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IOSYS - shining grace [Osu|Taiko]

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Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

lkx_Shore wrote:

[yukiinsane]
00:26:555 (2) - ctrl+g? nope
00:36:222 (3,4) - 这里是一个1/2长音，而你选择了继续放note，我觉得这样下节奏比较莫名 我觉得没啥问题ww
00:39:055 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:50:138 (5) - remove 妥
谢了

至于那个连打 我再考虑下
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
[General]

Muzu and Oni have both 5-5 settings. Two possible options :
  1. If you want to keep 5-5 on Muzukashii: In Oni, increase difficulty settings by 1. You'll then have 6-6.
  2. If you want to keep 5-5 on Oni: In Muzukashii, decrease difficulty settings by 1, to have 4-4.
Up to you to change how you want.


[Muzukashii]
Some flow breaks that makes the map stay off the song. Some are quite important.

First green timing point is not useful at all, please consider removing it. (at 889ms)

00:00:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - (Beside the eights), this pattern is... how to say it... very off-standing. I know you want to map stuff so you've mapped to the vocals, but is that necessary to put a note to each syllable..? It's overdoing, there (although not overmapping.)
00:46:222 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191) - Same goes here, the song is very calm compared to your mapping.

00:29:222 (82,83,84) - Honestly the last note is the lowest-pitched of the three. If you put kkd instead, I am convinced that first it fits more in terms of consistency, and that's a bonus added for the don pattern it makes.
00:29:555 (84,85,86) - Why are all those notes big ?
00:31:222 (90,91,92) - I don't think kdk fits the best here. Invert 91 and 92.
00:32:888 (98,99,100,101,102,103) - Not too convinced that this pattern plays nice... The best would be full dons, then finishers as the two closing notes.
00:35:555 - Add a note here, you hear a kick.
00:39:388 (124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) - You've used 1/2, but haven't here : 00:43:222 (144,145,146) - .
00:43:888 (146) - Put a finisher, since you've done to every other "yeah".
00:56:888 (191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202) - I don't like this pattern that much (because it doesn't fit as much as you think it does), but a nice variation to it is : http://puu.sh/5bkye.png (cursor on 00:57:555 (195) - )
00:59:888 (204,205,206,207,208) - Same goes here; I think the 4th note is too much.
01:00:888 (208,209,210,211,212,213) - This pattern plays... very odd.
01:02:222 (214) - D ? K doesn't fit as much.
01:07:555 (236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263) - I'll have to be honest, this pattern plays as weird as the two at the beginning. Try cutting down to 2/1s, instead.
01:18:555 (264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278) - make a 8-6-1 pattern, instead of a 6-8-1 ?
01:21:555 (280,281,282) - kkd ? you'll have dons on the guitar only.
01:28:222 (307,308,309) - Finishers aren't necessary.
01:29:555 (311,312,313,314,315) - ddkkd, it will work better this way.
01:31:555 (320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331) - Plays odd, vocal mapping doesn't work well here.
01:38:889 (350,351,352) - Same as 01:28:222 (307,308,309) -
01:40:222 (354,355,356,357,358) - See 01:29:555 (311,312,313,314,315) -
01:58:055 (1) - Move it to 01:58:222 (1) - , and put a note before (where the spinner stood before.)

Also, 01:46:056 (376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384) - (and similar) - These patterns are a bit long for a muzukashii...

This diff need a lot of work. I will work on the Oni later, but first look at this.
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
我來MOD了^^
沒有很大的問題，老實說已經有這麼多MOD了應該問題不多才對- -

YukInsane
點我打開
01:30:888 (3) - 放反了??
01:50:055 (4,5) - 距離拉遠一點，黏在一起了


Insane
點我打開
00:04:722 (1) - 旋轉6度，去做微調比較好看
00:05:222 (2,1) - 把滑條的弧度和圈圈對好吧
00:12:222 (2,3) - 這裡和 00:12:388 (3,4,5) 的距儀不太一樣，可以微調一下
00:15:888 (5) - 包好上一個滑條的尾巴，調整一下弧度
00:38:055 (1) - 感覺這個滑條藍線結尾比較好
00:51:555 (1,2) - 距離微調
01:28:888 (1) - 弧度和 01:29:222 (2) 一樣比較好
01:29:722 (4) - 有點太彎了，和上一個一樣比較好
01:30:555 (2) - 尾巴的點往右移一小格
01:31:888 (4) - 原地旋轉3度
01:34:555 (2) - 弧度包好上一個滑條尾巴
01:36:888 (1) - 包好circle (5)
01:51:222 (3) - 弧度包好上一個滑條尾巴


Hard
點我打開
00:13:888 (2) - 頭和 00:12:722 (4) 尾巴重疊??
00:30:722 (2) - 排成一個正三角形吧，不然感覺好怪
00:42:222 (1) - 弧度有點彎，微調一下
01:12:222 (5) - 弧度和下一個滑條一樣比較好
01:21:055 - +break
01:51:555 (3) - 彎曲點往下拉2小格
01:52:222 (5,1) - 弧度對好滑條尾巴??


Normal
點我打開
01:20:888 (1) - break
01:30:222 (1) - 包好circle (2)
01:44:388 (4) - 調好吧...- -


以上，問題不多

音效線可以放在滑條頭尾的那條線上沒有關係，沒有影響
除非是spinner那個例外，不然我知道那是音效線，但是感覺會很難檢查
這下次作圖的時候可以試試看

以上，MOD結束
做得很好，加油
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

m1223961117 wrote:

我來MOD了^^
沒有很大的問題，老實說已經有這麼多MOD了應該問題不多才對- -

YukInsane
點我打開
01:30:888 (3) - 放反了?? 故意的
01:50:055 (4,5) - 距離拉遠一點，黏在一起了 好
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat
藍字:已修或考慮中

紅字:不修


m1223961117 wrote:

我來MOD了^^ 謝謝來喔
沒有很大的問題，老實說已經有這麼多MOD了應該問題不多才對- - 是沒什麼大問題啦..只是說剩排版方面吧

Insane
點我打開
00:04:722 (1) - 旋轉6度，去做微調比較好看 算的還真精細 已修
00:05:222 (2,1) - 把滑條的弧度和圈圈對好吧 已修
00:12:222 (2,3) - 這裡和 00:12:388 (3,4,5) 的距儀不太一樣，可以微調一下 已修
00:15:888 (5) - 包好上一個滑條的尾巴，調整一下弧度 已修
00:38:055 (1) - 感覺這個滑條藍線結尾比較好 也是可以，但考慮到距離就不修了，這樣點擊會很緊張

00:51:555 (1,2) - 距離微調 好
01:28:888 (1) - 弧度和 01:29:222 (2) 一樣比較好 已調
01:29:722 (4) - 有點太彎了，和上一個一樣比較好 好
01:30:555 (2) - 尾巴的點往右移一小格 好
01:31:888 (4) - 原地旋轉3度 OK
01:34:555 (2) - 弧度包好上一個滑條尾巴 好
01:36:888 (1) - 包好circle (5) 好
01:51:222 (3) - 弧度包好上一個滑條尾巴 好


Hard
點我打開
00:13:888 (2) - 頭和 00:12:722 (4) 尾巴重疊?? 忘記疊了 已修
00:30:722 (2) - 排成一個正三角形吧，不然感覺好怪 OK 已調
00:42:222 (1) - 弧度有點彎，微調一下 好
01:12:222 (5) - 弧度和下一個滑條一樣比較好 已修
01:21:055 - +break 不太需要..3Q
01:51:555 (3) - 彎曲點往下拉2小格 好
01:52:222 (5,1) - 弧度對好滑條尾巴?? 好


Normal
點我打開
01:20:888 (1) - break 考慮
01:30:222 (1) - 包好circle (2) 好
01:44:388 (4) - 調好吧...- - 好 還不錯


以上，問題不多 好

音效線可以放在滑條頭尾的那條線上沒有關係，沒有影響 OK有空再試試
除非是spinner那個例外，不然我知道那是音效線，但是感覺會很難檢查 好
這下次作圖的時候可以試試看 OK

以上，MOD結束
做得很好，加油 好的 Rank已近
謝謝m1223961117的細節mod，白天再UP。 :) (如果你要MOD可以找我)
Sayuki Fujimi
146 posts
Joined June 2013
Sayuki Fujimi
Here's my mod :D

(Hard)

-There's some hitobjects a bit out of the grid, my screen is a 4:3 size,
those hitobject overlap my screen border.
Exemple: those -> 00:27:555 (1) - 01:10:222 (1) - 01:26:888 (3) - 01:31:555 (1)

00:16:222 - You can add a slider here. ->like that:

01:57:222 - You can add a hitcircle here.

(Normal)

01:07:555 (1) - hitobject overlap my screen border.
01:15:888 (4) - This slider is a bit weird?

Very goodly mapped and your audio setting is awesome!
Also i'm hurry to see this ranked :).
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

Dusicyon wrote:

Here's my mod :D OK

(Hard)

-There's some hitobjects a bit out of the grid, my screen is a 4:3 size, Your screen is too small? lol
those hitobject overlap my screen border.
Exemple: those -> 00:27:555 (1) - 01:10:222 (1) - 01:26:888 (3) - 01:31:555 (1) Oh? sorry overlap..I change a bit place.

00:16:222 - You can add a slider here. ->like that: no change

01:57:222 - You can add a hitcircle here. added

(Normal)

01:07:555 (1) - hitobject overlap my screen border. I change a bit place.
01:15:888 (4) - This slider is a bit weird? I change a bit place.

Very goodly mapped and your audio setting is awesome!
Also i'm hurry to see this ranked :).
Ok,thanks your star!

Thanks Dusicyon"s mod ! Wait for a moment to updated.
Asphyxia
osu! Alumni
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia
Hello there! You requested a mod in-game.

