1. 00:45:025 (3) - 始端とreverseの高さ(y)を合わせるとより良いと思います。　　OK
   I think better Together (y) the height of the beginning and end reverse.
2. 00:47:768 (3) - ^ 　　OK

Gomo Pslvarh wrote:

Star, Good luck

1. The all tags are same to a ranked version (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/62567). Better to remove "kayesara" and add all your guests' name!

1. 特にこれといった問題ってわけではありませんが、大音符がちょっと多いかなと思いました

1. 00:07:625 - note追加?
2. 00:08:125 (4) - k,バイオリンの音の高さからkのほうがいいかなと
3. 00:12:875 - muzuみたいにここにもnoteがほしいです
4. 00:47:597 (2) - D(big)? 00:46:397 (2) - と 00:47:082 (1) - がいい感じに響いてるのでこれも大音符にすればいい感じに聞こえます
5. 01:01:054 - add k here　ボーカルによく合わせられます

Naryuga wrote:

hi~ /me comes to mod taikos

[General]

1. The all tags are same to a ranked version (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/62567). Better to remove "kayesara" and add all your guests' name!

[Muzu]

1. Nothing special. The number of big notes is a bit too much to me though.

[Oni]

1. 00:07:625 - add a note here?
2. 00:08:125 (4) - k sounds better to me due to the violine's tone
3. 00:12:875 - I want a note here like muzu
4. 00:47:597 (2) - D(big)? It sounds nice to me with 00:46:397 (2) - and 00:47:082 (1) -
5. 01:01:054 - add k here and you can follow the vocal better

I've just looked over the standard diffs quickly. I think the Normal diff looks nice but the other diffs need more work. They can be better, keep working on mapping. Enjoy :3

Good luck! がんばって!

1. Taiko Oniの 00:16:375 - から 00:20:340 - までのBreak Timeを右クリックで消してください Taiko Muzukashiiは大丈夫でした

1. 00:11:125 - add d
2. 00:13:125 - ^
3. 00:21:197 (2,3,4) - kkk
4. 00:24:797 (1) - add finish
5. 00:25:654 (1) - ^
6. 00:28:396 (1) - ^
7. 00:42:454 (2,3) - KK
8. 01:03:882 (3) - K
9. 01:15:882 (1) - k
10. 01:21:368 (3,1) - d k and 01:21:711 (1,2,3) - ddd

1. 00:11:125 - add d
2. 00:22:911 (1) - add finish
3. 00:24:797 (1) - ^
4. 00:25:654 (1,2,3) - remove and 00:25:654 - add D
5. 00:28:397 (1) - add finish
6. 00:42:454 (1,2) - KK
7. 00:43:311 (5,6,1,2,1) - kkddd
8. 00:47:597 (2) - add finish
9. 01:05:597 (6) - ^
10. 01:15:025 (2) - ^
11. 01:22:397 (1) - remove finish

ReySHeL wrote:

hi~
from in game chat :3

[General]

1. 00:16:375 - から 00:20:340 - までのBreak Timeを右クリックで消してください

[0gre's Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:11:125 - add d
2. 00:13:125 - ^
3. 00:21:197 (2,3,4) - kkk
4. 00:24:797 (1) - add finish
5. 00:25:654 (1) - ^
6. 00:28:396 (1) - ^
7. 00:42:454 (2,3) - KK
8. 01:03:882 (3) - K
9. 01:15:882 (1) - k
10. 01:21:368 (3,1) - d k and 01:21:711 (1,2,3) - ddd

[0gre's Taiko Oni]

1. 00:11:125 - add d
2. 00:22:911 (1) - add finish
3. 00:24:797 (1) - ^
4. 00:25:654 (1,2,3) - remove and 00:25:654 - add D
5. 00:28:397 (1) - add finish
6. 00:42:454 (1,2) - KK
7. 00:43:311 (5,6,1,2,1) - kkddd
8. 00:47:597 (2) - add finish
9. 01:05:597 (6) - ^
10. 01:15:025 (2) - ^
11. 01:22:397 (1) - remove finish

thats all
good luck

1. Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties (taiko diff)
   　
2. "BG3.png" is too large. changing to jpg is better.
   　
3. AudioLeadIn: 2007 ⇒ 2000
   
   [ 0gre's Taiko Muzukashii]
   
   1. Use the "Normal" audio sample set.
      　
   2. 00:56:682 (1) - d
   [ 0gre's Taiko Oni]
   
   1. Use the "Normal" audio sample set.
      　
   2. 00:16:875 - All break sections should be artificially removed from the .osu file.
      　
   3. 00:48:711 (2) - re
   4. 01:01:825 (2) - k

Cuvelia wrote:

H i , from#modreqs , Taiko modding (+)

These are all suggestion. If you don't like them , you could ignore .

| d = don | k = kat | D = BIG DON | K = BIG KAT | re = remove |

[ General ]

1. Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties (taiko diff)
   　
2. "BG3.png" is too large. changing to jpg is better.
   　
3. AudioLeadIn: 2007 ⇒ 2000
   
   [ 0gre's Taiko Muzukashii]
   
   1. Use the "Normal" audio sample set.
      　
   2. 00:56:682 (1) - d
   [ 0gre's Taiko Oni]
   
   1. Use the "Normal" audio sample set.
      　
   2. 00:16:875 - All break sections should be artificially removed from the .osu file.
      　
   3. 00:48:711 (2) - re
   4. 01:01:825 (2) - k

　
good luck .

ReySHeL wrote:

hi~
from in game chat :3

[General]

1. Taiko Oniの 00:16:375 - から 00:20:340 - までのBreak Timeを右クリックで消してください Taiko Muzukashiiは大丈夫でした

[0gre's Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:11:125 - add d ✖ そうるすと 00:09:125 ここに入ることになって、静けさがなくってしまうと思います
2. 00:13:125 - ^ ✖ メロディーは違うように見えて、上と同じです
3. 00:21:197 (2,3,4) - kkk ✔
4. 00:24:797 (1) - add finish ✔ 最後のサビにだけ入れるつもりでしたが、考え直しました
5. 00:25:654 (1) - ^ ✖ Muzukashii では入れないで行こうと思っています
6. 00:28:396 (1) - ^ ✖ 同じく
7. 00:42:454 (2,3) - KK ✖ 00:37:311 ここ程の変化が無かった為、上げずに行きました
8. 01:03:882 (3) - K ✖ ここもそこまで上がってるようには思えません
9. 01:15:882 (1) - k ✔
10. 01:21:368 (3,1) - d k and 01:21:711 (1,2,3) - ddd ✖ 最初と同じ雰囲気です

[0gre's Taiko Oni]

1. 00:11:125 - add d ✖ 00:07:625 ここに入れなかったので、ここに入れる気もありません
2. 00:22:911 (1) - add finish ✖ 00:29:940 ここの音を弱めてしまう気がします
3. 00:24:797 (1) - ^ ✖ 上と同じ意見です
4. 00:25:654 (1,2,3) - remove and 00:25:654 - add D ✖ それでは裏のもう一つの音を無視してしまいます、なるべく入れてあげたいです＞＜
5. 00:28:397 (1) - add finish ✖ これもまた音を弱めてしまいます
6. 00:42:454 (1,2) - KK ✖ Muzukashii と同じです
7. 00:43:311 (5,6,1,2,1) - kkddd ✔
8. 00:47:597 (2) - add finish ✖ この辺りは、もう少し先の重い D が控えてるので
9. 01:05:597 (6) - ^ ✖ 静かに入るイメージではないですか？
10. 01:15:025 (2) - ^ ✔
11. 01:22:397 (1) - remove finish ✖ 指摘してくれたとこ、 01:16:911 (1) などに反します

ONI の 最後のサビだけ全体的に重くするためノーツを取り去り、大音符を入れました
最初のパートと変わらないように見えますが、どうにも気合タイムを外すと不自然な流れなので

thats all
good luck

Clique wrote:

PM modreq
뉴비 모더라 큼지막 큼지막한 것들밖에 모딩 불가능한 점은 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ
도움이 안됬다면 무시해 주셔도 되요

Easy

00:00:375 (1) - 여기만 사운드가 약간 이상해요 의도적으로 하신게 아니시면 뒷부분이랑 맞춰주세요

00:05:375 (2,3) - 디스턴스를 약간만 줄여주세요 1그리드정도만 손보면 얼추 맞을거같아요.

00:20:340 (1,2) - ^ 0.9 에서 플러스마이너스 쩜영오까지로 가급적이면 맞추시는게 좋을것같아요

그리고 레드라인에 맞춰진 서클이나 슬라이더가 빈번히 보이는데 이지는 가급적이면 흰 선에 맞춰주세요. (스냅 디비저1/1)

01:27:540 (6) - 머리가 아닌 끝에 피니시를 넣는 것도 고려를 해주세요.

Normal

全体的にきれいになってますので配置的なのはそのまま置いておきます。
リズム取りに特に問題はないですが、ノートが主に１分１配置になっているのがノーマルＤｉｆｆとしては少しつまらないって言うか単純だということになります。
00:08:375 (1) - このスピン微妙に曲と会わない気がしますけど、もしよかったら他のパタンも考えて見てください
00:00:375 - 00:16:375 - ここまではＳｏｆｔサウンドを使った方が雰囲気にあってるかも

その他には特に大きいな問題はありません。いいマップです！

Hard

00:04:375 (1) - 잔잔한 부분이라 처음에만 넣고 이부분에는 피니시가 없어도 될거같아요
00:13:125 (2,3,4) - 바이올린에 맞추신거면 2 랑 4만 있는 편이 더 곡에 더 어울릴것같아요. 궂이 넣으신다면 사운드를 좀 더 줄이시는게 더 나을 것 같아요.
00:13:500 (1) - 이부분도 피니시가 있어도 괜찮긴한데 없어도 될 것 같아요.
00:25:140 (5) - 이부분 리듬 따내는 방식이 약간 어색해요. 리턴이 아닌 그냥 슬라이더로 하셔도 될 것 같아요.
슬라이더가 빠르다는 느낌이 들었는데 기분탓인거같아요 넘어갈게요
00:25:140 (5) - 이부분이 약간 허전해요
00:54:625 (7) - 피니시 넣어도 될 것 같아요.
00:56:340 (7) - 흰틱으로 당겨주세요
00:57:368 - 이부분도 약간 허전한 느낌을 받았어요. 개개인별로 리듬 따내는 방식이 다르니 이렇게 저렇게 바꾸라고 강요는 하지 않지만 서클 한 번 넣어보시는 것도 고려 해 주세요.
01:07:140 (3) - 보컬라인에 리듬을 맞추시는거면 이부분도 다음 레드라인에 맞춰주시는게 나을것같아요.
01:10:911 (4,5) - 아자야-카 니 니까 슬라이더 2개가아닌 1개를 레드라인까지만 맞추고 흰라인에 서클 하나 넣어도 좋을 것 같아요.
01:20:340 (3) - 이것도 다음 빨간선에 넣는걸 고려 해주세요

리듬쪽으로 너무 민감한 성격이라 리듬 위주로 모딩을 하는데 궂이 제 모딩 대로 안하셔도 되요. 어디까지나 제안입니다.
다만 리듬을 보컬에 맞추시다가 삼천포로 흘러가는 것들이 몇개가 보여서 그런 부분만 찝었어요.

