jonathanlfj wrote:

From my birthday queue~
this song brings back some k-on memories xD

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[Soar's Normal]
instead of using so many finishes on the 3rd white tick, how bout swap them for whistles instead? sounds a lot nicer imo O
00:14:761 (4,2) - use 3 point algorithm for these sliders, right now they look asymmetrical with the 4 point O
00:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap is a bit harder to read with this AR, suggest you to remove the stack or change the direction of the repeat on 00:22:710 (1) for less confusion O-change the direction
00:39:120 (1,2,3) - a triplet in Normal? not a good idea >< either delete 00:39:248 (2) or use a short slider for 00:39:120 (1,2)O - delete a note
01:08:095 (2) - missing a finish on the end O
01:09:889 (2,3,4) - again, prevent using 1/4 circles in a Normal diff O
01:14:505 (5) - break this up into 2 repeat sliders, its currently hard to predict how many repeats it has O
01:21:428 (4,1) - the spacing change here may cause some confusion especially since the AR is slow, use normal spacing or just a more distinguishable spacing O
01:25:274 (5) - finish on end, also no finish for 01:26:300 (1,4)? O
01:40:915 (1) - 03:02:710 (3) - this section seems to be a copy paste and flip of the first section, so all suggestions above applies to the same occurrences in this section O
03:08:864 (3) - add a finish since it is present in the music O
03:10:915 (3) - ^ O
03:12:966 (3) - ^ O
03:17:069 (5) - ^ O
03:19:377 (7) - should have a NC here to represent the start of vocal hold O
03:41:941 (1) - 04:14:505 (3) - this section is a mix of the second kiai and first kiai, so suggestions on the first kiai also applies here
I remap this part
04:19:633 (3) - add a finish O
04:20:659 (6,3) - ^ on start O
04:24:312 (2) - this should be snapped like this, but i actually suggest you just swap the whole thing for a spinner since this is a Normal diff:

SPOILER

O- add spin

Probably the longest mod i have written, though i have to say the maps are not bad, just need to get more consistency on hitsounding NC spacing and such
Good luck on ranking~

Thanks for modding

Sonnyc wrote:

Soar's Normal:

00:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - 좁은 공간에 오밀조밀 모여있어서 읽기 힘들거 같다는 개인적 의견입니다. O
00:23:992 (5) - 시작의 피니시 제거 O
00:29:120 (3) - 리버스의 클랩 제거 O
00:39:120 (1,2) - 헐 노말에서는 연타 쓰는게 아닙니다 O
01:04:761 (3) - 패턴상 피니시는 시작이 아닌 끝에 가야 하지만, 이왕이면 피니시는 소리나는 곳에만 넣는게 좋으실거 같아요 O
01:06:812 (3) - ^ O
01:08:095 (2) - 끝에 피니시 넣어주세요 O
01:09:889 (2,3) - 연타 out O
01:14:505 (5) - 잡기 어려운 엇박자니까 뉴콤 넣어주세요 O
01:17:325 (3,1) - 간격 바로잡아주세요. 노말에서 안티점프는 헷갈립니다. O
01:21:428 (4,1) - ^ O
01:26:300 (1) - 끝에 피니시 O
01:27:325 (4) - 피니시 O
01:29:633 (2,3) - (2)를 리버스 있는 3/4 슬라이더로 바꾸는게 음악에 더 잘 맞을거라고 생각합니다. 고민해봤는데 그냥놔두는게 좋은거 같습니다
복붙 부분 알아서 찾아주세요~ O
03:17:069 (5) - 피니시 O
03:19:377 (7) - 뉴콤 O
음 키아이 복붙도 알아서 공통되는거 고쳐주세요. 그나저나 두번이나 복붙하는건 좀 뭐하니 마지막 키아이 만큼은 새로 만드는게 나을거 같아요 O
03:52:197 (4) - 두번째 리버스 피니시 제거 O
04:07:325 (5) - 피니시 O
04:16:556 (1) - 끝의 피니시 제거 O
04:19:633 (3) - 피니시 O
04:20:659 (6) - 시작에 피니시 O
04:22:710 (3) - ^ O
04:23:992 (1) - 피니시 제거 O
04:25:530 - 노트 대신 스핀 넣는게 나을듯 합니다. O

좀 노말 치곤 어려워 보이네요 공감하긴하는데 노트빼기가 뭐해서 ar 하고 od 1씩낮췄습니다

모딩해주셔서 감사합니다

Startrick wrote:

Azmato님이랑 M4M으로 왔는데 경험이 없어서...

[Sakura]
03:21:556 부터 03:23:479 까지 스피너 넣으시는건 어때요?

ㅠㅠ 잡을게 있는지 모르겠어요... 일단 스타 드릴게요~
꼭 랭크 되시길!

HabiHolic wrote:

mp3 파일 못구하시겠으면

밑에꺼쓰세요 192 비트레이트로 변환했어요~

http://puu.sh/44rgo.mp3

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey Senbonzakura! I promised you I'd mod this, so when you're done remapping your Insane, feel free to ask for a mod again.^^

1. Your hitnormal2 is completely silenced, and you use it at some parts in the insane for triplets making notes completely inaudible. I suggest that you delete the hitnormal2, and instead try to use the default soft hit sound that the spots where you wanted to use it. You'll have to change you normal-hitclap2 over to the soft sampleset.

1. Check AIMod, there are some unsnapped sliders that you need to fix. You'll have to remake the sliders to fix them.
   
2. 00:06:556 (3,4) - A finish on the head of the 3 and the repeat of the 4 is nice to follow the music.
   
3. 00:07:838 (5,6,1) - You can make a better pattern if you center the 1 on the grid and have the 5 overlapped with its tail, and the 6 below it in the center of the grid. That way the 1 will flow back into where the 5 was. Here's the idea:
   
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4. 00:08:351 (7) - Try a NC here to show the change in slider velocity a little better.
   
