Hi~AnreFM
Again from my queue~
General
Rhythm in insane is a bit monotonous
kiai is too long,end at 01:23:552 is fine
in hard and easy,try to use more different patterns and rhythm to show the music.especially detail of the music
Lanturn's Normal
try to add more whistle,cllap only is boring
00:17:857 (6) - make it a 1/2 slider
00:24:047 (1) -
00:39:915 (1) -
these two are a bit ugly,make them like 00:50:824 (4) - or make them straight
Hard
00:12:420 (6) - this slider covers a loud drum,make it a 1/2 slider and a note or other patterns
00:35:452 (9) - repeat one time more and make it like this
01:02:849 miss sth here,I suggest you to use a kickslider here
01:10:783 add a note
01:42:604 (1) - remove nc or add nc on 01:44:505 (2) -
01:23:552 why not add some whistle after this
Progress
I don't like these triplets start at white tick especially there is no drum of triplets in the music.
triplets start at red tick is more awesome and playable
00:04:513 (7) - nc and 00:05:254 (1) - remove nc
00:08:466 (7) - nc and 00:09:208 (1) - remove nc
00:34:709 (4,5,6)-this stream is unecessary and you miss drum 00:35:824 here
00:52:932 because there is a drum here,so I suggest you to change 00:52:808 (3,4,5) - this pattern.
use the pattern I showed before,or repeater sliders or other 1/4 patterns.
00:54:915 ^ so stream like 00:55:039 (9,10,11) - is not so good,try this rhythm at 00:54:543
00:58:758 (9,10,11) - ^ listen to music carefully,pay attention to these detail than you can do more interesting rhythm and they fit the song because you just follow the drums
01:07:932 (2) - vocal start at blue tick,try to change this pattern?
01:43:433 (4) - nc here
imo you still need more working on rhythm,and patterns,try more different changable patterns, add yourself's understanding of the music and make the map more interesting,than show it to players,same problems as your first rank.
that's all
good luck!
Again from my queue~
General
Rhythm in insane is a bit monotonous
kiai is too long,end at 01:23:552 is fine
in hard and easy,try to use more different patterns and rhythm to show the music.especially detail of the music
Irre's Easy
some detail blanket problems should be paid more attention to
choice some intense parts and add 24 claps,don't use them the whole song.in other parts you can use clap one time each long white tick
finish attack is not a good idea,some of them are noisy.
in some parts try to decrease the volume
blanket problems:
00:36:940 (5,2) -
00:59:254 (2,1) -
01:13:634 (1,2) -
00:57:271 (3,1) -
unnecessary finish
00:24:047 (1) -
00:28:014 (1) -
00:33:965 (3) -
the beginning of the song is silence part these finish is noisy,try to add some soft whistle
00:39:915 (1) -
00:41:899 (1) -
00:53:800 (3) -
00:57:766 (1) -
01:01:734 (3) -
00:49:833 (1) - the finish on tail
00:51:320 (2) -
01:09:668 (3) -
01:17:602 (3) -
sth other:
00:34:957 (1,2,3) - this is a bit ugly imo try to make them more smooth
still there are some finishs I think they iare necessary but I think they are put reasonably
NC is used irregularly,try to use NC every 2 long white tick
also you should improve the arrangement,the diff looks not very pretty.
choice some intense parts and add 24 claps,don't use them the whole song.in other parts you can use clap one time each long white tick
finish attack is not a good idea,some of them are noisy.
in some parts try to decrease the volume
blanket problems:
00:36:940 (5,2) -
00:59:254 (2,1) -
01:13:634 (1,2) -
00:57:271 (3,1) -
unnecessary finish
00:24:047 (1) -
00:28:014 (1) -
00:33:965 (3) -
the beginning of the song is silence part these finish is noisy,try to add some soft whistle
00:39:915 (1) -
00:41:899 (1) -
00:53:800 (3) -
00:57:766 (1) -
01:01:734 (3) -
00:49:833 (1) - the finish on tail
00:51:320 (2) -
01:09:668 (3) -
01:17:602 (3) -
sth other:
00:34:957 (1,2,3) - this is a bit ugly imo try to make them more smooth
still there are some finishs I think they iare necessary but I think they are put reasonably
NC is used irregularly,try to use NC every 2 long white tick
also you should improve the arrangement,the diff looks not very pretty.
Lanturn's Normal
try to add more whistle,cllap only is boring
00:17:857 (6) - make it a 1/2 slider
00:24:047 (1) -
00:39:915 (1) -
these two are a bit ugly,make them like 00:50:824 (4) - or make them straight
Hard
00:12:420 (6) - this slider covers a loud drum,make it a 1/2 slider and a note or other patterns
00:35:452 (9) - repeat one time more and make it like this
01:02:849 miss sth here,I suggest you to use a kickslider here
01:10:783 add a note
01:42:604 (1) - remove nc or add nc on 01:44:505 (2) -
01:23:552 why not add some whistle after this
Progress
I don't like these triplets start at white tick especially there is no drum of triplets in the music.
triplets start at red tick is more awesome and playable
00:04:513 (7) - nc and 00:05:254 (1) - remove nc
00:08:466 (7) - nc and 00:09:208 (1) - remove nc
00:34:709 (4,5,6)-this stream is unecessary and you miss drum 00:35:824 here
00:52:932 because there is a drum here,so I suggest you to change 00:52:808 (3,4,5) - this pattern.
use the pattern I showed before,or repeater sliders or other 1/4 patterns.
00:54:915 ^ so stream like 00:55:039 (9,10,11) - is not so good,try this rhythm at 00:54:543
00:58:758 (9,10,11) - ^ listen to music carefully,pay attention to these detail than you can do more interesting rhythm and they fit the song because you just follow the drums
01:07:932 (2) - vocal start at blue tick,try to change this pattern?
01:43:433 (4) - nc here
imo you still need more working on rhythm,and patterns,try more different changable patterns, add yourself's understanding of the music and make the map more interesting,than show it to players,same problems as your first rank.
that's all
good luck!