Zero__wind wrote:

I love Shana and this song~! have your star ☆
Although this map still has a long way to go :3

vipto wrote:

Mapper Help Team

Timing check

[ Zzz ] wrote:

HI~ Fr33z3R
#modreqs

Easy = Song is very difficult to be in easy. . . . .

01:31:590 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2XRH4.jpg > http://puu.sh/2XRFS.jpg

01:40:232 (6) - Delete > 01:40:069 (6) - Circle add http://puu.sh/2XRL4.jpg

02:32:243 (4) - x200 y248

03:09:090 (6) - x240 y88

Normal

02:09:580 (1) - The end of the spinner 02:11:699 (6) - Here

02:09:580 (1) - http://puu.sh/2XS8W.jpg The tail of the spinner clap add

Wakia wrote:

Hello,I'm from #Modreqs.

If you do not like, please ignore.

Insane

SPOILER

Narrow spacing is often.

00:02:568 (3) - Spacing
00:05:177 (3,4,5,6,7) - Below form is my favorite.
7=x352,y72

00:11:046 (1,2,3) - Spacing
00:13:167 (2,3) - Below rhythm is my favorite.

00:14:960 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing,Distance spacing1.0→1.2
00:20:177 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:25:720 (3,4) - Spacing
00:28:167 (2) - Below form is my favorite.

00:32:079 (3,4) - Spacing
00:34:688 (2,3,4,5) - Below form is my favorite.

00:40:394 (4,5) - Spacing
00:42:514 (4,5) - ^
00:56:536 (3,4) - ^
01:03:057 (1,2) - ^
01:05:992 (6,7) - ^
01:11:210 (2,3) - ^
01:17:242 (5,6) - ^
01:18:710 (1,2) - ^
01:28:003 (1,2) - ^
01:55:883 (3,4) - ^
01:59:307 (1,2) - ^
02:13:166 (3,4) - ^
02:43:329 (2,3) - ^
03:16:590 (2,3,4) - ^

This map are have many spacing's problem.
So did not stand out, other problems.
However, the rhythm is very good, so I expect.

HabiHolic wrote:

Can I made ​​the Hard difficulty?

Fr33z3R wrote:

HabiHolic wrote:

Can I made ​​the Hard difficulty?

You'll be on my pending list for Guest Diff. Someone pm'ed me to take the slot. I still have to ask him if he really wants to continue or not.

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

Mod Request

Easy

00:04:851 (4,1,2,3,4) - In order to keep a flow in here, and not to push the 3 that far up the screen, I suggest it like this:

Click Me, I'm a box

00:17:080 (1) - Let this start on 00:17:243 - and end it on 00:19:199 -.
00:29:308 (3,4) - You could make a Slider out of these.
00:48:547 - I suggest a Slider to 00:48:873 - and remove the Button.
00:53:438 (1) - Mirror this horizontally, looks better imo.
01:10:721 (4,1,2,3) - Maybe put them Buttons over there, gives a better play Ithink:

I'm another box

01:11:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest creating one or two Sliders in these Buttons.
01:21:156 (4,5) - For Easy Diff, Make a Button at 01:21:156 - and make a Slider from 01:21:482 - to 01:21:645 -.
01:22:134 (1,2) - Remove 2 and make 1 reversal.
01:39:743 (5) - Replace this with a Slider to 01:39:906 -.
02:09:580 (1,1) - It is not good to place Notes that short after a spinner in Easy Diff.
03:00:286 (3,4,5,1) - Maybe put it like this:

Boooox

03:18:547 (1,1) - Again it is not good to place a Note so soon after a spinner in Easy Diff.
03:30:612 (1,2) - Correct the distance between these two Sliders.
03:39:090 (1,2) - ^
03:41:047 - A spinner to 03:45:938 - with a finish sound would be awesome.


