KRZY wrote:

[General]


[Azmato's Hard]
Patterns

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  00:21:025 (3,4) - 00:21:282에 확실히 스네어 소리가 있는데 매핑을 하지 않으면 플레이할 때 조금 부자연스러워요. 이런 식으로 고쳐보는게 좋을 것 같아요. O
  
  SPOILER

  288,128,21025,2,0,L|320:176,3,45
  292,205,21368,2,0,L|244:197,2,45

  00:38:168 - 노트 추가. 피니시도 함께 추가 O
  00:44:682 (4,5,6) - 이전 3개의 노트랑 같이 더 보기 좋게 모두 선택한 후 (295, 285)로 옮겨보세요. O
  00:46:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1,2에서는 슬라이더 반박자 후 노트가 나오고 4,5에서는 슬라이더 한박자 후 노트가 나오는데 두 패턴의 배치가 같으면 플레이할 때 헷갈리기 쉬워요. 5번 노트를 대충 이정도 밖으로 빼는게 좋을 것 같아요. O
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:54:968 (1,2,3) - 보컬이랑 패턴이 약간 안맞네요. 이렇게 한 번 해보세요. O
  
  SPOILER

  428,140,54968,6,0,B|452:100|452:100|436:52,1,90
  352,96,55311,2,0,B|308:84|308:84|252:108,2,90
  352,184,55825,2,0,B|392:206|392:206|401:249,1,90

  01:20:511 (1) - 이 스피너 앞부분(00:25:654 (1))에서는 다음 큰 흰틱까지 돌아가고 그 다음 노트가 한박자 후에 시작했었는데 여기서는 스피너가 큰 흰틱 한박자 전에 끝나버리고 그 다음 노트가 큰 흰틱에서 시작하네요. 일관성있게 둘 중 하나를 바꾸는 게 좋을 것 같네요. 후자를 바꿀 경우 이런 식으로 한 번 해보세요. O
  
  SPOILER

  256,192,80511,12,2,82054,0:0:0:0:
  335,255,82397,2,0,B|356:168,1,90
  268,188,82740,2,0,B|288:100,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Hitsounds

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  00:00:375 ~ 00:16:375 - 이부분 슬라이더틱소리 죽이는게 나을 것 같네요. 들어보면 틱소리때문에 부자연스러워요. O
  00:22:740 (5) - 클랩 추가 O
  00:22:911 (6) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 피니시 추가 O
  00:25:140 (5) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 끝에 클랩 추가 O
  00:27:882 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거 O
  00:28:225 (4) - 클랩 추가 O
  00:28:397 (5) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 피니시 추가 O
  00:29:940 (1,2) - 각 슬라이더 시작에 클랩 추가 O
  00:32:340 (3) - 피니시 추가 O
  00:33:025 (1) - 클랩 추가 O
  00:33:368 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거 O
  00:38:511 (1) - 피니시 제거하고 클랩 추가 O
  00:38:854 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거 O
  00:40:911 (1) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 피니시 추가 O
  00:46:397 (1) - 끝에 휘슬 제거하고 피니시 추가 O
  00:51:882 (2) - 시작에 피니시 추가 O
  00:53:082 (4) - 피니시 추가 O
  00:53:768 (7) - 피니시 추가 O
  00:54:968 (1) - 시작에 클랩 추가 O
  00:55:482 (2) - 반복에 클랩 추가하고 끝에 피니시 추가 O
  00:57:711 (1) - 시작에 클랩 추가 O
  00:58:225 (2) - 끝에 클랩 추가 O
  00:58:568 (3) - 시작에 피니시 추가 O
  01:00:797 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거 O
  01:05:254 (2) - 끝에 피니시 추가 O
  01:05:940 (1) - 끝에 클랩 제거 O
  01:08:682 (1) - 시작에 클랩 추가하고 끝에 클랩 제거 O
  01:09:025 (2) - 끝에 클랩 제거 O
  01:09:540 (3) - 시작에 클랩 제거하고 피니시 추가 O
  01:13:825 (1) - 시작에 피니시 추가 O
  01:20:339 (6) - 피니시 제거 O
  01:24:797 (1,2) - 각각 시작에 클랩 추가 O

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1. Kiai on -RIKKA-'s diff should finish 6ms later, to be consistent with other diffs. on on 01:16:568 instead of 01:15:882
2. You may add 祝福の鐘の音は、桜色の風と共に to tags (japanese title of this VN) also you can put visual novel in tags, too!

1. As far as I know diff should be under 3.24 stars to be rankable. In any case - star rating shows that this diff is NOT an [Easy] diff at all.
2. Consider using AR3, but this diff is already too hard. In fact, I'd rename it to [Normal] and map a second [Easy].
3. 01:05:254 - this section has slowdown that doesn't affects ANYTHING. What's the point of keeping it there? Change SV multiplier back to x1.00, please!
   
