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[Easy]
Some of the rhythms are really weird, and I suggest that you go for white ticks sometimes.. 01:03:904 (2,3) - This is an example, I suggest:
http://puu.sh/5E5Nh.jpg but oh well, I can see the deny incoming for it being consistent.
02:37:404 (1,2,1) - Okay, I can see the consistency between the other lowerspacings, and it looks quite good. But this must be terrible to see for a newbie, I don’t think that’s readable at all. Please try to get a spacing there which doesn’t break your patterns, and is easier to read.
Ah, the easy overall is really consistent and looks good. But since I’m not a beginner player, I’m not sure how I should judge it! Can you go and ask some beginner player and tell me what they think?
[Normal]
00:21:904 (2,3) - Is this not alignment on purpose?
02:32:071 (3,1) - Oh, that small DS increasing on purpose as well? Just some little things to make your normal even more perfect.
02:40:071 (1,2) - Yeah, as in easy, that’s an advanced pattern, this is not readable for a beginner i strongly assume that at least. Please do the same as in easy.
Beautiful normal!
[Hard]
01:53:405 (1,2,3) - Just something minor, the spacing between 1 and 2 doesn’t look the same as between 2 and 3. Please let it look equal!
02:16:071 - Snap the break to here?
[Insane]
01:14:238 (5,6,7) - Equal spacing during the triplet please!
01:21:238 (1) - For some reason I would like to see a circle and a ½ slider here instead.
01:28:571 (6,7,8) - The stack feels a bit interrupting, what about make a tripplet where you still have to move a little? Take some ugly example:
http://puu.sh/5E8jU.jpg01:40:738 (3,4) - Please CTRL + G this rhythm, you know this downbeat stuff etc.
01:43:238 (5) - Make this slider as long as 01:42:738 (4) - to get some consistency and a better rhythm overall? Follows the lyrics better as well.
01:48:571 (5) - 400 312, fora cool triangle and nicer looking spacing.
01:51:238 (4) - same here, 301 203 this time.
01:59:904 (6) - I would increase the spacing slightly here to keep consistency with 4 and 5.
02:05:404 (3) - Just some aesthetics as well.. 54 214
02:12:571 (4) - 129 187
02:16:071 - Break should be here too (fix in all diffs pls)
02:33:404 (2) - this is so close to 1 again, move a bit to the left?
02:34:071 (3,4,5) - Equal spacing..
02:45:071 (2,3,4) - This triplet seriously sounds weird, I suggest making a different rhythm here. If you need help, ask me.
After you’ve done the thing with Easy, you can call me back!