hi, sorry for late!!
Thats all I can find ;w;
Love the song <3 star~
Best wishes
General
- clear~
Easy
- 00:29:140 (2) - nazi, how about move it some grid to left? Since the current ds of 00:27:877 (1,2) is not totally equal with 00:29:140 (2,3) - :
- 00:48:081 (1) - personally, try this flow? :SPOILERhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1049056
- 02:19:838 (1,2,3) - I guess the finish should be on (2) instead of (1) and (3)
- 02:43:409 (1,2) - how about swap NC? it looks better for me, moreover, to keep the NC patter consistency as you added a NC at 01:48:691 (1) -, if you agree with me, you remove NC in 02:45:092 (1) as well
Bakari's Normal
- 01:00:708 (4) - better blanket? :
- 01:01:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, these 6 notes feel a little bit bored for me, maybe try to turn 01:02:392 (3,4,5) into one slider instead? Just like what you did in 01:06:601 (5)
Hard
- 02:24:047 (5) - I think you should place a whistle here since you did at 02:22:364 (1) -
- 02:29:519 (1,2,3) - use normal sampleset for the whistle maybe?
Giffen's Shotgun
- 00:14:409 (1,2,3,4) - the overlapping can be neater imo. Try to twist them like the followings, there are more overlapping like these, for example 00:16:513 (2,3) and 00:17:776 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -, feel free to change it if you like this! :
- 00:52:290 (5) - For me, this slider flows not good enough, if I were you, I would have tried to twist it towards right side in stead of left
- 00:52:185 - here should be a drum hit, you can add a note here
- 01:39:537 (7) - I guess this note lands on nothing, it might be overmapped and counted as unrankable issue, I suggest you remove it
- 01:44:377 - a drum hit is missed in here too, you should spend more time and listen to the music carefully, place more notes and make the diff more interesting!
- 02:22:364 (1) - feels a little empty w/out some sound placement ;w; I suggest you place some whistle on the 3rd white tick in this part until 02:27:414 (1) -
- 02:35:096 (7) - again, triplet drum hit should be at 02:34:886 - instead of 02:35:096 (7) - current rhythm isnt correct imo ;w;
- 02:42:777 (1) - remove this NC to keep you NC pattern consistency, because you didnt add any NC in 01:47:428 (3) - nor 01:00:077 (3) -
- 02:57:720 (1) - same as 02:22:364 (1) -, place more whistles and it will make players play more fun!
Not bad at all, I played this diff and I like it, 00:33:981 (1,2,3) - <33333. But you may need to check out the triplet is placed correct or not Keep going!!
Thats all I can find ;w;
Love the song <3 star~
Best wishes