This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 25 Februari 2015 at 14:08:50

Artist: Afgan
Title: Jodoh Pasti Bertemu
Tags: L1ve To Love Afgansyah Reza Cut Version Trinity Optima Production Bahasa Indonesia Indonesian Susilo Sakata kapursirih
BPM: 68
Filesize: 3205kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (2,26 stars, 145 notes)
2. Normal (1,62 stars, 109 notes)

Download: Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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A beautiful song from Afgan❤
Slider art inspired by Niva

Check out Mania version here! and Catch the Beat here!
Another Indonesian song click here!

Normal 100% by me
Galau 100% by me
SB 100% by Susilo Sakata

#1

saya muncul dari #modreq huehuehue
goodluck mako >///<

Sangat baik :3
sayang lagunya kurang panjang Hohoho.

[Normal]
00:45:970 (6,1) - Blanketnya dibikin begini
lalu objek2 selanjutnya dideketin jadi DSnya balik 1,20 lagi
00:47:735 (2,3) - Sama ^
01:11:118 (1) - kurasa bagusan kalo Finish nya dihapus

[Hard]
DSnya Variasi, ada yg 1.85, 1.81, 2.2, 0.91, tapi aturan DSnya 2.0
mungkin dibikin lebih konsisten biar bagus. Untuk jump it's okay, tapi aku masih bingung DS utamanya berapa?
Tapi overall bagus kok

Maaf kurang banyak, soalnya dah cukup bagus Moga sukses

Hello Mako
to your queue m4m round
Sorry if i'm not a good modder
But i hope it helps

Nice i love the map and the song too it kinda reminds me of something lol
even i don't understand the language
maybe you could add a subtle translate in english
Good luck

M4M, Ill try my best!

NORMAL

00:01:853 (2) - Think it'll look neater if this and the slider was aligned together so I suggest moving this to (124,304)

00:05:382 (2) - Same suggestion as ^, but instead move to (392,304)

00:15:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is a good pattern but too many 1/2 circles can make it a bit hard for Normal players, so I suggest changing some to sliders e.g.


00:38:030 (x) - suggest adding a note here because there is vocal at this point

00:44:206 (2,3,4,5,6) - Again, good pattern but too many 1/2 circles. use above as reference

01:00:529 (7) - May look better if this is curved a bit

HARD

00:56:559 (x) - Add a note here to continue the flow of the music and the beats

01:14:647 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Its probably not necessary to NC all these notes. since there's 8 of them, try splitting into combos of 4

01:21:706 (1) - Would be really awesome if you made the heart close~

01:28:764 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - same as 01:14:647

Beautiful song & beautiful mapping good luck!

Hi, mau mod nihh,, tpi maaf klo gak puas yaa...




Lagunya bagus,, tapi kurang panjang...
Moga mapnya ranked yaa.. (map ku juga... )

Thank you for modding
Updated

iseng nyoba, well :3
Normal
REPLAY: http://puu.sh/6QYBI.osr

Hard
REPLAY: http://puu.sh/6QYBd.osr

It can ranked easily +1

Rey-volution wrote:

iseng nyoba, well :3
Normal

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/6QYBI.osr

Hard

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/6QYBd.osr

It can ranked easily +1

Aduh makasih kak bintangnya
Semangat !

Hi mod from modding Q~

Man!! I really love this song!!

[General]
I don't know if just having 2 star normal and 3.5 star hard is rankable. Make sure you check if you are unsure!

[Normal]
00:12:882 (3) - Why not make it a smooth curve?
00:19:941 (3) - 00:48:176 (3) - Yes, I know. 1 degree, but it really looks better 01:12:441 (4) - ^
01:15:971 (2) - delete NC
01:16:853 (1) - NC
01:34:059 (2) - x:368 y:36

I love this song and map!! I'll shoot a star XD

Good luck!
Hope my modding helped >~<

No Dap wrote:

Hi mod from modding Q~

Man!! I really love this song!! Yes!!

[General]
I don't know if just having 2 star normal and 3.5 star hard is rankable. Make sure you check if you are unsure! I my self not really sure why, but maybe because of the BPM so It's only have 2 stars on Normal and 3.5 stars on Hard, and I don't want to overmapped that just because to raise the stars rating

[Normal]
00:12:882 (3) - Why not make it a smooth curve? I want to try an elbow curve~
00:19:941 (3) - Ok

SPOILER

00:48:176 (3) - Yes, I know. 1 degree, but it really looks better Ok

SPOILER

01:12:441 (4) - ^ That one not necesary
01:15:971 (2) - delete NC Ok
01:16:853 (1) - NC Ok
01:34:059 (2) - x:368 y:36 Ok

I love this song and map!! I'll shoot a star XD Thanks XD

Good luck!
Hope my modding helped >~<

Ofcourse your mod very helping

Ello, M4M mod o̿ ̭ o̿
Cute song
Hope this helps!

m4m from your queue owo!

[General]
Your offset is slightly delayed, try 512
I not 100% sure about this, but is it rankable for a slider's head or tail to be silent (5%) volume?

