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IOSYS - shining grace [Osu|Taiko]

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Chloe
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Joined April 2011
Chloe
I've already talked with the mapper a few times about his map and I wanna help ranking this, so here's my mod~

[General]
  1. 01:17:867 (1) - 这个转盘之后的break可以取消 右击break即可删除 所有DIFF
  2. 音效比较差 tick音效和静音sliderslide都是没有
[Normal]
  1. 01:23:534 (1) - 一般来说建议EZ和NM转盘之后接的NOTE处于屏幕中心左右 就像这样 http://puu.sh/4UtsM.jpg
  2. 00:18:867 (3) - 滑条头+whistle
  3. 00:20:201 (1) - 照理来说 既然你跟了VOCAL 那么这根滑条最好从00:20:367 - 这里开始
  4. 00:27:534 (1) - 00:28:534 (2) - 滑条头+clap
  5. 00:31:201 (2) - clap
  6. 00:33:534 (2,3) - 取消头部finish 00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 00:35:534 (1) - 尾巴全部+clap
  7. 00:43:534 (1) - 头部finish
  8. 01:06:867 (4) - 滑条头+whistle
  9. 01:23:534 (1) - 取消头部clap
  10. 01:27:534 (3) - 取消屁股clap
  11. 01:31:534 (1) - 取消头部clap 换成finish
  12. 01:58:201 (1) - 01:58:367 - 这里开始 老地方结束
  13. 总体来说 排列略差 没有全局性 而且其实可以用tick音效 不过作为新人也是算勉强过关

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:534 (1,2,3,4) - 这边的音效可以说是巨违和 建议把clap全部去掉
  2. 01:00:534 (5) - 为什么这边会突然间距变大一半多 我觉得没啥理由 也是属于以前就有的老问题
  3. 00:38:701 (2,3,4) - 丑 丑也会影响flow 老问题 不够平滑
  4. 00:40:201 (5,6) - 没啥梗 此问题也出现多次 just put note everywhere 可以像前面那样 平行 http://puu.sh/4Uulg.jpg
  5. 01:17:201 (5) - 去掉whistle
  6. 01:17:867 (7) - 加note 转盘后面红线开始
  7. 01:27:534 (5,6,7) - 丑 而且因为是锐角所以flow也是极差 还不如与01:27:534 (5) - 的开头重叠
  8. 01:41:534 (3) - 去掉finish加在01:41:867 (1) - 的头部
  9. 01:52:034 (4) - 加个NOTE用来保持节奏
  10. 01:57:867 (2,3) - 相对于前面01:56:034 (2,3,4) - 这组又变了DS 不仅丑而且在HARD也没有什么意义
  11. 全DIFF都有较多的ds变化是毫无意义 并且也是没有全局性 排列和音效的连贯性也是较差 仍然需要改善

[Insane]
  1. 00:07:034 (4) - 移到302 136 00:07:201 (5) - 移到 359 189 做一个正四边形远比现在这样3角FLOW要好的多
  2. 00:08:201 (1) - 00:18:867 (1) - 换成单点会舒服点
  3. 00:17:367 (3,4,5,6,7) - 可以跳 但是间距有点略大 建议减小一点
  4. 00:16:867 (2) - 去掉屁股的whistle
  5. 00:25:534 (3) - 00:28:201 (3) - 去掉头部finish
  6. 00:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 毫无美观 为什么不复制00:36:034 (2,3,4) - 到后2组 然后分别旋转120度呢？ 效果图：http://puu.sh/4UuWP.jpg http://puu.sh/4UuWP.jpg 这样做了以后别忘了用00:38:034 (1) - 做个blanket包住00:36:700 (5) -
  7. 00:38:534 (1,2) - 00:39:201 (5,6) - 1-2的间距和5-6的间距请保持一致
  8. 00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 删了
  9. 00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 这边间距略大 没有理由 在我看来stack着的连打会比较好
  10. 00:42:867 (5,6,7) - 仍然是无理由的间距偏大
  11. 00:44:867 (1) - 加finish
  12. 00:47:534 (4,5,6,7,1) - 可以用00:47:867 (5,6,1) - 这3NOTE先组一个正三角 然后再做4和7在那2组的当中 如果不懂我的意思可以QQ群M我 00:47:534 (4,7,1,2) - 这4个也可以组成菱形
  13. 00:49:867 (4) - 删了 加在00:50:034 -
  14. 01:00:534 (4,5,6,7) - 这边可以像 00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - 这边做的这样啊 是对应的 这就是所谓的没有连贯性 后面也是
  15. 01:06:534 (3,4,5) - 丑 注意间距和梗
  16. 01:12:867 (1,2,3) - 也是不太好看 有偏移 我觉得这边直线好 不过这梗也不咋的
  17. 01:16:534 (4,5,6) - 这个也是
  18. 01:17:534 (3) - 弧度向下 http://puu.sh/4UvPu.jpg
  19. 01:18:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 有点乱.. 建议remap这段
  20. kiai也是很乱......
  21. 个人感觉还没到能RANK的质量 抱歉上次我好像确认错误了.... 我建议你还是DS统一些 这点可以参照我的1st rank:http://osu.ppy.sh/b/246599 没啥质量不过作为新人图也是可以算勉强过关 全局也多保持一些梗 GD就先不MOD了 再找点MOD 好好改改 改到你觉得差不多了就叫我

Good luck <3.
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat
我將會編輯這則貼文數次(I'll edit it then paste the text several times) , 紅色字是指我目前的修復進度(Red word is my current progress of the repair).

Chloe wrote:

I've already talked with the mapper a few times about his map and I wanna help ranking this, so here's my mod~

[General]
  1. 01:17:867 (1) - 这个转盘之后的break可以取消 右击break即可删除 所有DIFF 我都不知道break可以取消..
  2. 音效比较差 tick音效和静音sliderslide都是没有 tick音效已放入(目前Normal)
[Normal]
  1. 01:23:534 (1) - 一般来说建议EZ和NM转盘之后接的NOTE处于屏幕中心左右 就像这样 http://puu.sh/4UtsM.jpg fixed
  2. 00:18:867 (3) - 滑条头+whistle fixed
  3. 00:20:201 (1) - 照理来说 既然你跟了VOCAL 那么这根滑 条最好从00:20:367 - 这里开始 fixed 之前也是感覺這邊不太協調..
  4. 00:27:534 (1) - 00:28:534 (2) - 滑条头+clap fixed
  5. 00:31:201 (2) - clap fixed
  6. 00:33:534 (2,3) - 取消头部finish 00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 00:35:534 (1) - 尾巴全部+clap fixed
  7. 00:43:534 (1) - 头部finish fixed
  8. 01:06:867 (4) - 滑条头+whistle fixed
  9. 01:23:534 (1) - 取消头部clap fixed
  10. 01:27:534 (3) - 取消屁股clap fixed
  11. 01:31:534 (1) - 取消头部clap 换成finish fixed
  12. 01:58:201 (1) - 01:58:367 - 这里开始 老地方结束 fixed

  13. 总体来说 排列略差 没有全局性 而且其实可以用tick音效 不过作为新人也是算勉强过关 謝，會改善。



[Hard]
  1. 00:31:534 (1,2,3,4) - 这边的音效可以说是巨违和 建议把clap全部去掉 fixed
  2. 01:00:534 (5) - 为什么这边会突然间距变大一半多 我觉得没啥理由 也是属于以前就有的老问题 fixed
  3. 00:38:701 (2,3,4) - 丑 丑也会影响flow 老问题 不够平滑 fixed
  4. 00:40:201 (5,6) - 没啥梗 此问题也出现多次 just put note everywhere 可以像前面那样 平行 http://puu.sh/4Uulg.jpg fixed
  5. 01:17:201 (5) - 去掉whistle fixed
  6. 01:17:867 (7) - 加note 转盘后面红线开始 fixed
  7. 01:27:534 (5,6,7) - 丑 而且因为是锐角所以flow也是极差 还不如与01:27:534 (5) - 的开头重叠 修成其他了
  8. 01:41:534 (3) - 去掉finish加在01:41:867 (1) - 的头部 fixed
  9. 01:52:034 (4) - 加个NOTE用来保持节奏 fixed
  10. 01:57:867 (2,3) - 相对于前面01:56:034 (2,3,4) - 这组又变了DS 不仅丑而且在HARD也没有什么意义 fixed
  11. 全DIFF都有较多的ds变化是毫无意义 并且也是没有全局性 排列和音效的连贯性也是较差 仍然需要改善
重排了一遍，有照弧度了


[Insane]
  1. 00:07:034 (4) - 移到302 136 00:07:201 (5) - 移到 359 189 做一个正四边形远比现在这样3角FLOW要好的多 fixed
  2. 00:08:201 (1) - 00:18:867 (1) - 换成单点会舒服点 fixed
  3. 00:17:367 (3,4,5,6,7) - 可以跳 但是间距有点略大 建议减小一点 fixed
  4. 00:16:867 (2) - 去掉屁股的whistle fixed
  5. 00:25:534 (3) - 00:28:201 (3) - 去掉头部finish fixed
  6. 00:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 毫无美观 为什么不复制00:36:034 (2,3,4) - 到后2组 然后分别旋转120度呢？ 效果图：http://puu.sh/4UuWP.jpg http://puu.sh/4UuWP.jpg 这样做了以后别忘了用00:38:034 (1) - 做个blanket包住00:36:700 (5) - fixed
  7. 00:38:534 (1,2) - 00:39:201 (5,6) - 1-2的间距和5-6的间距请保持一致 fixed
  8. 00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 删了 這不用刪吧 是不是打錯..
  9. 00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 这边间距略大 没有理由 在我看来stack着的连打会比较好 fixed
  10. 00:42:867 (5,6,7) - 仍然是无理由的间距偏大 那這是要減小?
  11. 00:44:867 (1) - 加finish fixed
  12. 00:47:534 (4,5,6,7,1) - 可以用00:47:867 (5,6,1) - 这3NOTE先组一个正三角 然后再做4和7在那2组的当中 如果不懂我的意思可以QQ群M我 00:47:534 (4,7,1,2) - 这4个也可以组成菱形 fixed 應該是這樣吧
  13. 00:49:867 (4) - 删了 加在00:50:034 - 我覺得這邊這樣加怪怪的 我換另一種了
  14. 01:00:534 (4,5,6,7) - 这边可以像 00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - 这边做的这样啊 是对应的 这就是所谓的没有连贯性 后面也是 fixed,後面我再想想..
  15. 01:06:534 (3,4,5) - 丑 注意间距和梗 fixed
  16. 01:12:867 (1,2,3) - 也是不太好看 有偏移 我觉得这边直线好 不过这梗也不咋的 這個再考慮
  17. 01:16:534 (4,5,6) - 这个也是 fixed,後面改直線
  18. 01:17:534 (3) - 弧度向下 http://puu.sh/4UvPu.jpg fixed
  19. 01:18:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 有点乱.. 建议remap这段
  20. kiai也是很乱......
  21. 个人感觉还没到能RANK的质量 抱歉上次我好像确认错误了.... 我建议你还是DS统一些 这点可以参照我的1st rank:http://osu.ppy.sh/b/246599 没啥质量不过作为新人图也是可以算勉强过关 全局也多保持一些梗 GD就先不MOD了 再找点MOD 好好改改 改到你觉得差不多了就叫我

Good luck <3.
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
hi, from my queue XD

[Yuki]

00:02:706 - try this rhythm for follow the vocal?
00:20:706 (5) - I think 258|100 is already fine for this. for straight to a previous slider.
00:31:206 (4,5,6,7,1) - make this stream better flow,
SPOILER
00:36:539 - I think add note here on 256|243 would be great too, its a strong beat imo. and it still look symmetry.
00:39:206 - add note?
01:28:206 (4) - move a bit down to make it's tail blanket with the previous 4's head.

