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Yun Zhi Qi & Yin Lin - Jin Li Chao

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jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November-07-13 at 6:13:23 PM

Artist: Yun Zhi Qi & Yin Lin
Title: Jin Li Chao
Tags: 慕清明 mu qing ming 灰原穷 hui yuan qiong 弹棉花的GG tan mian hua de GG sherrie__fay
BPM: 175
Filesize: 11843kb
Play Time: 04:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Eternal (5 stars, 568 notes)
  2. Hard (4.74 stars, 438 notes)
  3. Normal (3.19 stars, 266 notes)
Download: Yun Zhi Qi & Yin Lin - Jin Li Chao
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Male vocal version for those that wants it
Awsomeeeee sb by sherrie__fay
Star Wars
1st: Breeze - 30 stars
2nd: CDFA - 25 Stars
3rd: LunarSakuya - 17 Stars
4th: dkun and Raose - 15 Stars
6th: Megurine Luka - 14 Stars
7th: Natsu - 13 Stars
8th: Byakugan249 - 12 Stars
9th: OniJAM and Autumn - 3 stars
11th: Konei and gokugohan12468 - 2 Stars
13th: Tie between Frostmourne, Nymph, Gero, Tsukuyomi, sjoy, Zero__wind, sheela901, [Minakami Yuki], scanter, Moway and Nyquill - 1 Star
Thank you for playing~
Last edited by jonathanlfj , edited 31 times in total.
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
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Frostmourne
pls
dkun
osu! Alumni
4,486 posts
Joined August 2009
dkun
plz
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
wut

EDIT: WTF GUYS STOP THE STAR SPAM
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
NEVERRRRRRRR
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
jonny this is called a contest
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
you're welcome :P
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
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jonathanlfj
wtfffffff
anyways thanks <333333
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Moway
i hope jonathan senpai notices me today
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
You guys thought you could beat me in a star spam

I could make this 100 but
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
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jonathanlfj
what the flying fk
Thanks CDFA <3

and thanks Moway dont worry i noticed you :3
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
5 cuz im poor T-T okay 100 sp im done here
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj
Thanks Natsu <3
someone kill me now

just to clarify i did not start this, it was all an evil plan to troll the fk out of me
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
*Give Star* I'm poor Sorry xD


=w= ahue! Plz

Btw Nice Map!
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj

Gero wrote:

*Give Star* I'm poor Sorry xD


=w= ahue! Plz

Btw Nice Map!
its ok, i rather have someone shoot 1 star than x number of star spams lol
Thanks for star and support~
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
awww, I only have 9 stars. You guys are so pro XD
UnitedWeSin
889 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
Dem stars. =w=
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
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jonathanlfj
star wars

i need mods though stars are so useless :/
Oyatsu
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Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
@@
Star beatmap. :o
Trust
1,240 posts
Joined March 2012
Trust
Oh hi

Mostly just placement and blanket suggestions here (as requested lol). Hopefully i'm not messing with your "natural flow" of course :)

Feel free to use any~

[Normal]
00:04:801 (1,2,3) - Inconsistency with distance snap here
00:36:687 (2) - Move down a grid as it makes perfect blanket
00:33:601 (1) - ^ to keep the slider head overlapped. (will cause minor spacing inconsistency between surrounding sliders but can be easily adjusted)
00:38:744 (2) - Nudge over to x:200 y:56 for less of a gap
01:09:601 (2,1) - Curve (2) slightly for a better blanket?
01:33:258 (1,2) - These could use a nicer blanket
01:40:458 (3) - Perhaps map a slider with the tail end overlapping the location of 01:43:544 (3) to bring out the use of symmetry here
02:03:087 (2) - This blanket would look better if you move the intermediate sliderpoint up slightly
02:07:201 (2,1) - Clean this one up :)
03:35:658 (2) - To the left one grid to make equal distance between the two sliders

[Hard]
01:55:886 (1) - Make a cleaner blanket?
02:34:629 (4,1) - Maybe do something like this:
collapsed text
03:09:944 (1,2,3) - Would look nice if this pattern was symmetrical

