I'm here
just plz fix that title and I'll do the repair
sorry for the inconvenience

Zero__wind wrote:

I'm here
just plz fix that title and I'll do the repair
sorry for the inconvenience

fixed~xD

ok, bubble repaired

[General]

- The Japanese show name, プリズマ☆イリヤ, would be good to add to tags.
- The lack of whistles in the kiai parts felt a bit weird.

[Easy]

01:21:242 (4) - Nothing big, but I think it plays better if you remove a repeat here and add a note (with NC) instead. You'll probably need to rearrange a bit, but I think having the player press something on the downbeat here is important.

[Normal]

00:03:032 (1) - This spinner is a bit too fast for a Normal imo. Your drain and AR are low enough that it should be fine to remove it and leave a gap here.
00:25:886 (3) - I'd add a repeat on this slider and rearrange 4 to make 4 easier to catch and read; the 3/2 delay might throw people off guard.
00:31:422 (2) - The sudden transition to vocals is a bit weird; maybe just a note at 00:31:600 would be better to settle the player into the 1/1 beat after.
00:45:701 (3) - This slider's rhythm is a bit weird; try something else here?

[Hard]

00:30:350 - Add a note to the stack? There's vocals here.
00:43:024 (3) - The overlap doesn't look too good; maybe you can ignore DS here and put it somewhere where there's no overlap?
00:48:737 (2) - The stack under the slider doesn't work too well here because the player has to stop moving to hit it, and it's not really a comfortable place in the music to stop. I would just space these regularly.

Feels a bit difficult overall; sort of like an easier Insane instead of a medium Hard.

[Insane]

00:11:243 (3,1,2) - This overlap isn't very neat; I'd space them out a bit so they don't touch.
00:40:703 (1,2,3) - ^ Move these a bit farther from the previous combo. Not a big fan of the overall presentation of this 1/1 slider section because the sliders cut each other off at weird spacings.
00:44:631 (3,1,2) - The flow across these isn't very good
00:47:487 (4) - These jumps are a bit too aggressive for the music; maybe put this under the head of 2 instead of the tail?
00:55:171 (2) - Don't conceal this under 5; it's hard to pick out, especially since your combo colours aren't very strong. Having it completely blank 00:53:742 (3) - would be better, but there are other options too.
00:56:957 (1) - ^, these two combo colours are also very similar...
00:57:492 (3) - It would make more sense to stack this under the head of 00:56:957 (1) or slightly to the left of it.
01:11:599 (5,1) - The fact that 5 bends away from 1 plays awkwardly. If you want to maintain the effect, shorten 5 by 1/2 so it's a natural curve and add a note where the tail was previously instead.

This was fun, but several jumps felt awkward when I was playing it.

Send me a forum PM once you've looked at this!

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

- The Japanese show name, プリズマ☆イリヤ, would be good to add to tags. fixed
- The lack of whistles in the kiai parts felt a bit weird. Yeah,,but I hope that is no problem... ;w;

[Easy]

01:21:242 (4) - Nothing big, but I think it plays better if you remove a repeat here and add a note (with NC) instead. You'll probably need to rearrange a bit, but I think having the player press something on the downbeat here is important. fixed

[Normal]

00:03:032 (1) - This spinner is a bit too fast for a Normal imo. Your drain and AR are low enough that it should be fine to remove it and leave a gap here. In Normal diff, this spinner is not short IMO. I want to keep current spinner..Sorry
00:25:886 (3) - I'd add a repeat on this slider and rearrange 4 to make 4 easier to catch and read; the 3/2 delay might throw people off guard. fixed
00:31:422 (2) - The sudden transition to vocals is a bit weird; maybe just a note at 00:31:600 would be better to settle the player into the 1/1 beat after. Current rhythm is better to me..Sorry
00:45:701 (3) - This slider's rhythm is a bit weird; try something else here? Well, current rhythm fit with vocal to me..Sorry

[Hard]

00:30:350 - Add a note to the stack? There's vocals here. I want the blank at here. I don't know why, just I follow my feels xD
00:43:024 (3) - The overlap doesn't look too good; maybe you can ignore DS here and put it somewhere where there's no overlap? Eeeh,,I like overlaps like this xD
00:48:737 (2) - The stack under the slider doesn't work too well here because the player has to stop moving to hit it, and it's not really a comfortable place in the music to stop. I would just space these regularly. (1,2,1) are fit with vocal to me..Sorry

Feels a bit difficult overall; sort of like an easier Insane instead of a medium Hard. lol

[Insane]