5. 00:28:864 (1,2) - Placements feel too random. Try ctrl+G on the 1 and making a placement similar to the 00:27:069 (1,2) where sliders reflect each other. Copy the 00:28:864 (1) and paste if over on the other side, maybe have it blanket the 00:30:402 (4) is nice. Example:
   
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6. 00:31:171 (5) - Try ctrl+G on this slider then place it more to the right. Also I suggest put NC on this slider and now on 00:31:684 (1). I don't like the current placement, the flow is awkward. Here's what I mean:
   
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7. 00:47:710 (2) - Try triplet feels really overmapped. I recommend try a different rhythm here. Follow vocals by putting something to hit at 00:47:582. Delete 00:47:325 (1,2) and move the 00:47:838 (3) left 1/2
   
   
8. 00:58:351 (4) - Try making it a 1/2 slider instead flowing into the 00:58:864 (5,6,7) triplet. The pause doesn't fit the music well.
   
   
9. 01:03:992 (4,6) - Looks a bit messy imo. Try having the sliders reflect perfectly.
   
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10. 01:13:992 (1,3) - I suggest for readability and to follow the music better, switch these NC's here. NC is better on the 01:14:505 (3) to start the large jumping pattern.
    
11. 01:17:325 (3) - Remove finish from the head, I figure it's a mistake here.
    
12. 01:21:428 (4,5,6) - It looks very sloppy because the 6 has less of a curve than the 4. When making a blanket pattern like this, it's nicer to make the sliders the same and to place the 5 perfectly in the center. Here's an example:
    
    
    You can use the approach circle from the 5 to make sure it's right.
13. 01:28:608 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Listen to the music more closely here. You can make this play better if you match your rhythms to the music. The triplet is actually at 01:29:377 in the music, so I suggest rearranging this part like so:
    
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    The gap at 01:30:915 feels nicer and fits the music well.
14. 01:30:146 (7) - Missing clap here.
    
15. 01:32:710 (3) - It's really strange that you have this slider following the melody in the new phrase, but then you start the break after it. I suggest delete this slider here and add a circle at 01:32:710 then start the break right after it. Like this:
    
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    Don't forget to add a finish to the 3.
16. 01:49:120 (6) - Try to place it blanketing the 01:47:838 (3) instead of overlapping it.
    
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17. 01:52:966 (4,5) - Stack the 5 better under the 4's tail, it's really noticeable.
    
18. 01:55:530 (1,2,3,4) - Make it so this is perfectly centered and symmetrical on the axis. That way you won't have overlap on the 01:56:556 (5,6,1).
    
19. 01:56:556 (5,6,1) - I'd like it if you removed the 1 from this stack. It's nicer to have movement to the 1 when the vocals start again.
    
20. 01:59:889 (3) - Hidden slider repeat here, you'll have to spacing the sliders apart more so that the repeat is clearly visable.
    
21. 02:32:197 (5) - Try moving it upwards to avoid the overlap. It's a nicer pattern:
    
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22. 02:46:556 (1,2,3) - Space them more, it will have nicer flow and you can place the 2 more centered.
    
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23. 02:48:607 (5,6,7) - This is the pattern you want here.^^
    
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24. 03:14:248 (1,2,3,4) - The extended sliders feel pretty overmapped and awkward to me. I suggest to shorten them to end properly in 1/2. It feels nicer with the music.
    
25. 03:41:941 (6) - NC missing? Check the combos in the last kiai, they are way different and more frequent than the other kiais.
    
26. 03:42:710 (7) - Sloppy placement. Place it at (236,360) in a blanket with the 6.
    
27. 04:20:145 (1,3) - Switch the NC's here. NC on the 3 is better to show the change in SV.
    
28. 04:22:966 (1) - It's a bug here. Add a NC to the spinner. Spinners must have a NC on them.

1. Tons of minor spacing inconsistencies in this diff. It doesn't effect play much, but when you switch from 1.0 spacing to .92 or 1.06, your map can start to look really sloppy. That's what is happening here. I suggest to go through and snap notes along the grid in consistent spacing.
   
2. 00:45:274 (3) - Since the vocals hold here, I prefer that you make this a 1/1 slider. The pause feels a bit strange with the music.
   
3. 00:36:043 (2,3) - Flow is a bit awkward there imo. Try to place the 3 more below the pattern so that flow doesn't suddenly cut to the left.
   
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4. 00:37:325 (1,2) - Copy the 1 a flip it over to make it the same slider as the 2. You'll have a nicer pattern. When you place all of your sliders from scratch like you've done here, it can start to look really sloppy. Try it:
   
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5. 00:54:761 (3,4) - You can try giving the 3 less of a curve and having it blanket the 4. It might have a nicer flow here. Here's what I mean:
   
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6. 01:19:377 (3) - Finish on the end.
   
7. 01:27:838 (5,6,7,1) - Try having two stacks here instead of all in one. Stack the 5 and 6, then have movement to the 7 and 1 stacked. That way you'll have movement when the vocals start again.
   
8. 01:42:966 (1,2) - Try to move it slightly to the left to avoid overlapping the slider bodies.
   
9. 02:53:479 (6) - The slider with multiple repeats doesn't fit here. Try to remove the repeats and have a circle at 02:53:992 and 02:54:248 to hit aong with the loud claps in the music.

1. For a better spread try HP drain - 1 and OD +1
   
2. 00:07:838 (2) - I suggest remove the finish from the repeat here. Have two finishes is too much, you only need the one on the end.
   
3. The patterns in this diff are far too straight and bland. The flow is not very nice for this soft song. Patterns like 00:31:171 (1,2) or 00:36:812 (2,3) or 00:39:377 (2,3,4,5) are confusing because of the overlap and do not fit well in a Normal diff imo. I recommend learning to use curves to make beautiful placements and nice flow, especially in a nice song like this.
   
4. You've copied entire sections and pasted them later in the map. I don't recommend doing this...I suggest that you remap these sections.

1. 00:06:556 (4) - Try a finish on the head here, seems nice.
   
2. 00:14:761 (5,6,1) - The reason I don't like this is because it's essentially the same placement as 00:10:659 (1,2,3) so it feels quite boring. The player repeats the same motion twice. I don't think a beginner will enjoy that much, try changing the placement the second time around here.
   
3. 01:01:941 (2) - Really funky slider. =w= Sliders like this are best when they represent an idea in the song. There is no unique thing in the music for slider to represent, so it seems a little awkward.
   