Chocochip

01:08:854 (2) - 휘슬을 안넣어주셔도 될것같아요
01:13:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 트리플을 궂이 안넣으셔도 충분히 자연스러운 리듬이 나올 것 같아요.
01:21:711 (1,2,3,4,5) - 초반배치처럼 자연스럽게 굽어들어가게 배치해주시면 더 이쁠 것 같아요. 툭 튀어나온 느낌이라

Naryuga wrote:

hi~ /me comes to mod taikos

[General]

1. The all tags are same to a ranked version (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/62567). Better to remove "kayesara" and add all your guests' name!

[Muzu]

1. 特にこれといった問題ってわけではありませんが、大音符がちょっと多いかなと思いました
   これは確かに自分も悩んでいます； 近々大々的な編集を行うかもしれません

[Oni]

1. 00:07:625 - note追加? ▲ 00:11:125 この部分も入れないといけなくなるのでは？ 一先ず入れて落ち着かせています
2. 00:08:125 (4) - k,バイオリンの音の高さからkのほうがいいかなと ✔
3. 00:12:875 - muzuみたいにここにもnoteがほしいです ✔
4. 00:47:597 (2) - D(big)? 00:46:397 (2) - と 00:47:082 (1) - がいい感じに響いてるのでこれも大音符にすればいい感じに聞こえます ▲ ReySHeL さんって方にも指摘され、次に見えてくる D D D D を弱めてしまうかも、シンバル多すぎるかもって思って、踏みとどまってる状態です；
5. 01:01:054 - add k here　ボーカルによく合わせられます ✔

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/posting.php?mode=quote&f=6&p=2154246#


I've just looked over the standard diffs quickly. I think the Normal diff looks nice but the other diffs need more work. They can be better, keep working on mapping. Enjoy :3

Good luck! がんばって!

Cuvelia wrote:

H i , from#modreqs , Taiko modding (+)

These are all suggestion. If you don't like them , you could ignore .

| d = don | k = kat | D = BIG DON | K = BIG KAT | re = remove |

[ General ]

1. Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties (taiko diff)
   　
2. "BG3.png" is too large. changing to jpg is better.
   　
3. AudioLeadIn: 2007 ⇒ 2000
   
   [ 0gre's Taiko Muzukashii]
   
   1. Use the "Normal" audio sample set. ▲ checking..
      　
   2. 00:56:682 (1) - d ✖ 00:56:340 looks very similar here and ignoring drum at the moment at this point
   [ 0gre's Taiko Oni]
   
   1. Use the "Normal" audio sample set. ▲ I have seen some soft sample set songs in rank. Asking..
      　
   2. 00:16:875 - All break sections should be artificially removed from the .osu file. ✔
      　
   3. 00:48:711 (2) - re ✖ the drum strike include this bit as well I think
   4. 01:01:825 (2) - k ✖ sounds like bit different from other k anyway I am going to sort the finishes again

　
good luck .

-RIKKA- wrote:

[-RIKKA-'s Normal]
00:36:625 (2,3,4,5) - add finish　　OK
00:42:454 (2,4) - ^　　OK
01:13:825 (1) - add finish　　This is spiner. yes. in spiner
01:21:711 (4) - ^　　OK

1. BG size is too big.(use JPG to reduce its size) I recommend you to use 500kb ~ 700kb size.

1. I want to put more whistle 00:00:375 - ~ 00:13:375 -
   
   00:00:375 -
   00:02:375 -
   00:04:375 -
   00:06:375 -
   00:08:375 -
   00:10:375 -
   00:12:375 -
   it is better to put sound with constant rhythm :3
2. 00:02:375 (3) - try to make curve slider ? you can make the natural flow.
3. 00:08:375 (4,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? although i think the current one looks better.
4. 00:09:375 (1) - Please check spacing here.
5. 00:20:340 (1) - add finish to the head and end of the slider.
6. 00:21:025 (2) - add finish to the end of the slider.
7. 00:22:054 - ~ 00:27:197 - I think you should put more hit sound here.
   about finish
   
   00:24:797 -
   00:25:654 -
   00:27:197 -
   00:28:397 -
   00:31:997 -
   00:32:340 -
8. 00:32:682 (1) - try to bend slider to the opposite direction for the natural flow.
9. 00:41:597 (7,8) - emm, it doesn't follow the music imo.my suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/2gj3u
10. 00:44:854 - This green line is unnecessary. Because drum sound follows nothing.
11. 00:52:225 (4) - add new combo.
12. 00:50:511 (2) - try to make curve slider ? you can make the natural flow.
13. 00:53:597 (6,1,2) - Please check spacing again. and my suggestion of the rhythm and flow :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650654
    You could improve this flow a bit.
    

    156,208,53597,2,0,P|187:300|278:304,1,200
    368,312,54625,6,0,B|422:325|461:288|461:288,1,100
    460,200,55311,1,0,0:0:0:0:

14. 00:54:625 (1) - add finish to the head of the slider.
15. 01:11:082 (1,2) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
16. 01:25:654 (2,3) - try to make one slider ?If you follow my suggestions, many player would prevent miss.
    
    I think you should make the spacing equal :3 and put more finish sound on kiai time >.<

1. default sampleset QAQ I don't recommend you to use it.
2. 00:05:875 (5) - this note follows nothing. so delete it ?
3. 00:12:500 (1) - add whistle.
4. 00:20:340 (1,2) - Normal sound doesn't follow the music well. Please put soft sound. Don't forget to put finish sound them.
5. 00:42:111 - add note ? I think it needs stronger sound here.
6. 00:43:654 - try to use lower volume? since the melody is calmer than previous part.
7. 00:57:711 (3) - try to bend slider to the opposite direction for the natural flow.
8. 00:59:082 (5) - ^ same as here.
9. 01:04:740 (1,2) - follows nothing here 01:05:425 - . my suggestion of the rhythm:http://puu.sh/2gjz1
10. 01:21:711 (4) - move to x:132 y:100 for perfext stack to the end of previous slider(01:19:997 (2) - ).
11. 01:27:539 (1) - emm... I like 1/1 slider for normal diff :3 but this is rankble imo so I will let you decide.

1. 00:00:375 - ~ 00:13:375 - Please follow Insane diff whistle pattern here.
2. 00:13:625 (1) - add whistle instead of finish?
3. 00:20:340 (1,2) - remove clap since it follows nothing. I want to put finish sound here >.<
4. 00:29:940 (5,6,7,1) - not stack better imo o_o
5. 00:41:940 - ,00:42:111 - add notes ?
6. 00:43:654 (1) - add finish.
7. 01:10:054 (2) - add clap.
8. 01:19:311 (1,2,3) - Please make the spacing equal here.
9. 01:19:653 (3) - add finish.
10. 01:19:997 (1,2,3) - same as here.01:19:311 (1,2,3) -
11. 01:20:511 (1,1,2,3) - try this ? http://puu.sh/2gkjG
12. 01:23:768 (1,2,3) - this part is confusing ._. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
    
    I dont like clap sound at kiai time

1. 00:04:375 (1) - add whistle.
2. 00:05:625 (4) - add whistle to the repeat of the slider.
3. 00:09:375 (1) - add whistle to the end of the slider.
4. 00:20:340 (1,2) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical. so (2) moves to x:382 y:96.
5. 00:21:711 (7) - add finish to the head of the slider.
6. 00:27:197 (5) - ^ same as here.
7. 00:31:997 (1,2) - add whistle to the head of the slider same as your pattern 00:29:940 (1,2,3,4) - .
8. 00:43:054 (2,4) - these two notes are not necessary imo.
9. 00:53:082 (1,2) - I want to put more sound here my suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/2gjQq
10. 00:54:625 (10) - add finish.
11. 00:59:082 (1) - add clap to the head of the slider.
12. 01:01:825 (6) - add clap. Something similar.. I believe that you can check the remain part by yourself.
13. 01:04:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm sure it is overmapped.There are nothing you can do this.You should remove note (1,3,5,7,9)
14. 01:12:025 (2) - move to x:256 y:72 for stack here. 01:11:082 (7) -
15. 01:15:711 (1,2,3) - try my suggestion of the flow ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650689
16. 01:17:768 (5) - emm...change in shape clean ? >.< try to make one more time , so it will become looks better like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650691
17. 01:24:111 (1,2) - it doesn't follow the music here. try to make same as 01:11:768 (1,2,3) -

1. default sampleset QAQ I don't recommend you to use it.
2. 00:05:875 (5) - this note follows nothing. so delete it ?
3. 00:12:500 (1) - add whistle.
4. 00:20:340 (1,2) - Normal sound doesn't follow the music well. Please put soft sound. Don't forget to put finish sound them.
5. 00:42:111 - add note ? I think it needs stronger sound here.
6. 00:43:654 - try to use lower volume? since the melody is calmer than previous part.
7. 00:57:711 (3) - try to bend slider to the opposite direction for the natural flow.
8. 00:59:082 (5) - ^ same as here.
9. 01:04:740 (1,2) - follows nothing here 01:05:425 - . my suggestion of the rhythm:http://puu.sh/2gjz1
10. 01:21:711 (4) - move to x:132 y:100 for perfext stack to the end of previous slider(01:19:997 (2) - ).
11. 01:27:539 (1) - emm... I like 1/1 slider for normal diff :3 but this is rankble imo so I will let you decide.

kazukisinx wrote:

Taiko mod as requested in my Modding queue :3

0gre's Taiko Oni

Disable Letterbox during breaks.
00:35:254 (2,3,1) - ddk
00:16:500 - to 00:20:250 - should have some notes ,how about a second spinner? from 00:16:625 - to 00:20:125 - maybe?
Good diif almost perfect

0gre's Taiko Muzukashii

Disable Letterbox during breaks.
00:01:125 (3) - k
00:07:875 (1,2,3) - what about moving this notes to 00:07:625 (1,2,3) - ?
00:08:625 - (only if you move the notes that i said before) add d here
00:16:625 - to 00:20:125 - should have something,how about another spinner?
01:11:597 (1) - d
01:11:768 (1) - k


Good job with both diffs. Good luck ^^

ReySHeL wrote:

hi~!
IRC mod >w</

[0gre's Taiko Muzukashii]

SPOILER

02:37 ReySHeL: むずかしいw
02:37 ReySHeL: だねw
02:37 0gre: じゃーむずかしいの譜面どう？w
02:37 0gre: これから
02:37 ReySHeL: ん？
02:37 0gre: 今のとこ
02:37 ReySHeL: うん
02:37 0gre: むずかしいだけ終わった
02:37 ReySHeL: うん
02:38 ReySHeL: むずかしいの
02:38 ReySHeL: 全体的の譜面が
02:38 ReySHeL: どうかってこと？
02:38 0gre: そうw
02:38 ReySHeL: おkww
02:38 ReySHeL: やるわww
02:38 0gre: おkw
02:38 ReySHeL: ここ
02:38 ReySHeL: 遅いから
02:38 ReySHeL: DTでも
02:38 ReySHeL: DTつけてる感覚
02:38 ReySHeL: なかったwwwwwwwwww
02:38 0gre: 違和感ないよねwww
02:40 ReySHeL: 気合はどこへいったw
02:40 0gre: え
02:40 0gre: どこ？w
02:40 ReySHeL: 大音符w
02:40 0gre: 大音符？
02:40 0gre: どっち？w
02:41 ReySHeL: 大音符w
02:41 0gre: え、気合？w
02:41 0gre: あぁw
02:41 0gre: 辺？
02:41 0gre: 変？
02:41 ReySHeL: 少くとも
02:41 ReySHeL: 01:05:597 (4) - 
02:41 ReySHeL: ここは入れたい
02:42 0gre: ここかー
02:42 ReySHeL: 前半のdddの
02:42 ReySHeL: 使い方いいねぇ
02:42 0gre: なんか静かに入るイメージがあったからなー
02:42 0gre: 確かに考えた
02:42 ReySHeL: うん
02:42 0gre: ddd？
02:42 ReySHeL: 01:05:597 (4) - 
02:42 ReySHeL: 01:05:597 (4) - 
02:42 ReySHeL: 好き
02:43 0gre: ここ？
02:43 ReySHeL: うん
02:43 0gre: 大音符？
02:43 ReySHeL: あwwwwwww
02:43 0gre: ddd？
02:43 ReySHeL: みすwwwwwww
02:43 0gre: うんwww
02:43 ReySHeL: みすwwwwww
02:43 ReySHeL: 00:33:882 - 
02:43 0gre: わかったってw
02:43 ReySHeL: 00:39:368 - 
02:43 ReySHeL: ここwww
02:43 0gre: あーやっぱこれかw
02:43 ReySHeL: うんww
02:43 ReySHeL: あれ
02:43 ReySHeL: 前のむずかしいと
02:43 ReySHeL: ガラッと変わってね？
02:44 0gre: やったことあるん？
02:44 ReySHeL: あれwww
02:44 0gre: ガラッと変わったよw
02:44 ReySHeL: なかったっけwww
02:44 0gre: もっかい取ってみて？w
02:44 ReySHeL: wwww
02:44 ReySHeL: ぶっちゃけ
02:44 ReySHeL: 前のやつ違和感あるとこはあったんだけどこっち
02:44 ReySHeL: すらっとプレイできたw
02:44 0gre: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/80200
02:44 0gre: ほんとに？ww
02:44 ReySHeL: うんwww
02:44 ReySHeL: やるじゃんwww
02:44 0gre: ただこれさ
02:44 ReySHeL: うん
02:44 0gre: ちょっときつかったのが
02:44 ReySHeL: ん？
02:45 0gre: 大音符の配置
02:45 ReySHeL: うん
02:45 0gre: かなり際どかった
02:45 0gre: 大音符
02:45 ReySHeL: どこ？
02:45 0gre: けど全部入れるとかなりやりにくい
02:45 0gre: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/80200
02:45 0gre: 取ってみて
02:45 0gre: まだアップしてないから
02:45 0gre: 古いまま
02:45 ReySHeL: なるほどな
02:46 ReySHeL: あぁ
02:46 ReySHeL: だいぶよくなってるなwwwww
02:47 ReySHeL: 気合は検討してほしいねw
02:50 0gre: 気合タイム？
02:50 0gre: ちょっと大音符について話し合いたいのけどいい？
02:50 ReySHeL: 大音符
02:51 ReySHeL: いいよ
02:51 ReySHeL: 俺が言いたいのは大音符だ
02:51 0gre: 00:22:911 - 
02:51 0gre: 00:24:454 - 
02:51 0gre: 00:25:654 - 
02:51 0gre: 00:21:711 - 
02:51 0gre: この４つと
02:52 0gre: 01:05:597 - 
02:52 0gre: 01:15:025 (1) - 
02:52 0gre: これら
02:52 ReySHeL: 00:25:654 (1) - 
02:52 ReySHeL: ここもいる
02:53 0gre: 確かに
02:53 ReySHeL: うん
02:53 0gre: 普通にみると、いると思うんだけど
02:53 0gre: ここまで入れると、かなりやりにくくなっちゃうような気がする
02:53 ReySHeL: まぁmodding画面だといる
02:53 ReySHeL: ほう
02:54 ReySHeL: 00:54:111 - 
02:54 ReySHeL: ここさ
02:54 0gre: 00:22:911 (1) - 
02:54 0gre: ぶっちゃけこれも撮りたいぐらい
02:54 0gre: うん
02:54 ReySHeL: 00:54:368 - ここにk追加で
02:54 ReySHeL: 00:54:625 - add finishの
02:54 ReySHeL: 00:54:797 - 削除
02:54 ReySHeL: は？
02:55 0gre: いやこの曲のサビ
02:55 0gre: 流れるように始まってる気がするんだけど
02:56 ReySHeL: 00:54:625 - でもここじゃーんってバックでなってるからなー
02:56 ReySHeL: 00:53:768 - ここで途切れて
02:56 ReySHeL: 00:54:111 - こっからドラムの
02:56 ReySHeL: 00:54:625 - じゃーんの入り
02:56 0gre: 00:53:768 - 
02:56 0gre: これ確かに考えたけど
02:57 0gre: ここと同じ音
02:57 ReySHeL: その場合00:53:768 - add finish
02:57 0gre: 結構ほかにもあるんだけどそこ全部ノーツで
02:57 ReySHeL: ほう
02:57 0gre: 01:06:797 - 
02:57 0gre: ここみたいなね
02:58 ReySHeL: なるほどな
02:58 0gre: この音なんか
02:58 0gre: ずっと並行的に流れてるから
02:58 ReySHeL: ミニシンバルくさいやつかw
02:58 0gre: まーあまり力入れると
02:58 0gre: そうだねww
02:58 ReySHeL: うんw
02:58 0gre: これ本当にめんどいんだよww
02:58 0gre: そういう部分がw
02:58 ReySHeL: うんwwww
02:58 ReySHeL: わかるw
02:59 0gre: サビの始まり
02:59 0gre: 入れるとなんか
02:59 0gre: 急に
02:59 0gre: _____/\____ な感じがしてw
03:00 ReySHeL: www
03:00 ReySHeL: まぁ言いたいことは伝わらなくはないけどw
03:00 0gre: うんww
03:00 0gre: 気合って
03:00 0gre: どの部分が？
03:01 ReySHeL: ん？
03:01 ReySHeL: 気合じゃなくて　気合始まりの大音符だった
03:01 0gre: 気合を検討っていってたから
03:01 ReySHeL: 俺が言いたかったのはw
03:01 0gre: wwwwwwwwwwwwww
03:01 ReySHeL: wwwwwww
03:01 0gre: 気合は大丈夫なのね？
03:01 ReySHeL: 縮小しすぎたww
03:01 ReySHeL: 文章をw
03:01 0gre: なるほどww
03:01 ReySHeL: 気合の使い方は
03:01 ReySHeL: 俺もこうしてる
03:01 0gre: おkwww
03:01 ReySHeL: あ
03:01 ReySHeL: 後半の使い方
03:01 ReySHeL: 少しちゃうわw
03:02 0gre: え？w
03:02 ReySHeL: 01:05:082 - 
03:02 ReySHeL: ここの使い方は
03:02 ReySHeL: 俺と一緒w
03:02 ReySHeL: 01:12:797 - 
03:02 ReySHeL: 俺はここで気合切る
03:02 0gre: まーそうだねーw
03:02 ReySHeL: うんw
03:02 0gre: 01:13:482 - 
03:02 0gre: ここの音邪魔www
03:02 ReySHeL: いいと思うよそれはw
03:03 ReySHeL: ここ完全に音ないから
03:03 ReySHeL: それと音始まるの
03:03 ReySHeL: 01:13:825 - 
03:03 ReySHeL: ここだし
03:03 0gre: 直したw
03:03 ReySHeL: いろんな音ね
03:04 0gre: 00:25:654 (1) - 
03:04 ReySHeL: おうww
03:04 0gre: ここさ
03:04 0gre: 00:22:911 (1) - 
03:04 0gre: これも無視してもいいかな？
03:04 ReySHeL: そうだなー
03:05 0gre: え、ほんとに？w
03:05 ReySHeL: 00:24:797 - 
03:05 ReySHeL: ここも無視ってるしなー
03:05 0gre: うんww
03:05 ReySHeL: まって
03:06 ReySHeL: 00:25:654 (1) - 
03:06 ReySHeL: ここフィニッシュほしいなw
