and make it reverse too ok >.<
01:40:439 (8) - make this slider look better, like this: Ready!

02:09:220 (1) - remove NC? ok
02:54:099 (1) - put a finish on the head? ok n.n
03:02:635 (1) - make this spinner as long as the one in Facil I don't understand :v

[Dificil]
00:33:854 - add a note? No XD
01:10:439 (2,3,4) - this stream is too spaced out and ruins the consistency. make the spacing smaller? ok :3
01:18:244 (5) - make this into a 1/2 slider no :L
01:21:171 (5) - put this on the center y line ok XD
01:52:635 (1,2,3,4) - these 4 sliders create the wrong beat. it should be 3/4 beats, like this: no, this is perfect e.e

02:20:927 (3) - this should be NC'd, instead of the (1) previous to it ok XD
02:33:610 (5) - this sounds awkward there, remove? ok :v
02:44:343 (9) - NC ok
02:54:099 (4) - ^ ok
03:02:635 (1) - same thing about the spinner what?

Good luck!
(

• I can't mod ctb well, as i found out

. lol)

Erina wrote:

From my mod for voice queue!

Nice map, good song too! I'm learning spanish at school and I love how I can understand some of this song now It's good! I love this song >w<

Hmm, I guess I'll mod in both English and Spanish to practice my Spanish haha

[General]
I don't think this is really a problem, but the song ends a bit too abruptly. I would recommend that you fade out the song in the end instead of having it suddenly end like that. If you need someone to do that, I can do it for you! (no pienso que este sea un problema, pero la cancion termina demasiado pronto. Yo supiero que deba dejar poco a poco de oírse en vez de termina tan abruptamente. Si necesitas alguien para hacerlo, yo puedo hacerlo.) La verdad yo he tratado de arreglar eso, pero no puedo ya que el timing queda mal por alguna razón ):

[Dificil]

ok nvm modding in spanish is too hard

00:08:732 (1,2) - Consider moving the second note to (x:192 y:136) no thanks
01:17:757 (3) - Consider moving this note to (x:400 y:136) to create a blanket with the previous sliderok, not bad :3
01:27:025 (1) - I don't like the sliders like these with a repeat, they don't seem to fit the music too well. Plus, try changing the design of your long sliders too - they all look the same I'll see what I can do
01:27:025 (1) - Remove NC no
01:31:415 (1) - Remove NC ok
01:32:879 (4) - Add NC ok
01:33:854 (1) - Remove NC ok
01:49:952 (1) - Add NC (I usually don't like combo lengths over 10) ok D:
01:52:635 (1,2) - I think this looks better: http://puu.sh/7A8l4.jpg ok, nice idea :3
01:52:391 (8,2) - Overlap these two notes exactly, I think you're off by a littleok
02:17:757 (2,6) - Consider overlapping these two notes ok o3o
02:52:879 (4,6) - Overlap these notes exactly ok :3

[Normal]
00:07:269 (1,2,3) - Consider moving these three notes up by ~15 pixels so it looks better with the next slider no, I like and this
00:23:854 (4) - Add NC ok
00:53:366 (2,3,1) - This spacing is too hard to read for a normal difficulty, use distance snap!ok XD sorry
01:39:220 (6) - Repeat one more time, fits with rhythm better ok n.n
01:58:488 (2,3) - Consider blanketing these two sliders ok :3
02:48:720 (5) - Object isn't snapped! That rare

[Facil]
00:27:757 (2,3) - Use distance snap here Ok
02:13:122 (2) - Add NC ok
02:20:927 (1) - Consider ctrl+g for better flow (then move the note after it to be properly distance snapped again) ok
02:28:732 (4) - Add NC ok

Nice map! Contact me later about what you're going to sing! Ok >w<

Raisa12 wrote:

Hello~
Manuxz Sixx speaks Spanish as leave aside the English xd
[Easy]
00:54:586 - intenta esto (? creo que es mejor ... Oka

01:19:952 - ^ No, ahí me gusta así uwu
01:39:952 (1) - mover este slider x:312 y:4 y despues mover el nudillo del final del slider a x:248 y:128 así cubrirá mejor Oki ouo

SPOILER

02:16:537 (5) - Distance snap error ok
00:56:537 (3) - ^ ok
02:37:513 (4) - ^ No. Ahí está bien o.o
[Normal]

Revisar Aimod D: (ctrl + shift + a ) Hablare con Kurodragon ;-;
02:48:732 (5) - object snapped ubique lo bien Ok d_d
01:40:439 (7) - distance snap error Ok
01:59:464 (3) - ^ oka o3o

[Hard]
00:03:854 - NC Oki :3
00:18:732 (2) - Ctrl + g ? Not bad :3
00:59:952 (2) - porque no utilizar este mismo slider para esto 01:00:439 (3) ? No, así como está es mejor :3
01:45:805 (4) - agregar finish (? No? XD
01:46:049 (5) - agregar clap oki

Buen map
Espero que sirva de ayuda el algo ;_; Todo sirve, muchas gracias !!!
Bye ~

NaxelCL wrote:

Bien sabes que necesitas el icono de taiko y CTB verdad(? y luego el bubbled y ranked:c?