4. 01:09:120 (4) - You can move the slider left 1/2 and extend it by 1/2 to follow the vocals better. Then you could have a finish on the head of the slider. You could then repeat the same rhythm at 01:11:171 (2,3) which would be nice. Try it out:
   
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5. 01:11:171 (2) - I'd remove the finish here. It sounds awkward because it comes after the finish in the music.
   
6. 01:14:248 (1,2) - Switch the NC's here seems much nicer to follow the music.
   
7. 01:16:300 (2) - Finish missing on the head I suppose.
   
8. 01:20:402 (6,1) - Switch NC's, same reason as 01:14:248 (1,2).
   
9. 01:24:505 (4) - Try a NC to show the change in music here.
   
10. 01:40:915 to 02:02:454 - For 20 seconds here you repeat the same rhythm over and over again. Try to add variations which can follow the vocals and other changes in the song. It will make your map feel much nicer. For example, you could change 01:47:069 (1) into a 1/1 slider with a repeat to follow the vocals. Also some missing claps in this sections, check it please.
    
11. 03:41:941 - Since you copied this section from earlier in the map, I recommend remapping it to make it unique. It will make your map much more interesting.

MineC24 wrote:

Modding~ (Taiko, Insane diff only)

Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii

LetterBox During breake : no check - done

00:17:325 (3) - imo, kat - I'll keep this don. I din't map here with vocal's pitch here and d also play fine imo
00:33:992 (3) - kat - sounds random with the kat...
01:47:838 (3) - don - okay. and changed the color arrange here
01:59:889 (4,1) - don - already.
02:23:736 (3) - imo, don - nice
03:08:351 (1) - kat - ok
04:01:941 (1) - remove finish - nope, the mood is very similar to 02:50:146 (1,1) - and they are with finish, so it's ok with this

Naryuga's Taiko Oni

LetterBox During breake : no check

00:09:633 (5) - remove this - ok
00:39:120 (1) - imo, kat - no
00:58:351 (1) - remove finish - I want follow the cymbal... ;w;
01:35:530 (2) - don - ok
01:39:889 (5) - remove this - done as well as the before
02:36:300 (1) - don - kat plays well enough and 02:32:197 (1) - does so
02:40:274 - imo, add don and 02:40:402 (4) - remove finish and kat - let me try this... will change with one more person's opinion though

GL

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Cool, since this is the oldest request that I have, I'll go ahead and mod now like I promised. :>

[Hard]

1. Tons of minor spacing inconsistencies in this diff. It doesn't effect play much, but when you switch from 1.0 spacing to .92 or 1.06, your map can start to look really sloppy. That's what is happening here. I suggest to go through and snap notes along the grid in consistent spacing.
   
2. 00:45:274 (3) - Since the vocals hold here, I prefer that you make this a 1/1 slider. The pause feels a bit strange with the music.
   
3. 00:36:043 (2,3) - Flow is a bit awkward there imo. Try to place the 3 more below the pattern so that flow doesn't suddenly cut to the left.
   
   Image

   
4. 00:37:325 (1,2) - Copy the 1 a flip it over to make it the same slider as the 2. You'll have a nicer pattern. When you place all of your sliders from scratch like you've done here, it can start to look really sloppy. Try it:
   
   Image

   
5. 00:54:761 (3,4) - You can try giving the 3 less of a curve and having it blanket the 4. It might have a nicer flow here. Here's what I mean:
   
   Image

   
6. 01:19:377 (3) - Finish on the end.
   
7. 01:27:838 (5,6,7,1) - Try having two stacks here instead of all in one. Stack the 5 and 6, then have movement to the 7 and 1 stacked. That way you'll have movement when the vocals start again.
   
8. 01:42:966 (1,2) - Try to move it slightly to the left to avoid overlapping the slider bodies.
   
9. 02:53:479 (6) - The slider with multiple repeats doesn't fit here. Try to remove the repeats and have a circle at 02:53:992 and 02:54:248 to hit aong with the loud claps in the music.

Placements need some work imo.

All applied


Well that's all for now. I like your Insane diff, I see a lot of good potential, but you need to find more modding. Get some mods in here, read them carefully, and try to work more on your placements and flow in each diff.^^
See ya~

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi Random Modding :3

[Soar's Normal]

사용하신 스페이싱 거리들이 난잡하고, 일반 노말유저들이 플레이하기에는 어려운 난이도입니다.
Easy와 난이도차이가 있고 또한 느린연타까지 포함되어있으며, AR 과 OD를 약 1~2가량 올리면 Hard라고도 볼 수있을정도의
난이도라고 생각할수있습니다. 위에 Sonnyc님이 언급하신 것처럼 이것은 노말이라고 생각하기엔 너무 어려운 난이도입니다,
또 BAT 과 어느정도 수준있는 모더가 와서 모딩을 했을때 "이 난이도는 노말이라고 하기엔 너무어렵다"라고 언급할 가능성이 매우 높습니다.

00:31:171 (1,2) 동선으로 봐도 좋지 않은 패턴이고 또 1번슬라가 2번 노트를 가리면서 1번 노트를 치는도중
2번노트를 쳐서 틀릴 가능성이 있습니다, 그리고 이 패턴은 언랭요소 이므로 다른 패턴으로 수정하셔야합니다. O
00:37:235 (2,3,4) 이것도 언랭커블입니다, 노트들끼리 겹치면서 슬라이더 경로를 방해하고, 2번슬라가 3번슬라와 겹치면서
2번 슬라이더를 치는도중 3번슬라이더를 건드려서 틀릴가능성이있고, 또한 4번슬라이더 끝을 가리면서 경로를 방해할 가능성 이 있습니다.
이것도 다른패턴으로 수정하셔야합니다. O
00:39:377 (2,3,4,5,6) 하드에서 나올법한 패턴이네요, 하지만 이 패턴들은 일반적인 노말유저들이 플레이 할때, 어려운 패턴입니다.
슬라이더 끼리 겹치면서 패턴을 읽기에 어렵고, AR이 높은편이 아니라서 많은 미스를 낼 가능성이 높습니다, 이것은 언랭커블이 아니지만
다른 패턴으로 바꿀 필요가 있습니다. O
01:14:505 (1,2) 1번 슬라이더와 2번슬라이더가 겹치면서 박자를 읽을떄 노말유저들이 혼란스러울 수 있습니다,
슬라이더 두개를 떨어뜨려 놓아주세요 O

P.S 이 난이도는.. 첫번째 두번쨰 세번째 전부 복붙하고 위치만 바꾸셨네요, 복사붙여넣기 보단 좀더 다양한 패턴을 사용하시면서,
다양한 박자를 찍으시면 좀더 좋은 노말 난이도가 될것같습니다만.. 이것도 스타일상 문제니, 크게 언급하진 않겠습니다.