03:06 0gre: ここ？w
03:06 ReySHeL: うんw
03:07 0gre: ううううううんんんんんwww
03:07 0gre: ここ入れると
03:07 ReySHeL: wwwwww
03:07 0gre: 00:22:911 - 
03:07 0gre: 必然的にここもいれんとだよな？w
03:07 ReySHeL: ここは入ってるけどw
03:07 0gre: いや今ここ
03:07 0gre: 取り外そうか悩んでる
03:07 ReySHeL: 外すでないw
03:08 0gre: そうすると本当に助かるんだけどww
03:08 0gre: やりやすさが増してww
03:08 ReySHeL: www
03:08 ReySHeL: いるでしょやっぱw
03:08 0gre: ほんとにー？w
03:08 ReySHeL: いるいるwwww
03:08 ReySHeL: おういえーすwww
03:08 ReySHeL: 01:05:597 (4) - 
03:08 ReySHeL: ここもなw
03:09 0gre: ちょ
03:09 ReySHeL: 01:15:454 - 
03:09 0gre: それは勘弁してくれませんか？w
03:09 ReySHeL: ここk入れてもいいかも
03:09 ReySHeL: wwwwwww
03:09 ReySHeL: ええw
03:10 0gre: どうしようw
03:10 ReySHeL: wwww
03:10 0gre: とりあえず
03:10 0gre: サビの始まり以外は大音符入れた
03:10 ReySHeL: うん
03:10 ReySHeL: あ
03:11 ReySHeL: 待った
03:11 ReySHeL: 気合タイム待った
03:11 0gre: うんw
03:11 ReySHeL: 01:16:568 - 
03:11 ReySHeL: ここで気合外す
03:12 0gre: お
03:12 0gre: そう？
03:12 ReySHeL: うん
03:12 ReySHeL: そう
03:12 0gre: おっけ
03:12 ReySHeL: ここも直してくれたら俺と同じになるー
03:13 ReySHeL: あそこ気合あったら星空と同じような感じの使い方になってる
03:13 0gre: でも星空
03:13 0gre: あれ最後気合あるよね？
03:13 ReySHeL: 最後はあるよw
03:13 0gre: やっぱ違うの？
03:13 0gre: 星空と
03:13 ReySHeL: 違う
03:14 0gre: ほほうw
03:14 ReySHeL: あれは最後はいるw
03:14 ReySHeL: これは01:16:568 - 
03:14 0gre: なるほどww
03:14 ReySHeL: ここで区切りついてるw
03:14 ReySHeL: うんw
03:14 0gre: 俺はその基準がまだ理解できてないからさw
03:14 ReySHeL: なんでだーwww
03:14 0gre: わからんw
03:14 ReySHeL: まぁわかるでしょw
03:14 ReySHeL: そのうちw
03:14 0gre: そっかーw
03:14 0gre: 01:05:597 - 
03:14 0gre: 今ここ
03:14 ReySHeL: もしあそこはいってたら
03:14 0gre: すっごい考えてるww
03:14 0gre: うん
03:14 ReySHeL: 00:21:711 - 
03:14 ReySHeL: こんなとこから
03:14 ReySHeL: 気合入ってる状態に
03:14 ReySHeL: なるぞw
03:15 0gre: いやだって
03:15 0gre: これは
03:15 0gre: サビじゃないじゃんww
03:15 ReySHeL: wwwwwww
03:15 0gre: なんか最後の
03:15 0gre: サビっぽいじゃんw
03:15 0gre: ってとこまで来てるw
03:15 ReySHeL: 同じだぞww
03:15 ReySHeL: 一応考えてることは理解できるけどw
03:15 0gre: 星空
03:15 ReySHeL: 01:05:597 - 
03:15 ReySHeL: いまここか
03:15 0gre: 最後のもサビじゃないじゃんw
03:15 0gre: みたいになってくるから本当にわからない
03:15 ReySHeL: あるってえええww
03:15 ReySHeL: wwww
03:15 ReySHeL: まぁ
03:15 ReySHeL: その話は
03:15 ReySHeL: おいておこう
03:16 0gre: とりあえず
03:16 0gre: 入れたw
03:16 ReySHeL: うん
03:16 0gre: 大音符w
03:16 ReySHeL: おう
03:16 0gre: 問題は
03:16 ReySHeL: 最後の気合は？
03:16 0gre: あー
03:16 0gre: あれは直したよ
03:16 ReySHeL: おk
03:16 ReySHeL: 問題？
03:16 0gre: 問題は k
03:16 ReySHeL: 俺が言った？
03:17 0gre: kkk　って言ってた
03:17 ReySHeL: 01:15:454 - 
03:17 ReySHeL: add k
03:17 0gre: あと
03:17 0gre: サビ前もあったけど
03:17 0gre: これ
03:17 0gre: 入れると形が崩れる感じがして
03:17 ReySHeL: サビ前は
03:17 ReySHeL: 俺が上で言ったあのやつ
03:18 0gre: あ
03:18 0gre: 00:54:197 - 
03:18 0gre: ここどう？
03:18 0gre: k
03:18 ReySHeL: もう一回言う？
03:18 ReySHeL: ん
03:18 0gre: 一応
03:18 0gre: kkk　のとこ
03:18 ReySHeL: いいと思うよ
03:18 0gre: ボーカルもなんかあってて
03:19 ReySHeL: 00:54:625 - 大音符　00:54:797 - removeは考えてない？
03:19 ReySHeL: 最後のリンクバグりすぎわろた
03:19 ReySHeL: 00:54:797 - 
03:19 0gre: 駄目ww
03:19 0gre: それ駄目ww
03:19 0gre: ここ
03:19 ReySHeL: wwww
03:19 0gre: 流れてるもんww
03:19 0gre: 流れてるもんwwwww
03:20 ReySHeL: wwwww
03:20 ReySHeL: 00:53:768 - 
03:20 ReySHeL: finish
03:20 0gre: だからそれ
03:20 0gre: ミニ大音符w
03:20 ReySHeL: ミニちゃん？w
03:21 ReySHeL: ういwwww
03:21 0gre: 今最後の問題点
03:21 0gre: 00:54:625 - 
03:21 0gre: 気合の大音符
03:21 ReySHeL: うん
03:22 0gre: 01:05:597 - 
03:22 0gre: これが入るならあっちも入ってないとおかしい気がするんだけど
03:22 0gre: そうすると
03:22 ReySHeL: うん
03:22 0gre: ___/\___　になるんだよw
03:22 ReySHeL: wwwwwww
03:22 ReySHeL: ちょっと
03:22 ReySHeL: 気になる点一個発見
03:22 0gre: うん
03:22 ReySHeL: 00:56:682 (2) - 
03:22 ReySHeL: ここ
03:22 ReySHeL: なぜkを置いたか
03:23 0gre: ここは置くでしょうがーwww
03:23 ReySHeL: www
03:23 0gre: らん♪　らん♪　らぶゆー♪　でしょw
03:23 ReySHeL: wwwwwwwwww
03:24 ReySHeL: うわwww
03:24 ReySHeL: 言われるまで
03:24 ReySHeL: 聞こえんかったwwwwwwww
03:24 0gre: wwwwwwwwwww
03:24 0gre: なぜwwwwwww
03:24 ReySHeL: ていうか
03:24 ReySHeL: 意識してなかったw
03:24 0gre: あーww
03:24 0gre: それに
03:24 0gre: 唯一の区切れそうな場所でもあった
03:24 ReySHeL: dの方がよくね？
03:24 0gre: いや d は
03:24 ReySHeL: うん
03:24 0gre: 00:59:425 - 
03:24 0gre: こっちの方が
03:25 ReySHeL: うん
03:25 0gre: 低い感じじゃない？
03:25 ReySHeL: まあね
03:26 0gre: 01:15:454 - 
03:26 0gre: ここに k をおいてみた
03:26 ReySHeL: うん
03:27 0gre: うーん
03:27 0gre: これで完成かなー
03:27 ReySHeL: 00:56:168 (4,1) - 
03:27 ReySHeL: d k チェンジ？
03:28 0gre: 駄目w
03:28 0gre: DT だとかなりやりにくい
03:28 0gre: ん
03:28 0gre: どこどこ？
03:28 0gre: 00:56:340 - 
03:28 0gre: 前はここ逆だったよw
03:28 ReySHeL: 00:58:911 (4,1) - 
03:28 ReySHeL: ここは
03:28 ReySHeL: 違和感ない
03:29 ReySHeL: 逆だったのw
03:29 0gre: うんww
03:29 0gre: けど戻したw
03:29 ReySHeL: 逆にしようw
03:29 0gre: なんか d k
03:29 0gre: 自然と違和感がなくなって
03:29 0gre: やりやすくなる感じがする
03:29 0gre: はずw
03:29 ReySHeL: 00:56:168 - 
03:29 ReySHeL: ここd kなんだけど？w
03:30 0gre: うん
03:30 ReySHeL: 00:58:911 - こっちのd kは違和感ない
03:30 0gre: だから
03:30 0gre: そこも d k でずっと聞くのだw
03:30 ReySHeL: wwwwww
03:30 0gre: そうすると違和感がなくなるはずなのだw
03:30 ReySHeL: うーむwwww
03:30 0gre: 00:56:682 - 
03:30 0gre: ここボーカルで
03:30 0gre: らん１　らん２　らぶゆー
03:30 0gre: らん　は　k じゃん？
03:31 ReySHeL: うんw
03:31 0gre: それに
03:31 0gre: d d k d d d k d d d k の流れだとそこも k だった
03:31 ReySHeL: okw
03:31 0gre: よっしゃーwww
03:31 ReySHeL: good luck <33
03:31 0gre: ちゃっかり IRC してるのねw
03:32 ReySHeL: あ　していいの？w
03:32 0gre: していいよw
03:32 ReySHeL: おkwwww

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Nichiyouki wrote:

SPOILER

Hi, Chocoliti :3

Mod request from pm in-game
Sorry for mod delay ><

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Remove combo3 and combo4 on "0gre's Taiko Muzukashii" and "0gre's Taiko Oni" diffs because these colours are same with combo1 and combo2.
2. Disable letterbox during breaks on Azmato's Hard to same with other diffs.
3. Kiai time of Easy diff is different with other diffs. Please start Kiai #1 at 00:54:625.

