Recommended by Raiku, so I'll have a quick look.
General
- Set "梶浦由記" as the Artist. Kajiura Yuki is correct as the romanised artist.
- The album title should not be in the Source field, so move it to tags instead. According to Wikipedia, the title is "Mai-Otome Original Soundtrack Vol. 2 ~ Otome no Inori (Otome's Prayers)"
- Because the song is mostly calm, it doesn't really need kiai sections. I would suggest removing them, or if not make them fully consistent between difficulties.
- You can uncheck "Letterbox during breaks" on all difficulties for consistency. This is optional since there are no breaks.
Insane
- AIBat marks some notes as having very small snapping errors, so try resnapping all notes.
- Looks technically rankable, but I would encourage you to continue the flow more and leave less spaces between notes that last for a full beat. 00:25:540 to 00:36:481 is one of the best sections in the map because you can see the timeline is filled in each 1/2 tick. Of course, you don't have to do this for the entire map but oftentimes it helps everything come together.
- Consider using OD8 to vary the scoreboards more, since the map is short and relatively easy to use DT/NC + HD on.
Forseen's Hard
- Tick Rate 2 would help keep the flow of the map during sliders.
00:04:717 (1,2,3,4) - Since the AR is low, back-and-forth patterns like this are confusing to read.
00:17:952 (3,4,5) - The blanket between (3) and (4) could be improved. I would also take (5) out from under the end of (4) since it doesn't need to be hidden like that.
00:58:364 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Really big jump compared to the rest of the map, change the pattern to make the spacing more consistent here. It can still be something different for the end of the map, but it also needs to cohere with the rest of it.
Railgun's Normal
00:37:187 (1) - Disable grid snap and move to x:400, y:158 to make the notes line up properly.
00:48:481 (1) - Remove the whistle from the body of the slider.
00:55:540 (1) - Move to x:134, y:282.
Easy
00:14:599 (1,2,3) - Improve the slider blanketing here. It should look more like this.
That's about it. I would like to see Insane improved and cleaned up some before going for a bubble or rank, and since this appears to be your first map going for ranking there's no rush. Collect some more mods and let me know at some point when you think it's all good, or if you want some more advice. Good luck and happy mapping.
General
- Set "梶浦由記" as the Artist. Kajiura Yuki is correct as the romanised artist.
- The album title should not be in the Source field, so move it to tags instead. According to Wikipedia, the title is "Mai-Otome Original Soundtrack Vol. 2 ~ Otome no Inori (Otome's Prayers)"
- Because the song is mostly calm, it doesn't really need kiai sections. I would suggest removing them, or if not make them fully consistent between difficulties.
- You can uncheck "Letterbox during breaks" on all difficulties for consistency. This is optional since there are no breaks.
Insane
- AIBat marks some notes as having very small snapping errors, so try resnapping all notes.
- Looks technically rankable, but I would encourage you to continue the flow more and leave less spaces between notes that last for a full beat. 00:25:540 to 00:36:481 is one of the best sections in the map because you can see the timeline is filled in each 1/2 tick. Of course, you don't have to do this for the entire map but oftentimes it helps everything come together.
- Consider using OD8 to vary the scoreboards more, since the map is short and relatively easy to use DT/NC + HD on.
Forseen's Hard
- Tick Rate 2 would help keep the flow of the map during sliders.
00:04:717 (1,2,3,4) - Since the AR is low, back-and-forth patterns like this are confusing to read.
00:17:952 (3,4,5) - The blanket between (3) and (4) could be improved. I would also take (5) out from under the end of (4) since it doesn't need to be hidden like that.
00:58:364 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Really big jump compared to the rest of the map, change the pattern to make the spacing more consistent here. It can still be something different for the end of the map, but it also needs to cohere with the rest of it.
Railgun's Normal
00:37:187 (1) - Disable grid snap and move to x:400, y:158 to make the notes line up properly.
00:48:481 (1) - Remove the whistle from the body of the slider.
00:55:540 (1) - Move to x:134, y:282.
Easy
00:14:599 (1,2,3) - Improve the slider blanketing here. It should look more like this.
That's about it. I would like to see Insane improved and cleaned up some before going for a bubble or rank, and since this appears to be your first map going for ranking there's no rush. Collect some more mods and let me know at some point when you think it's all good, or if you want some more advice. Good luck and happy mapping.