   In fact, that diff needs some serious work on balance, imo. I guess you can rename it to [Normal] and use higher AR. THen make an [Easy] diff, that will be easy enough. Consistent 1/1 rhythm on 180 BPM diff is quite hard and doesn't looks like a good idea. What's more Slider Velocity is two times faster than Approach rate, and it looks weird, too!

1. Consider using AR5 to make diff spread better balaced. AR5 will also fit with your Slider Velocity pretty good.
2. 00:30:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here and some similar patterns - it is a bit tiring for players, to click all these circles in a row. consider replacing some of these circles with sliders. So, your diff will be more playable. It's just a bit too hard for a [Normal] diff.
   
   Messy patterns. I don't like the way how they're organized, but you use them a lot and changing patterns will require remap - so let's just keep it as is. ._.

1. You're using the same velocity as [Insane] diff. It ruins dif balance. What's more this velocity is too fast for a [Hard] diff and dosn't fit with your AR.
2. At least increase AR by one tick (AR8) because current AR is tooo low and playfield is flooded with circles, what's more AR is MUCH slower than slider velocity and it looks weird here.
   Note: if you increase AR you should also increase OD and HP Drain to kee diff settings balanced.
3. 00:21:025 (3,4) - it's simply impossible to guess how many repeats does each slider has. Try to remove second repeat from (3) because it's unreadable, anyway. And add a circle at 00:21:282 - instead! It'll make your sliders consistent and readable.
   Note: same happens to 01:15:368 (1,2,3) -
4. 00:24:111 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - I don't like how you stack these notes. Music goes fast and players want to move! So, these stacks are a bit confusing for players, consider unstacking these patterns to keep flow consistent. it's quite clear that the same suggestion goes for almost every single stack in this diff, you'll fix them all if you agree. :3
5. 01:10:397 - I guess you've missed a circle here. It'd perfectly fit with music and vocals there. What's more - this beat is really loud, so you shouldn't ignore it.
6. 01:13:140 - previously you had some vocals mapped, what happened here? Map these vocals, too! It will make your rhythm more consistent and playable. (long empy spaces may kill players because of HP Drain)
7. 01:22:397 (1) - it's a bug. Place here a new combo, to fix this bug. As you can see NC is NOT enabled here.
   
   Diff itself is kinda messy, too. That's ok for first map but you can improve it a lot.

1. That's quite clear that playfield is flooded with circles, it makes diff less playable and unpleasant for players. Try to increase AR to 9. So, diff will be a bit more challenging and enjoyable.
   Note: if you increase AR you should also increase OD and HP Drain to kee diff settings balanced. Fot now you can increase AR and HP/OD only, to keep this diff passable players.
2. 00:05:875 - you've ignored beat here + loud violin sound at reverse arrow feels a bit awkward. Consider removing reverse and making this slider shorter + adding 1/1 slider at 00:06:125.example. It'll fit with violin sound much better.
3. 00:20:340 (1,2,3) - try to use 60% Soft sampleset + replace finishes at 00:20:682 (2) - with whistles. It will fit with music better and it'll help you to emphasize drums here.
4. 00:21:711 (1,2) - nazi - due to low AR flow here is weird. Players may MISTAKENLY hit (2) without dollowing reverse on (1). example. Try to move (1)'s tail somewhere by curving it and making blanket-slider or you can simply move its tail some grids down
5. 00:42:111 (2) - try to replace this circle with 1/2 slider to follow loud whistle sound in music. example
   Note: don't forget to silince (2)'s tail to follow music beter.
6. 00:43:225 (6) - remove this circle. It follows nothing in music and sounds really awkward here. Overmapping is always a bad idea, a specially at this song, when you have plenty of notes to follow.
7. 00:51:197 (4) - have you missed a new combo here? Looks like you change spacing and style of jumps there, so NC will help us to read it!
8. 00:52:568 (5,6,7) - nazi - this triplet is hardly readable. It's stacked and that stak isn't really a good idea. Consider rotating that pattern a bit, (example 60 degrees). Oh, and maybe you should place NC at 5 to point out rhythm changes.
9. 00:59:768 (3,4,5) - that compressed triplets looks pretty awkward here, this is kiai, so it's better to keep spacing consistent here, space this triplet with regular spacing. ._. as you did it with 00:57:197 (5,6,7) - to keep spacing consistent.
10. 01:25:654 (1,2,3,4) - sound at these four beats is absolutely the same. consider keeping SAME distance between all these circles to follow music better.
    
    The whole diff is kinda messy and low AR makes it looks worse. I'd recommend you to make this diff a bit neater and increase AR.

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

as requested.