[General thoughts]

  1. There are inconsistencies in combo colours, preview times, letterboxes, and kiai times!
[Normal]

  1. Not a big fan of your HP4 here, it would be better (imo) to have it at HP 3 since it's quite slow normal diff
  2. 00:06:888 (3) - A curved slider here would fit nicely, it seems quite weird when only this slider is straight from the others
  3. 00:50:888 (1) - I'm pretty sure this NC isn't needed here
  4. 01:33:555 (4) - I would make this slider straight to fit with 01:31:555 (1,2,3) - better
  5. Pretty nice diff overall
[Hard]

  1. 00:00:888 (1,2) - I know what you wanted to do here, but it plays quite awkward, try something like this? It would be muuch better:
    Example
    You may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!
  2. 00:14:222 (3) - This jump wasn't that fun to play, felt too sudden, maybe decrease the spacing a bit?
  3. 00:37:555 (5) - ^
  4. 00:41:888 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved here :)
  5. 00:44:888 (1,1) - Not sure why these NC's here, seem to me that they're quite ueseless
  6. 00:52:222 (3,4,5) - (3) Doesn't play that great here so why don't you try something like this?
    Example

  7. 01:11:555 (3) - Curve this slider a bit more to match better with 01:10:222 (1,2) -
  8. 01:16:055 (2) - Shouldn't you have something similar here like 01:14:222 (3,4) - ?
  9. 01:46:055 (4,1) - This jump confused me, it's so sudden and so big, reduce it a bit maybe?
  10. 01:54:222 (1,2,3,4) - These doesn't fit at all, I would suggest to change the rhythm a bit
    Something like that would be much better
  11. Great hard difficulty :)
[Insane]

  1. -1 HP, HP8 is faar too high for such Insane :s
  2. The Insane itself was really fun to play, but there was some distance problems I'd like you to change
  3. 00:12:222 (2,3,4) - Why do you have such low distance here? Increase the spacing?
  4. 00:13:722 (2,3,4) - ^
  5. 00:26:888 (3,4,5,1) - And again such a low spacing compared to earlier objects, it doesn't play that well when you're jumping around the map and then suddenly things like this come D: Increase the spacing?
  6. 00:58:555 (6,7) - Erm, what? The distance between these two is huge, please decrease the spacing here :s
  7. 01:01:555 (7) - ^
  8. 01:12:222 (4) - This confused me a heck, like why isn't this slider muuuch closer to 01:12:055 (3) - ? Or if you want to keep that jump, atleast mark it with NC ( 01:12:222 (4) - ).
  9. 01:12:888 (1,2,3) - Came far too suddenly, would decrease the spacing here :P
  10. 01:18:555 (1) - Weird spacing, jump was quite sudden and unfitting here. Also, you could add some timing points here and increase the volume on each note or every second note since the music goes from silent to loud. It would be a nice effect (imo)
  11. 01:36:055 (2,3,4,5,6) - Weird spacing again, there's no point putting these so close to eachother? The rhythm doesn't change, the tempo doesn't change at all so dunno why these antijumps
  12. 01:40:222 (3,4,5) - ^
  13. 01:41:888 (4,5,1) - Too sudden (atleast for me)
  14. Fun diff otherwise
The other Insane difficulty was fine.

Sorry for my bad english, if you have any questions about my mod feel free to leave me a forum pm about it / talk to me in-game!
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

Asphyxia wrote:

Hello there! You requested a mod in-game. Thanks accepted :)

[General thoughts]

  1. There are inconsistencies in combo colours, preview times, letterboxes, and kiai times! fixed..well ,The GD diff kiai time is not counting.
[Normal]

  1. Not a big fan of your HP4 here, it would be better (imo) to have it at HP 3 since it's quite slow normal diff fixed
  2. 00:06:888 (3) - A curved slider here would fit nicely, it seems quite weird when only this slider is straight from the others fixed
  3. 00:50:888 (1) - I'm pretty sure this NC isn't needed here Okay,fixed
  4. 01:33:555 (4) - I would make this slider straight to fit with 01:31:555 (1,2,3) - better fixed
  5. Pretty nice diff overall Thanks
[Hard]

  1. 00:00:888 (1,2) - I know what you wanted to do here, but it plays quite awkward, try something like this? It would be muuch better: Great,fixed
    Example
    You may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!
  2. 00:14:222 (3) - This jump wasn't that fun to play, felt too sudden, maybe decrease the spacing a bit? fixed,reduce a bit DS
  3. 00:37:555 (5) - ^ fixed,reduce a bit DS
  4. 00:41:888 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved here :) fixed
  5. 00:44:888 (1,1) - Not sure why these NC's here, seem to me that they're quite ueseless fixed
  6. 00:52:222 (3,4,5) - (3) Doesn't play that great here so why don't you try something like this? Great,fixed
    Example

  7. 01:11:555 (3) - Curve this slider a bit more to match better with 01:10:222 (1,2) - fixed
  8. 01:16:055 (2) - Shouldn't you have something similar here like 01:14:222 (3,4) - ? fixed
  9. 01:46:055 (4,1) - This jump confused me, it's so sudden and so big, reduce it a bit maybe? fixed,reduce a bit DS
  10. 01:54:222 (1,2,3,4) - These doesn't fit at all, I would suggest to change the rhythm a bit
    Something like that would be much better Great,fixed
  11. Great hard difficulty :) Thanks
[Insane]

  1. -1 HP, HP8 is faar too high for such Insane :s I consider it
  2. The Insane itself was really fun to play, but there was some distance problems I'd like you to change
  3. 00:12:222 (2,3,4) - Why do you have such low distance here? Increase the spacing? fixed
  4. 00:13:722 (2,3,4) - ^ fixed
  5. 00:26:888 (3,4,5,1) - And again such a low spacing compared to earlier objects, it doesn't play that well when you're jumping around the map and then suddenly things like this come D: Increase the spacing? fixed
  6. 00:58:555 (6,7) - Erm, what? The distance between these two is huge, please decrease the spacing here :s fixed,reduce a bit DS
  7. 01:01:555 (7) - ^ fixed,reduce a bit DS
  8. 01:12:222 (4) - This confused me a heck, like why isn't this slider muuuch closer to 01:12:055 (3) - ? Or if you want to keep that jump, atleast mark it with NC ( 01:12:222 (4) - ). fixed,already close the (3).
  9. 01:12:888 (1,2,3) - Came far too suddenly, would decrease the spacing here :P fixed,reduce a bit DS
  10. 01:18:555 (1) - Weird spacing, jump was quite sudden and unfitting here. Also, you could add some timing points here and increase the volume on each note or every second note since the music goes from silent to loud. It would be a nice effect (imo) fixed,already add green line adjust volume
  11. 01:36:055 (2,3,4,5,6) - Weird spacing again, there's no point putting these so close to eachother? The rhythm doesn't change, the tempo doesn't change at all so dunno why these antijumps fixed,increase a bit DS
  12. 01:40:222 (3,4,5) - ^ fixed,increase a bit DS
  13. 01:41:888 (4,5,1) - Too sudden (atleast for me) fixed,decrease a bit DS
  14. Fun diff otherwise OK
The other Insane difficulty was fine. OK

Sorry for my bad english, if you have any questions about my mod feel free to leave me a forum pm about it / talk to me in-game!
NV~I am understand your mod suggestion! OK.NP~!
Thanks Asphyxia's mod! Your mod very useful!
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Mod in Chatting:

General:

Can you change the title to Shining Grace no shining grace

Normal:
Nice^^

OniJAM:

Muzukashii:
00:20:722 (53) - It's Noise, You can change a cirlce
00:33:888 (101) - Change Big Dot or Dot
00:34:555 (103) - Change Big Dot to Dot
01:57:338 (430) and 01:57:722 - It's Noise, You can change a cirlce

Oni:
Nice^^

Hard:
00:20:888 (1) - Spinner is short. Change
00:35:919 (1,2) and 00:36:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remap
01:48:222 (3,4) - Change
01:52:888 (1,2,3,4) - I can't play, Remap

Insane:

Nice^^

Yuki's Insane:

