Hi~
M4M from your queue
[General]
Shana ♥
[Timing]
01:08:538 - Suggest preview point here which exclude pre-chorus
[Normal]
00:09:670 (1) - Scale from 1.000 to 0.985 makes perfect symmetry (checked with ctrl+h >w<)
00:19:293 (1) - I would leave it blank until 00:20:425 - since auto can only do 4000 extra for easy, conflicting with a long spinner 00:01:180 (1) - makes it feel hard (optional)
00:35:142 (1,2,1) - Feels strange with the symmetry, 00:35:708 (2) - is leaving away to far from 00:35:142 (1) -
^ Add a note here 00:35:425 - and 00:35:991 - to make the rhythm and flow more smoother like 00:31:746 (1,2,3,4,1) -
00:51:840 (3,1) - Swap NC since it's not really heavy beat at 00:52:123 - (w/ extra finish)
00:57:783 (1) - Scale to 0.995
01:06:840 (1) - Vocal starts at 01:06:981 - (prefer to follow since it's very close to it)
01:07:972 (3) - Move to X:124 Y:100 to make it look same DS as 01:07:689 (2) - (which is 1.05 at KIAI)
01:08:538 (1) - Inconsistency DS (1.0x)
01:19:010 (1,2) - Feels not straight, move 01:19:293 (2) - a grid to right and down
01:23:821 (1) - Slight inconsistency DS
01:31:746 (2,3) - A grid to the right looks better for me
01:35:142 (3) - Slight inconsistency DS
01:50:991 (3) - ^ Not sure if it's a pattern for high vocal tho
02:07:972 (1) - Scale to 0.995
02:17:170 - Vocal starts here
02:35:991 (5) - Coo l pattern, looks hard x)
02:39:387 (1,2,3) - Hard to read for easy, (2) and (3) are close to the tail, flow starts at (3) looks better
02:50:425 (1) - Scale to 0.985
03:28:915 (4) - Inconsistency DS, no visible high vocal or cover
^ Can try a slider and a circle
03:31:462 (2) - If this pattern looks better, I think 1.10x DS for the whole diff would be more effective
03:51:557 (2) - Slight inconsistency DS
[Hard]
Sorry if I don't give positive or useful mods
The notes are so random x_x
00:05:708 (1) - Suggest a straight slider at right top mapping box OR a slider point from right top to left btm, which points at 00:07:972 (1) -
00:08:396 (2) - Move 1 grid up (Tiny grid)
00:20:708 - Suggest to start mapping here straightly without leaving break because 00:29:481 (1) - is mapped
00:30:472 (3,4,5) - Try something like this, fits the pattern better:
00:44:481 (5) - Ctrl+G suits better for the flow since 00:43:349 (2,3) - is following it
00:44:481 (5) - May try a better blanket too
00:53:255 (2,3,4) - Try something like this, cuz previous sliders are straight but ended up with a very curvy slider
00:58:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feels like extra, try just using 1/2 since this is not very Hard / Insane diff, try only cover visible drum hits
01:07:123 (5) - Remove clap
^ Clap at 01:06:981 - feels a lot better
01:09:529 (5) - Put circle at 01:09:387 - and 01:09:670 - to make the circle not too lonely XD
01:18:161 (6,7,8) - Can try this pattern, suits better for flow and the looking:
^ Slider is the rotation of 30* anti-clockwise of 01:17:453 (4) -
01:22:406 (2,3,4) - Try this pattern:
^ If following, tail of 01:22:830 (3) - should be stacked to 01:23:538 (1) - (or nearly stacked)
01:30:613 (5) - Scale to 1.002 for perfect symmetry
01:31:746 (6) - Scale to 0.982
02:22:689 - Put something here, there's a finish hitsound
02:29:340 - Missing vocal
02:30:472 - Finish in the music
03:26:934 (1) - Ctrl+G, fun!
03:29:481 (1,2,3,4) - Feels extra x_x
03:43:066 (5) - Move to X:493 Y:210 for better symmetry
04:01:179 (1,2,3,4) - omg
SatenGtg school...will continue modding on Insane after I'm back