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Kawada Mami - u/n

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FrzR
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FrzR
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, November 05, 2013 at 1:54:52 PM

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: u/n
Source: Shakugan no Shana III Final
Tags: shakugan no shana, iii, final, kawada mami,
BPM: 184
Filesize: 14391kb
Play Time: 00:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.08 stars, 34 notes)
  2. Hard (4.71 stars, 94 notes)
  3. Insane (4.98 stars, 541 notes)
  4. Normal (4.16 stars, 133 notes)
Download: Kawada Mami - u/n
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Unfinished map. Been really busy. And lazy at the same time. >.>
Won't delete this though. ;)
Changelog
5/11/13 Added Shana skin. Thanks MLGnom! :3
Updated Easy Diff.
5/14/13 Updated Normal Diff. A bit of delay atm, pretty busy catching up with anime. lol
5/16/13 Fixed Normal Diff Spacing.
5/20/13 Guest Diff slot is taken. Updated Easy diff.
5/21/13 Updated all Difficulties. (Offset changed)
5/24/13 Some spacing fixes.
5/28/13 Guest diff is taken, again.
6/01/13 Updated Easy Diff, Normal Diff and Insane Diff.
6/02/13 Some minor fixes on Insane Diff.
6/05/13 Updated Easy Diff, Normal. and Insane.
6/07/13 ^
6/12/13 Le Anti-Graveyard Bump.
6/21/13 ^ Hard GD WIP, .mp3 changed bitrate. Special thanks to Setsurei for the bitrate conversion! :D.
7/21/13 Updates for all Diffs. (Laptop breakdown during the big time gap)
8/2/13 Anti-grave Update, New wallpapers with 1024x768 resolution.
8/16/13 Beatmap status back to WIP.
8/21/13 Easy Diff update.
10/18/13 Whoops. A long break. Diffs back to WIP. I'm practically remapping all of them. >_<
10/18/13. Insane Finished, Normal, working on it.
10/18/13.. Insane Update. Thanks OTO!
11/5/13 Anti-graveyard update.
Last edited by FrzR , edited 29 times in total.
Hard
696 posts
Joined February 2013
Hard
Hello from my M4M queue.



Easy

  1. First, I would recommend to change Slider tick rate to 1. It sounds much better imo.
  2. 00:03:211 (1) - Think about changing the position of that circle. Round ways are always more welcome than corners.
  3. 00:06:146 - Remove whistle here. It's to much of that sound for me.
  4. 00:11:037 - Add new Combo here, because the singer took breath before.
  5. 00:12:341 (1,3) - Those overlapping sliders could be confusing for newly players. Consider changing this.
  6. 00:14:950 (1) - what about giving that slider a curvy shape?
  7. 00:16:907 (5) - That finish Hitsound doesn't fit with the music. There's no climax, so there shouldn't be a finish, too.
  8. 00:24:733 (3) - Spacing issue. For easy diff, spacing has to be absolutely perfect.
  9. 00:25:711 (2) - Move that slider one grip down. Looks better this way.
  10. 00:27:994 (1) - Don't make longer repeating sliders. They are to irritating for easy!
  11. 00:31:907 (3) - Change position to x:232 y:176. If you do this it won't overlap with 1.
  12. 00:36:146 (4) - Change this into a blanket. (click me i'm a link)
  13. 00:37:124 - stack this note with 00:35:820 -
  14. 00:42:341 - Add new combo here. looks better.
  15. 00:42:341 (3,4,5,6) - Think about giving those notes a diamond shape. It's going to look more fashionable.
  16. 00:53:428 (1,3) - Give them a shape. Straight sliders are VERY boring.
  17. 00:59:950 (4) - Try not to overlap with 00:58:646 (2) It doesn't look good and could be confusing. (maybe again with a blanket? this way you can stack 01:00:602 (1), too)
  18. 01:03:211 (6) - Hidden notes could be confusing.
  19. 01:07:450 (5) - Change the shape of that slider. It doesn't look good.
  20. 01:15:276 (2) - no no no no corners please D:
  21. 01:51:472 (3) - Try to place this note better.
  22. 02:12:178 - Think about filling this gap.
  23. 02:25:385 (1,2,3) - This looks messy, consider changing it.
  24. 02:30:276 (3,1,2) - CORNER AGAIN D:
  25. 02:43:320 (1) - Think about moving this slider to 408/272. Looks good this way.
  26. 03:20:167 - Again you should fill the gap.
  27. 03:28:646 (2) - Move that note to 384/160 to stack it with 03:27:341
  28. 03:31:580 - I don't want to change this. It was a good idea here. Just wanted to point it out...
That's all for now.

Normal

  1. 00:05:657 - seems unreasonable imo. I don't really know which beat/sound you're following, but it does sound awkward. consider changing it. maybe only put a circle at 00:05:820
  2. 00:07:776 - one grid up. this way it doesn't overlay with the slider from before.
  3. 00:11:037 (1) - Think about not using too many of those repeating sliders. Reason is the same as in easy diff.
  4. 00:12:341 (1) - ^
  5. 00:14:298 - I would add a circle here, otherwise I get the fealing that something's missing.
  6. 00:15:276 (2) - put that slider one grid down. It will look better this way.
  7. 00:20:167 (2) - same as before.
  8. 00:32:233 (2) - ^
  9. 00:40:385 - add something here, otherwise it would destroy the flow.
  10. 00:41:526 (5) - again repeating...
  11. 00:42:994 (2) - consider giving that slider a shape.
  12. 01:11:852 (1) - add NC here. Because you change the pattern.
  13. 01:13:157 - add something here. First you follow the singer and suddenly there's something missing again. It doesn't work that way.
  14. 01:34:515 (4) - Think about mirroring this slider with 01:33:211 (2) - otherwise it looks kinda messy imo
  15. 01:38:102 (1,2) - make those 2 into a blankit. it would look nicer.
  16. 01:46:907 (3) - move that slider to 112/192. It looks much better this way.
  17. 01:59:950 (3) - that overlapping with the slider before doesn't look very good.
  18. 02:01:907 (1) - stack this with 02:00:276 (4) -
  19. 02:12:341 - fill the gap. it seems weird.
  20. 02:15:928 (1) - make that slider curvy
  21. 02:26:037 (2) - move that circle one grid down.
  22. 02:29:298 (4) - I would put a NC here. Because she breathes between.
  23. 02:40:222 (2) - same i told about those sliders again and again.
  24. 02:42:178 (5) - ^
  25. 02:43:972 (3) - ^
  26. 02:50:657 (2) - ^
  27. 02:53:428 (3) - would say the same. but i would REALLY RECOMMEND to change it here. it is very confusing if you don't really know the song.
  28. 03:00:276 (2,3,4) - this looks messy.
  29. 03:15:602 (3) - those sliders
  30. 03:20:004 - that gap
  31. 03:24:570 (4) - those sliders
  32. 03:26:363 (3) - move that slider a bit down. it shouldn't overlap with the circle before.
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

ChivaCookie wrote:

Hello from my M4M queue.



