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ZUN - The Doll Maker of Bucuresti [Osu|Taiko]

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wa_
237 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
wa_
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 grudnia 2015 at 00:41:29

Artist: ZUN
Title: The Doll Maker of Bucuresti
Source: 東方Project
Tags: ColdTooth darkdunskin orza6006 Touhou Perfect Cherry Blossom PCB Alice Margatroid Stage 3 Bukureshuti no Ningyoushi 東方妖々夢 Youyoumu Suimusou Immaterial and Missing Power 東方萃夢想 Hisouten Scarlet Weather Rhapsody 東方緋想天
BPM: 152
Filesize: 3704kb
Play Time: 02:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. 6006's Insane (3,73 stars, 412 notes)
  2. ColdTooth's Easy (1,32 stars, 116 notes)
  3. Dunskin's Muzukashii (2,56 stars, 448 notes)
  4. Dunskin's Oni (3,66 stars, 675 notes)
  5. Hard (3,13 stars, 301 notes)
  6. Lunatic (4,32 stars, 500 notes)
  7. Normal (1,86 stars, 174 notes)
Download: ZUN - The Doll Maker of Bucuresti
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Back to wip for a while, please don't mod Insane diff (will be replaced with new map)
One of my favourites Touhou tracks, enjoy~
Thanks pimpG for better timing!
Easy by ColdTooth
Insane by orza6006 remapping
Muzukashii by DarkDunskin
Oni by DarkDunskin
Last edited by wa_ , edited 45 times in total.
pimp
1,417 posts
Joined April 2010
pimp
offset should be 75

01:56:902 - you don't need this timeline (no offset change or bpm change here)
02:03:245 - add a timeline here with the same 152 bpm. here we have a weird offset change, you better use a note at 02:03:232 - instead of 02:03:245 -
02:09:559 - useless timeline, remove please

should be fine now, but i suggest getting a few more timing checks, specially for 02:03:245 -

GL
wa_
237 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
wa_
Thanks, I'll check it tomorrow~
DarkDunskin
1,875 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Hi :3
Would you take some Taiko Guest-Difficultys from me?
wa_
237 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
wa_
Yes, it'd be really nice! (I hope I'll find Taiko BAT in future... orz)
DarkDunskin
1,875 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Here you go :3

http://puu.sh/7LsEk

And Dont worry about Taiko BAT's.
As long as we get 3~4 normal Taiko mods I know someone who owes me a Mod :D
Don't forget to add 'darkdunskin' to the Tags~
wa_
237 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
wa_
Thanks for awesome diffs :D
I adjusted new timing to all difficulties, now should be better.

Hm, typo in Oni diff name was intentional?
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
LunaticP
Random taiko mod

[Oni]

00:23:167 (24) - k

00:29:581 (27) - k

00:45:469 (9) - d

00:45:864 (11) - k

00:55:042 - add d

01:18:232 (17) - d

01:18:528 (20) - k

01:34:219 - add k

01:35:798 - add k

01:41:127 - add d


Good luck
DarkDunskin
1,875 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin

LunaticP wrote:

Random taiko mod

[Oni]

00:23:167 (24) - k changed

00:29:581 (27) - k changed

00:45:469 (9) - d not changed

00:45:864 (11) - k not changed

00:55:042 - add d changed

01:18:232 (17) - d not changed

01:18:528 (20) - k not changed

01:34:219 - add k not changed

01:35:798 - add k not changed

01:41:127 - add d not changed


Good luck
Your mod was helpful~
I noticed some slightly inconsistencys too and fixed them.

Here's the update:
http://puu.sh/7MYeB.osu
Winek
887 posts
Joined September 2013
Winek
just helpin ZUN's friend.

You should consider adding to tags "PCB - th7 - th07 - Alice Margatroid - Stage 3" or stuff like that.

Good lick luck
wa_
237 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
wa_
Thanks, I'll consider your proposals :3
kakifly
940 posts
Joined April 2014
kakifly
m4m ^o^

Coldtooth's Easy

- 00:32:048 (1,2,3) - i suggest you change the rhythm here; because at 00:33:232 its an important beat so you should start a note there; not end a slider there
- 00:35:601 (3) - ^ 00:36:390 Is important beat
and many more notes like that; you do not have to start a note on every single downbeat but it would be nice if some of the important ones were emphasized
- 00:45:469 (2,1) - not a perfect stack, please move 00:47:443 (1) - to x283 y263
- 01:03:232 (1) - is not a perfect copy of 01:00:864 (2) - if you intended for them to match; please re check
- 01:48:627 (2) - move to x124 y316 better flow

