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Pretty Rhythm
654 posts
Joined February 2012
Pretty Rhythm
Hello! From My Queue >ㅅ<

[Easy]
00:26:288 (1) - This slider isn't match the music.. maybe
I don't think it need breaktime :o
01:20:038 (1) - Remove NC
I think You should unity DS Note...

[Normal]
00:26:288 (1) - Same as easy... :o

[galvenize]
00:26:209 (1,2) - I think 1/8 silder is good. too
00:31:209 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:54:256 (1) - Remove NC

Good Hitsound and map! :D
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

[Normal]
00:26:288 (1) - Same as easy... :o there is an acciaccatura there. The circle is on the main note, so it is correct. On Insane and galvenize the acciaccatura is mapped

[Insane]
00:54:256 (1) - Remove NC i'll do something like this http://puu.sh/58wda.jpg if somebody else tells me i should change NC here, I'm keeping it as it is for now, i think it looks neater

Good Hitsound and map! :D Thank you!
Thanks for your mod!
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue
Hello~
From my modding queue



Here are something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this. Here are some suggestions. And here is some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Hope it ranked soon!
[Pagno's Easy]
00:26:288 (1,1) - Flow here is not so good.
00:58:788 (2,3,1) - Flow not so good.
01:01:913 (2,1) - ^
01:09:413 (2,1) - ^
01:30:038 (1,2,1,2) - Distance snap is suggested.
[Normal]
Nice diff no issues here.
[Nemis' Hard]
Nice diff!
01:23:788 (1,2) - Flow is not so good.

[Insane]
Nice diff!
00:48:319 (5) - ctrl +G?
01:16:131 (6,1) - Flow here is not so good


[galvenize]

00:21:288 (1) - Stack on 00:18:475 (4) ?
00:26:209 (1,2) - Stack on 00:23:475 (4) ?
00:27:225 (5,1) - At least the distance should be as 00:26:600 (3,4)
00:43:319 (5,6) - Not suitable to use 3/4 here especially the slider covered white tick
00:45:819 (5,6) - ^
00:51:756 (10) - If you really want to have 3/4 in the diff, keep last 2 sliders..This one should be changed. Cause you have same set on other beats and this one is not the same.
01:18:319 (2,3,4) - Why not using bigger distance?
01:25:506 (4,5,6) - I don't think it's reasonable to have this distance not equal.
01:27:694 (1,2,3) - ^

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.:) .
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro

azuretwinight wrote:

[Normal]
Nice diff no issues here.
[Insane]
Nice diff!
00:48:319 (5) - ctrl +G?
01:16:131 (6,1) - Flow here is not so good

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.:)
Thanks for your mod! I didn't change anything on Normal and Insane, but your suggestions will help the other diffs a lot for sure ;)
Vhy
678 posts
Joined November 2012
Vhy
ahooooy >w<

mod from my queue.

fix this? http://puu.sh/5amUf.png

[Pagno's Easy]
00:26:288 (1) somehow i don't like this shape, i prefer a normal curvy slider here
01:02:538 (1) Make a opposite curve here?
01:23:788 (2) ^
01:26:288 (2) ^
01:31:288 (1) remove NC

[Normal]
00:28:788 (1) add whistle at slider's reverse and tail? i can hear clearly the piano sound there
01:19:100 missing note on purpose?
01:30:038 (1) make a opposite curve?

[Nemis's Hard]
yaaay clear ~

[Insane]
00:21:913 (2,3,4,5,6) how about try this. swap 4 to 3, 3 to 2, 2 to 4. so it would be like this http://puu.sh/5alZb.jpg
00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) hmm just my opinion. try this
SPOILER
156,56,43788,5,0,0:0:0:0:
324,192,43944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,192,44100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,56,44256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,192,44413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,192,44569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,328,44725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,328,44881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:03:788 (1,2) blanket this perfectly
01:05:038 (5) better change it to 2 circles
01:13:163 (3,4) swap these slider then ctrl+g the second one

[galvenize]
00:22:538 (1,2,3,4) make a same DS as previous one
00:27:538 (1,2,3,4) ^
00:53:944 (7,8,9) it's better to stack them
00:58:944 (8,9,10) ^
01:10:975 (3,4) unstack these both circles, or make it 4 streams
01:26:756 (2) shorthen it to 1/2 slider and reverse it

ok that's all
Good luck >w<
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro

Vhy wrote:

fix this? http://puu.sh/5amUf.png ? I don't understand

[Normal]
00:28:788 (1) add whistle at slider's reverse and tail? i can hear clearly the piano sound there done
01:19:100 missing note on purpose? yep
01:30:038 (1) make a opposite curve? i like the curve like this more

[Insane]
00:21:913 (2,3,4,5,6) how about try this. swap 4 to 3, 3 to 2, 2 to 4. so it would be like this http://puu.sh/5alZb.jpg I'll think about this, but I'll keep it as it is for now
00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) hmm just my opinion. try this Changed! I'm still not 100% satisfied but it's nicer than mine :)
SPOILER
156,56,43788,5,0,0:0:0:0:
324,192,43944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,192,44100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,56,44256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,192,44413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,192,44569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,328,44725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,328,44881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:03:788 (1,2) blanket this perfectly I like this blanket
01:05:038 (5) better change it to 2 circles I don't see why
01:13:163 (3,4) swap these slider then ctrl+g the second one It could be an idea, but i like it as it is for now
Thanks for your mod! :)
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
Hi you r queue

[Insane]
00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - suggestion.
SPOILER
284,184,43788,5,0,0:0:0:0:
460,136,43944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,184,44100,2,0,L|296:268,1,85
236,352,44413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,44569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,148,44725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,184,44881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Nyukai
[Insane]
00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/5boxp.jpg
00:57:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/5boKY.jpg

256,72,43788,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,43944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,192,44100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,192,44256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,96,44413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,288,44569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,96,44725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,288,44881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,316,57538,6,0,P|348:268|340:216,1,85
211,68,57850,2,0,P|164:116|172:168,1,85
380,147,58163,2,0,P|332:100|280:108,1,85
132,237,58475,2,0,P|180:284|232:276,1,85
256,88,58788,5,0,0:0:0:0:
444,192,58944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,344,59100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,192,59256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,59413,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,59569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,59725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,272,59881,1,0,0:0:0:0:

=w=
Pagno
175 posts
Joined September 2012
Pagno
Increased AR by 1, fixed several distance snaps, changed last 4 beats and other random fixes!