Easy

  1. First, I would recommend to change Slider tick rate to 1. It sounds much better imo.
  2. 00:03:211 (1) - Think about changing the position of that circle. Round ways are always more welcome than corners. -fixed
  3. 00:06:146 - Remove whistle here. It's to much of that sound for me. -removed
  4. 00:11:037 - Add new Combo here, because the singer took breath before. -fixed i focused on the beat btw. :3
  5. 00:12:341 (1,3) - Those overlapping sliders could be confusing for newly players. Consider changing this. -fixed
  6. 00:14:950 (1) - what about giving that slider a curvy shape?-well i ok haha
  7. 00:16:907 (5) - That finish Hitsound doesn't fit with the music. There's no climax, so there shouldn't be a finish, too.-i see, removed.
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  8. 00:24:733 (3) - Spacing issue. For easy diff, spacing has to be absolutely perfect. er.. ai mod doesn't see it. Its actually fine.
  9. 00:25:711 (2) - Move that slider one grip down. Looks better this way. -fixed
  10. 00:27:994 (1) - Don't make longer repeating sliders. They are to irritating for easy!- my bad, fixed. XD
  11. 00:31:907 (3) - Change position to x:232 y:176. If you do this it won't overlap with 1. -adjusted
  12. 00:36:146 (4) - Change this into a blanket. (click me i'm a link) -changed thanks
  13. 00:37:124 - stack this note with 00:35:820 - -stacked
  14. 00:42:341 - Add new combo here. looks better.-added
  15. 00:42:341 (3,4,5,6) - Think about giving those notes a diamond shape. It's going to look more fashionable. -i guess i made a triangle lol
  16. 00:53:428 (1,3) - Give them a shape. Straight sliders are VERY boring.-oh i see. fixed.
  17. 00:59:950 (4) - Try not to overlap with 00:58:646 (2) It doesn't look good and could be confusing. (maybe again with a blanket? this way you can stack 01:00:602 (1), too) -fixed
  18. 01:03:211 (6) - Hidden notes could be confusing.-sorry, fixed.
  19. 01:07:450 (5) - Change the shape of that slider. It doesn't look good. -fixed
  20. 01:15:276 (2) - no no no no corners please D: -my bad, fixed
  21. 01:51:472 (3) - Try to place this note better.-fixed
  22. 02:12:178 - Think about filling this gap. -fixed
  23. 02:25:385 (1,2,3) - This looks messy, consider changing it.-changed
  24. 02:30:276 (3,1,2) - CORNER AGAIN D:-sorry! D: fixed.
  25. 02:43:320 (1) - Think about moving this slider to 408/272. Looks good this way. -moved
  26. 03:20:167 - Again you should fill the gap. -fixed
  27. 03:28:646 (2) - Move that note to 384/160 to stack it with 03:27:341 -moved
  28. 03:31:580 - I don't want to change this. It was a good idea here. Just wanted to point it out...-lolwut
That's all for now.

Normal

  1. 00:05:657 - seems unreasonable imo. I don't really know which beat/sound you're following, but it does sound awkward. consider changing it. maybe only put a circle at 00:05:820 -fixed thanks.
  2. 00:07:776 - one grid up. this way it doesn't overlay with the slider from before.-moved
  3. 00:11:037 (1) - Think about not using too many of those repeating sliders. Reason is the same as in easy diff. - okay. fixed
  4. 00:12:341 (1) - ^^ :3
  5. 00:14:298 - I would add a circle here, otherwise I get the fealing that something's missing. - added
  6. 00:15:276 (2) - put that slider one grid down. It will look better this way. -moved
  7. 00:20:167 (2) - same as before. -same.
  8. 00:32:233 (2) - ^ -^
  9. 00:40:385 - add something here, otherwise it would destroy the flow. -added
  10. 00:41:526 (5) - again repeating...-fixed
  11. 00:42:994 (2) - consider giving that slider a shape.-given. :3
  12. 01:11:852 (1) - add NC here. Because you change the pattern.-added
  13. 01:13:157 - add something here. First you follow the singer and suddenly there's something missing again. It doesn't work that way. -fixed
  14. 01:34:515 (4) - Think about mirroring this slider with 01:33:211 (2) - otherwise it looks kinda messy imo -made some blankets. :3
  15. 01:38:102 (1,2) - make those 2 into a blankit. it would look nicer. -added
  16. 01:46:907 (3) - move that slider to 112/192. It looks much better this way. -moved
  17. 01:59:950 (3) - that overlapping with the slider before doesn't look very good. -sorry. fixed
  18. 02:01:907 (1) - stack this with 02:00:276 (4) - -made another technique sorry. haha
  19. 02:12:341 - fill the gap. it seems weird. -filled.
  20. 02:15:928 (1) - make that slider curvy -curved
  21. 02:26:037 (2) - move that circle one grid down. -moved
  22. 02:29:298 (4) - I would put a NC here. Because she breathes between. -added
  23. 02:40:222 (2) - same i told about those sliders again and again. -sorry. haha
  24. 02:42:178 (5) - ^
  25. 02:43:972 (3) - ^
  26. 02:50:657 (2) - ^
  27. 02:53:428 (3) - would say the same. but i would REALLY RECOMMEND to change it here. it is very confusing if you don't really know the song. -fixed
  28. 03:00:276 (2,3,4) - this looks messy. -cleaned
  29. 03:15:602 (3) - those sliders -fixed
  30. 03:20:004 - that gap -added
  31. 03:24:570 (4) - those sliders -fixed
  32. 03:26:363 (3) - move that slider a bit down. it shouldn't overlap with the circle before.-moved
Thanks for your Mod!
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
I love Shana and this song~! have your star ☆
Although this map still has a long way to go :3
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

Zero__wind wrote:

I love Shana and this song~! have your star ☆
Although this map still has a long way to go :3
thanks for that star! :D
vipto
716 posts
Joined May 2011
vipto

Mapper Help Team





Timing check

FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

vipto wrote:

Mapper Help Team





Timing check

Thanks :3
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]
HI~ Fr33z3R
#modreqs

Easy = It is very difficult compared to the difficulty.

