xD, Sorry, I meant 00:30:853 - back there(in [Advanced] , careless me
thanks for mod!buhei wrote:
from my queue
[Amateur]
00:38:036 (1) - one grid down uhhh okay
[Average]
00:19:444 (3,4) - change to 1/1+3/2 im not really familiar with music terms like this, but i did change the pattern lol
00:52:613 (4) - delete the reverse i think its okay for now
01:12:683 (2) - x:224 y:384 and move 01:13:529 (3,4,5) did something like this
01:34:655 (2) - Ctrl+J and move done
[Advanced]
00:26:205 (1) - why slowdown? wat
00:35:500 (3) - change to two short sliders
00:37:191 (5) - ^
00:54:092 (6) - ^ all done
01:09:726 - add a note done
01:13:951 - miss a note
01:14:585 - ^ dont quite understand what you mean, these times are in the middle of sliders
01:16:910 (4,5) - change to 1/1+3/2 same statement in average but no change
01:19:867 - put the tail here okay
01:24:303 - 01:24:726 - miss notes ok im just assuming you mean "add notes", i dont know though
01:34:021 (2) - too hard not really
01:38:881 (1,1,3) - change to two short sliders nah i like it the way it is
01:46:064 - put the tail here nah
01:54:303 - add a note okay
02:03:599 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too hard fixed
good map. GL
GrayKaiser82 wrote:
M4M from your queue~!
[General]
Amateur's kiai is different than the other two, fix them. oops i thought i fixed that
[Amateur]
00:31:275 (1,3) - Make these two smoother, it looks ugly to me... :/ good point
Perfect diff~ ^^
[Average]
00:19:444 (3) - Try to do this:- okay
01:48:176 (1) - Remove NC (Wow, ugly slider O_O) then... Add NC 01:49:444 (2) - here. nah because music changes
[Advanced]
Nice! i won't touch anything here... *~*
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That's all i can mod, If my mod is really useless, I'm sorry ;_;
Anyways, I love the song and the map. Can i make a Guest diff? :3 thank you - im accepting insane guest diffs, so go right ahead
-Umi- wrote:
Hi hi o/ hiya
Here from your M4M queue
[Easy][Normal]
- - 00:24:514 (1,2,1) - align nah
- 02:02:543 (5) - move to x=68 y=80 okay
nothing else to say on this diff :3[Hard]
- - 00:26:205 (1,2,3,4) - better like that ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/737262 looks cool but the current pattern is fine.
- 02:04:655 (2) - too much downward, move to x=384 y=316, then make blanket with 02:05:500 (3) - changed it but not like this
The rest is perfect >3<That's all, sorry for short mod but not many things to say, you did a good job ! ;3
- - 00:21:979 (3,1) - what about a second blanket ? you did one shortly before nah
- 01:18:388 (6) - delete this circle and extend the precedent slider of 1/2 sounds fine now
- 01:24:092 (3,4,5,6,7) - not funny to play try to find another pattern fixed
regenz wrote:
Hi M4M
Rin - Prism*Magical (DJ SHARPNEL hardrave remix) Short Ver.
maps http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39032
[General]
The main problem here is the combocolor is very very Blend together
and it 's hard to see any different and can cause problem like this
00:23:881 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - the sudden anti jump without know Combocolor change.
can cause misunderstand to player
i suggest to change it to red or green color uhhh i'll see what others say about this
the advance level is noting hard imo may be adjust it more hardder might try a few things later
[Advance]
this diff is not hard as it should be maybe + ar 1 ( and this diff is the hardest of the mapset) okay
00:25:993 add note not sure if i put it in a good spot
00:56:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this set is suit for more distance jump its already pretty jumpy o_o
01:06:345 add stack note at the same of this slider start position
01:06:557 ^
01:08:036 same as above case but 01:08:458 (4) - instead
01:08:247 ^ all done
01:16:064 (3) - change to half beat return slider ? okay
01:37:191 (1) - x248 ,y 108 is better the current is not complete center imo fixed
02:05:923 (1,2,3,4) - change some of this set to pure circle i think its fine
[Average]
+ 1 drain okay
00:41:205 add note uhhh okay
01:11:627 (3) - remove this is sound better in normal diff i think it sounds good ;_;
01:14:374 (5) - change this to 1/2 return slider 'll match the sound and not to hard for normal okay
01:35:923 (2) - change to 1/2 return slider ( 1/2 half beat slider) i think its fine how it is
[Amateur]
00:39:303 add note? okay
00:56:627 (2) - change to spiner? good idea!
