changed minor things.
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17:41 grumd: hey
17:41 HeatKai: yo :)
17:41 grumd: can you take a quick glance at my map huh?
17:41 grumd: want to hear some opinions and stuff
17:42 *HeatKai is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257745 I Monster - Who Is She? [Hard]]
17:42 HeatKai: ?
17:42 grumd: yeh
17:42 HeatKai: allright
17:44 HeatKai: the first break i prefer you move it to the earlier white tick rather then following the vocal
17:44 HeatKai: seems awkward
17:45 HeatKai: i'm kinda agree with other break because they're on the white tick xD
17:46 HeatKai: 01:34:565 (7) - make this at the centre of the line would makes the gameplay better before the break
17:46 grumd: fixed
17:47 grumd: well that one was intended but okay
17:48 HeatKai: 02:25:598 (1) - how can I say about this spinner
17:48 HeatKai: i would say that the ends sounds quite dramatic
17:48 HeatKai: why don't you map based on the vocal?
17:48 HeatKai: so it can ends dramatically like the vocal xD
17:48 grumd: wat
17:49 HeatKai: it's hard to point out but yeah xD never mind that
17:49 HeatKai: hahaa
17:49 grumd: o_0
17:49 HeatKai: what I wanted to say is it's better to map it rather then just spinner \o/ but just spinner is fine too
17:49 HeatKai: it's hard to fine the right word xD
17:49 HeatKai: find*
17:49 HeatKai: =.=
17:51 grumd: hm
17:51 grumd: idk, i think the map will need a bit of score difference
17:53 HeatKai: it is
17:53 HeatKai: well it's fine \o/
17:54 HeatKai: 1365x768 =w='' well ok
17:54 grumd: lol