No comment = fixed.IamKwaN wrote:
Hi, from my queue here.General
- Clear \:D/
Insane
- 00:10:400 (3,4) - This DS makes me feel uncomfortable when playing D: I would prefer stacking 00:10:933 (4) with 00:10:400 (3) .
- 00:15:903 (5,6) - This would be nice if you combine them into one slider only to follow the electric guitar. And u also follow it before at 00:14:661 (1). If you keep it, try not to use jumps, because the pitch of the sound doesn't rise so much.
- 00:16:436 (7) - Makes this as curvy shape too, like that of 00:15:548 (4,6,8,9). Remapped.
- 00:26:909 (3,4,5) - This jump sounds weird. The tone of vocal keeps low and raises at 00:27:619 (6) . So, I may recommend you to place jump between 00:27:264 (5,6) or do not apply jumps. This jump looks small so I suppose it would be fine.
- 00:29:217 (2) - The jump here is not consistent that of 00:26:377 (2) but the rhythm should be the same. Try CTRL+G?
- 00:31:524 (6,7) - Jump is not that fit too at the end of the vocal imo. Or I prefer sth like stacking 00:31:702 (7) with 00:32:412 (1) or somewhere upper but not on the reverse slider coz the sounds like going up.
- Um.. I also think that jumps between 00:26:022 - 00:58:684 are too frequent and some jumps are forced to be there to fit the symmetry pattern which makes the kiai and prelude differ little. D: I don't know whether others would share the same feeling with me, but I just post my little opinion here.
- 00:44:483 (5,6) - Combine them into one slider too? Sorry no, here is drum sound so I justfollowed it.
- 00:57:797 (2,3,4,5,6) - Suggestion on the jumps, the sound becomes larger and larger, try to use increasing spacing? I just suppose current jumping would be beter.
- 00:58:507 (6) - finish? Maybe clap is enouhgh.
Hard
- 00:07:737 (5,6) - The flow seems bad imo D:
- 00:26:377 (2,3) - I have 2 suggestions on the rhythm: Keep current way since it followed vocal.
SPOILER1. Change 00:26:909 (3) to 2 circles which better fit vocal imo
2.- 00:31:524 (6,7) - Reverse jump here doesn't sound nice imo, see what I mention in Insane.
- 00:35:075 (3) - The middle node only follows the softsoftsoft piano sound. Try doing a pause here? I don't want to make a blank here.
- 00:43:951 (2) - Would this be better without a slider starting at red tick but not following vocal? Another changed.
Normal
- Kiai is much easier than the prelude makes me feel surprised lol
- 00:16:081 (3,4) - Nazi, blanket here can definitely be improved.
- 00:57:974 (2) - I wonder if this would be too hard in a Normal. Since the slider is short, the reverse sign is quite difficult to see clearly which may cause a readability problem. Use sliders with anchors instead?! Maybe current is allowed because of following blank.
- 00:59:394 (3) - NC is an alternative to indicate the pause of vocal and instruments.
- Nothing to say about EZ.
Yay, good luck!
Thanks for modding.