[Hard]
00:13:747 (5,6) - Just a suggestion http://puu.sh/6RULV.jpg
00:18:159 (1) - Slider end point move to x240 y176 **just something nazi
00:28:747 (1) - Suggest you to do it like that since the previous slider's curve is sharper and it can't match this, a back flow will be nice http://puu.sh/6RUPz.jpg
00:43:747 (2,3,4) - A better pattern could be apply here, flow isn't nice in low bpm
~lagu cantik owo! low bpm won't hve much mistake imo tho :pp but there are many nazii blanket and some i nvr point them out, juz care it yourself :pp

[Normal]
00:32:294 (7) - NC
00:44:647 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe you can change them into 2 1/2 slider?
01:00:530 (7) - NC
01:12:441 (4,5) - blanket hu
~same2 je dng hard, nazi sini nazi situ je kalo aku point it out :ppp

good luck!
its kinda rare to see indo song x) nice

M4M from my queue~ owo
[General]
-The combo colours don't fit, I'll give you another one~ :3

[Colours]
Combo1 : 192,35,31
Combo2 : 236,206,179
Combo3 : 125,91,66
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

-I feel like the SB is done, so I guess you should move it to pending.
[Normal]
00:16:412 (3,4,5) -They look hard, add a slider at 00:16:412 till 00:17:294
00:34:941 (1) -Finish.
00:44:647 (3,4,5) -Remove them and add a slider at 00:44:647 till 00:45:530
00:47:735 -Remove note maybe.
01:05:382 (2,3) -Remove stack please.
01:08:912 (2) -^
[Hard]
00:02:071 -Break.

TESTPLAY:

NORMAL:

Really fun to play, but there's some notes you have to move.

HARD:

That stack at end is so confusing, try to move it. Its really hard to get 1000 in the first spinner cause there's a slider at 00:07:588 and the spinner ends at 00:07:368

GL ~ ! c:

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, M4M mod o̿ ̭ o̿
[notice][General]
*Don't forget to turn on the epilepsy warning!

Why? There's nothing colourful in this map, its only lyrics, so, no need for epilepsy warning. :/

m4m from ur queueeee

if you find this mod absolutely useless don't bother modding my map

[Hard]

00:00:530 (1) - improve this blanket on the end of (2)
00:04:059 (1) - ^

00:39:353 (1) - improve blanket (abit) (really nazi) (forgive me but ur map is good already) <-- if you want just ignore this
00:52:588 (5) - ^
00:53:471 (1) - ^
00:54:353 (2) - ^
00:57:882 (2) - ^
ehh there's more but this is getting too picky and you can probably find them youself

This would be a pain to fix now but just for future note, can i recommend you to double your bpm? you have a bunch of things ending on blue ticks that would end on red or white ticks if you had a higher bpm

try to make ur spacing a bit more consistent.
ie.
you have this
00:24:353 (5) -
then you have something like this
00:26:118 (2) -

00:49:941 (1) - here too, this isnt distance snapped even if you have 2x spacing

00:01:853 - 00:04:059 - Add a short break here? just so ppl don't lose too much hp

00:29:647 (2,3) - these aren't parallel (ignore if its meant to be like that)
00:31:412 (4,1) - ^

01:13:765 (4,1) - not stacked properly (disable grid snap)

01:16:411 (1,2,3,4) - why the change in spacing? can be confusing

01:17:735 (4) - placement looks a bit ugly imo but should be fine



[Easy]

00:46:412 (1) - improve blanket (i was hoping not to have to check this but ur map is already pretty good so im going to get into the fine detail stuff)
00:48:176 (3) - ^
01:12:441 (4) - ^
00:19:941 (3) -

01:12:441 (4,1) - these don't look well together

http://puu.sh/6ZK2x.osu

diff akuuu

-hitsound belum selesai
-NC belum diapa2in

SB 100% and move to pending
Updated!

Susilo Sakata wrote:

http://puu.sh/6ZK2x.osu

diff akuuu

-hitsound belum selesai
-NC belum diapa2in

Thanks but I think the mapset is no need two Normal diff my dear, lagi pula itu kan belum selesai

offset-8
[Hard]
00:04:059 (1,2) - repeat 00:00:530 (1,2) - ?
00:13:765 (5) - Ctrl+G?
00:27:000 (3) - ^?
01:19:500 (3) - 140,84?
[Normal]
00:18:177 (1) - not fit 2 perfectly
GJ

From my modding queue~
From M4M. Nicely mapped~


Overall, just look for places where you can replace a straight slider with a curvy one by listening to the music. Very beautiful song
Have fun mapping~!

