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Hiya HanzeR~
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I see your great effort on the map, and i really like it an the song as well, good lcuk for rank~[general]
Artist: Hatsune Miku
Source:PowapowaP
Tags:vocaloid
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soft-hitwhistle feels not fit and cannot be heard
[normal]
00:01:631 for sound sampleset, S:C3 is not need since no difference made than S
00:00:881 (1) - objects shouldnot exceed 1st red line, feel free to move timing point
00:54:881 (1) - exist no sense,espeically when 00:54:131 (4) - had a clap, or you might wanna sound with it
01:31:631 - kiai to 01:54:131
01:40:631 (4) - add NC
02:46:631 (6) - ^
02:52:631 (6) - ^
03:24:881 not 2 line at same time and red line here make no sense
03:24:881 kiai fountain's rankble, end kiai 03:47:381
04:12:881 remove kiai fountain here
04:24:131 (1) - add a finish
04:36:881 (1) - ^ and kiai to 04:59:381
04:48:881 (6) - add a finish
[hard]
HPD-1
different diffs need same kiai time
00:00:881 (1,2) - objects shouldnot exceed 1st red line again
00:51:133 (3,4,1) - bad flow
01:23:383 (2,3) - bad flow since straight lines
02:18:133 (5) - bad flow
03:07:633 (2) - can't hear whistle here, pls add finish
03:24:881 cannot find sense for red line, i didnot see bpm or offset change
03:36:886 (2) - can't hear whistle here, pls add finish
03:48:886 (2) - ^
04:00:886 (2) - ^
04:12:881 remove kiai fountain here
04:24:886 (2) - can't hear whistle here, pls add finish
04:25:636 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - too hard for Hard diff
04:36:886 (1) - can't hear whistle here, pls add finish
04:48:886 (2) - ^
[sb suggestion]
the only two fireworks looks so lonly, if you add those kiai time as i suggested, you may find more chance to add some.
as well as flashing
Artist: Hatsune Miku
Source:PowapowaP
Tags:vocaloid
remove miku from tags
soft-hitwhistle feels not fit and cannot be heard
[normal]
00:01:631 for sound sampleset, S:C3 is not need since no difference made than S
00:00:881 (1) - objects shouldnot exceed 1st red line, feel free to move timing point
00:54:881 (1) - exist no sense,espeically when 00:54:131 (4) - had a clap, or you might wanna sound with it
01:31:631 - kiai to 01:54:131
01:40:631 (4) - add NC
02:46:631 (6) - ^
02:52:631 (6) - ^
03:24:881 not 2 line at same time and red line here make no sense
03:24:881 kiai fountain's rankble, end kiai 03:47:381
04:12:881 remove kiai fountain here
04:24:131 (1) - add a finish
04:36:881 (1) - ^ and kiai to 04:59:381
04:48:881 (6) - add a finish
[hard]
HPD-1
different diffs need same kiai time
00:00:881 (1,2) - objects shouldnot exceed 1st red line again
00:51:133 (3,4,1) - bad flow
01:23:383 (2,3) - bad flow since straight lines
02:18:133 (5) - bad flow
03:07:633 (2) - can't hear whistle here, pls add finish
03:24:881 cannot find sense for red line, i didnot see bpm or offset change
03:36:886 (2) - can't hear whistle here, pls add finish
03:48:886 (2) - ^
04:00:886 (2) - ^
04:12:881 remove kiai fountain here
04:24:886 (2) - can't hear whistle here, pls add finish
04:25:636 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - too hard for Hard diff
04:36:886 (1) - can't hear whistle here, pls add finish
04:48:886 (2) - ^
[sb suggestion]
the only two fireworks looks so lonly, if you add those kiai time as i suggested, you may find more chance to add some.
as well as flashing
shoot a star~