이 맵은 랭크시키기엔 많이 부족합니다, 부분부분 리매핑해야할 부분도 많이 있구요.
또한, 아직은 스페이싱과, 언랭커블이 너무 많습니다, 특히 노말과 하드에...
매핑하신분들이 아직 경험이 적고 맵을 어느정도 만들어본사람들이 아니기때문에, 맵을 만들때, 많은 생각을 가지고 매핑을 하시면서
랭크에 한걸음씩 다가갔으면 좋겠습니다.
Good Luck :3

모딩해주셔서 감사합니다

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Cool, since this is the oldest request that I have, I'll go ahead and mod now like I promised. :>

[Normal]

1. For a better spread try HP drain - 1 and OD +1 It will be hard if I increase OD, so I decrease HP only
   
2. 00:07:838 (2) - I suggest remove the finish from the repeat here. Have two finishes is too much, you only need the one on the end. O
   
3. The patterns in this diff are far too straight and bland. The flow is not very nice for this soft song. Patterns like 00:31:171 (1,2) or 00:36:812 (2,3) or 00:39:377 (2,3,4,5) are confusing because of the overlap and do not fit well in a Normal diff imo. I recommend learning to use curves to make beautiful placements and nice flow, especially in a nice song like this. O
   
4. You've copied entire sections and pasted them later in the map. I don't recommend doing this...I suggest that you remap these sections.O

Well that's all for now. I like your Insane diff, I see a lot of good potential, but you need to find more modding. Get some mods in here, read them carefully, and try to work more on your placements and flow in each diff.^^
See ya~

Thanks for modding

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VII (Mappers with Ranked Maps)

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

*No complaints on general.

[Soar's Normal]
00:31:941 (2) - This overlap is a bit harder to a Normal diff... but surely will hurt spacing. Unless you curve 00:31:171 (1) making a blanket with the head of the slider 00:32:197 (3) - and then stack 00:31:941 (2) with the header of slider 00:32:197 (3). In a picture, something like this >> http://puu.sh/47HPS.jpg
* 00:39:377 (2,3,4,5,6) - Feels nice and neat imho
01:45:018 (4,2) - Some special reason (beyond the horizontal symmetry) to these sliders are curved this way? If no, try make something like this >> http://puu.sh/47I6c.jpg << flow feels better
02:02:197 (2) - You can apply the same I told for 00:31:941 (2) above.

That's all (:

Good luck on get the map ranked soon !!!

Att.

Oh god...I already fix the map Sorry that I was late

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VII (Mappers with Ranked Maps)

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

[notice]*No complaints on general.



[Azmato's Hard]
02:38:095 (5,1) - Try reducing a bit this jump.
02:51:684 (3,4,5) - You can do it better. Example >> http://puu.sh/47Jfl.jpg << and... If you canged this, make (6) like http://puu.sh/47Jh3.jpg
03:59:377 (3) - Try a smoother transition flow here, making it a slight wave like >> http://puu.sh/47Jtj.jpg

All Applied

That's all (:

Good luck on get the map ranked soon !!!

Att.

1. looks fine. taiko譜面としては完成されている(気がした)のでほぼ蛇足になります。

1. 00:14:761 (2) - k
   00:15:274 (1) - d k
2. 00:19:633 (3) - k
3. 00:20:787 - dk
   00:37:197 (2) - ^
   01:51:043 - ^
4. 01:08:095 (1) - finisher... と思ったのですが
   01:10:146 (3) - となるとここにも欲しくなるのでいらないかも知れません。
   02:38:351 - と思ったら！ここらへんはfinisher置いてたのでやっぱり置くか外すかで統一してみては…
5. 02:41:428 - 2連符がぎこちないので忙しくはなりますがノーツを置いた方が…？
6. 02:45:018 (2) - finisher
7. 02:53:992 (1) - スネアの音はここにあるのですが変えなくても問題無いです。
8. 03:00:530 - dkkd ?
9. 03:03:992 - ドラムの音が強いのでここから ddkkk みたいなの置いても良いと思います。
10. 03:13:736 (1) - finisher ?
11. 03:40:402 (2,3) - 3連符の頭2つ左にずらした方が音としては良い気がします。
12. 04:12:197 - add d ?

1. 00:42:707 - add d
   00:43:095 (2,3) - del
2. 02:12:966 - add d ? (bpm遅いのでなんとかなる範囲だとは思いますが…)

ts8zs wrote:

04:22:484 - add a BPM116 here?
[Hakura]
skip ._.

[Easy]
This map needs more blanket._.
1/2 is too hard for easy as my opinion
sry for a poor mod._.

kg2161012 wrote:

Request from PM.

All of mods are just suggestion.

[Naryuga's Muzukashii]
00:57:838 (1) - D
00:58:864 (1) - K - both no. I want finishes with the cymbal sounds like 00:58:351 (2) - and 00:59:377 (2) - , not (1).
01:28:479 - add a d - why? ._. I feel it is a bit overmapping
01:30:659 (1) - D - As I mentioned before, I put finish on 01:31:171 (2) - but didn't here because at 01:31:171 - there is strong cymbal sound but at 01:30:659 - there is not.
02:19:889 (1) - D - I don't catch the reason so keep this... No special big sound here.
02:20:402 (2) - K - k instead... Here it is not the big notes' feeling imo Changed some pattern but without big notes.
02:20:659 (1) - delete
02:20:915 (1) - D
02:27:710 - add a k - just overmapping...?
02:28:607 (2) - D - no. Maybe you are thinking I should be consistent with 00:58:351 (2) - , but here it doesn't have any big cymbal sound so I'll keep it small.
02:28:607 (2) - add a k - o.o ...?
02:37:710 - add a d - no ._.
02:45:659 - add a d - sorry but I'd rather emphasize the vocal than the other stuff... Anyways there is not even some drums so I'll keep ._.
03:00:915 (1) - D - I mentioned before
03:45:402 - add a d - no
03:49:761 - add a k - no
04:01:941 (1) - k - I want finishes with the big cymbal like here so I'll keep this
04:12:710 (1) - D - not so.