01:31:590 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2XVlv.jpg > http://puu.sh/2XVl9.jpg

01:40:232 (6) - Delete > 01:40:069 (6) - Circle add http://puu.sh/2XVoN.jpg

02:32:243 (4) - x200 y248

03:09:090 (6) - x240 y88

Normal

02:09:580 (1) - The end of the spinner 02:11:699 (6) - Here

02:09:580 (1) - http://puu.sh/2XVSp.jpg The tail of the spinner clap add

sorry~..

Crystal
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FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

[ Zzz ] wrote:

HI~ Fr33z3R
#modreqs

Easy = Song is very difficult to be in easy. . . . .

01:31:590 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2XRH4.jpg > http://puu.sh/2XRFS.jpg

01:40:232 (6) - Delete > 01:40:069 (6) - Circle add http://puu.sh/2XRL4.jpg

02:32:243 (4) - x200 y248

03:09:090 (6) - x240 y88

Normal

02:09:580 (1) - The end of the spinner 02:11:699 (6) - Here

02:09:580 (1) - http://puu.sh/2XS8W.jpg The tail of the spinner clap add
~Thanks for your mod, please fix your puush images, it says it could not be found.
Wakia_old
52 posts
Joined May 2012
Wakia_old
Hello,I'm from #Modreqs.

If you do not like, please ignore.

Insane

SPOILER
Narrow spacing is often.

00:02:568 (3) - Spacing
00:05:177 (3,4,5,6,7) - Below form is my favorite.
7=x352,y72

00:11:046 (1,2,3) - Spacing
00:13:167 (2,3) - Below rhythm is my favorite.

00:14:960 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing,Distance spacing1.0→1.2
00:20:177 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:25:720 (3,4) - Spacing
00:28:167 (2) - Below form is my favorite.

00:32:079 (3,4) - Spacing
00:34:688 (2,3,4,5) - Below form is my favorite.

00:40:394 (4,5) - Spacing
00:42:514 (4,5) - ^
00:56:536 (3,4) - ^
01:03:057 (1,2) - ^
01:05:992 (6,7) - ^
01:11:210 (2,3) - ^
01:17:242 (5,6) - ^
01:18:710 (1,2) - ^
01:28:003 (1,2) - ^
01:55:883 (3,4) - ^
01:59:307 (1,2) - ^
02:13:166 (3,4) - ^
02:43:329 (2,3) - ^
03:16:590 (2,3,4) - ^

This map are have many spacing's problem.
So did not stand out, other problems.
However, the rhythm is very good, so I expect.
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

Wakia wrote:

Hello,I'm from #Modreqs.

If you do not like, please ignore.

Insane

SPOILER
Narrow spacing is often.

00:02:568 (3) - Spacing
00:05:177 (3,4,5,6,7) - Below form is my favorite.
7=x352,y72

00:11:046 (1,2,3) - Spacing
00:13:167 (2,3) - Below rhythm is my favorite.

00:14:960 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing,Distance spacing1.0→1.2
00:20:177 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:25:720 (3,4) - Spacing
00:28:167 (2) - Below form is my favorite.

00:32:079 (3,4) - Spacing
00:34:688 (2,3,4,5) - Below form is my favorite.

00:40:394 (4,5) - Spacing
00:42:514 (4,5) - ^
00:56:536 (3,4) - ^
01:03:057 (1,2) - ^
01:05:992 (6,7) - ^
01:11:210 (2,3) - ^
01:17:242 (5,6) - ^
01:18:710 (1,2) - ^
01:28:003 (1,2) - ^
01:55:883 (3,4) - ^
01:59:307 (1,2) - ^
02:13:166 (3,4) - ^
02:43:329 (2,3) - ^
03:16:590 (2,3,4) - ^

This map are have many spacing's problem.
So did not stand out, other problems.
However, the rhythm is very good, so I expect.
thank you for your mod.
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
Can I made ​​the Hard difficulty?
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

HabiHolic wrote:

Can I made ​​the Hard difficulty?
You'll be on my pending list for Guest Diff. Someone pm'ed me to take the slot. I still have to ask him if he really wants to continue or not. :D
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

Fr33z3R wrote:

HabiHolic wrote:

Can I made ​​the Hard difficulty?
You'll be on my pending list for Guest Diff. Someone pm'ed me to take the slot. I still have to ask him if he really wants to continue or not. :D
Go ahead. :3
Pipse Cola
204 posts
Joined August 2012
Pipse Cola
Mod Request

Easy

00:04:851 (4,1,2,3,4) - In order to keep a flow in here, and not to push the 3 that far up the screen, I suggest it like this:
Click Me, I'm a box :D
00:17:080 (1) - Let this start on 00:17:243 - and end it on 00:19:199 -.
00:29:308 (3,4) - You could make a Slider out of these.
00:48:547 - I suggest a Slider to 00:48:873 - and remove the Button.
00:53:438 (1) - Mirror this horizontally, looks better imo.
01:10:721 (4,1,2,3) - Maybe put them Buttons over there, gives a better play Ithink:
I'm another box :D
01:11:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest creating one or two Sliders in these Buttons.
01:21:156 (4,5) - For Easy Diff, Make a Button at 01:21:156 - and make a Slider from 01:21:482 - to 01:21:645 -.
01:22:134 (1,2) - Remove 2 and make 1 reversal.
01:39:743 (5) - Replace this with a Slider to 01:39:906 -.
02:09:580 (1,1) - It is not good to place Notes that short after a spinner in Easy Diff.
03:00:286 (3,4,5,1) - Maybe put it like this:
Boooox

03:18:547 (1,1) - Again it is not good to place a Note so soon after a spinner in Easy Diff.
03:30:612 (1,2) - Correct the distance between these two Sliders.
03:39:090 (1,2) - ^
03:41:047 - A spinner to 03:45:938 - with a finish sound would be awesome.


