1. Easy (0.76 stars, 154 notes)
2. Hard (4.92 stars, 514 notes)
3. Normal (3.35 stars, 292 notes)

Mintice wrote:

Hi, from Mintice's M4M Queue :3
UNRANKABLE, Strong suggestion, Just suggestion

General

00:25:751 (0) Unconsistency in bookmark timing. Is it really necessary? It isn't used in gameplay afterall...
03:49:091 (0) How about new kiai here for fountain? No, i don't really like kiai spam, sorry 'bout that

Easy

OD -1 because this song is kind of slow, therefore starters won't get the exact timing when to click. Got this idea from my little sister you mean AR right?
00:32:193 (1) This is not symmetric. Please, make sure to ctrl+H often to prevent unsymmetric sliders. done
00:47:575 (1) How about removing third point? done
01:34:492 (2) Second point to (400,44) done
02:13:334 (1) Second point to (192,264) done

Normal

HP -1, OD -1, AR -1. Difficulty settings are too high for normal IMO. done
So perfect!

Hard

AR -1 i guess...
00:49:883 (7) In test play, I didn't expect that this was 3/4 beat long slider and got slider miss. Not a big problem for pros, but when it comes to hard-starters like me, it becomes serious problem. Especially when DoubleTimed. It follows the music nicely, I don't think it's a problem
01:02:574 (2) It's not hard to read, but sudden anti-jump(?) is too hard for hard not hard to read but too hard to read? There are other jumps in this map that are harder to read than this one
02:04:104 (3) Not symmetric.done

Sorry for being too short, I hope you like this mod!

• 
  01:03:727 (1) - Move to x:232 y:80 (just a detail, I know)
  01:52:183 (1,2) - Don't overlap like this, it's [Easy] after all

• 
  00:37:577 (3,4) - Unstack, it's not recommended to stack in normals
  00:46:422 (2,3) - ^
  01:52:567 (1,2,3) - Unrankable
  01:54:105 (4,5,6) - ^
  02:23:332 (2,3) - ^
  02:17:948 (2,3,4) - Try not to do such patterns in normals`
  03:04:096 (2,3,4) - Unstack
  03:47:937 (2,3) - ^

• 
  01:35:646 (5) - Reverse(Ctrl-G)
  02:17:179 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too difficult for hard
  02:18:717 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  02:49:675 (2,3) - Sounds bad

Loki-san wrote:

hi, from my M4M queue

EASY
00:32:193 (1) - , In easy, don't stack. Move it in where else.k
03:20:633 (2) - is similar with 03:20:633 (2) - i don't get it, maybe you mean with (1) slider?

NORMAL
01:12:188 (1) - NC cool
02:04:489 (5) - Add circle k
02:23:332 (2,3) - Not nice. Move to where else moved
02:44:484 (6) - ^ i'll keep it this way
02:56:790 (6) - ^ ^
Hard
01:10:649 (1,2) - Not nice changed to slider

MFZ wrote:

Easy

• 
  01:03:727 (1) - Move to x:232 y:80 (just a detail, I know) k
  01:52:183 (1,2) - Don't overlap like this, it's [Easy] after all changed the shape, works for you?

Normal

• 
  00:37:577 (3,4) - Unstack, it's not recommended to stack in normals unstacked
  00:46:422 (2,3) - ^ it's a minor stack, i don't think it's much of a problem
  01:52:567 (1,2,3) - Unrankable how is this unrankable? changed anyway
  01:54:105 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
  02:23:332 (2,3) - ^ ^
  02:17:948 (2,3,4) - Try not to do such patterns in normals`well there are other patterns like this in this map so...
  03:04:096 (2,3,4) - Unstack done
  03:47:937 (2,3) - ^ sorry, can't do this one

Hard

• 
  01:35:646 (5) - Reverse(Ctrl-G) doesn't seem too hard to play on 'hard'
  02:17:179 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too difficult for hard reduced the spacing, worked for you?
  02:18:717 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
  02:49:675 (2,3) - Sounds bad added a circle inbetween them

Edwee wrote:

Hello~

[General]
- Your BG is 800x600, recommended is 1024x768. it's maximum recommended, 800x600 is pretty much a standard CRT resolution
- Delete "esti from tags in ALL diffs, because it's already in the title. oh right, thx

