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HTT - Tenshi ni Fureta yo! (Movie Mix) [Osu|Taiko]
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Did an IRC mod with Azmato regarding his diff, up to you whether you want to kd this post or not (:
Azmato : The diff could be polished much more definitely, especially the patterns and seeing how this is barely hitsounded for now xD
(I didn't touch other diffs though)
SPOILER
11:37 Niva: umm
11:37 Niva: why so few hitsounds o.o
11:37 Azmato: T.T
11:38 Azmato: I'm not good at making hitsounds
11:38 Azmato: ..
11:38 Niva: oh...
11:38 Niva: well I don't really recommend to use 100% volume though...
11:38 Niva: 70% should be enough~
11:38 Azmato: ok
11:39 Niva: err also you mapped this with 1.0x?
11:39 Azmato: og
11:40 Niva: 1.0x distance spacing :D
11:40 Azmato: I made mistake!!!
11:40 Azmato: ok
11:40 Niva: err, to be honest
11:40 Azmato: ok
11:40 Niva: with sv like this it's much better imo if you mapped it with 1.1x or 1.2x
11:40 Niva: so objects don't overlap :D
11:41 Niva: well, anyway 00:02:454 (1) - finish on slider's start
11:41 Azmato: um... then Make with 1.1x ??
11:42 Niva: oh, up to you... I'm just giving suggestions in general (:
11:42 Niva: on the song's claps such as 00:02:966 (2)'s start , 00:03:736 (3)'s repeat and such
11:43 Niva: you can use SampleSet : Drum and add clap though
11:43 Niva: err wait, I mean Addition : Drum
11:43 Niva: the one on the upper-right~
11:43 Azmato: ok
11:44 Azmato: ah.. I'm sry... I can't understand
11:44 Azmato: (2)'s start, 00:03:736 ...
11:44 Niva: clap~
11:45 Niva: 00:18:095 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing here...
11:46 Niva: 00:25:530 (x) - A bit blank here to be honest, you can add a 1/2 slider here though:
11:46 Azmato: ㅐㅏ
11:49 Niva: umm...
11:50 Azmato: ok
11:50 Niva: like this perhaps : http//osu.ppy.sh/ss/878923
11:50 Niva: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878923
11:50 Niva: (as this is a Hard diff don't be afraid to put on small jumps though~)
11:51 Azmato: Ok
11:51 Niva: 00:28:864 (4,1) - stack doesn't really fit the music here, consider something moving here?
11:52 Niva: 00:45:274 (3,4,5,1) -
11:52 Niva: there's also a huge gap here o.o
11:55 Niva: 00:55:787 (1,2,3,4) -
11:55 Niva: again a small jump is usable here imo...
12:00 Niva: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878936
12:00 Niva: or something like this :
12:03 Niva: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878941
12:03 Azmato: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878931
12:03 Azmato: how about this?
12:03 Azmato: oh
12:03 Niva: oh yep, that would also do :D
12:03 Niva: then 01:02:966 (3,1,2) - if you want a jump here it should be from(1) to (2) actually, not (3) to (1) :D
12:03 Niva: (due to the vocals)
12:05 Niva: 01:08:095 (2,3) - stack doesn't play well here, use a cross slider instead?
12:05 Azmato: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878944
12:05 Azmato: like this?
12:06 Niva: ah, yes~
12:06 Niva: put the new combo on (2) though
12:07 Niva: generally if you want to put a jump like this the destination object should be the one on the downbeat :3
12:07 Niva: 01:14:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing...
12:07 Niva: (you can just simply use CTRL+H here or create a hexagon jump perhaps, yep that would do)
12:08 Niva: 01:25:787 - add note here for the drum?
12:08 Niva: 01:31:684 (1) - err
12:09 Niva: would be much better if you start the spinner on 01:32:710 (1) - and end it on 01:36:812 -
12:09 Azmato: 01:25:787 (3) - I already add
12:10 Niva: oh ok
12:11 Niva: the gap can be filled with this rhythm though (following the instrument) :
12:11 Niva: 01:31:684 (1) - circle (maybe stacked to your previous note? xD)
12:11 Azmato: 01:14:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - um..
12:11 Niva: 01:31:941 (2) - 1/4 repeating slider
12:11 Niva: 01:32:325 (3) - circle
12:11 Niva: 01:32:454 (4) - 1/2 slider
12:11 Niva: 01:32:838 (1) - spinner~
12:12 Niva: oh, yep, (1,2) and (2,3)'s spacing isn't same :D
12:12 Azmato: okay
12:13 Azmato: hey..
12:13 Niva: oh...
12:13 Azmato: 01:32:710 (1) - you said this would be spinner
12:14 Niva: ah, yes, because 01:32:454 (4) - is circle~
12:14 Niva: err wait
12:14 Niva: I mean
12:14 Niva: the rhythm would be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878959
12:15 Niva: btw 01:43:223 (7) - you can just copy-paste the shape from (4) here
12:17 Niva: 01:52:454 (3,4) - how about making this as a jump as well?
12:17 Niva: following this flow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878960
12:17 Niva: because previous (1,2,3,1,2,3) is a jump already~
12:18 Niva: 01:55:787 (x) - here, would also be best if you added 1/2 slider here to fill the gap
12:20 Niva: 02:13:223 (4,5,6,7,8) - try this stream shap http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878964 ?
12:20 Niva: you can then continue with slider fan http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878965
12:21 Azmato: ok
12:22 Niva: 02:33:736 - add note?
12:23 Azmato: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878971
12:23 Azmato: like this?
12:26 Niva: 02:35:274 (5) - better to be stacked to (4) rather than (3)'s end imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878975
12:26 Niva: 02:37:325 (3,4,1) - again here use jump from (4) to (1) instead due to the vocals?
12:28 Niva: umm, yep, that ss you just gave would do
12:29 Azmato: ok
12:29 Niva: 02:44:761 (1,2,3,4,5) - select all five and use Edit -> Scale by... (so they don't touch each other)?
12:30 Niva: 02:50:402 (8,1) - again jump should be here though, not on (7,8)
12:30 Niva: 02:52:710 (5,6) - unstack for flow?
12:34 Niva: 02:58:864 (3) - would be best if this could encircle (6) for example like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878982
12:35 Azmato: ok
12:35 Niva: 03:07:325 (3) - put somewhere higher (~x:270 y:118 perhaps?) no need to overlap (1) here imo xD
12:36 Niva: 03:23:479 - add note here with finish at the center?
12:36 Niva: 03:52:710 (9) - this variable spacing like this is quite confusing imo, I'd make (7,8,9)'s spacing equal
12:37 Niva: put (9) in ~x:304 y:150 ?
12:40 Niva: 03:53:992 (1,2,3,4) - so that the flow would be continuous use this pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878989
12:40 Niva: 03:56:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this jump's pattern is quite random imo ._.
12:41 Niva: 04:18:095 (3,4,5,6) - again confusing variable spacing~
12:42 Niva: 04:22:710 (2) - this should end 1/8 earlier though (due to the drums)
12:42 Niva: 04:25:530 (1) - add note with finish and start spinner 1/4 after?
12:42 Niva: also I don't really recommend to end that spinner with 100% volume, as the music fades out there >_<
12:43 Niva: yep~
12:43 Niva: also before I forget I would also recommend tick rate 2 for this diff :D
12:48 Azmato: ok Thanks xD
12:48 Niva: err
12:48 Azmato: I have to eat breakfast(lunch)
12:48 Azmato: See you later
Azmato : The diff could be polished much more definitely, especially the patterns and seeing how this is barely hitsounded for now xD
(I didn't touch other diffs though)
Azmato's Hard only as his request in game.
generally u didn't finish ur hitsound work, long parts in ur diff has no hitsound at all, that's an unrankble issue.
00:18:607 (5) - arrange ds, 1.06 and 0.97 are really different
00:21:428 (1,2) - maybe blanket
00:23:992 (1,2,3,4) - there are lots of parts like this in ur diff, personally i prefer these ds are same as 1.00x with little deviation. won't mention other parts like this here after this.
00:59:889 (1) - awkward the finish hitsound's volume here. (coz there's no hitsound in a long part before kiai, and the kiai after this
02:44:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe u can make them a hexagon
03:56:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:46:556 (1) - u really need to get serious in hitsound work, even no finish at the head of this slider
03:48:095 (5,6,7) - make them symm
some parts' rhythm can be better imo
and plz at least finish ur map before asking modding D:
good luck anyway
generally u didn't finish ur hitsound work, long parts in ur diff has no hitsound at all, that's an unrankble issue.
00:18:607 (5) - arrange ds, 1.06 and 0.97 are really different
00:21:428 (1,2) - maybe blanket
00:23:992 (1,2,3,4) - there are lots of parts like this in ur diff, personally i prefer these ds are same as 1.00x with little deviation. won't mention other parts like this here after this.