Normal

00:21:971 (6) - I suggest a Slider to 00:22:460 -.
00:35:503 (1,2) - Correct the distance here, keep one Distance snap.
00:39:090 (3) - Shorten this to 00:39:254 - and make it reversal.
00:53:764 (2) - Maybe make this slider going up towards the next Note, for playing reasons, feels better.
01:25:069 (3) - Maybe make this one leading downwards?
03:03:547 (4,1) - Keep your distance snap in lower Difficulties.
03:33:547 (7,8,91) - No NC to 1, NC to 7.
03:40:395 (7) - Make this one reversal.
03:41:047 - A spinner to 03:45:938 - with a finish sound would be awesome.


Insane

I really have no idea why everybody uses AR 9 in not - high - bpm - songs, it just does not fit. Lower it to 8.

00:05:177 (3,4,5) - Try to keep one of the two distances.
00:14:634 (1) - This Note does not fit, I suggest a slider from 00:14:471 - to 00:14:634 -.
00:45:286 (3,4,5) - Make a Triangle Pattern?
00:55:720 (1) - No NC.
01:07:460 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Do it like this, fits better imo:
Click dat Box!

01:10:394 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this symmetrically curved.
01:13:003 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:53:438 (1) - No NC.
02:01:101 (2) - Maybe make a stream of this?
02:10:557 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - A Star or something would be nice here.
02:27:351 (5,6,7,8,9) - Make this smoother.
03:20:829 (3,4) - I would go on with it where the 2 was.
03:35:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think these are supposed to be on white lines.


Good Luck, Nice song :D
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

Mod Request

Easy

00:04:851 (4,1,2,3,4) - In order to keep a flow in here, and not to push the 3 that far up the screen, I suggest it like this:
Click Me, I'm a box :D
00:17:080 (1) - Let this start on 00:17:243 - and end it on 00:19:199 -.
00:29:308 (3,4) - You could make a Slider out of these.
00:48:547 - I suggest a Slider to 00:48:873 - and remove the Button.
00:53:438 (1) - Mirror this horizontally, looks better imo.
01:10:721 (4,1,2,3) - Maybe put them Buttons over there, gives a better play Ithink:
I'm another box :D
01:11:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest creating one or two Sliders in these Buttons.
01:21:156 (4,5) - For Easy Diff, Make a Button at 01:21:156 - and make a Slider from 01:21:482 - to 01:21:645 -.
01:22:134 (1,2) - Remove 2 and make 1 reversal.
01:39:743 (5) - Replace this with a Slider to 01:39:906 -.
02:09:580 (1,1) - It is not good to place Notes that short after a spinner in Easy Diff.
03:00:286 (3,4,5,1) - Maybe put it like this:
Boooox

03:18:547 (1,1) - Again it is not good to place a Note so soon after a spinner in Easy Diff.
03:30:612 (1,2) - Correct the distance between these two Sliders.
03:39:090 (1,2) - ^
03:41:047 - A spinner to 03:45:938 - with a finish sound would be awesome.


Normal

00:21:971 (6) - I suggest a Slider to 00:22:460 -.
00:35:503 (1,2) - Correct the distance here, keep one Distance snap.
00:39:090 (3) - Shorten this to 00:39:254 - and make it reversal.
00:53:764 (2) - Maybe make this slider going up towards the next Note, for playing reasons, feels better.
01:25:069 (3) - Maybe make this one leading downwards?
03:03:547 (4,1) - Keep your distance snap in lower Difficulties.
03:33:547 (7,8,91) - No NC to 1, NC to 7.
03:40:395 (7) - Make this one reversal.
03:41:047 - A spinner to 03:45:938 - with a finish sound would be awesome.


Insane

I really have no idea why everybody uses AR 9 in not - high - bpm - songs, it just does not fit. Lower it to 8.

00:05:177 (3,4,5) - Try to keep one of the two distances.
00:14:634 (1) - This Note does not fit, I suggest a slider from 00:14:471 - to 00:14:634 -.
00:45:286 (3,4,5) - Make a Triangle Pattern?
00:55:720 (1) - No NC.
01:07:460 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Do it like this, fits better imo:
Click dat Box!

01:10:394 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this symmetrically curved.
01:13:003 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:53:438 (1) - No NC.
02:01:101 (2) - Maybe make a stream of this?
02:10:557 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - A Star or something would be nice here.
02:27:351 (5,6,7,8,9) - Make this smoother.
03:20:829 (3,4) - I would go on with it where the 2 was.
03:35:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think these are supposed to be on white lines.


Good Luck, Nice song :D
Thanks!! <3 and i love how you call the Circles as Buttons. XD
Mira-san
1,038 posts
Joined May 2012
Mira-san
Ohai.

~ Insane ~

SPOILER
00:26:047 (4) - Fix the distance from (3) ^^
00:28:167 (2) - Fix distance too
00:32:406 (4) - Too close to slider (3)
00:41:210 (6) - " " position issues ONLY
00:52:949 (5) - " " position issues ONLY
01:00:775 (2) - " " position issues ONLY
01:03:547 (2) - Hitcircle is too close to the slider
01:17:732 (6) - I suggest moving this
01:22:230 (7) - " " position issues ONLY
01:28:330 (2) - Too close
01:52:623 (5) - " " position issues ONLY
01:56:210 (4) - " " position issues ONLY
01:59:634 (2) (3) - lol too close to each other
02:07:469 (2) - too close to slider
02:10:558 (4) - I suggest moving this but I guess it's fine.
02:13:656 (4) - Too close to slider
02:30:603 (2) - " " position issues ONLY
02:46:590 (1) - " " position issues ONLY
03:01:101 (3) - " " position issues ONLY
03:17:243 (4) - " " position issues ONLY
03:23:121 (5) - " " position issues ONLY
03:34:851 (4) - " " position issues ONLY
03:36:971 (5) - " " position issues ONLY
too lazy to mod Normal and Easy huehue.
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

Mira-san wrote:

Ohai.