[Easy]
- 4 minutes of playing and one little break? It's kinda hard for beginners. couldn't find anywhere to put some breaks, besides, it's a pretty slow map
- I haven't heard any hitsounds. They should give players the rhythm of this map. there are hitsounds, just pretty soft
- 01:02:189 (5) - NC i don't see it very fitting
- 01:03:727 (1) - reNC ^
- 01:52:183 (1,2) - Overlap no, too hard for beginners, not very fit with the song either

[Normal]
- 4 minutes of playing and one little break? It's kinda hard for beginners. same as [Easy]
- I haven't heard any hitsounds. They should give players the rhythm of this map. ^
- 00:29:116 (1) - reNC naw, NC every2 measures at the slow part
- 00:37:577 (3,4) - Overlap what? unstacked. I'm not really sure what you meant
- 00:46:422 (2,3) - ^ minor stack, won't change
- 01:08:342 (1) - NC
- 01:09:496 (2) - reNC
- 01:43:338 (1) - reNC i'd like to keep the combos short on normal
- 01:45:645 (5) - NC
- 01:46:414 (1) - reNC
- 01:52:567 (1,2,3) - Overlap moved
- 01:54:105 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
- 02:22:563 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
- 02:32:754 (1) - not in rhythm it follows the the music
- 02:43:714 (5,6) - overlap
- 02:56:790 (6) - Overlap
- 03:04:096 (2,3,4) - overlap
- 03:47:937 (2,3) - overlap
Overlaps are difficult to read for beginners. It's Normal difficulty, they should at least have some basic knowledge when hitting a normal difficulty, none of the stacks are that hard either

[Hard]
- OD-1 sorry, won't go lower
- AR-1 AR 6 is terribad
- I haven't heard any hitsounds. They should give players the rhythm of this map. same as other diff
- 01:07:381 (5) - Hard to read this overlap. agree
- 01:35:069 - Add a note here pretty silent over there
- 02:50:060 (3,4,5) - not with rhythm It follows the song
- 02:55:828 (2,3,4) - strange placing, but it is tolerable which also gives me some idea, thanks for pointing that one out
- Do less triplexes, quite difficult to read on hard. It's the hardest difficulty and i'd like for it to follow the music

Xinely wrote:

from my queue ~
krn orang indo, pke bahasa indo aja deh

[General]
d kasih soft-sliderslide aja? lbh enak imo http://puu.sh/2Lkhr.rar thx

[Easy]
AR+1?
00:40:653 (2) - spacing 0,90x nya? spacing normal kan 0,80x >_< k
00:47:575 (1) - dipanjangin smpe 00:49:114 - ? k
01:00:651 (3) - x:168 y:260 trus 01:01:420 (4) - x:276 y:328 biar lurus sama ekornya 00:59:112 (2) - k
01:02:189 (5) - klo ikut saran d atas, x:360 y:232 biar jaraknya sama jarak apanya sama?
01:11:419 (2) - d buat kea gni? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/733957 gw betulin sendiri, mungkin agak nggak sesuai
01:15:264 (1) - ctrl+H buat flow better sih.. klo iya, fix spacing note berikutnya yaa k
01:21:417 (1) - ctrl+J biar flow nya lbh enak? k
01:27:570 (1) - x:424 y:124 biar lurus sama 01:26:032 (2) - . klo iya, fix spacing 0.86x nya yaa k
01:30:647 (1) - ctrl+H biar flow nya lbh enak? k
01:39:876 (1) - melengkungnya sama kyk 01:38:338 (2) - . lebih enak d lihat imo k
01:43:722 (1) - x:212 y:132 biar lurus sama 01:42:184 (2) - ? klo iya, spacing 0,75x nya itu klo mw d fix jg gpp ~ k, fixd
01:52:183 (1) - 1 grid down? biar lurus sama 01:49:106 (1) - k
02:04:489 - finish? sengaja gw diemin disitu hitsoundnya
02:14:872 (1) - ctrl+H biar flow nya lbh enak? k
02:44:484 (3) - x:132 y:176 biar lurus diagonal? sengaja gak lurus diagonal
02:49:867 - whistle? k
02:52:175 (2) - bentuk slidernya d buat sama kyk 02:49:867 (2) - ? k
02:59:097 (2) - x:172 y:168 , klo iya fix spacing 0,74x nya yaaa sengaja gak garis lurus sama note sesudah dan sebelumnya
03:05:250 (3) - x:288 y:180? k
03:12:172 (1) - spacing issue 0,64x nya. bsa d pindah ke x:204 y:168 buat ngehindari issue nya k
03:20:633 (2) - spacing issue jg, pindahin ke x:156 y:144? k
03:46:783 (1) - x:156 y:276 biar lurus sama 03:45:245 (2) - x=256 kali maksudnya
03:52:359 - volume nya 5% aja. 0% itu unrankableo thx, ngeditnya pake build lama soalnya : p

