RikiH_ wrote:

m4m from your queue :< NOTE: I am on my laptop now, so I can't testplay maps because of the massive lag and so my mod can be wrong, sorry for that :/
I'll fix the stuff for Sun =w=
Rainbow's Normal

00:02:013 (2) - You can try to make something better instead of a straight slider, maybe. Also, move it 1 grid up
00:04:922 (2) - ^ (Don't move it 1 grid up)
00:09:468 (3) - Use ctrl+g on this, it flows better
00:16:740 (2) - Last sliderpoint 1 or 2 grids up
00:32:377 (2) - Move it 1 grid up or down for a better-looking pattern
00:41:286 (5) - Move 1 grid right
01:15:468 (1) - The next object is a bit too near to the spinner... You have two options: First: You end the spinner 1/1 earlier or Second: You make this 01:17:104 (1) start near to the center, so the player can reach it easier. I suggest the second...
fixed all and took the second suggestion indeed~
Hard

00:43:649 (4) - Ctrl+g would be better because of the flow, but you will have a little jump with the following note fixed
00:45:013 (8) - I suggest to remove this note, this is the only triplet in the whole diff, so the player, when he/she sees this, can get confused. So, remove this note I'll see what a BAT say~ =w=

Insane

00:04:013 (2,1) - This is really, really flow-breaking... The next slider should be like this, in order to have an oval flow Err.. Actually don't want a jump there err... I'll consider since the others with the same sound doesn't have a jump

01:01:649 (3,4) - Select both notes and use ctrl+g for a better flow fixed
01:10:195 (4,5) - The same fixed the whole jump :3
01:18:195 (4) - Clap fixed
01:28:740 (1) - This is 5% volume, so it's not audible. Remember: All objects MUST be audible, except for spinners, so this note is unrankable if you don't raise the volume and make it audible! fixed

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That's all, the map should be ok for bubble, I just suggest to improve some sliders in the Normal, bye!

1. 00:01:468 (1) - finish + whistle at slider end fits better
2. 00:04:377 (1) - same here^ finish + whistle at slider end
3. 00:07:286 (1) - same here^ finish + whistle at slider end
4. 00:10:195 (1) - add whistle at the slider body fits with the guitar
5. 00:53:831 (1) - remove the normal sampleset at the end of the slider and add a clap
6. 00:56:740 (1) - same here ^
7. 01:05:468 (1) - same here^
8. 01:08:377 (1) - add a finish on slider start and remove the normal sampleset at the end of the slider and add a clap

1. 01:01:468 (3,1) - try to don't cover the reversearrow since is the easier diff and the new players have not so much time to see the reverse
2. 01:12:377 (2,3,4,1) - and 01:19:649 (3,1) - try to don't stack objects in the easier diff

1. 00:16:013 (1) - try to do this slider like this: to improve the flow
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:17:831 (3,1) - this can confuse many players,what about to move this 2 like:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:45:104 (1,3) - try to improve this little overlap
4. 01:04:740 (5,1) - do a better blanket here:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:07:649 (4,5) - improve the line of this slider,place (5) some grind up

1. 00:18:922 (1) - whistle at slider end
2. 00:20:740 (3) - whistle here
3. 01:09:649 (4) - whistle on slider start fits not so good

1. 00:38:558 (1) - and 00:41:468 (1) - i don't see the reason of this 2 slow slider .w.

Lally wrote:

yo req from my queue

[Rainbow]
Placement:

1. 00:16:013 (1) - try to do this slider like this: to improve the flow
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:17:831 (3,1) - this can confuse many players,what about to move this 2 like:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:45:104 (1,3) - try to improve this little overlap
4. 01:04:740 (5,1) - do a better blanket here:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:07:649 (4,5) - improve the line of this slider,place (5) some grind up

[Hard]
Hitsounds:

1. 00:18:922 (1) - whistle at slider end
2. 00:20:740 (3) - whistle here
3. 01:09:649 (4) - whistle on slider start fits not so good

Placement:

1. 00:38:558 (1) - and 00:41:468 (1) - i don't see the reason of this 2 slow slider .w.

hope this can help ^^)/ good luck

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

[General]

1. Make all Kiai times unified.

[Insane]

1. 00:05:468 (3,1) - Switch new combo between these two sliders.
2. 00:08:377 (3) - New combo.
3. 00:12:377 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 01:24:377 (1) - Delete this slider.
5. 01:10:649 (2,3,4,5) - Better as clap then whistle.

[Rainbow's Normal]

1. 00:09:468 (3,1) - Too close for a Normal.
2. 00:16:377 - Add whistle.

not much to say~ o.o
Good luck~

kanpakyin wrote:

Rechecked this taiko. Everything is looking good now.

To next bat:
Free feel to bubble this.

NoHitter wrote:

[yanlu's Easy]
- Seems fine.

[Hard]
- 00:18:922 (1,2,3) - I recommend changing the pattern to something like this for better flow.
- 00:20:013 (1,2,3) - Similar to above. Just flip it.
- 00:38:377 (4) - Don't align this perfectly straight with the slider end and start. Better if you move it up or down for a circular flow. Like this
- 00:41:286 (5) - Similar to above. Like this
- 00:44:195 (5) - This is a pretty sudden spacing change. There's no patternmapping or musical indication to help guide players. It's also a note which doesn't give as much leniency as a slider. I suggest you change the pattern
- 01:07:649 (6,7) - Arrange the pattern like this? Looks better IMO.
- 01:21:649 (1) - Change the spinner to notes IMO. It doesn't fit.
All fixed~
[Insane]
- 00:04:377 (1,2,1) - Arrange the pattern like this for better flow. (Don't worry about it seemingly reaching the boundary. It still appears fine in play, only in editor it looks like its outside the playing field.)
- 00:15:286 (4) - [nazi] Mirror this properly with (3).
- 00:15:649 (5) - [nazi] Center this properly. Move left one grid.
- 01:22:558 (5,6,7,8,1) - I would suggest making the stream such that it follows the direction of the slider. Like this.
- 01:28:740 (1) - Remove new combo. Unneeded IMO.
All fixed~

NoHitter wrote:

[ReySHeL's Muzu]
- 00:21:831 (1,2) - Use d for these two. The drums really match d here not k. ok

[ReySHeL's Oni]
- 00:34:195 (4) - d here instead. If you listen to the drums, d definitely fits better. sounds like k
- 00:45:286 (1,1) - Switch these two. k would fit better at 00:45:468 (1). ok
- 00:55:831 (2,3,1) - ddk here to fit with the drums. kkd is better than ddk

jonathanlfj wrote:

I'm waiting for it