Nice^^

The Only and Good Luck^^
S o a p
359 posts
Joined March 2012
S o a p
[Insane]
00:24:388 (1,2) - 间距好小，放个大点的跳号码
00:24:888 (1,2,3,4) - flow不好吧
00:26:055 (4) - 这个四的位置不好，也没什么特别大的鼓音啥的，间距变小点吧
00:38:055 (1) - 速度再调低一点
01:06:222 (1,2,3) - 间距大一点...
01:18:555 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - 你这边既然声音越来越大那间距也要相应的越来越大比较好啊
01:26:722 (2,3) - 这儿的间距是不是太太太小了...
01:36:222 (3,4,5,6) - 这边是不是跳一下比较好，这么小的间距打得有点尴尬;w;
01:50:222 (1,2,3,4,1) - 跟前面离远点
._.
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
part of irc mod
irc mod
2013-11-12 22:11 [Minakami Yuki]: 咳咳
2013-11-12 22:11 [Minakami Yuki]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/299870 IOSYS - shining grace [Normal]]
2013-11-12 22:11 [Minakami Yuki]: 先给点反应
2013-11-12 22:12 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:12 [Minakami Yuki]: ok
2013-11-12 22:12 [Minakami Yuki]: 那么开始了啊
2013-11-12 22:12 smallboat: OK收到
2013-11-12 22:12 [Minakami Yuki]: 00:01:555 (2) -
2013-11-12 22:12 [Minakami Yuki]: 头whi去掉
2013-11-12 22:12 [Minakami Yuki]: 00:02:722 (1,2,3) -
2013-11-12 22:12 [Minakami Yuki]: 这里也一样
2013-11-12 22:12 [Minakami Yuki]: 你自己听过没
2013-11-12 22:12 smallboat: 有
2013-11-12 22:12 [Minakami Yuki]: whi的声音特别想
2013-11-12 22:13 smallboat: 那調小點?
2013-11-12 22:13 [Minakami Yuki]: 你这里vocal声音本来就清
2013-11-12 22:13 [Minakami Yuki]: 轻
2013-11-12 22:13 [Minakami Yuki]: wpcap以后不改错别字了你看得懂就好
2013-11-12 22:13 smallboat: 恩有
2013-11-12 22:13 [Minakami Yuki]: 你一开始这一段
2013-11-12 22:13 smallboat: 看得懂
2013-11-12 22:13 [Minakami Yuki]: 全都是头whistle
2013-11-12 22:13 [Minakami Yuki]: 你自己听一遍你觉得违和么
2013-11-12 22:14 smallboat: 還好
2013-11-12 22:14 [Minakami Yuki]: 。
2013-11-12 22:14 smallboat: 你覺得有?
2013-11-12 22:14 [Minakami Yuki]: 特别吵
2013-11-12 22:14 smallboat: 因為我也不太清楚..
2013-11-12 22:14 smallboat: 是喔
2013-11-12 22:14 [Minakami Yuki]: 虽然说whi有辅助vocal的作用
2013-11-12 22:14 [Minakami Yuki]: 你这里whi把vocal音几乎全盖下去了
2013-11-12 22:14 [Minakami Yuki]: 人家打的时候就是 ding ding ding
2013-11-12 22:15 smallboat: 喔喔
2013-11-12 22:15 [Minakami Yuki]: 而且这么多绿线来去掉滑条尾部的音干嘛？
2013-11-12 22:15 smallboat: 好那我這邊去掉..
2013-11-12 22:15 [Minakami Yuki]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/307199 IOSYS - shining grace [YukInsane]]
2013-11-12 22:15 [Minakami Yuki]: 就像我这里这么下就可以了
2013-11-12 22:16 smallboat: 想說靜音..
2013-11-12 22:16 [Minakami Yuki]: 我开始的绿线也15%
2013-11-12 22:16 [Minakami Yuki]: 没必要静音
2013-11-12 22:16 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:16 [Minakami Yuki]: 好先回到normal
2013-11-12 22:16 [Minakami Yuki]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/299870 IOSYS - shining grace [Normal]]
2013-11-12 22:16 smallboat: OK
2013-11-12 22:16 [Minakami Yuki]: 00:09:722 (2) - 这个也是 而且还头尾都加whi
2013-11-12 22:17 [Minakami Yuki]: 0 0
2013-11-12 22:17 [Minakami Yuki]: 服气
2013-11-12 22:17 smallboat: 都把他去掉?
2013-11-12 22:17 [Minakami Yuki]: 对
2013-11-12 22:18 [Minakami Yuki]: whi加在长白线上就可以了
2013-11-12 22:18 [Minakami Yuki]: 顶多1,3whi
2013-11-12 22:18 smallboat: OK我試試
2013-11-12 22:18 [Minakami Yuki]: 真没必要静音
2013-11-12 22:18 [Minakami Yuki]: 开头都是清唱
2013-11-12 22:18 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:18 [Minakami Yuki]: 音乐都没啥 你直接把整个的音量往下调就可以了
2013-11-12 22:19 [Minakami Yuki]: 你现在开头就属于whi乱用结果这歌就毁了
2013-11-12 22:19 smallboat: 好的我試試
2013-11-12 22:19 smallboat: 唔..好
2013-11-12 22:20 [Minakami Yuki]: 改完通知我下
2013-11-12 22:20 [Minakami Yuki]: 其实这个过会改也不要紧
2013-11-12 22:20 [Minakami Yuki]: 我会把irc post上去
2013-11-12 22:21 smallboat: 恩我想過會兒改
2013-11-12 22:21 [Minakami Yuki]: 你再看着改也行
2013-11-12 22:21 [Minakami Yuki]: 00:20:722 (1) - 这个为什么结尾在这里
2013-11-12 22:21 [Minakami Yuki]: 00:22:555 (1,2) - 而且这两个下在2,4不下载1,3感觉巨奇怪
2013-11-12 22:21 smallboat: 聲音是在這發出的
2013-11-12 22:21 smallboat: 放白線很奇怪
2013-11-12 22:21 [Minakami Yuki]: 你是全跟声音？
2013-11-12 22:21 [Minakami Yuki]: 好吧
2013-11-12 22:22 smallboat: 恩恩
2013-11-12 22:22 [Minakami Yuki]: 全跟声音的话就不要下2,4clap
2013-11-12 22:22 [Minakami Yuki]: 听起来巨奇葩
2013-11-12 22:23 smallboat: 所以剛剛12就不用去掉了? 因為13
2013-11-12 22:23 [Minakami Yuki]: 那你就放着吧。。
2013-11-12 22:23 smallboat: 好..
2013-11-12 22:23 [Minakami Yuki]: 然后这一段vocal的2,4clap其实就完全没有必要了
2013-11-12 22:23 [Minakami Yuki]: 加了反而奇怪
2013-11-12 22:24 smallboat: OK
2013-11-12 22:24 [Minakami Yuki]: 00:32:555 (4) - 到这里
2013-11-12 22:24 [Minakami Yuki]: 前面的2,4clap
2013-11-12 22:24 [Minakami Yuki]: 尤其是加在slider tick上面的
2013-11-12 22:24 [Minakami Yuki]: 去掉比较好
2013-11-12 22:24 smallboat: 要?
2013-11-12 22:25 [Minakami Yuki]: 都去掉
2013-11-12 22:25 smallboat: 但chloe又叫我要加.
2013-11-12 22:25 [Minakami Yuki]: 。
2013-11-12 22:25 smallboat: 恩
2013-11-12 22:25 smallboat: 你看看前面幾頁他的post吧
2013-11-12 22:25 [Minakami Yuki]: 那先保留
2013-11-12 22:25 [Minakami Yuki]: 我去看下
2013-11-12 22:26 smallboat: 恩恩
2013-11-12 22:26 [Minakami Yuki]: 哪一页啊
2013-11-12 22:27 smallboat: t/153258/start=75
2013-11-12 22:28 [Minakami Yuki]: 总体来说 排列略差 没有全局性 而且其实可以用tick音效 不过作为新人也是算勉强过关
2013-11-12 22:28 [Minakami Yuki]: 其实可以用
2013-11-12 22:28 [Minakami Yuki]: 其实也可以不用啊
2013-11-12 22:28 smallboat: 哦
2013-11-12 22:28 [Minakami Yuki]: 再说你是跟vocal的为什么要用
2013-11-12 22:28 [Minakami Yuki]: 你既然选择了跟vocal
2013-11-12 22:28 smallboat: 也是..
2013-11-12 22:28 [Minakami Yuki]: 有vocal的地方还去下2,4clap，不是闹矛盾么
2013-11-12 22:28 smallboat: 恩對.
2013-11-12 22:29 [Minakami Yuki]: 没vocal的纯音乐的地方你去下好了我也不会说什么
2013-11-12 22:29 smallboat: 下whi?
2013-11-12 22:29 [Minakami Yuki]: 一样是白线
2013-11-12 22:30 [Minakami Yuki]: 长白线
2013-11-12 22:30 [Minakami Yuki]: 也不用特别响像前面一样
2013-11-12 22:30 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:30 smallboat: ok
2013-11-12 22:30 [Minakami Yuki]: 00:38:555 (1,2,3) - 像你这种地方就2,4clap好了
2013-11-12 22:30 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:31 [Minakami Yuki]: 00:46:888 (2) - 这里后面又都是whi了
2013-11-12 22:31 smallboat: 全去掉?
2013-11-12 22:31 [Minakami Yuki]: 不用全区
2013-11-12 22:31 [Minakami Yuki]: 觉得你这里节奏下的有点怪 不过算了 也不要紧 反正是normal
2013-11-12 22:32 smallboat: 哦頭部去掉
2013-11-12 22:32 smallboat: 節奏阿...
2013-11-12 22:32 [Minakami Yuki]: 为什么要
2013-11-12 22:32 [Minakami Yuki]: 让滑条的尾巴搭在长白线上
2013-11-12 22:33 smallboat: 因為音樂是從我擺的這邊發出?
2013-11-12 22:34 [Minakami Yuki]: 不行我接受不了
2013-11-12 22:34 smallboat: @@
2013-11-12 22:34 [Minakami Yuki]: 00:46:222 (1) - 把这个1去掉
2013-11-12 22:34 smallboat: 那要怎放..
2013-11-12 22:34 [Minakami Yuki]: 然后后面的整体往前拖
2013-11-12 22:34 [Minakami Yuki]: 拖2/1
2013-11-12 22:34 [Minakami Yuki]: NC自己改下
2013-11-12 22:35 [Minakami Yuki]: 然后 00:46:222 - 的头上加fin， 长白线whi
2013-11-12 22:35 smallboat: 後面的2拖到1的位子?
2013-11-12 22:35 [Minakami Yuki]: 00:46:888 (2) - 到00:54:888 (1) -
2013-11-12 22:35 [Minakami Yuki]: 全部往前拖
2013-11-12 22:35 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:36 [Minakami Yuki]: 排列可能要动一下
2013-11-12 22:36 [Minakami Yuki]: 因为ds
2013-11-12 22:36 [Minakami Yuki]: 变了
2013-11-12 22:36 smallboat: 反正滑條頭就是要在大白線上就是了?
2013-11-12 22:36 smallboat: 恩
2013-11-12 22:36 [Minakami Yuki]: 对
2013-11-12 22:36 smallboat: ok
2013-11-12 22:37 [Minakami Yuki]: 然后这里补一个滑条就行了
2013-11-12 22:37 [Minakami Yuki]: 反正你这里就这么下的
2013-11-12 22:37 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:38 [Minakami Yuki]: 00:57:555 (2) - 头whi去掉
2013-11-12 22:38 [Minakami Yuki]: 00:58:888 (4) - ^
2013-11-12 22:38 [Minakami Yuki]: 01:00:222 (2) - ^
2013-11-12 22:38 smallboat: ok
2013-11-12 22:38 [Minakami Yuki]: 01:01:555 (4) - ^
2013-11-12 22:38 [Minakami Yuki]: 长白够了
2013-11-12 22:38 [Minakami Yuki]: 你这里还是太多
2013-11-12 22:38 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:39 [Minakami Yuki]: 01:02:889 (2) -
2013-11-12 22:39 smallboat: 恩恩@@
2013-11-12 22:39 [Minakami Yuki]: 01:04:222 (4) -
2013-11-12 22:39 [Minakami Yuki]: 01:05:555 (2) -
2013-11-12 22:39 [Minakami Yuki]: 都是头啊
2013-11-12 22:39 [Minakami Yuki]: 别把尾给去了
2013-11-12 22:39 smallboat: 留頭就好?
2013-11-12 22:39 smallboat: ok
2013-11-12 22:39 [Minakami Yuki]: 01:06:888 (4) -
2013-11-12 22:39 [Minakami Yuki]: 把头上的whi去了
2013-11-12 22:39 [Minakami Yuki]: 就是把不在长白线上的whistle都去掉
2013-11-12 22:39 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:40 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:40 [Minakami Yuki]: 01:07:555 - 到这里位置
2013-11-12 22:40 [Minakami Yuki]: 为止
2013-11-12 22:40 [Minakami Yuki]: 后面的暂时不用
2013-11-12 22:40 smallboat: ok
2013-11-12 22:40 [Minakami Yuki]: 01:13:805 - 你有些绿线加的我看不懂啊
2013-11-12 22:41 [Minakami Yuki]: 01:13:555 (1) - 顺便这个头whi去掉
2013-11-12 22:41 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:42 [Minakami Yuki]: 01:17:888 (1) - 在01:17:555 - 开始吧
2013-11-12 22:42 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:42 [Minakami Yuki]: kiai的2,4clap留着
2013-11-12 22:42 [Minakami Yuki]: 不用去掉
2013-11-12 22:43 smallboat: 好
2013-11-12 22:44 [Minakami Yuki]: 后面没啥了
2013-11-12 22:44 [Minakami Yuki]: 就这样吧
2013-11-12 22:44 smallboat: 恩
2013-11-12 22:44 [Minakami Yuki]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/300316 IOSYS - shining grace [Hard]]
2013-11-12 22:44 smallboat: 先到這 我想11點左右再繼續到房間再詳講
2013-11-12 22:44 [Minakami Yuki]: 我怕我断网
2013-11-12 22:44 [Minakami Yuki]: 233
2013-11-12 22:45 [Minakami Yuki]: 好吧先这样
2013-11-12 22:45 smallboat: 是喔
2013-11-12 22:45 smallboat: OK
2013-11-12 22:45 [Minakami Yuki]: 希望11点不断
2013-11-12 22:45 smallboat: 看11點左又能不能吧
2013-11-12 22:45 smallboat: 恩恩
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki
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(/・ω・＼) 23:16:20
[Minakami Yuki]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/300316 IOSYS - shining grace [Hard]]
(/・ω・＼) 23:16:24
好现在开始吧
smallboat 23:16:30
好的
(/・ω・＼) 23:16:48
一开始一样是whistle
(/・ω・＼) 23:16:52
这你自己改
(/・ω・＼) 23:16:59
我在normal里面说过了
smallboat 23:17:03
好
(/・ω・＼) 23:17:44
滑条尾静音也一样
smallboat 23:17:58
拔掉草?
(/・ω・＼) 23:18:23
建议是拔掉
smallboat 23:18:28
好
(/・ω・＼) 23:18:36
00:30:888 (3,4,5) -
(/・ω・＼) 23:18:40
你这里flow有点奇怪
(/・ω・＼) 23:18:54
00:30:888 (3,4) - 我个人建议是3,4 ctrl+g
(/・ω・＼) 23:19:16
然后把00:31:222 (5) - ctrl+g 包住后面的00:31:555 (1) -
smallboat 23:19:31
你覺得現在會扭?
(/・ω・＼) 23:20:14

(/・ω・＼) 23:20:20
个人感觉不是很好而已
(/・ω・＼) 23:20:27
只是个人感觉
smallboat 23:21:31
那換你這情況呢?
(/・ω・＼) 23:22:16
好像也不咋的
(/・ω・＼) 23:22:16
算了
smallboat 23:22:31
好
(/・ω・＼) 23:23:01
whitstle一直在我耳边回响
smallboat 23:23:24
@@
(/・ω・＼) 23:23:58
01:04:222 (7) -
smallboat 23:24:02
還是少加點?
(/・ω・＼) 23:24:05
这个怎么回事
smallboat 23:24:28
?

