Zero__wind wrote:

lfj's Insane
00:19:296 (2,3) - maybe whistle fits better than clap at these points played around with the hitsounds here
00:31:280 (4) - I think this is a bit too far as there's no need to emphasize 00:31:443 (1) - changed to 1.20x
00:39:921 (2) - subjective idea here. you may place it to pretend that the slider pattern has not yet ended, and then jump like http://puu.sh/4rP77.jpg normally i would do this, but i personally think the jump would be too extreme considering a consecutive note spam is in place afterwards
00:55:571 (3) - don't let it cross 00:54:919 (1) - 's body may look better, just like 00:55:245 (2,4) - sure
00:56:223 (1) - a finish on head is preferable ok
01:00:788 (3,4,1) - a bit weird flow, may try http://puu.sh/4rPfC.jpg im quite liking this type of flow, since i like spinning big circles with my cursor and catch sliders like this
01:15:462 (1) - may remove this NC to avoid missleading, referring to 01:11:060 (2,1) - and 01:13:016 (2,1) - , you indicated the slow down with NC for the first two, so that the NC on 01:15:462 (1) - may make players think that this slider is also slow while in fact it is not good point

Flower wrote:

Lfj

1. add whistle on 00:52:962 - 00:53:614 - 00:54:266 - , etc. should sound better. alright
2. 00:56:223 - add finish? done
3. 01:25:057 (3) - try this: cool stuff
   
   
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Flower wrote:

Hi~
(I make these mods totally based on my personal preference, if there is any you dislike, come and beat me ah please ignore the mod.)

Insane

1. HP7 is kinda like several 100 sliders without combo break and dies. I suggest HP-1.
   I'd rather not go HP6 for what's supposed to be the hardest diff ;_;
   
2. 00:14:813 (2,3) - personally I hate what this 3/4 goes. 00:14:813 (2) - change to 1/2 plays cooler.
3. 00:17:421 (2,3) - ^
   That would mean remapping the section. I think using this rhythm here makes the change at 00:24:921 more dramatic.
   
4. 00:19:378 - add a note with soft whistle at x:256: y:192? I kinda like this rhythm.
   Ok I'll try.
   
5. 00:20:030 (2,3) - same as I mentioned
6. 00:24:514 - add soft whistle? since you did this at 00:19:296 -
   I suppose, but sound is completely different here so I'll stick with this setup.
   
7. 00:24:758 - add finish? or use a increased volume whistle
   k
   
8. 00:34:215 - Feels strange with this isolated soft whistle. Change to Drum set and remove whistle may sound better.
   kkk
   
9. 00:37:802 (1) - try different direction, like:
   
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   I think I prefer the current setup.
   
10. 00:43:490 (2,3,4) - this triple does not form a straight line. adjust them.
    fixed
    
11. 00:49:049 (1,2) - add soft claps, imo.
    Two drum hits then the clap feels much more fitting for me.
    
12. 01:03:081 - 01:04:385 - 01:05:037 - etc. did you forget claps or leave them blank intended? I suggest adding claps back. It sounds strange now.
    Claps are placed on the blue tick before the offbeat. That's what I hear in the music.
    
13. 01:11:549 (1) - If you want to use a slowdown I suggest you use a different shape, like 01:13:505 (1) - . I fail to follow it on every try.
    I can see that but I can't create a better pattern. ;_;

Normal

1. 00:22:313 (1,2,3,4) - strange rhythm for me... I prefer this:
   
   
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   Cool fixed.

Easy

1. 00:37:802 (1,2,3) - slight spacing inconsistency.
   fixed
   
2. 00:49:538 (1) - move to x:468 y:102 so that the flow of 00:49:049 (4) - continues.
   it's fine xD

LunarSakuya wrote:

YEahAHaha
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Easy
00:35:193 (1,2) - Try 2 sliders instead a repeat slider & note. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032721 This creates some leniency for beginners since the single note out in the open might be hard to get due to the irregular rhythm. I've noticed many of your other single notes have sliders right next to them, acting as a visual aid for getting those notes. so that could be a guide
00:40:393 (1,2) - ^
In think it's a wonderful suggestion but I'd like to leave it this way because it would make the entire section just sliders and would break consistency with 00:44:306 (1). Also there is no way I could make the placements as good as they are now unless I remapped the sections around these parts.

00:49:538 (1) - YEeAHAHA
Makes transition into kiai unique I suppose. ;w;

00:50:843 (2) - Finish instead of whistle on the tail?
I think I'd rather keep the whistle if it's alright. It breaks the pattern of finishes which I like to transition into kiai, and I did so in the Insane.

Normal
00:23:943 (4) - i think soft Finish on tail would sound more appropriate than Drum
alright done in all diffs

00:53:614 (3,4) - Spacing, keep using 0.9x
woah, fixed

01:14:973 (2) - some hitsound on the head here, I hear cymbals in the bgm
fixed! in Insane also

Jonny is Insane
00:03:402 (4) - i think you meant to put the whistle on the head of this instead of on the previous note?
fixed upon permission

Insane
00:28:671 (5,1) - Try flipping these http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032804 Matches the dominating vocals better imo
Ah but the hit at 00:28:834 is very weak so I feel it's better to be on the end of the slider, just like at 00:26:063 (5). I'm mostly following percussion here because the vocals are just held notes and are not very interesting.

00:50:027 (2,4) - you could do the cool pattern again where each of these notes is slightly below the other, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032810
It's a good suggestion, but it's just that it would break spacing with 00:50:190 (3,1) unless I broke symmetry with 00:49:538 (1,3). I think returning to the same point on these hits is fine.

00:57:201 (6) - maybe move this down so 00:57:527 (1) - blankets it somehow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1032814 if you decide to apply it, just be mindful of it going offscreen ofc
I'll move it right a bit. My intention was not so much to make a blanket but to have the slider create a circle with the first curve of 00:57:527 (1) which I tried to make more obvious.

01:25:057 (3) - NC to indicate the speed/tone change if you like
I wanted to leave this one out to make all the combos here combos of 3. NC here breaks that pattern and doesn't seems as nice imo.

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