Hi, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^
Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5)
EZ 6K
NM 6K
General
Good luck :3/
Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5)
EZ 6K
Inside :3
HP drain: 6
Overall diff: 7
00:13:887 (13887|3) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable to catch this note with distance in one note between columns
00:20:373 (20373|5) - this one I recommend you to move to 2nd column again, it'll be more suitable with your previous and next going patterns here
00:27:184 (27184|3) - you can move this note to 0 column, it'll be comfortable pattern transition here with distance in 3 columns between notes
00:27:833 (27833|2) - if you've followed my previous suggestion, you can move this note to 1st column and finish here previous pattern correctly
Here 00:43:076 - I suggest you to use this pattern, it'll be more hand balanced and comfortable for novice player coz of such note layer
00:44:130 (44130|0) - misplaced note, place this note correctly to 00:44:211 - if you follow the beat transition
00:49:238 - you can add one more note here to 5th column according to the strong beat which goes here, it'll be comfortable to catch this chord after your previous note
00:51:022 (51022|0) - I suggest you to delete this note, there's no strong beat or same and then turn 00:51:022 (51022|3) - this note into LN (slider) and end it here 00:51:508 - following the violin back sound
00:53:130 (53130|5) - delete this note to, there's no suitable sound to place it here, or you can move it to 00:53:292 - it'll be correct position according to the music, check it
00:53:779 - I see your intention to follow vocal road here, so I recommend you to add one more note here to 5th column according to the syllable here
01:28:157 - ending part looks awkward, you need to place all notes according to the beat correctly, you can use this suggestion and re-check this part
Overall diff: 7
00:13:887 (13887|3) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable to catch this note with distance in one note between columns
00:20:373 (20373|5) - this one I recommend you to move to 2nd column again, it'll be more suitable with your previous and next going patterns here
00:27:184 (27184|3) - you can move this note to 0 column, it'll be comfortable pattern transition here with distance in 3 columns between notes
00:27:833 (27833|2) - if you've followed my previous suggestion, you can move this note to 1st column and finish here previous pattern correctly
Here 00:43:076 - I suggest you to use this pattern, it'll be more hand balanced and comfortable for novice player coz of such note layer
00:44:130 (44130|0) - misplaced note, place this note correctly to 00:44:211 - if you follow the beat transition
00:49:238 - you can add one more note here to 5th column according to the strong beat which goes here, it'll be comfortable to catch this chord after your previous note
00:51:022 (51022|0) - I suggest you to delete this note, there's no strong beat or same and then turn 00:51:022 (51022|3) - this note into LN (slider) and end it here 00:51:508 - following the violin back sound
00:53:130 (53130|5) - delete this note to, there's no suitable sound to place it here, or you can move it to 00:53:292 - it'll be correct position according to the music, check it
00:53:779 - I see your intention to follow vocal road here, so I recommend you to add one more note here to 5th column according to the syllable here
01:28:157 - ending part looks awkward, you need to place all notes according to the beat correctly, you can use this suggestion and re-check this part
NM 6K
Inside :3
HP drain: 6
Overall diff: 7
00:05:941 (5941|2) - you can move this note to 3rd column, it'll be more comfortable position to catch note in this four note transition and it'll make your pattern more balanced here too
00:08:535 (8535|3) - I highly recommend you to avoid such situations when you place two notes in same column without any suitable double sounds for them in the song, so I suggest you to move this note to 2nd or 4th column to make your pattern here more correct
00:11:941 (11941|5) - delete this note, I can't see intention to perform three note chord here coz there's no strong beat and also three notes are hard to press for usual player at NM level
00:20:211 (20211|4) - doublenoting again, move this note to 0 column to make this part more comfortable to play, use previous rule of placing double notes to perform such transitions correctly
00:45:184 (45184|0) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable transition between your previous and next going LN here
From 00:46:481 to 00:47:454 - I recommend you to re-arrange this part, some notes here are placed incorrectly and there's a problem with double notes, you can use this pattern, it'll be more correct and comfortable to play here
01:25:725 (85725|5) - there's no need to place this note here coz no suitable sound for it, I suggest you to delete it
Finally I need to say about major problems of your patterns in both diffs. You can see that there's a lot of misplaced notes and double notes which aren't follow the song and unnecessary, simply they are ruin your patterns. I see you intention to follow mostly vocal road, but I need to tell you that it isn't good idea. I suggest you to remap your chart following the beat and music as well, it'll be much better for you and for players. Listen to the music carefully and place all notes correctly, there are some rules, which will help you:
1. Place mostly single notes when you follow weak beat and one instrument in your song and place chords, when you need to accent strong beat according to the song.