(/・ω・＼) 23:24:43
即加fin又加clap
(/・ω・＼) 23:24:56
听起来很突兀啊
smallboat 23:25:03
也是
(/・ω・＼) 23:25:34
01:16:388 (3) - 个人建议这个3不要藏在线面
(/・ω・＼) 23:25:35
下面
(/・ω・＼) 23:25:55
01:16:388 (3) - 而且为什么加个clap.
smallboat 23:26:07
0.0
(/・ω・＼) 23:26:09
01:17:888 (7) - 这个上面+clap
(/・ω・＼) 23:26:25
01:17:222 (5) - 这个也加
smallboat 23:26:29
那個3要放哪
(/・ω・＼) 23:26:33
01:17:555 (6) - 这个的clap去掉
smallboat 23:27:01
好
(/・ω・＼) 23:27:09

(/・ω・＼) 23:27:13
动一下不就行了
(/・ω・＼) 23:27:21
干嘛一定要兑死在左上角
(/・ω・＼) 23:27:24
堆
smallboat 23:27:41
是
(/・ω・＼) 23:28:13
01:23:555 (1,2,3) -
(/・ω・＼) 23:28:18
kiai的开始有点单调啊
smallboat 23:28:31
?會嗎
(/・ω・＼) 23:28:35
怎么都是1/1 slider
smallboat 23:28:50
想說放簡單點
(/・ω・＼) 23:28:59
。
(/・ω・＼) 23:29:00
hard
smallboat 23:29:15
好.
(/・ω・＼) 23:29:31
我看了下kiai感觉质量严重下降233
(/・ω・＼) 23:29:42
上次泡泡也说我到了kiai质量下降
smallboat 23:29:51

(/・ω・＼) 23:29:54
因为kiai搞得不像kiai
(/・ω・＼) 23:30:18
hard你还不敢往红线上放节奏？
smallboat 23:30:40
敢
(/・ω・＼) 23:30:59
那不就行了
smallboat 23:31:08
好
(/・ω・＼) 23:31:10
那kiai干嘛开始三个1/1滑条
smallboat 23:31:40

(/・ω・＼) 23:32:05
kiai部分节奏要充实点啊
(/・ω・＼) 23:32:11
你自己看着改吧
(/・ω・＼) 23:32:40
你这就是属于被vocal限制住了
(/・ω・＼) 23:32:50
后面没vocal的地方下的挺好的
smallboat 23:32:50
也是
smallboat 23:32:54
那邊我自發下
smallboat 23:33:01
哪裡?
(/・ω・＼) 23:33:05
kiai后面都挺好的
(/・ω・＼) 23:33:20
01:24:055 - 比如说这里就可以加个note
(/・ω・＼) 23:33:32
当然spacing变了可能需要调整一下
(/・ω・＼) 23:33:36
排列什么的
smallboat 23:33:49
OK
(/・ω・＼) 23:34:02
你不是都看了我给sjoy做的那个hard了么
(/・ω・＼) 23:34:09
虽然不太适合你这图
(/・ω・＼) 23:34:17
hard其实已经可以无视spacing了
(/・ω・＼) 23:34:27
但不建议大跳
smallboat 23:34:43
嗯我都小
(/・ω・＼) 23:34:53
这里hard你只能自己改了我帮不上什么0 。0
smallboat 23:35:13
OK
(/・ω・＼) 23:35:20
现在Insane
(/・ω・＼) 23:35:27
我还有25分钟 争取摸完
(/・ω・＼) 23:35:51
开头whi一样
(/・ω・＼) 23:35:53
不再解释
smallboat 23:36:05
咦這邊歐尼醬幫我配的..
(/・ω・＼) 23:36:22
那不是一样全部都是whi
(/・ω・＼) 23:36:29
00:14:222 (1,2,3,4,5) -
(/・ω・＼) 23:36:34
这五个开头 全是whi
(/・ω・＼) 23:36:42
ting ting ting ting ting
smallboat 23:37:15
去掉?
(/・ω・＼) 23:37:17
00:20:722 (2) - 加个finish吧
(/・ω・＼) 23:37:32
反正我的建议就是1whi
(/・ω・＼) 23:37:35
顶多1,3whi
(/・ω・＼) 23:37:46
而且一样 whi 太响
smallboat 23:38:00
好
(/・ω・＼) 23:38:25
00:24:388 (1,2,3) - 建议等距
smallboat 23:38:36
好
smallboat 23:38:57
你覺得前面沒問題?
(/・ω・＼) 23:39:04
没啥 就是
smallboat 23:39:04
排列跟節奏
(/・ω・＼) 23:39:07
whiwhiwhiwhiwhi
smallboat 23:39:13
恩
smallboat 23:39:36
sp3說前面排列很亂
(/・ω・＼) 23:40:17
对
(/・ω・＼) 23:40:24
从转圈后开始
(/・ω・＼) 23:40:30
我就觉得比较乱
(/・ω・＼) 23:40:45
有点像看着ds即兴摆的
smallboat 23:41:05
00:11:555 (1) - 他說這邊到00:14:722 (2)
smallboat 23:41:37
不過轉圈後我有照著形狀放耶
(/・ω・＼) 23:41:40
我觉得还可以
(/・ω・＼) 23:41:56
这里和后面比起来我都觉得不算乱了
smallboat 23:42:03
恩
(/・ω・＼) 23:42:30
00:12:722 (5,1) - 这俩距离有点近
(/・ω・＼) 23:42:33
可以拉开点
(/・ω・＼) 23:42:42
这里我就不看了
smallboat 23:42:50

(/・ω・＼) 23:43:33
其实拉开点就好了
smallboat 23:43:46
我看起來就沒覺得怪怪的
(/・ω・＼) 23:43:51
他说的太宽泛
(/・ω・＼) 23:43:57
1是起vocal的地方
(/・ω・＼) 23:44:04
其实可以自然跳开
smallboat 23:44:38
果然bat不是蓋的什麼都能掌握
smallboat 23:44:44
可以跳?


(/・ω・＼) 23:45:04
这么看你懂了？
smallboat 23:45:29
恩
smallboat 23:45:42
就一個弧形不是了?
(/・ω・＼) 23:45:48
那我就不用说了？
(/・ω・＼) 23:45:53
差不多
smallboat 23:46:04
因為她是挑這個
smallboat 23:46:06
好
(/・ω・＼) 23:46:08
然后由于滑条的送判定
(/・ω・＼) 23:46:15
其实很多人打的时候轨迹会是
(/・ω・＼) 23:46:24

(/・ω・＼) 23:46:35
看起来就不是很顺
smallboat 23:46:44

smallboat 23:46:53
他說後面的note換長條
(/・ω・＼) 23:47:08
这你自己看
(/・ω・＼) 23:47:16
别在这上面纠结太多
smallboat 23:47:21
好
(/・ω・＼) 23:47:26
我就剩12分钟就断网了
smallboat 23:47:37
>_<
(/・ω・＼) 23:48:00
00:32:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 虽然和后面的stack了
(/・ω・＼) 23:48:04
但是初见就是看着乱
(/・ω・＼) 23:48:24
有种想摆多边形没摆好的感觉
(/・ω・＼) 23:48:33
就算你实际上不想摆多边形
smallboat 23:48:35
是喔
(/・ω・＼) 23:49:22
00:46:555 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
(/・ω・＼) 23:49:25
这一段我就不说什么了
(/・ω・＼) 23:49:31
单调无比
smallboat 23:49:40

(/・ω・＼) 23:49:56
01:02:222 (1,2,3,4) -
smallboat 23:50:02
32555要怎麼改?
(/・ω・＼) 23:50:04
23对称了 14不对称
(/・ω・＼) 23:50:10
就觉得很怪
(/・ω・＼) 23:50:31
要么摆多边形 要么改折返跳
smallboat 23:50:47
好
(/・ω・＼) 23:51:03
有时候一首歌的确会有节奏单调的地方
(/・ω・＼) 23:51:18
这时候就是要mapper自己去下点不同的节奏让他们打起来不一样
(/・ω・＼) 23:51:31
特例就是flower的神社
smallboat 23:52:11
是哪一手
(/・ω・＼) 23:52:36
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/114987
(/・ω・＼) 23:53:52
01:07:555 (1,2,3) - 01:10:222 (1,2,3) -
(/・ω・＼) 23:53:55
你这不是没改啊
smallboat 23:54:14
改什麼?
(/・ω・＼) 23:54:15
01:12:888 (1,2,3) -
(/・ω・＼) 23:54:22
改间距啊
(/・ω・＼) 23:54:27
上次不是谁说了么
(/・ω・＼) 23:54:33
你这里三个一样的跳的却不一样
smallboat 23:54:46
要一樣?
(/・ω・＼) 23:55:03
至少别差太多
(/・ω・＼) 23:55:11
你可以从前往后渐渐增加
(/・ω・＼) 23:56:10
01:25:555 (3,4,5,1) -
(/・ω・＼) 23:56:14
这flow有点怪
(/・ω・＼) 23:56:59
01:51:888 (1,3) - 3接在1的尾上
smallboat 23:56:59
這個之前吐哈叫我把45互換..
(/・ω・＼) 23:57:22
的确45互换是好
(/・ω・＼) 23:57:30
但后面的1就有点不搭调
smallboat 23:57:34
再互換回去?
(/・ω・＼) 23:58:42
别的也没啥了
(/・ω・＼) 23:59:10
那个不改也没问题
(/・ω・＼) 23:59:15
要断网了 闪
smallboat 23:59:22
ok 謝了 晚安
Delis
1,433 posts
Joined May 2012
Delis
[General]
  1. Disable Letterbox during breaks so this map doesn't have a break times
[Normal]
00:00:888 - to 00:11:555 - I feel really noisy whistle sounds on this part, please lower the volumes to 25% (I mean 40% volumes => 25%)
then 00:11:555 - add a green line of volume 40%
00:16:555 - I want to add a circle here, then add a slider 00:16:888 to 00:17:222
SPOILER
00:23:222 (2) - doesn't fit that whistle, I thought misses whistle it
00:33:555 (2) - add a finish on the head, Also 00:34:222 (3) - add a finish on both , would be follow the music
00:44:888 (3) - uhh I don't liked this slider, try this .. if you want to blanket 00:45:888 (4) - , ignore pls ;w;
SPOILER
00:54:888 (1) - distance x_x
01:24:222 (2) - eeh why sampleset is a drum on the head..?
01:33:555 (4) - make a curve slider, would better flow it
01:38:222 (3) - add a finish on the tale
01:39:555 (1) - add a finish on the head
01:44:388 (4) - where is a finish on the head ;~;//
01:55:555 - why the volume is 30% ? this part is not a quiet