Normal

-Please lower AR & OD by 1 or at least 0.5
- 00:05:601 (3) - this hitsound is really random, if you must keep this then add whistle to 00:05:996 (4) -
- 00:52:969 (4,1) - i suggest making these into a 1/1 slider like this because the beat on 00:53:364 (1) - is faint & awkward to play
SPOILER
- 00:58:496 (3,1) - try having the same rhythm as ^^^^ since you are missing that beat
- 01:01:259 (3,1) - blanket better
- 01:16:653 (2,1) - could you have it similar to this for better flow?
SPOILER
- 01:23:364 (4) - maybe remove this like how you did at 01:19:022 (1,2,3,1) - ?
- 02:00:074 (1,2) - Merge into a 2/1 slider
SPOILER

Hard

- 00:13:693 (4) - remove clap
- 00:20:601 (2) - stack on head of 00:19:417 (2) - ?
- 00:23:561 add note
- 00:55:338 (3) - stack properly

Lunatic

- 00:04:022 (3) - stack on 00:02:838 (5) -
- 00:09:153 (5) - stack tail onto 00:07:772 (6) - ?
- 00:34:417 (5) - stack 00:33:035 (5) -
- 00:52:179 (3,4,5) - i suggest either stacking these or make the spacing more readable
- 01:49:022 (1) - stack tail onto 01:48:035 (3) -
- 01:56:917 (1) - stack is just a bit off; it looks fuzzy please fix
- 02:00:864 (3,2) - ^
- 02:07:389 add note here; theres a sound you are missing


hope that helped~ nice mapset good luck for rank (have a star *w*)
wa_
237 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
wa_

kakifly wrote:

Normal

-Please lower AR & OD by 1 or at least 0.5 / done
- 00:05:601 (3) - this hitsound is really random, if you must keep this then add whistle to 00:05:996 (4) - / added whistle
- 00:52:969 (4,1) - i suggest making these into a 1/1 slider like this because the beat on 00:53:364 (1) - is faint & awkward to play / good idea, but I keep as it is until someone suggest same thing (just for comfirmation)
SPOILER
- 00:58:496 (3,1) - try having the same rhythm as ^^^^ since you are missing that beat/ yeah, but I don't know how to do it here... D:
- 01:01:259 (3,1) - blanket better / oh yesyesyes
- 01:16:653 (2,1) - could you have it similar to this for better flow? / nice point but it wouldn't look good as for now. Maybe I try to do something with this later :P
SPOILER
- 01:23:364 (4) - maybe remove this like how you did at 01:19:022 (1,2,3,1) - ? / done. Also, it made that straight-line pattern better!
- 02:00:074 (1,2) - Merge into a 2/1 slider / done, that circle wasn't placed good...
SPOILER

Hard

- 00:13:693 (4) - remove clap / done
- 00:20:601 (2) - stack on head of 00:19:417 (2) - ? / done
- 00:23:561 add note / hmmm...
- 00:55:338 (3) - stack properly / done

Lunatic

- 00:04:022 (3) - stack on 00:02:838 (5) - / there's no need to stack these things, they're too far.
- 00:09:153 (5) - stack tail onto 00:07:772 (6) - ? / okay, there are no problems here, but at least moving it doesn't cause any problems with patterns :v
- 00:34:417 (5) - stack 00:33:035 (5) - / same
- 00:52:179 (3,4,5) - i suggest either stacking these or make the spacing more readable / it's ok imo, there's high AR, so it shoudn't cause problems with reading.
- 01:49:022 (1) - stack tail onto 01:48:035 (3) - / okay
- 01:56:917 (1) - stack is just a bit off; it looks fuzzy please fix / uhh indeed, it was ugly
- 02:00:864 (3,2) - ^ / now should be ok
- 02:07:389 add note here; theres a sound you are missing / but this sound seems to be quiet, hmm...


hope that helped~ nice mapset good luck for rank (have a star *w*)
Thanks for good suggestions and star :D updated
ColdTooth
1,100 posts
Joined June 2012
ColdTooth
hi

Orange = Highly suggested to fix
Purple = Minor suggestion
No color = Something to consider/Not major
Green = Comment/something silly/idk

[Normal]

00:05:206 (2,3,4,1) - Make better diamond. Or make 3,4,1 a triangle. (It is now, but the shape and transition in this section is kinda bleh)

00:07:969 (1,2,1) - Triangle.