~ Insane ~

SPOILER
00:26:047 (4) - Fix the distance from (3) ^^
00:28:167 (2) - Fix distance too
00:32:406 (4) - Too close to slider (3)
00:41:210 (6) - " " position issues ONLY
00:52:949 (5) - " " position issues ONLY
01:00:775 (2) - " " position issues ONLY
01:03:547 (2) - Hitcircle is too close to the slider
01:17:732 (6) - I suggest moving this
01:22:230 (7) - " " position issues ONLY
01:28:330 (2) - Too close
01:52:623 (5) - " " position issues ONLY
01:56:210 (4) - " " position issues ONLY
01:59:634 (2) (3) - lol too close to each other
02:07:469 (2) - too close to slider
02:10:558 (4) - I suggest moving this but I guess it's fine.
02:13:656 (4) - Too close to slider
02:30:603 (2) - " " position issues ONLY
02:46:590 (1) - " " position issues ONLY
03:01:101 (3) - " " position issues ONLY
03:17:243 (4) - " " position issues ONLY
03:23:121 (5) - " " position issues ONLY
03:34:851 (4) - " " position issues ONLY
03:36:971 (5) - " " position issues ONLY
too lazy to mod Normal and Easy huehue.
thanks, hue.
Imperf3kt
75 posts
Joined December 2012
Imperf3kt
Awesome map [EASY], I played with my laptop trackpad and had no issues, I'd definitely give this map some kudosu if I had any or even knew what it was.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794958

I'll go try the other difficulties now.
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

Imperf3kt wrote:

Awesome map [EASY], I played with my laptop trackpad and had no issues, I'd definitely give this map some kudosu if I had any or even knew what it was.
I gave you one, now send it to my map. XD
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]
Heart to heart
Itsumo kono mune no naka ni aritai
if no kotae wa tomadoi
Harisakeru you na kankaku ni obieta kokoro wa
‘Deux en un’ *-*

(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻


[General]
The MP3 bitrate is 320Kbps. The max is 192, you need to change it :3

There is only 1590 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

[Easy]

Unsnapped Green sections at:
00:17:151 - snap to 00:17:080
00:23:102 - snap to 00:23:112
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:28:890 - snap to 01:28:819
01:28:972 - snap to 01:28:982
01:40:711 - snap to 01:40:721
02:12:015 - snap to 02:12:025
02:22:369 - snap to 02:22:297
02:22:450 - snap to 02:22:460
02:32:885 - snap to 02:32:895
02:38:265 - snap to 02:38:275
03:19:841 - snap to 03:19:851
03:30:195 - snap to 03:30:123
03:30:276 - snap to 03:30:286
03:40:711 - snap to 03:40:721
--
00:12:351 (2,3) - Youcould make a beat blanket with those :3
00:13:656 (4,5,1) - This could be more beautiful in my opinion ► http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794903
00:28:982 (2,3) - Make the beat blanket more precise :3
01:03:547 (1,2,3) - Move them a enough to not overlap each other's borders. Something like that ► http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794906
01:11:047 (1,2,3,4) - That one looks ugly in my opinion and with the low AR, it's noticable. Change the placing :)
01:15:286 (2,3) - Fix the blanket :3
01:20:177 (3) - Move this one grid to left so it wont touch the other slider's border
01:27:677 (2,3) - I find this kinda hard for Easy.
02:00:612 (3,1) - The slider borders! Move the reverse anchor of 02:00:612 (3) - a bit to left so it wont touch the other slider.
02:27:677 (4,1) - The blanket, use the next circle's approach circle to make it awesome.
03:41:047 (1) - The spinner isn't needed if you end there. It doesn't sound good ._.

[Normal]
Unspanned Green sections at:
00:17:559 - snap to 00:17:569
00:19:515 - snap to 00:19:525
00:23:102 - snap to 00:23:112
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:28:890 - snap to 01:28:819
01:28:972 - snap to 01:28:982
01:40:711 - snap to 01:40:721
02:12:015 - snap to 02:12:025
02:22:369 - snap to 02:22:297
02:22:450 - snap to 02:22:460
02:32:885 - snap to 02:32:895
02:38:021 - snap to 02:37:949
03:19:841 - snap to 03:19:851
03:30:195 - snap to 03:30:123
03:30:276 - snap to 03:30:286
03:40:711 - snap to 03:40:721
--
00:21:482 (5,6) - Blanket please. :P
00:51:482 (4,5) - ^
00:58:656 (3,4) - Overlap, come one! D: Don't connect sliders together like this~
01:04:851 (4,5) - Blanket :3
02:28:003 (1,2,3) - Hmm doesn't look very comfortable while playing :c
02:29:308 (1) - Increase the curve here ► https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794944
03:31:590 (4,5,6) - The distance of the sliders to the middle circle are not the same. Use the same distance and they'll look more symmetrical and beautiful.
03:20:177 (1,2,3) - ^
03:34:199 (2,3) - Blanket please :3


[Insane]
Unsnapped Green sections at:
00:17:559 - snap to 00:17:569
00:19:515 - snap to 00:19:525
00:23:102 - snap to 00:23:112
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:28:890 - snap to 01:28:900
01:28:972 - snap to 01:28:982
01:40:711 - snap to 01:40:721
02:12:015 - snap to 02:12:025
02:22:369 - snap to 02:22:379
02:22:450 - snap to 02:22:460
02:32:885 - snap to 02:32:895
02:37:205 - snap to 02:37:215
03:19:841 - snap to 03:19:851
03:30:195 - snap to 03:30:205
03:30:276 - snap to 03:30:286
03:40:711 - snap to 03:40:721
--
00:11:046 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794951
00:25:720 (3,4,1) - Overlapping and bad looking spacing ._.
00:26:373 (1,2,3,4) - Not symmetrical
00:27:840 (1,2) - Make the curve flowing better for both? ► http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794956
00:28:655 (3) - Not sure but this might be unrankable.
00:29:470 (3,4) - You could make a blanket with the slider 3 and a mirror of it with the slider 4 and make the flow better
00:33:710 (1) - Move it one grid to left
00:57:025 (5) - One grid down
00:57:514 (6,7,8) - ^
01:28:329 (2) - Move it to x:144 y:176
02:00:123 (4) - That slider overlaps 02:00:775 (1) - and the reverse arrow is not visible. That's unrankable. The reverse arrow must be visible.
02:07:133 (1,2) - ugly overlap ._.
02:27:677 (9,2) - Stack them and fix the square? o-o
03:27:351 (7) - Not sure but this might be unrankable.