.osu
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Overture.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62459
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16288
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Overture
TitleUnicode:Overture
Artist:MuryokuP
ArtistUnicode:無力P
Creator:Sephibro
Version:Pagno's Easy
Source:
Tags:your pianist piano megurine luka vocaloid pagno galvenize nemis
BeatmapID:314688
BeatmapSetID:122520

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"luka-megurine-playing-piano.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,33988,35473
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,128,255,255

[TimingPoints]
11288,625,4,2,1,15,1,0
16288,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,15,0,0
36913,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
38163,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
39413,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
40663,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
41288,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0
42538,312.5,4,1,1,60,1,0
92225,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
92538,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 184,102,238
Combo2 : 128,255,128
Combo3 : 21,138,255

[HitObjects]
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144,120,21288,6,0,B|200:80|256:120|256:120|316:80|366:118,2,240.000009155273
384,80,26288,6,0,B|416:144|392:224|312:224|352:344,1,240.000009155273,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,117,28788,6,0,P|295:73|384:80,2,180.000006866455,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,31288,2,0,P|208:256|323:201,2,240.000009155273,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,36913,12,0,41288,1:0:0:0:
168,104,42538,6,0,B|120:152|128:216|128:216|88:248,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,43788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,144,44413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,88,45038,6,0,B|487:106|487:106|510:199|423:256,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,304,46288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,224,46913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,144,47538,6,0,P|192:80|280:96,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,224,48788,2,0,P|120:288|32:272,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,50038,5,4,0:0:0:0:
216,224,50663,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,152,51288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,51913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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464,224,54413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,152,55038,6,0,B|304:136|304:136|255:72|175:76,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,56288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,76,56913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
67,132,57538,6,0,P|109:198|184:224,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,224,58788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,59413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
397,88,60038,6,0,P|381:165|328:224,2,160,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,61913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,120,62538,6,0,P|72:184|64:288,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,240,63788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,64413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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140,220,66913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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140,220,69413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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249,119,90663,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,256,91288,1,4,0:0:0:0:
96,112,91913,2,0,P|176:96|288:152,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
From Queue~

Insane
Open to read
00:16:288 (1) - volume up to 15, same as Normal diff
01:01:288 (1) - move to x248 y344
01:03:788 (1) - first bending move to x192 y228
01:04:881 (5) - rotate like 01:04:725 (4)
01:07:538 (1) - move to x152 y56
01:11:913 (3) - rotate selection centre -12
01:18:788 (1) - rotate like 01:19:100 (2)

Amazing piano follow...


galvenize
Open to read
00:16:288 (1) - volume up to 15, same as Normal diff
00:18:788 - +break??
00:23:788 - ^
00:44:256 (10) - can replace a circle and slider
00:45:194 (2) - bending point move to x368 y244
00:45:819 (5) - bending point move to x300 y132, tail point x356 y112
00:49:256 (10) - bending point move to x88 y136
00:50:819 (5) - bending point move to x332 y168, tail point x388 y248
00:53:319 (5,6) - tail and head get close
00:57:694 (2) - bending point move to x304 y92, slider move to y128
01:01:756 (11) - tail point move to x152 y320
01:06:131 (5) - stack circle (4) better
01:15:819 (5) - head point x244 y212
01:23:579 (6,1) - get close like 01:23:163 (4,5)


Nemis' Hard
Open to read
00:16:288 (1) - I can't hear any sounds, volume up to 15, same as Normal diff (I don't know other diff I can hear - _ -)
01:12:225 (4) - tail stack slider (2)

no more problem.
Good^^


Normal
Open to read
00:19:100 - break??
00:24:100 - ^
01:09:100 - circle??
01:19:100 - ^


Pagno's Easy
Open to read
Nice!!

I hope my mod can help you. :)
Good lock
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro

m1223961117 wrote:

Insane
Open to read
00:16:288 (1) - volume up to 15, same as Normal diff done
01:01:288 (1) - move to x248 y344 done!
01:03:788 (1) - first bending move to x192 y228 PERFECT!
01:04:881 (5) - rotate like 01:04:725 (4) not exactly this but i improved it following your suggestion
01:07:538 (1) - move to x152 y56 done!
01:11:913 (3) - rotate selection centre -12 done!
01:18:788 (1) - rotate like 01:19:100 (2) i like it as it is

Amazing piano follow... thank you! :)

Normal
Open to read
00:19:100 - break?? there was a break there, but it was useless so i removed it
00:24:100 - ^ ^
01:09:100 - circle?? no
01:19:100 - ^ no
Changed nothing on Normal and everything on Insane..Thank you for your mod!
sjoy
1,025 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
From my queue
I think thie hitsound before 00:42:538 is too low .at least 25% is rankable
[Pagno's Easy]
nothing
[Normal]
01:09:100 (2) - add a note?
[Nemis' Hard]
01:00:975 (3) - ctrl+g?
01:24:413 (2) - check the spacing it's too far for hard diff
01:30:038 increase the hitsounds?
[galvenize]
01:18:475 (3,6) - stack them?
[Insane]
01:11:288 (1) - ctrl+g

sorry I can't mod this kind map
star good luck for rank :)
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
Hi, M4M here. Sorry for late!

EZ & NM are nice!

[Nemis' Hard]
01:24:413 (2) - Ctrl+G to move the jump to 01:25:038 (1) - is better imo, to keep the jump with the finish.

