jonathanlfj wrote:

[5.167569%]
is that just a random percentage? cause percentages in steins gate usually revovles around the 1% range...

jonathanlfj wrote:

modding upon request
steins gate gg yeah~ <3

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
the bg u have looks like it was compressed horizontally; you should use one that is uncompressed: thx <3 I take the 16:9

SPOILER

16:9

4:3

You have inconsistencies in combo colours for some guest diffs, please fix them
Also unify audio lead-in to 2500ms on all diffs Hmm... maybe the audio lead-in could be different in some diff? because 2500ms is too long to them[/color]

[Gamu's Easy]
00:00:362 (1) - this slider sounds better if extended to 00:01:293 imo
00:41:355 (2) - the slider body extends beyond the playfield in 4:3 osu resolution, which is unrankable; please move it more inside
01:18:436 (2) - feels more comfortable to hit if you start this at 01:18:436 so it maintains the same rhythm-distance as 01:16:200 (3,1)

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:07:815 (2) - add finish here?
00:25:144 (5) - finish on end
00:34:647 (4) - NC here is better imo since there is a transition in music
01:13:778 (1) - how bout swap this for a short slider or two circles so the vocal at 01:13:964 can be covered

[Normal]
for the parts where you used the S sample set change to S:C1 so you dont hear the slider slide sound ok
00:25:703 (1) - finish on the slider start instead of spinner end ^
00:40:610 (1) - whistle?^
00:52:535 (1) - spacingfixed
01:14:896 (1) - finish on slider startok

[Banana's Hard]
00:13:964 (2) - this plays better if you follow the vocals; place it at 00:14:150 stacked with 00:14:337 (3)
00:37:070 (4) - a finish on the end would sound great
01:24:958 (3) - you should break the slider up into circle + 1/2 slider, it feels a bit awkward not hitting the vocals at 01:25:144

[5.167569%]
is that just a random percentage? cause percentages in steins gate usually revovles around the 1% range... :o maybe...
01:02:225 (3) - add a finish
01:07:070 (4,5,6) - in contrast to the rest of the kiai the triplet doesnt fit here well imo, how bout just a 1/2 stack?
nice overlaps

[Insane]
00:24:212 (4,5,6,7) - soft sampleset sounds better here imo yeah, really like you said
00:35:765 (1) - since you did a triangle jump here the NC should be on 00:35:952 (2) instead of here no, I don't think so.. the nc here is well imo
00:56:262 (2) - the curve on this is too big compared to the other sliders, so smoothen it out a bit fixed
01:13:219 (2) - NC again, this one is 0.75x sv while the previous is 0.85x sure
01:25:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - troll no, I think it's better for now

Thats about all; very nice mapset, good luck in ranking~

yurunneram wrote:

Dekaane's Normal
00:50:299 (2) - Change /*Why? How?

scanter wrote:

Dekaane's Normal

1. 00:23:281 (2) - Add finish? /*Sounds too loud here imo
2. 01:28:125 (4) - NC? sound was changed. /*I think it belongs to the actual combo

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:07:815 (2) - add finish here? /*It's a soft part, a Finish doesn't fit too much there imo
00:25:144 (5) - finish on end /*Ok
00:34:647 (4) - NC here is better imo since there is a transition in music /*Ok
01:13:778 (1) - how bout swap this for a short slider or two circles so the vocal at 01:13:964 can be covered /*To follow vocals and sound nice I'll have to do the next slider a 1/2 beat repeat slider, and I want to keep things as simple as possible.