[Naryuga's Oni]
00:53:095 - add a d - sorry but no ._.
00:56:812 (1) - K - no
00:57:838 (1) - D - As I mentioned on [Muzu] I don't want big notes without some big things.
01:08:095 (1) - D - sure I actually forget this o.o
01:30:659 (2) - D - no
01:32:069 (1) - d - k plays fine
01:32:454 (1) - k - if the other modder mention this with ^ I'll change but not now
02:01:300 - add a d - no
02:27:069 (1) - D - no
03:00:915 (2) - D - no
03:45:530 (3) - k - changed 03:45:402 - into kat instead

いい譜面ですね! - thx!

Good Luck

TKSalt wrote:

taikomod from Senbonzakura's reqs.
and, hi Narunya. - Narunya is a pro player but an important thing I'm not him I'm Naryuga.

1. looks fine. taiko譜面としては完成されている(気がした)のでほぼ蛇足になります。

[Oni]

1. 00:14:761 (2) - k
   00:15:274 (1) - d k - both done じぶんでも00:15:274 (1,1) - がなんでkdだったのかわからない
2. 00:19:633 (3) - k - ok
3. 00:20:787 - dk - no, 00:18:864 (1,2) - と同じように 00:20:915 (1,2) - をd dにして少しボーカルよりの音取りにしたいなと思いました、あとふたつも同じ
   00:37:197 (2) - ^
   01:51:043 - ^
4. 01:08:095 (1) - finisher... と思ったのですが
   01:10:146 (3) - となるとここにも欲しくなるのでいらないかも知れません。
   02:38:351 - と思ったら！ここらへんはfinisher置いてたのでやっぱり置くか外すかで統一してみては… - 正直悩みましたがfinishつける方向に統一しました
5. 02:41:428 - 2連符がぎこちないので忙しくはなりますがノーツを置いた方が…？ - いっそのこと2連打消してパターン変更してみました
6. 02:45:018 (2) - finisher - あれなんで?って思ったのですが前半kiaiの同じところでよくわからないfinishがついてたのでそっちをはずして整えました
7. 02:53:992 (1) - スネアの音はここにあるのですが変えなくても問題無いです。 - 変えました
8. 03:00:530 - dkkd ? - ok added kat on 03:00:787 -
9. 03:03:992 - ドラムの音が強いのでここから ddkkk みたいなの置いても良いと思います。 - たしかに
10. 03:13:736 (1) - finisher ? - no, finisherはボーカルよりもシンバル音を優先して置こうって思ってます
11. 03:40:402 (2,3) - 3連符の頭2つ左にずらした方が音としては良い気がします。 - ok
12. 04:12:197 - add d ? - 一応このままで.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:42:707 - add d
   00:43:095 (2,3) - del - このふたつの3連打の配置が正直微妙だったのもありパターンいじりました…がボーカル寄りにしたのと、00:43:095 (2,3) - は無視するのが勿体ないくらいにかっこいいので消さないでおきました
2. 02:12:966 - add d ? (bpm遅いのでなんとかなる範囲だとは思いますが…) かわりに02:12:454 - におきました、ボーカル寄りに。

good luck

ts8zs wrote:

[Soar's Normal]
00:14:761 (4) - How old is this map?add another point or drag a new one ._. example by me→ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/945633
I really want! but I wonder the distance
00:39:377 (2,3,4,5) - too solid O
um....if you choose a low sv,please make them in a row→ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/945649 O
04:14:505 (3) - ._. o.o? looks fine

Thanks for modding

• 
  I think fine

1. 01:08:095 (3) - NC
2. 01:10:146 (1) - remove NC
3. 01:12:197 (3) - NC
4. 01:51:171 (5) - 1grid up more blanket
5. 02:56:812 (3) - finish at begin
6. 04:06:557 (4) - NC
7. 04:14:889 - KIAI TIME end at 04:14:761 -

1. 01:11:941 (1) - remove finish at begin and add finish at end
2. 01:12:966 (2,3) - x:316 y:84
3. 01:51:171 (1) - I think Slider end at 01:51:684 -
4. 01:51:941 (2) - I think Slider end at 01:52:454 -
5. 02:38:864 (3) - remove finish at begin and add finish at end
6. 02:40:402 (2) - add finish at begin(02:40:402 - )
7. 02:54:761 (2) - finish
8. 03:50:659 (3) - add finish at end
9. 03:56:556 (5) - NC
10. 03:57:325 (8) - finish at end
11. 04:19:633 (3) - finish

1. 00:07:325 (4) - finish
2. 00:41:941 (3) - ^
3. 00:44:505 (1,2) - Maybe something like that?
   
   idea

   
4. 00:58:864 (2) - finish at end
5. 03:49:120 (7) - Ctrl+G?
6. 04:01:428 (7) - add finish at end

1. 00:40:915 (7,8,9) - 1grid left
2. 01:15:787 (6,7,8,9,1) - (6~9)までSpacingが0.77xで綺麗に揃っているので9→1も0.77で揃えたほうがいいと思います。
3. 01:17:325 (3) - remove finish at begin
4. 01:19:377 (8) - finish at end
5. 01:25:274 (4) - BackにCymbalsの音があるのでVolume45%ぐらいでadd finish at begin
6. 01:27:325 (6) - ^
7. 01:53:479 (5) - 01:52:966 (4) - と間隔が近いので見にくく感じました。移動したほうがいいとおもいます。
8. 02:25:787 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1grid right
9. 02:28:095 (1) - 1grid left
10. 02:28:351 (2,3,4) - 1grid right
11. 02:29:633 (8) - 02:29:120 (5) - をCopyしてCtrl+H
12. 02:40:402 (3) - finish
13. 02:54:762 (1) - ^
14. 02:56:812 (3) - ^
15. 03:16:300 (6) - ^
16. 04:08:351 (1) - add finish at reverse
17. 04:09:377 (3) - finish at begin
18. 04:19:377 (4) - finish at reverse
19. 04:20:658 (1) - finish at begin
20. 04:22:710 (4) - add finish
21. 04:22:966 (1) - ^

litoluna wrote:

hi~
thanks mod req!