[galvenize]
00:43:788 (7) - NC may set here. HP=7 so you'd better keep combo below 10, or HP-1 and ignore all of these NC suggestions.
00:46:288 (7) - ^
00:48:788 (6) - ^
00:51:288 (7) - ^
00:53:944 (7) - ^
00:56:288 (7) - ^
00:58:788 (7) - ^
01:01:288 (7) - ^

01:07:069 (4,5) - Try ctrl+G?
01:25:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel it hard to read, the rhythm is not clear here... you may use sliders instead

[Insane]

  1. 00:42:538 (1,2,3,4) - Let me have a try:
    SPOILER
    80,176,42538,6,0,L|183:214,1,85
    276,329,42850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    260,244,43006,2,0,L|345:173,1,85
    490,150,43318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    408,128,43475,2,0,L|304:89,1,85
  2. 00:48:163 (4,5) - The flow is a little awkward here. You may use ctrl+G on the slider or make a reverse slider:
    http://puu.sh/5d8AA.jpg
  3. 01:03:788 (1) - blanket
    SPOILER
    160,208,63788,6,0,P|232:208|272:112,1,170
  4. 01:04:725 (4,5) - Tiny suggestion:
    http://puu.sh/5d8K9.jpg
  5. 01:11:288 (1) - blanket
    SPOILER
    56,184,71288,6,0,P|100:128|200:184,1,170
  6. 01:13:475 (4) - Try ctrl+G?
  7. 01:16:288 (1) - ^
  8. 01:18:631 - May add a note to fit the drum sound
    http://puu.sh/5d8Wo.jpg
  9. 01:22:381 - Add 2 notes:
    http://puu.sh/5d90s.jpg
  10. 01:24:413 (3,4,5) - You may use sliders to cover these sounds:
    http://puu.sh/5d96F.jpg
    (reverse at 01:24:621 - )
  11. 00:23:788 (1) - Try whistle on the head?
Really impressive hitsounds, take my star ^^
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
[Insane]
00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern seem fine for me 0.0
00:59:413 (1,2,3,4) - mb try smth like this http://puu.sh/5f28D.jpg
01:03:788 (1) - bette rblanket http://puu.sh/5f2b7.jpg
01:11:288 (1) - move the last point down and left 1 grid for better blanket http://puu.sh/5f21E.jpg
01:17:225 (4) - mb try to move it a bit more down and left? for me the angle with this distance makes the flow really weird, this way might be more natural IMO
01:25:038 (1) ~ end - mb try soft-whistle here?

[galvenize]
omg it's been forever since I've seen one of your maps <3
01:11:288 (5) - finish on start, matches the ones before it
01:13:788 (1) - add finish on start to match the other part
01:16:288 (1) - ^
01:21:288 (1) - if you change others, add finish here too
01:24:413 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - this should be 1/3 not 1/4

[Nemis]
01:24:413 (2) - don't you think this jump is too big for hard diff

[Normal]
fine

[Pagno]
00:31:288 (2) - remove whistle from repeat. i see you're following piano so this fits better IMO
01:22:538 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - not sure if wrong spacing is allowed in easy or not

that's it hope it helps
nice map, GL ~ :D
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro
sjoy

sjoy wrote:

[Normal]
01:09:100 (2) - add a note? no, the pause there is
[Insane]
01:11:288 (1) - ctrl+g this would create some crazy spacing
Autumn

Autumn wrote:

[Insane]

  1. 00:42:538 (1,2,3,4) - Let me have a try: i didn't want to change this pattern, it was the following one
    SPOILER
    80,176,42538,6,0,L|183:214,1,85
    276,329,42850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    260,244,43006,2,0,L|345:173,1,85
    490,150,43318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    408,128,43475,2,0,L|304:89,1,85
  2. 00:48:163 (4,5) - The flow is a little awkward here. You may use ctrl+G on the slider or make a reverse slider: definitely yes, a reverse slider is nice here
  3. 01:03:788 (1) - blanket changed a little, but i still didn't make a perfect blanket - this one was the effect i wanted to give
    SPOILER
    160,208,63788,6,0,P|232:208|272:112,1,170
  4. 01:04:725 (4,5) - Tiny suggestion: it was like this before, it is funnier as it is now with those minijumps
    http://puu.sh/5d8K9.jpg
  5. 01:11:288 (1) - blanket changed a little, but i still didn't make a perfect blanket - this one was the effect i wanted to give
    SPOILER
    56,184,71288,6,0,P|100:128|200:184,1,170
  6. 01:13:475 (4) - Try ctrl+G? i don't like it
  7. 01:16:288 (1) - ^ i want to increase the spacing because the note here is quite high compared to the previous one
  8. 01:18:631 - May add a note to fit the drum sound
    http://puu.sh/5d8Wo.jpg
  9. 01:22:381 - Add 2 notes: adding 2 notes 1/4 snapped would be incorrect, btw adding 1 note 1/3 snapped could be a good idea - i'll think about it
    http://puu.sh/5d90s.jpg
  10. 01:24:413 (3,4,5) - You may use sliders to cover these sounds: i think circles are nicer but this isn't a bad idea
    http://puu.sh/5d96F.jpg
    (reverse at 01:24:621 - )
  11. 00:23:788 (1) - Try whistle on the head? done!
Really impressive hitsounds, take my star ^^ Thank you!
pieguy

pieguy1372 wrote:

[Insane]
00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern seem fine for me 0.0 but i think it still can be improved!
00:59:413 (1,2,3,4) - mb try smth like this http://puu.sh/5f28D.jpg i prefer circles here
01:03:788 (1) - bette rblanket http://puu.sh/5f2b7.jpg changed a little, but i still didn't make a perfect blanket - this one was the effect i wanted to give
01:11:288 (1) - move the last point down and left 1 grid for better blanket http://puu.sh/5f21E.jpg done
01:17:225 (4) - mb try to move it a bit more down and left? for me the angle with this distance makes the flow really weird, this way might be more natural IMO angle and distance doesn't really matter with these kind of sliders, but i changed it to make it nicer
01:25:038 (1) ~ end - mb try soft-whistle here? i didn't understand this suggestion - do you mean to replace finish with whistle? or add whistle keeping the finish?

nice map, GL ~ :D thank you!