Normal

00:21:971 (6) - I suggest a Slider to 00:22:460 -.
00:35:503 (1,2) - Correct the distance here, keep one Distance snap.
00:39:090 (3) - Shorten this to 00:39:254 - and make it reversal.
00:53:764 (2) - Maybe make this slider going up towards the next Note, for playing reasons, feels better.
01:25:069 (3) - Maybe make this one leading downwards?
03:03:547 (4,1) - Keep your distance snap in lower Difficulties.
03:33:547 (7,8,91) - No NC to 1, NC to 7.
03:40:395 (7) - Make this one reversal.
03:41:047 - A spinner to 03:45:938 - with a finish sound would be awesome.


Insane

I really have no idea why everybody uses AR 9 in not - high - bpm - songs, it just does not fit. Lower it to 8.

00:05:177 (3,4,5) - Try to keep one of the two distances.
00:14:634 (1) - This Note does not fit, I suggest a slider from 00:14:471 - to 00:14:634 -.
00:45:286 (3,4,5) - Make a Triangle Pattern?
00:55:720 (1) - No NC.
01:07:460 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Do it like this, fits better imo:

Click dat Box!

01:10:394 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this symmetrically curved.
01:13:003 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:53:438 (1) - No NC.
02:01:101 (2) - Maybe make a stream of this?
02:10:557 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - A Star or something would be nice here.
02:27:351 (5,6,7,8,9) - Make this smoother.
03:20:829 (3,4) - I would go on with it where the 2 was.
03:35:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think these are supposed to be on white lines.


Good Luck, Nice song

Mira-san wrote:

Ohai.

~ Insane ~

SPOILER

00:26:047 (4) - Fix the distance from (3) ^^
00:28:167 (2) - Fix distance too
00:32:406 (4) - Too close to slider (3)
00:41:210 (6) - " " position issues ONLY
00:52:949 (5) - " " position issues ONLY
01:00:775 (2) - " " position issues ONLY
01:03:547 (2) - Hitcircle is too close to the slider
01:17:732 (6) - I suggest moving this
01:22:230 (7) - " " position issues ONLY
01:28:330 (2) - Too close
01:52:623 (5) - " " position issues ONLY
01:56:210 (4) - " " position issues ONLY
01:59:634 (2) (3) - lol too close to each other
02:07:469 (2) - too close to slider
02:10:558 (4) - I suggest moving this but I guess it's fine.
02:13:656 (4) - Too close to slider
02:30:603 (2) - " " position issues ONLY
02:46:590 (1) - " " position issues ONLY
03:01:101 (3) - " " position issues ONLY
03:17:243 (4) - " " position issues ONLY
03:23:121 (5) - " " position issues ONLY
03:34:851 (4) - " " position issues ONLY
03:36:971 (5) - " " position issues ONLY

too lazy to mod Normal and Easy huehue.

Imperf3kt wrote:

Awesome map [EASY], I played with my laptop trackpad and had no issues, I'd definitely give this map some kudosu if I had any or even knew what it was.

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Heart to heart
Itsumo kono mune no naka ni aritai
if no kotae wa tomadoi
Harisakeru you na kankaku ni obieta kokoro wa
‘Deux en un’ *-*

(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻


[General]
The MP3 bitrate is 320Kbps. The max is 192, you need to change it :3

There is only 1590 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

[Easy]

Unsnapped Green sections at:
00:17:151 - snap to 00:17:080
00:23:102 - snap to 00:23:112
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:28:890 - snap to 01:28:819
01:28:972 - snap to 01:28:982
01:40:711 - snap to 01:40:721
02:12:015 - snap to 02:12:025
02:22:369 - snap to 02:22:297
02:22:450 - snap to 02:22:460
02:32:885 - snap to 02:32:895
02:38:265 - snap to 02:38:275
03:19:841 - snap to 03:19:851
03:30:195 - snap to 03:30:123
03:30:276 - snap to 03:30:286
03:40:711 - snap to 03:40:721
--
00:12:351 (2,3) - Youcould make a beat blanket with those :3
00:13:656 (4,5,1) - This could be more beautiful in my opinion ► http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794903
00:28:982 (2,3) - Make the beat blanket more precise :3
01:03:547 (1,2,3) - Move them a enough to not overlap each other's borders. Something like that ► http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794906
01:11:047 (1,2,3,4) - That one looks ugly in my opinion and with the low AR, it's noticable. Change the placing
01:15:286 (2,3) - Fix the blanket :3
01:20:177 (3) - Move this one grid to left so it wont touch the other slider's border
01:27:677 (2,3) - I find this kinda hard for Easy.
02:00:612 (3,1) - The slider borders! Move the reverse anchor of 02:00:612 (3) - a bit to left so it wont touch the other slider.
02:27:677 (4,1) - The blanket, use the next circle's approach circle to make it awesome.
03:41:047 (1) - The spinner isn't needed if you end there. It doesn't sound good ._.