[Soar's Normal]

1. 01:11:941 (1) - remove finish at begin and add finish at end O
2. 01:12:966 (2,3) - x:316 y:84 ? O
3. 01:51:171 (1) - I think Slider end at 01:51:684 - I think it's fine
4. 01:51:941 (2) - I think Slider end at 01:52:454 - I think it's fine
5. 02:38:864 (3) - remove finish at begin and add finish at end O
6. 02:40:402 (2) - add finish at begin(02:40:402 - ) O
7. 02:54:761 (2) - finish O
8. 03:50:659 (3) - add finish at end O
9. 03:56:556 (5) - NC O
10. 03:57:325 (8) - finish at end O
11. 04:19:633 (3) - finish O

nice song HTT ♪
Good Luck

Thanks For Modding

Lirami wrote:

ND JCLT
Write with Korean

Soar's Normal

전체적으로 노트가 좁은공간에 서로 붙어있어 노트리딩이 힘든거같습니다.
또한 히트사운드가 조금 과도하게 사용되지 않았나 싶습니다.
다시 히트사운드를 빼고 들어보니 원곡의 드럼에 맞춰서 히트사운드를 넣으신것 같은데 그 히트사운드를 넣은 부분만 살짝 음량을 조절한다거나 하는 방식으로 맞춰주시는게 좋을것 같습니다. Finish음량이 너무 큰 탓에 시끄럽다고 여겨져서 과도하게 사용된것처럼 생각하게 된것 같습니다. 또한 히트사운드는 개인마다 전부 의견이 다르니 이에 관한 모딩은 마음에 들지 않으시면 반영하지 않으셔도 됩니다. O

00:16:812 (2) - Finish 제거 O
00:22:710 (1,2,3,4,5) - 노멀 난이도를 주로 하는 실력의 플레이어라면 노트리딩이 힘들 수 있습니다. 다른 패턴은 어떨까요?
노말난이도라기엔 벌써망한삘이.. 그대로 가는게 더 나을거같습니다
01:11:941 (1) - Finish 제거 O
01:13:223 (3) - Whistle 슬라이더 끝노트 제거 O
01:32:454 (3) - ^ 노래 1절이 끝나는 지점이기에 다른부분처럼 Clap을 넣는건 어떨까요? O
01:51:941 (2) - Whistle 제거 O
01:56:812 (3) - Finish 제거 O
02:01:428 (7) - NC, 01:57:325 (1,2,1) - 이부분에서 NC를 줬기 때문에 동일하게 맞춰주는게 좋다고 생각됩니다. O
02:38:864 (3) - Finish 제거, 연속으로 두번 들어가 시끄러운 느낌을 주는것 뿐만 아니라 보컬을 묻히게 하는것 같습니다. O
03:56:556 (5) - NC O
03:56:556 (5,6,7,8) - 스택을 피해주시는게 좋을꺼 같습니다. 테스트몇번을해봤는데 어색하다거나 그런게 딱히없더군요
04:06:300 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

Yeah! Romania!

모딩해주셔서 감사합니다

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ Senbonzakura

[Easy]

02:17:325 (5) - 뉴 콤보 해제

[Soar's Normal]

01:50:659 (5) - Add to Circle

잠시만요 롤좀하고 마저 모딩해드릴꺠요 ㄱㄷㄱㄷ

• HP - 1
  
  00:19:633 (2) - 완전히 겹쳐주시거나 아니면 떨어트려 주시는게 좋다고 생각되네요 .. O
  
  01:08:864 (2) - 이거 띄워주시는게 좋다고보는데..O
  
  01:57:069 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제O
  
  01:57:325 (4) - 그후 뉴콤보O
  
  02:33:479 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제O
  
  02:54:248 (8) - 여기 클렙 빠진것 같네요 'ㅂ'...O
  
  03:09:633 (7) - 띄워주시는게 ..O
  
  03:12:710 (6) - 이것도O
  
  03:23:479 (1) - 양쪽 타이밍선에 있는 키아이포인트 뺴주세요 '_' ..O
  
  전 인센 모딩을 왠만해선 하지않습니다.. 그런고로 패스 ...

• 00:10:659 (1) - 클랩을 제거하고 시작부분에는 피니쉬를 넣고 끝부분에는 클랩을 넣을것 X
  00:14:761 (1) - ^ X 앞뒤가 안맞게되네요,.

P A N wrote:

[Azmato's Hard]

00:38:095 (1) - why NC here? I think its unnecessary and It will make hard diff more easier. O
00:53:736 (5) - I don't like slider here, normal curve better for me just sayingO
02:42:454 (1) - make it more blanket if possible.O
04:10:659 (2) - blanket like this loos betterO

SPOILER

O

04:20:659 (5) - NC here.O


sorry for lazy mod :3 that's all good lucl

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[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ Senbonzakura
[Soar's Normal]

OD + 1

아 .. 외국인이신줄 알고 ..어떻게하면 좋을지 .. 생각하고있었는데 .. 한국인이셧네요 'ㅂ' .. 그럼 그냥 있는그래도 모딩해드리면되겟네요 !!

01:49:889 (4) - 이 슬라이더의 끝을 01:50:659 (5) - 이곳으로 해주시면 좋을꺼같네요 'ㅂ' .. ( 시간 참고 )

01:52:710 (3) - 서클 추가 하는게 더 좋지 않을까요 ? ( 박자상 ... )

01:58:095 (2) - 이 슬라이더의 끝을 01:58:864 (3) - 이곳으로 해주시는게 좋을꺼라봐요 'ㅂ '..