[Eternal]
  1. I know you're waiting on a SB. If this is of any concern, widescreen support is not toggled for only this difficulty
00:53:829 (5) - Questionable overlap (but probably intentional)
02:41:829 (3) - ^
03:49:714 (3) -
collapsed text

Sorry about not so much on Hard and Eternal. I hope some of this was useful~

I would star but you probably don't want :D
Megurine Luka
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Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
I should install my photoshop back and make you skins

OMG.
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj

Megurine Luka wrote:

I should install my photoshop back and make you skins

OMG.
Feel free to make it if you wish
also thanks for star spam ><

Trust wrote:

Oh hi

Mostly just placement and blanket suggestions here (as requested lol). Hopefully i'm not messing with your "natural flow" of course :)

Feel free to use any~

[Normal]
00:04:801 (1,2,3) - Inconsistency with distance snap here opps
00:36:687 (2) - Move down a grid as it makes perfect blanket did something else on the slider instead
00:33:601 (1) - ^ to keep the slider head overlapped. (will cause minor spacing inconsistency between surrounding sliders but can be easily adjusted) fixed by previous adjustments
00:38:744 (2) - Nudge over to x:200 y:56 for less of a gap ditched the grid, always get 1.12
01:09:601 (2,1) - Curve (2) slightly for a better blanket? good idea
01:33:258 (1,2) - These could use a nicer blanket ok
01:40:458 (3) - Perhaps map a slider with the tail end overlapping the location of 01:43:544 (3) to bring out the use of symmetry here true
02:03:087 (2) - This blanket would look better if you move the intermediate sliderpoint up slightly done
02:07:201 (2,1) - Clean this one up :) this was actually intentional, if you look closely i did a fair blanket on the whole 02:07:201 (2) with 02:08:229 (1)
03:35:658 (2) - To the left one grid to make equal distance between the two sliders im done with grid snap

[Hard]
01:55:886 (1) - Make a cleaner blanket? i swear this blanket is near perfect judging from the approach circle
02:34:629 (4,1) - Maybe do something like this: fineee
collapsed text
03:09:944 (1,2,3) - Would look nice if this pattern was symmetrical the sliders were put on different levels to mimic the rising pitch in the vocals

[Eternal]
  1. I know you're waiting on a SB. If this is of any concern, widescreen support is not toggled for only this difficulty i will keep this on hold since i dunno if the sb will be wide screen or not, will unify it when it arrives
00:53:829 (5) - Questionable overlap (but probably intentional) these were intentional, but i fixed the first one for more consistency with the second
02:41:829 (3) - ^
03:49:714 (3) -
collapsed text
niceee catch

Sorry about not so much on Hard and Eternal. I hope some of this was useful~

I would star but you probably don't want :D glad u didnt, save it for something better
Thanks for the mod <3
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
xChippy
Yo~ =w=/
Woo lots of SP :)
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:12:001 (2) - Shouldn't the whistle be at the end of the slider instead of the on at the repeat o-o? Cuz your whistle pattern =w=
  2. 01:13:715 (2) - Ye you should curve it a bit more to improve this blanket :3
  3. 01:27:087 (1) - Wooo nazi distance here is a bit different (1.08)
  4. 02:21:944 (3) - Imo it's a little weird where this slider starts, err since it's starting at where the singer uuuh is taking breath. Well you have it at other places too but at those other places it has a instrument supporting it soo, maybe just add a circle here o-o? 02:22:287
  • [Hard]
    Orz I seriously found nothing to point out here ><
  • [Eternal]
  1. Why not add a finish on those heads =w=? also applies for the other diffs if you add =w=:
    01:07:887 (2) -
    02:36:344 (2) -
  2. 00:12:001 (4) - Whistle on the end instead of the repeat same reasoning as in Normal :3
  3. 00:23:315 (1,2) - Blanket is a little bit off :3 make it perfect =w=/
  4. 00:41:829 (1,2) - Same as above curve (2) the end a bit more for a perfect blanket =w=
  5. 02:38:401 (5) - Try ctrl+G this one o-o plays better for me o-o but yea idk I'm noob player =w=
  6. 03:36:344 (5) - Same here ^
  7. 03:44:915 (1,3) - Curve (3) a little more for better blanket =w=
Orz srry for the short/nazi mod hope it was atleast a bit usefull =w=
As requested no star :P
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Moway
Hi~

[Normal]
Maybe consider halving the combos you do on this difficulty. It's a bit awkward to have just 2 objects per combo I guess. Not a big deal.