[Hard]
00:04:388 (4) - move 2glid left the end point (nazi)
00:31:222 (5) - CTRL G ?, also I prefer straight slider, so delete the centre point
00:36:388 (4) - the slider should be here to 00:36:722 - , why didn't following the vocal
SPOILER
00:44:055 - I think don't need the green line, why 40% owo..?
01:05:555 (1) - remove a NC here, why add it here?
01:06:888 (1) - ^
01:07:555 (1,2,3) - doesn't been able to follow the vocal, try this for follow the vocal
SPOILER
01:08:888 (5) - hmm remove a finish on the head, then add a whistle on the head. same as 01:11:555 (3) - , 01:14:222 (3) -
01:16:555 (4) - why you don't add a finish? you must be follow the vocal
01:17:222 (5) - I recommended add a NC here
01:28:222 (7) - add a clap and finish, finish is follow the vocal, also maybe you forgot a clap
01:30:888 (5) - add a clap on the head, just you were forgot it ?
01:41:555 (3) - add a clap, I'm not sure i think you can add a clap here
01:55:555 - same as normal diff

[Insane]
00:02:638 - lower the volume to 25%, feels really noisy
00:03:555 - ^
00:04:305 - ^
00:05:138 - ^
00:05:638 - ^
00:07:972 - ^
00:09:638 - ^
00:29:472 (7,8) - I think not good this stack, try to move about x0.8
00:41:222 (1) - probably misses NC here, so remove it owo
00:45:888 (5) - swich NC, 00:46:555 (1) - remove NC here
00:56:888 (1) - add a finish on the head, will be follow the back music
01:02:222 (1) - ^
01:04:888 (1) - ^
01:10:222 (1,2,3) - how about a straight flow?, so move 01:10:388 (2) - to x268 y180, I prefer such pattern
01:12:888 (1,2,3) - ^
01:33:996 - why this slider have sampleset drum on the tale, really don't fit it imo
01:48:805 (2) - ^

[YukInsane]
00:23:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - why you making the stream here? they are really doesn't fit to vocal , I don't like that stream :/
00:34:222 (1,2) - add a finish to both? I think will be better sounds
00:44:555 (1,2) - try this, they have not good flow now imo
SPOILER
00:54:055 (1) - I recommend the spinner start 00:54:222 -
01:06:888 (1,2) - I confused this pattern on first play, but maybe that's okay :lol:
01:15:555 (1,2) - add a soft finish on both head
01:36:888 (1) - would be good flow than now imo
SPOILER
01:43:555 (1,2) - add a finish both, would be follow the vocal
01:51:055 (3) - I want to make circles instead of the slider>.<

nice diff o/
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
卧槽给一个就行了啊
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Delis wrote:

[list]

[YukInsane]
00:23:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - why you making the stream here? they are really doesn't fit to vocal , I don't like that stream :/ why follows vocal?
00:34:222 (1,2) - add a finish to both? I think will be better sounds add one
00:44:555 (1,2) - try this, they have not good flow now imo nope
SPOILER
00:54:055 (1) - I recommend the spinner start 00:54:222 -ok
01:06:888 (1,2) - I confused this pattern on first play, but maybe that's okay :lol: :lol:
01:15:555 (1,2) - add a soft finish on both head ok
01:36:888 (1) - would be good flow than now imo I want to make a jump that
SPOILER
01:43:555 (1,2) - add a finish both, would be follow the vocal same as before
01:51:055 (3) - I want to make circles instead of the slider>.< >.< I want to keep it
thx for modding
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat
[quote="lkx_Shore"][General]
hi
nokd
太鼓的预览点好像和主难度的预览点不一样
[Insane]
00:08:888 (3) - 使得他迎合00:08:555 (2) - 跳的趋势？ fix
00:31:555 (4,5) - 这放得比较莫名啊...我是说排版 fix
00:32:555 (1) - 叠在00:32:222 (6) - 下面？ fix
00:44:555 (5) - 使得他和00:44:388 (4,6) - 间距一致？ fix
00:49:888 (4) - 为什么这个会想下滑条？我倒是比较倾向他出00:46:888 (2) - 这种音的时候下一个滑条 fix
00:52:222 (3,6) - ^
01:02:888 (3,4) - 这链接有点勉强 fix
01:10:555 (3,1) - 叠起来或者用1.0x或更大的间距 fix
01:18:555 (1,2,3) - 叠一块 fix
01:56:388 (5) - 这里变1/2滑条然后01:56:722 - 这里分明是个长音，要么长滑条要么hold滑条 fix

謝謝拉克修來mod 漏掉你的這個回覆 不好意思 :)
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

S o a p wrote:

[Insane]
00:24:388 (1,2) - 间距好小，放个大点的跳号码
00:24:888 (1,2,3,4) - flow不好吧
00:26:055 (4) - 这个四的位置不好，也没什么特别大的鼓音啥的，间距变小点吧
00:38:055 (1) - 速度再调低一点
01:06:222 (1,2,3) - 间距大一点...
01:18:555 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - 你这边既然声音越来越大那间距也要相应的越来越大比较好啊
01:26:722 (2,3) - 这儿的间距是不是太太太小了...
01:36:222 (3,4,5,6) - 这边是不是跳一下比较好，这么小的间距打得有点尴尬;w;
01:50:222 (1,2,3,4,1) - 跟前面离远点
._.
都修了一些 謝謝肥皂的mod ! :)
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

Delis wrote:

[General]
  1. Disable Letterbox during breaks so this map doesn't have a break times
[Normal]
00:00:888 - to 00:11:555 - I feel really noisy whistle sounds on this part, please lower the volumes to 25% (I mean 40% volumes => 25%)
then 00:11:555 - add a green line of volume 40%
00:16:555 - I want to add a circle here, then add a slider 00:16:888 to 00:17:222
SPOILER
00:23:222 (2) - doesn't fit that whistle, I thought misses whistle it
00:33:555 (2) - add a finish on the head, Also 00:34:222 (3) - add a finish on both , would be follow the music
00:44:888 (3) - uhh I don't liked this slider, try this .. if you want to blanket 00:45:888 (4) - , ignore pls ;w;
SPOILER
00:54:888 (1) - distance x_x
01:24:222 (2) - eeh why sampleset is a drum on the head..?
01:33:555 (4) - make a curve slider, would better flow it
01:38:222 (3) - add a finish on the tale
01:39:555 (1) - add a finish on the head
01:44:388 (4) - where is a finish on the head ;~;//
01:55:555 - why the volume is 30% ? this part is not a quiet

No comment=fixed

[Hard]
00:04:388 (4) - move 2glid left the end point (nazi)
00:31:222 (5) - CTRL G ?, also I prefer straight slider, so delete the centre point
00:36:388 (4) - the slider should be here to 00:36:722 - , why didn't following the vocal
SPOILER
00:44:055 - I think don't need the green line, why 40% owo..?
01:05:555 (1) - remove a NC here, why add it here?
01:06:888 (1) - ^
01:07:555 (1,2,3) - doesn't been able to follow the vocal, try this for follow the vocal
SPOILER
01:08:888 (5) - hmm remove a finish on the head, then add a whistle on the head. same as 01:11:555 (3) - , 01:14:222 (3) -
01:16:555 (4) - why you don't add a finish? you must be follow the vocal
01:17:222 (5) - I recommended add a NC here
01:28:222 (7) - add a clap and finish, finish is follow the vocal, also maybe you forgot a clap
01:30:888 (5) - add a clap on the head, just you were forgot it ?
01:41:555 (3) - add a clap, I'm not sure i think you can add a clap here
01:55:555 - same as normal diff

No comment=fixed

[Insane]
00:02:638 - lower the volume to 25%, feels really noisy
00:03:555 - ^
00:04:305 - ^
00:05:138 - ^
00:05:638 - ^
00:07:972 - ^
00:09:638 - ^
00:29:472 (7,8) - I think not good this stack, try to move about x0.8
00:41:222 (1) - probably misses NC here, so remove it owo
00:45:888 (5) - swich NC, 00:46:555 (1) - remove NC here
00:56:888 (1) - add a finish on the head, will be follow the back music
01:02:222 (1) - ^
01:04:888 (1) - ^
01:10:222 (1,2,3) - how about a straight flow?, so move 01:10:388 (2) - to x268 y180, I prefer such pattern
01:12:888 (1,2,3) - ^
01:33:996 - why this slider have sampleset drum on the tale, really don't fit it imo
01:48:805 (2) - ^

No comment=fixed

nice diff o/
Thanks Delis"s mod! All fixed! :)
Kinomi
1,223 posts
Joined August 2012
Kinomi
我比较倾向于尽量表现歌曲的细节，但是你不可能跟所有的音
有些地方跟了细小的鼓点其他的反而表现不出来
所以改不改还是取决于你

00:04:388 (2,3) - 像这种，你得摆flow圆润一点，要结合前面的滑条看，现在这样难看也不顺
00:29:555 应该是2连
SPOILER
00:30:055 这边和后面的蓝线其实是有音的，要改的话前后节奏可能要有变动
00:32:222 这之后的蓝线和红线也有音没有空一拍那么多
00:38:055 (1) - 仔细听这个滑条盖住的节奏还比较复杂，你可以考虑换成kick折返
01:07:222 (5) - 同上
01:47:388 (1) - ^
00:44:222 (3,4,5,6) - 这四个音调都不同可以尝试折线跳，直线跳表现不出
01:12:888 (1,2,3) - 怎么这么难看，改间距一样吧
01:31:222 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 白线三连打不是特殊的节奏不要用太多
而且你仔细听的话，三连的音都是红线起白线结束，所以这边的节奏完全是错的
01:40:888 (1,2,3,4) - 注意这边的音乐，突然切到了大概是喇叭还是什么的音，你就可以变一下了，现在这按ds摆下来没体现出这个特点
01:44:888 这个点到后面都不是空的，都是1/4节奏

老M的diff不仔细看了
01:05:888 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这梗放这一点不合适
01:31:555 (1,2,3,4) - 这明显节奏复杂怎么4个note带掉了
01:57:722 (5,6,7) - 最后放个三角跳不好放直线的
还有串子里面分一下NC，别一长串都一个颜色

乍看没什么大问题，就是看着打着都稍微有点别扭
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Tsukuyomi wrote:

老M的diff不仔细看了
01:05:888 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这梗放这一点不合适
01:31:555 (1,2,3,4) - 这明显节奏复杂怎么4个note带掉了
01:57:722 (5,6,7) - 最后放个三角跳不好放直线的
还有串子里面分一下NC，别一长串都一个颜色

乍看没什么大问题，就是看着打着都稍微有点别扭
也算是前期作品了，懒大改了，就这样吧
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

Tsukuyomi wrote:

我比较倾向于尽量表现歌曲的细节，但是你不可能跟所有的音
有些地方跟了细小的鼓点其他的反而表现不出来
所以改不改还是取决于你

00:04:388 (2,3) - 像这种，你得摆flow圆润一点，要结合前面的滑条看，现在这样难看也不顺 好
00:29:555 应该是2连 好
SPOILER
00:30:055 这边和后面的蓝线其实是有音的，要改的话前后节奏可能要有变动 好
00:32:222 这之后的蓝线和红线也有音没有空一拍那么多 好
00:38:055 (1) - 仔细听这个滑条盖住的节奏还比较复杂，你可以考虑换成kick折返 好
01:07:222 (5) - 同上 這邊就不換了 想配合345的跳
01:47:388 (1) - ^ 好
00:44:222 (3,4,5,6) - 这四个音调都不同可以尝试折线跳，直线跳表现不出 好
01:12:888 (1,2,3) - 怎么这么难看，改间距一样吧 好
01:31:222 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 白线三连打不是特殊的节奏不要用太多
而且你仔细听的话，三连的音都是红线起白线结束，所以这边的节奏完全是错的 好
01:40:888 (1,2,3,4) - 注意这边的音乐，突然切到了大概是喇叭还是什么的音，你就可以变一下了，现在这按ds摆下来没体现出这个特点 好，已不照DS擺了
01:44:888 这个点到后面都不是空的，都是1/4节奏 好
謝謝BBQ的MOD
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
Muzukashii mod here


[OniJAM's Oni]

00:11:388 (29,30,31) - This does not call for a 1/4 at all.
00:31:388 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - The way you put this long stream is completely random, the song absolutely does not call for this. Calm down the pattern to 1/2s and 1/4s when necessary.
01:30:055 (436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452) - ^
01:40:722 (515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531) - ^


00:16:888 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - Instead of mapping the instrument, and then vocals (as it makes the whole sound/play very awkward) why not building up a custom pattern, that makes the player prepared ?
00:22:555 (61,64,70) - A small recommendation: Put big notes on these three notes, this would be an added plus to the 'hey'.
00:25:722 (77,78,79,80,81) - Putting kkd k d instead of k d kkd will be more faithful to the song.
00:32:888 (128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) - Actually, putting 1/1 finishers all the way through is better. Listen closely.