02:02:197 (2) - 위와같음

02:09:120 (5) - 서클추가 or 이전 슬라이더의 끝을 여기로

02:17:325 (9) - 위와 같음

02:54:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - 겹치는것보다는 떨어트려서 별( 5각형 )모양으로 만들어주는것도 좋을꺼라봐요 'ㅂ' .. 떨어트려주시면 좋을꺼같네요.

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi Senbonzakura~ From OFC~

[Soar's Normal]

00:12:710 (1) - 뉴콤제거
00:14:761 (4) - 모양좀 다듬으셔야 할듯
00:16:812 (2) - ^
01:46:812 - 제안입니다 노트추가

P A N wrote:

[Soar's Normal]

00:14:761 (4,2) - make it better blanket O
00:22:454 - add note, this is strong beat. O
overall look fine but it look like easy :3

1. Check the artist, as far as I know it's supposed to be Aki Toyosaki (豊崎 愛生). Please, please make sure that the artist is correct. HTT is not a real band, you know.
2. Do we really need "last song" in tags? I'd add Kyoto Animation to the tags, instead. This studio made this anime, they deserve to be mentioed in tags
3. Your colours are too bright. They may hurt some players' eyes! Try to fade them a bit.
   
   Try this!

   
   

   Combo1 : 180,207,181
   Combo2 : 108,105,154
   Combo3 : 234,159,165
   Combo4 : 214,211,139

4. The slidertick sound really bugs me. it sounds off to me, try to find another one, please!

1. Try to reduce HP drain by one tick. It'll make the diff more playable and balanced. Also, HP3 feels a little bit too hard for this diff, think about beginners, make it a bit easier!
2. 00:08:351 (6,1) - the spinner follows nothing and appears too fast. It may bug players. Remove (6) and move your spinner there!
3. 00:12:710 (3,4,5) - well, to b honest, your blankets are a little bit messy. try to make them neater, i know, you can do it!
   Note: 00:24:505 (2,3) - same here, I thnk. In fact, the whole diff is kinda messy and can be improved visually. Take a look at your patterns, try to clean them up a bit! It will take a lot of time, but trust me, it is really needed here! It will make your diff much, much better!
4. 00:45:018 (2,3) - are you SURE about this stack? It may confuse players and it's kinda hard to read. I wouldn't recommend you to use stacks unless you're 200% sure that it's really needed!
5. 00:55:787 (5,1) - swap new combos here. It will make your comboing more consistent + it fits with vocals.
6. 02:07:582 (2,4) - nazi - this overlap is visible during gameplay. try to avoid it because it looks a bit weird and may annoy players a bit.
   Nazi: 03:43:993 (2,1) - same!
7. 02:58:864 (2,4) - (4) is too close to (2), so players may mistakenly hit without clicking (3). It's all about your flow, it looks a little bit random to me, try to re-arrange some patterns , you can make this map much prettier!
8. 04:18:864 (1,1) - no, please don't! Second spinner appears too soon and it's totally unexpected for beginners. Try to map the first/second spinner to make this map more playable!
   
   Actually, this diff is pretty good. But it's appearance needs a lot of work, imo.

1. Increase your AR by one tick, It will make your patterns a bit neater and more readable. Also, AR5 fits with your slider velocity much better!
2. Please, try to reduce usage of 1/2 beats. It feels like you've overused them too much. The BPM is not too slow, so 1/2 patterns make this diff too hard, try to use them less often.
3. Your rhythm feels a little bit too boring. It's just 3/2 space > 1/2 patter > 3/2 space > 1/2 pattern. It's boring, imo and players probably will not like it, anyway, get more opinions!
4. 00:09:120 - try to place a circle here. You will be able to keep more consistent rhythm, you'll emphasize that beat and you'll get a chance to fix the spacing here!
5. 00:29:889 (4,1) - nazi - this overlap looks pretty messy, try to fix it!
   Note: well, in fact almost every 1/2 pattern is a little bit overlapped. ~70% of your patterns are a-little-bit overlapped, it looks messy, in my opinion. Try to clean up your patterns! Remember that appearance is also important!
6. 00:54:505 (3) - blargh. This slider is too short, I don't think that normal players are able to handle with such sliders and play/read them properly. :<
   Note: 02:56:556 (1,1) - same here!
7. 01:08:095 (2) - whoops, double-reversed slider here is unreadable, imo. Second reverse-arrow appears too fast and it will bug players. Try to replace the second repeat with a circle or something. It's too hard to read as it is :<
   Note: 01:10:146 (2) - same :<
8. 01:42:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - whoa, man! This is way too hard for a [Normal] diff! Please, take a look at other [Normal] diffs, or rad osu!wiki, this is TOO hard!
9. 02:12:454 (1,2) - combo is too short! It kinda breaks your comboing, imo. Try to keep combos consistent!
   Note: having problems with it? Feel free to ask me for some help!
10. 02:21:941 (2,2) - not sure if it's readable enough. I wouldn't copypaste the same pattern like this. Ask someone else for opinion, but I'd try to unstack it and make it more playable.
11. 03:02:710 (3) - copypasta here. This slider doesn't look neat and i wouldn't copypaste it. C'mon, copypasted patterns are boring for players!
12. 04:06:300 (1,2,3) - unreadable for a [Normal] diff. Please, think about normal players, make this diff more understandable!
13. 04:14:505 (3) - ah, c'mon! It's the same slider again! Seriously, don't copypastte the same pattern again and again. If I were a player, I'd feel kinda offended.
    
    I'd say that diff need some serious improvements. Don't give up and make it better, you can do it much, much better!

1. Check the artist, as far as I know it's supposed to be Aki Toyosaki (豊崎 愛生). Please, please make sure that the artist is correct. HTT is not a real band, you know.
2. Do we really need "last song" in tags? I'd add Kyoto Animation to the tags, instead. This studio made this anime, they deserve to be mentioed in tags
3. Your colours are too bright. They may hurt some players' eyes! Try to fade them a bit.
   
   Try this!

   
   

   Combo1 : 180,207,181
   Combo2 : 108,105,154
   Combo3 : 234,159,165
   Combo4 : 214,211,139

4. The slidertick sound really bugs me. it sounds off to me, try to find another one, please!

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

Yui is so cute, I love Kyoto Animation for this amazing anime.

