[Easy]
- 00:17:457 (4,5) - Why do such complicated rhythm for the easiest diff? I'd prefer if you used a slider here anyways. http://puu.sh/6GNUj.jpg
- 00:23:114 (1,2,3,4) - Try to form a square here, at its current status it really doesn't form any nice pattern and overall can be seen as random placement. try something like this : http://puu.sh/6GO0b.jpg rather than your current placement.
- 00:25:377 (1) - It would be better if you could place the slider like this : http://puu.sh/6GO4j.jpg as well as the other notes, I feel it flows much better here than what your using right now.
- 00:33:864 (4,5) - Erm, can you move both notes down? and make sure this note here : 00:34:996 (5) - is at the same place as 00:32:732 (2) - I want to help you improve your arrangement and placement.
- 00:40:087 (5) - Can you make this blanket better the next note? something like this : http://puu.sh/6GOdJ.jpg would work really great for here.
- 00:44:048 (5) - You need to move this down more so notes 00:43:482 (4,5,6) - form a perfect straight line here.
- 00:50:271 (1) - Just make this a straight slider, there's no need for the curved midpoint here.
- 00:51:969 (3) - Why don't you make this blanket the previous note? like this : http://puu.sh/6GOlE.jpg would work great these three notes 00:50:271 (1,2,3) - should look like this : http://puu.sh/6GOpj.jpg
- 00:54:798 (1,2,3,4,5) - Okay this whole pattern can be changed to look better : I prefer you do this http://puu.sh/6GOtF.jpg and http://puu.sh/6GOuj.jpg
- 00:07:839 (1) - Don't make it curve, it's totally not needed here, the straight slider will still get the flow you wanted here.
- 00:14:628 (1) - You can make this blanket better, to something like this : http://puu.sh/6GOE8.jpg works wonders.
- 00:37:824 (2,3,1) - I haven't seen these two sliders be used as often lol but okay, looks fine anyway but they are pretty much old-style mapping sliders XD its fine if you want to keep them
- 00:48:857 (2,3,4,5) - The rhythm here can be simplified into this rhythm and pattern, you'll probably like it but here : http://puu.sh/6GOQq.jpg should try that instead of this more difficult rhythm.
- 00:53:383 (2,3,4,5) - ^ try this : http://puu.sh/6GOUQ.jpg
- Really old style mapping XDD let's see what I find
- 00:31:318 (2) - This slider would work better if you turned it into 3 circles, it's rather more comfortable to play something difficult after here anyways. like this http://puu.sh/6GQ0y.jpg
- 00:47:584 - Add a note here owo? it feels like you do triples alot in kiai and I think a triplet here would be good
- 00:54:373 - ^ Same as above, a note here wouldn't hurt
- 00:13:921 (8) - Uhhh can you make this note stack with 00:14:062 (9) - ? It feels little unnecessary (meaning to add some spice and so it shouldn't have any movement)
- 00:28:206 (3,4,5) - These notes don't look perfectly symmetrical maybe try to make them a little bit more like that? you've done really good at keeping everything nice and symmetrical the whole map anyways so why stop here?
- 00:38:107 (5) - Maybe don't make this slider touch the previous slider? it looks rather messy in your part especially in the placement point of view, that being said can you try to do this? http://puu.sh/6GQxJ.jpg that would be better.
- You can make the jumps much more big really.
- 00:03:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to aim for a more difficult pattern, which can be something like this : http://puu.sh/6GQLs.jpg Which seems to be more matching with this difficulty (bigger spacing) but also better pattern here.
- 00:07:839 (1,2) - Move this down more, it feels way too close to the next note >.> Something like this : http://puu.sh/6GQQR.jpg I recommend you do both in order for consistency.
- 00:09:677 (1) - More bigger spacing again please, it'll make it feel more like the hardest diff : http://puu.sh/6GQW9.jpg
- 00:13:355 (3,4,5) - Try this : http://puu.sh/6GQZp.jpg as said before countless times.
- 00:27:075 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is really harsh, I can see a better pattern here with still the same jump and coolness but less harsh, probably like this : http://puu.sh/6GR7G.jpg
- 00:45:179 (1,2,3,4) - Form a simple square pattern for the same reason as above, it's a little harsh for this diff D: like this : http://puu.sh/6GRcz.jpg
- 00:47:442 (1,2,3,4) - More stuff like this orz, anyways try this? http://puu.sh/6GRhQ.jpg