On all these, the streams are unfitting. I'd recommend putting 1/1 breaks as that's a "song break"

00:35:555 (141,142,143,144,145) -
00:38:222 (159,160,161,162,163) -
00:40:888 (177,178,179,180,181) -
01:44:888 (545,546,547,548,549) -
01:47:555 (563,564,565,566,567) -
01:50:222 (581,582,583,584,585) -

Then,

00:44:888 (207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223) - This stream, although a bit justified, is a bit "what". I think you started from a good idea, but couldn't do it well.
00:59:555 (278,279,280) - There, you can invert to d k d ? I mean, you've pretty much mapped the whole part to d k d k d.
01:02:222 (297) - D, instead ? K sounds a bit out of place.
01:04:888 (314) - ^ + it would make a nice d d d pattern.
01:06:888 (329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336) - Instead of this stream, I think k d k k D sounds a looot more better. (it's not English, I know.)
01:18:555 (368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382) - Refer to Muzukashii for this. I will give the exact thing so yeah.
01:31:555 (453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461) - Here, you can put 1/4s.
01:33:555 (464,465,466,467,468,469,470) - Here, you should instead put a cool-down with 1/2s
The kiai time is a bit copy-pasted between each parts, make sure you add a bit more variety !
01:54:222 (611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618,619,620,621,622,623,624,625,626,627) - Look at the first mod after "then"

The whole map is not something too bad for a beginner, but it can be improved a lot. Make sure you understand how are structured Oni maps, your diff is pretty close to an Inner.
Chloe
1,160 posts
Joined April 2011
Chloe
As your recheck request.

[General]
  1. NM/HD其实不错了,在我看来问题还是在I难度上,preview time之前比较有价值,kiai则质量偏低.
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:889 (1) - move to 72 192? 现在这样不是很好看
  2. 00:02:055 (5) - 滑条首上的whistle可以去掉 因为你后面都没加
  3. 00:08:888 (3) - 这边DS最好和前面那俩个单点一样 http://puu.sh/5kRIA.jpg
  4. 00:09:888 (2) - DS1.4
  5. 00:28:722 (4) - 堆起来FLOW不是很好 可以放在253 0
  6. 00:29:555 (7,8) - 可以换成3连滑条
  7. 00:32:388 (7) - FLOW还行不过我觉得这里放个小跳会比较好 坐标：174 222 00:32:888 (2,3,4,5,6) - 然后这里也不是很好 做个特殊点的图形？
  8. 00:35:055 (1) - 间距略小
  9. 00:35:555 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - nice pattern 但是00:38:055 (1) - 这边与前面衔接的不是很好 因为你在这里降了SV 可以考虑 306 139
  10. 00:40:222 (4) - 这里音乐有一个升高 所以我建议把 00:40:055 (3) - 这个NOTE移到 143 253
  11. 00:44:388 (4,6) - CTRL+G 然后 00:44:555 (5,6) - CTRL+G for better flow
  12. 00:50:222 (1,2,3) - 角度过于锐利 可以平滑一点
  13. 01:02:888 (3,4,5,6) - 这边的音乐其实和前面那些3/4的滑条一样 你可以考虑节奏一致
  14. 01:06:555 (3) - 尾巴上的clap去掉
  15. 01:07:722 (2) - 去掉finish
  16. 01:38:055 (4) - 243 163?
  17. 01:39:472 (5) - add
  18. 01:45:222 (1) - 间距略小
  19. 01:56:388 (2) - 漏音 换成1/2 reverse slider

暂时没了 希望能帮你改善一下图 <3.
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
妈蛋还是觉得YukInsane不舒服
改成YukI吧，I大写，这样也好分辨是insane级别的
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
(」・ω・) hi~

M4M request :3

[General]

●About Tags: Remove "プロジェクト" Same word is not need. Please remove the one.
●About custom hitsound: Please add the normal-sliderslide2. Of course, silence. When you use a tick sound, useless sound enters. Example...01:24:888 (3) and 01:26:222 (1) in Normal diff...etc It is necessary in order to improve, so you should add it.
●About tick rate: Try to use the same tickrate on every difficulty as it is a property of the music rather than the mapping. Using high tick rates to increase score/combo/difficulty is senseless. I strongly recommend the tick rate2 :3

[Normal]

●00:01:555 (2) - Add whistle (end). There is a sound like a piano, so this will fit the song.
●00:02:722 (1) - Add whistle (start). The reason is the same as above.
●00:03:555 (2) - ^
●00:05:888 (1) - Add whistle. This is also the same.
●00:06:222 (2) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:06:888 (3) - ^
●00:07:388 (4) - ^
●00:08:222 (1) - Add whistle (end). ^
●00:09:722 (2) - Add whistle (start and end). ^
●00:10:555 (3) - Add whistle (middle and end). ^
●00:12:222 (2) - Add whistle (end). ^
●00:13:388 (3) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:15:388 (2) - ^
●00:18:055 (4) - ^
●00:20:722 (1) - Add whistle on the whole of the slider. Sound of the "shoe" will fit the song :3 Then, add whistle (start and end).These will also fit~
●00:05:888 (1) - Why, spacing is different? You're unified by about 1.10x, but only here are different. I think you should fix the spacing.
●00:17:555 (3) - uh.. ^
●00:47:556 (1) - Remove a new combo. Instead of this, add a new combo in 00:48:889. It will keep the unity of the new combo.
●00:59:555 (1,2) - These should be the same angle of the slider. Please look at this. It is different in a subtle. It is recommended that you correct xD
●01:15:888 (4) - It is better to up and down symmetry is beautiful appearance. Therefore, you should fix the form. And, whistle does not need on the whole of the slider. There is not much sense orz.
●01:46:555 (2) - Same as 00:05:888 (1).
●01:58:388 (1) - move to the start time 01:58:138. This would be better ( 'ω')

[Hard]

●AR-1. Normal diff easiest in this mapset, so AR7 would be good in Hard diff. Normal diff is 4. Hard diff is 8.. x_x Difference is too large.. I will recommend that you lower the AR.
●00:02:055 (3) - Add whistle (start). There is a sound like a piano, so this will fit the song.
●00:02:722 (1) - ^
●00:05:888 (1) - Add whistle.
●00:07:388 (4) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:10:055 (3) - ^
●00:10:555 (4) - ^
●00:10:888 (5) - Add whistle (start and end). ^
●00:12:388 (3) - Add whistle (end). ^
●00:12:722 (4) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:13:388 (1) - Add whistle (start and end). ^
●00:13:888 (2) - Add whistle (end). ^
●00:15:055 (1) - Add whistle. ^
●00:15:388 (3) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:16:555 (1) - Add whistle. ^
●00:17:888 (5) - ^
●00:19:222 (2) - ^
●00:20:388 (4) - ^
●00:31:888 (2) - You should be 1.3x the spacing. 00:31:555 (1,2,3,4) - This part is very beautiful, but (2) are different spacing. It's very disappointing ;w;
●01:18:055 (1) - Why, Is different from the Normal diff?　It is exactly the same spinner, but end time is different. You should unify the end time.
●01:54:555 (2) - Remove whistle (whole). It's a very unnecessary sound.
●02:00:222 (T) - There is no need to lower volume. finish sound will fit the music. Further, unite with Normal diff.

[Insane]

●00:05:888 (1) - Add whistle. There is a sound like a piano, so this will fit the song.　
●00:07:388 (6) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:10:055 (3) - ^
●00:10:555 (4) - ^
●00:10:888 (5) - ^
●00:11:222 (6) - ^
●00:12:722 (5) - ^
●00:13:388 (1) - ^
●00:15:388 (4) - ^
●00:16:555 (1) - Add whistle. ^
●00:18:055 (6) - ^
●00:24:055 (3) - Add clap. This is necessary. Why you have not added? this will fit the song.
●00:24:388 (1) - ^
●00:32:888 (3) - Add new combo. Because, rhythm changes and it is jump.
●00:42:555 (3,4) - This should probably be the same x-coordinate. the same x-coordinate will be beautiful.
●00:42:888 (5,6,7,8) - Create a beautiful square. Please try using the function of "Ctrl + Shift + D" This is a useful feature in Graphic (Triangle, Square, Pentagon...etc).
●00:45:222 (1) - Remove new combo. There would be no need.
●00:45:555 (1) - ^
●01:58:222 (1) - Same as Hard diff.

[YukInsane]

●00:02:055 (5) - Add whistle (start). There is a sound like a piano, so this will fit the song.
●00:05:888 (1) - Add whistle. ^
●00:12:722 (5) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:13:388 (1) - ^
●00:15:388 (2) - ^
●00:16:222 (4) - Add whistle (end). ^
●00:16:888 (1) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:18:055 (5) - ^
●00:35:055 (3) - Add new combo. Because the stream begins. I think it's necessary


good luck =w=
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
Thanks -Gamu-
all fixed

change the diff name back to "Yuki"

小船我没上qq 从这里下吧 http://puu.sh/5o7ec.rar
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat
給群裡的人:最近想半Afk一週，讓自己心情穩定下，目前修改到chloe的，在此回報:
給M醬: 收到，我map暫時還不更新，等到我把Gamu看完再up吧。(音效打算跳過..)

Chloe wrote:

As your recheck request.