Thank you all!
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
sry for confusion, I mean add soft-whistle keeping the finish
also I forgot star .-.
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. 01:22:538~01:32:381: how about adding Kiai-Time?
[Normal]

  • Good!
[Insane]
  1. 00:23:475 (7) - I prefer to move to x:270 y:138
  2. 00:44:881 (8,1) - move to x:356 y:328 (make symmetric pattern)
  3. 01:03:475 (5) - I prefer Ctrl+G
[Pagno's Easy]
  1. for easy-diff, you should uniform DS as much as possible
[Nemis' Hard]
  1. 00:33:475 (1) - awkward. is it on purpose?
  2. 00:47:538 (1) - symmetric curve slider about 00:47:850 (2) - is better
  3. 01:00:506 (2) - I prefer the following. it is better to add any hitsound at 01:00:663
[galvenize]
  1. 01:18:475 (3,4,5,6) - avoid overlap
is it introduction? Good Instrumental~
~Good Luck~
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro
Added kiai fountain at 00:42:538 and kiai time 01:22:538~01:32:381

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. 01:22:538~01:32:381: how about adding Kiai-Time? added!
[Insane]
  1. 00:23:475 (7) - I prefer to move to x:270 y:138 moved
  2. 00:44:881 (8,1) - move to x:356 y:328 (make symmetric pattern) moved
  3. 01:03:475 (5) - I prefer Ctrl+G changed!
is it introduction? Good Instrumental~ yes it's the opening of the album Your Pianist by MuryokuP
~Good Luck~
Thanks for your mod, I changed everything!
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hi~

[Pagno's Easy]
01:32:538 - Keep the 20% for volume here, don't silence it that much :P

[Normal]
00:17:538 (2) - How about finishing this 1/2 beat earlier? This way it'll match correctly whit the piano.
00:22:538 (3) - ^
01:27:538 (1,2,3,4) - You somehow broken your symmetry axis here, not a big deal but looked a bit off.

[Insane]
00:18:788 (1) - I'd suggest to start this slider in 00:18:788 (1), it matches with piano and the hold beginning here feels better.
00:23:788 (1) - Similar as above.
00:33:475 (1) - You did it here >.>
00:45:506 (3,4) - This jump is quite excessive imo, comparing it with other parts in the music like this.
01:03:475 (5,1) - This may drop the flow a bit, a small jump would fit better here.
01:09:100 (2,3) - ^
01:11:288 (1) - I was expecting this going in the other way, you could reverse it (Ctrl+G), you may need to change the placement of the next circle.
01:19:100 (2,3) - As in 01:03:475

Couldn't find anything wrong/to improve in Nemis' and galvenize's diffs, they're pretty nice.

That'd be all from my part, I'd wish to help to find some patterns for those parts you're looking for, but I tried and ended being awful, sorry >.<
Good luck o/
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro
12/11: Redownload for new hitsounds (yeah again)

DakeDekaane wrote:

[Normal]
00:17:538 (2) - How about finishing this 1/2 beat earlier? This way it'll match correctly whit the piano. It was like you said in the beginning - then i decided to make it finish 1/2 later even if the tail apparently snaps on nothing because that last note is held, so it sound much better like this imo (following that note for a bit rather than finishing when the note begins)
00:22:538 (3) - ^
01:27:538 (1,2,3,4) - You somehow broken your symmetry axis here, not a big deal but looked a bit off. Changed!

[Insane]
00:18:788 (1) - I'd suggest to start this slider in 00:18:788 (1), it matches with piano and the hold beginning here feels better. Yeah that was the plan since the beginning, changed
00:23:788 (1) - Similar as above. changed here too
00:33:475 (1) - You did it here >.> evil plans
00:45:506 (3,4) - This jump is quite excessive imo, comparing it with other parts in the music like this. I'm waiting for an inspiration about this - I'll definitely change it when I have a good one! :P
01:03:475 (5,1) - This may drop the flow a bit, a small jump would fit better here. I gtrl+G'd (5) this afternoon, i had this feeling too - I'll think about something cooler
01:09:100 (2,3) - ^ increased spacing
01:11:288 (1) - I was expecting this going in the other way, you could reverse it (Ctrl+G), you may need to change the placement of the next circle. I like this weird flow tbh - btw sjoy suggested me to reverse it too, i might think about something nicer
01:19:100 (2,3) - As in 01:03:475 increased spacing
Thank you Dake! <3
[-mii-chan-]
167 posts
Joined March 2012
[-mii-chan-]
From my IRC queue :D just finished