[Normal]
Unspanned Green sections at:
00:17:559 - snap to 00:17:569
00:19:515 - snap to 00:19:525
00:23:102 - snap to 00:23:112
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:28:890 - snap to 01:28:819
01:28:972 - snap to 01:28:982
01:40:711 - snap to 01:40:721
02:12:015 - snap to 02:12:025
02:22:369 - snap to 02:22:297
02:22:450 - snap to 02:22:460
02:32:885 - snap to 02:32:895
02:38:021 - snap to 02:37:949
03:19:841 - snap to 03:19:851
03:30:195 - snap to 03:30:123
03:30:276 - snap to 03:30:286
03:40:711 - snap to 03:40:721
--
00:21:482 (5,6) - Blanket please.
00:51:482 (4,5) - ^
00:58:656 (3,4) - Overlap, come one! D: Don't connect sliders together like this~
01:04:851 (4,5) - Blanket :3
02:28:003 (1,2,3) - Hmm doesn't look very comfortable while playing :c
02:29:308 (1) - Increase the curve here ► https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794944
03:31:590 (4,5,6) - The distance of the sliders to the middle circle are not the same. Use the same distance and they'll look more symmetrical and beautiful.
03:20:177 (1,2,3) - ^
03:34:199 (2,3) - Blanket please :3


[Insane]
Unsnapped Green sections at:
00:17:559 - snap to 00:17:569
00:19:515 - snap to 00:19:525
00:23:102 - snap to 00:23:112
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:18:537 - snap to 01:18:547
01:28:890 - snap to 01:28:900
01:28:972 - snap to 01:28:982
01:40:711 - snap to 01:40:721
02:12:015 - snap to 02:12:025
02:22:369 - snap to 02:22:379
02:22:450 - snap to 02:22:460
02:32:885 - snap to 02:32:895
02:37:205 - snap to 02:37:215
03:19:841 - snap to 03:19:851
03:30:195 - snap to 03:30:205
03:30:276 - snap to 03:30:286
03:40:711 - snap to 03:40:721
--
00:11:046 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794951
00:25:720 (3,4,1) - Overlapping and bad looking spacing ._.
00:26:373 (1,2,3,4) - Not symmetrical
00:27:840 (1,2) - Make the curve flowing better for both? ► http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794956
00:28:655 (3) - Not sure but this might be unrankable.
00:29:470 (3,4) - You could make a blanket with the slider 3 and a mirror of it with the slider 4 and make the flow better
00:33:710 (1) - Move it one grid to left
00:57:025 (5) - One grid down
00:57:514 (6,7,8) - ^
01:28:329 (2) - Move it to x:144 y:176
02:00:123 (4) - That slider overlaps 02:00:775 (1) - and the reverse arrow is not visible. That's unrankable. The reverse arrow must be visible.
02:07:133 (1,2) - ugly overlap ._.
02:27:677 (9,2) - Stack them and fix the square? o-o
03:27:351 (7) - Not sure but this might be unrankable.

That's all, not bad, mostly minor issues. The insane needs more work on the flow and that's about it

Good luck!

Fr33z3R wrote:

Imperf3kt wrote:

Awesome map [EASY], I played with my laptop trackpad and had no issues, I'd definitely give this map some kudosu if I had any or even knew what it was.

I gave you one, now send it to my map. XD

loshirai14 wrote:

could i make an osu! mania diff?

Fr33z3R wrote:

loshirai14 wrote:

could i make an osu! mania diff?