[Normal]
00:35:269 (1) - x:444 y:220 biar lurus sama 00:34:500 (3) - k
00:57:574 (2) - spacing issue . 0,68x nya k
01:02:958 (1) - spacing 1,35x nya? solusi : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/734102 k
01:18:341 (4) - NC? k
01:30:262 (4) - x:224 y:228 buat hindari spacing issue d 01:30:647 (1) - k
01:38:723 (4) - 2 grid up eh, agak aneh menurut gw
01:39:492 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/734118 biar flow nya lbh enak? betulin pake cara gw sendiri
01:48:337 (3) - ctrl+H biar lbh enak? sengaja patternnya gitu
01:51:798 (3) - 1 grid down buat hindari spacing 0,74x k
01:53:721 (3) - 1,53x? jump X_X .. normal spacing aja. bukan hard jd gk bisa d ksh jump k
01:57:951 (3) - 2 grid right , 01:58:336 (4) - x:272 y:336 biar lurus diagonal sama kepala nya 01:56:797 (2) - k
02:04:489 - finish? k
02:14:872 (1) - remove NC biar konsisten k
02:13:334 (1) - ctrl+J biar lbh enak flow ny? k
02:24:102 (1) - remove NC biar konsisten k
02:31:024 (4) - spacing issue (0,87x k)
02:39:100 (2) - buat kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/734141 ? sengaja, 4 objek selanjutnya ngikutin 'punggung' slider ini
02:44:387 (6) - remove? kurang cocok imo , atau pindahin ke 02:44:484 - k
02:56:790 (6,1) - swap NC? kurang cocok menurut gw
02:58:328 (1) - whistle? soalnya d easy pke whistle k
03:25:633 (2) - x:164 y:232 patternnya agak bengkok emang
03:33:323 (5) - ctrl+J biar flow nya lbh enak? untuk yg ini gw kurang setuju, maaf
03:44:091 (4) - remove, copy 03:45:245 (6) - trus buat branket. kea http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/734160 *blanket
03:47:937 (2,3) - 1 grid down, biar spacing issue nya terhindari. msh agak d tengah lingkaran nya kok imo k
03:52:359 - volume nya 5% aja. 0% itu unrankable k
[Hard]
00:34:500 (4,5) - gmn kalo pattern nya gni? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735309 k
00:47:575 (1,2) - gmn kalo kea gni? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735320 k
00:50:652 (1) - x:256 y:276 buat hindari spacing 0.92x nya? k
01:08:534 (4) - ctrl+H biar flow nya lbh enak? sengaja kayak gini, nanti flow dengan note sebelumnya keganggu
01:13:726 (3) - ctrl+G lbh enak imo utk yg ini gw kurang setuju, sori
Hard nya bgus kok ~

Good Luck ya

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
* → Just comments, not mods
♥ → Greetings
Naked Lines → Mods