IRC
2013-11-14 20:26 o0ohitomio0o: hello
2013-11-14 20:26 o0ohitomio0o: sr for the delay
2013-11-14 20:26 Sephibro: hi
2013-11-14 20:27 Sephibro: no problem
2013-11-14 20:27 Sephibro: :)
2013-11-14 20:27 o0ohitomio0o: very bad internet yesterday :S
2013-11-14 20:27 o0ohitomio0o: :DDDD
2013-11-14 20:29 o0ohitomio0o: so which do I mod
2013-11-14 20:29 o0ohitomio0o: only ur dif or all difs?
2013-11-14 20:30 Sephibro: start with normal and Insane
2013-11-14 20:30 o0ohitomio0o: ok
2013-11-14 20:30 o0ohitomio0o: taking a look at normal~
2013-11-14 20:30 Sephibro: if you have something to point out on the others too just write it btw
2013-11-14 20:32 o0ohitomio0o: ok so I'll start w ur NM & IN
2013-11-14 20:33 Sephibro: ok let me restart osu one moment
2013-11-14 20:35 Sephibro: k back
2013-11-14 20:35 o0ohitomio0o: k
2013-11-14 20:35 o0ohitomio0o: 00:17:538 (2,3,3) -
2013-11-14 20:35 o0ohitomio0o: these 3 sliders
2013-11-14 20:36 o0ohitomio0o: they don't have the same pattern although the beat seems the same :s
2013-11-14 20:36 o0ohitomio0o: I suggest you stick to 3/2 stanza's long
2013-11-14 20:37 o0ohitomio0o: like the one at 00:32:538 (3) -
2013-11-14 20:39 Sephibro: as i've already answered to DakeDekaane, i made these sliders end on the white tick because in the music the notes here 00:18:475 - and here 00:23:475 - are held
2013-11-14 20:40 o0ohitomio0o: ok if that's ur idea :D
2013-11-14 20:41 Sephibro: so i preferred to make these sliders to end nearer to the release of the note rather than when it's pressed, i think it's a nicer effect
2013-11-14 20:41 o0ohitomio0o: imo I think NM should stick to one particular slider length at almost-the-same parts
2013-11-14 20:41 o0ohitomio0o: also the change here is subtle
2013-11-14 20:42 I can't detect the piano held there *I'm not using my headphones atm*
2013-11-14 20:48 o0ohitomio0o: 00:53:475 (2,3,4,5,6) - also aren't these a little too much tapping for NM?
2013-11-14 20:50 Sephibro: uhm
2013-11-14 20:50 Sephibro: do you think so? :O
2013-11-14 20:51 o0ohitomio0o: I think so, considering the speed there
2013-11-14 20:52 o0ohitomio0o: my mapping is that I don't scare off newbies in EZ & NM :p
2013-11-14 20:53 Sephibro: nobody complained about those before, i made some newb players try it and they had no problems
2013-11-14 20:53 Sephibro: I'll make some other ones test it btw
2013-11-14 20:53 Sephibro: thanks for pointing out, i'll take that into account
2013-11-14 20:53 o0ohitomio0o: ok, I'll take this for some new players in VN too to try
2013-11-14 20:54 Sephibro: thank you! :D
2013-11-14 20:54 o0ohitomio0o: and if you take those into account, u should also consider this too 01:05:975 (2,3,4,5,6) -
2013-11-14 20:54 o0ohitomio0o: basically the same
2013-11-14 20:54 Sephibro: of course
2013-11-14 20:54 Sephibro: and this too
2013-11-14 20:54 Sephibro: 01:23:475 (2,3,4,5,6) -
2013-11-14 20:55 o0ohitomio0o: yeah
2013-11-14 20:55 o0ohitomio0o: can't you merge 2-3 & 5-6 into 2 sliders?
2013-11-14 20:55 o0ohitomio0o: if you want
2013-11-14 20:56 Sephibro: or 3-4 & 5-6
2013-11-14 20:56 o0ohitomio0o: yeah any combination is ok
2013-11-14 20:59 o0ohitomio0o: hitsounds r ok, pretty good actually :D
2013-11-14 20:59 Sephibro: oh thank you :)
2013-11-14 21:00 o0ohitomio0o: wait
2013-11-14 21:00 o0ohitomio0o: y r the hitsounds in insane are like AWESOME ><
2013-11-14 21:01 o0ohitomio0o: when in NM they're ordinary ones?
2013-11-14 21:01 o0ohitomio0o: :S
2013-11-14 21:01 Sephibro: because there weren't enought beats in normal
2013-11-14 21:02 o0ohitomio0o: :s sadly for that
2013-11-14 21:02 Sephibro: to full hitsound with notes
2013-11-14 21:02 Sephibro: :P
2013-11-14 21:03 o0ohitomio0o: 00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - about these
2013-11-14 21:03 Sephibro: yeah
2013-11-14 21:03 o0ohitomio0o: I dunno if my suggestion is "cool" enough lol
2013-11-14 21:03 o0ohitomio0o: but lemme see what I can do
2013-11-14 21:03 o0ohitomio0o: it looks crazy if u're playing really
2013-11-14 21:04 o0ohitomio0o: although the distance snap isn't that far but still
2013-11-14 21:05 Sephibro: thank you!
2013-11-14 21:05 o0ohitomio0o: u map insane w symmetry
2013-11-14 21:05 o0ohitomio0o: so maybe I can offer u something
2013-11-14 21:08 o0ohitomio0o: here's what I think
2013-11-14 21:09 o0ohitomio0o: http://puu.sh/5i5UN.jpg
2013-11-14 21:09 o0ohitomio0o: dunno if it suits u
2013-11-14 21:10 o0ohitomio0o: square jumps might be easy for tablet-ers
2013-11-14 21:10 o0ohitomio0o: but can be combo breaker for mouse
2013-11-14 21:10 Sephibro: actually i was better at squares with mouse :P
2013-11-14 21:10 o0ohitomio0o: lol
2013-11-14 21:10 Sephibro: btw i'll try it
2013-11-14 21:12 o0ohitomio0o: 00:48:788 (1,2,3,4) - these 4 sliders
2013-11-14 21:12 o0ohitomio0o: reverse their starts & ends?
2013-11-14 21:12 o0ohitomio0o: increase distance like Charless445/s Caravan Palace?
2013-11-14 21:12 o0ohitomio0o: more challenging imo
2013-11-14 21:14 o0ohitomio0o: also because the sliders here at 00:56:288 (1,2,3,4) - are also going in
2013-11-14 21:14 o0ohitomio0o: a little more variety is always better no? :D
2013-11-14 21:15 Sephibro: so you mean
2013-11-14 21:15 Sephibro: 00:48:788 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+G each of these
2013-11-14 21:16 o0ohitomio0o: yeah :D
2013-11-14 21:17 o0ohitomio0o: 00:57:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
2013-11-14 21:17 o0ohitomio0o: try moving them of the center of the screen
2013-11-14 21:17 o0ohitomio0o: *off the center
2013-11-14 21:18 o0ohitomio0o: you might be surprised
2013-11-14 21:19 Sephibro: would you make a screenshot?
2013-11-14 21:22 o0ohitomio0o: 00:57:538 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/5i6iC.jpg
2013-11-14 21:22 o0ohitomio0o: 00:58:788 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ctrl+G these
2013-11-14 21:23 o0ohitomio0o: & move 00:59:413 (1,2,3,4) - like this http://puu.sh/5i6kY.jpg
2013-11-14 21:24 Sephibro: uh that's kinda nice
2013-11-14 21:25 o0ohitomio0o: just make 3 combos interlocking w each other is ok I think
2013-11-14 21:26 Sephibro: probably i'll follow these guidelines
2013-11-14 21:26 o0ohitomio0o: :3
2013-11-14 21:27 o0ohitomio0o: glad if u like it
2013-11-14 21:27 Sephibro: :)
2013-11-14 21:29 o0ohitomio0o: 01:04:725 (4,5) - too few beats apart?
2013-11-14 21:29 o0ohitomio0o: only 1 beat
2013-11-14 21:29 o0ohitomio0o: 01:04:881 (5) - ctrl+G the 5?
2013-11-14 21:29 Sephibro: it was a stream
2013-11-14 21:29 o0ohitomio0o: yes yes
2013-11-14 21:30 o0ohitomio0o: what I mean is
2013-11-14 21:30 o0ohitomio0o: this seems like "a trap" for players
2013-11-14 21:31 o0ohitomio0o: I mean it's a stream w sliders but the distance suddenly increasw => a forced jump when unexpected
2013-11-14 21:31 o0ohitomio0o: easily get 100 there
2013-11-14 21:31 Sephibro: http://puu.sh/5i6AT.jpg how about this
2013-11-14 21:31 Sephibro: i find them pretty easy to play btw
2013-11-14 21:32 Sephibro: i try my map over and over to be sure it's easy to full combo
2013-11-14 21:32 o0ohitomio0o: lol u r like ~#700 :D
2013-11-14 21:32 o0ohitomio0o: many players can't get such a high rank
2013-11-14 21:32 o0ohitomio0o: btw it seems to work more
2013-11-14 21:32 o0ohitomio0o: :D
2013-11-14 21:35 o0ohitomio0o: 01:24:100 (2) - sudden jump! ><
2013-11-14 21:36 o0ohitomio0o: really really should fix this :s
2013-11-14 21:36 Sephibro: ok i'll probably reduce that distance snap :P
2013-11-14 21:37 o0ohitomio0o: http://puu.sh/5i6Mg.jpg
2013-11-14 21:37 o0ohitomio0o: this is more fit to me
2013-11-14 21:39 o0ohitomio0o: 01:25:038 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:27:538 (1,2,3,4) - same there, reduce distance =w=
2013-11-14 21:41 Sephibro: i'll probably put it halfway, something like this http://puu.sh/5i6Si.jpg
2013-11-14 21:42 o0ohitomio0o: wait where is that pattern?
2013-11-14 21:43 Sephibro: 01:23:788 (1,2,3) -
2013-11-14 21:43 o0ohitomio0o: ok anyways less distance is ok
2013-11-14 21:43 Sephibro: they are pretty easy to play btw, they are 1/3 snapped not 1/4
2013-11-14 21:44 o0ohitomio0o: yeah I noticed
2013-11-14 21:44 o0ohitomio0o: *now actually*
2013-11-14 21:44 o0ohitomio0o: ;p
2013-11-14 21:46 o0ohitomio0o: so basically just make them nearer to each other & that's good :D
2013-11-14 21:46 o0ohitomio0o: I just point out & give basic suggestions
2013-11-14 21:46 o0ohitomio0o: creativity is yours :D
2013-11-14 21:47 o0ohitomio0o: I like this map pretty much :D
2013-11-14 21:47 o0ohitomio0o: star for it~
2013-11-14 21:47 Sephibro: :D i'm glad you do
2013-11-14 21:48 o0ohitomio0o: so just a little question
2013-11-14 21:48 o0ohitomio0o: how do you think of my modding quality?
2013-11-14 21:48 o0ohitomio0o: I think it must have declined recently TwT
2013-11-14 21:49 Sephibro: you're precize enough and have good ideas
2013-11-14 21:49 o0ohitomio0o: :D
2013-11-14 21:49 o0ohitomio0o: tks
2013-11-14 21:51 Sephibro: btw post the /savelog on beatmap topic and i'll give kudosu and answer with the changes i've made :)
2013-11-14 21:51 o0ohitomio0o: :D
2013-11-14 21:51 o0ohitomio0o: k
2013-11-14 21:51 o0ohitomio0o: posting now
[NSER]-Zazalng
194 posts
Joined August 2012
[NSER]-Zazalng
hello sir i'm from mod queues I have 2 Thing mod here