00:23:759 (1) - x: 400 y: 128

00:28:496 (1,2) - The flow/transition here is somewhat bad. I wouldn't make 1 a 1/2 slider.

00:31:653 (1) - Interesting shape

00:36:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this into a pentagon or something zig-zaggy to the other side of the screen. The way it looks now, it looks like a broken hexagon

01:15:074 (2) - x: 156 y: 264?

01:15:469 (3) - x: 256 y: 280?

01:20:601 (1) - Try to blanket 01:19:022 (1) -

01:31:653 - Didn't map this break? Seems very nice to map here

02:00:074 (1,2) - Eh... Not something you'd do for a normal IMO

02:02:443 (2) - Blanket 02:03:232 (1) -

02:06:402 (1) - x: 240 y: 284

02:07:587 (4) - x: 492 y: 368

[Hard]

00:03:232 (1) - Blanket 00:03:035 (6) - ?

00:09:351 (6) - x: 500 y: 272 is a lot better spot to make this shape perfect.

00:13:101 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Eh, this pattern seems a little too forced imo

00:20:601 (2) - Bad overlap w/ 00:19:417 (2) - and should blanket 00:19:811 (3) -

00:21:390 (1,2,1) - Doesn't flow right due to low spacing and only 1/1. Try a 1/2 slider instead or a larger jump.

00:55:338 (3) - Stack on 00:54:351 (3) -

01:24:548 (3) - x: 236 y: 356

01:31:653 - Didn't map this break? Seems very nice to map here

01:48:035 (4,5) - x: 456 y: 308 for better shape

01:49:417 (2,3,4,5,6) - Very broken pentagon.

02:00:864 (3,4,1) - Bigger jumps here maybe

[6006's Insane]

00:37:969 (9) - New combo?

00:49:022 (1) - Extend to 00:50:403 -

00:59:285 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - This stream to a triplet is kinda challenging imo. Maybe a straight line isn't so flowing here

01:04:022 (3) - Stack on 01:02:443 (5) -

01:20:996 (2,3,4) - Try including a stream here somewhere, or a couple 1/4ths like you did earlier

01:59:482 (4,6) - ctrl + g?

Well made difficulty!

[Lunatic]

00:04:022 (3) - Stack on 00:02:838 (5) -

00:20:206 (6,7,1) - Transition to get here is kinda blech at the moment, maybe increase the spacing between these notes

00:34:417 (5) - Not stacked on 00:33:035 (5) -

00:37:969 (5) - NC?

00:57:706 (6,7) - Can be confusing

01:12:706 (1,2,3) - Can be confusing

01:31:653 - I highly recommend you to map this break


That's it, well made map
orza6006
156 posts
Joined January 2014
orza6006

ColdTooth wrote:

hi Hi

[6006's Insane]

00:37:969 (9) - New combo? Done

00:49:022 (1) - Extend to 00:50:403 - Done, not sure why I made it shorter before

00:59:285 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - This stream to a triplet is kinda challenging imo. Maybe a straight line isn't so flowing here Pretty sure it's fine difficulty-wise, but I tried to improve the flow

01:04:022 (3) - Stack on 01:02:443 (5) - Done

01:20:996 (2,3,4) - Try including a stream here somewhere, or a couple 1/4ths like you did earlier I'd like to keep these to give the player a bit of a break from all the 1/4 stuff. I'll consider it though.

01:59:482 (4,6) - ctrl + g? Yeah, ok, it improves the flow. Done

Well made difficulty! Thanks!
code
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: [06] Bucuresti no Ningyoushi.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50601
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 50699
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:The Doll Maker of Bucuresti
TitleUnicode:ブクレシュティの人形師
Artist:ZUN
ArtistUnicode:ZUN
Creator:wa_
Version:6006's Insane
Source:Touhou
Tags:ColdTooth darkdunskin orza6006 Perfect Cherry Blossom PCB th7 th07 Alice Margatroid Stage 3
BeatmapID:482326
BeatmapSetID:158230

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.3
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
2,38169,48318
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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[Colours]
Combo1 : 173,172,171
Combo2 : 220,205,220
Combo3 : 188,222,224
Combo4 : 130,148,189
Combo5 : 169,216,141
Combo6 : 232,215,183