1. 00:36:049 (5) - X: 96
2. 00:36:293 (6) - X: 256
3. 00:36:537 (7) - X: 152
4. 00:36:781 (8) - X: 48
5. 00:37:025 (9) - X: 360
6. 00:37:269 (10) - X: 464
7. 00:37:513 (1) - X: 152

1. 00:47:147 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 328
2. 00:47:269 (1) - Muevele al X: 400

1. 00:58:000 (1) - X: 400
2. 00:58:244 (2) - X: 88
3. 00:58:976 (3) - X: 400

1. 02:58:488 (3) - X: 480
2. 02:58:732 (4) - X: 160

Drafura wrote:

[Rain]
Unrankable issues:
00:54:586 (1) - modifica el slider para que se ponen bien los beats en los timing ticks. Ok
02:08:732 (1) - ^ Ok
02:34:098 (1) - ^ Ok

Suggestions:
Usas demasiado el hyperdash, y con gran spacing. A ver que se puede hacer para rectificar eso.
00:11:903 (3) - Muevele al X: 128 Bueno o3o
00:15:927 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 288 ^
00:16:049 (1) - muevele a X: 160 ^
00:23:732 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 288 ^
00:23:854 (3) - muevele a X: 416 ^
00:36:049 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Al principio le falta un poco de movemiento, y al final hay demasiado movemientos, intenta con eso: Me gusto mucho o3ó

1. 00:36:049 (5) - X: 96 ^
2. 00:36:293 (6) - X: 256 ^
3. 00:36:537 (7) - X: 152 ^
4. 00:36:781 (8) - X: 48 ^
5. 00:37:025 (9) - X: 360 ^
6. 00:37:269 (10) - X: 464 ^
7. 00:37:513 (1) - X: 152 ^

00:38:976 (3,4) - Ese hyper no sigue bien la cancion. mejor no ponerlo. Oki
00:41:293 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 96 ^
00:47:269 (1,2) - Ese hyper no sigue bien la cancion. intenta con eso:

1. 00:47:147 - Pon un circulo aqui con X: 328 Oki
2. 00:47:269 (1) - Muevele al X: 400 ^

00:48:488 (3) - Muevele al X: 144 (el hyper esta muy lejo) ^
00:49:952 (1,2,3) - El hyper no sigue bien la cancion, intenta con eso:
00:49:952 (1) - X: 240 Ok
00:50:196 (2) - X: 144 ^
00:50:439 (3) - X: 336^
00:50:683 (4,1) - Ese hyper no sigue bien la cancion. mejor no ponerlo. ^
00:51:903 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:54:098 (5,6) - Ese hyper no sigue bien la cancion, intenta con eso:
00:54:098 (5) - X: 96 Ok
00:54:342 (6) - X: 256 ^
00:54:586 (1) - X: 416 ^
00:58:000 (1,2,3) - Demasiado grande spacing aqui, intenta con eso:

1. 00:58:000 (1) - X: 400 Ok
2. 00:58:244 (2) - X: 88 ^
3. 00:58:976 (3) - X: 400 ^

01:02:269 - Pon un circulo aqui (para cambiar un poco la timeline) ok
01:02:757 - ^ (haga terminar el slider antes) Ok
01:02:879 - ^ No ):
01:04:830 (1,2) - No utiliza tan grandes hypers Ok >.<
01:05:561 (4,5) - ^ Ok
01:14:342 (8,9) - ^ ^
01:18:732 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:33:610 (4) - Muevele al X: 224 (Queda mejor con la cancion) Ok o3o
01:35:805 - Podrias poner beats aqui. Ok
01:36:049 - ^ Ok owo
01:41:903 (6,7) - No utiliza tan grandes hypers Ok
01:44:098 (3,4,1) - ^ ok
01:44:586 (1,2) - Ese hyper deberia estar entre 01:45:805 (2,3) - esos circulos Ok xD
desde 01:47:757 - hasta 02:07:269 - deberia poner tu movemientos en el instrumento que se oye el mas (y la timeline en la bateria) Bueno lo intentaré TuT
02:16:781 (10,1) - No utiliza tan grandes hypers Ok
02:24:708 - Pon un circulo aqui Ok
02:27:512 (10,1,2,3) - No utiliza tan grandes hypers Ok
02:35:074 - Poner une circulo aqui con un clap suena bien. ^
02:37:879 - Podrias poner un circulo aqui. Oki o:
02:42:879 (3) - Mas movemiento ? Ok
02:43:611 (5) - ^ ^
02:50:074 - Podrias poner un circulo aqui y quitar el hyper Oki
02:58:488 (3,4) - Los hypers de esa parte no suenan muy bien con la cancion, intenta con eso:

1. 02:58:488 (3) - X: 480 Ok
2. 02:58:732 (4) - X: 160 ^

02:59:952 (4) - Ctrl-H y X: 376 Ok

English tldr; Trying to add some triplets to vary the timeline and nerfing hyper distance (almost all of them are using near max hyper range, wich is quite annoying to play in a so relaxing song). Also corrected snapping issues with 3 sliders. Gracias por todo

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue

3 ~ 4 minutes = 3 diffs

Rain

00:01:171 (3,1) - Erm, try to move these more apart please, so they don't look attached to each other. Plus, you want to keep the spacing between your objects consistent, yes? Ok

00:14:098 (6,7) - This is cheap, and it's not a good overlap, because 00:14:098 (6) - completely covers 00:14:830 (7) - . Please re-position these objects. Ok

00:16:049 (11,1) - Another bad overlap.ok XD

00:18:732 (6) - Looks really...weird. Here's something you can try:

*you'll need to move 00:19:220 (7) - further away from the slider as well

00:30:439 (5) - Looks really messy being placed under the previous triplets 00:29:220 (1,2,3) - . I'd say just stack it under 00:29:708 (4) - 's tail. No, put it below xD

00:47:269 (1,2) - ....remap these objects please. Same reason as 00:14:098 (6,7) - ok D_D

00:54:098 (5,6) - ? ok i like it

Completes the stretched hexagon formation.

00:58:244 (2) - CTRL + G and re-position, it looks funny how the reverse end is more closer to the previous object then the head itself. no, I like as well is

01:10:683 (5) - Make it a 1/2 slider, so its tail can hit the strong lyrics "Po" in Pone on 01:10:927. ok x'D

01:24:098 (2) - CTRL + G No xD

02:09:220 (2) - Forgot to add a finish on the head. o: you have reason
02:34:586 (2) - ^ ^

02:17:025 (7,1) - Can't you tell this is a bad overlap? ok XD

02:59:952 (4) - Forgot to add a finish on the head.ok uwu

Dificil

00:35:074 (5) - Turn it into a 1/2 slider, so that it's tail will hit the lyrics "Sol" heard on 00:35:318. ok o3o i liike it :3

01:02:391 (6) - Stack on 01:02:879 (1) - to create this cool sprouting flow: Good o3o


01:08:488 (6) - Turn it into a full 1/1 slider so that it will run smoothly through the vocals long hold on the "de" I did not understand very well, sorry u.u

02:09:220 (2) - Forgot to add a finish here. ok
02:34:586 (2) - ^ ok

02:38:488 (6) - NC instead of 02:38:976 (1) - , because it's the first object to appear on Kai time. ok

02:38:732 - Sounds empty, it needs a note here to complete the lyrics Padre, where "dre" is heard here. I'll remember but for now no uwu

02:59:952 (4) - Forgot to add a finish on the head. ok

03:00:684 (5) - NC? ok

Normal

00:29:708 (2) - Needs a finish ok
00:55:074 (2) - ^ On the head. ok ewe

01:04:830 (5,6,7,8) - Might be a little too hard to read for standard to beginner players. Try simplifying it to this rhythm: ok owo


01:12:635 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ Same issue as above. Try this rhythm? ok

Where the long slider at 01:12:391 will follow very well with the vocals long hold on the "stoy" in estoy. ok ewe

01:20:440 (2) - Forgot to add finish on the head. Ok >n<

01:31:415 (3) - and 01:31:903 (5) - Please remove these notes. Again, try to refrain from making the rhythm look to complicated. Ok u.u

01:39:220 (6) - Needs a finish on the last tail at 01:39:983 ok

01:40:439 (7) - Move to 01:40:683, then extend it so it ends at 01:43:122. That way, it will be consistently spaced between the previous and next note (being 1 1/2 beats apart from both sides). ok o:

01:59:464 (3,1) - Too far apart, check your DS. No o.o

02:09:220 (2) - Forgot to add finish on the head. ok
02:34:586 (2) - ^ ok

02:44:343 (5,6,7,1) - Same suggestion as 01:04:830 (5,6,7,8) - ok

02:52:392 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Same suggestion as 01:12:635 (5,6,7,8,9) - ok

02:59:953 (2) - Forgot to add finish on the head.