[Insane]

00:24:039 (1,2) - what about swap NC? I think the spacing looks a bit confuse.
00:41:539 (6) - what about blanket like this?
SPOILER
00:44:872 (1) - make these stream more flow and slider too. maybe like this
SPOILER
01:43:872 (7) - move it for balance distance is better, balance rhythm but not spacing :/

[Hard]

00:45:539 (2) - the current one is almost overlap, what about this
SPOILER

[Normal]

01:31:539 (1,2,3) - make it to triangle pattern?
SPOILER

that's all, good luck :3
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

P A N wrote:

[Yuki]

00:02:706 - try this rhythm for follow the vocal? I think mine follows better :3
00:20:706 (5) - I think 258|100 is already fine for this. for straight to a previous slider.
00:31:206 (4,5,6,7,1) - make this stream better flow,
SPOILER
00:36:539 - I think add note here on 256|243 would be great too, its a strong beat imo. and it still look symmetry.
00:39:206 - add note?
01:28:206 (4) - move a bit down to make it's tail blanket with the previous 4's head.
no commet → changed/fixed

thx~
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

P A N wrote:

hi, from my queue XD

[Insane]

00:24:039 (1,2) - what about swap NC? I think the spacing looks a bit confuse.
00:41:539 (6) - what about blanket like this?
SPOILER
00:44:872 (1) - make these stream more flow and slider too. maybe like this
SPOILER
01:43:872 (7) - move it for balance distance is better, balance rhythm but not spacing :/

[Hard]

00:45:539 (2) - the current one is almost overlap, what about this
SPOILER

[Normal]

01:31:539 (1,2,3) - make it to triangle pattern?
SPOILER

that's all, good luck :3
All fixed,thank PAN :) (wait update)
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
IRC LOG
Insane
SPOILER
11:21 Satellite: 00:31:539 (4,5,6,7) -
11:21 Satellite: I think stream is not Fit
11:21 Satellite: http://puu.sh/4XVjF.jpg
11:21 smallboat: okay
11:21 Satellite: Slider Reverse
11:21 Satellite: try this
11:21 smallboat: oh?
11:22 smallboat: two times reverse?
11:22 smallboat: no 1 ?
11:22 smallboat: okay
11:22 Satellite: yes
11:22 Satellite: two reverse~
11:22 smallboat: okay
11:22 Satellite: yeah
11:23 smallboat: I feel this is a pattern ,too :3
11:23 smallboat: XD
11:23 smallboat: I actually did not think.
11:24 Satellite: 01:01:872 (1) - remove Nc
11:24 Satellite: 01:02:206 (2) - add Nc
11:24 smallboat: okay
11:24 smallboat: NC ..is not good at.. :<
11:24 Satellite: ok
11:24 Satellite: "I guess"
11:24 Satellite: 01:08:039 (4) - remove note
11:25 smallboat: okay
11:25 Satellite: 01:14:872 (3) - I think
11:25 Satellite: stack is head.
11:25 Satellite: try this
11:26 Satellite: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056250
11:26 Satellite: this
11:26 Satellite: you use "4 slider"
11:26 Satellite: Ctrl+G try this
11:26 smallboat: oh? This feel good,indeed.
11:26 smallboat: okay
11:28 Satellite: 01:25:372 (6) - I don't like this place... >.>
11:28 smallboat: @@
11:28 smallboat: feel...no arc
11:29 Satellite: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056256
11:29 Satellite: try jump?
11:29 Satellite: 01:25:372 (6,7,8,9) -
11:29 smallboat: wow , change a lot ,I "ll try it.
11:29 smallboat: okay
11:30 Satellite: 01:30:539 (8) - end clap delete
11:30 Satellite: not fit I guess
11:30 smallboat: okay
11:30 Satellite: If you use clap
11:30 Satellite: add "First"
11:30 smallboat: Okay
11:30 Satellite: 01:34:872 (1) - remove Nc
11:31 smallboat: Okay
11:31 Satellite: 01:37:540 (1) - ^
11:31 Satellite: 01:38:872 (1) - ^
11:31 Satellite: 01:39:539 (4) - add Nc
11:31 smallboat: okay
11:32 Satellite: 01:56:039 (3,4,5) - Not fit
11:32 smallboat: need replace?
11:32 Satellite: http://puu.sh/4XVPM.jpg
11:33 Satellite: use this
11:33 smallboat: end is blue?
11:33 smallboat: okay
11:33 Satellite: That's all

GOOD LUCK
bigfrog
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
bigfrog
Hi hi~
from your request ;3

Normal
- 00:18:872(3) - 這個間距沒有調得很好,修正一下 (0.97,0.96)
- 00:32:872(1,2,3) - 這三個不建議黏在一起
- 00:43:539(1,2,3) - 我比較喜歡以NC來分一個段落,這裡可以這樣放 :
- 00:57:539(2) - 試試這樣,可以指向(3)然後跟 00:58:872(1) 有個對稱
- 01:30:206(1,2) - 讓包圍的軌跡為1.0的間距? 只是建議..我覺得這樣比較整齊 ._.
- 01:50:539(1,2,3) - (1)往右一格,然後(2,3)的blanket

Hard
- 01:09:706(7,8) - 不是很喜歡這裡的重疊...可以讓(7)覆蓋在(8)的開頭?
- 01:35:539(3,4,5) - 沒有覆蓋得很好 (0.03)
- 01:46:539(3,4,1) - 摁..有點超出螢幕,建議稍微修改一下

Yuki's Insane
- 00:13:706(2,3,4,5) - 感覺這樣擺比較好 :
- 00:24:539(10,1) - blanket
- 00:33:539(3,4,1,2) - 這裡可以跟 00:08:206(1,2,3) 一樣的用法

Insane
- 00:49:372(3,4) - 這裡的節奏應該是這樣 :
- 00:49:539 - 如果你有改這裡一樣要有whstle
- 00:50:539(5) - 去掉whistle...
- 01:57:872(3) - 我覺得這個距離應該拉大,呈一個正三角形

大概就這些,有些小部分blanket我不想抓,不過你可以考慮看看
祝早日rank~~!! :3
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

bigfrog wrote:

Yuki's Insane
- 00:13:706(2,3,4,5) - 感覺這樣擺比較好 : 感觉没啥必要
- 00:24:539(10,1) - blanket 其实这里也可以说是包住了，slider形状的问题而已
- 00:33:539(3,4,1,2) - 這裡可以跟 00:08:206(1,2,3) 一樣的用法 这里会自动偏移的所以只要stack就好了
no change
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
hi m4m from your request

let'su go

Normal

- 00:00:872 (1) - whistle
- 00:01:539 (2) - whistle on tail
- 00:17:539 (2) - you should follow the voice here
SPOILER
- 01:24:872 (3) - in this way ?
SPOILER
- 01:35:539 (3,1) - why u didn't use the same shape ?
- 01:38:206 (3,1) - same here

Hard

- 00:02:039 (3) - In this way better flow imo
SPOILER
- 00:08:872 (3,4) - what about change into slider, i mean :
SPOILER
- 00:15:872 (4) - delete and extend 00:15:372 (3) - to 00:16:039 -
- 00:41:872 (4,1) - you can improve this blanket
- 01:54:872 (3,2,3,4) - or like this ? symmetry with y axis
SPOILER

Insane

- 00:04:706 (1,2) - improve the blanket here
- 00:08:539 (2) - delete the slider just put a note at 00:08:539 -
- just my opinion but all this triplet 00:36:039 (2,3,4) - 00:36:706 (5,6,7) - 00:37:372 (8,9,10) - 00:38:706 (2,3,4) - and the others doesn't really fit, it's kinda overmapped '-'
- 00:49:206 (2,3) - this part is kinda confused, you're following the piano then you following voice, and you return on the piano , u should follow only the piano here so delete the slider and add a note 00:49:539 -
- 01:38:872 (3) - in this way
SPOILER
- 01:44:206 (8) - delete this note and change 01:43:872 (7) - into a slider who end at 01:44:206 -
well overall it's a good insane :3 but there is some part overmapped for me '-'

Yuki's Insane

- 00:03:039 (2,3,4,5) - make it like this, better imo
SPOILER
- 00:04:706 (3) - delete the reverse and extend to 00:05:539 -
- 00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't really like this kind of stream, but it's a choice >.<
- 00:51:373 (3) - what are u following here ? '-' maybe delete ?
- excepted this nothing else to say nice diff :3

that's all for me good luck on ranking ;)
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

bigfrog wrote:

Hi hi~
from your request ;3

Normal
- 00:18:872(3) - 這個間距沒有調得很好,修正一下 (0.97,0.96)
- 00:32:872(1,2,3) - 這三個不建議黏在一起
- 00:43:539(1,2,3) - 我比較喜歡以NC來分一個段落,這裡可以這樣放 :
- 00:57:539(2) - 試試這樣,可以指向(3)然後跟 00:58:872(1) 有個對稱
- 01:30:206(1,2) - 讓包圍的軌跡為1.0的間距? 只是建議..我覺得這樣比較整齊 ._.
- 01:50:539(1,2,3) - (1)往右一格,然後(2,3)的blanket

Hard
- 01:09:706(7,8) - 不是很喜歡這裡的重疊...可以讓(7)覆蓋在(8)的開頭?
- 01:35:539(3,4,5) - 沒有覆蓋得很好 (0.03)
- 01:46:539(3,4,1) - 摁..有點超出螢幕,建議稍微修改一下

Yuki's Insane
- 00:13:706(2,3,4,5) - 感覺這樣擺比較好 :
- 00:24:539(10,1) - blanket
- 00:33:539(3,4,1,2) - 這裡可以跟 00:08:206(1,2,3) 一樣的用法

Insane
- 00:49:372(3,4) - 這裡的節奏應該是這樣 :
- 00:49:539 - 如果你有改這裡一樣要有whstle
- 00:50:539(5) - 去掉whistle...
- 01:57:872(3) - 我覺得這個距離應該拉大,呈一個正三角形

大概就這些,有些小部分blanket我不想抓,不過你可以考慮看看
祝早日rank~~!! :3
幾乎修復了，謝謝你，大青蛙 :)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

-Umi- wrote:

Yuki's Insane

- 00:03:039 (2,3,4,5) - make it like this, better imo now is better imo :)
SPOILER
- 00:04:706 (3) - delete the reverse and extend to 00:05:539 - nothing on 00:05:539 -, so nope
- 00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't really like this kind of stream, but it's a choice >.< ><
- 00:51:373 (3) - what are u following here ? '-' maybe delete ? to show a continuity of the vocal
- excepted this nothing else to say nice diff :3
also no change
thx for modding~
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

-Umi- wrote:

hi m4m from your request

let'su go OKAY

Normal

- 00:00:872 (1) - whistle fixed
- 00:01:539 (2) - whistle on tail fixed
- 00:17:539 (2) - you should follow the voice here fixed
SPOILER
- 01:24:872 (3) - in this way ? fixed
SPOILER
- 01:35:539 (3,1) - why u didn't use the same shape ? fixed It"s great!
- 01:38:206 (3,1) - same here fixed

Hard

- 00:02:039 (3) - In this way better flow imo fixed
SPOILER
- 00:08:872 (3,4) - what about change into slider, i mean : fixed
SPOILER
- 00:15:872 (4) - delete and extend 00:15:372 (3) - to 00:16:039 - fixed
- 00:41:872 (4,1) - you can improve this blanket fixed
- 01:54:872 (3,2,3,4) - or like this ? symmetry with y axis fixed It"s great
SPOILER