00:59:889 (1) - awkward the finish hitsound's volume here. (coz there's no hitsound in a long part before kiai, and the kiai after this
02:44:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe u can make them a hexagon
03:56:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:46:556 (1) - u really need to get serious in hitsound work, even no finish at the head of this slider
03:48:095 (5,6,7) - make them symm
some parts' rhythm can be better imo
and plz at least finish ur map before asking modding D:
good luck anyway
Azmato
Really Thanks!Hollow Wings wrote:
Azmato's Hard only as his request in game.
generally u didn't finish ur hitsound work, long parts in ur diff has no hitsound at all, that's an unrankble issue.
00:18:607 (5) - arrange ds, 1.06 and 0.97 are really different O
00:21:428 (1,2) - maybe blanket O
00:23:992 (1,2,3,4) - there are lots of parts like this in ur diff, personally i prefer these ds are same as 1.00x with little deviation. won't mention other parts like this here after this. O
00:59:889 (1) - awkward the finish hitsound's volume here. (coz there's no hitsound in a long part before kiai, and the kiai after this O
02:44:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe u can make them a hexagon I'll think about it
03:56:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
02:46:556 (1) - u really need to get serious in hitsound work, even no finish at the head of this slider O
03:48:095 (5,6,7) - make them symm O
some parts' rhythm can be better imo
and plz at least finish ur map before asking modding D:
good luck anyway
http://puu.sh/3IWTj.zip
hi
Hit sound modding req
[Easy]
00:27:069 (1) - start notes add finish
00:39:377 (4) - 3st notes add clap
00:43:479 (3) - start notes add finish
00:45:018 (4) - add clap
00:51:684 (1) - start notes add finish
00:53:736 (3) - ^
00:55:787 (1) - ^
01:20:402 (4) - ^
01:57:325 (1) - ^
02:21:941 (3) - ^
[Soar's Normal]
00:07:838 (2) - 3st notes add finish
00:12:710 (1) - start notes remove finish
00:13:479 (2) - end notes remove finish
00:32:197 (3) - start notes remove finish
01:09:633 (1) - change clap
01:11:684 (1) - ^
01:30:659 (4) - ^
01:40:915 (1) - 이 파트 이후에 히트사운드가 없습니다. 모딩을 해드릴 수 없는 점 양해 바랍니다.
[Azmato's Hard]
00:03:736 (3) - 3st notes remove clap and 2st notes add clap
00:04:761 (4) - 2st notes add clap
00:06:043 (1) - 1st notes add clap and 3st notes add finish
00:11:684 (3) - 이 파트 이후에 히트사운드가 없습니다. 모딩을 해드릴 수 없는 점 양해 바랍니다.
[Sakura]
00:03:992 (4) - add clap
00:11:171 (2) - remove finish
00:43:992 (2) - add clap
00:44:248 (3) - 2st notes remove clap
00:47:069 (2) - add clap
01:07:325 (6) - end notes add clap
01:13:736 (9) - start notes add clap
01:14:761 (2) - add clap
01:29:889 (3,4,5) - add clap
02:28:095 (1,2,3) - ^
02:37:325 (4,5,6) - ^
03:00:915 (7) - 3st notes add finish
03:07:582 (2) - add clap
03:08:607 (2) - ^
03:09:633 (1) - ^
03:10:659 (2) - ^
03:11:684 (2) - ^
03:12:710 (2) - 1st notes add clap
03:13:736 (4) - add clap
03:49:120 (4,5) - ^
03:49:377 (6) - end notes add clap
03:50:146 (2) - add finish
03:54:505 (4) - end notes add clap
04:09:120 (5) - add clap
04:13:223 (10) - add finish
04:17:838 (1,2,3,4) - add clap
good lcuk
Hit sound modding req
[Easy]
00:27:069 (1) - start notes add finish
00:39:377 (4) - 3st notes add clap
00:43:479 (3) - start notes add finish
00:45:018 (4) - add clap
00:51:684 (1) - start notes add finish
00:53:736 (3) - ^
00:55:787 (1) - ^
01:20:402 (4) - ^
01:57:325 (1) - ^
02:21:941 (3) - ^
[Soar's Normal]
00:07:838 (2) - 3st notes add finish
00:12:710 (1) - start notes remove finish
00:13:479 (2) - end notes remove finish
00:32:197 (3) - start notes remove finish
01:09:633 (1) - change clap
01:11:684 (1) - ^
01:30:659 (4) - ^
01:40:915 (1) - 이 파트 이후에 히트사운드가 없습니다. 모딩을 해드릴 수 없는 점 양해 바랍니다.
[Azmato's Hard]
00:03:736 (3) - 3st notes remove clap and 2st notes add clap
00:04:761 (4) - 2st notes add clap
00:06:043 (1) - 1st notes add clap and 3st notes add finish
00:11:684 (3) - 이 파트 이후에 히트사운드가 없습니다. 모딩을 해드릴 수 없는 점 양해 바랍니다.
[Sakura]
00:03:992 (4) - add clap
00:11:171 (2) - remove finish
00:43:992 (2) - add clap
00:44:248 (3) - 2st notes remove clap
00:47:069 (2) - add clap
01:07:325 (6) - end notes add clap
01:13:736 (9) - start notes add clap
01:14:761 (2) - add clap
01:29:889 (3,4,5) - add clap
02:28:095 (1,2,3) - ^
02:37:325 (4,5,6) - ^
03:00:915 (7) - 3st notes add finish
03:07:582 (2) - add clap
03:08:607 (2) - ^
03:09:633 (1) - ^
03:10:659 (2) - ^
03:11:684 (2) - ^
03:12:710 (2) - 1st notes add clap
03:13:736 (4) - add clap
03:49:120 (4,5) - ^
03:49:377 (6) - end notes add clap
03:50:146 (2) - add finish
03:54:505 (4) - end notes add clap
04:09:120 (5) - add clap
04:13:223 (10) - add finish
04:17:838 (1,2,3,4) - add clap
good lcuk
Azmato
감사합니다.Joon wrote:
hi
Hit sound modding req
[Azmato's Hard]
00:03:736 (3) - 3st notes remove clap and 2st notes add clap O
00:04:761 (4) - 2st notes add clap O
00:06:043 (1) - 1st notes add clap and 3st notes add finish O
00:11:684 (3) - 이 파트 이후에 히트사운드가 없습니다. 모딩을 해드릴 수 없는 점 양해 바랍니다. O
good lcuk
힛사 넣어봤습니다.
http://puu.sh/3Ld2v.zip
수정하는김에 뒤에 반복되는구간도 수정했습니다Joon wrote:
hi
Hit sound modding req
[Soar's Normal]
00:07:838 (2) - 3st notes add finish O
00:12:710 (1) - start notes remove finish O
00:13:479 (2) - end notes remove finish O
00:32:197 (3) - start notes remove finish O
01:09:633 (1) - change clap O
01:11:684 (1) - ^ O
01:30:659 (4) - ^ ? 뭔가 이상하지만 O
01:40:915 (1) - 이 파트 이후에 히트사운드가 없습니다. 모딩을 해드릴 수 없는 점 양해 바랍니다.