That's all, not bad, mostly minor issues. The insane needs more work on the flow and that's about it :P

Good luck!
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Heart to heart
Itsumo kono mune no naka ni aritai
if no kotae wa tomadoi
Harisakeru you na kankaku ni obieta kokoro wa
‘Deux en un’ *-*

(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻


[General]
The MP3 bitrate is 320Kbps. The max is 192, you need to change it :3

There is only 1590 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

[Easy]

Unsnapped Green sections at:
00:17:151 - snap to 00:17:080
00:23:102 - snap to 00:23:112
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:28:890 - snap to 01:28:819
01:28:972 - snap to 01:28:982
01:40:711 - snap to 01:40:721
02:12:015 - snap to 02:12:025
02:22:369 - snap to 02:22:297
02:22:450 - snap to 02:22:460
02:32:885 - snap to 02:32:895
02:38:265 - snap to 02:38:275
03:19:841 - snap to 03:19:851
03:30:195 - snap to 03:30:123
03:30:276 - snap to 03:30:286
03:40:711 - snap to 03:40:721
--
00:12:351 (2,3) - Youcould make a beat blanket with those :3
00:13:656 (4,5,1) - This could be more beautiful in my opinion ► http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794903
00:28:982 (2,3) - Make the beat blanket more precise :3
01:03:547 (1,2,3) - Move them a enough to not overlap each other's borders. Something like that ► http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794906
01:11:047 (1,2,3,4) - That one looks ugly in my opinion and with the low AR, it's noticable. Change the placing :)
01:15:286 (2,3) - Fix the blanket :3
01:20:177 (3) - Move this one grid to left so it wont touch the other slider's border
01:27:677 (2,3) - I find this kinda hard for Easy.
02:00:612 (3,1) - The slider borders! Move the reverse anchor of 02:00:612 (3) - a bit to left so it wont touch the other slider.
02:27:677 (4,1) - The blanket, use the next circle's approach circle to make it awesome.
03:41:047 (1) - The spinner isn't needed if you end there. It doesn't sound good ._.

[Normal]
Unspanned Green sections at:
00:17:559 - snap to 00:17:569
00:19:515 - snap to 00:19:525
00:23:102 - snap to 00:23:112
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:28:890 - snap to 01:28:819
01:28:972 - snap to 01:28:982
01:40:711 - snap to 01:40:721
02:12:015 - snap to 02:12:025
02:22:369 - snap to 02:22:297
02:22:450 - snap to 02:22:460
02:32:885 - snap to 02:32:895
02:38:021 - snap to 02:37:949
03:19:841 - snap to 03:19:851
03:30:195 - snap to 03:30:123
03:30:276 - snap to 03:30:286
03:40:711 - snap to 03:40:721
--
00:21:482 (5,6) - Blanket please. :P
00:51:482 (4,5) - ^
00:58:656 (3,4) - Overlap, come one! D: Don't connect sliders together like this~
01:04:851 (4,5) - Blanket :3
02:28:003 (1,2,3) - Hmm doesn't look very comfortable while playing :c
02:29:308 (1) - Increase the curve here ► https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794944
03:31:590 (4,5,6) - The distance of the sliders to the middle circle are not the same. Use the same distance and they'll look more symmetrical and beautiful.
03:20:177 (1,2,3) - ^
03:34:199 (2,3) - Blanket please :3


[Insane]
Unsnapped Green sections at:
00:17:559 - snap to 00:17:569
00:19:515 - snap to 00:19:525
00:23:102 - snap to 00:23:112
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:28:890 - snap to 01:28:900
01:28:972 - snap to 01:28:982
01:40:711 - snap to 01:40:721
02:12:015 - snap to 02:12:025
02:22:369 - snap to 02:22:379
02:22:450 - snap to 02:22:460
02:32:885 - snap to 02:32:895
02:37:205 - snap to 02:37:215
03:19:841 - snap to 03:19:851
03:30:195 - snap to 03:30:205
03:30:276 - snap to 03:30:286
03:40:711 - snap to 03:40:721
--
00:11:046 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794951
00:25:720 (3,4,1) - Overlapping and bad looking spacing ._.
00:26:373 (1,2,3,4) - Not symmetrical
00:27:840 (1,2) - Make the curve flowing better for both? ► http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794956
00:28:655 (3) - Not sure but this might be unrankable.
00:29:470 (3,4) - You could make a blanket with the slider 3 and a mirror of it with the slider 4 and make the flow better
00:33:710 (1) - Move it one grid to left
00:57:025 (5) - One grid down
00:57:514 (6,7,8) - ^
01:28:329 (2) - Move it to x:144 y:176
02:00:123 (4) - That slider overlaps 02:00:775 (1) - and the reverse arrow is not visible. That's unrankable. The reverse arrow must be visible.
02:07:133 (1,2) - ugly overlap ._.
02:27:677 (9,2) - Stack them and fix the square? o-o
03:27:351 (7) - Not sure but this might be unrankable.

That's all, not bad, mostly minor issues. The insane needs more work on the flow and that's about it :P

Good luck!
Thank you. XD
Imperf3kt
75 posts
Joined December 2012
Imperf3kt

Fr33z3R wrote:

Imperf3kt wrote:

Awesome map [EASY], I played with my laptop trackpad and had no issues, I'd definitely give this map some kudosu if I had any or even knew what it was.
I gave you one, now send it to my map. XD
lol. I haven't had kudosu before, never even knew what it was because it is not explained until you have some.
Anyway yes, I definitely give it to this map, played NORMAL mode as well, thoroughly impresses, but I am not trying Insane until I have my mouse :D
loshirai14
19 posts
Joined March 2013
loshirai14
could i make an osu! mania diff?
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

loshirai14 wrote:

could i make an osu! mania diff?
That would be greatly appreciated!! I love your Miku map. :D
loshirai14
19 posts
Joined March 2013
loshirai14

Fr33z3R wrote:

loshirai14 wrote:

could i make an osu! mania diff?
That would be greatly appreciated!! I love your Miku map. :D
thnx..

awesome map BTW :)
Leader
osu! Alumni
1,849 posts
Joined January 2011
Leader
Hello, M4M from my Modding Queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:656 (4) - Are you sure about blue tick? End the slider 1/4 before
  2. 00:23:764 (1,2) - Make a 1/2 slider instead
  3. 00:49:199 (2) - Some grids up
  4. 01:03:547 (1,2) - Increase spacing a bit, so they won't touch themselves :3
  5. 01:04:851 (3) - Try a better blanket
  6. 01:59:308 (1) - 1 grid down
  7. 02:16:754 (3,4) - Not suitable for an Easy :C Do a slider with 2 repeats instead
  8. 03:19:525 - Spinner should end here. Since it's an easy, the player requires more time to react
[Normal]
  1. 00:16:917 (1,2) - Stack them?
  2. 01:00:938 (2) - Add a repeat and delete the next beat
  3. 01:13:656 (1) - ^
  4. 01:50:503 (3) - ^
  5. 01:47:569 (4) - 1 grid down
  6. 03:28:982 (3,4) - Reverse selection?
  7. 03:39:090 (5) - Stack on 03:37:460 (2) -
No Hard..?

