Hi Chocoliti:3 As requested ~ (Sorry for the delay)
[General]
[freehal's Hard]




[General]
- BG size is too big.(use JPG to reduce its size) I recommend you to use 500kb ~ 700kb size.
- I want to put more whistle 00:00:375 - ~ 00:13:375 -
- 00:02:375 (3) - try to make curve slider ? you can make the natural flow.
- 00:08:375 (4,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? although i think the current one looks better.
- 00:09:375 (1) - Please check spacing here.
- 00:20:340 (1) - add finish to the head and end of the slider.
- 00:21:025 (2) - add finish to the end of the slider.
- 00:22:054 - ~ 00:27:197 - I think you should put more hit sound here.
about finish - 00:32:682 (1) - try to bend slider to the opposite direction for the natural flow.
- 00:41:597 (7,8) - emm, it doesn't follow the music imo.my suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/2gj3u
- 00:44:854 - This green line is unnecessary. Because drum sound follows nothing.
- 00:52:225 (4) - add new combo.
- 00:50:511 (2) - try to make curve slider ? you can make the natural flow.
- 00:53:597 (6,1,2) - Please check spacing again. and my suggestion of the rhythm and flow :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650654
You could improve this flow a bit.156,208,53597,2,0,P|187:300|278:304,1,200
368,312,54625,6,0,B|422:325|461:288|461:288,1,100
460,200,55311,1,0,0:0:0:0: - 00:54:625 (1) - add finish to the head of the slider.
- 01:11:082 (1,2) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
- 01:25:654 (2,3) - try to make one slider ?If you follow my suggestions, many player would prevent miss.
I think you should make the spacing equal :3 and put more finish sound on kiai time >.<
- default sampleset QAQ I don't recommend you to use it.
- 00:05:875 (5) - this note follows nothing. so delete it ?
- 00:12:500 (1) - add whistle.
- 00:20:340 (1,2) - Normal sound doesn't follow the music well. Please put soft sound. Don't forget to put finish sound them.
- 00:42:111 - add note ? I think it needs stronger sound here.
- 00:43:654 - try to use lower volume? since the melody is calmer than previous part.
- 00:57:711 (3) - try to bend slider to the opposite direction for the natural flow.
- 00:59:082 (5) - ^ same as here.
- 01:04:740 (1,2) - follows nothing here 01:05:425 - . my suggestion of the rhythm:http://puu.sh/2gjz1
- 01:21:711 (4) - move to x:132 y:100 for perfext stack to the end of previous slider(01:19:997 (2) - ).
- 01:27:539 (1) - emm... I like 1/1 slider for normal diff :3 but this is rankble imo so I will let you decide.
Japanese
[-RIKKA-'s Normal]
- デフォルトのヒットサウンドを使用していますが、custom soundを使用した方がよりよくなると思います。(たくさんの音を使用できますので)
- 00:05:875 (5) - ここのnoteは音にあっていないです。なので削除してみてはいかがですか?
- 00:12:500 (1) - ホイッスルを追加。
- 00:20:340 (1,2) - Normal sound はあっていないです。 なのでsoft soundに変更をして、2つのnoteにfinishを追加してみてください。
- 00:42:111 - noteが必要だと思います。多少の強い音が聞こえます。
- 00:43:654 - 前のパートより静かになっていると感じました、なのですこし小さめの音量を試してみてください。
- 00:57:711 (3) - スライダーを逆向きに曲げてみてはどうでしょうか?自然な流れを作ることができます。
- 00:59:082 (5) - こちらも同じです。
- 01:04:740 (1,2) - ここ(01:05:425 - )の音はいらないと思うのでこういったリズムはいかがでしょうか?:http://puu.sh/2gjz1
- 01:21:711 (4) - ここ(01:19:997 (2) - )のスライダーの終点に重ねるために、x:132 y:100 に移動してみてください。
- 01:27:539 (1) - ここの折り返しですが、1/1 リズムのスライダーに変えてみませんか?このままでも充分ではありますが、一応指摘してきます。
[freehal's Hard]
- 00:00:375 - ~ 00:13:375 - Please follow Insane diff whistle pattern here.
- 00:13:625 (1) - add whistle instead of finish?
- 00:20:340 (1,2) - remove clap since it follows nothing. I want to put finish sound here >.<
- 00:29:940 (5,6,7,1) - not stack better imo o_o
- 00:41:940 - ,00:42:111 - add notes ?
- 00:43:654 (1) - add finish.
- 01:10:054 (2) - add clap.
- 01:19:311 (1,2,3) - Please make the spacing equal here.
- 01:19:653 (3) - add finish.
- 01:19:997 (1,2,3) - same as here.01:19:311 (1,2,3) -
- 01:20:511 (1,1,2,3) - try this ? http://puu.sh/2gkjG
- 01:23:768 (1,2,3) - this part is confusing ._. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
I dont like clap sound at kiai time
- 00:04:375 (1) - add whistle.
- 00:05:625 (4) - add whistle to the repeat of the slider.
- 00:09:375 (1) - add whistle to the end of the slider.
- 00:20:340 (1,2) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical. so (2) moves to x:382 y:96.
- 00:21:711 (7) - add finish to the head of the slider.
- 00:27:197 (5) - ^ same as here.
- 00:31:997 (1,2) - add whistle to the head of the slider same as your pattern 00:29:940 (1,2,3,4) - .
- 00:43:054 (2,4) - these two notes are not necessary imo.
- 00:53:082 (1,2) - I want to put more sound here
my suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/2gjQq
- 00:54:625 (10) - add finish.
- 00:59:082 (1) - add clap to the head of the slider.
- 01:01:825 (6) - add clap. Something similar.. I believe that you can check the remain part by yourself.
- 01:04:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm sure it is overmapped.There are nothing you can do this.You should remove note (1,3,5,7,9)
- 01:12:025 (2) - move to x:256 y:72 for stack here. 01:11:082 (7) -
- 01:15:711 (1,2,3) - try my suggestion of the flow ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650689
- 01:17:768 (5) - emm...change in shape clean ? >.< try to make one more time , so it will become looks better like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650691
- 01:24:111 (1,2) - it doesn't follow the music here. try to make same as 01:11:768 (1,2,3) -