00:11:243 (3,1,2) - This overlap isn't very neat; I'd space them out a bit so they don't touch. I want to keep,,Sorry
00:40:703 (1,2,3) - ^ Move these a bit farther from the previous combo. Not a big fan of the overall presentation of this 1/1 slider section because the sliders cut each other off at weird spacings. fixed
00:44:631 (3,1,2) - The flow across these isn't very good Hmm..this is not bad flow IMO
00:47:487 (4) - These jumps are a bit too aggressive for the music; maybe put this under the head of 2 instead of the tail? fixed the (3). Cuz (4,1)'s jump is following the vocal.
00:55:171 (2) - Don't conceal this under 5; it's hard to pick out, especially since your combo colours aren't very strong. Having it completely blank 00:53:742 (3) - would be better, but there are other options too. These overlaps are KIAI's pattern. I want to use different pattern between non-KIAI and KIAI. Sorry
00:56:957 (1) - ^, these two combo colours are also very similar... Instead, changed the colors.
00:57:492 (3) - It would make more sense to stack this under the head of 00:56:957 (1) or slightly to the left of it. Current stack is better to me, Sorry
01:11:599 (5,1) - The fact that 5 bends away from 1 plays awkwardly. If you want to maintain the effect, shorten 5 by 1/2 so it's a natural curve and add a note where the tail was previously instead. This is intentional flow, sorry

This was fun, but several jumps felt awkward when I was playing it. haha xP

Send me a forum PM once you've looked at this!

Thanks for modding~

Hi, Karia

Please check artist before getting Ranked !


The artist's official website : http://iwill-music.co.jp/choucho/discography.html

As you can look that " ちょうちょ " is not Official name. So you must use " ChouCho "

Good Luck ~

alacat wrote:

Hi, Karia

Please check artist before getting Ranked !

img

The artist's official website : http://iwill-music.co.jp/choucho/discography.html

As you can look that " ちょうちょ " is not Official name. So you must use " ChouCho "

Good Luck ~

Thanks alacat. <3

Sorry about the delay Karia, lemme know once this has been changed.

alacat wrote:

Hi, Karia

Please check artist before getting Ranked !

img

The artist's official website : http://iwill-music.co.jp/choucho/discography.html

As you can look that " ちょうちょ " is not Official name. So you must use " ChouCho "

Good Luck ~

fixed, thanks xD

Alrighty~

Missing ArtistUnicode.

Lach wrote:

Missing ArtistUnicode.

Looks fine to me...

http://puu.sh/7zejx.png
http://puu.sh/7zenl.png

Kytoxid wrote:

Lach wrote:

Missing ArtistUnicode.

Looks fine to me...

http://puu.sh/7zejx.png
http://puu.sh/7zenl.png

Not what I meant. The correct ArtistUnicode field should be "ちょうちょ".

alacat wrote:

Hi, Karia

Please check artist before getting Ranked !

img

The artist's official website : http://iwill-music.co.jp/choucho/discography.html

As you can look that " ちょうちょ " is not Official name. So you must use " ChouCho "

Good Luck ~

We changed it based on information from the artist's site.

Except at the top of the page it says ChouCho and right next to it, ちょうちょ.

Lach wrote:

Except at the top of the page it says ChouCho and right next to it, ちょうちょ.

I interpreted it as the larger ChouCho text is the "official" artist name, and the smaller ちょうちょ is an interpretation of the name for Japanese readers. I usually treat ArtistUnicode as the field for the "official" name, and Artist as the field for the official name with Unicode characters reinterpreted/stripped.

I see where the grey area is though, and to be honest, I'd be fine with it either way. If you want, we can open a discussion in Ranking Criteria for cases like this one so we can have a better interpretation of how to use the fields.

Lach wrote:

Not what I meant. The correct ArtistUnicode field should be "ちょうちょ".

No, This is fine. " ちょうちょ " is not Official name.

Please check my post and Wikipedia.

After doing a bit of digging, and by that, I mean 100% illegally downloading the album for the scans, it would seem that she goes by "ChouCho" on some of her works, and "ちょうちょ" on others. And as it appears, this is one of the former. Quite a bit confusing when everyone else credited in the production is written in japanese, hah.


About calling her actual given name unofficial, it's a bit of a strange way of saying it's just not used in the scenario.

Sorry for the trouble.

Aside from all that, congrats Karia!! \:D/

boom, totally confused
whatever, congratz~

Choucho had uploaded her songs to NicoNicoDouga as ちょうちょ before she became a singer. That's why.
Well the current official artist name is surely "Choucho".

Gratz, Karia

Thanks, Kytoxid and everyone xD

Grats~

Thanks~

congratz!!~

Thanks!!~

Please change short ver to tv size please

ifancysmeone wrote:

Please change short ver to tv size please

Well, 'Short Ver.' is right I think.