Azmato's Hard

[spoilerbox]

1. I think circle size is too big to play this diff, and it cause a mess, too. So you should use CS +1 (4). It will be more neat.
2. 00:00:375 ~ 00:13:375 - Same with Normal diff. These aren't any hitsound you put. So you should add some hitsound on these to reduce the boring to play.
   [spoilerbox]
   1. 00:00:875 (1) - Add whistle here
   2. 00:01:375 (3) - Add whistle on slider begin O
   3. 00:02:125 (4) - ^ O
   4. 00:02:875 (5) - ^ O
   5. 00:03:875 (7) - Add whistle here O
   6. 00:04:375 (8) - ^ O
   7. 00:04:875 (1) - ^ O
   8. 00:05:375 (3) - Add whistle on slider begin O
   9. 00:06:125 (5) - ^ O
   10. 00:06:875 (6) - Add whistle here O
   11. 00:07:875 (2) - ^ O
   12. 00:08:125 (3) - Add whistle on slider begin O
   13. 00:09:375 (1) - Add whistle on slider repeat & end O
   14. 00:11:375 (3) - Add whistle on slider begin & repeat O
   15. 00:12:375 (4) - Add whistle on slider begin O
   16. 00:13:375 (6) - Add whistle here

O00:00:875 (1) - This isn't neceesary to add NC. Please remove it. O00:09:375 (5) - This, too. Please remove NC. O00:20:340 (1,2) - You should use soft hitsound to be suitable about the rhythm. O00:21:711 (1) - Add finish here to follow the rhythm. O00:29:940 (5,6,7,1) - Move (5,6,7,1) to x:104 y:192 to symmetric with 00:31:140 (3). O00:31:825 (1,2) - The reason same with above. Please move to right and up 1 grid. O00:35:425 (1) - I feel weird when I play. Please move it to stack with slider end of (5), or increase spacing into about 1.0x. O00:52:991 - It will be better if you add a circle here. Then add NC here instead of 00:53:082 (1) and 00:53:425 (1). O01:03:368 (1) - Same with 00:00:875 (1). O01:04:397 (1) - This, too. Remove NC. O01:09:539 (1) - This as well. Remove NC. O01:10:397 - Add a circle to follow the vocal. Then add NC here instead of 01:10:538 (1). O01:12:453 (1) - Same with 00:00:875 (1). O01:16:568 (4) - Add finish here to follow the rhythm. O01:24:111 (2,3) - I feel weird when I play. Please try not to stack or overlap with slider end of (1). O

Hope my mod will be useful for you.
[/spoilerbox]
Good luck~

to chocoliti

moonlightleaf wrote:

From my queue,some suggestion hope can help you >w<

Azmato's Hard

HDR-1 ？

00:22:397(3)(4)(5) pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/680751 Quote O

00:24:968 add note x|312 y|200 O

00:25:140(4) move to x|280 y|280 O

00:34:054(1)(2)(3)(4)pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/680780 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/680783

00:39:197(3)(4)(5)(1)(2)(3) pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/680791 Quote O

00:40:568(4) move to x|352 y|296 O

00:51:199(1) move to x|304 y|144 O

00:51:882(2) move to x|96 y|216 O

00:54:111(1) pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/680810 O

01:00:797(3) move to x|168 y|208 O

01:08:511 add note X

01:14:854(5) add a return O

01:20:511(1) start form 01:20:425 end at 01:21:711 delete 01:21:711(1) O

01:23:082(6)(7) pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/680827 I can't see because of your skin ;o;

this diff should take more work on it, not so comfortable

just my opinion ， you can consider ~

Legenda wrote:

= Unrankable, must fix
= Tips & Tricks for make your maps better
= My houamn doubts/questions to consider
* = Just comments, not mods.
Naked Lines = normal mods

[Easy]
00:46:740 (2) - Move to x:200 y:180 and....
00:47:082 (3) - move to x:288 y:180 for a perfect triangle (1,2,3)

00:48:454 (4) - If you moved the prior notes, Move this to x:368 y:224 to correct spacing.
01:20:682 (3) - Move the 3rd dot to x:440 y:224 for a nicer blanket

[-RIKKA-'s Normal]
* So perfect c:

[Azmato's Hard]
00:23:254 (1,2,3) - This pattern could be like the img below to make more consistent with spacing at 00:28:225 (3,1,2) and also to make more intutitve since it's Hard not Insane (:

SPOILER

[Chocoliti]
00:43:567 (11) - Move to x:184 y:220 to nicer stream (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1)

MineC24 wrote:

PM request~ (Azmato)

Azmato's Hard

저기 체크된거 제거 부탁.. O

00:09:375 (1) - NC 제거 O
00:35:425 (9) - NC O
00:36:625 (1) - 이건 개인적 생각이지만, NC 제거 X
00:39:197 (5) - 00:39:540 (1) 하고 안닿도록 약간 수정 부탁 O
01:01:654 (5) - 이 노트 제거..? O
01:14:854 (4) - 앞에 나오는 슬라이더랑 간격이 상당히 헷갈림.. 수정부탁 O
01:20:425 (1) - 스핀 시작점을 01:20:511 로 O
01:23:768 (1) - 헷갈림... 위치 이동부탁 O

GL

cFiszpan wrote:

From my queue (:

Legenda wrote:

= Unrankable, must fix
= Tips & Tricks for make your maps better
= My houamn doubts/questions to consider
* = Just comments, not mods.
Naked Lines = normal mods

[Azmato's Hard]
00:23:254 (1,2,3) - This pattern could be like the img below to make more consistent with spacing at 00:28:225 (3,1,2) and also to make more intutitve since it's Hard not Insane (: O

SPOILER

Good song and very good map (: GOOD LUCK for Rank (:

(and very nice BG photo :3 )

Att.

Azer wrote:

Hi, from my queue.

Azmato's Hard

1. 00:05:375 (3) - Move third point to x:273 y:163 O
2. 00:18:106 - Break O
3. 00:21:711 (1,2,3) - Make this more linear O
4. 00:22:397 (4,5,6) - Distance O
5. 00:24:454 (6,7,8) - ^ O
6. 00:43:654 (1,2,3,4) - Space apart O
7. 00:44:854 (5,6) - Overlap looks bad O
8. 00:46:397 (1,2) - Snap properly O
9. 00:49:825 (2) - ^ O
10. 00:55:140 (2,3,4) - Distance O
11. 00:57:711 (1,2,3) - ^ O
12. 00:59:083 (1,1,2) - Too far apart O
13. 01:04:911 - Add a note here O
14. 01:05:940 (1,2) - Snap properly O
15. 01:16:054 (3,3) - Stack together O
16. 01:23:082 (5) - Snap properly O
17. 01:24:797 (1,2,3) - Distance O
18. 01:25:654 (1,3,1,2,3) - Stack together I don't know what you mean

• To Senbonzakura(게이)

MineC24 wrote:

PM request~ (Azmato)

0gre's Taiko Muzukashii

Kiai part : same as Easy plz

nice pattern

0gre's Taiko Oni

d=don, k=kat

Kiai part : same as Easy plz

00:21:111 (2) - k

Chocochip

00:38:168 (6) - x:320 y:300 으로 이동 (더 자연스럽게..)
01:11:082 (1) - remove NC

zx_baka_0502442 wrote:

Muzukashii

none

Oni

00:53:082 - d or D
00:57:111 - d

end
=w=
nice map、song~
go go rank :3

GL

Thx !! for looking at my diffs as well
fixed kiai , name and one point at zx 's mod ~

424,100,57711,6,0,P|380:68|344:68,2,90

384059043 wrote:

I don't know if chocoliti have update your diff Azmato. This mod is for current Hard diff.

No kudosu.

[Hard]

-Setting-
Clear!

-Hitsounding-
* You can check your hitsound via 'Mute Music' (View - Mute Music)

* 00:23:425 - clap O
* 00:23:768 - clap O
* 00:27:540 - 00:30:454 - Add some hitsounds here! O
* 00:43:654 - 00:49:140 - Add some hitsounds here! O

e.g.

* 00:44:340 - whistle O
* 00:45:711 - whistle O
* 00:46:397 - finish O
* 00:47:082 - whistle O
* 00:47:597 - finish O
* 00:48:454 - whistle O

* 01:07:997 - clap O
* 01:11:082 - clap O
* 01:17:597 - clap O
* 01:18:282 - clap O
* 01:18:968 - clap O
* 01:22:397 - clap O
* 01:22:740 - clap O
* 01:24:111 - 01:27:882 - Add some hitsounds here! Don't be lazy :3 O lol

-Mapping-
* 00:29:940 (1,2) - I prefer to separate them from each other. O
* 00:34:397 (6) - Since you use zigzag sliders, I suggest you changing this slider like others. O
* 00:48:111 (4,5) - move them farther away from the previous slider O
* 00:49:482 (1) - try this! O
[code284,128,49482,6,0,P|336:144|372:168,1,90[/code]
* 00:57:711 (1) O

424,100,57711,6,0,P|380:68|344:68,2,90

* 01:04:397 (2,1,2) - separate them from each other! :3 O

That's all. Good luck!