good lcuk
감사합니다
http://puu.sh/3LJUB.osu
SPOILER
thats all and give me kds[Sakura]
00:03:223 (3) - nc
00:04:248 (5) - nc
00:06:556 (6) - nc
00:10:146 (5) - remove finish(심벌소리가 여기선 안 적당하네요)
00:14:761 (8) - nc
00:15:530 (1) - remove nc
00:25:018 (9) - nc
00:25:274 (1) - remove nc
00:28:607 (1) - remove nc
00:29:120 (2) - nc
00:39:120 (6) - nc
00:39:248 (7) - remove nc(위에 변경 후)
00:46:556 (1) - remove nc
00:47:325 (3) - nc
00:49:120 (1) - remove nc
00:49:633 (3) - nc
01:40:402 (2) - 00:10:146 (5)와 같애요
01:45:018 (8) - nc
01:45:787 (1) - remove nc
01:46:812 (5) - nc
01:47:325 (1) - remove nc
01:49:120 (6) - nc
01:49:633 (1) - remove nc
01:51:171 (5) - nc
01:51:684 (1) - remove nc
01:55:274 (9) - nc
01:55:530 (1) - remove nc
02:03:736 (7) - nc
02:04:505 (1) - remove nc
02:05:530 (5) - nc
02:06:812 (1) - remove nc
02:07:582 (4) - nc
02:08:095 (1) - remove nc
02:09:377 (5) - nc
02:09:889 (1) - remove nc
02:19:377 (1) - remove nc
02:19:889 (2) - nc
02:40:146 (7) - nc
00:03:223 (3) - nc
00:04:248 (5) - nc
00:06:556 (6) - nc
00:10:146 (5) - remove finish(심벌소리가 여기선 안 적당하네요)
00:14:761 (8) - nc
00:15:530 (1) - remove nc
00:25:018 (9) - nc
00:25:274 (1) - remove nc
00:28:607 (1) - remove nc
00:29:120 (2) - nc
00:39:120 (6) - nc
00:39:248 (7) - remove nc(위에 변경 후)
00:46:556 (1) - remove nc
00:47:325 (3) - nc
00:49:120 (1) - remove nc
00:49:633 (3) - nc
01:40:402 (2) - 00:10:146 (5)와 같애요
01:45:018 (8) - nc
01:45:787 (1) - remove nc
01:46:812 (5) - nc
01:47:325 (1) - remove nc
01:49:120 (6) - nc
01:49:633 (1) - remove nc
01:51:171 (5) - nc
01:51:684 (1) - remove nc
01:55:274 (9) - nc
01:55:530 (1) - remove nc
02:03:736 (7) - nc
02:04:505 (1) - remove nc
02:05:530 (5) - nc
02:06:812 (1) - remove nc
02:07:582 (4) - nc
02:08:095 (1) - remove nc
02:09:377 (5) - nc
02:09:889 (1) - remove nc
02:19:377 (1) - remove nc
02:19:889 (2) - nc
02:40:146 (7) - nc
Hi Senbonzakura~
General
Different Audio preview times:
Easy - 221941
Normal - 222462
Hard - 221941
Sakura - 221941
Muzukashii - 221949
Oni - 221949
1st Timing point also different:
Easy - 2454
Normal - 2462
Hard - 2454
Sakura - 2454
Muzukashii - 2454
Oni - 2454
Inconsistent tags for difficulties:
Easy - soar azmato naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last song
Normal - soar azmato naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last song
Hard - soar azmato kaodia naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last song
Sakura - soar azmato naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last song
Muzukashii - soar azmato naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last song
Oni - soar azmato naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last songsoar azmato naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last song
Easy
Kiai isn't snapped 03:41:704
Normal
Hard
00:11:428 (2,3) - slider before circle, place the clap at the same time as what it is currently 00:12:197
00:15:530 (2,3) - ^
00:27:838 (2,3) - ^
00:31:941 (2,3) - ^
00:36:043 (2,3) - ^
00:53:736 - 00:56:043 - looks a little bit cramped up, maybe you could shift them around
01:12:197 (4) - finish on the start of slider
01:13:223 (6,7) - I don't think they should stack
01:15:787 (6) - the music here in the song has a cymbol sound, you could put finish here as well
01:28:607 (1) - finish on the start of slider
01:31:171 (4) - finish
01:32:454 (4) - finish on end of slider
01:32:838 (1) - finish
01:37:582 (3) - ^
01:38:607 (6) - ^
01:40:402 (1) - ^
01:40:915 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:13:736 (8) - NC here instead of 02:15:018 (1)
02:12:197 (6) - finish
02:13:736 (8) - finish on start of slider
02:16:556 (4,5) - slider before circle
02:21:941 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:23:992 (5) - ^
02:26:043 (2) - ^
02:29:633 (4) - finish
02:38:351 (2) - finish on start of slider
02:39:120 (4) - ^
02:40:402 (3) - ^
02:41:171 (5) - ^
02:42:454 (1) - ^
02:49:633 (7) - finish on end of slider
02:50:659 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:54:761 (1) - ^
02:55:530 (3) - ^
02:56:812 (3) - finish
02:58:864 (3) - finish on start of slider
03:00:915 (5) - clap
03:01:428 (6) - finish
03:08:864 (6) - finish on start of slider
03:10:915 (3) - ^
03:12:710 (6) - finish on end of slider
03:15:274 (1) - finish on start of slider
03:16:300 (3) - ^
03:17:069 (4) - finish
03:18:351 (2) - ^
03:43:992 (5,6,7) - they can look nicer by overlapping less:
03:50:146 (1) - finish on start of slider
03:50:915 (3) - ^
03:52:197 (7) - finish
03:52:710 (9) - finish on end of slider
03:54:248 (2) - finish on start of slider
03:56:043 (5) - finish on end of slider
03:57:838 (6) - finish
03:58:351 (1) - finish on start of slider
04:01:428 (7) - finish on end of slider
04:02:454 (1) - finish on start of slider
04:06:556 (1) - ^
04:07:325 (3) - ^
04:08:607 (3) - ^
04:09:377 (5) - ^
04:10:659 (8) - ^
04:12:710 (1) - clap
04:13:223 (2) - finish
04:13:736 (1) - clap
04:18:864 (6) - finish on start of slider
04:19:633 (8) - ^
04:20:659 (1) - ^
04:22:710 (2) - ^
Sakura
00:05:530 (1) - remove finish
00:06:043 (4) - clap
00:06:171 - add a note and a clap on it
00:06:300 (5) - clap
00:07:069 (7) - finish on end of slider
00:08:351 (3) - finish on start of slider
00:27:069 (1) - ^
00:48:095 (5,6) - you could make them look more in-line with each other
00:51:684 (2) - finish on start of slider
01:08:864 (5) - ^
01:10:146 (3) - finish
01:10:915 (6) - finish on start of slider
01:19:377 (8) - finish on end of slider
01:24:505 (3) - finish
01:25:274 (6) - finish on start of slider
01:27:325 (7) - ^
01:28:607 (2) - clap on end of slider
01:31:171 (8) - finish
01:56:812 (4) - ^
01:57:325 (1) - ^
02:39:120 (5) - finish on start of slider
02:40:402 (9) - ^
02:42:454 (2) - finish
02:49:633 (8) - finish on end of slider
02:50:659 (2) - finish on start of slider
02:54:761 (4) - finish
02:55:530 (7) - finish on start of slider
02:56:812 (3) - finish
03:00:915 (7) - finish on end of slider
03:10:915 (3) - finish on start of slider
03:16:556 (4,5) - remove finish
03:18:351 (4) - finish
03:18:864 (6) - finish at 03:19:377
03:23:479 - add a note with finish
you could lead up with 3 notes at 03:41:171 - 03:41:428 and 03:41:684
03:50:915 (5) - finish on start of slider
03:52:197 (3) - finish
03:52:454 (4) - remove finish
03:52:966 (6) - finish on start of slider
03:54:248 (3) - finish
03:56:812 (2,4) - add claps
04:01:428 (8) - finish on end of slider
04:06:556 (3) - finish
04:07:325 (6) - finish on start of slider
04:08:607 (4) - ^
04:09:377 (6) - ^
04:10:659 (5) - finish
04:11:941 (5) - change to something that has a beat at 04:12:069 - like a repeat 1/4 slider or 3 1/4 circles
04:12:710 (7) - clap
04:19:377 (7) - finish on end of slider
04:20:659 (3) - finish on start of slider
04:22:710 (3) - finish
04:22:966 (1) - ^
Muzukashii
Letterbox is not allowed
Oni
Letterbox is not allowed in Taiko
General
Different Audio preview times:
Easy - 221941
Normal - 222462Hard - 221941
Sakura - 221941
Muzukashii - 221949 Oni - 2219491st Timing point also different:
Easy - 2454
Normal - 2462Hard - 2454
Sakura - 2454
Muzukashii - 2454
Oni - 2454
Inconsistent tags for difficulties:
Easy - soar azmato naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last song
Normal - soar azmato naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last song
Hard - soar azmato kaodia naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last songSakura - soar azmato naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last song
Muzukashii - soar azmato naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last song
Oni - soar azmato naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last songsoar azmato naryuga hirasawa yui htt akiyama mio kotobuki tsumugi tainaka ritsu nakano azusa houkago tea time last songEasy
Kiai isn't snapped 03:41:704
Normal
Hard
00:11:428 (2,3) - slider before circle, place the clap at the same time as what it is currently 00:12:197
