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IOSYS - Playing with Dolls

posted 2009-08-22T00:08:00+00:00

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pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-08-22T00:08:00+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 30, 2009 at 11:05:25 PM

Artist: IOSYS
Title: Playing with Dolls
Tags: touhou iosys innocent key playing with dolls play oningyou asobi
BPM: 165
Filesize: 13570kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.49 stars, 126 notes)
Hard (4.88 stars, 241 notes)
Normal (4.35 stars, 176 notes)

Download: IOSYS - Playing with Dolls
Download: IOSYS - Playing with Dolls (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is a beatmap of "Playing with Dolls" by IOSYS. I may make an Insane/Lunatic difficulty later.

Please comment!

Last edited by pieguyn 2009-10-31T06:05:29+00:00, edited 31 times in total.

adam2046

Joined April 2008

adam2046 2009-08-26T19:55:51+00:00

Offset: 3,411

Alice

Joined October 2008

Alice 2009-08-26T21:16:08+00:00

Hi there~
Cool song, I didn't know that was IOSYS!
Easy
I sometimes think spacing is strange but it's a question of taste so all good

Normal
Overall: just a suggestion, maybe change a bit spacing.. I think that's too close.. But it's a normal diff so it's just a suggestion.. Also I prefer that diff with bigger hitcircles but that's my tastes so ignore if you don't want to change those things
00:51:44 (4,5,6) - Jump in a normal diff? Either make them at same place than 3 or move them all

Hard
01:34:44 (?) - Note?
01:34:62 (?) - Note? (but here's the hard and I think it would be great but at least that's not an obligation.

)for those two you can do a jump, I think it will sound good)

Well, great map.
Deserves a star!

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-08-27T00:08:57+00:00

@adam2046: The offset has been changed to 502. It's effectively the same (165 BPM = 2.75 beats per second = 0.3636... seconds per beat = 363.6363... milliseconds per beat; 8 beats = 2909.0909... milliseconds, and when subtracted from 3411 osu! rounds it to 502), but this places the start of the timing section eight beats earlier.

@Alice Margatroid:

Normal:

-I left the spacing as it was... It is a normal difficulty, so I really don't want to make the notes that far apart.
-The hitcircles have been made larger.
-00:51:44 (4,5,6): That doesn't appear to be a jump... I just checked with distance snap. o_o

Hard:

-01:34:44 (?), 01:34:62 (?): Notes have been added in these places... and I agree that a jump seems to fit there.

Alice

Joined October 2008

Alice 2009-08-27T00:13:53+00:00

pieguy1372 wrote:
-00:51:44 (4,5,6): That doesn't appear to be a jump... I just checked with distance snap. o_o

Hm well, not really a jump maybe but I don't think it's normal for a normal difficulty (how obvious D:). I mean, they are at the same place and that change suddently. A bit confusing.. But maybe others mods will not think like me, so if you want to keep it as it is for the moment that's your choice

EDIT: Also, title is originally "お人形遊び". Can be translated as "Playing with Dolls" (so your title is right) or "Dolls Play".
Romanization: "Oningyou Asobi", I think. You have choice for the title, but you may put every titles in tags

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-09-02T17:16:05+00:00

Hm... I changed that set of three notes there to a slider... it certainly seems to fit better.

Also, extra thanks for confirming the title.

Luxary

Joined August 2008

Luxary 2009-09-02T17:29:28+00:00

Offset: 521

P.S.: After this, Timing>Resnap All Notes.

Nice Work, I like it. :3

Star

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-09-08T20:35:53+00:00

The offset has been fixed... it certainly sounds a lot better now. Extra thanks for pointing that one out... I thought it sounded off but I couldn't seem to find what the correct one was.

Bass

Joined January 2009

Bass 2009-09-09T18:00:51+00:00

Place preview point at: 01:04:52 - (in all diffs.)

