I wish I were a bird
[yanlu's Easy]
[Rainbow's Normal]
[Hard]
[Insane]
[yanlu's Easy]
- 00:06:558 (3) - Blanket this one a bit better? Midpoint: x172 y336
- 00:32:013 (3) - ^? x312y220 Midpoint
It's mostly hitsounds, I know you are making a pattern, and if you don't want to change it just ignore the rest: - 00:24:377 (2) - Clap?
- 00:25:468 - Remove clap
- 00:26:563 - Clap
- 00:26:922 - Remove clap
- 00:27:286 (4) - Clap
- 00:28:740 - Clap
- 00:30:195 - Maybe a very low finish?
- 00:33:468 - Finish?
- 00:55:649 (3) - Clap
- 00:56:740 - I think you could get away with a finish here.
- 00:58:558 (3) - Clap
- 01:01:468 (3) - Clap
- 01:01:831 - Tbh I feel this doesn't fit, do a clap on 01:01:468 (3), and on sliderend maybe?
- 01:02:558 - Clap
- 01:03:286 - Clap
- 01:07:286 (3) - Clap
- 01:07:649 - Remove clap
- 01:08:013 - Clap
- 01:08:377 - Clap
- 01:10:195 - Clap
- 01:10:922 (3) - Clap
- 01:12:377 (2) - Clap
- 01:13:831 (4) - Clapu
[Rainbow's Normal]
- Please remove all the slider noise from 00:12:740 - 00:18:558. The bassdrum is cool, but slidernoise kinda ruins the song imho.
Oh and ye, you should probably use the custom sampleset on some parts instead, it fits better than claps tbh ;; - 00:20:740 - Remove Clap and add one at 00:21:104, sounds better imo
- 00:22:558 - Heavy beat, make a clap please
- 00:32:377 (2) - Clappu
- 00:55:649 (5) - Blanket this a bit better? Endpoint to x292 y132
- 01:00:740 (3) - Clappu
- 01:06:922 (3) - Make this one go like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850173
- 01:18:922 (3) - Soft custom clap?
[Hard]
- 00:02:558 (3) - Remove this, lengthen (2) to 00:02:558, it follows the guitar, and keeps the tempo up.
- 00:09:831 (1) - Blanket this one a bit better? Midpoint to x312 y192, this isn't that great, but I couldn't find a good one.
- 00:22:558 - Maybe do something like this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850200
- 00:46:922 - Imo this clap here is a bit overkill, even for a buildup.
- 01:26:922 - You can hear ''Toooo'' here, remove (2), move (3) to 01:26:922 then stack a note ontop of (1) at 01:27:649, then RNC on (1) and NC on the new circle.
[Insane]
- imo CTRL-G 00:10:377 (2,3) these two :p
- 00:22:558 - I think you could have done this more circular. Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850237
- 00:53:286 - I think something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850243 could have been a very good and explosive start for the chorus.
- 01:02:013 - Maybe something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850248 This might be better due to not having to stack on sliderend, atm it looks kinda weird imo, and it'll make small jumps :p
- 01:05:013 - Another suggestion; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850258 Make it jumpy like this and it'll also flow well imo