Insane

- 00:04:706 (1,2) - improve the blanket here fixed
- 00:08:539 (2) - delete the slider just put a note at 00:08:539 - fixed
- just my opinion but all this triplet 00:36:039 (2,3,4) - 00:36:706 (5,6,7) - 00:37:372 (8,9,10) - 00:38:706 (2,3,4) - and the others doesn't really fit, it's kinda overmapped '-' Well,It"s okay,but I reduce 00:38:706 "s blue line this.
- 00:49:206 (2,3) - this part is kinda confused, you're following the piano then you following voice, and you return on the piano , u should follow only the piano here so delete the slider and add a note 00:49:539 - fixed
- 01:38:872 (3) - in this way fixed
SPOILER
- 01:44:206 (8) - delete this note and change 01:43:872 (7) - into a slider who end at 01:44:206 - fixed. GJ!
well overall it's a good insane :3 but there is some part overmapped for me '-' I'll think about it

that's all for me good luck on ranking ;)
Thanks -Umi- "s mod ! :)
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
[General]
Uncheck Letterbox since there is no Break Time.
[Normal]
maybe you need Easy diff or make more easier.
Placement
01:27:539(1) move down no to overlap with HP bar.
Hit Sonud
00:11:539(1) add whistle
01:04:206(3) add finish at end
[Hard]
Placement
00:35:872(4,1) swap NC sbecause of finish.
01]45:206(5,1)^ and KIAI finishes on this.
01:12:039(4) I suppose this stack is a bit difficult for Hard, so move (5)'s head better.
01:36:872(1) move down not to overlap with HP bar.
01:57:372(1) too closer, it's confused for player.
[Insane]
HP8 isn't common, HP7 better.
Placement
01:03:206(4) the top of slider overlapped with HP bar, move down please.
01:20:872~ I don't agree with these jump placement since music sounds calmly.
Rhythm
00:05:872 unnecessaly green line
00:38:706 ^ and more.
00:38:039(1) for me, only note better since music has stopped.
01:47:372(1)^
Hit Sonud
01:02:206(1) add finish at head not whistle
01:07:539(1) add finish not clap
[Yuki's Insane]
Placement
00:17:872(4) stack at (2) not (5) better since vocal has emphasized.
00:26:539(2) CTRL+G would be more nice flow I guess.
01:26:872(3)^
01:05:872(1,2,1,2,1,2,) well, it's too confused when I played. autually you can place these notes clearly.
01:14:206(1) change the direction like this? maybe it is nice flow to (2)
SPOILER
01:20:206(1,2,3,4) these notes should follow previous rotation style, and it is playable.
SPOILER


Good Luck.
Koihik
40 posts
Joined January 2013
Koihik
Hello.
from #modreq


Yuki's Insane

  1. 00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段好维和,感觉不适合放连打
  2. 00:58:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里怎么不对称呢
  3. 00:59:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉可以跳一点
  4. 01:20:706 (4) - break time?
  5. 01:41:206 (2) - 这个挡的有点略微严重了
  6. 01:46:873 (1,2,3,4) - 太坑了,简直是纯粹为了坑人的梗嘛.本身34的数字已经被挡住了.
  7. 01:44:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8)
  8. 01:51:539 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉这里是这样的节奏和NC:
    SPOILER
  9. 01:54:206 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这个串不对称,用copy的把
Insane

  1. 00:32:706 (2) - 去了？
  2. 00:44:872 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个串不圆,关grid开ds摆的圆一点把
  3. 00:46:706 (2) - 这个滑条换成note再尾部把？既然后面都没跟vocal,这里也不跟把
  4. 01:18:872 (3) - NC?
  5. 01:20:872 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这段的music感觉不适合跳啊,这里放跳有点莫名
  6. 01:40:706 (6,7,1) - 这里感觉这样的节奏好一点:
    SPOILER
  7. 01:54:872 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉可以稍微摆的开一点
Normal和Hard貌似没什么问题 根本没看把喂！

Good Luck! 8-)
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Princess God
嗯，说好的mod
我觉得必要的地方会用*标注

Yuki`s Insane
00:02:706 (1,2,3,4,5) -
试试这种排列
感觉你后面都是比较飘逸的排列啊，这里折一下挺别扭
相对的00:04:373 (1,2,3) - 也动一下位置，让3关于Y轴对称
00:17:539 (2,3,4) - 还是觉得交替点会好很多
00:43:539 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 仅仅是个提议，这里明显的是papapa papapa papapa的排列啊（虽然单从时间间隔上来看不是），这样真的没问题？
01:21:039~01:23:206 加个spinner。。。我理解你的想法，不过个人觉得这里需要一个spinner，会有种引擎再加速的赶脚
01:31:123 (4,5) - 4与5的头重合
01:43:872 (2) - 变成一个slide，持续到r01:44:206，最好能加个绿线减个到半速或者0.75倍速

Insane
00:10:539 (4) - 顺时针转45°，同时00:11:206 (6) - 逆时针转45°，配合节奏
00:33:206 (4,5,6,7) - 顺序换成4,7,6,5，似乎之前的flow有些僵硬……感觉上
00:48:206 (6) - 移动到（472,336），还是觉得这里的节奏比较适合把梗做成落体的感觉，然后7再弹起来
01:15:206 (4) - reverse selection ,这只是个试验型意见
01:33:539 (1,2,3,4) - 顺序换成1,3,4,2，感觉这样flow能强些
01:41:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 顺序换成1,4,3,2,6,5，理由同上
01:54:540 (5) - nc
01:55:039 (2,3,4) - 都nc

Hard
Good Map！

Normal
01:43:539 (3,4) -
试试这种排列
高潮结束的时候给个不一样的排列应该是可以的吧，嗯

Over~
Last edited by Princess God , edited 1 time in total.
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

kajiyatta wrote:

[General]
Uncheck Letterbox since there is no Break Time. Okay, I think a moment.
[Normal]
maybe you need Easy diff or make more easier. Okay, I think a moment.
Placement
01:27:539(1) move down no to overlap with HP bar. fixed
Hit Sonud
00:11:539(1) add whistle fixed
01:04:206(3) add finish at end fixed
[Hard]
Placement
00:35:872(4,1) swap NC sbecause of finish. fixed
01]45:206(5,1)^ and KIAI finishes on this. fixed
01:12:039(4) I suppose this stack is a bit difficult for Hard, so move (5)'s head better. fixed
01:36:872(1) move down not to overlap with HP bar. fixed
01:57:372(1) too closer, it's confused for player. fixed
[Insane]
HP8 isn't common, HP7 better. Think a moment
Placement
01:03:206(4) the top of slider overlapped with HP bar, move down please. fixed
01:20:872~ I don't agree with these jump placement since music sounds calmly. Many testplayer say good , no change
Rhythm
00:05:872 unnecessaly green line fixed
00:38:706 ^ and more. fixed
00:38:039(1) for me, only note better since music has stopped. Think a moment
01:47:372(1)^ ^
Hit Sonud
01:02:206(1) add finish at head not whistle fixed
01:07:539(1) add finish not clap fixed

Good Luck.
Thanks kajiyatta's mod ! :)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

kajiyatta wrote:

[Yuki's Insane]
Placement
00:17:872(4) stack at (2) not (5) better since vocal has emphasized. fixed
00:26:539(2) CTRL+G would be more nice flow I guess. nope
01:26:872(3)^ fixed
01:05:872(1,2,1,2,1,2,) well, it's too confused when I played. autually you can place these notes clearly. That's a test of reading skill
01:14:206(1) change the direction like this? maybe it is nice flow to (2) fixed
SPOILER
01:20:206(1,2,3,4) these notes should follow previous rotation style, and it is playable. this is also playable
SPOILER


Good Luck.
Thanks for modding

Koihik wrote:

Yuki's Insane

  1. 00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段好维和,感觉不适合放连打 这段不违和，挺适合放连打
  2. 00:58:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里怎么不对称呢 哪里不对称了？
  3. 00:59:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉可以跳一点 这里其实挺难打的
  4. 01:20:706 (4) - break time? GD运输过程中被吃掉了，不过为了全程无break我摆了个转盘
  5. 01:41:206 (2) - 这个挡的有点略微严重了 我喜欢挡人我自豪
  6. 01:46:873 (1,2,3,4) - 太坑了,简直是纯粹为了坑人的梗嘛.本身34的数字已经被挡住了. yeahyeahyeahhh
  7. 01:44:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) 同上
  8. 01:51:539 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉这里是这样的节奏和NC: 不好
    SPOILER
  9. 01:54:206 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 这个串不对称,用copy的把 本来就是copy的
Thanks for modding
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

嗯，说好的mod
我觉得必要的地方会用*标注

Yuki`s Insane
00:02:706 (1,2,3,4,5) -
试试这种排列
感觉你后面都是比较飘逸的排列啊，这里折一下挺别扭 还好，所以下面的这个也不动了
相对的00:04:373 (1,2,3) - 也动一下位置，让3关于Y轴对称 ^
00:17:539 (2,3,4) - 还是觉得交替点会好很多 这里按照上面Modder的改掉了
00:43:539 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 仅仅是个提议，这里明显的是papapa papapa papapa的排列啊（虽然单从时间间隔上来看不是），这样真的没问题？ 卧槽哦我还真是zz了，不过这样也挺好蛤蛤蛤蛤（钻地
01:21:039~01:23:206 加个spinner。。。我理解你的想法，不过个人觉得这里需要一个spinner，会有种引擎再加速的赶脚 加上了
01:31:123 (4,5) - 4与5的头重合 这样就不好玩了
01:43:872 (2) - 变成一个slide，持续到r01:44:206，最好能加个绿线减个到半速或者0.75倍速 nope

To smallboat:

Now you add OniJAM's Taiko map
check all tags: make like below
プロジェクト プロジェクト ウタヒメ [Minakami Yuki] Vocal miko OniJAM
don't use "[Minakami_Yuki]".
To make audio lead-in same
把song setup→design 最下面的letterbox during breaks关掉

To OniJAM:

check the offset
- Tu -
132 posts
Joined September 2012
- Tu -
dont open not finished
yuki insane
00:26:873 (3) - blanket
00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 個人覺得難讀
01:20:872 - 不加break不是就會死嗎qwq
tempo很好!!有極少許overmap,問題應該不大(有些stream是多餘的?)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

- Tu - wrote:

dont open not finished
yuki insane
00:26:873 (3) - blanket
00:35:039 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 個人覺得難讀
01:20:872 - 不加break不是就會死嗎qwq
tempo很好!!有極少許overmap,問題應該不大(有些stream是多餘的?)
我稍微看了下你mod的那个是之前的，小船看来还没有上传，我还是post一份你再改一下mod好了
and this is harder than insane, 你可以认为是extra但是我觉得还是没有到extra的难度，顶多another，所以难读是很正常的，我这个难度的特点就是难度（笑
http://puu.sh/509EW.osu
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

Koihik wrote:

Hello. HI
from #modreq

Insane

  1. 00:32:706 (2) - 去了？ 不了
  2. 00:44:872 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个串不圆,关grid开ds摆的圆一点把 改了一些
  3. 00:46:706 (2) - 这个滑条换成note再尾部把？既然后面都没跟vocal,这里也不跟把 選擇了都擺note
  4. 01:18:872 (3) - NC? 沒變速 不NC
  5. 01:20:872 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这段的music感觉不适合跳啊,这里放跳有点莫名 是可以的 很多人都同意 可FC
  6. 01:40:706 (6,7,1) - 这里感觉这样的节奏好一点: 修改了stack 但沒用這個
    SPOILER
  7. 01:54:872 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉可以稍微摆的开一点 修了一些
Normal和Hard貌似没什么问题呵 根本没看把喂！

Good Luck! 8-)
謝謝Koihik的mod :)
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

嗯，说好的mod 謝
我觉得必要的地方会用*标注


Insane
00:10:539 (4) - 顺时针转45°，同时00:11:206 (6) - 逆时针转45°，配合节奏 還不錯已採用
00:33:206 (4,5,6,7) - 顺序换成4,7,6,5，似乎之前的flow有些僵硬……感觉上 換了
00:48:206 (6) - 移动到（472,336），还是觉得这里的节奏比较适合把梗做成落体的感觉，然后7再弹起来 還不錯已採用
01:15:206 (4) - reverse selection ,这只是个试验型意见 恩.. 不了
01:33:539 (1,2,3,4) - 顺序换成1,3,4,2，感觉这样flow能强些 換了
01:41:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 顺序换成1,4,3,2,6,5，理由同上 換了
01:54:540 (5) - nc 換了
01:55:039 (2,3,4) - 都nc 換了

Hard
Good Map！ 謝謝

Normal
01:43:539 (3,4) -
试试这种排列
高潮结束的时候给个不一样的排列应该是可以的吧，嗯 是還不錯，但難度超過了 不採用 :o

Over~
謝謝NPG的mod! :)
Dainesl
898 posts
Joined May 2012
Dainesl
ooh, a starred map ;w;

Random Taiko Mod~

General

Kiai Time is toggled extremely frequently sometimes (remove large clumps of inherited points)

Muzukashii

00:31:222 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - this pattern might be a bit long for a Muzu, maybe put one break somewhere?