HabiHolic wrote:

IRC Modding~

log

01:02 Azmato: 혹시
01:02 Azmato: 모딩 가능하신가용?
01:02 HabiHolic: 모딩이요?
01:02 HabiHolic: 어느곡이죠?
01:02 Azmato: 넹
01:02 HabiHolic: 일단 어느곡이죠?
01:02 *Azmato is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/226363 Mu - Panorama chime (Short Ver.)]
01:02 Azmato: 이거요
01:02 Azmato: ㅇ.ㅇ...
01:03 Azmato: 가능하신가요??
01:03 HabiHolic: 가능해요
01:03 HabiHolic: 대신에
01:03 HabiHolic: 조건이 있습니다
01:03 Azmato: 넵?
01:03 HabiHolic: 제맵도 모딩해주셔야 합니다
01:04 Azmato: 음... 뭐 제가 가능한한 해드릴게요 ㅇㅂㅇ...
01:04 HabiHolic: 님난이도는
01:04 HabiHolic: 지금 여기서IRC 모딩으로 진행하겠습니다
01:04 Azmato: 네
01:04 Azmato: 아
01:04 Azmato: 혹시
01:04 HabiHolic: 네
01:04 Azmato: 맵 업뎃 안됬을수도 있으니까
01:05 Azmato: 포럼에서 제가 올린 파일로
01:05 HabiHolic: 네네
01:05 Azmato: 진행해 주시면 감사하겠습니다.
01:05 HabiHolic: 그렇게 하는중
01:05 HabiHolic: 이지 여세요
01:05 Azmato: 아
01:05 Azmato: Azmato's Hard
01:05 Azmato: 만 해주셔도 됩니다.
01:05 Azmato: 겟난이라서 ㅎㅎ
01:05 HabiHolic: 아 겟난이라..
01:06 HabiHolic: 하드만 핡]ㅔ요
01:06 HabiHolic: 할게요
01:06 Azmato: 넹
01:06 HabiHolic: 하드 여세요
01:06 Azmato: 열었어욤
01:06 HabiHolic: 하드가 HP가 왜이리 높아요
01:06 HabiHolic: -1 하세요
01:06 HabiHolic: OD -1
01:06 HabiHolic: 이거 지적할수 있으니 줄이세요
01:06 HabiHolic: 7은 인센수준이예요..
01:07 Azmato: 네
01:07 HabiHolic: 그리고
01:07 HabiHolic: 인센도아닌 하드인데
01:07 HabiHolic: 슬라속도 1.8?
01:07 HabiHolic: 이건 인센에서 쓰는 속도인데;;
01:07 Azmato: 킁...
01:07 HabiHolic: 가급적이면
01:07 HabiHolic: 속도
01:07 HabiHolic: 하드 1.3~1.6
01:07 HabiHolic: 이렇게
01:07 HabiHolic: 됩니다
01:07 Azmato: 네... 이따 고쳐봐야겠네요
01:08 HabiHolic: 00:22:225 -
01:08 HabiHolic: 여기 노트추가
01:08 HabiHolic: 여기 노트가 없다보니까 어색한거 같아요
01:09 HabiHolic: 00:22:911 (6) - 이노트를 지우고
01:09 HabiHolic: 00:23:254 - 여기까지 슬라이더를 만드시는걸 추천합니다
01:09 HabiHolic: 00:22:911 - 시작지점은 여기
01:10 HabiHolic: 00:28:225 (3) - 지우고00:28:225 - 여기에 서클추가
01:10 HabiHolic: 00:28:397 - 여기부터00:28:568 - 여기까지 슬라이더 늘릴것
01:11 Azmato: 넵
01:11 HabiHolic: 00:30:282 (2) - 흠..
01:11 HabiHolic: 이상해보이는데
01:12 HabiHolic: 따로 빼서 배치하세요
01:12 Azmato: 그 겹쳐진건가요??
01:12 HabiHolic: 네네
01:12 HabiHolic: ]따로 빼세요
01:12 Azmato: 그거라면
01:12 Azmato: 바꿧어욤..
01:12 HabiHolic: 다음
01:13 Azmato: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/750410
01:13 HabiHolic: 00:38:511 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
01:13 HabiHolic: 옳지
01:13 HabiHolic: 그렇게요
01:13 Azmato: ㅎㅎ
01:13 HabiHolic: 00:41:768 - 노트 추가
01:13 HabiHolic: 00:41:940 - ^
01:14 HabiHolic: 00:42:282 - ^
01:14 HabiHolic: ]00:42:625 (2) - 1번이랑 겹치기
01:14 HabiHolic: 00:43:139 (2) - ^
01:14 HabiHolic: 00:43:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 디스턴스 맞추기
01:16 Azmato: 00:41:768
01:16 Azmato: 아
01:16 Azmato: 아니에요
01:16 HabiHolic: ?
01:16 HabiHolic: 다 수정?
01:18 Azmato: 00:40:911 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 요렇게 되는것 같은데
01:18 Azmato: 약간 이상하지 않나요??
01:19 HabiHolic: 7?
01:19 HabiHolic: 그거
01:19 HabiHolic: 긴 슬라 아닌지?
01:19 Azmato: 00:43:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 이부분은 디스탠스 맞아욤
01:19 Azmato: 맞아요
01:19 HabiHolic: 읭?
01:19 HabiHolic: 00:45:368 (6) -
01:19 HabiHolic: 이거 안맞음
01:20 Azmato: 맞췄어요
01:20 HabiHolic: 00:53:082 (1) - 뉴콤 제거
01:21 HabiHolic: 01:01:140 - 여기에 노트 추가하면 리듬에 맞을거 같아요
01:21 Azmato: 난이도가 좀더 높아질듯 싶은데...
01:21 HabiHolic: 01:06:797 (4) - 머리부분 피니쉬 추가
01:21 HabiHolic: 그러세요 그럼 수정하지 마셔요 ㅎㅎ
01:21 HabiHolic: 제 의견이니까
01:21 Azmato: 넵
01:22 HabiHolic: 01:17:597 (4) - 슬라이더 끝에 피니쉬 추가
01:22 HabiHolic: 01:22:054 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
01:22 HabiHolic: 01:23:254 (4) - ^
01:22 HabiHolic: 01:27:539 (1,2,3) -
01:23 HabiHolic: 짧슬 하나 만들어서 배치하시길..
01:26 Azmato: http://puu.sh/2RixY.zip
01:26 Azmato: 확인 부탁드려욤 ><
01:28 HabiHolic: 오케이!
01:28 HabiHolic: 수고하셨습니다
01:28 HabiHolic: 첫맵이신가]요?
01:29 Azmato: 포럼에 업로드 해주시면 ㄳㄳ~
01:29 HabiHolic: 네
01:29 HabiHolic: 나머지 난이도는
01:29 Azmato: 넹 ㅋㅋ
01:29 HabiHolic: 내일하면 안되나요?
01:29 HabiHolic: ㅠㅠㅠ
01:29 Azmato: 감사합니당 ><
01:29 Azmato: 언제든 해두 상관없어요
01:29 HabiHolic: 피곤해]서요제가..]
01:29 HabiHolic: 아 네~
01:29 Azmato: (안하셔두 되요)
01:29 HabiHolic: 헐...
01:29 HabiHolic: 할게요
01:29 Azmato: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
01:29 HabiHolic: 조만간 리체크핡]ㅔ요
01:29 Azmato: 이미 완벽한 맵들이라...
01:29 HabiHolic: 이거 첫맵이신건가요?
01:29 Azmato: 피곤하시면
01:29 Azmato: 넹
01:29 Azmato: 주무세요~
01:29 HabiHolic: ]오호,,
01:30 HabiHolic: 첫맵치고는 양호한데요?
01:30 Azmato: 히힣
01:30 HabiHolic: 나중에 좀 크게될거같아요
01:30 *HabiHolic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/226363 Mu - Panorama chime (Short Ver.) [Azmato's Hard]]
01:30 Azmato: 대신 제작기간이
01:30 Azmato: 상당히 길었어요
01:30 Azmato: ㅠ

W h i t e wrote:

Request 해서 왔습니다.

[Azmato's Hard]
우선 인세인하고 이 난이도하고 SV가 같네요... 겟난이라서 괜찮을지 모르겠지만 확인사항입니다. 넹...

01:01:311 (4,5) - 둘 다 디스턴스가 좀 짧습니다. 이정도는 무시해도 괜찮을것 같아요...

01:02:854 (1,2,1,2) - 하드에서는 좀 어려운 패턴입니다. 수정하시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. X

01:05:940 (1) - 디스턴스가 짧습니다. O

01:09:540 (3) - ^ O

01:15:368 (1) - ^ O

Good Luck

• 
  00:09:375 (2) - 이 슬라이더가 반복되는게 음악에 맞지 않는 것 같네요. 이렇게 한 번 해보세요.
  
  SPOILER

  228,96,9375,2,0,B|388:112|356:240|356:240,1,200
  348,308,10875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  275,254,11375,2,0,P|240:244|224:188,1,100
  133,187,12375,2,0,P|117:243|81:253,1,100

  00:42:968 (4) - 00:43:311에 필인이 있긴 하지만 00:42:454 (3,4) 이 두 슬라이더가 드럼이 아닌 메인 리듬에 매핑되어 있기 때문에 이 반복은 없는게 더 나을 것 같네요.
  00:56:682 (4,1) - 곡의 한 마디의 시작이 반복슬라이더의 반복 위에 놓여있는건 자연스럽지가 않아서 되도록이면 피하는 게 좋아요. 이렇게 한 번 해보세요.
  
  SPOILER

  184,112,56682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  184,112,57025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  168,200,57368,6,0,P|223:252|233:248,1,100

  01:07:997 (1) - 위와 마찬가지. 이렇게 한 번 해보세요.
  
  SPOILER

  380,220,67997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  380,220,68340,6,0,L|480:220,2,100

  01:24:797 (1) - 01:23:425 (2,3,4) 와 모양이 좀 더 맞기 위해 이렇게 한 번 바꿔보세요.
  
  SPOILER

  212,252,84797,6,0,P|152:260|57:342,1,150

• 
  전체적으로 힛사운드를 굉장히 잘 활용할 수 있는 맵임에도 불구하고 피니시 말고는 다 뮤트를 시켜뇠네요. 스네어랑 휘슬 둘다 드럼소리로 구해서 맛깔나게 할 수 있는 곡인데...
  
  00:37:311 (3) - 끝에 피니시 추가
  00:42:454 (3,4) - 각각 시작에 피니시 추가
  00:46:397 (1) - 피니시 추가
  00:47:082 (3) - 시작과 반복에 피니시 추가
  00:48:797 (5) - 끝에 피니시 추가
  00:51:540 (4) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  00:52:911 (2,3) - 각각 끝에 피니시 추가
  00:57:025 (1) - 반복에 피니시 추가
  01:00:111 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:01:825 (2) - 피니시 추가
  01:02:854 (1) - 시작, 반복, 끝 모두 피니시 추가
  01:08:340 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:11:082 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:13:825 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:14:511 (2) - 반복에 피니시 추가
  01:21:368 (4) - 끝에 피니시 추가

• 
  01:24:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - For aesthetics' sake, move all this pattern to (208, 168) so it looks like
  
  SPOILER

  
  and not like
  
  SPOILER

  

• 
  00:24:454 (1) - Add finish at the end
  00:43:654 ~ 00:49:140: whistle is muted in this section, yet you use them. A mistake? In any case, change all whistles to finishes, and
  00:46:397 (1) - Add a finish at the end
  00:51:539 (6) - Add a finish
  00:57:368 (1) - Add a finish
  01:00:111 (1) - Add a finish
  01:05:082 (5) - Add a finish at the end
  01:08:339 (6) - Add a finish
  01:13:482 (6) - Remove finish. If you want to hitsound this note, then adding a clap would be a better idea.
  01:19:311 (1) - Add a finish at the end

• 
  00:21:025 (3,4) - 00:21:282에 확실히 스네어 소리가 있는데 매핑을 하지 않으면 플레이할 때 조금 부자연스러워요. 이런 식으로 고쳐보는게 좋을 것 같아요.
  