[easy]
♥ Nice diff ^^

00:29:116 (2) - Already good, but could be a bit better ^^ Just delete 00:29:116 (2), select 00:26:040 (1), Ctrl-C, go to 00:29:116, Ctrl-V, Ctrl-H, Ctrl-G.
* Here I feel I can't do nothing about spacing without destroying a nice pattern and I played it with no problem.
00:32:193 (1) - It's not too symmetric -- fix it by setting the 1st dot to x:204 y:64, the 2nd dot to x:256 y:4, the 3rd dot to x:308 y:64. Don't forget to disable Distance Snap temporarily in order to avoid surprises (:
00:38:346 (1) - Move the last dot (tail) to x:412 y:248 to fix spacing.
00:38:346 (1,2,1,2) - Good pattern that can be improved this way ► Move 00:41:422 (1) to x:188 y:124 and the last dot (tail) to x:60 y:284. ►Just after doing this: delete 00:38:346 (1), select 00:41:422 (1) Ctrl-C, go to 00:38:346, Ctrl-V, Ctrl-H and the set to x:312 y:68.
00:44:499 (1) - Move to x:316 y:316, fix spacing.
00:46:806 (2) - Move to x:332 y:120, fix spacing.
00:53:728 (1) - This part of the song seems more dynamic, then a better blanket is needed here. Make it ► Too many points! Eliminate two of them (among the middle ones). You'll need just three. Set 1st dot (head) to x:192 y:204, the 2nd dot (middle) to x:100 y:200 and the 3rd dot (tail) to x:69 y:286. → Beyond of blanket symmetry, niceness, neatness and so on, I feel the main reason here is because a blanket curve usually flows better than a very sharp turn where a bit more "velocity" makes its presence (Although the song is calm, I feel a more dynamical atmosphere here) -- and, like driving, very sharp turns are usually harder than suave or normal curves.
00:59:112 (2) - Move to x:224 y:144, then move the middle point to x:144 y:104 and the 3rd dot (tail) to x:77 y:168 better blanket and fix spacing.
01:14:495 (5,1) - Move both to x:400 y:328 and stack (5) with (1)'s head properly.
01:32:954 (2) - Move it 1 grid down, and...
01:33:723 (1) - ^
01:34:492 (2) - ...and Move it 1 grid down and 1 grid right for better pattern
01:39:876 (3,4) - Could make something like this → http://puu.sh/2PB2q.jpg
01:42:953 (5) - Move to x:260 y:248, better pattern.
01:46:029 (1) - Move the 2nd dot to x:412 y:112, pattern neatness.
02:14:487 (2) - Move 1 grid down and 1 grid right, slightly better spacing and pattern.
02:32:177 (3) - Move to x:56 y:180, feels more natural here.
02:32:177 (3) - If you did the last mod, move this to x:168 y:240 to keep spacing safe.
02:39:100 (1,2) - Could make like this? → http://puu.sh/2PBrw.jpg
03:06:019 (1) - Move the 3rd dot (tail/repeating) to x:504 y:248, better blanket.
03:41:399 (2) - Move to x:288 y:224 then move the tail (last dot) to x:448 y:256, better patterns

[Normal]
00:47:575 (1) - Move to x:428 y:252 to normalize spacing.
00:58:728 (4) - Move to x:328 y:144, and...
00:59:112 (5) - Move to x:240 y:204, and...
00:59:497 (6) - Move to x:148 y:156 to nicer pattern of notes.

♥ Very nice patterns ^^

[Hard]
03:01:308 (7) - Move it 1 grid up, better pattern of notes (:
03:12:845 (3) - Move 1 grid down, same reason (only if you followed the last mod, or just ignore both to keep consistency)
03:32:170 (4) - Move the tail (second dot) to x:252 y:204, better pattern.

♥ Very nice? AWESOME patterns and forms! Some intricate and simple at same time (: I played this diff too (with many misses), finally failed just at middle. The Pro will just love it ♥

1. Offset 1446 is better for me tough~ Current you have is kind of early
2. Add reversearrow.png and sliderball to full the mapset oxo
3. Delete the .osb?

1. 00:59:112 (2)- : perhaps move last slider point to x72 y184 to make better symmetry?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:21:417 (1)- : add whistle on the head?
3. 01:39:876 (3)- : NC here? due change of song here imo. Also add addition "Normal" and add finish there, will sound good
4. 02:56:021 (2)- : add whistle? oxo
5. 03:15:249 (1)- : ^
6. 03:33:708 (1)- : ^

1. 01:13:726 (2)- : add whistle?
2. 01:39:876 (1)- : same hitsound suggestion as easy
3. 01:56:605 (2)- : add circle? too bad that previous also next notes are using 'circle on red line' while at here not oxo
4. 02:27:563 (3)- : try this rhythm? to follow piano
   
5. 02:39:100 (2)- : how about change the shape like this?
   