00:35:555 - There's a clear beat here, put a note here, maybe?

00:39:388 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141) - again, this pattern's really long

01:04:555 (239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - Why are these patterns so long...?! ;w;

01:48:722 (436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476) - three really long patterns here...put a couple of breaks in each one

Oni

01:01:555 (290) - Why don? use kat for consistency

and that's it really

sorry for short mod :oops:
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano

Dainesl wrote:

ooh, a starred map ;w;

Random Taiko Mod~

General

Kiai Time is toggled extremely frequently sometimes (remove large clumps of inherited points)

Muzukashii

00:31:222 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - this pattern might be a bit long for a Muzu, maybe put one break somewhere?

00:35:555 - There's a clear beat here, put a note here, maybe?

00:39:388 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141) - again, this pattern's really long

01:04:555 (239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - Why are these patterns so long...?! ;w;

01:48:722 (436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476) - three really long patterns here...put a couple of breaks in each one

Oni

01:01:555 (290) - Why don? use kat for consistency imo don fits music better

and that's it really

sorry for short mod :oops:
others all fixed :D Thanks for modding~

Muzukashii
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shining Grace.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 24888
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32

[Metadata]
Title:shining grace
TitleUnicode:shining grace
Artist:IOSYS
ArtistUnicode:IOSYS
Creator:smallboat
Version:OniJAM's Muzukashii
Source:Project U-Ta-Hi-Me
Tags:プロジェクト プロジェクト ウタヒメ [Minakami Yuki] Vocal miko OniJAM
BeatmapID:317422
BeatmapSetID:115246

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,60
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256,192,76555,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77888,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83555,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,86222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88222,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88555,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88888,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,90055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,90222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,90388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,90555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,90722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,90888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,92222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,92555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,92722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,92888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,93222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,93555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,93722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,93888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,94055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,94222,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,94388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,94555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,94722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,94888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98888,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99222,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99555,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105222,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,113222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,113388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,113555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,114222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,114388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,114555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,114722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,114888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,115055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,115222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,115388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,115555,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,115805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,115888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,116055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,116388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,116555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,116722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,116888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,117138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,117222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,117388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,117722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,117888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118055,2,0,P|224:32|160:160,2,389.399988268093
256,192,120222,1,12,0:0:0:0:
MidSoul
288 posts
Joined July 2012
MidSoul
hi~ =w=/ Taiko modreq from smallboat pro ol

[OniJAM's Muzukashii]

00:15:055 (39,40,41) - kkd >change to> kdk ?
・This is the pattern you using from the vocal and sounds, isn't it?

00:40:972 (134,135) - remove?
01:30:055 (343) - remove?
01:34:222 (363) - rem finish?
01:40:722 (398) - remove?
01:50:305 (442,443) - remove?
01:55:888 (473) - remove?
01:57:222 (480) - remove?

・Especially, there's no point to say, but I think this diff is too strong for Muzukashii...
Please consider to reduce some notes or rename level and a bit remapping. (Muzu→Oni, Oni→Inner or so.)

[OniJAM's Oni]

00:15:055 (41,42,43) - kkd >change to> kdk ?
・Same as Muzukashii.

01:33:055 - 01:33:138 - add d
01:34:055 (469) - change d
・can hear sounds
・It's similar the sounds you traced at 01:33:555 (463,464,465,466,467,468,469) - or so.

01:44:972 - add d
・To closer pattern around at 01:47:555 (559,560,561,562,563) - or other point. and more feels good.

hope you rank! GL~(((っ・ω・)っ/
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Sephibro
hi!

[General]
from 00:24:888 to 00:35:888 - imo there should be a kiai here
care http://puu.sh/5200F.png

[Insane]
00:40:888 - this pause would be very interesting, i would have let unmapped with an antijump. But mapping it, stream is the best choice, so it's good, i would just decrease its volume a bit. it's 70-55-40-25% now, how about 50-35-20-5% or 55-40-25-10%? http://puu.sh/51X0m.png
00:43:555 (1,2) - i'm aware that you are following synthesizer here, but i would find it nicer something like this http://puu.sh/51X7u.jpg (with (1) overlapped on (2) would be awesome)
from 00:46:222 to 00:56:888 - i find it nicer if you reduce the slider velocity to 0,5x in this part.
00:52:222 (3) - http://puu.sh/51XFH.jpg nicer! if you changed sv to 0,5x you don't even need to change this slider :)
00:57:555 (3,4,5,6) - take this as an observation: I don't like 3/4 sliders if the hitsound on the blue tick isn't necessary or sounds bad; in fact here you had to reduce its volume. Btw it plays fine with the pattern you made so w/e
01:30:555 (8) - remove finish
01:34:555 (2) - ctrl+g this with some changes on 01:34:222 (1) to correct flow would be really cool
01:50:222 (1,2,3,4) - volume 50-35-20-5% or 55-40-25-10%
01:52:888 (4) - http://puu.sh/51Y7N.jpg
01:55:805 (2) - i prefer 2 circles instead of a slider starting on blue tick http://puu.sh/51Yd3.jpg

[Yuki's Insane]
00:36:555 (5,1) - weird spacing but it's ok
00:38:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+H and it's AWESOME > you create antijump between 00:38:055 (4,1) and 00:39:222 (5,1) is very cool to play
00:40:888 (1,2,3,4) - volume is too high, i would make something like Insane diff http://puu.sh/51X0m.png
00:43:555 (1) - http://puu.sh/51YZa.jpg and ctrl+G 00:43:888 (1,2) (don't forget to switch hitsounds too if you do this)
00:58:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i had difficulties reading this, idea seems nice but it's not as fun when it comes to play it. How about something like this? http://puu.sh/51YGv.jpg - http://puu.sh/51YKd.jpg (they are the same, second pic is to make you understand the logic)
01:06:888 (1,2) - ctrl+G
01:07:138 (3) - delete this
01:30:888 (3,4,5) - cool!
01:50:055 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - same volume thing as 00:40:888 (1,2,3,4)
01:52:888 (1) - http://puu.sh/51Z6w.jpg

[Hard]
00:35:555 (3) - http://puu.sh/51ZtW.jpg
00:43:555 (1) - http://puu.sh/51ZxP.jpg
01:04:222 (7) - clap
01:05:555 (1) - clap
01:45:222 (1) - http://puu.sh/51ZH6.jpg or http://puu.sh/51ZKd.jpg
01:47:888 (1,1) - same for these too, but they sound much better than the previous one

[Normal]
00:20:388 (1) - why is this starting on red tick? it has no reason to and it plays awful. if you really want it to start on a red tick, it should be this one 00:20:722, not the previous one
01:05:555 (2) - this shape is ugly lol
01:09:555 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/5206J.jpg (2) 256|140; (3) 372|8
01:11:555 (1,2,3) - ^if you made that, you'll need to correct spacing here
01:53:222 (1) - this is too low imo, you can overlap it on (2) http://puu.sh/520jP.jpg..that's not an easy so you can do it ;)


I guess rank is near, make sure you let me know when it happens! :)
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano

MidSoul wrote:

hi~ =w=/ Taiko modreq from smallboat pro ol

[OniJAM's Muzukashii]

00:15:055 (39,40,41) - kkd >change to> kdk ?
・This is the pattern you using from the vocal and sounds, isn't it?

00:40:972 (134,135) - remove? I can here drum clearly here so I keep them
01:30:055 (343) - remove?
01:34:222 (363) - rem finish? Nope here
01:40:722 (398) - remove?
01:50:305 (442,443) - remove? Again, follow the drum
01:55:888 (473) - remove?
01:57:222 (480) - remove?

・Especially, there's no point to say, but I think this diff is too strong for Muzukashii...
Please consider to reduce some notes or rename level and a bit remapping. (Muzu→Oni, Oni→Inner or so.)

[OniJAM's Oni]

00:15:055 (41,42,43) - kkd >change to> kdk ?
・Same as Muzukashii.

01:33:055 - 01:33:138 - add d I might be too long this part if you add these notes
01:34:055 (469) - change d
・can hear sounds
・It's similar the sounds you traced at 01:33:555 (463,464,465,466,467,468,469) - or so.

01:44:972 - add d changed in my way
・To closer pattern around at 01:47:555 (559,560,561,562,563) - or other point. and more feels good.

hope you rank! GL~(((っ・ω・)っ/
Others all fixed, thanks for modding :)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

Sephibro wrote:

[Yuki's Insane]
00:36:555 (5,1) - weird spacing but it's ok ok
00:38:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+H and it's AWESOME > you create antijump between 00:38:055 (4,1) and 00:39:222 (5,1) is very cool to play I don't like that~
00:40:888 (1,2,3,4) - volume is too high, i would make something like Insane diff http://puu.sh/51X0m.png change to 55%
00:43:555 (1) - http://puu.sh/51YZa.jpg and ctrl+G 00:43:888 (1,2) (don't forget to switch hitsounds too if you do this) nope
00:58:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i had difficulties reading this, idea seems nice but it's not as fun when it comes to play it. How about something like this? http://puu.sh/51YGv.jpg - http://puu.sh/51YKd.jpg (they are the same, second pic is to make you understand the logic) good idea, I like it. But I think mine is better :3
01:06:888 (1,2) - ctrl+G ok
01:07:138 (3) - delete this ok~
01:30:888 (3,4,5) - cool! ;)
01:50:055 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - same volume thing as 00:40:888 (1,2,3,4) also change to 55%
01:52:888 (1) - http://puu.sh/51Z6w.jpg nope
thx for modding~
JUDYDANNY
1,519 posts
Joined October 2011
JUDYDANNY
Hi～smallboat , OniJAM.
As modreq from small boat.
I begin to mod for suggestions!

[General]