[Insane]
  1. 00:28:655 (3) - No, it doesn't fit at all ;_;
  2. 00:46:916 (3) - ^
  3. 00:49:525 (1) - ^
  4. 03:27:351 (7) - ^
  5. 00:33:383 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Remove all these NC?
  6. 01:10:394 (2) - Start stream from x:408 y:72
  7. 01:13:981 (2) - Totally covered by previous stream, move elsewhere?
  8. 01:17:731 (6) - Spacing
  9. 02:04:362 (6) - Move it over 02:04:525 (1) - tail
  10. 02:13:655 (4) - 1 grid right
    It needs some more work.
Good luck ~
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

Leader wrote:

Hello, M4M from my Modding Queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:656 (4) - Are you sure about blue tick? End the slider 1/4 before -oh my bad, i misconfigured it after i adjusted the slider
  2. 00:23:764 (1,2) - Make a 1/2 slider instead -added
  3. 00:49:199 (2) - Some grids up -moved
  4. 01:03:547 (1,2) - Increase spacing a bit, so they won't touch themselves :3 -i see. :D
  5. 01:04:851 (3) - Try a better blanket -fixed
  6. 01:59:308 (1) - 1 grid down -moved
  7. 02:16:754 (3,4) - Not suitable for an Easy :C Do a slider with 2 repeats instead [color=#FF0000]- sorry, fixed. :)[/color]
  8. 03:19:525 - Spinner should end here. Since it's an easy, the player requires more time to react
[Normal]
  1. 00:16:917 (1,2) - Stack them? -oh that would be better. :)
  2. 01:00:938 (2) - Add a repeat and delete the next beat -added
  3. 01:13:656 (1) - ^ -added
  4. 01:50:503 (3) - ^ -added
  5. 01:47:569 (4) - 1 grid down -moved
  6. 03:28:982 (3,4) - Reverse selection? -er.. what? ill just make a slider instead. :D
  7. 03:39:090 (5) - Stack on 03:37:460 (2) --stacked
No Hard..?

[Insane]
  1. 00:28:655 (3) - No, it doesn't fit at all ;_; -sorry, fixed
  2. 00:46:916 (3) - ^ -fixed
  3. 00:49:525 (1) - ^ -fixed
  4. 03:27:351 (7) - ^ -fixed
  5. 00:33:383 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Remove all these NC? -ah, removed.
  6. 01:10:394 (2) - Start stream from x:408 y:72 -moved, some jump there. :D
  7. 01:13:981 (2) - Totally covered by previous stream, move elsewhere?-moved. ^^
  8. 01:17:731 (6) - Spacing -fixed
  9. 02:04:362 (6) - Move it over 02:04:525 (1) - tail -moved
  10. 02:13:655 (4) - 1 grid right -moved
    It needs some more work.-thanks, your mod helps a lot.
Good luck ~
Thank you!! :D
Setsurei
1,149 posts
Joined May 2012
Setsurei


Kawada Mami - u/n
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

Setsurei wrote:



Kawada Mami - u/n
Thanks, sorry if i posted a mod req on a wrong timing. Ill post my mod req next week then. :)
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
Hi, I'm sorry although M4M but I can't mod now. I starred you~ Sorry~ :(
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
FrzR

Oyatsu wrote:

Hi, I'm sorry although M4M but I can't mod now. I starred you~ Sorry~ :(
Its ok. Thanks for the star. ^^
Smoothie
558 posts
Joined August 2011
Smoothie
Heya~
M4M from my queue

[Insane]
00:12:351 (1,2,3) - This plays a bit weird imo. How about removing the reverses on 00:12:351 (1) and add a slider that starts at 00:12:677 and ends at 00:13:004?
00:14:308 - Add a note here and extend 00:14:471 (1) to the red line. It plays and sounds pretty nice.
00:19:525 (1) - Make this one symmetric. Like this: http://puu.sh/3mqMv.jpg
00:20:992 (5) - Remove the whistle on the reverse. It sounds a bit weird.
00:25:068 (1) - Remove the NC and add one here 00:25:720 (8). After that remove the NC here 00:26:373 (1)
00:28:493 (3) - Consider adding a note here to keep the flow going.
00:30:938 (4) - Add a whitle on the slider start and remove the whistle on the end.
00:33:954 (10,12) - Remove these claps. It sounds nicer without them.
00:36:318 (4) - Add a clap on the reverse instead~
00:40:884 (5) - Clap on the slider end~
00:44:145 - Consider adding a note here~
00:56:536 (4) - Clap on the slider start~
00:57:677 (8) - Clap on the slider end.
01:06:970 (1) - Clap pn the reverse.
01:07:460 (2,6) - Add claps and remove the clap here 01:07:867 (7)
01:28:981 ~ 01:34:199 - I think there are too many finishes in that part. It doesn't sound so well.
02:59:960 (3) - Remove this slider and place a circle insteas. After that add a slider that starts at 03:00:123 and ends at 03:00:449. It is nicer to play in that way.
03:02:568 (3) - Do the same thing here if you did what i mentioned above.
03:27:351 (7) - Can you think of something else? This totally kills the flow. :c

[Normal]
AR +1 and OD +1 for a better diff spread.

