Requested mod by Makar
[ Muzukashii]
00:49:856 (4) - Have a kat here? Every 2/1 there was a kat, so having here one as well would be good for the consistency. After 00:50:186, this dosn't count anymore since it is a new part.
02:20:516 (1) - move to 02:20:680 and change 02:21:010 (2) - to kat ? At 02:23:153 and 02:25:790 you have a gap as well.
02:48:620 (5) - move to 02:48:455 ? It's fine as it is, and you mapped to beat, but hear it would fit to beat and vocal at the same time.
Good job Makar, great Muzukashii. That's how I love to mod. Clear structured patterns, only monotonically triplets and enough gaps and longer patterns which are still easy and muzukashii worthly. Nice.
[ Oni]
01:27:274 (2) - Hm. I think it wouldn't hurt to remove this note. In this way you make the new part more noticeable.
01:32:549 (3) - Remove as well, so ^ doesn't stand alone with this gap ?
^ I would even recommend to apply this. First half of kiai has 4x breaks/gaps, but second part has not a single one. It is a bundle of patterms which appears kinda out of the sudden. That's why jumpgin from 4 gaps to 2 gaps in the second part would be good.
02:05:680 - I love it how you set the SV change a bit earlier to save the readability of the 1/4 here. Just a few people do that. Great!
02:17:219 (1) - Maybe have a normal don? Since the up coming one are also normal, but it's also tricky in this way to play the finishers.
02:27:768 (1) - I'm not sure about this finisher. Having right ahead a 1/2 is always kinda problematic. Well, you may decide if you want to keep it or not.
03:25:626 (1) - kat ? 2x don at 03:20:351, 03:25:626 and 2x kat at 03:25:626 and 03:28:263 .
03:28:263 (2) - Oh, here you used one more kat.
Really nice. That's how I want people to use the stream-finisher rule; the reason why I brought it up.
Same as what I said to Makar, nice structure, good map.
After you are done with the check, recall me.
Greetings to Xakyrie from me and have two stars for your work.
[ Muzukashii]
00:49:856 (4) - Have a kat here? Every 2/1 there was a kat, so having here one as well would be good for the consistency. After 00:50:186, this dosn't count anymore since it is a new part.
02:20:516 (1) - move to 02:20:680 and change 02:21:010 (2) - to kat ? At 02:23:153 and 02:25:790 you have a gap as well.
02:48:620 (5) - move to 02:48:455 ? It's fine as it is, and you mapped to beat, but hear it would fit to beat and vocal at the same time.
Good job Makar, great Muzukashii. That's how I love to mod. Clear structured patterns, only monotonically triplets and enough gaps and longer patterns which are still easy and muzukashii worthly. Nice.
[ Oni]
01:27:274 (2) - Hm. I think it wouldn't hurt to remove this note. In this way you make the new part more noticeable.
01:32:549 (3) - Remove as well, so ^ doesn't stand alone with this gap ?
^ I would even recommend to apply this. First half of kiai has 4x breaks/gaps, but second part has not a single one. It is a bundle of patterms which appears kinda out of the sudden. That's why jumpgin from 4 gaps to 2 gaps in the second part would be good.
02:05:680 - I love it how you set the SV change a bit earlier to save the readability of the 1/4 here. Just a few people do that. Great!
02:17:219 (1) - Maybe have a normal don? Since the up coming one are also normal, but it's also tricky in this way to play the finishers.
02:27:768 (1) - I'm not sure about this finisher. Having right ahead a 1/2 is always kinda problematic. Well, you may decide if you want to keep it or not.
03:25:626 (1) - kat ? 2x don at 03:20:351, 03:25:626 and 2x kat at 03:25:626 and 03:28:263 .
03:28:263 (2) - Oh, here you used one more kat.
Really nice. That's how I want people to use the stream-finisher rule; the reason why I brought it up.
Same as what I said to Makar, nice structure, good map.
After you are done with the check, recall me.
Greetings to Xakyrie from me and have two stars for your work.