00:15:530 (2,3) - ^
00:27:838 (2,3) - ^
00:31:941 (2,3) - ^
00:36:043 (2,3) - ^
00:53:736 - 00:56:043 - looks a little bit cramped up, maybe you could shift them around
01:12:197 (4) - finish on the start of slider
01:13:223 (6,7) - I don't think they should stack
01:15:787 (6) - the music here in the song has a cymbol sound, you could put finish here as well
01:28:607 (1) - finish on the start of slider
01:31:171 (4) - finish
01:32:454 (4) - finish on end of slider
01:32:838 (1) - finish
01:37:582 (3) - ^
01:38:607 (6) - ^
01:40:402 (1) - ^
01:40:915 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:13:736 (8) - NC here instead of 02:15:018 (1)
02:12:197 (6) - finish
02:13:736 (8) - finish on start of slider
02:16:556 (4,5) - slider before circle
02:21:941 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:23:992 (5) - ^
02:26:043 (2) - ^
02:29:633 (4) - finish
02:38:351 (2) - finish on start of slider
02:39:120 (4) - ^
02:40:402 (3) - ^
02:41:171 (5) - ^
02:42:454 (1) - ^
02:49:633 (7) - finish on end of slider
02:50:659 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:54:761 (1) - ^
02:55:530 (3) - ^
02:56:812 (3) - finish
02:58:864 (3) - finish on start of slider
03:00:915 (5) - clap
03:01:428 (6) - finish
03:08:864 (6) - finish on start of slider
03:10:915 (3) - ^
03:12:710 (6) - finish on end of slider
03:15:274 (1) - finish on start of slider
03:16:300 (3) - ^
03:17:069 (4) - finish
03:18:351 (2) - ^
03:43:992 (5,6,7) - they can look nicer by overlapping less:
03:50:146 (1) - finish on start of slider
03:50:915 (3) - ^
03:52:197 (7) - finish
03:52:710 (9) - finish on end of slider
03:54:248 (2) - finish on start of slider
03:56:043 (5) - finish on end of slider
03:57:838 (6) - finish
03:58:351 (1) - finish on start of slider
04:01:428 (7) - finish on end of slider
04:02:454 (1) - finish on start of slider
04:06:556 (1) - ^
04:07:325 (3) - ^
04:08:607 (3) - ^
04:09:377 (5) - ^
04:10:659 (8) - ^
04:12:710 (1) - clap
04:13:223 (2) - finish
04:13:736 (1) - clap
04:18:864 (6) - finish on start of slider
04:19:633 (8) - ^
04:20:659 (1) - ^
04:22:710 (2) - ^
Sakura
00:05:530 (1) - remove finish
00:06:043 (4) - clap
00:06:171 - add a note and a clap on it
00:06:300 (5) - clap
00:07:069 (7) - finish on end of slider
00:08:351 (3) - finish on start of slider
00:27:069 (1) - ^
00:48:095 (5,6) - you could make them look more in-line with each other
00:51:684 (2) - finish on start of slider
01:08:864 (5) - ^
01:10:146 (3) - finish
01:10:915 (6) - finish on start of slider
01:19:377 (8) - finish on end of slider
01:24:505 (3) - finish
01:25:274 (6) - finish on start of slider
01:27:325 (7) - ^
01:28:607 (2) - clap on end of slider
01:31:171 (8) - finish
01:56:812 (4) - ^
01:57:325 (1) - ^
02:39:120 (5) - finish on start of slider
02:40:402 (9) - ^
02:42:454 (2) - finish
02:49:633 (8) - finish on end of slider
02:50:659 (2) - finish on start of slider
02:54:761 (4) - finish
02:55:530 (7) - finish on start of slider
02:56:812 (3) - finish
03:00:915 (7) - finish on end of slider
03:10:915 (3) - finish on start of slider
03:16:556 (4,5) - remove finish
03:18:351 (4) - finish
03:18:864 (6) - finish at 03:19:377
03:23:479 - add a note with finish
you could lead up with 3 notes at 03:41:171 - 03:41:428 and 03:41:684
03:50:915 (5) - finish on start of slider
03:52:197 (3) - finish
03:52:454 (4) - remove finish
03:52:966 (6) - finish on start of slider
03:54:248 (3) - finish
03:56:812 (2,4) - add claps
04:01:428 (8) - finish on end of slider
04:06:556 (3) - finish
04:07:325 (6) - finish on start of slider
04:08:607 (4) - ^
04:09:377 (6) - ^
04:10:659 (5) - finish
04:11:941 (5) - change to something that has a beat at 04:12:069 - like a repeat 1/4 slider or 3 1/4 circles
04:12:710 (7) - clap
04:19:377 (7) - finish on end of slider
04:20:659 (3) - finish on start of slider
04:22:710 (3) - finish
04:22:966 (1) - ^
Muzukashii
Letterbox is not allowed
Oni
Letterbox is not allowed in Taiko
Azmato
neonat wrote:
Hi Senbonzakura~
Hard
00:11:428 (2,3) - slider before circle, place the clap at the same time as what it is currently 00:12:197
00:15:530 (2,3) - ^
00:27:838 (2,3) - ^
00:31:941 (2,3) - ^
00:36:043 (2,3) - ^
00:53:736 - 00:56:043 - looks a little bit cramped up, maybe you could shift them around
01:12:197 (4) - finish on the start of slider
01:13:223 (6,7) - I don't think they should stack
01:15:787 (6) - the music here in the song has a cymbol sound, you could put finish here as well
01:28:607 (1) - finish on the start of slider
01:31:171 (4) - finish
01:32:454 (4) - finish on end of slider
01:32:838 (1) - finish
01:37:582 (3) - ^
01:38:607 (6) - ^
01:40:402 (1) - ^
01:40:915 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:13:736 (8) - NC here instead of 02:15:018 (1)
02:12:197 (6) - finish
02:13:736 (8) - finish on start of slider
02:16:556 (4,5) - slider before circle
02:21:941 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:23:992 (5) - ^
02:26:043 (2) - ^
02:29:633 (4) - finish
02:38:351 (2) - finish on start of slider
02:39:120 (4) - ^
02:40:402 (3) - ^
02:41:171 (5) - ^
02:42:454 (1) - ^
02:49:633 (7) - finish on end of slider
02:50:659 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:54:761 (1) - ^
02:55:530 (3) - ^
02:56:812 (3) - finish
02:58:864 (3) - finish on start of slider
03:00:915 (5) - clap
03:01:428 (6) - finish
03:08:864 (6) - finish on start of slider
03:10:915 (3) - ^
03:12:710 (6) - finish on end of slider
03:15:274 (1) - finish on start of slider
03:16:300 (3) - ^
03:17:069 (4) - finish
03:18:351 (2) - ^
03:43:992 (5,6,7) - they can look nicer by overlapping less:
03:50:146 (1) - finish on start of slider
03:50:915 (3) - ^
03:52:197 (7) - finish
03:52:710 (9) - finish on end of slider
03:54:248 (2) - finish on start of slider
03:56:043 (5) - finish on end of slider
03:57:838 (6) - finish
03:58:351 (1) - finish on start of slider
04:01:428 (7) - finish on end of slider
04:02:454 (1) - finish on start of slider
04:06:556 (1) - ^
04:07:325 (3) - ^
04:08:607 (3) - ^
04:09:377 (5) - ^
04:10:659 (8) - ^
04:12:710 (1) - clap
04:13:223 (2) - finish
04:13:736 (1) - clap
04:18:864 (6) - finish on start of slider
04:19:633 (8) - ^
04:20:659 (1) - ^
04:22:710 (2) - ^
ALL APPLIED!
Thanks!
Modding~ (Taiko, Insane diff only)
GL
Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii
LetterBox During breake : no check
00:17:325 (3) - imo, kat
00:33:992 (3) - kat
01:47:838 (3) - don
01:59:889 (4,1) - don
02:23:736 (3) - imo, don
03:08:351 (1) - kat
04:01:941 (1) - remove finish
00:17:325 (3) - imo, kat
00:33:992 (3) - kat
01:47:838 (3) - don
01:59:889 (4,1) - don
02:23:736 (3) - imo, don
03:08:351 (1) - kat
04:01:941 (1) - remove finish
Naryuga's Taiko Oni
LetterBox During breake : no check
00:09:633 (5) - remove this
00:39:120 (1) - imo, kat
00:58:351 (1) - remove finish
01:35:530 (2) - don
01:39:889 (5) - remove this
02:36:300 (1) - don
02:40:274 - imo, add don and 02:40:402 (4) - remove finish and kat
00:09:633 (5) - remove this
00:39:120 (1) - imo, kat
00:58:351 (1) - remove finish
01:35:530 (2) - don
01:39:889 (5) - remove this
02:36:300 (1) - don
02:40:274 - imo, add don and 02:40:402 (4) - remove finish and kat
Sakura
HP Drain - 1
00:07:069 (2) - remove and copy 00:06:556 (1) 그리고 복사한 00:06:556 (1) 모양을 180도 돌리고 컨트롤 + G 해서 사용
00:10:146 (1) - remove NC
00:45:018 (4) - stack by 00:43:992 (2)
00:58:864 (5) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/3U4vz.jpg
01:51:171 (1,2,3,4) - 모양을 조금 더 단정하게 배치
03:04:761 (5,6) - 조금 더 위에 배치했으면 하는 바램이...
03:52:710 (5) - add finish...?
00:07:069 (2) - remove and copy 00:06:556 (1) 그리고 복사한 00:06:556 (1) 모양을 180도 돌리고 컨트롤 + G 해서 사용
00:10:146 (1) - remove NC
00:45:018 (4) - stack by 00:43:992 (2)
00:58:864 (5) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/3U4vz.jpg
01:51:171 (1,2,3,4) - 모양을 조금 더 단정하게 배치
03:04:761 (5,6) - 조금 더 위에 배치했으면 하는 바램이...