That would be greatly appreciated!! I love your Miku map.

1. 00:13:656 (4) - Are you sure about blue tick? End the slider 1/4 before
2. 00:23:764 (1,2) - Make a 1/2 slider instead
3. 00:49:199 (2) - Some grids up
4. 01:03:547 (1,2) - Increase spacing a bit, so they won't touch themselves :3
5. 01:04:851 (3) - Try a better blanket
6. 01:59:308 (1) - 1 grid down
7. 02:16:754 (3,4) - Not suitable for an Easy :C Do a slider with 2 repeats instead
8. 03:19:525 - Spinner should end here. Since it's an easy, the player requires more time to react

1. 00:16:917 (1,2) - Stack them?
2. 01:00:938 (2) - Add a repeat and delete the next beat
3. 01:13:656 (1) - ^
4. 01:50:503 (3) - ^
5. 01:47:569 (4) - 1 grid down
6. 03:28:982 (3,4) - Reverse selection?
7. 03:39:090 (5) - Stack on 03:37:460 (2) -

1. 00:28:655 (3) - No, it doesn't fit at all ;_;
2. 00:46:916 (3) - ^
3. 00:49:525 (1) - ^
4. 03:27:351 (7) - ^
5. 00:33:383 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Remove all these NC?
6. 01:10:394 (2) - Start stream from x:408 y:72
7. 01:13:981 (2) - Totally covered by previous stream, move elsewhere?
8. 01:17:731 (6) - Spacing
9. 02:04:362 (6) - Move it over 02:04:525 (1) - tail
10. 02:13:655 (4) - 1 grid right
    It needs some more work.

Leader wrote:

Hello, M4M from my Modding Queue

[Easy]

1. 00:13:656 (4) - Are you sure about blue tick? End the slider 1/4 before -oh my bad, i misconfigured it after i adjusted the slider
2. 00:23:764 (1,2) - Make a 1/2 slider instead -added
3. 00:49:199 (2) - Some grids up -moved
4. 01:03:547 (1,2) - Increase spacing a bit, so they won't touch themselves :3 -i see.
5. 01:04:851 (3) - Try a better blanket -fixed
6. 01:59:308 (1) - 1 grid down -moved
7. 02:16:754 (3,4) - Not suitable for an Easy :C Do a slider with 2 repeats instead [color=#FF0000]- sorry, fixed. [/color]
8. 03:19:525 - Spinner should end here. Since it's an easy, the player requires more time to react

[Normal]

1. 00:16:917 (1,2) - Stack them? -oh that would be better.
2. 01:00:938 (2) - Add a repeat and delete the next beat -added
3. 01:13:656 (1) - ^ -added
4. 01:50:503 (3) - ^ -added
5. 01:47:569 (4) - 1 grid down -moved
6. 03:28:982 (3,4) - Reverse selection? -er.. what? ill just make a slider instead.
7. 03:39:090 (5) - Stack on 03:37:460 (2) --stacked

No Hard..?

[Insane]

1. 00:28:655 (3) - No, it doesn't fit at all ;_; -sorry, fixed
2. 00:46:916 (3) - ^ -fixed
3. 00:49:525 (1) - ^ -fixed
4. 03:27:351 (7) - ^ -fixed
5. 00:33:383 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Remove all these NC? -ah, removed.
6. 01:10:394 (2) - Start stream from x:408 y:72 -moved, some jump there.
7. 01:13:981 (2) - Totally covered by previous stream, move elsewhere?-moved. ^^
8. 01:17:731 (6) - Spacing -fixed
9. 02:04:362 (6) - Move it over 02:04:525 (1) - tail -moved
10. 02:13:655 (4) - 1 grid right -moved
    It needs some more work.-thanks, your mod helps a lot.