[General]
  1. NM/HD其实不错了,在我看来问题还是在I难度上,preview time之前比较有价值,kiai则质量偏低.
好，你的改完我k i a i 的部分還會再微調下
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:889 (1) - move to 72 192? 现在这样不是很好看 好
  2. 00:02:055 (5) - 滑条首上的whistle可以去掉 因为你后面都没加 忘記刪掉了
  3. 00:08:888 (3) - 这边DS最好和前面那俩个单点一样 http://puu.sh/5kRIA.jpg 已修
  4. 00:09:888 (2) - DS1.4 好
  5. 00:28:722 (4) - 堆起来FLOW不是很好 可以放在253 0 還蠻順的 ok
  6. 00:29:555 (7,8) - 可以换成3连滑条 已換
  7. 00:32:388 (7) - FLOW还行不过我觉得这里放个小跳会比较好 坐标：174 222 00:32:888 (2,3,4,5,6) - 然后这里也不是很好 做个特殊点的图形？ 前者已修 後者考慮下
  8. 00:35:055 (1) - 间距略小 已加大一點
  9. 00:35:555 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - nice pattern 但是00:38:055 (1) - 这边与前面衔接的不是很好 因为你在这里降了SV 可以考虑 306 139 好
  10. 00:40:222 (4) - 这里音乐有一个升高 所以我建议把 00:40:055 (3) - 这个NOTE移到 143 253 改了
  11. 00:44:388 (4,6) - CTRL+G 然后 00:44:555 (5,6) - CTRL+G for better flow OK
  12. 00:50:222 (1,2,3) - 角度过于锐利 可以平滑一点 不太清楚這邊哪理銳利，但有移到一點位置。
  13. 01:02:888 (3,4,5,6) - 这边的音乐其实和前面那些3/4的滑条一样 你可以考虑节奏一致 OK有聽出來，那我考慮一下
  14. 01:06:555 (3) - 尾巴上的clap去掉 忘了刪
  15. 01:07:722 (2) - 去掉finish 好
  16. 01:38:055 (4) - 243 163? 好
  17. 01:39:472 (5) - add 已add
  18. 01:45:222 (1) - 间距略小 加大一點
  19. 01:56:388 (2) - 漏音 换成1/2 reverse slider ，好吧 把這音也算進去，已修。

暂时没了 希望能帮你改善一下图 <3.
謝謝chloe的recheck! 很有用的建議!
差不多今晚明天更新

-Gamu-

-Gamu- wrote:

(」・ω・) hi~ Hello :)

M4M request :3

[General]

●About Tags: Remove "プロジェクト" Same word is not need. Please remove the one. Ok,removed
●About custom hitsound: Please add the normal-sliderslide2. Of course, silence. When you use a tick sound, useless sound enters. Example...01:24:888 (3) and 01:26:222 (1) in Normal diff...etc It is necessary in order to improve, so you should add it. I consider it.
●About tick rate: Try to use the same tickrate on every difficulty as it is a property of the music rather than the mapping. Using high tick rates to increase score/combo/difficulty is senseless. I strongly recommend the tick rate2 :3 OK,adjust 2

[Normal]

●00:01:555 (2) - Add whistle (end). There is a sound like a piano, so this will fit the song.
●00:02:722 (1) - Add whistle (start). The reason is the same as above.
●00:03:555 (2) - ^
●00:05:888 (1) - Add whistle. This is also the same.
●00:06:222 (2) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:06:888 (3) - ^
●00:07:388 (4) - ^
●00:08:222 (1) - Add whistle (end). ^
●00:09:722 (2) - Add whistle (start and end). ^
●00:10:555 (3) - Add whistle (middle and end). ^
●00:12:222 (2) - Add whistle (end). ^
●00:13:388 (3) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:15:388 (2) - ^
●00:18:055 (4) - ^
All fixed
●00:20:722 (1) - Add whistle on the whole of the slider. Sound of the "shoe" will fit the song :3 Then, add whistle (start and end).These will also fit~ fixed
●00:05:888 (1) - Why, spacing is different? You're unified by about 1.10x, but only here are different. I think you should fix the spacing. Not see it, I fixed.
●00:17:555 (3) - uh.. ^ ^
●00:47:556 (1) - Remove a new combo. Instead of this, add a new combo in 00:48:889. It will keep the unity of the new combo.
ok, fixed
●00:59:555 (1,2) - These should be the same angle of the slider. Please look at this. It is different in a subtle. It is recommended that you correct xD Indeed crooked off, fixed. XD
●01:15:888 (4) - It is better to up and down symmetry is beautiful appearance. Therefore, you should fix the form. And, whistle does not need on the whole of the slider. There is not much sense orz. pattern change a bit ,make a symmetry :)
●01:46:555 (2) - Same as 00:05:888 (1). ok
●01:58:388 (1) - move to the start time 01:58:138. This would be better ( 'ω') Okay ,fixed.

[Hard]

●AR-1. Normal diff easiest in this mapset, so AR7 would be good in Hard diff. Normal diff is 4. Hard diff is 8.. x_x Difference is too large.. I will recommend that you lower the AR. I consider it XD
●00:02:055 (3) - Add whistle (start). There is a sound like a piano, so this will fit the song.
●00:02:722 (1) - ^
●00:05:888 (1) - Add whistle.
●00:07:388 (4) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:10:055 (3) - ^
●00:10:555 (4) - ^
●00:10:888 (5) - Add whistle (start and end). ^
●00:12:388 (3) - Add whistle (end). ^
●00:12:722 (4) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:13:388 (1) - Add whistle (start and end). ^
●00:13:888 (2) - Add whistle (end). ^
●00:15:055 (1) - Add whistle. ^
●00:15:388 (3) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:16:555 (1) - Add whistle. ^
●00:17:888 (5) - ^
●00:19:222 (2) - ^
●00:20:388 (4) - ^
All fixed
●00:31:888 (2) - You should be 1.3x the spacing. 00:31:555 (1,2,3,4) - This part is very beautiful, but (2) are different spacing. It's very disappointing ;w;
I forgot the "DS" lol, I fixed.
●01:18:055 (1) - Why, Is different from the Normal diff?　It is exactly the same spinner, but end time is different. You should unify the end time. okay, fixed.
●01:54:555 (2) - Remove whistle (whole). It's a very unnecessary sound.Okay fixed
●02:00:222 (T) - There is no need to lower volume. finish sound will fit the music. Further, unite with Normal diff. I consider it XD,because the song in the end,so I think turn down the volume.

[Insane]

●00:05:888 (1) - Add whistle. There is a sound like a piano, so this will fit the song.　
●00:07:388 (6) - Add whistle (start). ^
●00:10:055 (3) - ^
●00:10:555 (4) - ^
●00:10:888 (5) - ^
●00:11:222 (6) - ^
●00:12:722 (5) - ^
●00:13:388 (1) - ^
●00:15:388 (4) - ^
●00:16:555 (1) - Add whistle. ^
●00:18:055 (6) - ^
●00:24:055 (3) - Add clap. This is necessary. Why you have not added? this will fit the song.I possible forgot added , already fixed.
●00:24:388 (1) - ^
almost fixed.
●00:32:888 (3) - Add new combo. Because, rhythm changes and it is jump. fixed

●00:42:555 (3,4) - This should probably be the same x-coordinate. the same x-coordinate will be beautiful. okay,fixed.
●00:42:888 (5,6,7,8) - Create a beautiful square. Please try using the function of "Ctrl + Shift + D" This is a useful feature in Graphic (Triangle, Square, Pentagon...etc). Okay ,fixed,already change.
●00:45:222 (1) - Remove new combo. There would be no need. I consider it
●00:45:555 (1) - ^
●01:58:222 (1) - Same as Hard diff. I consider it XD

good luck =w= Thanks,you,too :)

Thanks -Gamu- mod! very useful!
Last edited by smallboat , edited 3 times in total.
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
hello, i have to make modding, have you come to map. :oops:

[General]
i do not think it is good for the image of "BG.jpg" is.
"BG2.jpg" rather the quality is good.

[Normal]
00:22:222 - 1/1 slide add?
00:22:888 - ^
00:25:888 - it can be added to the slide tick.
00:27:888 - ^
00:30:555 - ^
00:31:888 - ^
00:47:556 (1) - NC remove
01:08:222 - clap add
01:09:555 (1) - ^
01:10:888 (3) - ^
01:12:222 (3) - ^
01:14:555 - ^
01:14:888 - ^
01:33:888 - ^

[Hard]
clap hit has been reversed. :o
box
00:30:722 (2,5) - x:284 y:276 move. interval is too wide.
01:17:888 (5) - x:224 y:128 move?
01:23:555 (1) - finish add
01:28:222 (7) - finish remove
01:30:888 (5) - ^
01:33:555 (9) - ^
01:34:888 (2) - finish remove
01:35:555 (3) - ^
01:41:888 (1) - ^

Insane and YukInsane have made a good quality. :D
good lucky :D
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

-Kirito wrote:

hello, i have to make modding, have you come to map. :oops: okay :)

[General]
i do not think it is good for the image of "BG.jpg" is.
"BG2.jpg" rather the quality is good. Indeed, I consider it !

[Normal]
00:22:222 - 1/1 slide add? It"s ok,but can over the star diff,so no change :o
00:22:888 - ^ ^
00:25:888 - it can be added to the slide tick.
00:27:888 - ^
00:30:555 - ^
00:31:888 - ^
all fixed
00:47:556 (1) - NC remove fixed
01:08:222 - clap add
01:09:555 (1) - ^
01:10:888 (3) - ^
01:12:222 (3) - ^
01:14:555 - ^
01:14:888 - ^
01:33:888 - ^
almost fixed

[Hard]
clap hit has been reversed. :o
box
because I think take vocal,so I set here. :o
00:30:722 (2,5) - x:284 y:276 move. interval is too wide. Great fixed.
01:17:888 (5) - x:224 y:128 move? fixed
01:23:555 (1) - finish add
01:28:222 (7) - finish remove
01:30:888 (5) - ^
01:33:555 (9) - ^
01:34:888 (2) - finish remove
01:35:555 (3) - ^
01:41:888 (1) - ^
almost fixed

Insane and YukInsane have made a good quality. :D Thanks your check
good lucky :D :D
Thanks -Kirito mod!
nya10
979 posts
Joined February 2012
nya10
Small mod from me, hope it helps
Yuki diff
00:38:555 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't see any good flow between circle 5 purple combo and circle 1 grey combo, my suggestion is to move purple combo more left, and put purple circle coincide with circle 1
01:30:888 (3,4,5) - Errr, slider 3 should be rotated, too extreme difficulty in this part :x, and confusing other too
01:47:222 (3,4) - Swap circle 3 and 4
01:49:888 (3,4) - This should be swapped to
Anyway this is a great diff :D

Insane diff
00:44:222 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe circle 5 and 6 should be swapped, I couldn't hit circle 5 naturally (as I found)

Hard diff
00:01:555 (2) - Should be 1/2 back to forth slider, One time reverse arrow only
00:31:222 (5,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion: Rotate slider 5 so it is parrarel to slider 1, and move slide 1-4 more right

I'd like to get this map ranked :)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

bluehall90 wrote:

Yuki diff
00:38:555 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't see any good flow between circle 5 purple combo and circle 1 grey combo, my suggestion is to move purple combo more left, and put purple circle coincide with circle 1 change to 0,192
others no change, thx for modding~

to smallboat：帮我把00:39:222 (5) - 移到x:0,y:192即可，我就不再传给你了
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
mod4mod