  • none.
    “+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?)
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:46:722 (165) – del
    00:46:555 (164,165) – is different from 00:51:888 (182,183) - & 00:49:388 (173) -. 00:52:055 - ~ increasing base sounds, but 46:722 – isn’t increasing.
    And, I think 722 – del pattern is good for previous 1/2 streams.
  2. 00:53:388 (187) – add
  3. 01:09:222 (258,259,260) – ddk we can sounds pitch , “A ya ma~” to … A -> G -> F~? but 01:09:555 (260) - I want to follow 01:09:555 (260) – drums.
  4. 01:10:888 (264,265) – k,d
  5. 01:13:555 (271,272) - ^
  6. 01:14:888 (274) – k
  7. 01:21:055 (298) – delete?
  8. 01:28:055 (333) – d? if you like.
    01:28:055 (333,334) – is different from 01:38:722 (387,388) - .(if can follow base pitch.)
  9. 01:43:555 (409,410) – add finish
    Cymbal is louder than surround cumbals , and using Finish feels very good on these points.
  10. 00:34:222 (103,104) - ^
  11. 01:47:888 (427) – add fini?
  12. 01:53:222 (456) -^
[Oni]
  1. 00:34:222 (103,104) – add finish the reason is same Muzu
  2. 00:46:222 (222) – change normal k
  3. 01:55:555 (624) -^
  4. 00:53:388 (247) – add d
  5. 00:54:722 (251) – delete
  6. Try to this?
    01:03:055 (299) - delete
    01:03:388 (300,301,302) – kkk?
    └―――――――――――――――――――――
  7. 01:04:388 (308) – k?
  8. 01:05:888 (319) – k?
  9. 01:21:055 (382) – delete?
  10. 01:35:722 (481) – k?
  11. 01:36:388 (486) - ^?
  12. either ?, if you like
    01:56:972 (632) – add d (overmap ,but rhythm is good better current pattern)
    01:56:888 (631) – del
    └――――――――――――――――――――――
That’s all!
Good Luck! :) :)
- Tu -
132 posts
Joined September 2012
- Tu -
IRC的渣渣mod
21:51 - Tu -: hi
21:51 - Tu -: insane
21:51 - Tu -: 01:10:222 (1,2,3) -
21:52 smallboat: ?
21:52 - Tu -: 1和2
21:52 - Tu -: 距離
21:52 - Tu -: 跟2和3
21:52 - Tu -: 不一
21:52 smallboat: 唔 好的w
21:52 - Tu -: @@
21:53 - Tu -: 01:12:888 (1,2,3) -
21:53 - Tu -: 也是 @@
21:53 smallboat: 好的
21:54 - Tu -: 01:26:888 (3) - 包著(2)?
21:54 - Tu -: 好看些嗎 @@
21:54 smallboat: 恩有好些
21:55 - Tu -: 01:37:555 (3,4,1) -
21:55 - Tu -: 4的位子可以右一點
21:55 - Tu -: 平均些??
21:57 smallboat: 好
21:58 - Tu -: 02:00:222 (1) - 音量5%,用歌的結音做尾??
21:58 smallboat: 這個嗎..考慮
21:58 - Tu -: ^^^^^完全可無視
21:58 - Tu -: qwq
21:59 smallboat: 沒關係 繼續說你的意見W
22:00 - Tu -: 純個人感覺>>>>>>01:54:888 (1,1,1,1) - 這個太鬼...畜了 (被摳
22:01 smallboat: 還好(?
22:01 - Tu -: 我完全接不上呀 pwq
22:01 smallboat: WW
22:02 - Tu -: hitsound再看一次@@@
22:02 - Tu -: (帶headset@@@
22:03 - Tu -: 00:17:388 (3,4,5,6,7) -
22:04 - Tu -: 長方型的話7要放上點
22:04 smallboat: 哦 好..
22:04 - Tu -: 這樣較整齊@@@@@
22:04 - Tu -: <<<渣mod pwq
22:05 smallboat: 沒關係
22:05 smallboat: 你剛說的headset是?
22:06 - Tu -: 耳機@@
22:06 smallboat: 英文不太好
22:06 smallboat: XD
22:06 - Tu -: 我也是啦 XD
22:06 - Tu -: 00:55:888 (3,4,5) -
22:06 - Tu -: 也是距離問題@@
22:07 smallboat: 恩 好
22:13 - Tu -: 01:48:138 (3) -
22:13 - Tu -: 不漂亮@@
22:16 smallboat: 好w
22:18 - Tu -: 只是hard的 00:15:388 (3) -
22:18 - Tu -: 2和3的距離,和silder尾端不一
22:19 smallboat: ok
22:22 - Tu -: 01:18:055 (1) - 後面加break?
22:22 - Tu -: 可以不加因為HP不高
22:23 smallboat: 考慮
22:23 smallboat: w
22:23 smallboat: 不過有些有改了
22:23 - Tu -: 01:58:222 (1) - 尾端5% vol @@
22:24 - Tu -: 又改了@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
22:25 smallboat: ?
22:25 - Tu -: 我又沒有update?
22:26 smallboat: 21:47 up的
22:26 smallboat: 你用舊的?
22:27 - Tu -: 不會吧
22:27 - Tu -: 新的新的
22:27 - Tu -: (擦汗
22:27 smallboat: 沒改
22:27 smallboat: 跟之前一樣
22:27 smallboat: 你的問題都在上面
22:28 smallboat: 所以放心
22:28 - Tu -: @@
22:28 - Tu -: :l
22:28 - Tu -: Normal改天再看@@
22:29 smallboat: ins的 55:888 345 距離看不出來哪裡有差耶0.0
22:29 - Tu -: @@
22:30 - Tu -: 00:55:888 (3,4,5) -
22:30 - Tu -: 4 5長點??
22:31 smallboat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1065670 我的是這樣 3個點
22:37 smallboat: 更新了 你看看55 888那邊是不是還是一樣
22:38 - Tu -: @@
22:38 - Tu -: ok!
22:38 smallboat: 那邊ok?
22:38 - Tu -: 恩
22:39 smallboat: ok irc post?
22:39 - Tu -: ok;w;
22:39 *- Tu - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/300317 IOSYS - shining grace [Insane]]
toara_fict
1,319 posts
Joined July 2012
toara_fict
Taiko mod from PM :3/


[Muzukashii]
  1. HP 5 => 4 ?
  2. 00:11:555 (29) - d
  3. 00:20:722 (53) - :O
  4. 01:26:388 (321) - re
  5. 01:27:722 (328) - ^
  6. 01:58:055 (477) - change spin ...?
[Oni]
  1. 00:26:055 (79,80,81,82,83,84) - k ddk d
  2. 00:31:638 (114) - re
  3. 00:32:638 (125) - move 00:32:805 (126) -
  4. 01:09:555 (342) - move 01:09:722 (342) - and 01:09:722 (342,343,344,345) - dk dd?
  5. 01:30:305 (439) - re
  6. 01:31:305 (451) - move 01:31:472 (452) -
  7. 01:40:722 (515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531) - ^
  8. 01:58:055 (638) - Mozu too
Good Luck :3
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano
JUDYDANNY
Hi～smallboat , OniJAM.
As modreq from small boat.
I begin to mod for suggestions!

[General]

  • none.
    “+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?)
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:46:722 (165) – del
    00:46:555 (164,165) – is different from 00:51:888 (182,183) - & 00:49:388 (173) -. 00:52:055 - ~ increasing base sounds, but 46:722 – isn’t increasing.
    And, I think 722 – del pattern is good for previous 1/2 streams.
  2. 00:53:388 (187) – add
  3. 01:09:222 (258,259,260) – ddk we can sounds pitch , “A ya ma~” to … A -> G -> F~? but 01:09:555 (260) - I want to follow 01:09:555 (260) – drums.
  4. 01:10:888 (264,265) – k,d
  5. 01:13:555 (271,272) - ^
  6. 01:14:888 (274) – k
  7. 01:21:055 (298) – delete? fixed
  8. 01:28:055 (333) – d? if you like.
    01:28:055 (333,334) – is different from 01:38:722 (387,388) - .(if can follow base pitch.)
  9. 01:43:555 (409,410) – add finish okay
    Cymbal is louder than surround cumbals , and using Finish feels very good on these points.
  10. 00:34:222 (103,104) - ^ ^
  11. 01:47:888 (427) – add fini?
  12. 01:53:222 (456) -^
[Oni]
  1. 00:34:222 (103,104) – add finish the reason is same Muzu fixed
  2. 00:46:222 (222) – change normal k
  3. 01:55:555 (624) -^
  4. 00:53:388 (247) – add d
  5. 00:54:722 (251) – delete
  6. Try to this?
    01:03:055 (299) - delete
    01:03:388 (300,301,302) – kkk?
    └―――――――――――――――――――――
  7. 01:04:388 (308) – k?
  8. 01:05:888 (319) – k?
  9. 01:21:055 (382) – delete?
  10. 01:35:722 (481) – k?
  11. 01:36:388 (486) - ^?
  12. either ?, if you like
    01:56:972 (632) – add d (overmap ,but rhythm is good better current pattern)
    01:56:888 (631) – del
    └――――――――――――――――――――――
That’s all!
Good Luck! :) :)
toara_fict
Taiko mod from PM :3/


[Muzukashii]
  1. HP 5 => 4 ?
  2. 00:11:555 (29) - d
  3. 00:20:722 (53) - :O
  4. 01:26:388 (321) - re
  5. 01:27:722 (328) - ^
  6. 01:58:055 (477) - change spin ...?fixed
[Oni]
  1. 00:26:055 (79,80,81,82,83,84) - k ddk d
  2. 00:31:638 (114) - re
  3. 00:32:638 (125) - move 00:32:805 (126) -
  4. 01:09:555 (342) - move 01:09:722 (342) - and 01:09:722 (342,343,344,345) - dk dd?
  5. 01:30:305 (439) - re
  6. 01:31:305 (451) - move 01:31:472 (452) -
  7. 01:40:722 (515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531) - ^
  8. 01:58:055 (638) - Mozu too okay
Good Luck :3
This time I just post what I fixed, because when I finished checking mods, I felt quite uncomfortable, so I think I must have a rest now. Sorry for that :sad:
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

Sephibro wrote:

hi!

[General]
from 00:24:888 to 00:35:888 - imo there should be a kiai here
care http://puu.sh/5200F.png I consider it

[Insane]
00:40:888 - this pause would be very interesting, i would have let unmapped with an antijump. But mapping it, stream is the best choice, so it's good, i would just decrease its volume a bit. it's 70-55-40-25% now, how about 50-35-20-5% or 55-40-25-10%? http://puu.sh/51X0m.png OKAY fixed
00:43:555 (1,2) - i'm aware that you are following synthesizer here, but i would find it nicer something like this http://puu.sh/51X7u.jpg (with (1) overlapped on (2) would be awesome) no change
from 00:46:222 to 00:56:888 - i find it nicer if you reduce the slider velocity to 0,5x in this part. good idea changed
00:52:222 (3) - http://puu.sh/51XFH.jpg nicer! if you changed sv to 0,5x you don't even need to change this slider :) I consider it
00:57:555 (3,4,5,6) - take this as an observation: I don't like 3/4 sliders if the hitsound on the blue tick isn't necessary or sounds bad; in fact here you had to reduce its volume. Btw it plays fine with the pattern you made so w/e nymph say suggest reduce sound, no change.
01:30:555 (8) - remove finish fixed
01:34:555 (2) - ctrl+g this with some changes on 01:34:222 (1) to correct flow would be really cool fixed
01:50:222 (1,2,3,4) - volume 50-35-20-5% or 55-40-25-10% fixed
01:52:888 (4) - http://puu.sh/51Y7N.jpg fixed
01:55:805 (2) - i prefer 2 circles instead of a slider starting on blue tick http://puu.sh/51Yd3.jpg

[Hard]
00:35:555 (3) - http://puu.sh/51ZtW.jpg fixed
00:43:555 (1) - http://puu.sh/51ZxP.jpg I consider it
01:04:222 (7) - clap fixed
01:05:555 (1) - clap fixed
01:45:222 (1) - http://puu.sh/51ZH6.jpg fixed or http://puu.sh/51ZKd.jpg
01:47:888 (1,1) - same for these too, but they sound much better than the previous one OKAY

[Normal]
00:20:388 (1) - why is this starting on red tick? it has no reason to and it plays awful. if you really want it to start on a red tick, it should be this one 00:20:722, not the previous one fixed
01:05:555 (2) - this shape is ugly lol fixed,change a bit.
01:09:555 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/5206J.jpg (2) 256|140; (3) 372|8 fixed
01:11:555 (1,2,3) - ^if you made that, you'll need to correct spacing here fixed
01:53:222 (1) - this is too low imo, you can overlap it on (2) http://puu.sh/520jP.jpg..that's not an easy so you can do it ;) fixed