. . . itu kenapa tagsnya galau wkwkwk

cuma iseng aja

[normal]
1. 01:00:530 (7) - Sebenernya sih lebih prefer dia copas dari 00:58:765 (5) - , ngebentuk huruf S > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366224
2. 01:14:206 (6) - Ga ada masalah, sih, stack di slider end, cuma gue ngerasa ini bisa dibikin circle flow dengan merubah posisi circle ini ke slider start dan dilanjutkan dengan slider lurus / serah kamu > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366229 (terserah itu setelah (6) mau ke arah mana, blanket slider atau kreasi kamu sendiri)
3. 01:34:059 (2) - Walau blanket itu memang imut, tapi gue lebih sreg kalau arahnya dibuat melenceng kayak begini > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366233 (ga harus, sih)

[hard]
1. 00:16:412 (3) - Flownya kaku banget. Kalau mau blanket, menurut aku, lebih enaknya kalo dibuat flow circle, sementara itu sisa tempat udah sekarat, jadi bikin gelombang aja kayak gini > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366245
2. 00:25:235 (1,2,3) - copasan slider lurusnya aneh dan slider curvenya gue kurang suka, walau aku tau itu kenapa begitu. Yang pasti itu (2) turunin biar ga terlalu kaku. Slider curvenya terserah mau dibiarin atau engga, tapi saran gue buat slider sendok > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366261 (jangan hiraukan timingnya hehe)
3. 00:29:647 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,4) - Straight slider spam
4. 00:38:471 (5,1) - Kurang sreg lagi, karena patah jadi kurang menyenangkan hati. Di sini justru enaknya slider 00:37:588 (4) - dicopas, rearrange dikit dapet flow yang menawan hati > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366270
5. 00:42:000 (5,6,1) - Slider start ini bisa dibuat segaris biar di editor kelihatan lebih unyu. Gunakan slider untuk membantu (via change slider into stream, sisanya tebak sendiri) > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366277
6. 00:59:647 (4) - Yang menurut gue paling kontras nabraknya. Mumpung 00:57:882 (2) - ngebentuk blanket dari bawah, coba 00:59:647 (4) - ngebuat blanket dari atas, bentuk dasar patternnya kayak gini > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366289 ((TL;DR ctrl+g terus alusin dikit))
7. 01:21:706 (1) - Slider hati yang perlu diratapi bentuknya, kalau slidernya dicopas dan diflip horizontalin . . . > http://puu.sh/79UrA.jpg ((obvious bikin patah hati)) biar cepet ini kode slidernya :

256,272,81706,6,0,B|172:253|140:192|136:120|187:93|232:104|256:132|256:132|280:104|314:100|353:109|368:155|349:208|331:227,1,480,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

*Sayang sekali durasinya pendek jadi ga bisa buat yang sexy ((((((((((
8. 01:27:883 (4) - Diinget" soal slider sejenis yang kayak gini di nomor" sebelumnya (males ketik ulang)
9. 01:28:764 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Curvenya kurang sempurna . . . manfaatkan slider > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366325
10. 01:35:824 (5) - Mending dipisah daripada distack :s

Perlu diingat karena berhubung kebanyakan mod gue merubah slider & posisi, kalau mau diikuti jangan lupa merubah posisi not selanjutnya.
Jangan lupa karena ini modpost, ga harus semuanya diterima.

Met galau bejoeanq

hi here a noob mod

• [normal]
  01:13:765 (5,6,1,2,1,2,1) - change the 6 from the slider end to the slider start of slider 4 and put note like the image for more flow....
  
  
  
  [hard]
  nothing...

well in my opinion about the flow .. i dont like to see sudden backward movements in normal like 01:12:441 (4,5,6,1) - and 01:19:941 (2,3,1,2) - ..... in hard and insane i like them but i think normals need more of a easy to read flow patterns

Saturnalize wrote:

. . . itu kenapa tagsnya galau wkwkwk

cuma iseng aja

[normal]
1. 01:00:530 (7) - Sebenernya sih lebih prefer dia copas dari 00:58:765 (5) - , ngebentuk huruf S > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366224 Ok
2. 01:14:206 (6) - Ga ada masalah, sih, stack di slider end, cuma gue ngerasa ini bisa dibikin circle flow dengan merubah posisi circle ini ke slider start dan dilanjutkan dengan slider lurus / serah kamu > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366229 (terserah itu setelah (6) mau ke arah mana, blanket slider atau kreasi kamu sendiri) Ok with diffrent patern
3. 01:34:059 (2) - Walau blanket itu memang imut, tapi gue lebih sreg kalau arahnya dibuat melenceng kayak begini > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366233 (ga harus, sih) Ok with diffrent patern

[hard]
1. 00:16:412 (3) - Flownya kaku banget. Kalau mau blanket, menurut aku, lebih enaknya kalo dibuat flow circle, sementara itu sisa tempat udah sekarat, jadi bikin gelombang aja kayak gini > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366245
2. 00:25:235 (1,2,3) - copasan slider lurusnya aneh dan slider curvenya gue kurang suka, walau aku tau itu kenapa begitu. Yang pasti itu (2) turunin biar ga terlalu kaku. Slider curvenya terserah mau dibiarin atau engga, tapi saran gue buat slider sendok > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366261 (jangan hiraukan timingnya hehe)
3. 00:29:647 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,4) - Straight slider spam
4. 00:38:471 (5,1) - Kurang sreg lagi, karena patah jadi kurang menyenangkan hati. Di sini justru enaknya slider 00:37:588 (4) - dicopas, rearrange dikit dapet flow yang menawan hati > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366270
5. 00:42:000 (5,6,1) - Slider start ini bisa dibuat segaris biar di editor kelihatan lebih unyu. Gunakan slider untuk membantu (via change slider into stream, sisanya tebak sendiri) > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366277
6. 00:59:647 (4) - Yang menurut gue paling kontras nabraknya. Mumpung 00:57:882 (2) - ngebentuk blanket dari bawah, coba 00:59:647 (4) - ngebuat blanket dari atas, bentuk dasar patternnya kayak gini > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366289 ((TL;DR ctrl+g terus alusin dikit))
7. 01:21:706 (1) - Slider hati yang perlu diratapi bentuknya, kalau slidernya dicopas dan diflip horizontalin . . . > http://puu.sh/79UrA.jpg ((obvious bikin patah hati)) biar cepet ini kode slidernya :