Teara wrote:

[Dekaane's Normal]

Good stuff. /*Thanks :3

Teara wrote:

Sorry for the late mod. 0.0 still thx a lot for it

Call me back for a bubble. After fixing/denying these. sure

[General]

Inconsistency in Audio Lead In:

1. 5.167569%: 1500
   
2. Insane: 2500
   
3. Banana's Hard: 1500
   
4. Dekaane's Normal: 1500
   
5. Normal: 1500
   
6. Gamu's Easy: 2500
   Edit:Set all diffs to 2500. But their starting time is different , does it really fit now?

Inconsistency In Tags

1. 5.167569%: Anime 5pb nitroplus nitro+ DakeDekaane [CSGA]Ar3sgice Banana opening Gamu -Gamu-
   
2. Insane: Anime 5pb nitroplus nitro+ DakeDekaane [CSGA]Ar3sgice Banana opening Gamu -Gamu-
   
3. Banana's Hard: Anime 5pb nitroplus nitro+ DakeDekaane [CSGA]Ar3sgice Banana opening Gamu -Gamu-
   
4. Dekaane's Normal: Anime 5pb nitroplus nitro+ DakeDekaane [CSGA]Ar3sgice Banana opening Gamu -Gamu- Dekaane
   
5. Normal: Anime 5pb nitroplus nitro+ DakeDekaane [CSGA]Ar3sgice Banana opening Gamu -Gamu- Dekaane
   
6. Gamu's Easy: Anime 5pb nitroplus nitro+ DakeDekaane [CSGA]Ar3sgice Banana opening Gamu -Gamu- Dekaane
   Edit2:Set all diffs to Anime 5pb nitroplus nitro+ opening DakeDekaane [CSGA]Ar3sgice Banana Gamu -Gamu- Dekaane AR233

[Gamu's Easy]

00:41:355 (2) - This is slightly offscreen.
00:58:312 (1,2,3) - This is a bit hard to hit on a Easy, Consider making it a slider with the same hitsounds.
01:08:560 (4) - This plays weird. It's better of if you just delete it. Then extending 01:07:256 (3) - to finish on it



01:18:436 (2) - Start this on the previous white tick and end it where it currently ends

[Dekaane's Normal]

Good stuff.

[Normal]

01:13:778 (1,2,3) - This isn't consistent with the rest of the spacing, please keep it same in a normal. ok, fixed

[Banana's Hard]

Good job.

[5.167569%]

01:27:007 (1,2,3,4) - This is quite maybe try something like this

[Insane]

AR 9, OD 9 is quite high. (Which in my opinion doesn't fit the song) Please consider making AR and OD 8. sure

00:04:834 (1,2) - The spacing is just to large, its really hard to sight-read this. sure,I remap this part and changed 00:06:324 (1,2,3,4) - Plz take a look, if it's not good, just say it

00:14:896 (5) - Clap?
00:16:386 (1) - Remove whistle from start and add clap?
00:19:368 (7) - ^
00:51:790 (4) - Finish on start of slider. sure, add it here and also decrease the volume.

Edit3:sorry, I think add these claps sounds not so good... So cancel it

00:59:616 (3) - This is very hard to sight read, I suggest you make it two hitcircles instead. Put a 1/4 slider here is better imo, sorry. /.\

jonathanlfj wrote:

[5.167569%]
is that just a random percentage? cause percentages in steins gate usually revovles around the 1% range... some fandiscs and dramacd is over 2%, and felice line is -0.27%, iirc wwww
01:02:225 (3) - add a finish sure
01:07:070 (4,5,6) - in contrast to the rest of the kiai the triplet doesnt fit here well imo, how bout just a 1/2 stack? sure
nice overlaps

Teara wrote:

[5.167569%]

01:27:007 (1,2,3,4) - This is quite maybe try something like this

this is maybe confusing to the steram i see o.o i cahnged to a stack down

Teara wrote:

the claps feel really random
i have the same feeling, try to learn djpop style in rhythm, i don't exactly know how to make a reasonable clap pattern.
mostly they go with the vocal, like soft-hitwhistle in other maps, but to others, i just try their place and test to see whether they are comfortable to hear. checked them again, make them a bit more consist

Nymph wrote:

grats for your first ranked map.

baldrace wrote:

El Psy Congrooooooooooo