[General]

1. Kiai on -RIKKA-'s diff should finish 6ms later, to be consistent with other diffs. on on 01:16:568 instead of 01:15:882
2. You may add 祝福の鐘の音は、桜色の風と共に to tags (japanese title of this VN) also you can put visual novel in tags, too!

[Azmato's Hard]

1. You're using the same velocity as [Insane] diff. It ruins dif balance. What's more this velocity is too fast for a [Hard] diff and dosn't fit with your AR. O
2. At least increase AR by one tick (AR8) because current AR is tooo low and playfield is flooded with circles, what's more AR is MUCH slower than slider velocity and it looks weird here. O
   Note: if you increase AR you should also increase OD and HP Drain to kee diff settings balanced. O
3. 00:21:025 (3,4) - it's simply impossible to guess how many repeats does each slider has. Try to remove second repeat from (3) because it's unreadable, anyway. And add a circle at 00:21:282 - instead! It'll make your sliders consistent and readable. O
   Note: same happens to 01:15:368 (1,2,3) I can't imagine how to change...
4. 00:24:111 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - I don't like how you stack these notes. Music goes fast and players want to move! So, these stacks are a bit confusing for players, consider unstacking these patterns to keep flow consistent. it's quite clear that the same suggestion goes for almost every single stack in this diff, you'll fix them all if you agree. :3O
5. 01:10:397 - I guess you've missed a circle here. It'd perfectly fit with music and vocals there. What's more - this beat is really loud, so you shouldn't ignore it.O
6. 01:13:140 - previously you had some vocals mapped, what happened here? Map these vocals, too! It will make your rhythm more consistent and playable. (long empy spaces may kill players because of HP Drain)O
7. 01:22:397 (1) - it's a bug. Place here a new combo, to fix this bug. As you can see NC is NOT enabled here.O
   
   Diff itself is kinda messy, too. That's ok for first map but you can improve it a lot.

Map needs a lot of work, imo. Feel free to poke me if you'll need some help, tho.
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Good luck!

Frostmourne wrote:

General
- inconsistent tag in Taiko diffs and Hard diff



Azmato's Hard
00:35:082 (8) - I suggest you use a slider here since at 00:35:254 , it does have necessary voice that it's along with 00:34:397 (6,7) - (based on vocal)
also move 00:35:425 (1) - a bit above like this screenshot O

SPOILER

O

Call me back, I think it should be ok enough.

Frostmourne wrote:

oh thanks for source! so I think it is now reliable enough to verify that short ver can be used now.
only stuff in Normal diff I still want you to fix though, don't forget to call me back

Frostmourne wrote:

Good luck

enjoy first bubble !? sorry for taking so long too

Zero__wind wrote:

I've got no knowledge about artist, sourc or tags
but I'd like to point out that
why is the artist of this map different from the one of this ?
I just hope this would be confirmed once again, before ranking it

merchat7 wrote:

Also the proper romanization of μ seems to be "myu"

Image from S inc. official website http://www.s-inc.jp/artist.html which according to wikipedia is "a talent management and music production agency." This also means that 佐藤ひろ美 should be romanized as Sato Hiromi, but that's a discussion for another time.

OnosakiHito wrote:

Sneeking in to check the Taiko Maps before it gets ranked.

[ 0gre's Muzu]

General:
00:00:375 - unused timeline ✔
00:20:340 - ^ ✔
01:13:482 - kiai can be stopped at 01:12:797. ✔

Not a must, but constant audio volumen is recommended: About 80%

Notes:

00:54:111~00:56:340 - A bit long pattern with 1/4 notes for a muzukashii. I suggest you to delete note 00:55:140 (2) -, so the player can rest for a moment after this 1/4. ✔
00:56:682 (2) - You could change this to don because, every first and third note was at the beginning a don. ✔
00:58:054 (1) - Same here. In this way the main-beat's(don) place will be kept. ✔
01:01:311 (2) - You might want to consider deleting this note. At 01:01:140 (1) - note (1) represents the high pitch in the song really good, the second kat would just dorwn out this effect.
01:09:540 (1,2,3,4,1) - Oh, this calls for abekobe style(controvers-sytel) as ddd k d, because you used kkk d k before.▲ confused
01:10:568 (2,3,4) - ddd is fine. You mapped to the drums. But maybe kkk to vocal is better because, the playing is in this way more confortable and easier.
01:11:597 (1) - To avoid having a too long pattern, it would be good deleting this note. Would fit well to the vocal as well. ✔

Overall nice Muzukashii.