256,272,81706,6,0,B|172:253|140:192|136:120|187:93|232:104|256:132|256:132|280:104|314:100|353:109|368:155|349:208|331:227,1,480,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

*Sayang sekali durasinya pendek jadi ga bisa buat yang sexy ((((((((((
8. 01:27:883 (4) - Diinget" soal slider sejenis yang kayak gini di nomor" sebelumnya (males ketik ulang)
9. 01:28:764 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Curvenya kurang sempurna . . . manfaatkan slider > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1366325
10. 01:35:824 (5) - Mending dipisah daripada distack :s

Perlu diingat karena berhubung kebanyakan mod gue merubah slider & posisi, kalau mau diikuti jangan lupa merubah posisi not selanjutnya.
Jangan lupa karena ini modpost, ga harus semuanya diterima.

Met galau bejoeanq

Aduh maaf loli telat bgt bales modnya, working on hard not yet updated

Updated! after a long time :p
Change Hard into Galau instead

Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

• [General]

1. Missing Skin Files :
   
   cursortrail.png
2. Unused Image Files :
   
   cursormiddle.png
3. Tags :
   
   double tag : Indonesia ( remove )
   
   add tags : L1ve To Love ( album ) , 2013 ( date make ) Afgansyah Reza ( real name artist ) , Cut Version ( cause this song is Cut Vers. )
   
   remove : Love Song ( no need )
4. Audio :
   
   - Are you using silent slider or something ? Using audio under 20% is not rankable
   
   - Why this timing placing here ? Not in tail of slider ? or this making silent slider ?
   
   

• [ Normal]

1. 00:19:941 (3) - add whistle ( head ) change clap to whistle ( tail ). it's following like 00:48:176 (3)
2. 00:40:676 (2,3) - straighten
3. 00:47:735 (2,3) - blanked
4. 01:00:530 (1) - more curve ?
5. 01:16:853 (1) - change to clap ? ( tail )
6. 01:30:970 (3) - ^

• [ Galau]

1. OD+0,5
2. 00:00:530 (1) - add Finish ( head ) same as Normal ~
3. 00:04:059 (1) - ^
4. 00:39:353 (1) - add whistle ( head )
5. 00:42:441 (8) - the whistle should here not 00:42:662 (9)
6. 00:45:530 (4) - add whistle ( head ) same as 00:43:765 (2)
7. 00:50:824 (1) - add whistle
8. 00:52:588 (4) - remove clap ( head )
9. 01:01:854 (3) - remove whistle ?
10. 01:20:824 (4) - why this clap sound weird ? ( head )
11. 01:29:206 (2) - remove whistle ?

Nice song , Nice mapset , Nice BG , Nice SB! Love it!
Take my Star >w</
GL! Mako Sakata

From my queue~

[General]
You have "Indonesia" in your tags twice. Remove one and change the other to Indonesian.
Relatively small circles make me cry. Nothing I can do about it though, it's your decision :[

[Normal]
01:14:206 (6) - That 6 under the end of 4 might be hard to read.
01:17:735 (2) - Sliders start on soft parts and end on noticeable beats. Try the pattern I put on 1:29:206 here too.
01:17:735 (2) - Put a single note here and start the slider on the big white tick because of the vocals.
01:21:706 (1) - Another note on top of a slider end :[
01:29:206 (1,2,3) - I'm still not too fond of sliders that start on red ticks in a normal. Maybe this pattern would play better?
01:31:853 (4) - The vocals start on the reverse arrow, remove the repeat and make it start on the big white tick.
01:35:824 (1) - Spinning fast doesn't feel right here because the ending is slow. I'd say replace it with a slider like in Galau.

[Galau]
00:07:588 (1) - I'd like to see this note closer to the center, that makes it easier to tell the timing on it.
00:45:530 (4) - This flows kind of weirdly, I would change to something like this.
01:21:706 (1,2,3) - The flow between these are super awkward. I'd get rid of a little bit of aesthetics for better flow.
01:35:824 (1) - SV is too fast, too suddenly. Maybe make a heart shaped like the one in the insane for petal-go-round. It'll be shorter, so you can turn down the SV rate.

Really beautiful song, solid map too. Hope I helped a little, and good luck with rank! :]

Sky Trias wrote:

Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

• [General]

1. Missing Skin Files :
   
   cursortrail.png
2. Unused Image Files :
   
   cursormiddle.png
3. Tags : Idk will ask bat opinion later on that one
   
   double tag : Indonesia ( remove )
   
   add tags : L1ve To Love ( album ) , 2013 ( date make ) Afgansyah Reza ( real name artist ) , Cut Version ( cause this song is Cut Vers. )
   
   remove : Love Song ( no need ) Fixed tags
4. Audio :
   
   - Are you using silent slider or something ? Using audio under 20% is not rankable I think it's fine still audible enough, unless it was 5% volume
   
   - Why this timing placing here ? Not in tail of slider ? or this making silent slider ? Fixed
   
   

• [ Normal]

1. 00:19:941 (3) - add whistle ( head ) change clap to whistle ( tail ). it's following like 00:48:176 (3)
2. 00:40:676 (2,3) - straighten
3. 00:47:735 (2,3) - blanked
4. 01:00:530 (1) - more curve ?
5. 01:16:853 (1) - change to clap ? ( tail )
6. 01:30:970 (3) - ^ Fixed all

• [ Galau]

1. OD+0,5
2. 00:00:530 (1) - add Finish ( head ) same as Normal ~
3. 00:04:059 (1) - ^
4. 00:39:353 (1) - add whistle ( head )
5. 00:42:441 (8) - the whistle should here not 00:42:662 (9)
6. 00:45:530 (4) - add whistle ( head ) same as 00:43:765 (2)
7. 00:50:824 (1) - add whistle
8. 00:52:588 (4) - remove clap ( head )
9. 01:01:854 (3) - remove whistle ?
10. 01:20:824 (4) - why this clap sound weird ? ( head )
11. 01:29:206 (2) - remove whistle ? Almost fixed all

Nice song , Nice mapset , Nice BG , Nice SB! Love it! Uuuuu thank you! <3
Take my Star >w</
GL! Mako Sakata

[ Way ] wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
You have "Indonesia" in your tags twice. Remove one and change the other to Indonesian.
Relatively small circles make me cry. Nothing I can do about it though, it's your decision :[ Fixed tags

[Normal]
01:14:206 (6) - That 6 under the end of 4 might be hard to read.
01:17:735 (2) - Sliders start on soft parts and end on noticeable beats. Try the pattern I put on 1:29:206 here too.
01:17:735 (2) - Put a single note here and start the slider on the big white tick because of the vocals.
01:21:706 (1) - Another note on top of a slider end :[
01:29:206 (1,2,3) - I'm still not too fond of sliders that start on red ticks in a normal. Maybe this pattern would play better?
01:31:853 (4) - The vocals start on the reverse arrow, remove the repeat and make it start on the big white tick.
01:35:824 (1) - Spinning fast doesn't feel right here because the ending is slow. I'd say replace it with a slider like in Galau. Idk why but I prefer spinner on Normal, will reconsider this tho

Fixed all unless comment on red

[Galau]
00:07:588 (1) - I'd like to see this note closer to the center, that makes it easier to tell the timing on it. Fixed
00:45:530 (4) - This flows kind of weirdly, I would change to something like this. Hmm but I prefer the current one, better flow with next slider
01:21:706 (1,2,3) - The flow between these are super awkward. I'd get rid of a little bit of aesthetics for better flow. Fixed
01:35:824 (1) - SV is too fast, too suddenly. Maybe make a heart shaped like the one in the insane for petal-go-round. It'll be shorter, so you can turn down the SV rate. Thanks for noticing, I need to re-think on that one

Really beautiful song, solid map too. Hope I helped a little, and good luck with rank! :]

Updated!
Thank you so much for both Trias and Way, really helpful mod

osu! needs more Indonesian song holyshiet my tears
from my queue
just my suggestion gtw bisa bantu atau nggk, soalnya map ini udh banyak dipoles, lol
[Normal]
00:04:059 (1,2) - ctrl + G
00:19:941 (3) - ini agak dideketin sama 00:18:177 (1) - biar spacing di blanketnya sama
00:38:030 sama 00:38:912 tambahin circle, atau jadiin slider 2/1 juga bisa

[Galau]
please my tears flowing again
00:16:412 (4) - x:400 y:184 buat segitiga
00:23:030 (3) - stack sama tailnya 00:24:353 (5) -
00:56:118 (4,1) - blanket?
01:25:015 add circle

ok, just that, sorry if my mod isn't help you, and good luck, hope will be ranked

naoe dami wrote:

osu! needs more Indonesian song holyshiet my tears
from my queue
just my suggestion gtw bisa bantu atau nggk, soalnya map ini udh banyak dipoles, lol

[Normal]
00:04:059 (1,2) - ctrl + G Kok ctrl g, aku lebih prefer mencet slider dulu baru circle deh lebih enak
00:19:941 (3) - ini agak dideketin sama 00:18:177 (1) - biar spacing di blanketnya sama 00:38:030 sama 00:38:912 tambahin circle, atau jadiin slider 2/1 juga bisa Fixed

[Galau]
please my tears flowing again Please don't cry ;(
00:16:412 (4) - x:400 y:184 buat segitiga Aku lebih suka stack, entah kenapa nanti kurang bagus flow ke slider (5)nya kalo buat segitiga
00:23:030 (3) - stack sama tailnya 00:24:353 (5) - Ngebingungin engga sih nanti flownya kalo stack di tail gitu, nanti salah pencet lg kalo main XD
00:56:118 (4,1) - blanket? Yes a bit fixed
01:25:015 add circle Will consider later, but Im not sure to put that

ok, just that, sorry if my mod isn't help you, and good luck, hope will be ranked

Thank you dami for mod, yes let's get this song ranked
Updated!

wtf how do i even mod easier diffs ;_;

fromm m4m queue

my map > https://osu.ppy.sh/s/228745

• [galau]

1. 00:44:647 (3,4,1) - some weird flow. maybe ctrl + g 00:43:765 (2) - ? and try something like this ?> http://puu.sh/g6xlK/7b67fb1715.jpg & http://puu.sh/g6xn2/f77932cd2a.jpg (for new 00:44:647 (3) - slider i rotate 90 degree of this 00:43:765 (2) - . and for this slider 00:45:530 (4) - i did rotate 60 degree anti-clockwise on the new (2) slider and ctrl + h + j
   
2. 00:50:824 (1,2,3) - to x:257 y:82 for better blanket. also your stack leniency screws up the blanket ..
3. 00:58:765 (3,4,1,2) - again weird flow like before
   
4. 01:35:824 (1) -
   
   [easy]
   
   nothing really found
   
   good map

i shot star gl!

byfar wrote:

wtf how do i even mod easier diffs ;_;

fromm m4m queue Hi byfar thanks for coming

my map > https://osu.ppy.sh/s/228745

• [galau]

1. 00:44:647 (3,4,1) - some weird flow. maybe ctrl + g 00:43:765 (2) - ? and try something like this ?> http://puu.sh/g6xlK/7b67fb1715.jpg & http://puu.sh/g6xn2/f77932cd2a.jpg (for new 00:44:647 (3) - slider i rotate 90 degree of this 00:43:765 (2) - . and for this slider 00:45:530 (4) - i did rotate 60 degree anti-clockwise on the new (2) slider and ctrl + h + j Wow fixed, better now
   
2. 00:50:824 (1,2,3) - to x:257 y:82 for better blanket. also your stack leniency screws up the blanket .. Fixed, is there anyway to fix that leniency ;(
3. 00:58:765 (3,4,1,2) - again weird flow like before I leave it as is now
   
4. 01:35:824 (1) - <3
   
   [easy]
   
   nothing really found
   
   good map

i shot star gl!

Thank you so much it really help! and the star
Updated!

I was only being picky because it was so good and beautiful that I couldn't find anything else wrong ;_;
GOOD LUCK! Beautiful map and song :3

Edit: Award me kudos only if you want since this mod was not at all plentiful with recommendations.

NolanM wrote:

N

00:12:882 (3,4,5,6) - I think too hard for the easiest difficulty in the mapset It fit well with the music imo, and from the bpm itself which is only 68, I'm sure it's not that hard to be the lowest diff
00:21:044 (4,5,6) - ^ Same reason
00:42:221 (5,6,7) - Meh ;w; Same reason
00:40:897 (3) - Fine Yeah there's guitar sound there so I put a circle there instead
These are unnecessary to take note to if you decide to make an easy difficulty. I might consider this one, but as for now the curent spread is fine for me, and tbh I don't want to put Easy diff on this one

G

00:48:177 (1,1) - Make these two sliders similar? One of these stick out in an "ugly" way (I'm being picky, so you decide :3) Everything looks fine there so far, no need to change that
01:09:132 (4,5,6,7) - Find somewhere to put this same beat later in kiai? One time seems... meh ;w; (Being picky) I don't really understand but the triangle pattern works fine there

I was only being picky because it was so good and beautiful that I couldn't find anything else wrong ;_;
GOOD LUCK! Beautiful map and song :3 Thank you so much! that's a compliment for me XD

Edit: Award me kudos only if you want since this mod was not at all plentiful with recommendations.

Thanks for your feedback Nolan but no changes at the moment, I hope that's ok for you

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. Since there are only two diffs, I'd rather rename Galau to Hard. A mmore understandable name which is also quite safe in terms of rankability.
2. You have a few skin-related issues. More information can be found here.
   
   1. cursortrail.png is missing. Consider adding it, please.
   2. sliderpoint10.png / sliderpoint30.png should be included insead of just sliderscorepoint.
      Note: I find this thing quite quiestionable, so it could be great f you could ask a QAT to be 100% sure about it.
3. Add Bahasa to the tags. (Since you already have Indonesia the tags). Also, Indonesian should be in the tags, too. Just in case.
4. Could you, please, provide a source for metadata or confirm it with one more native Indonesian speaker. I'd feel more comfortable bubbling it in this case.

[Normal]

1. Let's set CS to 3. THis is the easiest diff, so, we should care more about the beginners. If 3,0 is too huge, try at least 3.2
2. 00:08:471 (1,2) - mind leaving more space after spinner? This is the easiest diff, so it should be pretty relaxing. Just remove these two and it will be perfect.
   Note: don't forget to check a new combo at 00:09:353 (3) - afterwards.
3. 00:46:412 (1,2,3,4) - not a kind of pattern we normally expect to see in the easiest diff of a relaxing song. Let's finish them on the red ticks, so they will land on actual beats and feel more reasonable.
   Note: as for 00:49:941 (1) - replacing it with just a circle would be better, I believe. Oh, and make sure remove the unnecesary green lines if you agree to make the sliders shorter! These lines might confuse osu! (and modders) a little.
4. 00:54:794 (2,3) - the stronger beats are on the white tciks, making them unclickable is quite a dubious decision. Mind re-arranging it to stress the white ticks? example
   Note: 01:00:971 (2,3) - same here. / Just select 01:00:530 (1,2,3) - and hit Ctrl+G. You'll get pretty nice rhythm, just fix the spacing/placement and we'll be fine.
   
   That's a very nice difficulty. In spite of a few things mentioned above I really like it. ♥

[Hard]

1. Since we change CS on Normal, CS here should be changed as well. 4.2 or 4.0 would be perfect.
2. 00:07:588 (1,2) - mind replacing it with a slider? There is practically nothing on the red tick and having a circle here feels confusing.
3. 00:49:941 (1,1,2) - after the significant speed up you stack hitobjects. It breaks the flow you get and feels quite uncomfortable while playing. Unstack them? a picture!
4. 01:07:147 (4) - can we emphasize the beat at 01:07:588? Just break (4) into two circles.
   Note: don't forget to move NC from 01:08:030 (1) - to 01:07:588 if you apply the suggestion above.
5. 01:08:250 (2) - personally, I feel like this circle is not necessary here as it does not represent any beat and feels out of place. Remove it?
6. 01:09:794 (7,8) - move them apart from each other. So, players won't misread it as another 1/4 jump.
7. 01:35:824 (1) - are you sure you want it here? The shape is amazing, but it's a speedupped slider, while the song gets slower. :c
   
   Good job! o/

Get some confirmation for the metadata and poke me again.

wtf afgan xD
poke me when bakari bubble this hueee

anyway metadata http://www.afganworld.com/discography/

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested. Thanks for coming Bakari

[General]

1. Since there are only two diffs, I'd rather rename Galau to Hard. A mmore understandable name which is also quite safe in terms of rankability. Fixed
2. You have a few skin-related issues. More information can be found here.
   
   1. cursortrail.png is missing. Consider adding it, please. I've been thinking twice and it seems my cursor set is a bit creepy. Well I mean it's not look so lovely for this map. I remove that cursor set and use default cursor instead, I'm so sorry ;(
   2. sliderpoint10.png / sliderpoint30.png should be included insead of just sliderscorepoint. Fixed
      Note: I find this thing quite quiestionable, so it could be great f you could ask a QAT to be 100% sure about it. Already asked Lust and not yet get reply. For now I add those two slider point as you state above
3. Add Bahasa to the tags. (Since you already have Indonesia the tags). Also, Indonesian should be in the tags, too. Just in case. Fixed hahaha :p
4. Could you, please, provide a source for metadata or confirm it with one more native Indonesian speaker. I'd feel more comfortable bubbling it in this case. Done by Xinely below

[Normal]

1. Let's set CS to 3. This is the easiest diff, so, we should care more about the beginners. If 3,0 is too huge, try at least 3.2 Fixed, use 3.4 instead because to keep balance with Hard's CS
2. 00:08:471 (1,2) - mind leaving more space after spinner? This is the easiest diff, so it should be pretty relaxing. Just remove these two and it will be perfect. Fixed
   Note: don't forget to check a new combo at 00:09:353 (3) - afterwards. Fixed
3. 00:46:412 (1,2,3,4) - not a kind of pattern we normally expect to see in the easiest diff of a relaxing song. Let's finish them on the red ticks, so they will land on actual beats and feel more reasonable. Fixed
   Note: as for 00:49:941 (1) - replacing it with just a circle would be better, I believe. Oh, and make sure remove the unnecesary green lines if you agree to make the sliders shorter! These lines might confuse osu! (and modders) a little. Fixed
4. 00:54:794 (2,3) - the stronger beats are on the white tciks, making them unclickable is quite a dubious decision. Mind re-arranging it to stress the white ticks? example Fixed
   Note: 01:00:971 (2,3) - same here. / Just select 01:00:530 (1,2,3) - and hit Ctrl+G. You'll get pretty nice rhythm, just fix the spacing/placement and we'll be fine. From my point of view this is more suitable with the current one, I did Ctrl+G those and played not well at least for me
   
   That's a very nice difficulty. In spite of a few things mentioned above I really like it. ♥ Wow thank you, it's rare for me to have a compliment from nominator

[Hard]