I guess rank is near, make sure you let me know when it happens! :)
Okay,I will let you know my ranked,thanks Sephibro's mod ! :)
mingmichael
1,720 posts
Joined May 2012
mingmichael
irc mod with onijam :)
13:32 mingmichael: onijam :)
13:32 *mingmichael is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/317340 IOSYS - shining grace [OniJAM's Oni]]
13:32 OniJAM:   :)
13:32 mingmichael: i think we should mod irc
13:32 mingmichael: can you?
13:32 OniJAM: hmm
13:32 mingmichael: something problem with your diffs here
13:32 OniJAM: ok i think
13:33 mingmichael: well, okay i start it
13:33 *OniJAM is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/317340 IOSYS - shining grace [OniJAM's Oni]]
13:33 mingmichael: ~
13:33 mingmichael: first about the SV
13:33 mingmichael: change all the SV (muzukashii and ONi) to be 1.40
13:33 mingmichael: 1.20 is only for Kantan and Futsuu diff
13:34 OniJAM: but i changed SV through green line
13:34 mingmichael: okay~ now the notes
13:34 OniJAM: isn't it too difficult for Muzu
13:34 OniJAM: 1.2*1.25=1.5
13:35 mingmichael: well, in Taiko diffs aren't allowed use to many SV multiplier changes.. 
13:35 mingmichael: but
13:35 mingmichael: let see from TBaT comments later
13:35 OniJAM: i see
13:35 mingmichael: i ever mapped with some SV changes
13:35 mingmichael: at here
13:36 mingmichael: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/264637
13:36 OniJAM: I talk about this with Tasha yesterday
13:36 OniJAM: let's wait what he will said
13:36 OniJAM: he said he might post something about this
13:36 mingmichael: TBaT comments it in my chat with him, he told me to change them
13:36 mingmichael: owhh okay okay
13:37 mingmichael: for the SV changes, tasha will see it later xD
13:37 mingmichael: okay now notes~ >w<
13:37 OniJAM: yes
13:37 OniJAM: >w<
13:37 mingmichael: muzu or oni first?
13:37 mingmichael: xD?
13:37 OniJAM: as you like
13:37 mingmichael: okay, Oni then xD
13:37 OniJAM: okay
13:38 mingmichael: 00:25:055 (72,73,74) - 
13:38 mingmichael: do not use dkd or kdk patterns. like that
13:39 mingmichael: isn't fit well with the song
13:39 OniJAM: well
13:39 OniJAM: then 00:25:055 (72) - changed to k?
13:39 mingmichael: yeah, it should xD
13:39 mingmichael: to make it consistent too like the pattern k d k d k d 
13:40 mingmichael: this too 00:26:388 (82,83,84) - 
13:40 OniJAM: okay
13:40 mingmichael: make it ddk 
13:40 mingmichael: to follow the patternt oo
13:40 mingmichael: *pattern too
13:40 mingmichael: eitss
13:40 mingmichael: wait sorry xD
13:40 mingmichael: keep it dkd
13:41 mingmichael: 00:27:722 (91,92,93) -  kkd to
13:41 mingmichael: *roo
13:41 mingmichael: *too xD
13:41 mingmichael: 00:29:055 (98,99,100) - kkd here
13:41 mingmichael: it will follow the vocal sound too
13:41 mingmichael: at 
13:41 mingmichael: 00:29:222 (100) - 
13:42 mingmichael: ^ it becomes quite higher at there
13:42 OniJAM: yes
13:42 OniJAM: fixed
13:42 mingmichael: 00:30:388 (105,106,107) - kkd too. follow the patterns again
13:42 OniJAM: okay
13:43 mingmichael: don 00:38:055 (158) - 
13:43 mingmichael: follow the instrument sound again which is lower here
13:44 mingmichael: lower than 00:37:555 (155,156) - 
13:44 mingmichael: and 00:37:888 (157) - 
13:44 OniJAM: yes
13:44 OniJAM: same tune with 00:37:388 (154) - 
13:44 OniJAM: fixed
13:44 mingmichael: yes you're right :)
13:44 OniJAM: ofc
13:44 mingmichael: 00:38:722 (164) - should be kat 
13:45 mingmichael: or
13:45 OniJAM: change like 00:40:722 (175) - 
13:45 mingmichael: 00:36:055 (147) - should be don
13:45 OniJAM: 00:38:722 (164) - my mis
13:45 mingmichael: because they must have a same pattern at that part. they have a same part of song. same pitch sounds too
13:45 OniJAM: mistake*
13:45 mingmichael: 00:40:722 (175) - yeah change to be don too at here
13:45 OniJAM: d now
13:45 mingmichael: okay, it's better now about that pattern
13:45 mingmichael: okay next~
13:46 OniJAM: 00:43:222 (192,193) - now i changed d k
13:46 mingmichael: 00:42:388 (186,187,188) - 
13:46 mingmichael: kat don kat
13:46 mingmichael: to follow all the instrument sounds again there
13:47 mingmichael: 00:42:555 (187) -  same like 00:42:055 (184) - 
13:47 OniJAM: hmm
13:47 OniJAM: well fixed
13:48 mingmichael: remove finsiher 
13:48 mingmichael: 00:46:222 (222) - 
13:48 mingmichael: kat, so the triplet will be kkd << much better and stronger than kdd
13:48 mingmichael: like 00:59:055 (273,274,275) - 
13:49 OniJAM: but music give finish there
13:49 mingmichael: at where?
13:49 mingmichael: 00:46:222 (222) - ?
13:49 OniJAM: yes
13:49 mingmichael: the finisher isn't allowed put at the stream
13:49 mingmichael: ^it's unrankable
13:49 mingmichael: mancuso told me too
13:49 OniJAM: ww..
13:50 OniJAM: well..okay..i will remove
13:50 mingmichael: okay
13:50 mingmichael: kats at 01:01:138 (289,292) - 
13:50 mingmichael: to follow the patterns too at there
13:50 mingmichael: k d k d k d kkd 
13:51 OniJAM: okay
13:51 mingmichael: from 01:02:555 - until 01:06:888 -
13:51 mingmichael: did you follow the vocal sounds?
13:51 mingmichael: or follow instrumental sounds?
13:53 OniJAM: more to vocal
13:53 mingmichael: i prefer to use a same patterns like 00:56:888 - until 01:01:888 - which is d k d k d k d k . but it's up to you xD
13:53 mingmichael: well, you followed the vocal? let i see...
13:54 mingmichael: 01:03:222 (301) - 01:03:888 (306) - kat
13:54 mingmichael: 01:04:055 (307,308) - don
13:54 mingmichael: it will be d k d k d k patterns c: much better
13:54 mingmichael: and
13:54 mingmichael: it follows the vocal sounds too :)
13:54 mingmichael: at 01:02:888 (299,304,309) - 
13:55 OniJAM: hmm
13:55 OniJAM: changed to follow the instrument now..
13:55 mingmichael: ohh okay okay
13:56 OniJAM: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1070410
13:56 mingmichael: but it's much better to follow instrument than vocal because the previous patterns you didn't follow it too
13:56 OniJAM: yes i see
13:56 OniJAM: so i change that
13:57 mingmichael: kat 01:06:555 (326) - 
13:57 mingmichael: to follow the kats pattern too
13:57 mingmichael: which always appear at the white strikes 
13:57 mingmichael: all the white strikes
13:58 OniJAM: 01:06:222 (324,325,326,327) - I want to follow lower drums
13:58 OniJAM: so d d d d
13:59 mingmichael: okay then no problem 
13:59 mingmichael: but it's quite monotonous to use d d d d like it
13:59 mingmichael: but okay then
13:59 mingmichael: 01:07:555 (335,336,337,338) - 
14:00 mingmichael: why you used triplet at there? D:
14:00 mingmichael: you didn't use it too at this part at the next pattern
14:00 mingmichael: until 01:17:888 (368) - 
14:00 mingmichael: there's not any triplets at this part
14:00 OniJAM: hmm
14:00 mingmichael: delete 01:07:805 (337) - and change 01:07:722 (336) - don
14:00 OniJAM: removed01:07:722 (336,337) - 
14:01 mingmichael: ohhh
14:01 mingmichael: okay 
14:01 mingmichael: sounds better xD
14:01 OniJAM: hmm
14:01 mingmichael: 01:23:722 (392,393,394) - kkd too
14:02 OniJAM: sorry, i have lessons this afternoon
14:02 OniJAM: so i think i have to go
14:02 mingmichael: 01:25:055 (402,403,404) - same 
14:02 mingmichael: owh okay then 
14:02 OniJAM: or i will late for class XD
14:02 OniJAM: sorry for that
14:02 mingmichael: xD i will mod it again later wwww
14:02 mingmichael: jya
14:02 mingmichael: ~
i will continue again after oni comes back~