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

All .osu file
Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [galvenize] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:42:538, ends on 00:42:557
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:538, ends on 01:32:381

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:42:538, ends on 00:42:557
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:538, ends on 01:32:381

- [Nemis' Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:42:538, ends on 00:42:557
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:538, ends on 01:32:381

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:42:538, ends on 00:42:557
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:538, ends on 01:32:381

- [Pagno's Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:42:538, ends on 00:42:557
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:538, ends on 01:32:538 << This is problem
My Mod ^^

[Easy]
Excellent

[Normal]
00:18:788 stop at 00:18:475 it correctly beat
00:23:788 stop at 00:23:475 too
00:50:038(1) try to snap with 00:47:850(2) so it is hard to understand let's look at picture


01:19:100 try this once // i think it isn't harder in normal mode


[Nemis' Hard]
Impassive I like it :)

[galvenize]
00:48:944 no sound enough for jump this one try to do same 00:46:444
00:56:522 this one too ^^ :)
01:24:413 (3),(6),(9) no whistle
this diff it very good jumping map but i think some 3 hit are stopped too much your song is continues overtime let's try to move slowly it a good reason for this diff, Do your best man :D

[Insane]
Impassive I love this diff, but i can't still play it :D

Finish Modding map see you next queues ^^
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro
@o0ohitomio0o:
[Normal]
00:17:538 (2) - 00:22:538 (3) - okay i made these sliders 1/2 shorter
Not changing the tap patterns

[Insane]
00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i'm keeping this one
00:57:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - big change here, it took me a good part of my afternoon to get here, your mod gave me a huge input! :)
01:04:725 (4,5) - repositioned
01:24:100 (2) - reduced distance snap

[NSER]-Zazalng wrote:

[Normal]
00:18:788 stop at 00:18:475 it correctly beat changed
00:23:788 stop at 00:23:475 too changed
00:50:038(1) try to snap with 00:47:850(2) so it is hard to understand let's look at picture It's not a big deal, 00:47:850(2) is MUCH before, it's not worth to fuck up distance snap and following patterns for a hardly noticeable thing :) btw if others complain about this i will try and find a solution

01:19:100 try this once // i think it isn't harder in normal mode I like that pause

[Insane]
Impassive I love this diff, but i can't still play it :D Thank you! :)
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro
15/11: redownload for new hitsounds - Nemis' Hard hitsounded!
Silverboxer
670 posts
Joined December 2012
Silverboxer
Pagno's Easy

00:16:288 (1) - not centered correctly. anchors (x140,y284) (x228,y240) (x284,y328) (x372,y284): http://puu.sh/5jj9j.jpg
00:42:538 (1,2,3,1) - move this to the left so the second slider isn't on the right border
01:31:913 (4) - extend to white tick
Normal

00:50:038 (1) - curve this a bit more to make more room for slider 2: http://puu.sh/5jjr1.jpg
01:31:913 (4) - extend to white tick
Nemis' Hard

00:18:475 (1) - move 6th anchor up to y312 to make the blanket perfect:
00:33:475 (1) - I personally don't like this long slider shape, it doesn't look as nice and clean as the other two in this diff
01:17:538 (1,2) - bad overlap right now: http://puu.sh/5jjMe.jpg This looks better to me: http://puu.sh/5jjP6.jpg
01:32:225 (4) - extend to white tick?
galvenize

Can't mod. (nice gd, sorry galvenize)
Insane

A few parts of the streams can be moved to look a bit better:
01:29:933 (12) - x316,y108
01:30:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - smooth this a bit more? circle 6 sticks out
01:32:225 (1) - extend to white tick?

