TKSalt wrote:

hi.

[Ends' Oni]

1. 00:32:718 (92) - k ? what do you have to fit? if you want to fit the vocal sound. k is better.
2. 00:34:507 (103) - del.
   and 00:34:612 (103) - D. flow is changing. i recommend this pattern.
3. 00:47:660 (178) - k. for vocal.
4. 00:50:501 (195) - => 00:50:712 - more fit the vocal,
5. 00:54:500 (222,223) - Ctrl+G. current pattern is a little unnatural.
6. 01:33:539 - this part has strong bassdrum and tomdrum sounds. please try to this pattern. current pattern is bored. http://puu.sh/5ik0q.png
7. 01:41:641 (44,45) - Ctrl+G.
8. 01:47:218 (79) - k
9. 01:47:534 - add k
   and 01:47:955 (85) - del.
10. 02:22:364 - damn greenline. please move to 02:22:785 -
11. 02:29:414 (1) - del. so weird.
12. 02:37:306 (55) - k ?
13. 02:42:883 - add d
    02:43:093 - add k
    and 02:43:514 (96) - del. please listen to the song a little more...
14. 03:08:032 (87) - => 03:08:102 - 　(1/3)
15. 03:06:769 ~ ...anyway, i think redline is necessary. std diffs are using spinner. but taiko diffs are placing notes. dont you think timing is unnatural?

[Ends' Muzukashii]

1. 00:16:303 (5) - del.
   00:19:670 (11) - ^
2. 00:22:300 (18) - => 00:22:195
3. 00:22:616 (20) - del.
4. 00:23:984 (25) - => 00:23:879
5. 00:26:930 (36) - d. dkd is not necessary here for Muzu.
6. 00:34:191 (65) - d
7. 00:43:872 (104) - d
8. 00:47:555 (119) - del.
   and 00:47:450 (118,119) - Ctrl+G.
9. 00:54:184 (149) - del. if you want to use ddk.
10. 01:01:234 (172) - del.
11. 01:06:601 (193) - del.
12. 01:09:441 (204) - => 01:09:337
13. 01:09:757 (206) - del.
14. 01:11:125 (211) - => 01:11:020
15. 01:13:966 (222) - d
16. 01:16:177 (232) - => 01:16:071
17. 01:16:492 (234) - del.
18. 01:21:332 (253) - d
19. 01:24:278 (264) - d
20. 01:31:013 (291) - d
21. 01:33:539 - same as Oni.
    and 01:33:327 (300) - del.
22. 01:38:379 (318,319) - del.
23. 01:41:115 (330,331) - Ctrl+G.
24. 01:48:375 (354) - del.
25. 02:16:366 (425) - d
    02:18:049 (431) - ^
26. 02:22:364 - dat greenline. same as Oni.
27. 02:29:414 (1) - del.
28. 02:34:360 (24) - del.
29. 02:36:675 (34,35) - Ctrl+G.
30. 02:44:040 (59) - d
31. 02:57:720 - sv x0.75 => x1.00
32. 03:08:032 (144) - same as Oni.
33. 03:08:663 (145,146,147,148,149,150) - why timing is different with Oni? corner-cutting? x_x

Oni is fine basically.
but Muzukashii is need more work i thinks...
and Foreverends, why dont you reply to any mods? its no problem. but soooo weird for me.

well, goodluck!

all fixed >w<
Thank you so much for modding >.<

Thank you!
Updated~

Will this be ranked someday ? :3 i really like it

please add this map to rankings !! i love this !! <3

Please rank this map.
Its awesome :w:

Love it~ Played it on hard and seems to be perfect!

Good job! =)

Rank this pls!!

This needs to be ranked! This beatmap is great! Nice work C:

hi guys

To Ranked quickly, I will remove the taiko map.

I don't know much about Taiko, Only one person would not ranked forever.

but will want to put the URL of creator words.

end's sorry

I'm sorry, opinion has changed.

I will buy a new laptop and I aim to ranked from April.

Can't find stuff wrong with the hard one. But I'm new to stuff like this. :3

~MehRankThisNow~

Hello, just thought I'll try modding this.

[Giffen's Shotgun]

00:19:459 (1,2) - Flow is great until here: probably reverse slider 2 and orient it so that the cursor draws a right-side-up U from right to left.

00:24:405 (9,10) - Remove these as the previous measure did not contain these 1/4 notes.

