Xivaxi wrote:

Hi~ From your M4M queue!

These are all suggestions.

EDIT: I just realized I wasn't clear on what "back" and "forward" meant with relation to moving sliders/notes back and forth on the timeline (and I dont think I was consistent at all when I used those terms), so instead I've edited everything to just be "right" or "left" on the timeline

Amateur

00:16:064 (3) - Clap on slider head nah
00:17:754 (1) - Finish okay
00:19:444 (3) - Clap on slider head nah
00:21:979 (3) - Clap on the repeat arrow sounds good
00:54:937 (1) - Move this slider so it's more spaced from the previous combo, right now it looks like it's all part of the same combo (even just turning the slider end away would be fine - and doesn't mess with the overall spacing here) fixed

Average

00:15:219 (2,3) - This 1/2 pattern is neat, but I think should be consistent throughout the section - when I was playing it, I was expecting the 1/2 notes after this, but didn't get any - throwing me off in this entire section. The following suggestions will try to make it consistent. If you don't want to add all the 1/2 patterns, then you can ignore the following ~ but in that case, I'd suggest taking the pattern out altogether, again, for consistency.
00:16:486 (4) - Move this slider 1/2 right on the timeline, put a note here instead.
00:18:599 (2) - ^
00:20:289 (5) - Move this slider 1/2 left on the timeline, put a note after it.
00:23:247 (2) - Move this slider 1/2 right on the timeline, put a note here instead. most done

00:50:078 (1) - This feels better as 2 circles instead of a slider okay
01:12:683 (2) - This feels out of place. I suggest just removing this and extending the slider to here. done
01:14:374 (5) - Move this slider 1/2 left on the timeline, put a note after it did something like this
01:15:219 (7) - Shorten this slider 1/2 i think its fine, did this in the beginning
01:17:965 (3) - Add note okay
01:20:712 (3) - Move this slider 1/2 right on the timeline, put a note here instead okay
01:46:698 (2) - Add note nah

Advanced

00:56:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm not sure a star is the best pattern here - It doesn't split into 5 nicely and the slider feels awkward. There are 8 beats here with the emphasis on the 1st and 5th, so 2x4beat patterns (like 2 squares or something) would probably work best. 4x2beat patterns could work as well. removed the slider and last note, i think the star is fine now.
01:06:345 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - This section is hard to read, The circles seem to be following the bass synth thing in the BG, but the circles end before the synth ends. I suggest a pattern like the following:
http://puu.sh/2MVEh.png did something like this
Be sure you space notes out appropriately and add hit sounds so it's easy to discern the musical lines from eachother (otherwise it will just be a long jumble of notes that will probably just be even harder to read and understand).
01:13:529 (4) - Shorten this slider 1/2 and add a note after it
01:14:374 (6) - Make this a 1/2 slider
01:16:910 (5) - Shorten this slider 1/2 and add a note after it
01:24:726 (5) - Add note all above done

Nice mapset- though I think it would be nice to have an Insane difficulty for this song - there's a lot in the music that wasn't touched on by the Advanced diff, so there's still a lot of potential to exploit in here. thank you - someone is working on an insane guest diff atm

DJNightmare wrote:

Hi, im from the queue :X

Blue = Suggestions
Red = Recommended
Green = Comment

Amateur
In my opinion, it is great already so i will move on to the other difficulties :3

Average
00:58:317 - You should add a note here before the break starts ok
01:36:557 (3) - Change the sampleset of this note to Normal ok
01:50:500 (4) - Move down by 1 grid done
01:54:514 (4) - Move down by 1 grid done

Advanced
00:33:388 (6) - New Combo added on previous slider
00:58:317 - You should add a note here before the break starts yup
02:01:909 (2) - Move up and left by 1 grid done
02:02:331 (4) - Move to the left by 1 grid done
02:05:923 (1,2,3,4) - You should remove the crash cymbals in the 3rd and 5th beat of the slider removed on 3rd

This song has the potential to have a harder difficulty, but good luck on your ranking :3

Kiiwa wrote:

hiiiiiii just here cause i love Blue Stahli XD
Let me just say it was awesome to receive a mod from you, one of my favorite maps is your Shinjitsu e no Requiem

[General]

1. According to Wikipedia the album name is "Antisleep Vol. 03" here. Right, fixed
2. Add some more tags! "FiXT Music" the record label, for example. I was thinking stuff like this wasn't necessary, but I'll try adding anyway :3

[Advanced]

1. 00:27:895 (1) - Better if you finish this spinner at 00:30:853 - to match the music and add a finish sound. I want to keep the spinners the same in all diffs, and if i extend the spinner to here it will be too hard on normal and easy. Plus, it doesn't sound too good to me, but I agree that it doesn't fit the music very well. Maybe I'll find some other solution in the future.
2. 01:13:740 (4) - Probably better to delete this note. Done.
3. 01:44:585 (2) - The music has a 1/8 sound here, maybe you could add a return slider to match the music? I like the current pattern though ;_;

Pretty nice, good work :3 Thank you!

