So this is overdue, so im fine if you just ignore mod if you dont wanna rank this map anymore orz
My mods are all suggestions, if you don't agree with them please explain why instead of just "no"
General:
Probably should fix tags, Hard and normal tags are inconsistent.
Kiai time is also different by very little on hard. Your kiais are at 04:12:882 04:13:069 but it should be 04:12:881 04:13:068
Normal:
00:31:631 (2,4) - Can there be another way you map this pattern? The overlap looks rather ugly and unpleasant to me. :S
00:54:881 (1) - I'm not sure, but I don't really feel anything from this note. Perhaps you should make 4 a slider and end where this note is instead so it kinda "slides" into a break? orz lol. If you follow that, perhaps silencing the end would be nice since the volume would be too powerful.
01:18:131 (7,1) - Perhaps do something about overlap also? I'm not really a fan of overlaps so its up to you.
02:24:131 (3) - One grid up?
03:19:631 (1) - I think it would be better to start a spinner here and have it at 5% volume and end it at 03:22:631. It'd be nice to kinda build up the momentum then go into the chorus for me :3.
03:58:631 (3,4) - I think beginners would most likely screw up here since they will probably follow 4 path instead because its larger and easier to see than 3's path. Perhaps you should unstack these sliders.
04:38:006 (2,3,4,5,6) and till the end - I didn't mind it when you stacked just one note during the beginning but because it was consistent I let it go. This one might be rather confusing for beginners because they will see lots of circles and don't know how to read stacks most likely. Perhaps you should unstack these. You can try out something like
http://puu.sh/2qt6K for a different variation of pattern. It does get boring to play your 3 1/2 notes at the end.
Hard:
00:10:631 (3) - Perhaps ctrl+G? I feel like it not only looks nicer but will play better since it will be a consistent jump pattern instead of "jump then normal spacing" If you follow this, perhaps ctrl+G at 00:11:381 (4) - so you won't lose flow.
03:23:381 (1) - This slider is funny because you just mapped it to her breathing. Perhaps you should remove it. It's not exactly part of the song =w=
03:45:506 (1,2) - I'm not entirely sure where is there a jump here. The spacing before 1 is normally spaced and the spacing after 2 is normally spaced. There isn't much change in melody here also. Perhaps just spacing it normally instead?
You sure love symmetry lol.