  SPOILER

  288,128,21025,2,0,L|320:176,3,45
  292,205,21368,2,0,L|244:197,2,45

  00:38:168 - 노트 추가. 피니시도 함께 추가
  00:44:682 (4,5,6) - 이전 3개의 노트랑 같이 더 보기 좋게 모두 선택한 후 (295, 285)로 옮겨보세요.
  00:46:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1,2에서는 슬라이더 반박자 후 노트가 나오고 4,5에서는 슬라이더 한박자 후 노트가 나오는데 두 패턴의 배치가 같으면 플레이할 때 헷갈리기 쉬워요. 5번 노트를 대충 이정도 밖으로 빼는게 좋을 것 같아요.
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:54:968 (1,2,3) - 보컬이랑 패턴이 약간 안맞네요. 이렇게 한 번 해보세요.
  
  SPOILER

  428,140,54968,6,0,B|452:100|452:100|436:52,1,90
  352,96,55311,2,0,B|308:84|308:84|252:108,2,90
  352,184,55825,2,0,B|392:206|392:206|401:249,1,90

  01:20:511 (1) - 이 스피너 앞부분(00:25:654 (1))에서는 다음 큰 흰틱까지 돌아가고 그 다음 노트가 한박자 후에 시작했었는데 여기서는 스피너가 큰 흰틱 한박자 전에 끝나버리고 그 다음 노트가 큰 흰틱에서 시작하네요. 일관성있게 둘 중 하나를 바꾸는 게 좋을 것 같네요. 후자를 바꿀 경우 이런 식으로 한 번 해보세요.
  
  SPOILER

  256,192,80511,12,2,82054,0:0:0:0:
  335,255,82397,2,0,B|356:168,1,90
  268,188,82740,2,0,B|288:100,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

• 
  00:00:375 ~ 00:16:375 - 이부분 슬라이더틱소리 죽이는게 나을 것 같네요. 들어보면 틱소리때문에 부자연스러워요.
  00:22:740 (5) - 클랩 추가
  00:22:911 (6) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 피니시 추가
  00:25:140 (5) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 끝에 클랩 추가
  00:27:882 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거
  00:28:225 (4) - 클랩 추가
  00:28:397 (5) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 피니시 추가
  00:29:940 (1,2) - 각 슬라이더 시작에 클랩 추가
  00:32:340 (3) - 피니시 추가
  00:33:025 (1) - 클랩 추가
  00:33:368 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거
  00:38:511 (1) - 피니시 제거하고 클랩 추가
  00:38:854 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거
  00:40:911 (1) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 피니시 추가
  00:46:397 (1) - 끝에 휘슬 제거하고 피니시 추가
  00:51:882 (2) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  00:53:082 (4) - 피니시 추가
  00:53:768 (7) - 피니시 추가
  00:54:968 (1) - 시작에 클랩 추가
  00:55:482 (2) - 반복에 클랩 추가하고 끝에 피니시 추가
  00:57:711 (1) - 시작에 클랩 추가
  00:58:225 (2) - 끝에 클랩 추가
  00:58:568 (3) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:00:797 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거
  01:05:254 (2) - 끝에 피니시 추가
  01:05:940 (1) - 끝에 클랩 제거
  01:08:682 (1) - 시작에 클랩 추가하고 끝에 클랩 제거
  01:09:025 (2) - 끝에 클랩 제거
  01:09:540 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 피니시 추가
  01:13:825 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:20:339 (6) - 피니시 제거
  01:24:797 (1,2) - 각각 시작에 클랩 추가

• 
  00:13:250 (1) - 스피너 00:13:375로 이동, 끝나는 곳은 00:16:625
  00:22:397 (3) - 슬라이더 뒤에 가려서 보기 안 좋아요. 이렇게 한 번 바꿔보세요.
  
  SPOILER

  36,116,22225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  136,52,22397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  252,64,22568,1,0,0:0:0:0:

  00:45:197 (4) - (397, 226)으로 이동
  00:49:140 - 노트 추가
  00:57:197 (5,6) - 음악에 더 맞게 이렇게 한 번 해보세요.
  
  SPOILER

  368,128,57197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  396,241,57368,2,0,P|347:264|311:260,1,90

  01:01:997 (1,2,3,4) - 드럼소리에 맞추기 위해 이렇게 한 번 바꿔보세요.
  
  SPOILER

  108,84,61997,6,0,P|196:40|256:64,1,135
  227,46,62340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  244,144,62511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  244,144,62597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  244,144,62682,1,0,0:0:0:0:

  01:17:768 (1,2) - 보기 좋게 이렇게 한 번 바꿔보세요.
  
  SPOILER

  244,92,77768,6,0,B|190:9|83:39|83:39,1,180
  33,144,78282,1,0,0:0:0:0:

  01:24:797 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 이대로는 각도도 잘 안 맞고 좀 어색해서 다시 짜봤어요. 보고 그대로 받아가서 쓰셔도 되고 안바꾸셔도 되고 적당히 섞으셔도 되고 알아서 하세요.
  
  SPOILER

  360,60,84797,5,2,0:0:0:0:
  124,88,84968,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  152,324,85140,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  388,296,85311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  171,207,85654,5,2,0:0:0:0:
  407,179,85997,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  124,88,86340,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  360,60,86682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  388,296,86854,2,0,L|480:246,1,90
  388,87,87197,2,0,L|480:137,1,90
  368,192,87540,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  336,192,87625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  304,192,87711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  272,192,87797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  244,192,87882,1,0,0:0:0:0:

• 
  00:00:375 ~ 00:16:375 - 역시 슬라이더틱소리 죽이는게 나아보입니다.
  00:24:454 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 지금 힛음을 죽여놔서 힛사나 배경음이 없으면 노트 치는 소리가 들리지 않는 상황인데, 이렇게 음악에 없는 노트를 매핑한 게 다 드러나게 설정을 해 놓고 음악에 맞지 않는 연타를 두시면 곤란합니다. 애초에 힛음을 없애는 것 자체가 노트 한두개 뮤트시킬때 말고는 할 이유가 없어요. 연타 넣는 것 자체는 그렇게 잘못되지 않았으니 힛음 죽인걸 다시 살리면 될 것 같네요.
  00:37:825 (2) - 시작과 끝에 피니시 추가
  00:40:568 (5) - 피니시 추가
  00:40:911 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  00:42:968 (4) - 피니시 추가
  00:46:397 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  00:47:082 (3) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  00:47:597 (4) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  00:49:482 (1,2,3,4) - 휘슬이 무음인데 휘슬을 넣은 이유가 딱히 있나요?
  00:51:540 (5) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  00:55:825 (5) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  00:57:368 (6) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  00:58:568 (3) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:00:111 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:01:825 (6) - 피니시 추가
  01:02:854 (1) - 피니시 추가
  01:03:368 (4) - 피니시 추가
  01:03:882 (7) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:04:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - 무음연타, 힛음 살리셔야되요 이런거
  01:05:254 (8) - 끝에 피니시 추가
  01:06:797 (5) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:08:339 (5) - 피니시 추가
  01:09:540 (4) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:11:082 (7) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:13:825 (4) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:17:768 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:19:654 (2) - 피니시 추가
  01:20:511 (6) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:23:254 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:24:968 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 모두 피니시 추가
  01:26:854 (5,6) - 각각 시작에 피니시 추가
  01:27:882 (5) - 피니시 추가

• 
  00:00:875 (2) - 뉴콤보

• 
  01:24:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - For aesthetics' sake, move all this pattern to (208, 168) so it looks like OK
  
  SPOILER

  
  and not like
  
  SPOILER

  

• 
  00:24:454 (1) - Add finish at the end OK
  00:43:654 ~ 00:49:140: whistle is muted in this section, yet you use them. A mistake? In any case, change all whistles to finishes, and OK
  00:46:397 (1) - Add a finish at the end OK
  00:51:539 (6) - Add a finish OK
  00:57:368 (1) - Add a finish OK
  01:00:111 (1) - Add a finish OK
  01:05:082 (5) - Add a finish at the end OK
  01:08:339 (6) - Add a finish OK
  01:13:482 (6) - Remove finish. If you want to hitsound this note, then adding a clap would be a better idea. OK
  01:19:311 (1) - Add a finish at the end OK

KRZY wrote:

[General]


[Azmato's Hard]
Patterns

• 
  00:21:025 (3,4) - 00:21:282에 확실히 스네어 소리가 있는데 매핑을 하지 않으면 플레이할 때 조금 부자연스러워요. 이런 식으로 고쳐보는게 좋을 것 같아요. O
  
  SPOILER

  288,128,21025,2,0,L|320:176,3,45
  292,205,21368,2,0,L|244:197,2,45

  00:38:168 - 노트 추가. 피니시도 함께 추가 O
  00:44:682 (4,5,6) - 이전 3개의 노트랑 같이 더 보기 좋게 모두 선택한 후 (295, 285)로 옮겨보세요. O
  00:46:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1,2에서는 슬라이더 반박자 후 노트가 나오고 4,5에서는 슬라이더 한박자 후 노트가 나오는데 두 패턴의 배치가 같으면 플레이할 때 헷갈리기 쉬워요. 5번 노트를 대충 이정도 밖으로 빼는게 좋을 것 같아요. O
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:54:968 (1,2,3) - 보컬이랑 패턴이 약간 안맞네요. 이렇게 한 번 해보세요. O
  
  SPOILER

  428,140,54968,6,0,B|452:100|452:100|436:52,1,90
  352,96,55311,2,0,B|308:84|308:84|252:108,2,90
  352,184,55825,2,0,B|392:206|392:206|401:249,1,90

  01:20:511 (1) - 이 스피너 앞부분(00:25:654 (1))에서는 다음 큰 흰틱까지 돌아가고 그 다음 노트가 한박자 후에 시작했었는데 여기서는 스피너가 큰 흰틱 한박자 전에 끝나버리고 그 다음 노트가 큰 흰틱에서 시작하네요. 일관성있게 둘 중 하나를 바꾸는 게 좋을 것 같네요. 후자를 바꿀 경우 이런 식으로 한 번 해보세요. O
  
