xChippy wrote:

Yo~ =w=/
Woo lots of SP

• [Normal]

1. 00:12:001 (2) - Shouldn't the whistle be at the end of the slider instead of the on at the repeat o-o? Cuz your whistle pattern =w= 00:08:915 (1) - actually starting here the whistle patterns change, also i'd like some variety in the whistles too
2. 01:13:715 (2) - Ye you should curve it a bit more to improve this blanket :3 alright
3. 01:27:087 (1) - Wooo nazi distance here is a bit different (1.08) asfasdfasas damn it how did i do that
4. 02:21:944 (3) - Imo it's a little weird where this slider starts, err since it's starting at where the singer uuuh is taking breath. Well you have it at other places too but at those other places it has a instrument supporting it soo, maybe just add a circle here o-o? 02:22:287 for this one there is actually a secondary voice going "sha-la" in the background, in case u were using the jap version. If anyone else mentions this then i will swap the slider and note positions

• [Hard]
  Orz I seriously found nothing to point out here >< ><

• [Eternal]

1. Why not add a finish on those heads =w=? also applies for the other diffs if you add =w=: genious
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2. 00:12:001 (4) - Whistle on the end instead of the repeat same reasoning as in Normal :3 again, going for some variety and pattern change here (its hitsound copier really /me runs)
3. 00:23:315 (1,2) - Blanket is a little bit off :3 make it perfect =w=/ yes
4. 00:41:829 (1,2) - Same as above curve (2) the end a bit more for a perfect blanket =w= ~
5. 02:38:401 (5) - Try ctrl+G this one o-o plays better for me o-o but yea idk I'm noob player =w= well i think that is easier for players to get 100 on the slider since the tail will be facing away from 02:38:744 (6), so i'd like to keep this
6. 03:36:344 (5) - Same here ^ this one yeah plays better
7. 03:44:915 (1,3) - Curve (3) a little more for better blanket =w= moved it a bit back, blanket is now legit \o/

Orz srry for the short/nazi mod hope it was atleast a bit usefull =w=
As requested no star yayy

Moway wrote:

Hi~

[Normal]
Maybe consider halving the combos you do on this difficulty. It's a bit awkward to have just 2 objects per combo I guess. Not a big deal. i thought of that when i was mapping, but then i was like meh either way it works, newbies dont like big combos anyways. would change if i get other people to comment on this

01:04:115 (3) - I think moving this down and to the left provides better flow. sure, made a more oval flow here
01:07:544 (2) - nazi symmetry check here. fixed it
01:32:229 (2) - I think (443,78) provides a slightly better blanket alright
02:26:744 (1,2) - to me this doesn't flow particularly well or look particularly well. Maybe try something like this? http://puu.sh/4ra6X.jpg alright


[Hard]
HP+1? Would match your other difficulties better and I think there's enough being played throughout the difficulty where you don't need HP5. i would do it if the star rating wern't 4.74...trying to keep the 4 1/2 star display to differentiate from Eternity

00:37:201 (3) - Maybe remove the whistle from the start/end and add one to the repeat. To me it sounds too busy here with those two quick hitsounds. this is actually a direct copy from the insane, which i think conveys the piano pretty well
02:17:829 (4) - move down to (337,36) for perfect symmetry with 02:17:144 (3). uguu lol to be more safe i done it with copy paste + flip + reverse selection
02:48:344 (3,1) - nazi blanket fix yes
03:50:058 (3) - nazi symmetry police please dont arrest me sir


[Eternal]

00:01:201 (2,3) - nazi blanket fix how did i overlook this
01:42:172 (3,4) - I actually think that there's a better way for you to map this that fits what your general theme. Try this pattern instead. http://puu.sh/4raR0.jpg This way, you can put a jump to the 1/1 slider where the vocal and the drums are the strongest. I think it feels better this way and fits better with how you've been using jumps to 1/1 sliders for vocal emphasis. cool stuff
02:12:344 (1,2,3) - maybe too much of a jump here, there isn't much in the music to emphasize here. I suggest decreasing the spacing a bit. decreased spacing
02:47:144 (6,1) - I don't like how this feels as a stack. I prefer an unstack with a bigger jump to (1) than the spacing from 02:46:629 (5,6). Doing so will put a bigger emphasis on that vocal part on the downbeat which feels stronger to me. good idea
03:28:458 (1,3) - Don't really like this overlap because I think it can easily be avoided without affecting the flow here too badly, so I suggest fixing this. it was meant as some stack variety, but i guess ur not the only one that doesnt like it so changed
03:30:172 (6,7,1) - This jump could be bigger IMO. It's the big one before the final kiai, so it would be nice to have a bigger jump. i would have used a bigger ds, but i dont want to be too troll on dt ppl so i will keep this one (2.15x is already pretty big lol)
03:30:515 (1,2) - I would prefer for this to just be one slider. That would match the vocal line better and it would be more consistent with your overall theme in this map. the reason why i did this is because 03:30:858 (2,3) is mapped to the secondary vocals which is repeating the lyrics at 03:30:515 (1), and there is a vocal at 03:30:687 which i dont want to skip, hence i made this note thing. but i guess i can change it to a slider as compromise

That's all I've got. Sorry I don't have much more, but this song is really pretty and your mapping is beautiful and matches the music really perfectly. I would give you more stars but yeah. Good luck!

scanter wrote:

damn too pro =w= sry poor my efficiency.

Normal

1. 00:28:458 (2) - You can change this 1/1 repeated slider one or 1 slider and 1 circle one, following string sound much better imo :> 1 slider 1 note is good
   
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2. 01:13:715 (2) - Let's make it more perfect blanket with 01:12:687 (1) \:D/ it is good if move mid node to x:468, y:296. yep
3. 02:07:201 (2) - Change 1/1 rhythm something? same reason as 00:28:458 (2) this one i prefer to keep, since i have a nice blanketing slider here
   
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4. 02:17:144 - Add 1 circle and clap? trying to give a break for newbies and my star difficulty xD
5. 02:22:287 - Whistle?
6. 02:21:944 (3) - ^? i will do it on the end
7. 02:40:115 (2) - Change 1/1 slider one and 1 circle? before you did same rhythm at 01:11:658 here :3 ok
8. 03:07:887 (1,2,3) - If you want following vocals better, how about this rhythm? look at pink 1,2 well this part i actually want to keep a consistency with 03:05:829 (1,2,3), since i did that for every section that had the vocals like this
   
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Hard

1. 03:09:944 (1,2,3) - How about makes it symmetry? it has great symmetrical material =w= like 03:10:629 (2,4,5) i purposly did this so the rising vocal pitch can be portrayed, i.e. 03:10:972 (3) has a higher pitch than 03:09:944 (1), so its higher on the play field

Eternal

1. 01:18:515 (5) - How about this? it will be more playable lol i actually prefer the current rhythm, but for reading sake i moved the start of (5) furthur
   
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2. 02:05:829 - Clap? good catch
3. 02:51:429 (1) - Let's makes it more perfect blanket with 02:50:058 (3) w alright
4. 03:24:344 (1) - Ctrl + G for better flow and funny? i think that will make the spacing unnecessarily big, also the flow will kinda be disturbed since im doing more linear flow here

too nice map =w= I was learned simple shapes are the best quality about mapset again. GL anyway <3