6. 02:58:136 (2)- : why don't move this to x388 y256?

1. 00:39:500 (2)- : the slider is out from my screen o_o
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:39:876 (3)- : same hitsound suggestion as Easy
3. 01:43:722 (2)- : add whistle on the head?
4. 01:45:645 (3)- : move whistle from the head to the tail
5. 01:50:452 (4)- : remove whistle from the body x_x
6. 02:12:180 (7)- : how about add NC here, jump is nearly unreadable so adding NC would be help to the players x_x
7. 02:43:907 (3)- : add whistle on the head? to hear rhythm from previous notes
8. 02:45:829 (4,5)- : suggestion tough, delete 5 and make 4 as a slider that long until 02:46:214 ? It'll follow music better I suppose
   

Alarido wrote:

M4M Frm My Queue (:
Thank you for very very helpful mod!

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
* → Just comments, not mods
♥ → Greetings
Naked Lines → Mods

[easy]
♥ Nice diff ^^

00:29:116 (2) - Already good, but could be a bit better ^^ Just delete 00:29:116 (2), select 00:26:040 (1), Ctrl-C, go to 00:29:116, Ctrl-V, Ctrl-H, Ctrl-G.
* Here I feel I can't do nothing about spacing without destroying a nice pattern and I played it with no problem.
00:32:193 (1) - It's not too symmetric -- fix it by setting the 1st dot to x:204 y:64, the 2nd dot to x:256 y:4, the 3rd dot to x:308 y:64. Don't forget to disable Distance Snap temporarily in order to avoid surprises (:
00:38:346 (1) - Move the last dot (tail) to x:412 y:248 to fix spacing.
00:38:346 (1,2,1,2) - Good pattern that can be improved this way ► Move 00:41:422 (1) to x:188 y:124 and the last dot (tail) to x:60 y:284. ►Just after doing this: delete 00:38:346 (1), select 00:41:422 (1) Ctrl-C, go to 00:38:346, Ctrl-V, Ctrl-H and the set to x:312 y:68.
00:44:499 (1) - Move to x:316 y:316, fix spacing.
00:46:806 (2) - Move to x:332 y:120, fix spacing.
00:53:728 (1) - This part of the song seems more dynamic, then a better blanket is needed here. Make it ► Too many points! Eliminate two of them (among the middle ones). You'll need just three. Set 1st dot (head) to x:192 y:204, the 2nd dot (middle) to x:100 y:200 and the 3rd dot (tail) to x:69 y:286. → Beyond of blanket symmetry, niceness, neatness and so on, I feel the main reason here is because a blanket curve usually flows better than a very sharp turn where a bit more "velocity" makes its presence (Although the song is calm, I feel a more dynamical atmosphere here) -- and, like driving, very sharp turns are usually harder than suave or normal curves.
00:59:112 (2) - Move to x:224 y:144, then move the middle point to x:144 y:104 and the 3rd dot (tail) to x:77 y:168 better blanket and fix spacing.
01:14:495 (5,1) - Move both to x:400 y:328 and stack (5) with (1)'s head properly.
01:32:954 (2) - Move it 1 grid down, and...
01:33:723 (1) - ^
01:34:492 (2) - ...and Move it 1 grid down and 1 grid right for better pattern
01:39:876 (3,4) - Could make something like this → http://puu.sh/2PB2q.jpg
01:42:953 (5) - Move to x:260 y:248, better pattern. wat?
01:46:029 (1) - Move the 2nd dot to x:412 y:112, pattern neatness.
02:14:487 (2) - Move 1 grid down and 1 grid right, slightly better spacing and pattern.
02:32:177 (3) - Move to x:56 y:180, feels more natural here.
02:32:177 (3) - If you did the last mod, move this to x:168 y:240 to keep spacing safe.
02:39:100 (1,2) - Could make like this? → http://puu.sh/2PBrw.jpg
03:06:019 (1) - Move the 3rd dot (tail/repeating) to x:504 y:248, better blanket.
03:41:399 (2) - Move to x:288 y:224 then move the tail (last dot) to x:448 y:256, better patterns

[Normal]
00:47:575 (1) - Move to x:428 y:252 to normalize spacing.
00:58:728 (4) - Move to x:328 y:144, and...
00:59:112 (5) - Move to x:240 y:204, and...
00:59:497 (6) - Move to x:148 y:156 to nicer pattern of notes.

