jonathanlfj wrote:

alright lets see

[General]
preview time should be at 00:05:846, its at 00:05:830 atm which is slightly early Ok will change this

[Normal]
00:36:846 (4) - is the whistle on slider body intentional? Was because both ends had whistle, I guess I could remove it since it's not really needed
00:51:846 (2) - this would look better if you took 00:50:846 (1) and flipped it by 180 degrees so the curve looks the same shifted other positions there too
01:38:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try perfectly center this on the y-axis makes sense to make them equal x or y axis
02:21:846 (3) - whistle on start not really going to highlight this note with whistle, didn't do so in other difficulties too

[Hard]
00:32:596 - add a note here? keeps consistency with 00:24:596 (4) ok
00:37:846 (1) - add a finish here? only added to Normal because of the object density and how it would be less noisy
01:41:846 (1) - use a 3-point slider, right now it kinda looks meh ok

[Insane]
00:23:846 (1) - probably forgot a whistle it was a gradual lead up in hitsounds to the verse but yeh it does make it seem better with one more whistle
01:34:846 (3,4,5) - the flow here feels a bit broken, since you stop to hit the stack and then jump really far to reach the next slider. try position 01:35:096 (4) at x:192 y:32 shifted both in a way where they overlap 01:34:846 (3) - equally and the downward motion is kept
01:42:846 (1) - NC is not really needed, since the same sv is being followed ok
01:57:346 (4) - make this into a slider thats a vertical flip of 01:56:346 (2), gives a nice lead into 01:57:846 (1) clarified this
02:01:846 (6) - try stacking this under 02:01:346 (5), makes more sense with how you comboed the section I must have left that out somehow

[Insane Collab]
00:10:846 (2,3) - move it a bit up to avoid the partial overlap with 00:09:846 (1) changed and ended up shifting 00:11:346 (4,5) too
00:53:846 (1) - move the end point a bit left to get a better blanket on 00:54:846 (2,3) fixed
01:11:846 (1) - pretty sure volume settings like this are questionable in rankability, i'd suggest to use 25% instead to be safe (apply to all 15% sections) changed
01:23:341 - unsnapped green line, snap to 01:23:346 fixed
01:57:846 - i would actually remove this break here, especially because the next section comes really fast, and the pause can be considered a transition verse instead of a break in music section ok
02:12:846 (3,4,5,6) - rearrange the order makes this section play better imo: ok

SPOILER

recommend you fix the stuff in blue, and then let me know

Hinsvar wrote:

This is quite a wait (with +125 priority even lol)

Congrats!

HeatKai wrote:

Congrats Neonat! At last you manage to get it ranked! /claps

Cloudchaser wrote:

First SeeU song ranked! congratz

UnderminE wrote:

trap

oh-

DJNightmare wrote:

Finally, Congrats on your first ranked beatmap neonat :3

Kaguya Hourain wrote:

Congrats man! Been a long time since I wanted this ranked! Awesome!

[ Aily ] wrote:

wwwwww finally ranked

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

WHOOOOOOOP CONGRATZ!!!! :'D

mingmichael wrote:

wohoo congrats

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

I remember this song...
gratz

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Gratz~

[Seraphin] wrote:

nice

kirigherkins wrote:

+1 for new national anthem.

Sieg wrote:

Congrats (: