Sky Trias wrote:

Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

• [General]

1. Missing Skin Files :
   
   cursortrail.png
2. Unused Image Files :
   
   cursormiddle.png
3. Tags : Idk will ask bat opinion later on that one
   
   double tag : Indonesia ( remove )
   
   add tags : L1ve To Love ( album ) , 2013 ( date make ) Afgansyah Reza ( real name artist ) , Cut Version ( cause this song is Cut Vers. )
   
   remove : Love Song ( no need ) Fixed tags
4. Audio :
   
   - Are you using silent slider or something ? Using audio under 20% is not rankable I think it's fine still audible enough, unless it was 5% volume
   
   - Why this timing placing here ? Not in tail of slider ? or this making silent slider ? Fixed
   
   

• [ Normal]

1. 00:19:941 (3) - add whistle ( head ) change clap to whistle ( tail ). it's following like 00:48:176 (3)
2. 00:40:676 (2,3) - straighten
3. 00:47:735 (2,3) - blanked
4. 01:00:530 (1) - more curve ?
5. 01:16:853 (1) - change to clap ? ( tail )
6. 01:30:970 (3) - ^ Fixed all

• [ Galau]

1. OD+0,5
2. 00:00:530 (1) - add Finish ( head ) same as Normal ~
3. 00:04:059 (1) - ^
4. 00:39:353 (1) - add whistle ( head )
5. 00:42:441 (8) - the whistle should here not 00:42:662 (9)
6. 00:45:530 (4) - add whistle ( head ) same as 00:43:765 (2)
7. 00:50:824 (1) - add whistle
8. 00:52:588 (4) - remove clap ( head )
9. 01:01:854 (3) - remove whistle ?
10. 01:20:824 (4) - why this clap sound weird ? ( head )
11. 01:29:206 (2) - remove whistle ? Almost fixed all

Nice song , Nice mapset , Nice BG , Nice SB! Love it! Uuuuu thank you! <3
Take my Star >w</
GL! Mako Sakata

[ Way ] wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
You have "Indonesia" in your tags twice. Remove one and change the other to Indonesian.
Relatively small circles make me cry. Nothing I can do about it though, it's your decision :[ Fixed tags

[Normal]
01:14:206 (6) - That 6 under the end of 4 might be hard to read.
01:17:735 (2) - Sliders start on soft parts and end on noticeable beats. Try the pattern I put on 1:29:206 here too.
01:17:735 (2) - Put a single note here and start the slider on the big white tick because of the vocals.
01:21:706 (1) - Another note on top of a slider end :[
01:29:206 (1,2,3) - I'm still not too fond of sliders that start on red ticks in a normal. Maybe this pattern would play better?
01:31:853 (4) - The vocals start on the reverse arrow, remove the repeat and make it start on the big white tick.
01:35:824 (1) - Spinning fast doesn't feel right here because the ending is slow. I'd say replace it with a slider like in Galau. Idk why but I prefer spinner on Normal, will reconsider this tho

Fixed all unless comment on red

[Galau]
00:07:588 (1) - I'd like to see this note closer to the center, that makes it easier to tell the timing on it. Fixed
00:45:530 (4) - This flows kind of weirdly, I would change to something like this. Hmm but I prefer the current one, better flow with next slider
01:21:706 (1,2,3) - The flow between these are super awkward. I'd get rid of a little bit of aesthetics for better flow. Fixed
01:35:824 (1) - SV is too fast, too suddenly. Maybe make a heart shaped like the one in the insane for petal-go-round. It'll be shorter, so you can turn down the SV rate. Thanks for noticing, I need to re-think on that one

Really beautiful song, solid map too. Hope I helped a little, and good luck with rank! :]

naoe dami wrote:

osu! needs more Indonesian song holyshiet my tears
from my queue
just my suggestion gtw bisa bantu atau nggk, soalnya map ini udh banyak dipoles, lol

[Normal]
00:04:059 (1,2) - ctrl + G Kok ctrl g, aku lebih prefer mencet slider dulu baru circle deh lebih enak
00:19:941 (3) - ini agak dideketin sama 00:18:177 (1) - biar spacing di blanketnya sama 00:38:030 sama 00:38:912 tambahin circle, atau jadiin slider 2/1 juga bisa Fixed

[Galau]
please my tears flowing again Please don't cry ;(
00:16:412 (4) - x:400 y:184 buat segitiga Aku lebih suka stack, entah kenapa nanti kurang bagus flow ke slider (5)nya kalo buat segitiga
00:23:030 (3) - stack sama tailnya 00:24:353 (5) - Ngebingungin engga sih nanti flownya kalo stack di tail gitu, nanti salah pencet lg kalo main XD
00:56:118 (4,1) - blanket? Yes a bit fixed
01:25:015 add circle Will consider later, but Im not sure to put that

ok, just that, sorry if my mod isn't help you, and good luck, hope will be ranked

• [galau]

1. 00:44:647 (3,4,1) - some weird flow. maybe ctrl + g 00:43:765 (2) - ? and try something like this ?> http://puu.sh/g6xlK/7b67fb1715.jpg & http://puu.sh/g6xn2/f77932cd2a.jpg (for new 00:44:647 (3) - slider i rotate 90 degree of this 00:43:765 (2) - . and for this slider 00:45:530 (4) - i did rotate 60 degree anti-clockwise on the new (2) slider and ctrl + h + j
   
2. 00:50:824 (1,2,3) - to x:257 y:82 for better blanket. also your stack leniency screws up the blanket ..
3. 00:58:765 (3,4,1,2) - again weird flow like before
   
4. 01:35:824 (1) -
   
   [easy]
   
   nothing really found
   
   good map

byfar wrote:

wtf how do i even mod easier diffs ;_;

fromm m4m queue Hi byfar thanks for coming

my map > https://osu.ppy.sh/s/228745

• [galau]

1. 00:44:647 (3,4,1) - some weird flow. maybe ctrl + g 00:43:765 (2) - ? and try something like this ?> http://puu.sh/g6xlK/7b67fb1715.jpg & http://puu.sh/g6xn2/f77932cd2a.jpg (for new 00:44:647 (3) - slider i rotate 90 degree of this 00:43:765 (2) - . and for this slider 00:45:530 (4) - i did rotate 60 degree anti-clockwise on the new (2) slider and ctrl + h + j Wow fixed, better now
   
2. 00:50:824 (1,2,3) - to x:257 y:82 for better blanket. also your stack leniency screws up the blanket .. Fixed, is there anyway to fix that leniency ;(
3. 00:58:765 (3,4,1,2) - again weird flow like before I leave it as is now
   
4. 01:35:824 (1) - <3
   
   [easy]
   
   nothing really found
   
   good map

i shot star gl!

NolanM wrote:

N

00:12:882 (3,4,5,6) - I think too hard for the easiest difficulty in the mapset It fit well with the music imo, and from the bpm itself which is only 68, I'm sure it's not that hard to be the lowest diff
00:21:044 (4,5,6) - ^ Same reason
00:42:221 (5,6,7) - Meh ;w; Same reason
00:40:897 (3) - Fine Yeah there's guitar sound there so I put a circle there instead
These are unnecessary to take note to if you decide to make an easy difficulty. I might consider this one, but as for now the curent spread is fine for me, and tbh I don't want to put Easy diff on this one

G

00:48:177 (1,1) - Make these two sliders similar? One of these stick out in an "ugly" way (I'm being picky, so you decide :3) Everything looks fine there so far, no need to change that
01:09:132 (4,5,6,7) - Find somewhere to put this same beat later in kiai? One time seems... meh ;w; (Being picky) I don't really understand but the triangle pattern works fine there

I was only being picky because it was so good and beautiful that I couldn't find anything else wrong ;_;
GOOD LUCK! Beautiful map and song :3 Thank you so much! that's a compliment for me XD

Edit: Award me kudos only if you want since this mod was not at all plentiful with recommendations.

1. Since there are only two diffs, I'd rather rename Galau to Hard. A mmore understandable name which is also quite safe in terms of rankability.
2. You have a few skin-related issues. More information can be found here.
   
   1. cursortrail.png is missing. Consider adding it, please.
   2. sliderpoint10.png / sliderpoint30.png should be included insead of just sliderscorepoint.
      Note: I find this thing quite quiestionable, so it could be great f you could ask a QAT to be 100% sure about it.
3. Add Bahasa to the tags. (Since you already have Indonesia the tags). Also, Indonesian should be in the tags, too. Just in case.
4. Could you, please, provide a source for metadata or confirm it with one more native Indonesian speaker. I'd feel more comfortable bubbling it in this case.

1. Let's set CS to 3. THis is the easiest diff, so, we should care more about the beginners. If 3,0 is too huge, try at least 3.2
2. 00:08:471 (1,2) - mind leaving more space after spinner? This is the easiest diff, so it should be pretty relaxing. Just remove these two and it will be perfect.
   Note: don't forget to check a new combo at 00:09:353 (3) - afterwards.
3. 00:46:412 (1,2,3,4) - not a kind of pattern we normally expect to see in the easiest diff of a relaxing song. Let's finish them on the red ticks, so they will land on actual beats and feel more reasonable.
   Note: as for 00:49:941 (1) - replacing it with just a circle would be better, I believe. Oh, and make sure remove the unnecesary green lines if you agree to make the sliders shorter! These lines might confuse osu! (and modders) a little.
4. 00:54:794 (2,3) - the stronger beats are on the white tciks, making them unclickable is quite a dubious decision. Mind re-arranging it to stress the white ticks? example
   Note: 01:00:971 (2,3) - same here. / Just select 01:00:530 (1,2,3) - and hit Ctrl+G. You'll get pretty nice rhythm, just fix the spacing/placement and we'll be fine.
   
   That's a very nice difficulty. In spite of a few things mentioned above I really like it. ♥

1. Since we change CS on Normal, CS here should be changed as well. 4.2 or 4.0 would be perfect.
2. 00:07:588 (1,2) - mind replacing it with a slider? There is practically nothing on the red tick and having a circle here feels confusing.
3. 00:49:941 (1,1,2) - after the significant speed up you stack hitobjects. It breaks the flow you get and feels quite uncomfortable while playing. Unstack them? a picture!
4. 01:07:147 (4) - can we emphasize the beat at 01:07:588? Just break (4) into two circles.
   Note: don't forget to move NC from 01:08:030 (1) - to 01:07:588 if you apply the suggestion above.
5. 01:08:250 (2) - personally, I feel like this circle is not necessary here as it does not represent any beat and feels out of place. Remove it?
6. 01:09:794 (7,8) - move them apart from each other. So, players won't misread it as another 1/4 jump.
7. 01:35:824 (1) - are you sure you want it here? The shape is amazing, but it's a speedupped slider, while the song gets slower. :c
   
   Good job! o/

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested. Thanks for coming Bakari

[General]

1. Since there are only two diffs, I'd rather rename Galau to Hard. A mmore understandable name which is also quite safe in terms of rankability. Fixed
2. You have a few skin-related issues. More information can be found here.
   
   1. cursortrail.png is missing. Consider adding it, please. I've been thinking twice and it seems my cursor set is a bit creepy. Well I mean it's not look so lovely for this map. I remove that cursor set and use default cursor instead, I'm so sorry ;(
   2. sliderpoint10.png / sliderpoint30.png should be included insead of just sliderscorepoint. Fixed
      Note: I find this thing quite quiestionable, so it could be great f you could ask a QAT to be 100% sure about it. Already asked Lust and not yet get reply. For now I add those two slider point as you state above
3. Add Bahasa to the tags. (Since you already have Indonesia the tags). Also, Indonesian should be in the tags, too. Just in case. Fixed hahaha :p
4. Could you, please, provide a source for metadata or confirm it with one more native Indonesian speaker. I'd feel more comfortable bubbling it in this case. Done by Xinely below

[Normal]

1. Let's set CS to 3. This is the easiest diff, so, we should care more about the beginners. If 3,0 is too huge, try at least 3.2 Fixed, use 3.4 instead because to keep balance with Hard's CS
2. 00:08:471 (1,2) - mind leaving more space after spinner? This is the easiest diff, so it should be pretty relaxing. Just remove these two and it will be perfect. Fixed
   Note: don't forget to check a new combo at 00:09:353 (3) - afterwards. Fixed
3. 00:46:412 (1,2,3,4) - not a kind of pattern we normally expect to see in the easiest diff of a relaxing song. Let's finish them on the red ticks, so they will land on actual beats and feel more reasonable. Fixed
   Note: as for 00:49:941 (1) - replacing it with just a circle would be better, I believe. Oh, and make sure remove the unnecesary green lines if you agree to make the sliders shorter! These lines might confuse osu! (and modders) a little. Fixed
4. 00:54:794 (2,3) - the stronger beats are on the white tciks, making them unclickable is quite a dubious decision. Mind re-arranging it to stress the white ticks? example Fixed
   Note: 01:00:971 (2,3) - same here. / Just select 01:00:530 (1,2,3) - and hit Ctrl+G. You'll get pretty nice rhythm, just fix the spacing/placement and we'll be fine. From my point of view this is more suitable with the current one, I did Ctrl+G those and played not well at least for me
   
   That's a very nice difficulty. In spite of a few things mentioned above I really like it. ♥ Wow thank you, it's rare for me to have a compliment from nominator

[Hard]

1. Since we change CS on Normal, CS here should be changed as well. 4.2 or 4.0 would be perfect. Fixed, use 4.4 instead, tbh I have my own reason why the CS on Normal and Hard is a bit irregular, I chose a bit tiny because I want to have Hard diff with at least 2.25 stars in which we can get the Hard icon on listing http://puu.sh/g9hA2/419b202c85.png. Sorry I can't describe it well, I hope you can understand
2. 00:07:588 (1,2) - mind replacing it with a slider? There is practically nothing on the red tick and having a circle here feels confusing. Fixed
3. 00:49:941 (1,1,2) - after the significant speed up you stack hitobjects. It breaks the flow you get and feels quite uncomfortable while playing. Unstack them? a picture! Fixed
4. 01:07:147 (4) - can we emphasize the beat at 01:07:588? Just break (4) into two circles. Fixed
   Note: don't forget to move NC from 01:08:030 (1) - to 01:07:588 if you apply the suggestion above. Fixed
5. 01:08:250 (2) - personally, I feel like this circle is not necessary here as it does not represent any beat and feels out of place. Remove it? Fixed
6. 01:09:794 (7,8) - move them apart from each other. So, players won't misread it as another 1/4 jump. Fixed
7. 01:35:824 (1) - are you sure you want it here? The shape is amazing, but it's a speedupped slider, while the song gets slower. :c Can I keep this? very please ;(
   
   Good job! o/ Thanks agaain

Get some confirmation for the metadata and poke me again. On Xinely's post

1. 00:35:824 (1,2,3) - what about to make flow better 00:36:485 (2,3) - personally i don't like the position of the circle it would be a really nice pattern if you would move it like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

   84,308,35824,6,0,P|60:272|56:216,1,93.7500035762788,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   68,176,36485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   84,132,36706,2,0,P|152:148|220:132,1,140.625005364418,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:46:412 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - imo is not necessary the new combo spamm
3. 01:07:588 (1) - what about to give some more movement here 01:07:588 (1,2,3) - ? i would suggest to move 01:07:588 (1) - arround x 320 | y 32 so you'll have a little bit of movement and a triangle pattern with prev circle
4. 01:09:132 (4) - personally i would put a new combo here to advise the speed of the rhythm that you're trying to create since it gets jumpy here and the spacing doesent hel the players to understand that you're gonna to use 1/4 instead of 1/2
5. 01:26:780 (3,4,5) - the flow could be improved here,what about to move the slider and to ctrl+j it you'll have something like:
   
   SPOILER

   

   488,32,86118,2,0,B|456:24|428:32|428:32|404:40|364:32,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   320,92,86780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   284,160,87000,2,0,P|272:220|284:284,1,125
   320,348,87662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   244,360,87883,2,0,B|204:356|204:356|168:380|120:368,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   lovly diff

1. i would use just AR 5 imo 5,5 is to high for such slow normal
2. 00:32:294 (1) - what about to ctrl + g the flow improves a lot

Did some irc mod with Bakari

22:43 -Bakari-: Hey o/
22:43 Mako Sakata: Hellooo
22:43 -Bakari-: Should I recheck now?
22:43 -Bakari-: Or do you have anything else to apply/fix, first?
22:43 Mako Sakata: Sure
22:44 Mako Sakata: Nothing I guess
22:44 -Bakari-: Any reply from Lust?
22:45 Mako Sakata: Not yeeeet
22:45 Mako Sakata: Should I ask another qat?
22:46 -Bakari-: Well, yes. Please do so \w/
22:46 -Bakari-: So, we won't get a popped bubble
22:46 -Bakari-: I'll check the rest, at this time
22:46 -Bakari-: oh, and as far as I know CS does not affect star rating
22:47 Mako Sakata: Okaay
22:47 Mako Sakata: XD
22:51 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/368180 Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu [Hard]]
22:51 -Bakari-: 01:07:147 (4,1,2) - can we change it a little? the jump feels rather big
22:52 -Bakari-: and the stack right after it kinda breaks the movement
22:52 -Bakari-: probably something like [http://puu.sh/g9nyy.jpg this]
22:53 Mako Sakata: So what should I do, I can't make good jump
22:54 Mako Sakata: Okay move 01:07:588 (1) - to x:260 y:80
22:54 -Bakari-: and one last thing
22:55 -Bakari-: 01:35:824 (1) - I don't insist on it, I'm just offering.
22:55 -Bakari-: You can make a 1.00 SV section here and keep the hear
22:55 -Bakari-: heart*
22:55 -Bakari-: it will look different, but I still find it cute
22:55 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/g9nHi.jpg
22:56 Mako Sakata: How can you do thaaat
22:56 Mako Sakata: Btw the slider end is on blue tick or on yellow one?
22:56 -Bakari-: right now it's on the blue one
22:57 Mako Sakata: Okay, I'll trying to lower the sv
22:58 -Bakari-: [http://puu.sh/g9nU6.txt Replace the last line in your .osu file with this]
22:59 -Bakari-: Set DS to x1,00 at these sections
22:59 Mako Sakata: Sure I'll take a look
23:00 -Bakari-: and one more thing. it's about the lyrics
23:00 Mako Sakata: Yes?
23:00 -Bakari-: 01:02:074 - text appears here, but the vocals begin at 01:02:735 -
23:01 -Bakari-: so, there is a ~500ms delay
23:01 Mako Sakata: Hahaha my bad XD
23:01 Mako Sakata: Will reowrk that one
23:02 -Bakari-: It happens with a few more lines, so you might want to re-check the whole SB
23:02 Mako Sakata: Sureee
23:03 -Bakari-: Everything else in this set looks nice and is ready to go!
23:04 Mako Sakata: Yeeeey
23:04 -Bakari-: Let me know when you're done with fixes

Lally wrote:

some suggestion before bubble o3o Yeaaah thanks for coming Lally
#queue

[Hard]

1. 00:35:824 (1,2,3) - what about to make flow better 00:36:485 (2,3) - personally i don't like the position of the circle it would be a really nice pattern if you would move it like this: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

   84,308,35824,6,0,P|60:272|56:216,1,93.7500035762788,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   68,176,36485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   84,132,36706,2,0,P|152:148|220:132,1,140.625005364418,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:46:412 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - imo is not necessary the new combo spamm But that was for a hint to make the diffrent SV more noticeable to players when playing, and I feel e.g. this one 00:49:941 (1) - is quite fast so better to have some, I keep the current
3. 01:07:588 (1) - what about to give some more movement here 01:07:588 (1,2,3) - ? i would suggest to move 01:07:588 (1) - arround x 320 | y 32 so you'll have a little bit of movement and a triangle pattern with prev circle Already fixed, from irc mod with Bakari, same as yours but less spacing
4. 01:09:132 (4) - personally i would put a new combo here to advise the speed of the rhythm that you're trying to create since it gets jumpy here and the spacing doesent hel the players to understand that you're gonna to use 1/4 instead of 1/2 Sure fixed
5. 01:26:780 (3,4,5) - the flow could be improved here,what about to move the slider and to ctrl+j it you'll have something like: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

   488,32,86118,2,0,B|456:24|428:32|428:32|404:40|364:32,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   320,92,86780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   284,160,87000,2,0,P|272:220|284:284,1,125
   320,348,87662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   244,360,87883,2,0,B|204:356|204:356|168:380|120:368,1,125,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   lovly diff ♥

[Normal]

1. i would use just AR 5 imo 5,5 is to high for such slow normal Hahaha I'm so sorry XD fixed
2. 00:32:294 (1) - what about to ctrl + g the flow improves a lot Fixed

really nice o3o good luck ♥ Uuuuu thank you

Xinely wrote:

cuma sedikit kok
imo disini setiap stanza sama 3rd whitetick (dari awal sampe akhir) bisa di add whistle. bbrapa banyak piano keras dan suara gitar yg imo bakal lebih enak kalo di whistle example 00:09:353 - 00:14:647 - etc (buat semua diff btw) Apply most of them but not all

Normal :
01:18:177 - missing finish (di hard ada)

all diffs :
01:23:471 - finish because the cymbal
01:25:235 - ^
01:28:765 - ^
01:32:294 - kalo ikut yg saran pertama kan disini kamu kasih whistle (tapi kalo add finish juga boleh, lebih ngefeel)

Nice mapset, poke me back <3

All fixed, I hope not forget a single thiing

Xinely wrote:

osu needs more galau <3

-Bakari- wrote:

let me know if you plan to map more music like this (or something like July). hopefully I'll be around to help you

anyways, congratulations! the set deserves it :3

-Bakari- wrote:

let me know if you plan to map more music like this (or something like July). hopefully I'll be around to help you

anyways, congratulations! the set deserves it :3

pkk wrote:

wow I modded this such a long time ago and my mod was shit ;A;

Congrats!

Ameth Rianno wrote:

Set the genre please! Anyone.

theramdans wrote:

Ameth Rianno wrote:

Set the genre please! Anyone.

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