• General

1. You should add a kiai time at 00:31:275 too. It's the same melody as at 01:38:881 imo.
2. Also, you should remove the kiai time at 02:05:923. Really, it's unnecessary. The chorus ended already. It's a very calm part compared to the chorus so please remove it!

• [Amateur]

1. 00:15:641 (2) - This note would flow much better if you place it down instead of up. Over here, please try it! you'll notice the flow is better.
   
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2. 00:19:444 (3) - Similar as above. This would flow better (speciallywit h 00:21:134 (1)) if you change the curve like this:
   
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3. 00:24:937 (2) - This hitfinish sounds too noisy, redundant, unnecessary imo. Please consider removing it. This part would sound much better without it.
4. 00:39:303 (2,3) - These notes look oddly placed imo. I think you can try something smoother, like this:
   
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5. 00:43:106 (2) - Again, for better flow please consider flipping this slider horizontally so the curve flows better with the rest of notes.
   
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6. 00:54:092 (4,1,2,3) - How about trying a more organizated placemet of these notes? I know it isn't necessary but, it would look better imo. Something like this would work.
   
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7. 01:20:289 (2) - Sorry for being nazi but, I think you can improve this blanket more.

• [Average]

1. 00:35:500 (4,5) - How about adding whistle at the end of (4) and to (5)? Sounds good with the dubstep sound. If you do this you should add whistles to notes such as 00:40:993 (2,3), 00:44:796 (1), etc.
2. 00:43:106 (1) - To make this pattern look better you can align this slider with the previous one. Like this. If you do this you can do it as well at 01:55:782 (5,6).
   
   The slider looks offscreen but it isn't

   
3. 01:11:838 (1) - In this part the comboing is kinda screwed up imo. They don't follow the guitar correctly imo. To follow it properly, you should add nc to 01:15:219 (6), remove nc of 01:16:064 (1), add nc to 01:18:598 (1), remove nc of 01:19:444 (1), remove nc of 01:23:669 (1), 01:27:050 (3), 01:30:430 (1).
4. 01:50:500 (4) - Add whistle to follow dubstep sounds again?

• [Advanced]

1. 00:41:416 (1,2) - The jump here isn't bad imo. The problem is the way this curve is like. It ruins the flow. For better flow you should make the curve more like this. It will feel good to click 00:42:050 (2) after because this new curve goes to that direction. Sorry if I'm bad explaining, I'll leave you a screenshot so you can understand what I'm trying to say:
   
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2. 00:43:740 (2,3,4) - Why is this triplet over here? It doesn't flow good! Please move it over here for a better flow.
   
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3. 00:53:458 (2,3,4) - Similar ^. If this triplet is curved down it flows better with 00:53:881 (5) and that's better imo.
   
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4. 01:35:503 (1,2) - These two notes aren't snapped. Please fix this.
5. 01:41:416 (6,7) - This flows very bad. Look at it closely. You made a forced jump just for a blanket 01:42:050 (7). Try to focus more in flow rather than in aesthetics. IN this case, you can stick with distance snap and it will play much better. This is a Hard difficulty, you don't need to force unnecessary jumps!
   
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6. 01:43:106 (3) - And here, this curve would flow much better if it's like this instead of the current way (flipped vertically). I'm reffering to this:
   
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7. 01:47:331 (1) - Same thing about forced jumps. This plays bad specially because it's on the opposite direction of 01:46:698 (5). Please consider trying something with better flow here. If you want make a jump with this note (1), but do it in a way that flows better.
8. 01:49:444 (3) - ^ In this case, it would be much better to ctrl+G this slider. Unnecessary forced jumps are unwanted~
9. 02:02:543 (1,2) - Here the flow is a bit screwed up imo. These sliders dont flow good with 02:03:388 (3) since that note ends up being in the opposite direction as 02:02:965 (2). For better flow and to improve this, try ctrl+G'ing these sliers like this. Changes of direction are good, but only if they're properly used. I think you overused them and that's why it ended up being not good.
   