  SPOILER

  256,192,80511,12,2,82054,0:0:0:0:
  335,255,82397,2,0,B|356:168,1,90
  268,188,82740,2,0,B|288:100,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Hitsounds

• 
  00:00:375 ~ 00:16:375 - 이부분 슬라이더틱소리 죽이는게 나을 것 같네요. 들어보면 틱소리때문에 부자연스러워요. O
  00:22:740 (5) - 클랩 추가 O
  00:22:911 (6) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 피니시 추가 O
  00:25:140 (5) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 끝에 클랩 추가 O
  00:27:882 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거 O
  00:28:225 (4) - 클랩 추가 O
  00:28:397 (5) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 피니시 추가 O
  00:29:940 (1,2) - 각 슬라이더 시작에 클랩 추가 O
  00:32:340 (3) - 피니시 추가 O
  00:33:025 (1) - 클랩 추가 O
  00:33:368 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거 O
  00:38:511 (1) - 피니시 제거하고 클랩 추가 O
  00:38:854 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거 O
  00:40:911 (1) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 피니시 추가 O
  00:46:397 (1) - 끝에 휘슬 제거하고 피니시 추가 O
  00:51:882 (2) - 시작에 피니시 추가 O
  00:53:082 (4) - 피니시 추가 O
  00:53:768 (7) - 피니시 추가 O
  00:54:968 (1) - 시작에 클랩 추가 O
  00:55:482 (2) - 반복에 클랩 추가하고 끝에 피니시 추가 O
  00:57:711 (1) - 시작에 클랩 추가 O
  00:58:225 (2) - 끝에 클랩 추가 O
  00:58:568 (3) - 시작에 피니시 추가 O
  01:00:797 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거 O
  01:05:254 (2) - 끝에 피니시 추가 O
  01:05:940 (1) - 끝에 클랩 제거 O
  01:08:682 (1) - 시작에 클랩 추가하고 끝에 클랩 제거 O
  01:09:025 (2) - 끝에 클랩 제거 O
  01:09:540 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 피니시 추가 O
  01:13:825 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가 O
  01:20:339 (6) - 피니시 제거 O
  01:24:797 (1,2) - 각각 시작에 클랩 추가 O

맵셋이 전체적으로 힛사운드에 조금 문제가 있는 것 같습니다. BAT부를 때 힛사운드를 중점적으로 봐달라고 해주세요. 그리고 힛음 죽인건 아무래도 다시 살리셔야 할 거에요.

1. Kiai on -RIKKA-'s diff should finish 6ms later, to be consistent with other diffs. on on 01:16:568 instead of 01:15:882
2. You may add 祝福の鐘の音は、桜色の風と共に to tags (japanese title of this VN) also you can put visual novel in tags, too!

1. As far as I know diff should be under 3.24 stars to be rankable. In any case - star rating shows that this diff is NOT an [Easy] diff at all.
2. Consider using AR3, but this diff is already too hard. In fact, I'd rename it to [Normal] and map a second [Easy].
3. 01:05:254 - this section has slowdown that doesn't affects ANYTHING. What's the point of keeping it there? Change SV multiplier back to x1.00, please!
   
   In fact, that diff needs some serious work on balance, imo. I guess you can rename it to [Normal] and use higher AR. THen make an [Easy] diff, that will be easy enough. Consistent 1/1 rhythm on 180 BPM diff is quite hard and doesn't looks like a good idea. What's more Slider Velocity is two times faster than Approach rate, and it looks weird, too!

1. Consider using AR5 to make diff spread better balaced. AR5 will also fit with your Slider Velocity pretty good.
2. 00:30:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here and some similar patterns - it is a bit tiring for players, to click all these circles in a row. consider replacing some of these circles with sliders. So, your diff will be more playable. It's just a bit too hard for a [Normal] diff.
   
   Messy patterns. I don't like the way how they're organized, but you use them a lot and changing patterns will require remap - so let's just keep it as is. ._.

1. You're using the same velocity as [Insane] diff. It ruins dif balance. What's more this velocity is too fast for a [Hard] diff and dosn't fit with your AR.
2. At least increase AR by one tick (AR8) because current AR is tooo low and playfield is flooded with circles, what's more AR is MUCH slower than slider velocity and it looks weird here.
   Note: if you increase AR you should also increase OD and HP Drain to kee diff settings balanced.
3. 00:21:025 (3,4) - it's simply impossible to guess how many repeats does each slider has. Try to remove second repeat from (3) because it's unreadable, anyway. And add a circle at 00:21:282 - instead! It'll make your sliders consistent and readable.
   Note: same happens to 01:15:368 (1,2,3) -
4. 00:24:111 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - I don't like how you stack these notes. Music goes fast and players want to move! So, these stacks are a bit confusing for players, consider unstacking these patterns to keep flow consistent. it's quite clear that the same suggestion goes for almost every single stack in this diff, you'll fix them all if you agree. :3
5. 01:10:397 - I guess you've missed a circle here. It'd perfectly fit with music and vocals there. What's more - this beat is really loud, so you shouldn't ignore it.
6. 01:13:140 - previously you had some vocals mapped, what happened here? Map these vocals, too! It will make your rhythm more consistent and playable. (long empy spaces may kill players because of HP Drain)
7. 01:22:397 (1) - it's a bug. Place here a new combo, to fix this bug. As you can see NC is NOT enabled here.
   
   Diff itself is kinda messy, too. That's ok for first map but you can improve it a lot.

1. That's quite clear that playfield is flooded with circles, it makes diff less playable and unpleasant for players. Try to increase AR to 9. So, diff will be a bit more challenging and enjoyable.
   Note: if you increase AR you should also increase OD and HP Drain to kee diff settings balanced. Fot now you can increase AR and HP/OD only, to keep this diff passable players.
2. 00:05:875 - you've ignored beat here + loud violin sound at reverse arrow feels a bit awkward. Consider removing reverse and making this slider shorter + adding 1/1 slider at 00:06:125.example. It'll fit with violin sound much better.
3. 00:20:340 (1,2,3) - try to use 60% Soft sampleset + replace finishes at 00:20:682 (2) - with whistles. It will fit with music better and it'll help you to emphasize drums here.
4. 00:21:711 (1,2) - nazi - due to low AR flow here is weird. Players may MISTAKENLY hit (2) without dollowing reverse on (1). example. Try to move (1)'s tail somewhere by curving it and making blanket-slider or you can simply move its tail some grids down
5. 00:42:111 (2) - try to replace this circle with 1/2 slider to follow loud whistle sound in music. example
   Note: don't forget to silince (2)'s tail to follow music beter.
6. 00:43:225 (6) - remove this circle. It follows nothing in music and sounds really awkward here. Overmapping is always a bad idea, a specially at this song, when you have plenty of notes to follow.
7. 00:51:197 (4) - have you missed a new combo here? Looks like you change spacing and style of jumps there, so NC will help us to read it!
8. 00:52:568 (5,6,7) - nazi - this triplet is hardly readable. It's stacked and that stak isn't really a good idea. Consider rotating that pattern a bit, (example 60 degrees). Oh, and maybe you should place NC at 5 to point out rhythm changes.
9. 00:59:768 (3,4,5) - that compressed triplets looks pretty awkward here, this is kiai, so it's better to keep spacing consistent here, space this triplet with regular spacing. ._. as you did it with 00:57:197 (5,6,7) - to keep spacing consistent.
10. 01:25:654 (1,2,3,4) - sound at these four beats is absolutely the same. consider keeping SAME distance between all these circles to follow music better.
    
    The whole diff is kinda messy and low AR makes it looks worse. I'd recommend you to make this diff a bit neater and increase AR.

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

as requested.

[General]

1. Kiai on -RIKKA-'s diff should finish 6ms later, to be consistent with other diffs. on on 01:16:568 instead of 01:15:882
2. You may add 祝福の鐘の音は、桜色の風と共に to tags (japanese title of this VN) also you can put visual novel in tags, too!

[Azmato's Hard]

1. You're using the same velocity as [Insane] diff. It ruins dif balance. What's more this velocity is too fast for a [Hard] diff and dosn't fit with your AR. O
2. At least increase AR by one tick (AR8) because current AR is tooo low and playfield is flooded with circles, what's more AR is MUCH slower than slider velocity and it looks weird here. O
   Note: if you increase AR you should also increase OD and HP Drain to kee diff settings balanced. O
3. 00:21:025 (3,4) - it's simply impossible to guess how many repeats does each slider has. Try to remove second repeat from (3) because it's unreadable, anyway. And add a circle at 00:21:282 - instead! It'll make your sliders consistent and readable. O
   Note: same happens to 01:15:368 (1,2,3) I can't imagine how to change...
4. 00:24:111 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - I don't like how you stack these notes. Music goes fast and players want to move! So, these stacks are a bit confusing for players, consider unstacking these patterns to keep flow consistent. it's quite clear that the same suggestion goes for almost every single stack in this diff, you'll fix them all if you agree. :3O
5. 01:10:397 - I guess you've missed a circle here. It'd perfectly fit with music and vocals there. What's more - this beat is really loud, so you shouldn't ignore it.O
6. 01:13:140 - previously you had some vocals mapped, what happened here? Map these vocals, too! It will make your rhythm more consistent and playable. (long empy spaces may kill players because of HP Drain)O
7. 01:22:397 (1) - it's a bug. Place here a new combo, to fix this bug. As you can see NC is NOT enabled here.O
   
   Diff itself is kinda messy, too. That's ok for first map but you can improve it a lot.

Map needs a lot of work, imo. Feel free to poke me if you'll need some help, tho.
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Good luck!

Frostmourne wrote:

General
- inconsistent tag in Taiko diffs and Hard diff



Azmato's Hard
00:35:082 (8) - I suggest you use a slider here since at 00:35:254 , it does have necessary voice that it's along with 00:34:397 (6,7) - (based on vocal)
also move 00:35:425 (1) - a bit above like this screenshot O

SPOILER

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Call me back, I think it should be ok enough.

Frostmourne wrote:

oh thanks for source! so I think it is now reliable enough to verify that short ver can be used now.
only stuff in Normal diff I still want you to fix though, don't forget to call me back