1. Since we change CS on Normal, CS here should be changed as well. 4.2 or 4.0 would be perfect. Fixed, use 4.4 instead, tbh I have my own reason why the CS on Normal and Hard is a bit irregular, I chose a bit tiny because I want to have Hard diff with at least 2.25 stars in which we can get the Hard icon on listing http://puu.sh/g9hA2/419b202c85.png. Sorry I can't describe it well, I hope you can understand
2. 00:07:588 (1,2) - mind replacing it with a slider? There is practically nothing on the red tick and having a circle here feels confusing. Fixed
3. 00:49:941 (1,1,2) - after the significant speed up you stack hitobjects. It breaks the flow you get and feels quite uncomfortable while playing. Unstack them? a picture! Fixed
4. 01:07:147 (4) - can we emphasize the beat at 01:07:588? Just break (4) into two circles. Fixed
   Note: don't forget to move NC from 01:08:030 (1) - to 01:07:588 if you apply the suggestion above. Fixed
5. 01:08:250 (2) - personally, I feel like this circle is not necessary here as it does not represent any beat and feels out of place. Remove it? Fixed
6. 01:09:794 (7,8) - move them apart from each other. So, players won't misread it as another 1/4 jump. Fixed
7. 01:35:824 (1) - are you sure you want it here? The shape is amazing, but it's a speedupped slider, while the song gets slower. :c Can I keep this? very please ;(
   
   Good job! o/ Thanks agaain

Get some confirmation for the metadata and poke me again. On Xinely's post

It seems I apply most of the sugestion, Updated!

Additional notes:
I did change on following,
1. hitcircle.png (the heart shape is better)
2. Fixed typo on lyrics06.png and reff07.png
3. Re-positioning the SB lyric

Metadata check from iTunes: http://puu.sh/g9m5N/56c4a71899.jpg

some suggestion before bubble o3o
#queue

[Hard]

1. 00:35:824 (1,2,3) - what about to make flow better 00:36:485 (2,3) - personally i don't like the position of the circle it would be a really nice pattern if you would move it like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

   84,308,35824,6,0,P|60:272|56:216,1,93.7500035762788,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   68,176,36485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   84,132,36706,2,0,P|152:148|220:132,1,140.625005364418,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:46:412 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - imo is not necessary the new combo spamm
3. 01:07:588 (1) - what about to give some more movement here 01:07:588 (1,2,3) - ? i would suggest to move 01:07:588 (1) - arround x 320 | y 32 so you'll have a little bit of movement and a triangle pattern with prev circle
4. 01:09:132 (4) - personally i would put a new combo here to advise the speed of the rhythm that you're trying to create since it gets jumpy here and the spacing doesent hel the players to understand that you're gonna to use 1/4 instead of 1/2
5. 01:26:780 (3,4,5) - the flow could be improved here,what about to move the slider and to ctrl+j it you'll have something like:
   
   SPOILER

   

   488,32,86118,2,0,B|456:24|428:32|428:32|404:40|364:32,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   320,92,86780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   284,160,87000,2,0,P|272:220|284:284,1,125
   320,348,87662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   244,360,87883,2,0,B|204:356|204:356|168:380|120:368,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   lovly diff

[Normal]

1. i would use just AR 5 imo 5,5 is to high for such slow normal
2. 00:32:294 (1) - what about to ctrl + g the flow improves a lot

really nice o3o good luck ♥

What we fix:
1. Moved that 01:07:588 (1) -
2. Lowered SV here 01:35:824 (1) -and make the heart more simple ♥
3. Fixed fade transition on lyrics08.png and reff01.png (the rest lyrics looks fine imo)

Lally wrote:

some suggestion before bubble o3o Yeaaah thanks for coming Lally
#queue

[Hard]

1. 00:35:824 (1,2,3) - what about to make flow better 00:36:485 (2,3) - personally i don't like the position of the circle it would be a really nice pattern if you would move it like this: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

   84,308,35824,6,0,P|60:272|56:216,1,93.7500035762788,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   68,176,36485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   84,132,36706,2,0,P|152:148|220:132,1,140.625005364418,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:46:412 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - imo is not necessary the new combo spamm But that was for a hint to make the diffrent SV more noticeable to players when playing, and I feel e.g. this one 00:49:941 (1) - is quite fast so better to have some, I keep the current
3. 01:07:588 (1) - what about to give some more movement here 01:07:588 (1,2,3) - ? i would suggest to move 01:07:588 (1) - arround x 320 | y 32 so you'll have a little bit of movement and a triangle pattern with prev circle Already fixed, from irc mod with Bakari, same as yours but less spacing
4. 01:09:132 (4) - personally i would put a new combo here to advise the speed of the rhythm that you're trying to create since it gets jumpy here and the spacing doesent hel the players to understand that you're gonna to use 1/4 instead of 1/2 Sure fixed
5. 01:26:780 (3,4,5) - the flow could be improved here,what about to move the slider and to ctrl+j it you'll have something like: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

   488,32,86118,2,0,B|456:24|428:32|428:32|404:40|364:32,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   320,92,86780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   284,160,87000,2,0,P|272:220|284:284,1,125
   320,348,87662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   244,360,87883,2,0,B|204:356|204:356|168:380|120:368,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   lovly diff ♥

[Normal]

1. i would use just AR 5 imo 5,5 is to high for such slow normal Hahaha I'm so sorry XD fixed
2. 00:32:294 (1) - what about to ctrl + g the flow improves a lot Fixed

really nice o3o good luck ♥ Uuuuu thank you

Thanks Lally for the aesthetic sugestion~
Updated!

Hey Mako o/
Just considering to add "Pop" i think ?
i'm looking on http://puu.sh/g9m5N/56c4a71899.jpg there's a "Pop" on there

Go Ranking! Love this song <3