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10. 02:04:444 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Hmmm a star pattern here doesn't fit with the previous pattern. They flow awkward together imo. Please consider doing this: ctrl+g 02:04:655 (2,3), then 02:04:866 (3,5), and then 02:05:078 (4,5). Muuuch better flow and fun-to play pattern imo. It's more interesting.
11. 02:05:923 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - The hitfinishes here sound quite loud, consider adding a green line to decrease the volume of them a bit.
    
    This difficulty has, like I said, forced jumps that ruin the flow and make the difficulty less enjoyable imo. Consider what I wrote above for a overall improved flow. I hope it helps you!
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AlpacaCokelat wrote:

You mapping skill improved a lot. I hope this get ranked :>

Cobra wrote:

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

You mapping skill improved a lot. I hope this get ranked :>

Thank you and thanks for the stars Still waiting for Maxstep to be ranked.

CDFA wrote:

I think I actually did mod that other map but I'm a sucker for mod4modders so let's do this. I'm not sure, I think I deleted it before anyone posted ._.

Advanced:
00:17:331 (7) - I think this would look better with just regular spacing right
00:26:205 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This might look better as an 8 note pattern rather than 2 four note patterns not sure what to do D:
00:38:036 (1) - I don't think there's enough time from the last note to this note. Maybe have it stack under the previous note? I was planning to do this, except I sort of half-stacked it. Done.
00:40:993 (7) - Have these go parallel from each other? Good idea
00:54:514 (1) - This might look better blanketing the end of the previous slider. I like overlaps, but it usually looks a bit weird if it's only halfway over. changed this pattern a bit
01:09:726 (2,3) - These don't really follow anything. Maybe make it like a long slider or something, since you're pretty much filling ambient noise i dont even like this part, notes deleted, break & spinner added
01:24:303 (6) - Center this slider so the end of (5) is in the center of the slider it looked ugly before, thanks for pointing it out
01:37:191 (9) - Add normal hitsounds added finishes on this stream

Average:
00:42:261 (6) - The angle the curve is going seems a bit odd, going upscreen and all changed

Easy:
00:21:557 (2) - If you lower this note, and fix the spacing of the third note so it's northeast of this one, it can make pretty pretty curves :3 pretty

I like it :3. Thanks CDFA!

1. 00:17:754 (1) - better to remove the finish, cus i dont hear any in the music
2. 00:24:514 (1) - remove the normal simpleset and add soft finish instead, sounds better to me
3. 00:26:205 (3) - ^ and it'll be nice to add nc on this slider, it'll look good :3
4. 00:27:472 (4) - remove finish and add normal simpleset instead
5. 00:27:895 (1) - the whistle on this spinner sounds a bit off so i suggest you to remove it
6. 00:35:078 (2,3) - remove this notes and make 1/1 slider instead since this is easy diff, you should make it more easy
7. 00:40:993 (5,1) - it'll play better if you do something like this http://puu.sh/3dDp7.jpg
8. 00:51:557 (1) - this slider would look good if you rotate it 2 clock wise :3
9. 00:56:627 (1) - remove finish there is none in the music
10. 01:22:402 (4) - add nc here cus the combo went long here, you shouldn't do that in easy diff
11. 01:37:191 (1) - i prefer you add finish instead of whistle since the music went silent after that
12. 01:43:951 (1) - move this slider to x:256 y:216
13. 01:44:796 (2) - remove the finish on the head of the slider and add clap instead, and remove the finish from the reverse it dont fit at all ><
14. 01:48:176 (1) - ^ but remove clap and add finish instead
15. 01:52:402 (5) - remove the finish on the reveres

1. 00:22:824 (4) - remove this nc, cus the music didnt change here
2. 00:24:514 (1) - remove the normal simpleset and add soft finish instead, same as i said on easy diff
3. 00:26:205 (1) - ^
4. 00:27:895 (1) - same i said about this spinner on easy diff
5. 00:47:331 (2) - this slider would look better if you just copied this slider 00:46:486 (1) -
6. 00:55:993 (x) - something seems missing here so you better add a note here cus i can hear something here ><
7. 00:58:317 (1) - add a finish on this note, it fits perfectly
8. 01:36:768 (4) - ^ but at the end of this slider, and remove the whistle
9. 01:44:796 (2,3,1) - same as i said on easy about this part (clap on 2, remove finish on 3)
10. 01:52:402 (1) - ^ (remove finish on reverse)

1. 00:37:930 (9) - remove this overmapped note pls ;w; i honestly dont hear anything in it
2. 00:51:451 (6) - ^

rezoons wrote:

What are you waiting for? Go rank this! (And take another star )

gideon5504 wrote:

My 19th mod

General:
~Image size is larger than 1024*768 There is a new rankable size.