Really nice mapset. Didn't find much wrong with anything so I gave you a star :3c
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro

silverboxer wrote:

Normal

00:50:038 (1) - curve this a bit more to make more room for slider 2: http://puu.sh/5jjr1.jpg done

Insane

A few parts of the streams can be moved to look a bit better:
01:29:933 (12) - x316,y108 moved (11) to make smoother curve
01:30:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - smooth this a bit more? circle 6 sticks out if you listen carefully to these points 01:29:100 - 01:30:038 - 01:30:663 - 01:31:288 you'll see that the changes in direction make much sense :)
Thanks for your mod! :)
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser
Heeeeeeeeeeeello~
Mod from #modreq

General:

Disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox, they are unnecessary. The rest is okay!

Insane:
  1. 00:55:194 (3) - *Nazi: This slider shape don't fit with the rhythm of the song and, for consistency and esthetics I recommend make it more curve or straight, like 00:49:725 (4,2) - blah blah.
  2. 01:08:006 (2) - This note is outside of the grid
    SPOILER
  3. 01:10:663 (3) - *Nazi: http://i.imgur.com/QIpfrjv.png / (3) touches (1) making them awful, I know you can make a better blanket here.
  4. 01:24:413 (3,4,5) - NC, because of downbeat.
galvenize:
  1. 01:32:381 (4) - NC because of downbeat. Imo.
Nemis
  1. kawia, chugoi.
Normal
  1. I found too high the HD, I suggest decrease 1 tick on it.
  2. 00:51:288 (3) - I see this slider out of the grid. take a look at your diff!
    SPOILER
  3. 00:51:288 (3,4) - are you sure these both sliders are the same? o.o Just asking.
Pagno's Easy
  1. I found this diff quite boring, circle, circle, circle, slider, circle...1/1 patterns everywhere. you can use 1/2 patterns for make something different <: An Easy diff can be funny as well!
  2. 01:22:538 (1,2,1,1,2) - weird flow o3o
  3. Overall isn't a bad diff, new combos are okay, hitsounds too.. but the rhythm is poor. It just need more mods, don't worry!
Nice song and map! good luck on ranking
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro

Cloudchaser wrote:

Mod from #modreq This is the best day of my life, WILL YOU MARRY ME?

General:

Disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox, they are unnecessary. The rest is okay! Done!

Insane:
  1. 00:55:194 (3) - *Nazi: This slider shape don't fit with the rhythm of the song and, for consistency and esthetics I recommend make it more curve or straight, like 00:49:725 (4,2) - blah blah. Yeah it never convinced me
  2. 01:08:006 (2) - This note is outside of the grid Fixed
    SPOILER
  3. 01:10:663 (3) - *Nazi: http://i.imgur.com/QIpfrjv.png / (3) touches (1) making them awful, I know you can make a better blanket here. (3) and (1) don't touch, the blanket looks good to me :O
  4. 01:24:413 (3,4,5) - NC, because of downbeat. Fixed
Normal
  1. I found too high the HD, I suggest decrease 1 tick on it. Ok HP3 it is
  2. 00:51:288 (3) - I see this slider out of the grid. take a look at your diff! Fixed!
    SPOILER
  3. 00:51:288 (3,4) - are you sure these both sliders are the same? o.o Just asking. okay now i'm sure they are!
Nice song and map! good luck on ranking
I love you have my babies! also very good mod
bigfrog
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
bigfrog
hello~!! from my queue's M4M ><
i have late for one day :<

Pagno's Easy
00:28:788 (1,2) - 120|216 to blanket better?
01:11:288 (2,1) - ^

Normal
01:17:538 (1) - more bending looks better :
01:18:475 (2) - what about reserve this slider and make a triangle like this :

Nemis' Hard
00:45:663 (3) - don't bent this,parallel 00:45:038 (1,2) may be better since you NC at 00:46:131 (1)...it's mean new part,right?
00:53:006 (2) - try this rhythm please since there is a clap at 00:53:163 :
and many others too ><

galvenize
hmm,i can mod anything at this difficult,it's very nice.

Insane
01:03:475 (5,1) - blanket better
01:08:163 (3) - bent like 01:07:538 (1)? just since i think that'll looks better :<

so much stream ~!!! but great :3

sorry,this not a good mod ;_; i can't mod anymore...
also since your map is very neat :P
Good Luck~!!!!!
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro

bigfrog wrote:

Normal
01:17:538 (1) - more bending looks better : Awesome!
01:18:475 (2) - what about reserve this slider and make a triangle like this : i don't want a beat there

Insane
01:03:475 (5,1) - blanket better this blanket is good enough
01:08:163 (3) - bent like 01:07:538 (1)? just since i think that'll looks better :< Fixed!

so much stream ~!!! but great :3

sorry,this not a good mod ;_; i can't mod anymore...
also since your map is very neat :P
Good Luck~!!!!!
Thanks for your mod! :)
galvenize
919 posts
Joined June 2010
galvenize
Updated

http://puu.sh/5jXBW.rar
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Lust
From my queueueue

Sorry this is late
[Pagno's Easy]
  1. 01:02:538 (1,2) - would be better looking as a blanket
  2. 01:04:413 (3,1) - same with here
All that I could find! Nicely done.
[Normal]
  1. 00:44:413 (4) - angle slider end inwards a bit
  2. 01:11:913 (6) - ^
  3. 01:19:413 (3,1) - try this for better flow
[Nemis' Hard]
  1. 00:53:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try a different pattern other then this? awkward for me to play, but that might not be true for others
[galvenize]
nothing could be found! Was very fun to play
[Insane]
Nothing found as well