03:52:710 (5) - add finish...?
GL
From my birthday queue~
this song brings back some k-on memories xD
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
kiai times are inconsistent in your own diffs, please fix them
also try to bump up the volume during kiai times, use something like 80% since the soft hitsounds are already pretty quiet against the song
[Easy]
do tick rate 2 like the other diffs, gives more feed back to the song since you used a lot of long sliders, also makes more sense with your use of HP3
00:06:556 (3) - take finish off the end, the finish plays at 00:08:351 in the music which is a bit before the hitsound plays
00:09:633 (4) - this one should have the finish on the end instead, thats where the finish is in the music
00:10:659 (1) - add finish on start as its in the music
00:20:402 (4) - forgot a clap on the start
00:43:479 (3) - add a NC here to mark the start of a new verse
00:57:838 (3,4,5,6) - watch for spacing here, recommend you use a smaller grid snap (press "g" to change grid size)
00:59:889 (1) - finish on start as it is in the music
01:10:146 (1) - ^
01:24:505 (3) - should have a NC here to mark the new verse, also add finish on start
01:31:684 (3) - forgot a clap on the repeat
01:50:659 (4) - do a more proper blanket on 01:49:120 (3)
01:54:761 (2) - another spot for spacing improvements
02:13:736 (3) - NC for new verse
02:18:351 (3) - add a clap here, its heard in the music
02:23:992 (2) - finish on start
02:25:530 (3,1) - do not do this on an Easy, players will not expect such an extreme jump pop out of nowhere; use 0.9x spacing like you always did
02:30:146 (1) - finish on start
02:42:454 (3) - ^
02:46:556 (1,2) - these two would play more nicely if they had the same curve (ctrl+cv and flip)
02:54:761 (3,5) - finish on start, and add NC for new verse
02:58:351 (1) - forgot clap
03:01:941 (2) - ^ on repeat
03:12:454 (1,3) - clap on end
03:50:146 (3,1,3) - finish on start
03:54:248 (3,4) - clap on end
03:56:300 (1) - finish on start and end
03:58:351 (1,2) - again, symmetrical sliders would play well here
04:06:556 (3) - NC for new verse
04:08:607 (5) - finish on start
04:15:274 (4) - NC should be on this note, also forgot clap here
04:22:197 (1) - a finish for the spinner would sound nice
a lot of missing hitsounds in the diff, im sure i didnt catch all of them so you should check it over yourself (2/4 claps, add finishes when heard in music, etc.)
[Soar's Normal]
instead of using so many finishes on the 3rd white tick, how bout swap them for whistles instead? sounds a lot nicer imo
00:14:761 (4,2) - use 3 point algorithm for these sliders, right now they look asymmetrical with the 4 point
00:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap is a bit harder to read with this AR, suggest you to remove the stack or change the direction of the repeat on 00:22:710 (1) for less confusion
00:39:120 (1,2,3) - a triplet in Normal? not a good idea >< either delete 00:39:248 (2) or use a short slider for 00:39:120 (1,2)
01:08:095 (2) - missing a finish on the end
01:09:889 (2,3,4) - again, prevent using 1/4 circles in a Normal diff
01:14:505 (5) - break this up into 2 repeat sliders, its currently hard to predict how many repeats it has
01:21:428 (4,1) - the spacing change here may cause some confusion especially since the AR is slow, use normal spacing or just a more distinguishable spacing
01:25:274 (5) - finish on end, also no finish for 01:26:300 (1,4)?
01:40:915 (1) - 03:02:710 (3) - this section seems to be a copy paste and flip of the first section, so all suggestions above applies to the same occurrences in this section
03:08:864 (3) - add a finish since it is present in the music
03:10:915 (3) - ^
03:12:966 (3) - ^
03:17:069 (5) - ^
03:19:377 (7) - should have a NC here to represent the start of vocal hold
03:41:941 (1) - 04:14:505 (3) - this section is a mix of the second kiai and first kiai, so suggestions on the first kiai also applies here
04:19:633 (3) - add a finish
04:20:659 (6,3) - ^ on start
04:24:312 (2) - this should be snapped like this, but i actually suggest you just swap the whole thing for a spinner since this is a Normal diff:
[Azmato's Hard]
try to snap some notes on grid level 4, makes spacing alot cleaner
00:23:992 (1,2,3,4) - is that slight decrease in spacing intentional?
00:41:941 (3) - a clap or finish here would sound pretty nice
01:13:992 (7) - this curve is a bit anti flow since you need to jump the opposite direction onto 01:14:505 (1), try something like this: 01:24:248 (4) - try not to overlap this too much under 01:24:248 (4), you can try a curve on 01:23:479 (3) to blanket this instead
01:40:402 (1) - need a NC on this note since it is after a spinner
01:42:966 (6) - NC here to prevent large combo counts
02:07:582 (6) - NC should be here instead of 02:07:838 (1), the two colour approach circle in stack doesnt look right
02:16:556 (6) - clap should be on the end of 02:15:530 (5)
02:18:351 (2) - starting here up till the kiai you missed the clap on every 2nd white tick, please add them to keep consistent with the first part of the map
02:38:351 (2) - do the NC here instead of 02:38:095 (1), since you made a jump on 02:38:095 (1,2) which should use a NC indicator
02:58:607 (1,2,3) - why suddenly place it like this? it flows better if you start it on the top instead: 03:15:146 - can add a note here to follow your usual triplet patterns on vocal changes
04:03:479 (3,4,5) - the overlap here doesnt look very pleasing, it will be cool if you can make 04:03:479 (3) blanket around the start of 04:04:505 (5)
04:10:659 (8) - forgot a finish on start
04:19:633 (8) - ^
04:20:659 (1) - unsnapped green sections starting here, please snap them correctly (-8ms)
[Sakura]
a lot of unsnapped green lines in this diff, basically all the green lines in the first 30s of the song and the last 2 green lines on the timeline needs to be resnapped
00:16:043 (4) - move this so it doesnt partially overlap 00:14:761 (1)
00:24:761 (8) - take off the clap and place it on the end of 00:23:992 (7) instead, thats where its heard in the music
00:39:120 (1,2,3) - spacing on this triplet can be made better
00:42:966 (7) - try this rhythm here, will correspond with 00:42:454 (4,5,6) better: 01:00:659 (2) - stack this on where 00:58:864 (5) was
01:16:300 (1) - center this on the y-axis so the stream remains vertical
01:25:018 (5) - forgot a clap here
01:27:069 (6) - ^
01:40:402 (1) - no need to do a second NC here, 01:40:146 (1,1) plays just like a jump combo which is great with just one colour
01:49:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - arrange the combo like this plays better imo: 02:04:761 (4) - take off the clap and put it on 02:05:018 (5) instead
02:28:607 (4) - this place has a drum roll too, so map it like 02:28:095 (1,2,3)
02:34:248 (2) - move this a bit up to prevent overlap with 02:33:223 (4)
02:43:992 (6) - forgot clap on start
02:45:018 (2) - clap
02:55:274 (6) - ^
02:59:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - the overmaped stream plays really weird here, since the music is rather quiet in this section; consider using 1/2 rhythm instead
03:06:300 (1,2,3) - you can use a stream here instead, there are drums here
03:14:248 (3) - start the stream here, offbeat streams are hard to hit already, and there are no 1/4s at your original start point anyways
03:18:864 (6) - use a note here and start the repeat slider at 03:19:377 instead, fits the music better imo
03:35:787 (1) - the spinner finish is way too loud, lower the volume to ~70%
03:52:197 (3,4,5,6) - don't do consecutive finishes like that, since your custom finish plays for quite a bit of time the echo effect this creates is really disturbing to gameplay
03:55:787 (9) - forgot clap on start
04:11:684 (3,4,5,6,7) - again, stream doesnt fit really well here, and the large spacing just makes it play really awkwardly aganist the music
04:15:018 (2) - clap on end
Probably the longest mod i have written, though i have to say the maps are not bad, just need to get more consistency on hitsounding NC spacing and such
Good luck on ranking~
this song brings back some k-on memories xD
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
kiai times are inconsistent in your own diffs, please fix them
also try to bump up the volume during kiai times, use something like 80% since the soft hitsounds are already pretty quiet against the song
[Easy]
do tick rate 2 like the other diffs, gives more feed back to the song since you used a lot of long sliders, also makes more sense with your use of HP3
00:06:556 (3) - take finish off the end, the finish plays at 00:08:351 in the music which is a bit before the hitsound plays
00:09:633 (4) - this one should have the finish on the end instead, thats where the finish is in the music
00:10:659 (1) - add finish on start as its in the music
00:20:402 (4) - forgot a clap on the start
00:43:479 (3) - add a NC here to mark the start of a new verse
00:57:838 (3,4,5,6) - watch for spacing here, recommend you use a smaller grid snap (press "g" to change grid size)
00:59:889 (1) - finish on start as it is in the music
01:10:146 (1) - ^
01:24:505 (3) - should have a NC here to mark the new verse, also add finish on start
01:31:684 (3) - forgot a clap on the repeat
01:50:659 (4) - do a more proper blanket on 01:49:120 (3)
01:54:761 (2) - another spot for spacing improvements
02:13:736 (3) - NC for new verse
02:18:351 (3) - add a clap here, its heard in the music
02:23:992 (2) - finish on start
02:25:530 (3,1) - do not do this on an Easy, players will not expect such an extreme jump pop out of nowhere; use 0.9x spacing like you always did
02:30:146 (1) - finish on start
02:42:454 (3) - ^
02:46:556 (1,2) - these two would play more nicely if they had the same curve (ctrl+cv and flip)
02:54:761 (3,5) - finish on start, and add NC for new verse
02:58:351 (1) - forgot clap
03:01:941 (2) - ^ on repeat
03:12:454 (1,3) - clap on end
03:50:146 (3,1,3) - finish on start
03:54:248 (3,4) - clap on end
03:56:300 (1) - finish on start and end
03:58:351 (1,2) - again, symmetrical sliders would play well here
04:06:556 (3) - NC for new verse
04:08:607 (5) - finish on start
04:15:274 (4) - NC should be on this note, also forgot clap here
04:22:197 (1) - a finish for the spinner would sound nice
a lot of missing hitsounds in the diff, im sure i didnt catch all of them so you should check it over yourself (2/4 claps, add finishes when heard in music, etc.)