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184,244,96785,2,0,L|144:173,1,80,14|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,28,97180,2,0,L|140:104,1,80,6|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,47,97574,1,2,1:3:0:0:
83,225,97772,1,2,1:2:0:0:
184,244,97969,6,0,B|224:256|224:256|252:316|324:312,1,160,4|2,1:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
319,175,98561,2,0,B|252:172|224:232|224:232|184:244,1,160,8|2,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,312,99153,1,4,1:3:0:0:
319,176,99351,1,2,1:3:0:0:
284,88,99548,6,0,P|230:147|238:224,1,160,8|2,1:3|1:3,0:0:0:0:
372,96,100140,2,0,P|292:85|234:136,1,160,8|2,1:3|1:3,0:0:0:0:
319,176,100732,1,4,1:0:0:0:
320,312,100930,6,0,B|204:344|204:344|88:312,1,240,4|8,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
126,244,101719,2,0,B|204:264|204:264|282:244,1,160,4|2,1:3|0:2,0:0:0:0:
204,176,102311,1,2,1:3:0:0:
112,144,102509,6,0,P|180:81|248:89,1,160,4|2,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,103101,2,0,P|360:120|320:112,1,80,8|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,32,103496,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,192,103693,1,2,1:3:0:0:
360,32,103890,2,0,B|360:72|360:72|376:112|376:112|376:152,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,104285,6,0,P|360:236|328:268,1,88.000002685547,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,180,104680,1,10,1:3:0:0:
376,192,104877,2,0,P|334:264|244:276,1,176.000005371094,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
276,180,105469,1,4,1:3:0:0:
276,180,105568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,180,105667,1,2,0:2:0:0:
337,105,105864,6,0,B|288:77|288:77|255:85,1,88.000002685547,4|2,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,180,106259,1,10,1:3:0:0:
337,105,106456,2,0,B|288:77|288:77|222:94|222:94|174:66,1,176.000005371094,6|2,1:3|0:2,0:0:0:0:
84,116,107048,1,4,1:0:0:0:
68,144,107147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,176,107246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,280,107443,6,0,P|124:260|152:228,1,88.000002685547,4|2,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,176,107838,1,10,1:3:0:0:
80,280,108035,2,0,B|128:268|152:228|152:228|240:228,1,176.000005371094,2|6,0:2|1:3,0:0:0:0:
312,156,108627,1,10,1:3:0:0:
237,84,108824,6,0,B|152:84|152:84|128:44|80:32,1,176.000005371094,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
237,84,109417,2,0,P|284:92|324:112,1,88.000002685547,10|2,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,176,109811,2,0,P|425:168|385:148,1,88.000002685547,4|8,1:3|1:3,0:0:0:0:
456,72,110206,1,8,1:3:0:0:
252,188,110403,1,6,1:3:0:0:
204,280,110601,6,0,B|248:288|248:288|296:276,1,88.000002685547,4|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,176,110996,1,10,1:3:0:0:
376,268,111193,2,0,B|344:264|344:264|248:288|248:288|200:280,1,176.000005371094,8|2,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
104,252,111785,1,4,1:3:0:0:
96,224,111884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,196,111982,1,2,0:2:0:0:
84,92,112180,6,0,P|120:68|172:68,1,88.000002685547,4|6,1:3|1:3,0:0:0:0:
268,80,112574,1,10,1:3:0:0:
368,112,112772,2,0,P|304:180|225:178,1,176.000005371094,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,80,113364,1,4,1:0:0:0:
368,112,113561,6,0,B|440:180|424:272,1,176.000005371094,2|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,328,114153,1,10,1:3:0:0:
232,332,114351,2,0,P|212:240|280:192,1,176.000005371094,2|10,1:2|1:3,0:0:0:0:
372,212,114943,1,10,1:3:0:0:
288,272,115140,6,0,P|204:236|200:140,1,176.000005371094,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,60,115732,1,8,1:3:0:0:
324,28,115930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,104,116127,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,112,116226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,116324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,104,116423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,88,116522,1,4,0:2:0:0:
296,236,116917,6,0,L|237:270,1,68.0000012969971,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,236,117311,2,0,L|130:270,1,68.0000012969971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,188,117705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
66,319,117903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,188,118101,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,319,118298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,336,118496,6,0,P|380:296|364:268,1,68.0000012969971,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,240,118890,2,0,P|260:248|236:272,1,68.0000012969971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,319,119285,1,2,0:0:0:0:
402,197,119482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,328,119680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,188,119877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,80,120074,6,0,L|252:56,1,68.0000012969971,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,80,120469,2,0,L|180:56,1,68.0000012969971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,144,120864,2,0,B|216:120|216:120|148:144,1,136.000002593994,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,204,121456,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,280,121653,6,0,P|212:288|168:268,1,68.0000012969971,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,216,122048,2,0,P|136:176|152:148,1,68.0000012969971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,216,122443,2,0,L|64:240,1,68.0000012969971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,280,122838,2,0,L|252:352,1,68.0000012969971,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,216,123245,6,0,P|380:232|412:240,1,68.0000012969971,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,132,123639,2,0,P|292:116|260:108,1,68.0000012969971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,108,124034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,124,124231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,240,124429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,224,124626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,240,124823,6,0,P|96:276|120:296,1,68.0000012969971,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,216,125218,2,0,P|228:256|208:284,1,68.0000012969971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,36,126008,2,0,L|204:108,1,68.0000012969971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,68,126402,6,0,P|289:101|281:134,1,68.0000012969971,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,210,126797,2,0,P|361:222|387:247,1,68.0000012969971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,172,127192,2,0,B|388:145|357:140|357:140|368:110|360:73,1,136.000002593994,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,88,127784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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wa_
237 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
wa_