Very nicely mapped! Good luck with rank!
Saturnalize
1,490 posts
Joined March 2011
Saturnalize

Pagno's Easy

  1. Slider end stack is nono : http://puu.sh/5kDgA.jpg , http://puu.sh/5kDj9.jpg
  2. 01:22:538 (1,2,1,2) - Try to be more creative in this part : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1107009 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1107012 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1107014

Normal


Nemis' Hard

  1. 00:23:475 (1) - I hate you, please reduce the spacing. No, it's not okay, if you ask me.
  2. 00:33:475 (1) - What kind of slider is this
  3. 01:22:538 (1) - Could you move it a bit upper so the head looks more visible?
  4. 01:29:413 (3,4) - All of sudden, why
  5. But I like how you put whistle, lovely.

galvenize

  1. It took some tries for me to get your beat
  2. But it's pretty hard to figure it out
  3. I was expecting more but this is great enough. I can't find any problem.

Insane

  1. 00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/5kFpH.jpg ; idk what I'm doing lol
  2. 01:24:413 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1107057

As for general I think the piano plays it's last note at 01:32:433
Remember that most of my mod are suggestions.
Don't forget to check AIMod for general mistake (unsnap, preview, etc)
Good luck.
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro

Lust wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:44:413 (4) - angle slider end inwards a bit done
  2. 01:11:913 (6) - ^ this is ok
  3. 01:19:413 (3,1) - try this for better flow this would mess with distance snap a lot

Loli Cjj wrote:

Insane

  1. 00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/5kFpH.jpg ; idk what I'm doing lol this one flows better imo
  2. 01:24:413 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1107057 i've thought about doing this too, but they're single notes there
Thank you both for your mods!
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
FrzR
Hello, from #modreqs

[General]
MuryokuP <3
[Pagno's Easy]
Pretty good map. Didn't see any problems here.
[Normal]
Set tick rate to 2. Especially on the intro, the ticks match to the piano notes in the song.
[Nemi's Hard]
The slider velocity is too slow on the intro. 0.75x would be better.
01:08:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Very confusing pattern. >< I suggest changing this to another one.
[Conlusion]
That's it for me. Sorry if this mod isn't that very helpful at all. Your map is very good.
Good luck. ><
Oriance
87 posts
Joined May 2013
Oriance
Yo, from my Queue.

My god, what beautiful music :cry:

Easy
01:30:038 (1) - Doesn't really need a finish
01:31:288 (3) - ^
01:31:913 (4) - Remove finish, add clap

Normal
00:17:538 (2) - Blanket maybe?

galvenize
01:24:413 - For the stream, the whistles aren't necessary.

Honestly, this is pretty damn good in my opinion. Go get it ranked already, I'll be happy to dl and star it (Don't got any stars atm...)
Oh, don't kudos me if this isn't helpful.
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro

Oriance wrote:

Normal
00:17:538 (2) - Blanket maybe? good idea, done!
Thanks for your mod, i'm glad you like my map :)
CXu
osu! Alumni
3,558 posts
Joined March 2009
CXu
m4m from like a century ago. Hi.

[General]
  1. Fine.
[Insane]
  1. 00:53:788 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I can see what you're trying to do with the combo here, but it looks really weird when the strong beat at 00:55:038 - isn't a new combo. Consider removing NC from 00:54:256 (1) - and 00:54:725 (1) - , then add it at 00:55:038 (2) -
  2. 01:10:975 (4) - Make this a copy of 01:10:663 (3) - . Currently looks kinda off ingame.
  3. 01:32:225 (1) - End this at 01:32:498 - (1/8) ?
[galvenize]
  1. 00:53:163 (4,5) - Feels too close imo. You generally use a jump for this part, so yeah.
  2. 01:00:663 (4,5) - Same as above. ^
  3. 01:10:038 (1) - Missed a finish on head here.
  4. 01:24:100 (2) - Might just be personal preference, but a triple feels better to me here than a slider.
  5. 01:32:381 (4) - Make this a slider ending at 01:32:498 - (1/8) ? That is, if Sephibro does so in Insane.
[Nemis' Hard]
  1. I like the whistles, but they're a bit too loud for my tastes. Consider adding a custom whistle with lowered volume.
  2. 01:13:006 (2) - Stack with 01:12:225 (4) - ?
[Normal]
  1. 01:31:913 (4) - Same as Insane.
[Pagno's Easy]
  1. 00:16:288 (1) - Might as well move this so it's horizontally centered, seeing as 00:21:288 (1) - is more or less symmetrical.
  2. 00:31:288 (2) - New combo.
  3. 01:20:038 (3) - Same as above. ^
  4. 01:31:913 (4) - Considering ending this at 01:32:498 - (1/8), if Sephibro decides to do so in his diffs. 1/8 should be fine as it's the end of a slider, at the end of the map.
Not much to say. Love the hitsounds at the beginning of Hard, Insane and galv.
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Sephibro

CXu wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:53:788 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I can see what you're trying to do with the combo here, but it looks really weird when the strong beat at 00:55:038 - isn't a new combo. Consider removing NC from 00:54:256 (1) - and 00:54:725 (1) - , then add it at 00:55:038 (2) - that downbeat without a new combo bugged me too, changed even if it was probably more readable before
  2. 01:10:975 (4) - Make this a copy of 01:10:663 (3) - . Currently looks kinda off ingame. done
  3. 01:32:225 (1) - End this at 01:32:498 - (1/8) ? i ended it at 01:32:459 - http://puu.sh/5oZxH.jpg and reduced slider velocity to 0,8x
[Normal]
  1. 01:31:913 (4) - Same as Insane. same as Insane
Not much to say. Love the hitsounds at the beginning of Hard, Insane and galv.
Thank you! I'm glad you like those hitsounds :)
Pagno
175 posts
Joined September 2012
Pagno
There you are, Sephi~
Pagno's Easy
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
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TitleUnicode:Overture
Artist:MuryokuP
ArtistUnicode:無力P
Creator:Sephibro
Version:Pagno's Easy
Source:
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