2. Don't place double notes when there's no suitable sounds for them, place such notes only when you hear two identical sound in the song.
3. You main priority in chart should be rhythm and musical instruments, so you need to follow them firstly, follow vocals only when you can't follow other instruments (in solo vocal parts for example).
Hope it'll help you and you can make awesome rankable chart and you can improve you mapping techniques ^w^
Overall diff: 7
00:05:941 (5941|2) - you can move this note to 3rd column, it'll be more comfortable position to catch note in this four note transition and it'll make your pattern more balanced here too
00:08:535 (8535|3) - I highly recommend you to avoid such situations when you place two notes in same column without any suitable double sounds for them in the song, so I suggest you to move this note to 2nd or 4th column to make your pattern here more correct
00:11:941 (11941|5) - delete this note, I can't see intention to perform three note chord here coz there's no strong beat and also three notes are hard to press for usual player at NM level
00:20:211 (20211|4) - doublenoting again, move this note to 0 column to make this part more comfortable to play, use previous rule of placing double notes to perform such transitions correctly
00:45:184 (45184|0) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable transition between your previous and next going LN here
From 00:46:481 to 00:47:454 - I recommend you to re-arrange this part, some notes here are placed incorrectly and there's a problem with double notes, you can use this pattern, it'll be more correct and comfortable to play here
01:25:725 (85725|5) - there's no need to place this note here coz no suitable sound for it, I suggest you to delete it
Finally I need to say about major problems of your patterns in both diffs. You can see that there's a lot of misplaced notes and double notes which aren't follow the song and unnecessary, simply they are ruin your patterns. I see you intention to follow mostly vocal road, but I need to tell you that it isn't good idea. I suggest you to remap your chart following the beat and music as well, it'll be much better for you and for players. Listen to the music carefully and place all notes correctly, there are some rules, which will help you:
1. Place mostly single notes when you follow weak beat and one instrument in your song and place chords, when you need to accent strong beat according to the song.
2. Don't place double notes when there's no suitable sounds for them, place such notes only when you hear two identical sound in the song.
3. You main priority in chart should be rhythm and musical instruments, so you need to follow them firstly, follow vocals only when you can't follow other instruments (in solo vocal parts for example).
Hope it'll help you and you can make awesome rankable chart and you can improve you mapping techniques ^w^
General
Inside :3
Mapset: to make your mapset rankable you need at least HD diff. Also you need to write all diff names correctly like: "key amount+difficulty", so your mapset will looks like "6K EZ+6K NM+6K HD"
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Hitsounding: I see that you have special HSes for your diffs and they sounds funny xD But to make your map rankable you need to place all of them correctly. You need to accent low and strong beats according to the song, it'll be enough but now these sounds are placed a little awkward x.x
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Kiai: there's no kiai time in your chart, to make it rankable I suggest you to place next kiai section:
From 01:07:400 to 01:20:373 - according to the chorus part
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Hitsounding: I see that you have special HSes for your diffs and they sounds funny xD But to make your map rankable you need to place all of them correctly. You need to accent low and strong beats according to the song, it'll be enough but now these sounds are placed a little awkward x.x
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Kiai: there's no kiai time in your chart, to make it rankable I suggest you to place next kiai section:
From 01:07:400 to 01:20:373 - according to the chorus part
Good luck :3/