00:02:243 (2,3) - Spacing error.
00:04:199 (2,3,4) - These play a bit weird imo. Try this: 00:04:199 (2) Extend this slider to the white line and move this note 00:04:688 (3) to 00:04:851. After that extend this slider 00:05:177 (4) to the white line.
00:20:993 (4,5,6) - How about this instead? http://puu.sh/3msPI.jpg
00:36:482 (2) - Move the middle point one grid to the left~
00:39:090 (3) - Add a clap on the slider start.
00:39:743 (1) - ^
00:40:232 (2,3) - How about turning these into a slider?
01:03:221 (1) - Add a clap.
01:17:569 (5) - Drag the slider end point 2 grids up.
01:20:503 (1,2,3) - That's a bit weird to play. Try this: http://puu.sh/3mtc4.jpg
01:50:503 (3) - Add a clap on the slider end.
02:13:003 (1,2) - Blanket these better~
02:25:395 (1) - Add a clap on the slider end.
02:26:699 (4) - Clap on the reverse~
02:30:612 (3) - Clap on the slider end.
02:31:590 (4) - ^
02:56:699 (6,1) - Blanket these better~
03:09:417 (1) - Add a finish?
03:16:917 (5) - Add a NC on this one And remove the NC here 03:17:569 (1)
03:20:177 (1) - Add a clap on the slider start~
03:39:417 (6) - Add a clap on the start and end?
03:40:395 (7) - Finish on the slider end?

[Easy]
00:11:047 (4) - Remove the whistle on the slider trail. :c
00:17:243 (1) - Start the spinner at 00:17:569 instead and add a note at 00:17:243.
00:28:003 (1) - Add a clap on the reverse and slider end~
00:49:199 (2) - Remove the whistle on the slider tail. It doesn't really fit imo.
01:24:090 - Add a note here?
01:26:699 (5) - Add a clap on this one and extend it to the white line.
01:27:677 (2,3) - How about this? http://puu.sh/3mu7N.jpg
01:39:417 (5) - Consider adding a note here.
02:09:090 - Add a note here~
02:09:580 (1) - Add a Finish. It fits pretty well.
02:49:851 (2) - Remove the whistle on the slider trail.
02:52:460 (2) - ^
02:58:982 (1) - ^
03:09:090 (6) - Add a clap instead~
03:09:417 (1) - Add a finish.
03:19:851 - You should a note here~

Well, that is all.
Good luck!
FrzR
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FrzR

Smoothie wrote:

Heya~
M4M from my queue

[Insane]
00:12:351 (1,2,3) - This plays a bit weird imo. How about removing the reverses on 00:12:351 (1) and add a slider that starts at 00:12:677 and ends at 00:13:004?
00:14:308 - Add a note here and extend 00:14:471 (1) to the red line. It plays and sounds pretty nice.
00:19:525 (1) - Make this one symmetric. Like this: http://puu.sh/3mqMv.jpg
00:20:992 (5) - Remove the whistle on the reverse. It sounds a bit weird.
00:25:068 (1) - Remove the NC and add one here 00:25:720 (8). After that remove the NC here 00:26:373 (1)
00:28:493 (3) - Consider adding a note here to keep the flow going.
00:30:938 (4) - Add a whitle on the slider start and remove the whistle on the end.
00:33:954 (10,12) - Remove these claps. It sounds nicer without them.
00:36:318 (4) - Add a clap on the reverse instead~
00:40:884 (5) - Clap on the slider end~
00:44:145 - Consider adding a note here~
00:56:536 (4) - Clap on the slider start~
00:57:677 (8) - Clap on the slider end.
01:06:970 (1) - Clap pn the reverse.
01:07:460 (2,6) - Add claps and remove the clap here 01:07:867 (7)
01:28:981 ~ 01:34:199 - I think there are too many finishes in that part. It doesn't sound so well.
02:59:960 (3) - Remove this slider and place a circle insteas. After that add a slider that starts at 03:00:123 and ends at 03:00:449. It is nicer to play in that way.
03:02:568 (3) - Do the same thing here if you did what i mentioned above.
03:27:351 (7) - Can you think of something else? This totally kills the flow. :c

[Normal]
AR +1 and OD +1 for a better diff spread.

00:02:243 (2,3) - Spacing error.
00:04:199 (2,3,4) - These play a bit weird imo. Try this: 00:04:199 (2) Extend this slider to the white line and move this note 00:04:688 (3) to 00:04:851. After that extend this slider 00:05:177 (4) to the white line.
00:20:993 (4,5,6) - How about this instead? http://puu.sh/3msPI.jpg
00:36:482 (2) - Move the middle point one grid to the left~
00:39:090 (3) - Add a clap on the slider start.
00:39:743 (1) - ^
00:40:232 (2,3) - How about turning these into a slider?
01:03:221 (1) - Add a clap.
01:17:569 (5) - Drag the slider end point 2 grids up.
01:20:503 (1,2,3) - That's a bit weird to play. Try this: http://puu.sh/3mtc4.jpg
01:50:503 (3) - Add a clap on the slider end.
02:13:003 (1,2) - Blanket these better~
02:25:395 (1) - Add a clap on the slider end.
02:26:699 (4) - Clap on the reverse~
02:30:612 (3) - Clap on the slider end.
02:31:590 (4) - ^
02:56:699 (6,1) - Blanket these better~
03:09:417 (1) - Add a finish?
03:16:917 (5) - Add a NC on this one And remove the NC here 03:17:569 (1)
03:20:177 (1) - Add a clap on the slider start~
03:39:417 (6) - Add a clap on the start and end?
03:40:395 (7) - Finish on the slider end?

[Easy]
00:11:047 (4) - Remove the whistle on the slider trail. :c
00:17:243 (1) - Start the spinner at 00:17:569 instead and add a note at 00:17:243.
00:28:003 (1) - Add a clap on the reverse and slider end~
00:49:199 (2) - Remove the whistle on the slider tail. It doesn't really fit imo.
01:24:090 - Add a note here?
01:26:699 (5) - Add a clap on this one and extend it to the white line.
01:27:677 (2,3) - How about this? http://puu.sh/3mu7N.jpg
01:39:417 (5) - Consider adding a note here.
02:09:090 - Add a note here~
02:09:580 (1) - Add a Finish. It fits pretty well.
02:49:851 (2) - Remove the whistle on the slider trail.
02:52:460 (2) - ^
02:58:982 (1) - ^
03:09:090 (6) - Add a clap instead~
03:09:417 (1) - Add a finish.
03:19:851 - You should a note here~

Well, that is all.
Good luck!
Thanks for the mod. I checked your mod like 27 days ago, at those times my laptop broke down unfortunately. But Thanks again!
AdamRavagor
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AdamRavagor
why "error loading audio in this beatmap" ._.
oh the music is not there
please fix
i have the song but i can't put that in by myself T.T
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