Amateur:
~I dun see any problems 0.o

Average:
~Nothing here either...0.o

Advanced:
~01:27:050 ~ 01:31:909 - I think all circles would increase the diff and make the build up sound better. (FINALLY XD)
~I am really speechless.... Nah, I want some variety.

I know it doesn't look much,but....
YOUR MAP WAS TOO AWESOME IT SHOULD REALLY GET RANKED SOON,SO GOOD LUCK!! Thank you very much!

1. Do not use single chars in tags like vol. 3 where '3' is splited by spaces.

1. 00:30:853 - i'd like to extend spinner to here
2. 00:44:374 (5) - +whistle here to emphasize it?
3. 00:44:796 (1) - the finish at end is heard odd a bit, suggest to remove
4. 00:53:458 (2,3,4) - move (2) to 459:60 and make the triplet like this to avoid the placement here too linear?
   
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5. 00:58:317 (5) - move to 389:134 to follow the prev jump?
6. 01:16:275 (3) - i'd like to place it at 256:264
7. 01:26:205 (3,4) - i may choose this kinda beat here:
   
8. 01:29:585 (3,4) - ^
9. 01:32:120 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - make the increasing volumn here more smooth? add two or four more inherited timing points to adjust the volumn?
10. 01:37:191 (9) - NC here and remove NC at 01:38:881 (1) - ? just my personal preference for follow point :>
11. 01:40:782 (2,3,4) - similar to 00:53:458 (2,3,4), like this?
    
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12. 01:48:176 (1) - hmm feel...you're wasting the 1/3 beats here... i may choose to make here like this: (1/3 repeat sliders)
    
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13. 01:52:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - too many finishes here.. heard noisy

1. AR+1, OD+1 to ballance the diff spread
2. 00:18:599 (2) - split it into a note and 1/1 slider like this?
   
3. 00:21:979 (3) - ^
4. 00:27:050 (2) - add one repeat, the blanket at 00:27:683 - is uncomfortable
5. 00:30:853 - similar to Advanced, extend spinner to here?
6. 01:35:923 (2,3,4) - i expect more 1/2 sliders around here > >
   

1. 01:52:402 (5) - Move NC to here
2. 01:55:782 (4) - ^

popner wrote:

Mark.

Will mod as CDFA's request if not ranked then.

Scorpiour wrote:

hi there~~random bubble check

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Do not use single chars in tags like vol. 3 where '3' is splited by spaces. Ah, okay. Fixed.

[Advanced]

1. 00:30:853 - i'd like to extend spinner to here mmkay
2. 00:44:374 (5) - +whistle here to emphasize it? sure
3. 00:44:796 (1) - the finish at end is heard odd a bit, suggest to remove right. added clap instead
4. 00:53:458 (2,3,4) - move (2) to 459:60 and make the triplet like this to avoid the placement here too linear? cool, thanks
   
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5. 00:58:317 (5) - move to 389:134 to follow the prev jump? done
6. 01:16:275 (3) - i'd like to place it at 256:264 done
7. 01:26:205 (3,4) - i may choose this kinda beat here:
   
8. 01:29:585 (3,4) - ^ nah, i think i'll keep the current one.
9. 01:32:120 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - make the increasing volumn here more smooth? add two or four more inherited timing points to adjust the volumn? done
10. 01:37:191 (9) - NC here and remove NC at 01:38:881 (1) - ? just my personal preference for follow point :> i like it
11. 01:40:782 (2,3,4) - similar to 00:53:458 (2,3,4), like this? done
    
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12. 01:48:176 (1) - hmm feel...you're wasting the 1/3 beats here... i may choose to make here like this: (1/3 repeat sliders) i like how yours looks, used it
    
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13. 01:52:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - too many finishes here.. heard noisy fixed

[Average]

1. AR+1, OD+1 to ballance the diff spread done, but is AR6 okay for normal? o_O
2. 00:18:599 (2) - split it into a note and 1/1 slider like this?
   
3. 00:21:979 (3) - ^ both done
4. 00:27:050 (2) - add one repeat, the blanket at 00:27:683 - is uncomfortable done
5. 00:30:853 - similar to Advanced, extend spinner to here? alright
6. 01:35:923 (2,3,4) - i expect more 1/2 sliders around here > > kept it this way for now. dont wanna make it too hard
   

[Amateur]

1. 01:52:402 (5) - Move NC to here
2. 01:55:782 (4) - ^ both fixed

Call me back when you're ready