Yuki
your diff needs more jump or another fun patterns. I can suggest some patterns.
if you like please use that.
00:10:555 (1,2,3) - about turning up the speed of the slider gradually ?　it's make a good effect . http://puu.sh/5wISD.jpg http://puu.sh/5wISZ.png
00:19:555 (3) - end at 00:20:305
00:30:222 (1) - make a jump http://puu.sh/5wIWp.jpg
00:33:222 (2) - you can make a more jump on this point.
00:35:888 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/5wJbY.jpg
00:52:888 (3) - NC as your patterns
00:57:555 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this ?
SPOILER
196,33,57555,6,0,P|177:73|178:116,1,80.000000298023,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,91,57889,2,0,P|253:130|267:167,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,284,58222,5,0,0:0:0:0:
150,208,58388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
358,199,58555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
235,302,58722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,90,58888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,209,59055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,276,59222,2,0,P|371:316|354:351,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:04:888 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/5wJrh.jpg
01:27:222 (4) - move to more down and make a brancket http://puu.sh/5wKnA.jpg
01:30:555 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/5wKoT.jpg
01:39:222 (4,5) - Ctl+G and 01:39:555 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/5wKrw.jpg
01:57:722 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/5wKu3.jpg

Insane
00:08:888 (3) - make more smooth curve http://puu.sh/5wKxJ.jpg
00:27:222 (4,5) - ctr+G
00:57:888 (4,7) - (7) bracket for (4) http://puu.sh/5wKFM.jpg
01:01:555 (7) - ^
01:05:722 (5,6) - hou about this ? http://puu.sh/5wKJM.jpg
01:10:222 (1,2,3) - make a straight http://puu.sh/5wKNz.jpg
01:33:555 (1,2) - ctr+G
01:57:722 (2,3) - ^

Hard
AR+1
your stack patterns are hard to see on AR7
01:18:055 (1) - end at 01:20:722 -
01:28:888 (1) - fix spacing

Nromal
00:19:555 (6) - end at 00:20:555 - http://puu.sh/5wLal.jpg
00:31:222 (2,3) - I think stack is hard to beginners.
01:17:555 (1) - same as hard
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

Laurier wrote:

mod4mod

Insane
00:08:888 (3) - make more smooth curve http://puu.sh/5wKxJ.jpg fixed
00:27:222 (4,5) - ctr+G no , change a bit strange...>_<
00:57:888 (4,7) - (7) bracket for (4) http://puu.sh/5wKFM.jpg fixed,great!
01:01:555 (7) - ^
01:05:722 (5,6) - hou about this ? http://puu.sh/5wKJM.jpg fixed
01:10:222 (1,2,3) - make a straight http://puu.sh/5wKNz.jpg fixed
01:33:555 (1,2) - ctr+G fixed
01:57:722 (2,3) - ^ fixed

Hard
AR+1
your stack patterns are hard to see on AR7 fixed,ar+1
01:18:055 (1) - end at 01:20:722 - fixed
01:28:888 (1) - fix spacing fixed

Nromal
00:19:555 (6) - end at 00:20:555 - http://puu.sh/5wLal.jpg fixed,great!
00:31:222 (2,3) - I think stack is hard to beginners. fixed
01:17:555 (1) - same as hard fixed
Thanks laurier"s mod! :)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Laurier wrote:

Yuki
your diff needs more jump or another fun patterns. I can suggest some patterns. the map I mapped when I was a new newbie 0.0 so it's not very fun.
if you like please use that. sure~!
00:10:555 (1,2,3) - about turning up the speed of the slider gradually ?　it's make a good effect . good!~ http://puu.sh/5wISD.jpg http://puu.sh/5wISZ.png
00:19:555 (3) - end at 00:20:305 hear weird imo...
00:30:222 (1) - make a jump http://puu.sh/5wIWp.jpg ok
00:33:222 (2) - you can make a more jump on this point. I think keep it is good now
00:35:888 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/5wJbY.jpg make a little change about this~
00:52:888 (3) - NC as your patterns ok fixed
00:57:555 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this ? this is good but I want to keep myself =e=
SPOILER
196,33,57555,6,0,P|177:73|178:116,1,80.000000298023,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,91,57889,2,0,P|253:130|267:167,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,284,58222,5,0,0:0:0:0:
150,208,58388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
358,199,58555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
235,302,58722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,90,58888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,209,59055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,276,59222,2,0,P|371:316|354:351,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:04:888 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/5wJrh.jpg ok
01:27:222 (4) - move to more down and make a brancket http://puu.sh/5wKnA.jpg fixed
01:30:555 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/5wKoT.jpg :!: good
01:39:222 (4,5) - Ctl+G and 01:39:555 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/5wKrw.jpg nice~ make a little change to this
01:57:722 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/5wKu3.jpg nope ;D help players to spin yeah
thx for modding~
laurier I love you so much!~~~~~
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
Hello
懒惰写华文了 对不起啦~

Black - Normal Suggestion
Pink - You may need to consider
Red - Unrankable stuff

[Yuki]
AR-1? Since the distance of note is not too far.

00:00:888 - => 00:10:888 - Well, i suggest make the SV at these part more small with big distance, it may be make a lot of work if you change it so it just a suggestion but i love and fun if you change it!
00:00:889 (1,5) - I think you can make these slider with same pattern, it would be better at looking. Since i don't like 00:00:889 (1) - this slider pattern.
00:01:888 (4) - Well, this is high pitch than other so i suggest you put whistle at here and remove (5).
00:03:388 (4,5) - I suggest don't make this pattern, it cause (little but not really important) break flow and it look very messy. so i suggest you to change this pattern or if you really want this pattern please at least CTRL+H with 00:03:555 (5) - to make it better.
00:15:888 (3,4) - Blanket it? it sound better if you do it.
00:07:222 (5,6) - Same as above, whistle (5) and remove (6).
00:20:388 (4,5) - Make it one line? it look better.
00:26:888 (3) - I think you can CTRL+G at this, it would make it same flow like 00:26:222 (1,2) - this and it's look harder, too.
00:30:055 (4) - Please make same distance between 00:29:555 (3) - with 00:30:222 (1) - , it really look nothing with this didn't same distance.
00:31:305 (5) - Please add clap here, compare with electronic sound.
00:31:888 (2) - I will make one line with 00:31:555 (1) - to make it look better. If you accept i will suggest you too with 00:32:222 (3,4) - .
00:35:888 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Sorry but this pattern is really look not fun and messy. I did really recommend you to change it.
01:02:222 (1,3) - I will suggest you to use same slider pattern at here too.
01:05:555 (3) - It would more fun if you make this slider far on 01:05:222 (2) - but not near.

[Insane]
AR-1 too, it seem to fast...

00:02:722 (1) - It can be blanket with 00:02:055 (5) - to make it better by move down little.
00:10:888 (5) - Add whistle to head too, because it sound just like 00:10:555 (4,6) - .
00:16:888 (2) - Stack it with 00:16:555 (1) - ?
00:25:222 (2) - CTRL+G please, it really look break flow with this.
00:48:222 (3) - CTRL+G too, it sound better and good flow.
00:50:888 (3) - ^
00:59:555 (1) - ^ with 00:59:888 (2) -

[Hard]

00:00:888 (1) - Well, this slider is a bug. As you can see it's faster than other x0.75 slider. I think you want to talk to some pro timing-er to fix this.
00:02:722 (1) - I did like this slider to like below screenshot to make it more smooth flow.
00:03:222 (2) - Whistle at head please, it sound high pitch than other.
00:46:888 (3,6) - Make it as familiar slider? it look better if you do this.

[OniJAM's Oni]

00:27:055 (82,83,84) - I will put ddk at here, i notice you put too much of kkd at here?
00:36:055 (137) - k here, because this sound pitch just like 00:35:888 (136) -
00:38:722 (155) - ^
00:41:388 (173) - ^

Good job at this Oni, but i just notice there's too much kkd at here. Well i did like to replace some pattern for kkd to make it more fun. I hope you can change it.

[OniJAM's Muzukashii]

00:31:388 - I will put a d at here, because it's have electronic and vocal sound.
01:31:222 (318) - k here? more higher pitch than other.
01:46:056 (375) - ^
01:54:222 (416,417,418,419,420,421,422) - Well, you can make k ddd k ddd k k at here. Make a small difficult for Muzukahii player may be fun, right?

I will not mod Another because it's not my standard, i mean i can't play it.
Well, the Normal diff is fine for me.

Good Luck!~
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano

Mintong wrote:

[OniJAM's Oni]

00:27:055 (82,83,84) - I will put ddk at here, i notice you put too much of kkd at here?
00:36:055 (137) - k here, because this sound pitch just like 00:35:888 (136) -
00:38:722 (155) - ^
00:41:388 (173) - ^

Good job at this Oni, but i just notice there's too much kkd at here. Well i did like to replace some pattern for kkd to make it more fun. I hope you can change it.

[OniJAM's Muzukashii]

00:31:388 - I will put a d at here, because it's have electronic and vocal sound.
01:31:222 (318) - k here? more higher pitch than other.
01:46:056 (375) - ^
01:54:222 (416,417,418,419,420,421,422) - Well, you can make k ddd k ddd k k at here. Make a small difficult for Muzukahii player may be fun, right?
Fixed a lot, thanks for modding
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Mintong wrote:

[Yuki]
AR-1? Since the distance of note is not too far. nope, ar8 hard to read

00:00:888 - => 00:10:888 - Well, i suggest make the SV at these part more small with big distance, it may be make a lot of work if you change it so it just a suggestion but i love and fun if you change it! nope, all ignored here sry.
00:00:889 (1,5) - I think you can make these slider with same pattern, it would be better at looking. Since i don't like 00:00:889 (1) - this slider pattern.
00:01:888 (4) - Well, this is high pitch than other so i suggest you put whistle at here and remove (5).
00:03:388 (4,5) - I suggest don't make this pattern, it cause (little but not really important) break flow and it look very messy. so i suggest you to change this pattern or if you really want this pattern please at least CTRL+H with 00:03:555 (5) - to make it better.
00:15:888 (3,4) - Blanket it? it sound better if you do it. fixed
00:07:222 (5,6) - Same as above, whistle (5) and remove (6).
00:20:388 (4,5) - Make it one line? it look better. ok
00:26:888 (3) - I think you can CTRL+G at this, it would make it same flow like 00:26:222 (1,2) - this and it's look harder, too.
00:30:055 (4) - Please make same distance between 00:29:555 (3) - with 00:30:222 (1) - , it really look nothing with this didn't same distance. ok
00:31:305 (5) - Please add clap here, compare with electronic sound. ok
00:31:888 (2) - I will make one line with 00:31:555 (1) - to make it look better. If you accept i will suggest you too with 00:32:222 (3,4) - . make a little changes
00:35:888 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Sorry but this pattern is really look not fun and messy. I did really recommend you to change it. make some changes
01:02:222 (1,3) - I will suggest you to use same slider pattern at here too. ?
01:05:555 (3) - It would more fun if you make this slider far on 01:05:222 (2) - but not near. OK
thx for modding~
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
Small reminder to OniJAM who has not replied to goku and my mods to his taiko diffs. :U

Gezo/Muzu : p/2672128
Goku : p/2679383
Gezo/Oni : p/2688659

Please reply accordingly.
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano

_Gezo_ wrote:

Small reminder to OniJAM who has not replied to goku and my mods to his taiko diffs. :U

Gezo/Muzu : p/2672128
Goku : p/2679383
Gezo/Oni : p/2688659

Please reply accordingly.
Fixed a few days ago, sorry for not to apply for your mod. At that time I was so busy with my exam so I checked quickly and forgot replying :o (But your long mod is a really good English practice text for me lol)
Gezo's mod: Fixed a lot (I'm using a mobile now so I can't remember where I fixed without seeing my diffs. Really sorry about that)
Goku's mod: Nothing fixed. But thank you all the same
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