YEahAHaha
Easy
00:35:193 (1,2) - Try 2 sliders instead a repeat slider & note. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032721 This creates some leniency for beginners since the single note out in the open might be hard to get due to the irregular rhythm. I've noticed many of your other single notes have sliders right next to them, acting as a visual aid for getting those notes. so that could be a guide
00:40:393 (1,2) - ^
00:49:538 (1) -YEeAHAHA
00:50:843 (2) - Finish instead of whistle on the tail?
Normal
00:23:943 (4) - i think soft Finish on tail would sound more appropriate than Drum
00:53:614 (3,4) - Spacing, keep using 0.9x
01:14:973 (2) - some hitsound on the head here, I hear cymbals in the bgm
EmPao's Hard
00:11:065 (4,1) - This gap/stack felt kinda odd with the continuous drumroll in the bgm. I'd try filling in that gap somehow to keep the music moving http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032747
00:29:813 - Consider adding a note here. gives more of a natural lead-in to the pattern imo especially in a relatively quieter part of the song
00:32:421 - ^
00:56:141 (6) - Delete note, what's this stack following? In fact, I think a stack would flow better if placed between 00:54:756 (5,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032758 since a new measure is being introduced
01:00:054 (7) - yes like this!
Jonny is Insane
00:03:402 (4) - i think you meant to put the whistle on the head of this instead of on the previous note?
Insane
00:28:671 (5,1) - Try flipping these http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032804 Matches the dominating vocals better imo
00:50:027 (2,4) - you could do the cool pattern again where each of these notes is slightly below the other, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032810
00:57:201 (6) - maybe move this down so 00:57:527 (1) - blankets it somehow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032814 if you decide to apply it, just be mindful of it going offscreen ofc
01:25:057 (3) - NC to indicate the speed/tone change if you like
call me back <3
Easy
00:35:193 (1,2) - Try 2 sliders instead a repeat slider & note. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032721 This creates some leniency for beginners since the single note out in the open might be hard to get due to the irregular rhythm. I've noticed many of your other single notes have sliders right next to them, acting as a visual aid for getting those notes. so that could be a guide
00:40:393 (1,2) - ^
00:49:538 (1) -
00:50:843 (2) - Finish instead of whistle on the tail?
Normal
00:23:943 (4) - i think soft Finish on tail would sound more appropriate than Drum
00:53:614 (3,4) - Spacing, keep using 0.9x
01:14:973 (2) - some hitsound on the head here, I hear cymbals in the bgm
EmPao's Hard
00:11:065 (4,1) - This gap/stack felt kinda odd with the continuous drumroll in the bgm. I'd try filling in that gap somehow to keep the music moving http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032747
00:29:813 - Consider adding a note here. gives more of a natural lead-in to the pattern imo especially in a relatively quieter part of the song
00:32:421 - ^
00:56:141 (6) - Delete note, what's this stack following? In fact, I think a stack would flow better if placed between 00:54:756 (5,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032758 since a new measure is being introduced
01:00:054 (7) - yes like this!
Jonny is Insane
00:03:402 (4) - i think you meant to put the whistle on the head of this instead of on the previous note?
Insane
00:28:671 (5,1) - Try flipping these http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032804 Matches the dominating vocals better imo
00:50:027 (2,4) - you could do the cool pattern again where each of these notes is slightly below the other, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032810
00:57:201 (6) - maybe move this down so 00:57:527 (1) - blankets it somehow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032814 if you decide to apply it, just be mindful of it going offscreen ofc
01:25:057 (3) - NC to indicate the speed/tone change if you like
call me back <3