Okuyatos - Kind Lady · forum

Ekaru

Joined July 2008

Topic Starter

Ekaru 2009-10-03T21:55:50+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, November 01, 2009 at 4:14:58 PM

Artist: Okuyatos
Title: Kind Lady
Source: DDR MAX
Tags: dance revolution eurobeat female vocals
BPM: 135
Filesize: 2601kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:

Amateur (1.72 stars, 81 notes)
Intern (3.18 stars, 109 notes)
Professional (4.94 stars, 191 notes)

Download: Okuyatos - Kind Lady
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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From DDR MAX. All copyrights belong to whoever they belong to, not to me.

This map took a while to map, but was worth it in the end. Looking back, I can't believe this was a DDR song and not made for a game like osu!. The mix of rhythms and rhythm patterns is just perfect for the hardest difficulty, and the fact that it kinda had dancing in mind makes it easy to do easier difficulties on, too.

Enjoy.

Amateur: Easy-Normal
Intern: An easier Hard
Professional: Insane

So people stop getting confused.

Last edited by Ekaru 2009-11-01T22:14:53+00:00, edited 27 times in total.

Mismagius

9,266 posts

Joined July 2008

Mismagius 2009-10-03T22:45:22+00:00

00:21:56 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is right, but looks strange
00:36:67 (3) - red tick
01:10:45 (1,2,3) - whitsle instead of finish?

Great map.

whymeman

osu! Alumni

3,432 posts

Joined November 2008

whymeman 2009-10-04T00:30:08+00:00

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding v.5.0 Go~

Osz. File Check (Done)

SPOILER

Video: No
SB (Story Board): No
Custom Skin: No
Background: No (I know this map was just posted in, but make sure to have a background for it as soon as you can.)
[Current] Size: 2.43 MB / 10.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes

[Amateur] (Done)

SPOILER

Timing (BPM / Offset): 135.000 / 1,342 ms (This offset is really odd and plus its off. Try out -10 ms and see that it works better for you.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: N/A
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.70 (If this map is ment for beginners, then it would be best to lower this some.)
Distance Snap Average: x0.85 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 81 ( 72 Circles / 8 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 111
[Current] Max Score: 192,724
[Current] Star Rating: 1.72
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.4

00:56:89 (6,1) - Between there, the use of the kiai seems kinda odd...
01:18:23 (1,2,3,4,5) - Was this intentional? The square form is messed around (2) to (3).

Notes: Well, its not bad for a start. Make sure to look into the slider velocity.

[Professional] (Done)

SPOILER

Timing (BPM / Offset): 135.000 / 1,342 ms (This offset is really odd and plus its off. Try out -10 ms and see that it works better for you.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: N/A
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 2.20
Distance Snap Average: x0.85 (Semi-Solid)
[Current] Objects: 185 ( 152 Circles / 32 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 238
[Current] Max Score: 1,062,186
[Current] Star Rating: 4.93
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.8

00:17:23 (6,7) - The note after this slider feels a bit forced in and doesn't feel like it fits in that well either.
00:22:39 (5) - Did you try moving this 1/8 back? (on the blue tick in 1/4)
00:25:95 (5) - ^
00:36:61 (3) - ^
00:52:00 (?) - Maybe if you add a note here, (7) and (8) won't sound as odd?
00:55:34 (9,10,11) - Kinda close to the edge of the window there...
01:06:45 (6) - ^
01:22:34 (2,3) - What happened here? It felt like the beats don't exist compared to the pattern at 01:20:23 (4,5,6,7).

Notes: Seems okay so far though it still needs some more work.

Overall: Well, its not that bad for a start. Not a lot of errors to deal with but I wonder about the break existing in a short song.... I'll drop my star in then...

Ekaru

3,617 posts

Joined July 2008

Topic Starter

Ekaru 2009-10-04T01:37:08+00:00

For the record, the reason there are some 1/8s is because that's where they belong in the song. They match up perfectly with the vocals on 1/8 and feel early/late on blue/red/white ticks. Quite fun. All the mixing up in this song required mostly 25% speed and quite a bit of time and work, but it paid off well I think.