01:04:115 (3) - I think moving this down and to the left provides better flow.
01:07:544 (2) - nazi symmetry check here.
01:32:229 (2) - I think (443,78) provides a slightly better blanket
02:26:744 (1,2) - to me this doesn't flow particularly well or look particularly well. Maybe try something like this? http://puu.sh/4ra6X.jpg


[Hard]
HP+1? Would match your other difficulties better and I think there's enough being played throughout the difficulty where you don't need HP5.

00:37:201 (3) - Maybe remove the whistle from the start/end and add one to the repeat. To me it sounds too busy here with those two quick hitsounds.
02:17:829 (4) - move down to (337,36) for perfect symmetry with 02:17:144 (3). uguu
02:48:344 (3,1) - nazi blanket fix
03:50:058 (3) - nazi symmetry police


[Eternal]

00:01:201 (2,3) - nazi blanket fix
01:42:172 (3,4) - I actually think that there's a better way for you to map this that fits what your general theme. Try this pattern instead. http://puu.sh/4raR0.jpg This way, you can put a jump to the 1/1 slider where the vocal and the drums are the strongest. I think it feels better this way and fits better with how you've been using jumps to 1/1 sliders for vocal emphasis.
02:12:344 (1,2,3) - maybe too much of a jump here, there isn't much in the music to emphasize here. I suggest decreasing the spacing a bit.
02:47:144 (6,1) - I don't like how this feels as a stack. I prefer an unstack with a bigger jump to (1) than the spacing from 02:46:629 (5,6). Doing so will put a bigger emphasis on that vocal part on the downbeat which feels stronger to me.
03:28:458 (1,3) - Don't really like this overlap because I think it can easily be avoided without affecting the flow here too badly, so I suggest fixing this.
03:30:172 (6,7,1) - This jump could be bigger IMO. It's the big one before the final kiai, so it would be nice to have a bigger jump.
03:30:515 (1,2) - I would prefer for this to just be one slider. That would match the vocal line better and it would be more consistent with your overall theme in this map.

That's all I've got. Sorry I don't have much more, but this song is really pretty and your mapping is beautiful and matches the music really perfectly. I would give you more stars but yeah. Good luck!
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
damn too pro =w= sry poor my efficiency.

Normal

  1. 00:28:458 (2) - You can change this 1/1 repeated slider one or 1 slider and 1 circle one, following string sound much better imo :>
    SPOILER
  2. 01:13:715 (2) - Let's make it more perfect blanket with 01:12:687 (1) \:D/ it is good if move mid node to x:468, y:296.
  3. 02:07:201 (2) - Change 1/1 rhythm something? same reason as 00:28:458 (2)
    SPOILER
  4. 02:17:144 - Add 1 circle and clap?
  5. 02:22:287 - Whistle?
  6. 02:21:944 (3) - ^?
  7. 02:40:115 (2) - Change 1/1 slider one and 1 circle? before you did same rhythm at 01:11:658 here :3
  8. 03:07:887 (1,2,3) - If you want following vocals better, how about this rhythm? look at pink 1,2
    SPOILER

Hard

  1. 03:09:944 (1,2,3) - How about makes it symmetry? it has great symmetrical material =w= like 03:10:629 (2,4,5)

Eternal

  1. 01:18:515 (5) - How about this? it will be more playable lol
    SPOILER
  2. 02:05:829 - Clap?
  3. 02:51:429 (1) - Let's makes it more perfect blanket with 02:50:058 (3) w
  4. 03:24:344 (1) - Ctrl + G for better flow and funny?
too nice map =w= I was learned simple shapes are the best quality about mapset again. GL anyway <3
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