*EDIT :
2nd mod
16:10 OniJAM: Hi
16:10 mingmichael: hey~~ :3
16:10 mingmichael: ohayh xD
16:10 mingmichael: please wait for the minute
16:10 *mingmichael is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/122612 7!! - Bye Bye (TV Size) [Insane]] <CatchTheBeat> +Hidden
16:10 mingmichael: xD
16:11 OniJAM: xD
16:11 OniJAM: okay
16:14 OniJAM: wait for a minute? maybe i can call mapper to upload my gds
16:15 OniJAM: then you can check more conviniently
16:15 mingmichael: owhh okayy
16:15 mingmichael: :3
16:30 mingmichael: oni~
16:30 mingmichael: have smallboat updated your diff? o.o?
16:30 *mingmichael is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/317340 IOSYS - shining grace [OniJAM's Oni]]
16:31 OniJAM: no
16:31 OniJAM: xD
16:31 OniJAM: he is offline
16:31 mingmichael: xD owh  i see... 
16:31 mingmichael: okay then
16:31 OniJAM: I'd like to puush my diffs to you
16:31 mingmichael: could you sent the file to me?
16:31 mingmichael: ohh yeah xD 
16:33 OniJAM: http://puu.sh/54zyo.rar
16:33 OniJAM: including muzu and oni\
16:33 mingmichael: D; aahhh... my computer can't open rar file ;~;
16:33 OniJAM: also changes muzu some part
16:33 OniJAM: www
16:33 OniJAM: well
16:33 mingmichael: xD sorry @~@
16:33 OniJAM: http://puu.sh/54zzx.osu
16:33 OniJAM: this is Oni
16:33 OniJAM: http://puu.sh/54zzP.osu
16:33 OniJAM: and this is Muzukashii
16:34 OniJAM: never mind
16:34 mingmichael: okay owo
16:35 mingmichael: start again~
16:35 *OniJAM is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/317340 IOSYS - shining grace [OniJAM's Oni]]
16:35 OniJAM: okay
16:35 mingmichael: let i check it again~
16:35 mingmichael: 00:32:638 (127) - 
16:35 mingmichael: delete
16:36 mingmichael: and 00:32:888 (129) -  give finsiher here
16:36 mingmichael: *finisher here
16:36 mingmichael: the accent which is given is strong at here 
16:36 OniJAM: okay
16:37 mingmichael:  i've 2suggestions for you
16:37 mingmichael: 00:37:138 - add don
16:37 mingmichael: and 00:37:638 - add kat
16:38 mingmichael: lets put some triplets there. since this's Oni diff, no problem~ :D
16:38 OniJAM: fixed the first
16:38 mingmichael: okay~
16:38 mingmichael: if you used it
16:38 mingmichael: 00:39:805 - add it too
16:38 OniJAM: 00:39:805 (170) - yes
16:38 mingmichael: great~
16:39 mingmichael: ohh at 00:42:472 -
16:39 mingmichael: it's too
16:39 mingmichael: but 
16:39 mingmichael: it's kat, not don
16:39 OniJAM: yes
16:39 mingmichael: kkd triplet is much stronger than kdd triplet :)
16:39 OniJAM: you are right~
16:40 mingmichael: 00:43:555 - until 00:44:388 -
16:40 mingmichael: well the notes aren't fit well to follow the instrumental sounds
16:40 mingmichael: hmm
16:40 mingmichael: wait
16:40 mingmichael: try this
16:40 mingmichael: http://puu.sh/54zIM.jpg
16:41 OniJAM: sounds nice!
16:41 mingmichael: it's better right than the previous notes that you used c:
16:42 mingmichael: owhhh 
16:42 mingmichael: you put don at 00:46:222 (223) - 
16:42 mingmichael: great~! xD
16:42 OniJAM: because it has no finisher now~
16:42 mingmichael: yes you're right xD
16:43 OniJAM: if there is still a finisher, I will put kat there
16:43 OniJAM: but no finisher now, so it sounds better don here
16:43 mingmichael: yes you're right :) 
16:43 mingmichael: 01:05:555 (319) - 
16:43 mingmichael: this should be don since you used k d k d k d k d pattern
16:44 mingmichael: and
16:44 mingmichael: 01:05:722 (320,321,322) - kkd 
16:44 OniJAM: ys
16:44 OniJAM: yes
16:44 OniJAM: fixed
16:44 mingmichael: and 01:06:555 (327) - kat~ 
16:45 OniJAM: hmm
16:45 mingmichael: you have said that you didn't change it xD
16:45 mingmichael: but
16:45 mingmichael: it's much better to use it :c
16:45 mingmichael: and 
16:46 OniJAM: i really think 01:06:555 (327) - don sounds better than kat.. sorry
16:46 mingmichael: it's too monotonous if you used dons only from 01:06:222 (325,326,327,328) - 
16:46 mingmichael: okay okay xD 
16:46 mingmichael: no problem~
16:46 mingmichael: that's just a mapper style to map it x3
16:46 mingmichael: okay~ next
16:46 OniJAM: :3
16:47 mingmichael: 01:52:888 (597,598,599,600,601,602,603,604,605,606) - 
16:47 mingmichael: change it like 00:43:555 (196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203) - 
16:47 mingmichael: :)
16:47 OniJAM: i see
16:48 mingmichael: they have same part of song~
16:48 mingmichael: same pitch sounds too :D
16:48 OniJAM: changed
16:50 mingmichael: okay :3
3rd mod
21:46 OniJAM: Well..
21:46 OniJAM: continue ircmod now?
21:47 mingmichael: owhh okay owo)b
21:47 OniJAM: owo
21:51 mingmichael: wait for the minute xD
21:53 mingmichael: okayy
21:53 mingmichael: start owo)b
21:54 OniJAM: okay
21:54 mingmichael: 00:24:888 (66) - you forgot the finsiher there ;w;
21:55 OniJAM: added
21:55 mingmichael: this too 00:30:222 (86) - 
21:55 OniJAM: owo
21:55 mingmichael: >w<
21:55 OniJAM: yes
21:55 OniJAM: ^ω^
21:56 mingmichael: 00:30:722 (88) - move to 00:31:055 - and don 
21:56 mingmichael: and
21:56 mingmichael: 00:31:222 - kat
21:56 mingmichael: and
21:56 mingmichael: 00:31:722 - delete
21:57 mingmichael: it's much better than before
21:57 mingmichael: because
21:57 mingmichael: the previous notes that you used it too longgg. don don kat kat don don kat kat
21:57 mingmichael: consider about that because this's muzukashii diff
21:57 OniJAM: yes
21:57 OniJAM: fixed
21:58 mingmichael: 00:35:888 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - 
21:58 mingmichael: well... you followed the instrument sounds
21:58 mingmichael: sounds great. but hmmm it's too long for muzukashii diff
21:58 mingmichael: but, just keep this
21:58 mingmichael: until BAT comment something about this c:
21:59 OniJAM: okay
21:59 mingmichael: 00:38:555 - finisher here. you should be consistent like 00:35:888 - which you used it too
21:59 mingmichael: and they have a same part of song too~
21:59 mingmichael: owo
22:00 mingmichael: 00:40:888 (132,133,134) - delete this triplet
22:00 mingmichael: i know what it is for xD
22:00 mingmichael: you followed the drum hits right?
22:00 mingmichael: but, let give a little break there. the notes are too long too there
22:00 OniJAM: you got it
22:01 mingmichael: i mean delete 00:40:888 (132,133) - only xD
22:01 OniJAM: well.. second time someone recommend that
22:01 mingmichael: keep don at 00:41:055 (134) - 
22:01 OniJAM: hmm
22:01 mingmichael: consider about this notes. the muzukashii player will be quite confused with this because this's quite hard for it
22:01 OniJAM: i prefer to delete triplet all
22:02 OniJAM: and 00:40:055 (128) - add don
22:02 mingmichael: okay then~
22:02 mingmichael: 00:41:222 - finisher again her
22:02 mingmichael: *here
22:02 OniJAM: right
22:03 OniJAM: also somepart like this after kiai
22:03 OniJAM: i will changed
22:03 OniJAM: change*
22:03 mingmichael: okay~
22:03 mingmichael: 00:43:388 - delete
22:03 mingmichael: because
22:03 mingmichael: actualy the drum hits stop at there
22:04 mingmichael: just a instrument sounds at there
22:04 mingmichael: and it'll give a little break too
22:04 OniJAM: hmm
22:04 OniJAM: and 00:44:722 (150) - should I delete?
22:04 mingmichael: the drum hits stop at 00:43:222 -
22:04 mingmichael: well later i say it xD i have 1 mod again before it www
22:04 OniJAM: also 00:46:055 (157) - 
22:05 OniJAM: okay
22:05 mingmichael: not delete them wwww
22:05 OniJAM: please
22:05 OniJAM: ww
22:05 mingmichael: 00:44:055 - move to 00:44:222 -
22:05 mingmichael: there's not any reason to put at 00:44:055 - ;w;
22:06 mingmichael: delete 00:44:722 - (y)
22:07 mingmichael: and 00:46:055 - xD
22:07 mingmichael: you're right~
22:07 OniJAM: i just thought that 00:43:555 - and 00:44:055 - have same tune
22:07 OniJAM: and 00:44:555 (149) - little higher
22:07 OniJAM: i think k dk dk feels good
22:07 mingmichael: yes
22:07 mingmichael: but
22:08 mingmichael: it follow the drum hits, not the instrument ;w;
22:08 mingmichael: the drum hits appear again at 00:43:555 -
22:08 mingmichael: so that's why it is  a note there
22:08 mingmichael: and at 00:44:055 -
22:08 mingmichael: there's not any that sounds
22:08 mingmichael: just a instrument sounds
22:09 OniJAM: hmmm
22:09 OniJAM: well
22:09 OniJAM: vvvvvvv
22:09 OniJAM: fixed
22:09 mingmichael: okay, i continue it again xD
22:09 OniJAM: i think you are right
22:09 OniJAM: also it is not bad..
22:09 mingmichael: 00:56:555 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197) - too long.... ;w;
22:09 mingmichael: 00:58:222 (198,199,200,201,202,203,204) - same
22:10 mingmichael: hmmm wait, i'll give you some idea
22:11 mingmichael: well wait xD i am confused wwwww
22:11 OniJAM: wwwww
22:11 mingmichael: you used d k d k patterns there wwww
22:11 OniJAM: i just deleted 00:56:722 (191) - ... and... wait for you
22:12 mingmichael: and it's quite hard to change xD
22:12 mingmichael: great~! i got
22:12 mingmichael: 00:57:222 - kat
22:12 OniJAM: (>^ω^<)
22:12 mingmichael: 00:58:388 - delete
22:12 mingmichael: and
22:13 mingmichael: 00:58:222 - kat
22:13 mingmichael: ^ those of them will follow the vocal sounds
22:13 mingmichael: and 
22:13 mingmichael: delete 00:59:055 -
22:13 mingmichael: the piano sounds are just at 00:58:555 (197,198,199) - 
22:13 mingmichael: and it's not at 00:59:055 -
22:13 mingmichael: so that's why i deleted it www
22:14 OniJAM: www
22:14 mingmichael: 01:01:055 - delete too c:
22:15 OniJAM: :D
22:15 mingmichael: delete 01:01:722 - 
22:15 mingmichael: and
22:16 mingmichael: 01:01:388 - kat and 01:01:555 - 
22:16 mingmichael: it'll same like 00:58:222 (196,197,198,199) -  :p
22:16 mingmichael: same pattern~ so it's consistent~! c:
22:17 mingmichael: 01:01:888 - kat
22:17 mingmichael: don 01:04:222 - << vocal becomes lower
22:17 mingmichael: kat 01:04:555 -
22:17 mingmichael: and 
22:17 mingmichael: 01:04:888 - don
22:18 mingmichael: those are to follow the the vocal sounds c:
22:18 OniJAM: deleted 01:07:055 - already
22:18 OniJAM: yes
22:18 OniJAM: fixed those
22:18 mingmichael: delete 01:05:055 -
22:19 mingmichael: quite hard to put notes after finisher at muzukashii diff
22:19 OniJAM: yes
22:19 OniJAM: well i deleted 01:07:388 - as well
22:20 mingmichael: donn't >.>
22:20 mingmichael: just delete 01:06:722 (231) - 
22:20 mingmichael: 01:06:722 -
22:20 OniJAM: hmm
22:20 OniJAM: nice too
22:20 mingmichael: 01:06:888 (231,232,233,234,235) - << the drum hits appear at all this part
22:21 OniJAM: but
22:21 mingmichael: but?
22:21 OniJAM: ddddk k K seems better to me
22:21 OniJAM: ddd kdkkK is nice to
22:22 OniJAM: but miss drum 01:06:722 - here
22:22 mingmichael: hmmm wait
22:22 OniJAM: too*
22:22 mingmichael: yeah just miss it
22:22 mingmichael: to make a little break
22:23 OniJAM: but 01:07:055 - just vocal, no drum there
22:23 mingmichael: okay, it's up to you :p what pattenr do you want to use. those are just suggestions from me
22:23 OniJAM: 01:07:388 - no drum as well
22:23 OniJAM: okay
22:23 mingmichael: ohyah
22:23 mingmichael: 01:07:055 -
22:23 mingmichael: agree
22:23 mingmichael: there's not any drum hits
22:24 mingmichael: after i use75% playback rate xD there's not 
22:24 OniJAM: 01:07:388 - quite low
22:24 OniJAM: have drum
22:24 mingmichael: use ddddk k K
22:24 OniJAM: i often use 25% xD
22:25 mingmichael: yes xD really low. but i believe that player will not to hear that wwwwww
22:25 mingmichael: okay, next~ :3
22:25 OniJAM: okay
22:25 OniJAM: www
22:26 mingmichael: remove 01:23:722 -
22:26 mingmichael: i think you understand why i removed it xD
22:26 OniJAM: yes
22:27 mingmichael: okay~ let's we follow the vocal now
22:27 OniJAM: [quote="mingmichael"]quite hard to put notes after finisher at muzukashii diff[/quote]
22:27 mingmichael: 01:24:388 - delete
22:27 OniJAM: www
22:27 mingmichael: great xD you remember it :3 thumbs up for you~!
22:28 OniJAM: www
22:28 mingmichael: 01:24:555 - kat 
22:28 OniJAM: and 01:24:555 (293) - change to k?
22:28 mingmichael: to follow the kick sounds
22:28 mingmichael: yess xDD
22:28 mingmichael: 01:25:055 - delete
22:28 OniJAM: yes
22:28 mingmichael: this too 01:29:055 - . what should it be? :3
22:29 OniJAM: remove
22:29 OniJAM: :D
22:29 mingmichael: nice~ c:
22:29 mingmichael: this too 01:29:388 (309) - 
22:29 mingmichael: 01:29:388 
22:29 OniJAM: removed 01:31:055 (321) - 
22:30 mingmichael: don 01:29:388 -
22:30 mingmichael: ups sorry 
22:30 mingmichael: i mean 01:29:722 - don 01:29:722 (310) - 
22:30 mingmichael: xD
22:30 mingmichael: 01:29:888 - lat
22:30 mingmichael: *kat
22:30 mingmichael: add don at 01:30:055 
22:30 OniJAM: yes
22:31 mingmichael: delete 01:30:388 (
22:31 mingmichael: 01:30:388 
22:31 OniJAM: fixed
22:31 mingmichael: 01:30:555 and 01:30:722 should be kat
22:31 mingmichael: 01:30:555 and 01:30:722 -
22:31 mingmichael: D:
22:32 mingmichael: 01:30:555 - and 01:30:722 -
22:32 mingmichael: xDD nahhh
22:32 mingmichael: because
22:32 OniJAM: xDDD
22:32 mingmichael: the instrumental pitch sounds have a same pitch sound like 01:30:222 - . you can hear it carefully 
22:32 mingmichael: and
22:32 mingmichael: 01:30:888 - and 01:31:055 - dons
22:33 mingmichael: because the instrument sounds are lower there than 01:30:222 (313,314,315) - which are kats :)
22:33 OniJAM: i think 01:30:555 (317) - a little lower than 01:30:222 (316) - not the same
22:33 OniJAM: but i can understand
22:33 OniJAM: 01:30:555 (317) - little higher than 01:30:888 (319) - 
22:34 mingmichael: yeah lower xD but in my hearing, it has same pitch sounds xD /me is slapped wwwww
22:34 mingmichael: okay continue~
22:34 OniJAM: www
22:34 mingmichael: 01:31:055 - delete
22:34 OniJAM: yes
22:34 mingmichael: 01:31:388 - delete
22:34 mingmichael: just put a note there
22:34 mingmichael: 01:31:222 (317) - kat , you can put this
22:35 mingmichael: upss
22:35 mingmichael: nopenope
22:35 mingmichael: don is the best
22:35 OniJAM: 01:31:222 (320) - don
22:35 mingmichael: the vocal is still low at here
22:35 OniJAM: yes
22:35 mingmichael: 01:34:388 - delete~
22:35 mingmichael: 01:34:055 - don
22:35 OniJAM: i think maybe you should use 25% playback more often :3
22:35 OniJAM: yes
22:36 mingmichael: the instrument sounds just appear at 01:33:555 - and 01:33:888 - and they are kats~
22:36 OniJAM: well
22:36 mingmichael: nope, 75% xD 
22:36 mingmichael: okay continue~
22:36 OniJAM: from 01:34:222 - to 01:42:222 - 
22:36 OniJAM: i just copied opening kiai
22:36 mingmichael: okayy then~
22:36 mingmichael: later if you make another taiko diffs
22:37 OniJAM: 01:23:555 - to 01:28:121 - 
22:37 OniJAM: so you can skip
22:37 mingmichael: do not copy/paste :c
22:37 mingmichael: TBat ever told me like that
22:37 mingmichael: do not copy/paste
22:37 mingmichael: Ono told me
22:37 OniJAM: ww
22:37 OniJAM: okay
22:37 mingmichael: 01:47:888 (388) - finisher
22:37 mingmichael: 01:49:555 (396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406) - 
22:38 OniJAM: same changes
22:38 mingmichael: i guess you used same notes too like the first part, is that right? xD?
22:38 mingmichael: like from 00:35:888 -
22:39 OniJAM: yes
22:39 mingmichael: okay~ just copy it then
22:39 mingmichael: move 01:55:805 - to 01:55:888 -
22:39 mingmichael: i know
22:39 mingmichael: you put at 01:55:805 - to follow the drum hit xD
22:39 mingmichael: but
22:39 mingmichael: it's quite hard because the previous notes you didn't put at the 1/4beat snap divisor place
22:40 mingmichael: like at 01:55:805 - :c
22:40 OniJAM: only this part use 3/4
22:40 OniJAM: i think i got what you mean
22:40 OniJAM: yes fixed
22:40 mingmichael: 3/4? o.O?
22:40 mingmichael: no noooo
22:40 mingmichael: 1/4 beat snap divisor xD we don't have 3/4 beat snap divisor wwww
22:40 mingmichael: at the up right
22:41 OniJAM: from 01:55:555 (429) - to 01:55:805 - 
22:41 OniJAM: well i usually call that 3/4
22:41 OniJAM: don't mind
22:41 mingmichael: owhhh xD understand wwwww
22:41 mingmichael: owh wait for the minute~
22:43 mingmichael: back~
22:44 mingmichael: my mom called me before wwww
22:44 OniJAM: ~
22:44 OniJAM: wwww
22:44 mingmichael: 01:56:888 - delete
22:44 mingmichael: and
22:44 mingmichael: 01:57:138 - move 01:57:055 -
22:45 OniJAM: wait
22:45 OniJAM: 01:57:055 (429) - no drums there
22:46 OniJAM: i prefer to move to 01:57:222 (429) - 
22:46 mingmichael: yeah i know it
22:46 OniJAM: or just remove
22:46 mingmichael: 01:56:888 - here is too. no drum hit
22:46 mingmichael: i prefer to put a note at the middle 01:56:722 - and 01:57:388 -
22:46 OniJAM: so i deleted 01:56:888 - 
22:47 mingmichael: hmm well if you still follow the drumhit is not problem~ xD 
22:47 mingmichael: it's just a suggestion from me
22:47 mingmichael: ~
22:48 OniJAM: ~
22:48 mingmichael: well 
22:48 mingmichael: i check it again~ :3
22:48 mingmichael: 00:23:555 (60,61,62,63) - don don kat don
22:49 mingmichael: to follow the patterns too like the previous part
22:49 mingmichael: don don kat
22:49 mingmichael: 00:22:888 (57,58,59) - and 
22:49 mingmichael: 00:22:222 (54,55,56) - 
22:49 mingmichael: so at 00:23:555 (60,61,62) - should be same
22:50 mingmichael: have you put finsiher too at 00:56:888 - ? i forget xD
22:51 OniJAM: no
22:51 OniJAM: added now
22:51 OniJAM: ww?
22:51 mingmichael: this should be finisher because the new part of song is at there :3
22:51 mingmichael: 00:56:888 (190) - 
22:52 mingmichael: okay~
22:52 OniJAM: yes
22:52 mingmichael: okay, that's all for muzu xD
22:52 mingmichael: just still consider at 00:36:722 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - 
22:52 OniJAM: wooooowwwwwwwwwwww now looks much much better than before
22:52 mingmichael: well TBAT will give some ideas at that part xD
22:52 OniJAM: pro modder mingmichael
22:52 OniJAM: ok
22:52 OniJAM: i will consider that
22:52 mingmichael: LOL no prooo www
22:52 mingmichael: before that
22:53 mingmichael: let i check the oni again :)
22:53 *OniJAM hugs mingmichael
22:53 OniJAM: ok
22:53 mingmichael: could you give the puush to me? lol i didn't save before xD 
22:54 OniJAM: http://puu.sh/54KkK.osu
22:54 OniJAM: KkK...
22:54 OniJAM: WwW
22:55 mingmichael: upsss
22:55 mingmichael: 00:23:555 (65,66,67,68) - 
22:55 mingmichael: don don kat don
22:55 mingmichael: still remember it? :3
22:55 mingmichael: at muzukashii diff wwww
22:56 OniJAM: wwww
22:56 OniJAM: okay
22:56 mingmichael: finisher at 00:24:888 - . the new part of song comes at here
22:56 OniJAM: yes
22:59 mingmichael: okay nice :)
22:59 mingmichael: the patterns are better now wwww
22:59 mingmichael: and the last
22:59 mingmichael: is 
22:59 mingmichael: about volume
22:59 OniJAM: www
22:59 mingmichael: http://puu.sh/54Kvt.png << read this
23:00 mingmichael: you can change the volumes by yourself i guess~ :)
23:00 OniJAM: ww
23:00 OniJAM: yes
23:00 OniJAM: i'll have a try
23:00 mingmichael: okayy then~!! that's all >w<)b
23:00 mingmichael: :D 
23:01 OniJAM: just higher the beginning?
23:01 mingmichael: hmmm
23:01 mingmichael: i prefer always use 100% at the kiai parts xD so the first part maybe around 60% or 70%
23:02 OniJAM: hmm
23:02 mingmichael: because kiai means "spirit" in japanese
23:02 mingmichael: so
23:02 mingmichael: use the highest sounds~ 
23:02 mingmichael: xD
23:02 OniJAM: well i will change that by myself
23:02 mingmichael: okay~ :3
23:02 OniJAM: 气合
23:02 OniJAM: x
23:02 mingmichael: that's all from me~ :)
23:03 mingmichael: goodluck for the next~!
23:03 OniJAM: thanks a lot
23:03 OniJAM: thank you~
23:03 mingmichael: ;D
that's all from me xD goodluck Oni :)
karterfreak
osu! Alumni
724 posts
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karterfreak
Just want to chime in real quick here and reaffirm what I was trying to say regarding SV changes. Due to the song being a consistent BPM, I feel that it should be a consistent SV (as mingmichael said). However, I'm not opposed to SLIGHTLY lower SV's during the less "intense" parts of the music, or SLIGHTLY higher SV's during the Kiai for emphasis (Usually something like from 1.4x SV being multiplied by 1.20).

As long as there is no overlap or bad visual cues (i.e, it looking like the song's BPM is slowing down due to SV decreasing) there usually isn't an issue.

That said, the song right now does have some of those bad visual cues (unless it was changed since I last looked) that should be addressed. Mingmichael's suggestion is the simplest approach to fixing this without having any issues. :)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
0.0 过来mod了


Insane

  1. 01:07:555 (1,2,3) - 只有这个这么大, 不好
  2. 01:33:555 (1,2,3,4) - 太丧病#(蜡烛)
  3. 01:45:555 (4,3) - 弯的程度有点大, 这样就好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074174
Hard

  1. 01:33:888 (7,1) - spacing部队?
  2. 01:49:888 (2) - 这一段都只有30%? 不是故意的吧o.o
YukInsane

  1. 来回跳点赞
  2. 00:33:222 (2,3,4) - 叠的有点紧密, 把这一堆往右一点, 叠起来就好看点
  3. 01:10:388 (5,6) - 这里感觉不合适, 请ctrl G
  4. 01:54:805 (9) - 不科学
  5. 01:55:222 (14) - 而且这里加点弧度?
就这样吧
Hanabi
Hanabi
As your request

[Normal]
00:20:722 (1) - this slider should be start at 00:20:722 . here's my example
00:52:222 (2) - ugly slider shape
00:53:555 (1) - ^
00:58:555 (3) - 164||159 for flow
01:05:555 (2) - ^ ^
01:07:555 (1) - ^
01:13:555 (1) - ^
01:32:222 (2,3) - copy,paste the slider before and rotate 120degree. it is not a good shape currently.

[Hard]
00:00:889 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - just suggeston. seperate the notes here. overlap isn't a good idea imo
01:33:555 (6,7) - change into slider
01:40:222 (2,3) - stack
01:04:888 (9) - NC

[ Yukinsane]
00:22:555 (3,1,2,3) - very confusing when play. seperate a bit
01:30:888 (3) - ctrl + g

Good map but, you should recheck the shape of sliders imo.

GL
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

[ Sana ] wrote:

[ Yukinsane]
00:22:555 (3,1,2,3) - very confusing when play. seperate a bit
01:30:888 (3) - ctrl + g
sry no change

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

YukInsane

  1. 来回跳点赞
  2. 00:33:222 (2,3,4) - 叠的有点紧密, 把这一堆往右一点, 叠起来就好看点 怎么移都觉得不好看，不改了
  3. 01:10:388 (5,6) - 这里感觉不合适, 请ctrl G 没啥不合适
  4. 01:54:805 (9) - 不科学 擦这里这么会是0.6……改了
  5. 01:55:222 (14) - 而且这里加点弧度? 好
thx for modding~
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

0.0 过来mod了 謝謝


Insane

  1. 01:07:555 (1,2,3) - 只有这个这么大, 不好 後面也跳大點了
  2. 01:33:555 (1,2,3,4) - 太丧病#(蜡烛) 還好?
  3. 01:45:555 (4,3) - 弯的程度有点大, 这样就好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074174 已修
Hard

  1. 01:33:888 (7,1) - spacing部队? 沒注意到，已修。
  2. 01:49:888 (2) - 这一段都只有30%? 不是故意的吧o.o咦 這裡好小聲 我調60了..
就这样吧
謝謝ar3的mod :)


[ Sana ] wrote:

As your request Thanks

[Normal]
00:20:722 (1) - this slider should be start at 00:20:722 . here's my example
fixed
00:52:222 (2) - ugly slider shape fixed
00:53:555 (1) - ^ fixed
00:58:555 (3) - 164||159 for flow all fixed
01:05:555 (2) - ^ ^
01:07:555 (1) - ^
01:13:555 (1) - ^
01:32:222 (2,3) - copy,paste the slider before and rotate 120degree. it is not a good shape currently. I consider it

[Hard]
00:00:889 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - just suggeston. seperate the notes here. overlap isn't a good idea imo fixed,enlarge DS
01:33:555 (6,7) - change into slider fixed
01:40:222 (2,3) - stack fixed
01:04:888 (9) - NC fixed


Good map but, you should recheck the shape of sliders imo. OKAY

GL
Thanks [ Sana ]"s mod :)
pw384
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pw384
因为之前irc过一次了 所以再来看看最高难度了

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.


[Insane]
  1. 01:20:222 (1,2) - 试着让这两个slider平行 （当前的这两个slider有夹角）
  2. 01:04:888 (9) - New combo
  3. 01:20:888 - 01:23:222 - 我更愿意选择用一个转盘带过去 虽然现在的没问题 但是有些蠢BAT可能会死抓这个地方不放
  4. (nazi) 01:33:555 (1,2,3,4) - 做成一个平行四边形试试？
  5. 01:41:722 - 可以加一个note


比我上次看到的好多了 但是Hard仍有提升空间 加油

恭喜rank


edit: 漏了新加的GD

* 00:33:222 (2,3,4,1) - 可以分开来做成跳 感觉会很不错

* 01:20:888 (1) - 静音？

* 01:47:222 (3,4) - 换一下位置？

* 01:49:555 (1,2,3) - 这里迷惑性好大啊。。但是也没问题啦

其他没问题 这个难度的来回跳挺赞的
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