ColdTooth wrote:

hi

Orange = Highly suggested to fix
Purple = Minor suggestion
No color = Something to consider/Not major
Green = Comment/something silly/idk

[Normal]

00:05:206 (2,3,4,1) - Make better diamond. Or make 3,4,1 a triangle. (It is now, but the shape and transition in this section is kinda bleh) / done

00:07:969 (1,2,1) - Triangle. / yep

00:23:759 (1) - x: 400 y: 128 / but triangle... :(

00:28:496 (1,2) - The flow/transition here is somewhat bad. I wouldn't make 1 a 1/2 slider. / good point, but it woudn't be too boring? This map is full of 1/1 already. Will consider.

00:31:653 (1) - Interesting shape / huh, it's not good tbh, I would change it maybe cause i'd make it better, but 2lazy

00:36:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this into a pentagon or something zig-zaggy to the other side of the screen. The way it looks now, it looks like a broken hexagon / changed another way: moved and rotated that hexagon, also flow at this part was crap

01:15:074 (2) - x: 156 y: 264? / nop, now is better (also invisible symmetry and hexagon with previous notes)

01:15:469 (3) - x: 256 y: 280? / same

01:20:601 (1) - Try to blanket 01:19:022 (1) - / nice idea but spacing spacing spacing and these notes aren't close to each other.(btw i know that you know that i like blankets :^)

01:31:653 - Didn't map this break? Seems very nice to map here / heh, probably i'm gonna to map this breaks

02:00:074 (1,2) - Eh... Not something you'd do for a normal IMO / yep, considering change into deathstream ww

02:02:443 (2) - Blanket 02:03:232 (1) - / oh how i would forgot about that important thing :P

02:06:402 (1) - x: 240 y: 284 / nop (i know you mean here spacing with previous [1], b-but... that kawaii smooth circular pattern >~<

02:07:587 (4) - x: 492 y: 368 / see above

[Hard]

00:03:232 (1) - Blanket 00:03:035 (6) - ? / not this time

00:09:351 (6) - x: 500 y: 272 is a lot better spot to make this shape perfect. / changed other way

00:13:101 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Eh, this pattern seems a little too forced imo / but i like it... just wait until someone else point out this thing...

00:20:601 (2) - Bad overlap w/ 00:19:417 (2) - and should blanket 00:19:811 (3) - / but they're already stacked perfectly...

00:21:390 (1,2,1) - Doesn't flow right due to low spacing and only 1/1. Try a 1/2 slider instead or a larger jump. / I don't see nothing bad with flow here,

00:55:338 (3) - Stack on 00:54:351 (3) - / wtf man, there's no problem with stacks here :D

01:24:548 (3) - x: 236 y: 356/ yep, added blanket

01:31:653 - Didn't map this break? Seems very nice to map here

01:48:035 (4,5) - x: 456 y: 308 for better shape / done

01:49:417 (2,3,4,5,6) - Very broken pentagon. / fixed

02:00:864 (3,4,1) - Bigger jumps here maybe no no no, just wanted to emphasize calm part

[Lunatic]

00:04:022 (3) - Stack on 00:02:838 (5) - / this stack isn't necessary, it's invisible in play mode

00:20:206 (6,7,1) - Transition to get here is kinda blech at the moment, maybe increase the spacing between these notes / I see nothing bad here, will condsider it after more mods

00:34:417 (5) - Not stacked on 00:33:035 (5) - / okay i just realized these stacks were fixed with previous mod ._.

00:37:969 (5) - NC? / not really, it could "break" this stream shape...