Anyways, did most of those, thanks. ^_^;

Matma Rex

586 posts

Joined March 2009

Matma Rex 2009-10-04T17:19:24+00:00

Get a background.

[Amateur]
Maybe raise slider tick rate, so short, repeated sliders won't get it? Dunno.

[Pro]
00:20:77 (3) - shorten by 1/4? It'll fit 00:20:44 (1,2) better.
00:34:44 (4,5) - delete (5) and make (4) 1.5 long slider (ending at 00:35:109)?
00:52:10 (9) - 1/4 earlier, delete 00:51:88 (8).

Starred.

anonymous_old

0 posts

Here since the beginning

anonymous_old 2009-10-12T16:06:06+00:00

Amateur

SPOILER

00:19:55 (4) : Instead of having the slider repeat, you could make another, longer slider. [ Like this. ]
00:33:77 (3) : Instead of having the slider repeat, you could make another, longer slider. [ Like this. ]
00:55:99 (4) : Move this beat back by 1 tick.
00:56:88 (6) : Move this beat back by 1 tick.
00:56:220 : Add a beat here.

Professional

SPOILER

00:42:665 : This Kiai-time is too long.

Very good.

EEeee

1,026 posts

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-10-12T20:51:42+00:00

Amateur
00:58:665 - make this kiai start 1/2 forward
01:20:88 (5) - move to the left a bit? so that it's above 1
kk, well that's it, also i would like to add a cool suggestion lol, make kiai time burst at the end of the very last spinner, with volume at the highest for the oooomph

Professional
00:18:55 (5) - this isn't spaced properly, make sure 6 is spaced as well
00:58:665 - same as Amateur
01:23:33 (1) - same as Amateur, if u want to add that suggestion lol

nice map, wasn't anything related to those anime songs u usually map lol, ^^

*star

Ekaru

3,617 posts

Joined July 2008

Topic Starter

Ekaru 2009-10-12T22:42:51+00:00

Looked through both suggestions, thanks. If I didn't change anything, that's because I had a good reason for doing so. ^_^

blissfulyoshi

osu! Alumni

4,755 posts

Joined July 2008

blissfulyoshi 2009-10-15T01:07:40+00:00

Amateur: fine, just one suggestion
00:23:10 (4) - you might want to add a new combo here for the lyrics

Professional: fine, just a few more suggestions
01:03:33 (2) - new combo?
01:22:33 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:18:77 (1)

Great map. Star.

Lissette

osu! Alumni

1,496 posts

Joined July 2008

Lissette 2009-10-15T04:53:05+00:00

Hi!

Professional
00:25:94 (5) - move to the prev blue tick
00:28:44 - add note?
01:18:66 - ^
01:19:55 - ^
01:21:66 - ^
01:23:33 (1) - end it at 01:24:88 and add note at 01:25:33 (suggestion)

Nice map!
Have a Star

Shulin

1,189 posts

Joined August 2009

Shulin 2009-10-17T14:49:24+00:00

This is a cool song, here is my mod:

Amateur:

00:19:55 (4) - Remove the clap from the last beat of the slider.
00:26:66 (4) - ^
00:29:77 (2) - Add clap
00:31:55 (2) - ^
00:33:33 (2) - ^

Professional:

00:21:33 - Add a beat here?
00:25:77 (4) - Remove whistle.
00:38:55 (8) - Remove whistle from the last two beats of this slider.
00:48:66 (5) - Remove whistle.
00:55:77 (11) - ^
01:10:88 (3) - Replace with finish?

Overall - My main suggestion is to remove/replace some of the whistles on professional because it obscures the vocals at certain parts, especially when they are grouped together. The spacing is fun and I like it.

Star!

Wizard Of Orz

965 posts

Joined May 2008

Wizard Of Orz 2009-10-24T21:19:40+00:00

Dear my Lady >

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined August 2008

Andrea 2009-10-26T12:31:17+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Larto