[Soar's Normal]
instead of using so many finishes on the 3rd white tick, how bout swap them for whistles instead? sounds a lot nicer imo
00:14:761 (4,2) - use 3 point algorithm for these sliders, right now they look asymmetrical with the 4 point
00:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap is a bit harder to read with this AR, suggest you to remove the stack or change the direction of the repeat on 00:22:710 (1) for less confusion
00:39:120 (1,2,3) - a triplet in Normal? not a good idea >< either delete 00:39:248 (2) or use a short slider for 00:39:120 (1,2)
01:08:095 (2) - missing a finish on the end
01:09:889 (2,3,4) - again, prevent using 1/4 circles in a Normal diff
01:14:505 (5) - break this up into 2 repeat sliders, its currently hard to predict how many repeats it has
01:21:428 (4,1) - the spacing change here may cause some confusion especially since the AR is slow, use normal spacing or just a more distinguishable spacing
01:25:274 (5) - finish on end, also no finish for 01:26:300 (1,4)?
01:40:915 (1) - 03:02:710 (3) - this section seems to be a copy paste and flip of the first section, so all suggestions above applies to the same occurrences in this section
03:08:864 (3) - add a finish since it is present in the music
03:10:915 (3) - ^
03:12:966 (3) - ^
03:17:069 (5) - ^
03:19:377 (7) - should have a NC here to represent the start of vocal hold
03:41:941 (1) - 04:14:505 (3) - this section is a mix of the second kiai and first kiai, so suggestions on the first kiai also applies here
04:19:633 (3) - add a finish
04:20:659 (6,3) - ^ on start
04:24:312 (2) - this should be snapped like this, but i actually suggest you just swap the whole thing for a spinner since this is a Normal diff:
[Azmato's Hard]
try to snap some notes on grid level 4, makes spacing alot cleaner
00:23:992 (1,2,3,4) - is that slight decrease in spacing intentional?
00:41:941 (3) - a clap or finish here would sound pretty nice
01:13:992 (7) - this curve is a bit anti flow since you need to jump the opposite direction onto 01:14:505 (1), try something like this: 01:24:248 (4) - try not to overlap this too much under 01:24:248 (4), you can try a curve on 01:23:479 (3) to blanket this instead
01:40:402 (1) - need a NC on this note since it is after a spinner
01:42:966 (6) - NC here to prevent large combo counts
02:07:582 (6) - NC should be here instead of 02:07:838 (1), the two colour approach circle in stack doesnt look right
02:16:556 (6) - clap should be on the end of 02:15:530 (5)
02:18:351 (2) - starting here up till the kiai you missed the clap on every 2nd white tick, please add them to keep consistent with the first part of the map
02:38:351 (2) - do the NC here instead of 02:38:095 (1), since you made a jump on 02:38:095 (1,2) which should use a NC indicator
02:58:607 (1,2,3) - why suddenly place it like this? it flows better if you start it on the top instead: 03:15:146 - can add a note here to follow your usual triplet patterns on vocal changes
04:03:479 (3,4,5) - the overlap here doesnt look very pleasing, it will be cool if you can make 04:03:479 (3) blanket around the start of 04:04:505 (5)
04:10:659 (8) - forgot a finish on start
04:19:633 (8) - ^
04:20:659 (1) - unsnapped green sections starting here, please snap them correctly (-8ms)
[Sakura]
a lot of unsnapped green lines in this diff, basically all the green lines in the first 30s of the song and the last 2 green lines on the timeline needs to be resnapped
00:16:043 (4) - move this so it doesnt partially overlap 00:14:761 (1)
00:24:761 (8) - take off the clap and place it on the end of 00:23:992 (7) instead, thats where its heard in the music
00:39:120 (1,2,3) - spacing on this triplet can be made better
00:42:966 (7) - try this rhythm here, will correspond with 00:42:454 (4,5,6) better: 01:00:659 (2) - stack this on where 00:58:864 (5) was
01:16:300 (1) - center this on the y-axis so the stream remains vertical
01:25:018 (5) - forgot a clap here
01:27:069 (6) - ^
01:40:402 (1) - no need to do a second NC here, 01:40:146 (1,1) plays just like a jump combo which is great with just one colour
01:49:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - arrange the combo like this plays better imo: 02:04:761 (4) - take off the clap and put it on 02:05:018 (5) instead
02:28:607 (4) - this place has a drum roll too, so map it like 02:28:095 (1,2,3)
02:34:248 (2) - move this a bit up to prevent overlap with 02:33:223 (4)
02:43:992 (6) - forgot clap on start
02:45:018 (2) - clap
02:55:274 (6) - ^
02:59:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - the overmaped stream plays really weird here, since the music is rather quiet in this section; consider using 1/2 rhythm instead
03:06:300 (1,2,3) - you can use a stream here instead, there are drums here
03:14:248 (3) - start the stream here, offbeat streams are hard to hit already, and there are no 1/4s at your original start point anyways
03:18:864 (6) - use a note here and start the repeat slider at 03:19:377 instead, fits the music better imo
03:35:787 (1) - the spinner finish is way too loud, lower the volume to ~70%
03:52:197 (3,4,5,6) - don't do consecutive finishes like that, since your custom finish plays for quite a bit of time the echo effect this creates is really disturbing to gameplay
03:55:787 (9) - forgot clap on start
04:11:684 (3,4,5,6,7) - again, stream doesnt fit really well here, and the large spacing just makes it play really awkwardly aganist the music
04:15:018 (2) - clap on end
Probably the longest mod i have written, though i have to say the maps are not bad, just need to get more consistency on hitsounding NC spacing and such
Good luck on ranking~
Easy:
-- 이지 치곤 슬라 속도가 너무 빠른 느낌입니다.
00:39:377 (4) - 끝의 피니시 제거
00:43:479 (3) - 뉴콤
00:58:864 (5,6) - 간격.
01:08:095 (3) - 1/2 줄여서 음악에 맞춰주세요
01:10:146 (1) - ^
01:24:505 (3) - ^
01:26:556 (5) - ^
01:42:966 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제
02:09:120 (3) - 간격
02:13:736 (3) - 뉴콤
02:17:325 (1) - 간격
02:25:530 (3,1) - 수정해주세요
02:29:633 (6,1) - 간격
02:38:351 (3,1) - 1/2 줄여주세요
02:54:761 (3,5) - ^
02:54:761 (3) - 뉴콤
02:58:351 (1) - 클랩
03:03:479 - 체력 부담 있으니 브레이크를 넣어주세요
04:06:556 (3) - 뉴콤
03:50:146 (3,1) - 1/2 줄여주세요
04:06:556 (3,5) - ^
Soar's Normal:
00:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - 좁은 공간에 오밀조밀 모여있어서 읽기 힘들거 같다는 개인적 의견입니다.
00:23:992 (5) - 시작의 피니시 제거
00:29:120 (3) - 리버스의 클랩 제거
00:39:120 (1,2) - 헐 노말에서는 연타 쓰는게 아닙니다
01:04:761 (3) - 패턴상 피니시는 시작이 아닌 끝에 가야 하지만, 이왕이면 피니시는 소리나는 곳에만 넣는게 좋으실거 같아요
01:06:812 (3) - ^
01:08:095 (2) - 끝에 피니시 넣어주세요
01:09:889 (2,3) - 연타 out
01:14:505 (5) - 잡기 어려운 엇박자니까 뉴콤 넣어주세요
01:17:325 (3,1) - 간격 바로잡아주세요. 노말에서 안티점프는 헷갈립니다.