01:13:106 (2) - remove okay
01:14:796 add note okay
01:32:120 (1,2) - merge this to 1/1 return slider okay
Goodluck thanks
LilyWhite wrote:
(Not so) Random mod time!
[Amateur]
00:24:514 Change hit circle position to x:332, y:84
00:24:937 Change slider position to x:412, y:84
00:26:205 Change hit circle position to x:332, y:84
00:26:627 Change slider position to x:256, y:56
00:27:472 Change hit circle position to x:108, y:96
um i think this pattern is fine how it is
[Average]
01:08:458 Remove new combo um, there isnt one? if you mean add one, i did
[Advanced]
No really big problems on this diff, although some jumps were bothering me. But I'm sure it's intentional
I hope my mod helped, although I didn't find much problems! That probably means your beatmap is really good!
Good luck on getting it ranked! thank you!
Xivaxi wrote:
Hi~ From your M4M queue!
These are all suggestions.
EDIT: I just realized I wasn't clear on what "back" and "forward" meant with relation to moving sliders/notes back and forth on the timeline (and I dont think I was consistent at all when I used those terms), so instead I've edited everything to just be "right" or "left" on the timelineAmateur00:16:064 (3) - Clap on slider head nah
00:17:754 (1) - Finish okay
00:19:444 (3) - Clap on slider head nah
00:21:979 (3) - Clap on the repeat arrow sounds good
00:54:937 (1) - Move this slider so it's more spaced from the previous combo, right now it looks like it's all part of the same combo (even just turning the slider end away would be fine - and doesn't mess with the overall spacing here) fixedAverage00:15:219 (2,3) - This 1/2 pattern is neat, but I think should be consistent throughout the section - when I was playing it, I was expecting the 1/2 notes after this, but didn't get any - throwing me off in this entire section. The following suggestions will try to make it consistent. If you don't want to add all the 1/2 patterns, then you can ignore the following ~ but in that case, I'd suggest taking the pattern out altogether, again, for consistency.
00:16:486 (4) - Move this slider 1/2 right on the timeline, put a note here instead.
00:18:599 (2) - ^
00:20:289 (5) - Move this slider 1/2 left on the timeline, put a note after it.
00:23:247 (2) - Move this slider 1/2 right on the timeline, put a note here instead. most done
00:50:078 (1) - This feels better as 2 circles instead of a slider okay
01:12:683 (2) - This feels out of place. I suggest just removing this and extending the slider to here. done
01:14:374 (5) - Move this slider 1/2 left on the timeline, put a note after it did something like this
01:15:219 (7) - Shorten this slider 1/2 i think its fine, did this in the beginning
01:17:965 (3) - Add note okay
01:20:712 (3) - Move this slider 1/2 right on the timeline, put a note here instead okay
01:46:698 (2) - Add note nahAdvanced00:56:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm not sure a star is the best pattern here - It doesn't split into 5 nicely and the slider feels awkward. There are 8 beats here with the emphasis on the 1st and 5th, so 2x4beat patterns (like 2 squares or something) would probably work best. 4x2beat patterns could work as well. removed the slider and last note, i think the star is fine now.
01:06:345 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - This section is hard to read, The circles seem to be following the bass synth thing in the BG, but the circles end before the synth ends. I suggest a pattern like the following:
http://puu.sh/2MVEh.png did something like this
Be sure you space notes out appropriately and add hit sounds so it's easy to discern the musical lines from eachother (otherwise it will just be a long jumble of notes that will probably just be even harder to read and understand).