[ 0rge's Oni]

General:
00:00:375 - unused timeline ✔
00:20:340 - ^ ✔
01:13:482 - kiai can be stopped at 01:12:797. ✔

Not a must, but constant audio volumen is recommended: About 80%

Notes:

00:33:882 (1,2,3) - kkk might be better since you mapped to the vocals , so it fits better to "mi"(みー). ✔
00:39:368 - Here you could use abekobe style again which is the mirror of 00:33:882. So you would have ddd k d d k k d kkd k d d k. Last "k" might not fit to "ku"(くー) but it has a connection to 00:42:111 (1) - . Just a suggestion. ✔ lol tried
00:57:197 (1,2) - I say it would sound better without these notes. It would regulate the spread between Oni and Muzukashii better and give some emphasized break/gap. ✔
00:58:397 (2,3,1,2,1) - kkddk is maybe better for this part. You are still mapping to vocal, but the kat is mostly mapped to the beat of the song, so using kkddk would keep this mapping.* ✔
00:59:940 (1,2) - As above said.
{
01:01:311 (2) - Maybe delete this note and add at 01:01:654 a don. After this...
01:01:825 (1) - you can change this to K and delete the notes 01:01:997 (2,3) - .
At the end you should have the pattern(starting from 01:01:482): d d K x d d kkk D - The K is high pitch based and the kkk would be an ideal continuation of the K. They would have a connection together (due to kat-based sound). ✔
}
01:08:168 (1,2) - Recommending to move these notes to 01:07:825, so the kiai sections fit better together. ✔
01:09:368 (2,3,1,2,1) - As I said above.*
01:14:511 (1,1,2,3,1) - How about having k kkk d? ✔
01:19:654 (1,2,3) - This could be a K. Not a must.

Oni is fine. Just here and there some suggestions for a better consistency since kats are kinda beat based in this song, even though you mapped to the vocal. Haha

I talked to Frostmourne, he would rebubble it after the mod got -maybe- applied.
Hope I could have. Good luck with the rank.

Frostmourne wrote:

hihi, I think this is ready to be checked by MMzz
rebubbled

Sonnyc wrote:

화이팅~★

음 그나저나 모딩을 못드렸네요,,

merchat7 wrote:

Regarding short ver.

Image from game's website http://www.studio-ryokucha.com/syukufuku/dl_song-s.html

The text above say 歌ショートバージョン which basically translates to "Song Short Version" and if you download the mp3 from there, you'll see in the zip file, the mp3 is titled" PanoramaChaime_Short" so I think (Short Ver.) should be kept.

Full version also exist, you can verify this on vgmdb and I can personally verify this. Since there is already a map ranked with (Short Ver.) and there is no video in beatmap, if I see this ranked without (Short Ver.), I would think this is the full version which isn't the case so I really think this should be kept.

Also the proper romanization of μ seems to be "myu"

Image from S inc. official website http://www.s-inc.jp/artist.html which according to wikipedia is "a talent management and music production agency." This also means that 佐藤ひろ美 should be romanized as Sato Hiromi, but that's a discussion for another time.

Well up to the beatmap creator's, but since there is already a ranked map with (Short Ver.), removing it would cause confusion in my opinion.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

But current rule still need remove (Short Ver.)

Senbonzakura wrote:

So... remove or leave???????

eveless wrote:

[Azmato's Hard]
Remove all random normal-hitwhistle from this diff, it's really annoyng since they doesnt make sense.. O

sorry for so late, I'm kinda busy these days OTL

Oyatsu wrote:

I know a rule. Don't use Short Ver. Why this still can ranked?

MineC24 wrote:

Oyatsu wrote:

I know a rule. Don't use Short Ver. Why this still can ranked?

In my opinion, this song's source is eroge. not anime



Umm.. Just my thinking

Frostmourne wrote:

read latest merchat's post please

merchat7 wrote:

Regarding short ver.

Image from game's website http://www.studio-ryokucha.com/syukufuku/dl_song-s.html

The text above say 歌ショートバージョン which basically translates to "Song Short Version" and if you download the mp3 from there, you'll see in the zip file, the mp3 is titled" PanoramaChaime_Short" so I think (Short Ver.) should be kept.

Full version also exist, you can verify this on vgmdb and I can personally verify this. Since there is already a map ranked with (Short Ver.) and there is no video in beatmap, if I see this ranked without (Short Ver.), I would think this is the full version which isn't the case so I really think this should be kept.

Also the proper romanization of μ seems to be "myu"

Image from S inc. official website http://www.s-inc.jp/artist.html which according to wikipedia is "a talent management and music production agency." This also means that 佐藤ひろ美 should be romanized as Sato Hiromi, but that's a discussion for another time.

Well up to the beatmap creator's, but since there is already a ranked map with (Short Ver.), removing it would cause confusion in my opinion.

Lanturn wrote:

This may be a little late but... no vid?

http://puu.sh/3vCd8.avi | Video offset is about -400

I would really suggest adding this to your map if its not already too late ;_;