[Easy]
Good ;3

[Normal]
Good ;3

[Hard]
00:26:52 (9) - new combo?
00:53:43 (3) - up 2 tick?
00:55:79 (2) - left 1 tick?
01:05:24 (4) - new combo?
01:05:97 (7) - ^
01:06:70 (10) - ^
01:11:06 (4) - ^
01:11:79 (7) - ^
01:12:52 (10) - ^

Good map ;3

Star

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-09-09T18:41:01+00:00

Updated.

Hard:

00:26:52 (9): Done.
00:53:43 (3): The note here has been moved up one tick (not two).
00:55:79 (2): Done.
01:05:24 (4): Done.
01:05:97 (7): Done.
01:06:70 (10): Done.
01:11:06 (4): Done.
01:11:79 (7): Done.
01:12:52 (10): Done.

Mafiamaster

osu! Alumni

Joined July 2008

Mafiamaster 2009-09-09T22:27:49+00:00

Easy~

00:09:24 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish.
00:15:06 (1) - ^
00:20:88 (1) - ^
00:49:97 (1) - ^
00:55:79 (1) - ^
01:10:33 (1) - ^
01:16:15 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning.
01:21:97 (1) - ^

Normal~

00:09:43 (2) - This sounds kind of "not good". Can you maybe add a whistle to the beginning and the end of this? Also add a finish at the beginning.
00:14:88 (1) - Add a finish on the reverse arrow.
00:26:70 (1) - Add 1 finish to the beginning.
00:49:97 (1) - Add finish.
00:55:79 (1) - ^
01:04:52 (1) - Add 1 finish at the beginning.
01:10:33 (1) - Add finish to beginning.

Hard~

00:09:24 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning.
00:14:88 (1) - Add 1 finish just at 00:15:06
00:20:88 (2) - Add finish.
00:26:70 (2) - ^
00:43:61 (1) - Add a finish just to the end of this slider.
00:49:97 (1) - Finish.
00:55:79 (2) - Finish at the beginning.
01:01:61 (7) - Suggestion: Maybe lengthen this to the white tick at 01:03:06?
01:04:52 (1) - Finish?
01:10:33 (1) - ^
01:16:15 (1) - Finish at beginning?
01:21:97 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of slider.

You pick good songs :3
Good luck!!!

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-09-10T03:38:33+00:00

Updated.

Easy:

-00:09:24 (1): Done.
-00:15:06 (1): Done.
-00:20:88 (1): Done.
-00:49:97 (1): Done.
-00:55:79 (1): Done.
-01:10:33 (1): Done.
-01:16:15 (1): Done.
-01:21:97 (1): Done.

Normal:

-00:09:43 (2): Eek. I don't remember setting it like that... In any case, fixed.
-00:14:88 (1): Done.
-00:26:70 (1): Done.
-00:49:97 (1): Done.
-00:55:79 (1): Done.
-01:04:52 (1): Done.
-01:10:33 (1): Done.

Hard:

-00:09:24 (1): Done.
-00:14:88 (1): Done.
-00:20:88 (2): Done.
-00:26:70 (2): Done.
-00:43:61 (1): Done.
-00:49:97 (1): Done.
-00:55:79 (2): Done.
-01:01:61 (7): Fixed. I thought it was like that in the first place, but I guess it wasn't.

-01:04:52 (1): Done.
-01:10:33 (1): Done.
-01:16:15 (1): Done.
-01:21:97 (1): Done.

Ekaru

Joined July 2008

Ekaru 2009-09-12T22:37:43+00:00

+25 ms, all difficulties.

Otherwise, good. Star!

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-09-13T02:13:11+00:00

Okay.

I would update it but my hard drive crashed and I am now on a computer where osu! is not installed and I can't install it. I'll update ASAP.

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-09-23T07:33:26+00:00

Updated (finally!). The offset has been fixed in all the difficulties (and the notes have been resnapped).

happy30

Featured Artist

Joined August 2008

happy30 2009-09-23T14:59:15+00:00

Hey

I think soft hitsounds fit the map much better, try it

(or maybe them combined)

[Easy]

Nothing here

[Normal]

01:11:81 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - too hard, a normal player wouldn't know how fast they should press.