[Soar's Normal]

1. Increase your AR by one tick, It will make your patterns a bit neater and more readable. Also, AR5 fits with your slider velocity much better!
2. Please, try to reduce usage of 1/2 beats. It feels like you've overused them too much. The BPM is not too slow, so 1/2 patterns make this diff too hard, try to use them less often.
3. Your rhythm feels a little bit too boring. It's just 3/2 space > 1/2 patter > 3/2 space > 1/2 pattern. It's boring, imo and players probably will not like it, anyway, get more opinions!
4. 00:09:120 - try to place a circle here. You will be able to keep more consistent rhythm, you'll emphasize that beat and you'll get a chance to fix the spacing here!
5. 00:29:889 (4,1) - nazi - this overlap looks pretty messy, try to fix it!
   Note: well, in fact almost every 1/2 pattern is a little bit overlapped. ~70% of your patterns are a-little-bit overlapped, it looks messy, in my opinion. Try to clean up your patterns! Remember that appearance is also important!
6. 00:54:505 (3) - blargh. This slider is too short, I don't think that normal players are able to handle with such sliders and play/read them properly. :<
   Note: 02:56:556 (1,1) - same here!
7. 01:08:095 (2) - whoops, double-reversed slider here is unreadable, imo. Second reverse-arrow appears too fast and it will bug players. Try to replace the second repeat with a circle or something. It's too hard to read as it is :<
   Note: 01:10:146 (2) - same :<
8. 01:42:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - whoa, man! This is way too hard for a [Normal] diff! Please, take a look at other [Normal] diffs, or rad osu!wiki, this is TOO hard!
9. 02:12:454 (1,2) - combo is too short! It kinda breaks your comboing, imo. Try to keep combos consistent!
   Note: having problems with it? Feel free to ask me for some help!
10. 02:21:941 (2,2) - not sure if it's readable enough. I wouldn't copypaste the same pattern like this. Ask someone else for opinion, but I'd try to unstack it and make it more playable.
11. 03:02:710 (3) - copypasta here. This slider doesn't look neat and i wouldn't copypaste it. C'mon, copypasted patterns are boring for players!
12. 04:06:300 (1,2,3) - unreadable for a [Normal] diff. Please, think about normal players, make this diff more understandable!
13. 04:14:505 (3) - ah, c'mon! It's the same slider again! Seriously, don't copypastte the same pattern again and again. If I were a player, I'd feel kinda offended.
    
    I'd say that diff need some serious improvements. Don't give up and make it better, you can do it much, much better!

I'll try to finish it later. Feel free to apply these suggstions!

1. 00:09:120 - hey, you could map this beat! It will fit with the music much better. Try it, just try it!
2. 00:20:146 (4,5) - ask yourself two questions. Does this jump fit with music? Does it make your map better? Honestly, I don't think that this jump is needed. Symmetricals patterns are giood, as long as they're reasonable!
3. 00:23:992 (1,2,3) - sounds overmapped. Try to avoid overmapping and remove (2), overmapping is a lways a bad idea. These beats aren't mapped in the [Insane] diff!
4. 00:33:992 (3,1) - nazi - yeah, you've read a lot of such suggstions, but this overlap looks messy. that'd be great if you fix it
   Note: 02:51:684 (3,4,5) - same.
5. 00:42:966 (1,2,3,4,5) - well, it isn't overmapped. But c'mon, this is the [Hard] diff, I'd prefer to avoid 1/4 streams because the BPM is pretty high!
   Note: 02:13:223 (4,5,6,7,1) - 03:18:351 (3) - same
6. 00:57:325 (4,1) - c'mon, this is something I call overjump. in my opinion, this jump is too hard and doesn't fit here, try to avoid it!
7. 01:22:454 (1,1) - whoops, one of these new combos is extra! Don't you feel so? I'd recommend you to remove one of this new combos, so you'll be able to follow music better.
8. 01:37:069 (1) - 01:40:402 (1) - these two come too after spinners. Players need some time to recover, consider removing the circles or making your spinners shorter
9. 02:13:223 (4,5,6,7,1) - man, you can't just ignore this loud beat! It's important and players expect it to be mapped! At least make the slidertick louder!
10. 02:31:171 (3,5) - well, it looks messy to me. I'd try to avoid this overlap if it's possible! You're a creative person, do something more interesting!
11. 02:35:274 (5,6) - it doesn't looks like a jump. The distance is to low. Try to keep spacing consistent or increase the DS to make this jump more readable!
12. 02:42:454 (1,2,3) - nazi - call me picky, but I think that (2) kinda breaks your flow here. Seriously, (2) feels kinda ~uncomfortable~ here. Try to re-arrange yourt pattern! example
    Note: 03:55:018 (3) - same!
13. 03:15:146 (2) - do we need this circle here? It sounds overmapped and it breaks your rhythm at this part, during the testplay this circle bugged me a lot.
14. 03:23:479 (1) - well, this one feels unexpected. I'd recommend you to map 03:21:428 (1) - this spinner.
15. 04:20:659 (1,2) - shapes are kinda messy, imo. Personally, i didn't like them at all! This will help you a lot!
    
    Try to work more both on rhythm and appearance. This diff isn't bad but it need improvements!

1. Try to use AR9 and OD8, it'll help us to read your patterns better. Also, nowadays player don't really like AR8 even on such maps.
2. 00:07:069 (2) - why do you ignore this beat? Why? It is loud, hearable and it'd be great to have it mapped.
3. Jumps. They're overused here, imo. Jumps should reflect music and be used to emphasize something in music//vocals. Making cute patterns is important, but it's more important to make jumps fitting and reasonable. Don't use them just "to make pattern symmetrical".
4. Overmapping. 00:43:351 (7) - for example here. Actually, as a player, I'd prefer to follow rhythm of the song, osu! is a rhythm game, so we should follow rhythm of the song! Try to check your map for overmapped patterns and remove them! Seriously, it's very, very important to follow rhythm!

This diff needs a lot of wok, but don't give up! If you'll need any help ask me or use osu!wiki it has a lot of helpful information!

Best of luck! Don't give up!