♥ Very nice patterns ^^

[Hard]
03:01:308 (7) - Move it 1 grid up, better pattern of notes (: it's intentional, sorry i have to ignore this one : (
03:12:845 (3) - Move 1 grid down, same reason (only if you followed the last mod, or just ignore both to keep consistency)
03:32:170 (4) - Move the tail (second dot) to x:252 y:204, better pattern.

♥ Very nice? AWESOME patterns and forms! Some intricate and simple at same time (: I played this diff too (with many misses), finally failed just at middle. The Pro will just love it ♥

That's it ^^

And great Good Luck on rank it ^^ GREAT Song, calm and fury in only body ^^

Att.

P.S.: Deserves a star too

- t e n n y a - wrote:

from my m4m queue .

[General]

1. Offset 1446 is better for me tough~ Current you have is kind of early it's a timing problem, fix'd
2. Add reversearrow.png and sliderball to full the mapset oxo k
3. Delete the .osb?how the hell did it get in there?

[Easy]

1. 00:59:112 (2)- : perhaps move last slider point to x72 y184 to make better symmetry?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:21:417 (1)- : add whistle on the head?
3. 01:39:876 (3)- : NC here? due change of song here imo. Also add addition "Normal" and add finish there, will sound good i don't think i agree, doesn't have that kind of 'impact' for a finish
4. 02:56:021 (2)- : add whistle? oxo
5. 03:15:249 (1)- : ^
6. 03:33:708 (1)- : ^

[Normal]

1. 01:13:726 (2)- : add whistle?
2. 01:39:876 (1)- : same hitsound suggestion as easy same as easy
3. 01:56:605 (2)- : add circle? too bad that previous also next notes are using 'circle on red line' while at here not oxo i don't quite get how should i deal with this one...
4. 02:27:563 (3)- : try this rhythm? to follow piano
   
5. 02:39:100 (2)- : how about change the shape like this? i kinda disagree with this one
   
6. 02:58:136 (2)- : why don't move this to x388 y256?

[Hard]

1. 00:39:500 (2)- : the slider is out from my screen o_o it's not in gameplay, but i raised it anyway along with some other objects nearby
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:39:876 (3)- : same hitsound suggestion as Easy
3. 01:43:722 (2)- : add whistle on the head?
4. 01:45:645 (3)- : move whistle from the head to the tail
5. 01:50:452 (4)- : remove whistle from the body x_x
6. 02:12:180 (7)- : how about add NC here, jump is nearly unreadable so adding NC would be help to the players x_x some other jumps are also like this.
7. 02:43:907 (3)- : add whistle on the head? to hear rhythm from previous notes
8. 02:45:829 (4,5)- : suggestion tough, delete 5 and make 4 as a slider that long until 02:46:214 ? It'll follow music better I suppose
   
   it follows other instrument on the background

Lovely mapset, good luck

1. I suggest to add followings as tags
   lunasa merlin lyrica
2. Don't you need to rename "star.png" to "star2.png" ?
3. Combo2 is similar in color to Combo3. So it is difficult to recognize the end of combo2

1. 00:50:656 For easy, it is difficult to change slider-velocity
2. 01:14:499 (5,1) - try not to stack. new player might not handle it
3. 02:29:108 (1,2) - it is better to place the anchor points symmetrically
4. 02:33:723 (2) - not reverse and start NC at 02:35:261

1. 02:54:682 (2) - move at 02:54:874
2. 02:56:028 (5) - slider end at 02:56:413 - and add note at 02:56:605