01:21:428 (4,1) - ^
01:26:300 (1) - 끝에 피니시
01:27:325 (4) - 피니시
01:29:633 (2,3) - (2)를 리버스 있는 3/4 슬라이더로 바꾸는게 음악에 더 잘 맞을거라고 생각합니다.
복붙 부분 알아서 찾아주세요~
03:17:069 (5) - 피니시
03:19:377 (7) - 뉴콤
음 키아이 복붙도 알아서 공통되는거 고쳐주세요. 그나저나 두번이나 복붙하는건 좀 뭐하니 마지막 키아이 만큼은 새로 만드는게 나을거 같아요
03:52:197 (4) - 두번째 리버스 피니시 제거
04:07:325 (5) - 피니시
04:16:556 (1) - 끝의 피니시 제거
04:19:633 (3) - 피니시
04:20:659 (6) - 시작에 피니시
04:22:710 (3) - ^
04:23:992 (1) - 피니시 제거
04:25:530 - 노트 대신 스핀 넣는게 나을듯 합니다.
좀 노말 치곤 어려워 보이네요
Azmato's Hard:
00:53:479 (4) - 간격.
00:53:736 (5,1) - 어색한 점프 같습니다.
01:24:248 (4) - 간격
01:45:018 (1) - 간격
01:57:069 (1) - 점프 좀 헷갈리니까 없는게 나을듯 하네요.
02:15:018 (3) - 간격 변화가 생기니 뉴콤해주세요.
02:16:556 (6) - 클랩 제거
02:21:428 (6,7) - 어색한 점프 같습니다.
02:25:530 (9,1) - ^
02:33:479 (8) - 뉴콤
03:10:659 (2) - 1칸 아래
03:51:941 (5) - 뉴콤
04:10:402 (7) - ^
04:18:864 (6) - ^
04:19:633 (3) - 시작에 피니시
간격들이 좀 난잡해 보입니다. 또한 0.9x나 그 이하의 스페이싱을 사용하는 부분에서 노트들이 이전의 것과 겹치는 현상이 보여져서 별로 좋아보이지 못했어요. 이왕이면 1.1x를 간격으로 해서 리매핑하시는걸 추천합니다. 인세인과 난이도 차이도 좀 많이 크고요.
Sakura:
00:08:351 (3) - 음량 조절 부탁해요. 틱이 너무 시끄럽습니다.
00:39:248 (2) - 간격
00:46:300 (7) - 스택 보다는 다른 곳에 놓는게 나을거 같아요.
00:48:607 (4,5) - 좋지 못한 점프같습니다.
00:58:864 (5,6) - 이거도요. 도무지 칠수 있을거 같지가 않네요. ㅇㅅㅇ,, (5)에는 뉴콤을 하는게 좋을듯 하네요
01:02:710 (6,1,2) - 뉴콤은 (2) 부터 하시고, (6,1) 대신 (1,2)에 점프 넣는게 가사에 맞아서 더 어울릴 겁니다.
01:40:402 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요. 점프 읽기가 조금 어렵거든요.
01:51:684 (3) - 음,, (4)보다 아래/왼쪽 쯤에 놓는게 동선이 나을듯요
02:29:120 (5) - 뉴콤?
03:09:889 (2) - ctrl+G가 다음 노트 흐름에 나을듯요
03:18:864 (6) - 좀 음악과 이질적인 느낌이 나네요. 작은 변화지만 슬라이더는 03:19:377 부터 시작하는게 나을거라고 생각합니다.
03:21:684 - 여기부터의 점프 좀 지나치게 시끄럽습니다.
03:23:479 (8) - 03:21:428 (1) 위치에 놓고 뉴콤 하신 다음에 피니시 넣는게 더 좋을거 같아요.
03:41:171 (1,2,3) - ctrl+H가 나을거 같습니다. 무리해서 03:41:941 (1)와 이상한 점프를 만들 필요는 없을거 같습니다.
03:44:761 (6,1) - 앞의 동일한 부분과 같은 의견.
04:20:659 (3) - 끝 노트는 음소거 처리하는게 나을거 같습니다.
-- 이지 치곤 슬라 속도가 너무 빠른 느낌입니다.
00:39:377 (4) - 끝의 피니시 제거
00:43:479 (3) - 뉴콤
00:58:864 (5,6) - 간격.
01:08:095 (3) - 1/2 줄여서 음악에 맞춰주세요
01:10:146 (1) - ^
01:24:505 (3) - ^
01:26:556 (5) - ^
01:42:966 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제
02:09:120 (3) - 간격
02:13:736 (3) - 뉴콤
02:17:325 (1) - 간격
02:25:530 (3,1) - 수정해주세요
02:29:633 (6,1) - 간격
02:38:351 (3,1) - 1/2 줄여주세요
02:54:761 (3,5) - ^
02:54:761 (3) - 뉴콤
02:58:351 (1) - 클랩
03:03:479 - 체력 부담 있으니 브레이크를 넣어주세요
04:06:556 (3) - 뉴콤
03:50:146 (3,1) - 1/2 줄여주세요
04:06:556 (3,5) - ^
Soar's Normal:
00:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - 좁은 공간에 오밀조밀 모여있어서 읽기 힘들거 같다는 개인적 의견입니다.
00:23:992 (5) - 시작의 피니시 제거
00:29:120 (3) - 리버스의 클랩 제거
00:39:120 (1,2) - 헐 노말에서는 연타 쓰는게 아닙니다
01:04:761 (3) - 패턴상 피니시는 시작이 아닌 끝에 가야 하지만, 이왕이면 피니시는 소리나는 곳에만 넣는게 좋으실거 같아요
01:06:812 (3) - ^
01:08:095 (2) - 끝에 피니시 넣어주세요
01:09:889 (2,3) - 연타 out
01:14:505 (5) - 잡기 어려운 엇박자니까 뉴콤 넣어주세요
01:17:325 (3,1) - 간격 바로잡아주세요. 노말에서 안티점프는 헷갈립니다.
01:21:428 (4,1) - ^
01:26:300 (1) - 끝에 피니시
01:27:325 (4) - 피니시
01:29:633 (2,3) - (2)를 리버스 있는 3/4 슬라이더로 바꾸는게 음악에 더 잘 맞을거라고 생각합니다.
복붙 부분 알아서 찾아주세요~
03:17:069 (5) - 피니시
03:19:377 (7) - 뉴콤
음 키아이 복붙도 알아서 공통되는거 고쳐주세요. 그나저나 두번이나 복붙하는건 좀 뭐하니 마지막 키아이 만큼은 새로 만드는게 나을거 같아요
03:52:197 (4) - 두번째 리버스 피니시 제거
04:07:325 (5) - 피니시
04:16:556 (1) - 끝의 피니시 제거
04:19:633 (3) - 피니시
04:20:659 (6) - 시작에 피니시
04:22:710 (3) - ^
04:23:992 (1) - 피니시 제거
04:25:530 - 노트 대신 스핀 넣는게 나을듯 합니다.
좀 노말 치곤 어려워 보이네요
Azmato's Hard:
00:53:479 (4) - 간격.
00:53:736 (5,1) - 어색한 점프 같습니다.
01:24:248 (4) - 간격
01:45:018 (1) - 간격
01:57:069 (1) - 점프 좀 헷갈리니까 없는게 나을듯 하네요.
02:15:018 (3) - 간격 변화가 생기니 뉴콤해주세요.
02:16:556 (6) - 클랩 제거
02:21:428 (6,7) - 어색한 점프 같습니다.
02:25:530 (9,1) - ^
02:33:479 (8) - 뉴콤
03:10:659 (2) - 1칸 아래
03:51:941 (5) - 뉴콤
04:10:402 (7) - ^
04:18:864 (6) - ^
04:19:633 (3) - 시작에 피니시
간격들이 좀 난잡해 보입니다. 또한 0.9x나 그 이하의 스페이싱을 사용하는 부분에서 노트들이 이전의 것과 겹치는 현상이 보여져서 별로 좋아보이지 못했어요. 이왕이면 1.1x를 간격으로 해서 리매핑하시는걸 추천합니다. 인세인과 난이도 차이도 좀 많이 크고요.
Sakura:
00:08:351 (3) - 음량 조절 부탁해요. 틱이 너무 시끄럽습니다.
00:39:248 (2) - 간격
00:46:300 (7) - 스택 보다는 다른 곳에 놓는게 나을거 같아요.
00:48:607 (4,5) - 좋지 못한 점프같습니다.
00:58:864 (5,6) - 이거도요. 도무지 칠수 있을거 같지가 않네요. ㅇㅅㅇ,, (5)에는 뉴콤을 하는게 좋을듯 하네요
01:02:710 (6,1,2) - 뉴콤은 (2) 부터 하시고, (6,1) 대신 (1,2)에 점프 넣는게 가사에 맞아서 더 어울릴 겁니다.