00:57:706 (6,7) - Can be confusing / it's fine for me... there's no problem with that high AR imo...

01:12:706 (1,2,3) - Can be confusing / same here. But I remember these suggestions.

01:31:653 - I highly recommend you to map this break


That's it, well made map
Thank you~
btw your suggestion colors look ugly with my response colors :-)
also, moved to wip for a while
ColdTooth
1,100 posts
Joined June 2012
ColdTooth
Newer easy

wa_ wrote:

btw your suggestion colors look ugly with my response colors :-)
go step on a lego
wa_
237 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
wa_
added, thanks bby~

ColdTooth wrote:

go step on a lego
i-it hurts... :(
TwilightForest
26 posts
Joined December 2012
TwilightForest
Dunksin's Oni

00:07:574 (31,39,47) - should be k
00:21:588 - add d
00:34:219 - add d
00:46:851 - add d
00:49:219 (29) - should be k
00:59:877 (16) - should be K, because high pitch of sound

I hope my mod is useful.
DarkDunskin
1,875 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Oh yeah why not. Changed following Point:

00:59:877 (16) - should be K, because high pitch of sound

Taiko Update: http://puu.sh/iHAjQ/1a3d261dbf.osu

Very surprised and glad you revived it!
K i R a
152 posts
Joined May 2010
K i R a
Hello, gonna m4m your map ^^

Hopefully you get stars soon, ZUN is a good choice :P

[General]
Remove widescreen support if you don't use SB, you don't need it.

[ColdTooth's Easy]
Starting from here: 00:14:285 (2) - I don't get why you use drums instead of the normal preset, sounds weird, may be my opinion though.
00:33:232 (2,3) - Hi-hats are not Finish Cymbals, these finish are not placed in the correct notes, also the next slider should start with a finish as you can see if you listen to the song: 00:34:811 (1) - , Same for other patterns.
00:53:759 (1) - Finish
01:00:074 (1,2) - Both starting have finish
01:28:496 (1,2,3,4) - Just my opinion but I think it could sound better on soft ~
01:37:969 (1) - Better blanket
02:03:245 (1) - Start finish ~

[Normal]
00:13:496 (2) - You can rotate this slider so it doesnt overlap the other slider.
00:21:390 (2) - These are hi-hats not finish
00:28:101 (2) - Remove finish
00:34:022 (2) - ^
00:50:996 (1,2,3,4) - WTF... Please don't use finish in every beat, specially if they are hi-hat, hi-hats are used very often compared with finish, and they are not mapped as finish in other songs!
00:59:877 (1) - Finish
01:06:390 (1) - Remove this finish, also consider remapping hitsounds if all the diff is full of finish of non sense, i'm not trying to offend you but this may be unrankeable, just look things like this 01:09:548 (1,2,3,4) - All hi-hats being a finish.., play this on taiko, use BOTH fingers for every beat ._., you really should remap the hitsounds.

Everything else is fine, only hitsounds.

[Hard]
02:03:230 (1) - Snap (look aibot)
Consider the same thing than in normal, there are a lot of finish placed on non-finish beats.

00:53:561 (1) - What about curve it soo it looks like better?
01:33:824 (1) - Remove NC
01:53:956 - Seems like you need a circle here.

[6006's Insane]
00:50:601 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I recommend you swap 3 with 4 in both combos to make it flow better, its more enjoyable to play.
01:02:838 (6,7,8,9) - Reverse arrows should be visible at least at the start (ranking criteria)
Also, same as the easy and the normal, you do it less than the creator but you may consider listening a bit more before you put finish on hi-hats, hi-hats are not a good reason to put a finish, apply this to the whole difficulty, you dont do it too much but there are some places.
01:26:127 (3) - Blanket it better

[Lunatic]
Same as in the other diffs, consider remapping the finish, hi-hats are not a good place for finish, also it could make people have headache if you abuse them.
01:02:443 (7) - Consider changing this to a 1/8 slider with repeats to fit the song.
01:02:838 (1,2) - Also this is not 1/4, its another 1/8 :/

Thats all I think, the biggest issue are the hitsounds, usually I dont find this kind of errors, seems like the song itself confused you, please seriusly reconsider remapping the finish hitsounds, they are a pain and they are everywhere, finish are used to accentuate the start of end of a part of the song, not to use them continuously, if you dont know what is a hi-hat I recommend you look for it in google / youtube.

Everything else is fine, there are no spacing errors or weird readability, it looks good and seems like its ready.
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