[Hard]

Nothing here

Aoitenshi

Joined February 2009

Aoitenshi 2009-09-25T03:53:04+00:00

The hitsounds seems overpowered, lower the sound!

NO mistake i can found. star!

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-09-26T00:47:51+00:00

Updated.

-The beatmap now uses the soft sample set.

Normal:

-1:11:81 (3,4,5,6,7,8): Fixed.

anonymous_old

Here since the beginning

anonymous_old 2009-09-26T16:07:51+00:00

easy

You might want to change the sliders to "smooth curves"
00:04:636 : A beat belongs here.

Sorry i can't mod this more. It's missing a lot of beats, but that's okay, because it's an "easy" map.

normal

00:28:364 : A beat belongs here.
00:36:364 : To match with the song, this slider should be longer.
00:40:182 : A beat belongs here.
00:45:818 : A beat belongs here.

hard

no visible faults.

AeonWing

Joined September 2009

AeonWing 2009-09-26T23:33:53+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-09-26T23:57:29+00:00

Updated.

Easy:

-00:04:636: o_o I don't think a beat fits here that much. One might fit 1/4 of a beat after this, but it's easy and I don't want to put too many or too fast notes.

Normal:

-:28:364: Added.
-00:36:364: Hm. I can do one of two things with this in order to have it fit with the music: have a short slider and a beat after it or a beat and then a long slider. I'm not quite sure whether to change this at this point, so I'll likely only change it if multiple people point it out.
-00:40:182: Added.
-00:45:818: Added.

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

Yes_old 2009-10-11T18:55:17+00:00

hard
01:06:00 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - whistles?
01:07:45 (1) - finish
01:11:81 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - whistles
01:13:81 (x) - add note
01:26:63 (2,3) - whistles instead
01:27:36 (2,3) - ^
01:32:18 (1,3,5,7) - whistles

normal
00:37:45 (x) - note?

n_n star

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-10-16T23:15:39+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Armin

osu! Alumni

Joined May 2009

Armin 2009-10-17T15:20:49+00:00

Why the Distance snapping is 0,73x? o_o

Anyway *coff*

[Easy]

00:55:818 Add a finish?
01:16:182 weeeeird slider. Remake it using the lvl2 grid

[Normal]

00:47:091 Remove whistles at the end
01:22:000 As in [Easy] o.o

[Hard]

Oookay.

Sorry but I didn't find nothing t_t. Starred!

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-10-18T03:04:24+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

kino77

Joined March 2009

kino77 2009-10-18T07:37:03+00:00

Sorry for thr late mod~

[Easy]
Nothing found~

[Normal]
00:50:91(x)-Add a note here?
00:58:55(x)-^

[Hard]
00:29:09(1)-Remove this note?
00:34:91(1)-^

Great~star~

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-10-18T08:37:45+00:00

Updated.

Normal:

00:50:91(x) - Added.
00:58:55(x) - Added.

Hard:

00:29:09(1) - Removed.
00:34:91(1) - Removed.

Azure_Kite

osu! Alumni

Joined February 2009

Azure_Kite 2009-10-19T08:46:42+00:00

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
No problems found

[Normal]
No problems found

[Hard]
00:11:09 (5) - Maybe a note here where the other end of the slider is?
01:32:45 - A note here?
01:32:81 - ^?

Overall, I found no problems. I like it. Starred ;p

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-10-19T23:55:08+00:00

I'm not quite sure notes fit in any of those places, actually. I'll keep those suggestions in mind in case enough people think there should be notes in those places, though.

jericho2442

osu! Alumni

Joined March 2009

jericho2442 2009-10-21T09:41:02+00:00

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
00:50:90 (3,4,5) - the way (5) slider tilts dont look good, make the tilt of it the same as the tilt on (3,4)
(suggestion) 00:56:72 (2) - this looks a bit better moved down a bit so that it tilts the same way as the sliders

[Hard]
00:11:09 - a note here
01:10:36 (1,2,3) - would look better if (1) and (3) lined up
01:11:09 (1,2,3) - would look better if (1) and (2) lined up

nice map, enjoy a star

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-10-21T10:25:07+00:00

Updated.