01:13:529 (4) - Shorten this slider 1/2 and add a note after it
01:14:374 (6) - Make this a 1/2 slider
01:16:910 (5) - Shorten this slider 1/2 and add a note after it
01:24:726 (5) - Add note all above done
Nice mapset- though I think it would be nice to have an Insane difficulty for this song - there's a lot in the music that wasn't touched on by the Advanced diff, so there's still a lot of potential to exploit in here. thank you - someone is working on an insane guest diff atm
DJNightmare wrote:
Hi, im from the queue :X
Blue = Suggestions
Red = Recommended
Green = Comment
Amateur
In my opinion, it is great already so i will move on to the other difficulties :3
Average
00:58:317 - You should add a note here before the break starts ok
01:36:557 (3) - Change the sampleset of this note to Normal ok
01:50:500 (4) - Move down by 1 grid done
01:54:514 (4) - Move down by 1 grid done
Advanced
00:33:388 (6) - New Combo added on previous slider
00:58:317 - You should add a note here before the break starts yup
02:01:909 (2) - Move up and left by 1 grid done
02:02:331 (4) - Move to the left by 1 grid done
02:05:923 (1,2,3,4) - You should remove the crash cymbals in the 3rd and 5th beat of the slider removed on 3rd
This song has the potential to have a harder difficulty, but good luck on your ranking :3
Thank you for checking it out KiiwaKiiwa wrote:
hiiiiiii just here cause i love Blue Stahli XD
Let me just say it was awesome to receive a mod from you, one of my favorite maps is your Shinjitsu e no Requiem[General]
- According to Wikipedia the album name is "Antisleep Vol. 03" here. Right, fixed
- Add some more tags! "FiXT Music" the record label, for example. I was thinking stuff like this wasn't necessary, but I'll try adding anyway :3
[Advanced]
- 00:27:895 (1) - Better if you finish this spinner at 00:30:853 - to match the music and add a finish sound. I want to keep the spinners the same in all diffs, and if i extend the spinner to here it will be too hard on normal and easy. Plus, it doesn't sound too good to me, but I agree that it doesn't fit the music very well. Maybe I'll find some other solution in the future.
- 01:13:740 (4) - Probably better to delete this note. Done.
- 01:44:585 (2) - The music has a 1/8 sound here, maybe you could add a return slider to match the music? I like the current pattern though ;_;
Pretty nice, good work :3 Thank you!
Thank you and thanks for the stars Still waiting for Maxstep to be ranked.AlpacaCokelat wrote:
You mapping skill improved a lot. I hope this get ranked :>
you just made my day. have more stars~Cobra wrote:
Thank you and thanks for the stars Still waiting for Maxstep to be ranked.AlpacaCokelat wrote:
You mapping skill improved a lot. I hope this get ranked :>
CDFA wrote:
I think I actually did mod that other map but I'm a sucker for mod4modders so let's do this. I'm not sure, I think I deleted it before anyone posted ._.
Advanced:
00:17:331 (7) - I think this would look better with just regular spacing right
00:26:205 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This might look better as an 8 note pattern rather than 2 four note patterns not sure what to do D:
00:38:036 (1) - I don't think there's enough time from the last note to this note. Maybe have it stack under the previous note? I was planning to do this, except I sort of half-stacked it. Done.
00:40:993 (7) - Have these go parallel from each other? Good idea
00:54:514 (1) - This might look better blanketing the end of the previous slider. I like overlaps, but it usually looks a bit weird if it's only halfway over. changed this pattern a bit
01:09:726 (2,3) - These don't really follow anything. Maybe make it like a long slider or something, since you're pretty much filling ambient noise i dont even like this part, notes deleted, break & spinner added
01:24:303 (6) - Center this slider so the end of (5) is in the center of the slider it looked ugly before, thanks for pointing it out
01:37:191 (9) - Add normal hitsounds added finishes on this stream
Average:
00:42:261 (6) - The angle the curve is going seems a bit odd, going upscreen and all changed
Easy:
00:21:557 (2) - If you lower this note, and fix the spacing of the third note so it's northeast of this one, it can make pretty pretty curves :3 pretty
I like it :3. Thanks CDFA!
I'm trying my bestrezoons wrote:
What are you waiting for? Go rank this! (And take another star )