Looks like you still need to work on the flow more in your Hard/Insane diffs Atm, they look really messy, unorganized and there are bad overlaps found as well.

Normal diff looks alright.

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod

neonat wrote:

Normal

00:19:952 (7) - I think if you rotate it slightly, and move it further away from 00:18:976 (6) it would look and play nicer as you reduce the angle between them ok owo

SPOILER

00:43:854 (5) - rotate slightly again and shift so it looks more spread out equally to both 00:43:366 (4) and 00:42:879 (3) ok

SPOILER

01:28:244 (6) - NC here instead? Up to you No o-o
01:40:683 (7) - the repeat is at a very weird spot, maybe change the rhythm at this portion No, I like staying with guitar :3
02:05:318 (4,5) - having 02:06:293 (5) not so close would look nicer and the angle to move to the next beat would not be too acute, and easier to flow ok >.<

Dificil

00:01:903 (3) - wouldn't recommend a jump here, doesn't seem like it needed one ok XD
00:44:342 (2,1) - you could cover 00:44:342 (2) better with the end of 00:45:318 (1) ok owo
00:47:147 - add a note to go with the drums ok qwq
01:18:488 - add a note for the vocals ok
02:29:952 (4,5) - swap positions so circle before slider ok

SPOILER

02:46:294 (1) - add a softer sounding Normal hitsound finish on the start of the slider Ok o:
02:52:391 (2,7) - stack nicely? ok XD
02:58:000 - I think you should map to this vocal too ok
02:59:220 - ^ ok

I preferred the structure of Normal better though, anyways good luck (the audio is cut so abruptly though, so weird lol)

Kurodragon wrote:

Fue divertido esto de osu pero no me deja seguir con mis estudios, en especial cuando tengo exaemes y esas cosas, haci que teme la decicion de retirarme. Como fuiste de los pocos que conoci te doy mis 10 estrellas.

Por favor consiguete a alguien que siga con el mapa, puedes cambiarle el nombre a la diff y quitarme todos los creditos

Me retiro

Posdata, si un moderador esta viendo esto, puede eliminar mi cuenta, no hay problema

Neku okazaki wrote:

Que triste historia la de kurodragon TwT, si manu, te ayudare con el mapa TwT... Buen nombre el de kurodragon, lo usare de ahora en adelante en otros juegos xD

CLSW wrote:

[Rain]
* Overall, boring patterns are quite often. Better make them more jumpy and fun. Here's some bored :
00:03:122 (4,5) Ok
00:09:952 (5,6,7) No
00:12:879 (1,2,3) No
00:19:220 (7,8,9) No
00:24:586 (4,5) Ok
00:42:635 (3,4,5) Ok
00:51:171 (1,2) No
01:03:610 (4,5) Ok
01:08:000 (3,4,5) Ok
01:15:562 (2,3) before fix, make same x position for these sliders ok
01:35:805 (2,3,4) Ok
01:48:732 (3,4) No
01:56:537 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) No
02:29:464 (2,3,4) No
02:38:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6) No
And you should fix unbalanced NCs like 00:16:781 (1) this one.. No

00:00:440 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544448 try this Ok o3o
00:09:952 (5) - increase this jump. x: 320 would be nice. ok XD
00:16:781 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544452 try this ok
00:38:244 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544463 ^ ok
00:59:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544470 ^ ok o:
01:06:537 (7) - x : 64. ok
01:14:342 (8,9) - add hyperdash. No xD
01:36:049 (4,5) - seems out from rhythm. delete 01:36:049 (4) and make 01:36:293 (5) this slider starts from here. Ok XD
01:38:244 (8) - x : 476. ok
01:40:683 (2) - x : 480. ok
02:00:927 (1,2,3) - more jumpy, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544482 this. Also fix the sliders' shape as same. ok
02:15:317 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544484 try this ok
02:16:903 (6) - x : 160. ok
02:17:756 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544485 try this ok
02:21:659 (2) - x : 80 for jumpy. ok
02:24:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544487 try this ok
02:26:049 (6,7) - add hyperdash. Maybe x : 432 would be good. If you wanna fix, set 02:26:537 (8) - as 208 and 02:26:781 (1) - as 432.
02:31:415 (1) - x : 136. no
02:32:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ctrl+h. ok
02:45:562 (6) - x : 280. ok
02:46:293 (7) - x : 37. ok

Good luck to your improvement!