Normal:

00:50:90 (3,4,5): Fixed.
00:56:72 (2): Seems fine to me. o_o

[Hard]
00:11:09: As I said before, I don't think a note would fit that well here. I may, however, put it in at some point...
01:10:36 (1,2,3): In my opinion, these notes actually look a bit better if they're skewed a little bit.
01:11:09 (1,2,3): ^

Lokamp

Joined January 2009

Lokamp 2009-10-22T16:15:31+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-10-22T21:45:33+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Kytoxid

osu! Alumni

Joined April 2009

Kytoxid 2009-10-26T04:18:09+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-10-26T06:24:23+00:00

Easy:

01:16:17 (1): I can't seem to do anything to it without making it look worse. D:

[Normal]

01:27:81 (1): Done.

[Hard]

00:06:90 (1): Removed.
01:27:81 (1): Done.

Also, a preview point has been added at 1:04:54 in all difficulties.

Kytoxid

osu! Alumni

Joined April 2009

Kytoxid 2009-10-26T07:33:53+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: IOSYS - Playing with Dolls (pieguy1372) [Easy].osu

ccbp

Joined August 2009

ccbp 2009-10-26T07:59:23+00:00

easy:
see pic

try to use smooth curves rather than shaped ones, which can make it looks nicer

Change the combo colour plz

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-10-26T09:29:59+00:00

Updated. That slider has been replaced with Kytoxid's slider, and I've added custom colors as well.

Zekira

Joined September 2008

Zekira 2009-10-26T13:31:39+00:00

What the... with all the offset modding that this is getting... I'm surprised that it's evidently LATE...

Offset: 524 (-16 of current, adjust all timing points if you wish to change the offset)

Other than that, nothing else...

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-10-26T20:30:30+00:00

Updated.

The offset has been fixed. Extra thanks for pointing it out...I could have sworn it sounded off but I couldn't figure out what it actually was.

DJPop

osu! Alumni

Here since the beginning

DJPop 2009-10-31T04:21:36+00:00

Video Offset: -100

~Easy~
Fine.

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
Fine.

+Star

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-10-31T04:37:36+00:00

Updated. The video offset has been fixed.

Hitoshirenu Shourai

osu! Alumni

Here since the beginning

Hitoshirenu Shourai 2009-10-31T04:43:54+00:00

Offset: ~~817~~ Edit: I can't type tonight. 517 suggested.

Before editing your map(s), please make sure you edit the offset beforehand.

[Easy]
All green.

[Normal]
All green.

[Hard]
01:10:607 (2) - Please move this beat 1 cell to the left on the lowest grid level (Tiny).

Aside from the offset being a bit wrong, my only issue was the beat placement on Hard. Otherwise, very solid map. PM me once changed, and I'll give you a bubble.

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-10-31T05:33:56+00:00

Updated.

Offset: o_o That offset seems wrong. It makes the notes come up too early.

Hard:

01:10:607 (2): Done.

Hitoshirenu Shourai

osu! Alumni

Here since the beginning

Hitoshirenu Shourai 2009-10-31T06:02:56+00:00

pieguy1372 wrote:
Updated.

Offset: o_o That offset seems wrong. It makes the notes come up too early.

Hard:

01:10:607 (2): Done.

Doh, why did I type 817 -_- I meant to type 517. Sorry about the mix-up. Check that, and get back to me.

pieguyn

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-10-31T06:05:52+00:00

Updated. The offset has been fixed.

Hitoshirenu Shourai

osu! Alumni

Here since the beginning

Hitoshirenu Shourai 2009-10-31T07:03:02+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Larto

Joined June 2008

Larto 2009-10-31T23:19:33+00:00

baka

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