Good luck ~

Setsurei wrote:

Kawada Mami - u/n

Oyatsu wrote:

Hi, I'm sorry although M4M but I can't mod now. I starred you~ Sorry~

Smoothie wrote:

Heya~
M4M from my queue

[Insane]
00:12:351 (1,2,3) - This plays a bit weird imo. How about removing the reverses on 00:12:351 (1) and add a slider that starts at 00:12:677 and ends at 00:13:004?
00:14:308 - Add a note here and extend 00:14:471 (1) to the red line. It plays and sounds pretty nice.
00:19:525 (1) - Make this one symmetric. Like this: http://puu.sh/3mqMv.jpg
00:20:992 (5) - Remove the whistle on the reverse. It sounds a bit weird.
00:25:068 (1) - Remove the NC and add one here 00:25:720 (8). After that remove the NC here 00:26:373 (1)
00:28:493 (3) - Consider adding a note here to keep the flow going.
00:30:938 (4) - Add a whitle on the slider start and remove the whistle on the end.
00:33:954 (10,12) - Remove these claps. It sounds nicer without them.
00:36:318 (4) - Add a clap on the reverse instead~
00:40:884 (5) - Clap on the slider end~
00:44:145 - Consider adding a note here~
00:56:536 (4) - Clap on the slider start~
00:57:677 (8) - Clap on the slider end.
01:06:970 (1) - Clap pn the reverse.
01:07:460 (2,6) - Add claps and remove the clap here 01:07:867 (7)
01:28:981 ~ 01:34:199 - I think there are too many finishes in that part. It doesn't sound so well.
02:59:960 (3) - Remove this slider and place a circle insteas. After that add a slider that starts at 03:00:123 and ends at 03:00:449. It is nicer to play in that way.
03:02:568 (3) - Do the same thing here if you did what i mentioned above.
03:27:351 (7) - Can you think of something else? This totally kills the flow. :c

[Normal]
AR +1 and OD +1 for a better diff spread.

00:02:243 (2,3) - Spacing error.
00:04:199 (2,3,4) - These play a bit weird imo. Try this: 00:04:199 (2) Extend this slider to the white line and move this note 00:04:688 (3) to 00:04:851. After that extend this slider 00:05:177 (4) to the white line.
00:20:993 (4,5,6) - How about this instead? http://puu.sh/3msPI.jpg
00:36:482 (2) - Move the middle point one grid to the left~
00:39:090 (3) - Add a clap on the slider start.
00:39:743 (1) - ^
00:40:232 (2,3) - How about turning these into a slider?
01:03:221 (1) - Add a clap.
01:17:569 (5) - Drag the slider end point 2 grids up.
01:20:503 (1,2,3) - That's a bit weird to play. Try this: http://puu.sh/3mtc4.jpg
01:50:503 (3) - Add a clap on the slider end.
02:13:003 (1,2) - Blanket these better~
02:25:395 (1) - Add a clap on the slider end.
02:26:699 (4) - Clap on the reverse~
02:30:612 (3) - Clap on the slider end.
02:31:590 (4) - ^
02:56:699 (6,1) - Blanket these better~
03:09:417 (1) - Add a finish?
03:16:917 (5) - Add a NC on this one And remove the NC here 03:17:569 (1)
03:20:177 (1) - Add a clap on the slider start~
03:39:417 (6) - Add a clap on the start and end?
03:40:395 (7) - Finish on the slider end?

[Easy]
00:11:047 (4) - Remove the whistle on the slider trail. :c
00:17:243 (1) - Start the spinner at 00:17:569 instead and add a note at 00:17:243.
00:28:003 (1) - Add a clap on the reverse and slider end~
00:49:199 (2) - Remove the whistle on the slider tail. It doesn't really fit imo.
01:24:090 - Add a note here?
01:26:699 (5) - Add a clap on this one and extend it to the white line.
01:27:677 (2,3) - How about this? http://puu.sh/3mu7N.jpg
01:39:417 (5) - Consider adding a note here.
02:09:090 - Add a note here~
02:09:580 (1) - Add a Finish. It fits pretty well.
02:49:851 (2) - Remove the whistle on the slider trail.
02:52:460 (2) - ^
02:58:982 (1) - ^
03:09:090 (6) - Add a clap instead~
03:09:417 (1) - Add a finish.
03:19:851 - You should a note here~

Well, that is all.
Good luck!