Regarding the previous note, throughout the song there are similar parts like these (e.g. 01:09:652 (4,5) and 01:11:441 (2,3) ) where the singer trails off at the end of a verse. Try to make the beat consistent on these parts.

00:39:452 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - These are all 1/2 notes and felt a little tedious. How about adding 1/4 notes when the singer goes "baby, you are"?

01:14:598 (6,7,8,9) - Stream instead of stack? Similar parts like 01:18:070 (2,3,4,5) are streams; they flow better.

01:45:955 (10,11,12) - same as above: stream instead of stack, especially since because of 01:45:745 (9) it feels awkward keeping cursor in same location.

[Hard]

01:33:960 (1,2,3) - Small change here, to make it more interesting: http://puu.sh/7IPGZ.jpg

[Bakari's Normal]

00:29:561 (5,6,1) - Let's make this one match the beat of 00:27:877 (1,2,3,4); perhaps move 00:31:034 (6,1) half a beat earlier.

02:29:098 (1,2) - Delete for pause in music.

02:54:352 (1,2,3) - Try arranging them in some sort of triangle instead of a stack.

[Easy]

00:49:344 (2) - Starting a slider here feels a little awkward, maybe break this into a circle followed by shorter slider instead. That way the beat feels more consistent overall to me.

02:40:463 (1) - Have this start one beat earlier, when the singer says "don't" (in the other kiai times, a slider starts as soon as singer says "don't", but in this part there is none, so again this is for consistency)

[Ends' Muzukashii]

00:26:404 (34) - d?
01:38:800 (321) - k (or make this section match the first kiai time section since they're pretty much the same anyway)
00:45:135 - add d here (too huge a gap)
01:32:276 - ^
01:38:484 - d (since 00:51:238 (133,134,135) had a triplet)
01:56:899 - add ddd here and anywhere else where there's a drumroll in the background (01:58:162 and others are longer, so ddddd)

[Ends' Oni]

00:52:079 (205) - move to 00:52:500 instead (to match the singer's pause in verse)
01:52:269 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) - I see that you are repeating kkd to match the way the singer sings; however, you didn't map this type of beat in the corresponding times of the first kiai section (01:05:128 to about 01:06:811 ).
02:34:780 (38) - similar to above

Narwhal Prime wrote:

Hello, just thought I'll try modding this. Hello


[Hard]

01:33:960 (1,2,3) - Small change here, to make it more interesting: http://puu.sh/7IPGZ.jpg Fixed

[Easy]

00:49:344 (2) - Starting a slider here feels a little awkward, maybe break this into a circle followed by shorter slider instead. That way the beat feels more consistent overall to me. No change

02:40:463 (1) - Have this start one beat earlier, when the singer says "don't" (in the other kiai times, a slider starts as soon as singer says "don't", but in this part there is none, so again this is for consistency) Fixed

Thanks for modding!!!!!!

Narwhal Prime wrote:

[Giffen's Shotgun]

00:19:459 (1,2) - Flow is great until here: probably reverse slider 2 and orient it so that the cursor draws a right-side-up U from right to left.　No change

00:24:405 (9,10) - Remove these as the previous measure did not contain these 1/4 notes. 　Fix

Regarding the previous note, throughout the song there are similar parts like these (e.g. 01:09:652 (4,5) and 01:11:441 (2,3) ) where the singer trails off at the end of a verse. Try to make the beat consistent on these parts.No change

00:39:452 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - These are all 1/2 notes and felt a little tedious. How about adding 1/4 notes when the singer goes "baby, you are"?No change

01:14:598 (6,7,8,9) - Stream instead of stack? Similar parts like 01:18:070 (2,3,4,5) are streams; they flow better.　Fix

01:45:955 (10,11,12) - same as above: stream instead of stack, especially since because of 01:45:745 (9) it feels awkward keeping cursor in same location.No change

Thank you for modding !

plz update
http://puu.sh/7MUxy.osu

love the map i hope there is more coming

It's been almost 2 years. This map is finally gonna get ranked. Wooooot!!!

I have a problem with OSU, the OSU running for several months about 3 times faster and can not be changed. I tried re-installing and failed.

