1. Easy (2.98 stars, 95 notes)
2. Hard (4.76 stars, 177 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 252 notes)
4. Naruti Re-Styled (4.8 stars, 297 notes)

james039 wrote:

Sterrum's offset is sounding quite early here.

I recommend +22ms from that. (Played with auto)

I think the sample volume should be reduced.

Also on [Insane] it is quite unrhythmic to map the out-to-silence ending, I'd suggest taking that out (shouldn't map this part at all).

That is all I have for comment. Fix some problems and I can offer my star.

Fun map

P.S. [Hard] crashes on my machine. I dunno why

Nakata Yuji wrote:

I made most of the changes that you wanted me to.
However, I think Sterrum has the offset right on the money, when I used yours, I got around 24ms early for an average.

james039 wrote:

Nakata Yuji wrote:

I made most of the changes that you wanted me to.
However, I think Sterrum has the offset right on the money, when I used yours, I got around 24ms early for an average.

Meaning the collective difference between your universal offset, and mine, is about 20ms. Both of us could be actually off by 10ms, or maybe you are off by 15 and me 5. Anyway, try listening to several (at least 3 or 4) other recently ranked maps on Auto, (I think most of them are pretty well timed), and seeing if they sound early or late, and once you know by how much, adjust your own universal offset accordingly.

Both naruti and I agree on the offset, so both of us are in the same ballpark.

I would advise against leaving the current offset as-is, since it's really coming in quite early. Please at least consult with a BAT about timing, due to this discrepancy.

In the meantime, I give you a star.

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

There is... an easier diff in the making, right?

[Hard]
No problems found

[Naruti Re-Styled]
00:29:034 (3) - Probably remove this note; it doesn't really fit imo
No problems found

[Insane]
00:33:077 (1) - Unrankable slider. Position it somewhere other than under the slider, since it's impossible to see
No other problems found

A pretty good beatmap, you've done a good job. (Either I'm tired and my brain couldn't keep up, or this must have been hard to map) Have a star for your efforts

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Most definitely. The reason you know it is because you mapped it yourself. However, to other players, this would seem completely out of place. Either way, hiding sliders/notes under sliders is bad mapping practice and should be avoided in the vast majority of cases.

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

first .

you really need a easier diff for new players .

Hard:
i think you can add something at the second diff , will be much better.
slider/note under the slider before is ugly , you should replace them.
and don't put so much hitsound together , make hitsounds on white tick is better , for ex: 00:14:000 (3) - all finish , really noisy.
and this 00:31:033 (9) - clap + whistle doesn't fit this music .
01:18:066 (8) - ugly.

Hard and Insane . YOU SHOULD MAKE A AUDIO SAMPLE SET. NORMAL/SOFT . press f6 to do that.
i don't know why so many modders didnt point this mistake..
Insane:
00:26:000 (8,1,2) - distance
00:33:077 (1) - i cant see it as a slider
00:52:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nonono. so much clap.
01:12:089 (1) - so far away from note3 before.make it at 01:13:077 (1) - here.

Naruti:
much better .xD

Nakata Yuji wrote:

And no star? *is offended*

Doomsday93 wrote:

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing looks good enough to me

no normal/easy? you need at least a normal

[HARD]

SPOILER

00:15:000 (2) - maybe unstack this? its hard to see that this is a slider
00:36:066 (1) - make this a whole beat longer? auto only just gets 2000 bonus

[NARUTI RE-STYLED]
00:36:034 (9) - stack this on the end of (8)?done
00:40:090 (5,1) - this jumps feels awkward to me. maybe tone it down somehow?its a smaller jump now
00:53:349 (x) - start kiai here?intresting.. fixed

[INSANE]

SPOILER

its all good.

not a bad map. you really really really need a normal or easy though maby we should

star'dThank you for your star and mod

thepianist wrote:

My two cents:

(I dun wanna echo others about the easier difficulty that is to be made.)

Hmm the hitsounds say normal but play soft. Dunno if you intended that.

Hard
0.40.445 (2) The finish clashes too loudly compared to the others. Adjust volume?
0.44.001 (2) ^
0.52.668 (2) Must these all be claps? I see that you want the claps, but maybe adjust the volume a bit.

Restyled
00:14:068 (1) - Remove new combo
00:20:090 (1) - ^
00:35:034 (8,9) - Why the sudden volume change
1.25.349 (1) Why whistle?

Insane
00:52:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, must these all be claps?

Mmkays. Star?

Real1 wrote:

[Normal]
Hitsounds are messed up somehow. They say normal but they play soft and strange. Going into the timig set up panel and looking at the offset, the first timing section, neither Normal or Soft are selected, press one to fix this. Sliders sound weird otherwise. Maybe it's just my osu messing up. Strangely it seems to be only Normal that does this.

00:35:011 (4) - This note is sticking out. On purpose? Makes it hard to read.
00:49:077 (1) - A bit too hard to see this note and to time it right while clicking for normal. Maybe extend the slider or an extra repeat?
01:04:000 (3) - Too far from (2)

[Hard]
Is ok.

[Re-styled]
Is very hard.

[Insane]
00:58:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - No hitsounds at all here. Dull.
01:12:089 (1,1,1,1,1) - Perhaps make these into one combo?
01:15:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spice up this final stretch of the map with some hitsounds.


Star'd.

1. 00:16:884 (4) - Every slider that is this short with no reverse arrows, change it to something else. It's very hard to see if it's slider or 2 notes.
2. 00:36:328 (6) - Stack this note right on 5's endpoint.
3. 00:40:217 (1,2) - The spacing change is really not necessary in the easiest difficulty. Move the slider closer to 1.
4. 00:43:773 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:12:884 (1) - Suggestion: Remove new combo
6. 01:13:328 (1) - ^
7. Overall, just make this difficulty easier to read unless you're just dying to make an Easy difficulty.
8. Also the loud finishes kill my ears. Reduce the volume of the timing sections that have finish sounds in them.

1. 00:14:995 (2) - Same concept as Normal. Slider's too short.
2. 01:05:551 (1) - Especially here. It's really hard to tell that this is a slider.

1. Add naruti to the tags for this difficulty.

1. 00:33:773 (1,2) - Hidden by the slider.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~
Insane is way easier to read than Normal.

1. 00:16:884 (4) - Every slider that is this short with no reverse arrows, change it to something else. It's very hard to see if it's slider or 2 notes.
2. 00:36:328 (6) - Stack this note right on 5's endpoint.
   00:40:217 (1,2) - The spacing change is really not necessary in the easiest difficulty. Move the slider closer to 1.
3. 00:43:773 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:12:884 (1) - Suggestion: Remove new combo
5. 01:13:328 (1) - ^
6. Overall, just make this difficulty easier to read unless you're just dying to make an Easy difficulty.
7. Also the loud finishes kill my ears. Reduce the volume of the timing sections that have finish sounds in them.

Hard~

1. 00:14:995 (2) - Same concept as Normal. Slider's too short.
2. 01:05:551 (1) - Especially here. It's really hard to tell that this is a slider.

Naruti re-styled~

1. Add naruti to the tags for this difficulty.

Insane~

1. 00:33:773 (1,2) - Hidden by the slider.