01:40:402 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요. 점프 읽기가 조금 어렵거든요.
01:51:684 (3) - 음,, (4)보다 아래/왼쪽 쯤에 놓는게 동선이 나을듯요
02:29:120 (5) - 뉴콤?
03:09:889 (2) - ctrl+G가 다음 노트 흐름에 나을듯요
03:18:864 (6) - 좀 음악과 이질적인 느낌이 나네요. 작은 변화지만 슬라이더는 03:19:377 부터 시작하는게 나을거라고 생각합니다.
03:21:684 - 여기부터의 점프 좀 지나치게 시끄럽습니다.
03:23:479 (8) - 03:21:428 (1) 위치에 놓고 뉴콤 하신 다음에 피니시 넣는게 더 좋을거 같아요.
03:41:171 (1,2,3) - ctrl+H가 나을거 같습니다. 무리해서 03:41:941 (1)와 이상한 점프를 만들 필요는 없을거 같습니다.
03:44:761 (6,1) - 앞의 동일한 부분과 같은 의견.
04:20:659 (3) - 끝 노트는 음소거 처리하는게 나을거 같습니다.
Thanks for moddingjonathanlfj wrote:
From my birthday queue~
this song brings back some k-on memories xD
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[Soar's Normal]
instead of using so many finishes on the 3rd white tick, how bout swap them for whistles instead? sounds a lot nicer imo O
00:14:761 (4,2) - use 3 point algorithm for these sliders, right now they look asymmetrical with the 4 point O
00:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap is a bit harder to read with this AR, suggest you to remove the stack or change the direction of the repeat on 00:22:710 (1) for less confusion O-change the direction
00:39:120 (1,2,3) - a triplet in Normal? not a good idea >< either delete 00:39:248 (2) or use a short slider for 00:39:120 (1,2)O - delete a note
01:08:095 (2) - missing a finish on the end O
01:09:889 (2,3,4) - again, prevent using 1/4 circles in a Normal diff O
01:14:505 (5) - break this up into 2 repeat sliders, its currently hard to predict how many repeats it has O
01:21:428 (4,1) - the spacing change here may cause some confusion especially since the AR is slow, use normal spacing or just a more distinguishable spacing O
01:25:274 (5) - finish on end, also no finish for 01:26:300 (1,4)? O
01:40:915 (1) - 03:02:710 (3) - this section seems to be a copy paste and flip of the first section, so all suggestions above applies to the same occurrences in this section O
03:08:864 (3) - add a finish since it is present in the music O
03:10:915 (3) - ^ O
03:12:966 (3) - ^ O
03:17:069 (5) - ^ O
03:19:377 (7) - should have a NC here to represent the start of vocal hold O
03:41:941 (1) - 04:14:505 (3) - this section is a mix of the second kiai and first kiai, so suggestions on the first kiai also applies here
I remap this part
04:19:633 (3) - add a finish O
04:20:659 (6,3) - ^ on start O
04:24:312 (2) - this should be snapped like this, but i actually suggest you just swap the whole thing for a spinner since this is a Normal diff: O- add spin
Probably the longest mod i have written, though i have to say the maps are not bad, just need to get more consistency on hitsounding NC spacing and such
Good luck on ranking~
모딩해주셔서 감사합니다Sonnyc wrote:
Soar's Normal:
00:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - 좁은 공간에 오밀조밀 모여있어서 읽기 힘들거 같다는 개인적 의견입니다. O
00:23:992 (5) - 시작의 피니시 제거 O
00:29:120 (3) - 리버스의 클랩 제거 O
00:39:120 (1,2) - 헐 노말에서는 연타 쓰는게 아닙니다 O
01:04:761 (3) - 패턴상 피니시는 시작이 아닌 끝에 가야 하지만, 이왕이면 피니시는 소리나는 곳에만 넣는게 좋으실거 같아요 O
01:06:812 (3) - ^ O
01:08:095 (2) - 끝에 피니시 넣어주세요 O
01:09:889 (2,3) - 연타 out O
01:14:505 (5) - 잡기 어려운 엇박자니까 뉴콤 넣어주세요 O
01:17:325 (3,1) - 간격 바로잡아주세요. 노말에서 안티점프는 헷갈립니다. O
01:21:428 (4,1) - ^ O
01:26:300 (1) - 끝에 피니시 O
01:27:325 (4) - 피니시 O
01:29:633 (2,3) - (2)를 리버스 있는 3/4 슬라이더로 바꾸는게 음악에 더 잘 맞을거라고 생각합니다. 고민해봤는데 그냥놔두는게 좋은거 같습니다
복붙 부분 알아서 찾아주세요~ O
03:17:069 (5) - 피니시 O
03:19:377 (7) - 뉴콤 O
음 키아이 복붙도 알아서 공통되는거 고쳐주세요. 그나저나 두번이나 복붙하는건 좀 뭐하니 마지막 키아이 만큼은 새로 만드는게 나을거 같아요 O
03:52:197 (4) - 두번째 리버스 피니시 제거 O
04:07:325 (5) - 피니시 O
04:16:556 (1) - 끝의 피니시 제거 O
04:19:633 (3) - 피니시 O
04:20:659 (6) - 시작에 피니시 O
04:22:710 (3) - ^ O
04:23:992 (1) - 피니시 제거 O
04:25:530 - 노트 대신 스핀 넣는게 나을듯 합니다. O
좀 노말 치곤 어려워 보이네요 공감하긴하는데 노트빼기가 뭐해서 ar 하고 od 1씩낮췄습니다
http://puu.sh/3Z24L
Azmato
SPOILER
All O Thanksjonathanlfj wrote:
[Azmato's Hard]
try to snap some notes on grid level 4, makes spacing alot cleaner
00:23:992 (1,2,3,4) - is that slight decrease in spacing intentional?
00:41:941 (3) - a clap or finish here would sound pretty nice
01:13:992 (7) - this curve is a bit anti flow since you need to jump the opposite direction onto 01:14:505 (1), try something like this:
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01:24:248 (4) - try not to overlap this too much under 01:24:248 (4), you can try a curve on 01:23:479 (3) to blanket this instead
01:40:402 (1) - need a NC on this note since it is after a spinner
01:42:966 (6) - NC here to prevent large combo counts
02:07:582 (6) - NC should be here instead of 02:07:838 (1), the two colour approach circle in stack doesnt look right
02:16:556 (6) - clap should be on the end of 02:15:530 (5)
02:18:351 (2) - starting here up till the kiai you missed the clap on every 2nd white tick, please add them to keep consistent with the first part of the map
02:38:351 (2) - do the NC here instead of 02:38:095 (1), since you made a jump on 02:38:095 (1,2) which should use a NC indicator
02:58:607 (1,2,3) - why suddenly place it like this? it flows better if you start it on the top instead:
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03:15:146 - can add a note here to follow your usual triplet patterns on vocal changes
04:03:479 (3,4,5) - the overlap here doesnt look very pleasing, it will be cool if you can make 04:03:479 (3) blanket around the start of 04:04:505 (5)
04:10:659 (8) - forgot a finish on start
04:19:633 (8) - ^
04:20:659 (1) - unsnapped green sections starting here, please snap them correctly (-8ms)
All O 스페이싱 1.0으로 전부 바꿧습니다. 감사합니다. ThanksSoar wrote:
Azmato's Hard:
00:53:479 (4) - 간격.
00:53:736 (5,1) - 어색한 점프 같습니다.
01:24:248 (4) - 간격
01:45:018 (1) - 간격
01:57:069 (1) - 점프 좀 헷갈리니까 없는게 나을듯 하네요.
02:15:018 (3) - 간격 변화가 생기니 뉴콤해주세요.
02:16:556 (6) - 클랩 제거
02:21:428 (6,7) - 어색한 점프 같습니다.
02:25:530 (9,1) - ^
02:33:479 (8) - 뉴콤
03:10:659 (2) - 1칸 아래
03:51:941 (5) - 뉴콤
04:10:402 (7) - ^
04:18:864 (6) - ^
04:19:633 (3) - 시작에 피니시
간격들이 좀 난잡해 보입니다. 또한 0.9x나 그 이하의 스페이싱을 사용하는 부분에서 노트들이 이전의 것과 겹치는 현상이 보여져서 별로 좋아보이지 못했어요. 이왕이면 1.1x를 간격으로 해서 리매핑하시는걸 추천합니다. 인세인과 난이도 차이도 좀 많이 크고요.
http://puu.sh/40WuL.zip
Topic Starter
Startrick wrote:
Azmato님이랑 M4M으로 왔는데 경험이 없어서...
[Sakura]
03:21:556 부터 03:23:479 까지 스피너 넣으시는건 어때요?
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