1. 01:36:805 (1) - move to x:200 y:112 , and it can stack well
2. 02:18:147 (7,1) - I think too difficult jump. what about reduce the spacing to 1.7x same as 02:16:032 (7,1) - and 02:19:685 (7,1) -
3. 02:55:836 (2,3,4) - stack just place or aline notes and slider in a straight
   03:01:220 (6,7,8) - ^
   03:03:912 (7,8,9) - ^
   03:12:757 (2,3,4) - ^
   03:20:449 (1,2,3) - ^

RandomEffect wrote:

Hello~
Let me mod, please

[General]

1. I suggest to add followings as tags
   lunasa merlin lyrica
2. Don't you need to rename "star.png" to "star2.png" ?
3. Combo2 is similar in color to Combo3. So it is difficult to recognize the end of combo2

[Easy]

1. 00:50:656 For easy, it is difficult to change slider-velocity i don't think it's that hard, even for newbies. And i don't really wanna remap the whole map again
2. 01:14:499 (5,1) - try not to stack. new player might not handle it
3. 02:29:108 (1,2) - it is better to place the anchor points symmetrically i'd like these sliders to be a bit different from the others
4. 02:33:723 (2) - not reverse and start NC at 02:35:261

[Normal]

1. 02:54:682 (2) - move at 02:54:874
2. 02:56:028 (5) - slider end at 02:56:413 - and add note at 02:56:605 i think that part handled nicely by the slider tick

[Hard]

1. 01:36:805 (1) - move to x:200 y:112 , and it can stack well
2. 02:18:147 (7,1) - I think too difficult jump. what about reduce the spacing to 1.7x same as 02:16:032 (7,1) - and 02:19:685 (7,1) - fixed both to 1.9x
3. 02:55:836 (2,3,4) - stack just place or aline notes and slider in a straight
   03:01:220 (6,7,8) - ^
   03:03:912 (7,8,9) - ^
   03:12:757 (2,3,4) - ^
   03:20:449 (1,2,3) - ^ sorry, all of these triplet placements are intentional

I feeled comforted from this calm melody
~good luck~

Jarby wrote:

mp3 quality isn't the best. I spent a while tracking down an alternative to no avail. If you or something else has any way to source a better quality one though, please do. On an unreated note, it seems pretty redundant to have object colours 3 and 5 to be very similar shades of pink when all the others are distinct colours. I suggest simply removing the fifth colour. The hitsound volume is overly loud even for soft sounds, so I would reduce them all a bit. The BPM I would count half as fast, in this case 78.007(5) as you've currently set it. I can't honestly recommend setting it something other than just 78, but I can't confirm it either as I don't have the best setup for timing here at the moment. Tick rate 2 on all difficulties would also be preferable if you change the BPM, otherwise leave it at 1.
-About the mp3, i too, spent a few days looking for a better one, even finding the current one was quite a feat, HQ youtube rips doesn't help either (worse even).
-I think i'll keep the BPM this way, i don't think it'll affect much on gameplay (Apart from Taiko and mania mode). Changing the BPM means maybe there'll be some resnapping that might cause major problems (sorry, i''m a bit lazy) I made the BPM 152 because i tend to have a hard time mapping in slow BPMs
Easy:

03:25:256 (1) - I wouldn't recommend having an object come up so soon after a spinner on such an easy difficulty. Maybe just have it start 1/1 later.

Normal:

00:49:502 (2,3) - Increase the distance between these objects to match the previous ones.
01:30:652 (1) - The overlap with the previous 3 slider is a bit annoying. I would horizontally flip this whole combo and then respace it to fix this.


Hard:

01:31:998 (5) - Pretty unsightly overlap with 4's track. Easily fixed by moving 5 to the right, under 6.
02:24:493 (4,5) - I would increase the distance between these objects to avoid confusing. It's pretty strange considering the 1/2 jumps preceding it.

Pretty good map, I can't see a BAT picking at it much before bubbling it.

Jemmmmy wrote:

Easy

02:02:956 (2) - use the shape of 01:59:110 (2) -
02:32:953 (1) - cancel NC
02:35:261 (3) - NC
02:36:030 (1) -
02:56:797 (3) -

Normal

01:35:267 (3) -
02:14:878 (4) -

Hard

01:03:731 (3,4) - Change rhythm？
02:26:608 (2,3,4) -

beautiful song and good mapset