^wat

ok i'm telling you that i'll mod that very soon
it's disheartening to see this lying around my reqs and not getting on it in like 5 months

I love this map and map! star xD

This needs top get ranked D: i really love this map! Gave you a star c:

I'm wondering. Have you contact the admin and ask for this map to be ranked yet? With all these stars on it, I'm pretty it's qualified

Why isn't this map ranked? It's one of my favourites, and it's well timed, and I think it's perfect to make it ranked.

miao pantsu

[Muzukashii]
00:21:143 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - This structure isn't suitable to how you've mapped it - By that I mean that your mixed mapping doesn't fit totally to the song. Your structure at 00:28:088 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - was better, so why not applying it !
00:35:875 (71,72) - Invert them ? The latter note is higher-pitched and clearer.
00:36:506 (73) - , 00:39:031 (83,84,85) - Since the pitches in these parts are nearly as high, maybe use k on new syllables or portas. So 73 would be k, and 83-85 kdk.
00:55:657 (154) - To stay consistent with 00:48:817 (122,123) - , put a k before 154, and then change next note to d.
00:57:236 (160,161) - dk to keep consistency with 00:50:501 (129,130) -
00:59:656 (170) - k as your preceding don is on a beat, whereas the lyrics are clear, loud and pretty much acute enough to deserve a kat.
01:08:284 (200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214) - Try changing your structure to have some variety ?
01:19:228 (245) - Put this as a k, the vocal pitch is even higher than the following note.
01:24:068 (263,264,265) - Here, I recommend you to put kkk, to emphasize more on the lyrics, as you've done on 00:36:927 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - .
01:37:958 (317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325) - Might change how your pattern is ? Here it's getting quite monotonous.
01:49:743 (362,363,364,365,366,367,368) - Change this as well ?
01:51:426 (369,370,371,372,373,374,375) - ^
02:45:303 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - ^
02:29:414 (1) - This note lands on nothing, consider moving it, please. The red tick before is a suitable area.

00:53:763 (145,146,147,148,149,150) - Don't do 2-color 1/4s in Muzukashii please.
01:05:969 (190,191,192) - ^
01:39:220 (323,324,325) - ^
01:40:904 (330,331,332) - ^
01:48:270 (355,356,357) - ^
02:32:255 (13,14,15) - ^
02:33:939 (21,22,23) - ^
02:52:879 (96,97,98) - ^

[Oni]
I've went through the whole map, checked the spread and everything, and concluded that it's not really suitable as it is. The only solution that I can offer you is to end up remapping the chart. Many parts needs to be revamped, your spread is a little bit high and some calm parts are mapped completely contrary to your muzu:
Oni difficulty:
01:55:426 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - 02:01:849

Muzukashii difficulty
01:55:426 (385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394) - 02:01:849.

Map along with your muzukashii and add notes if you don't know where to start. Wish you luck, and poke me when you have finished the Oni and gathered enough mods.

This is cool ^^

/_\

There's one problem I found in Giffen's Shotgun

01:00:918 (5,6,7,8),01:28:067 (7,8,9),01:45:745 (9,10,11,12) - Keeping triplet stacks and singles together may be confusing for some people, especially how it can be accidentally viewed as a 5-note stack and the player will either miss or have a bad accuracy on it. I recommend keeping the single a different position from the triplet.

I'll jump out of the window if this didn't get ranked this year ~~

May I mod?

surprised this isn't ranked yet, I played Griffen like 7months ago and it was easily one of my favourite maps.

Would the tag "nightcore" be allowed?

R11 wrote:

Would the tag "nightcore" be allowed?

It should be, it is a Nightcore mix after all.

Awesome map for my Nightcore maps collection +1, thanks for mapping it.

GET THIS RANKED

Rank this!

i lovvvvveeeee this song!!! <3
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ye rank this D:

For some reason one of the vary early maps i played (not that i have been playinf for liong (because i havent))
But i really liked it, As in Reallyreally liked it.

I didnt notice any flaws at all, so +1 for getting this ranked

VERIFY THIS!

dinopwn wrote:

There's one problem I found in Giffen's Shotgun

01:00:918 (5,6,7,8),01:28:067 (7,8,9),01:45:745 (9,10,11,12) - Keeping triplet stacks and singles together may be confusing for some people, especially how it can be accidentally viewed as a 5-note stack and the player will either miss or have a bad accuracy on it. I recommend keeping the single a different position from the triplet.

YEP !! dont so confusing

jUST REMOVE TAIKO

This was such a fun map. Revive this please

cHANGE approach rate to 8


GRIFFEN'S SHOTGUN SO FAST