Hello :3
General:
Here your bg without watermark
http://puu.sh/2YHic.jpgRelaxing:
00:23:658 (4,5) - fix spacing
00:52:505 (1,2,3) - blanket
http://puu.sh/2YHmt.jpg208,180,52505,6,0,P|148:117|54:140,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,204,53658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,224,54043,2,0,P|86:288|178:274,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:04:812 (1) - rotate this -10 looks better imo
http://puu.sh/2YHnD.jpg01:19:043 (4,1) - not a big deal but
http://puu.sh/2YHpC.jpg88,316,79043,2,0,P|157:324|211:287,2,135,0|2|2,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,240,80581,6,0,P|211:202|292:267,1,180,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
01:39:043 (2,3) - you know I love this things
http://puu.sh/2YHsU.jpg 300,116,99043,2,0,P|382:88|451:160,2,180,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,178,100966,2,0,P|302:203|234:177,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Average:
00:20:197 (4,5,1) - I suggest here to move 00:20:197 (4) - to 364x320 and stack 00:21:351 (5) - on 00:19:812 (3) - and curve a little to something like
http://puu.sh/2YHBw.jpg01:06:735 (2) - rotate this a bit left
http://puu.sh/2YHFw.jpg looks good imo
01:29:428 (1) - 200x244
http://puu.sh/2YHI9.jpg much better flow and stacked with 01:30:966 (3) -
02:50:966 (4) - to center? 256x176
Challenging:
00:54:620 (2,3,5) - you can move all this like
http://puu.sh/2YHRi.jpg and 00:55:966 (1) -
http://puu.sh/2YHRT.jpg to make 00:55:389 (5,2) - stacked not a big deal but feels good imo
01:09:043 (3) - better flow and blanket
http://puu.sh/2YHXF.jpg92,168,69043,2,0,P|68:140|56:100,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:42:889 (8) -
http://puu.sh/2YI58.jpg to avoid overlap with 02:44:428 (2) -
Tough:
00:16:735 (5) - maybe move 00:16:351 (4) - little further to stack 00:16:158 (3,5) -
00:18:658 (1,2) - add jump here too plays better
http://puu.sh/2YI9E.jpg00:20:005 (7) - 256x184 to center
01:08:658 (5,4) - stack?
01:10:581 (9,10) - this jump feels sudden no strong sound on 01:10:774 (10) - no NC, hard to read
01:10:966 (1) - move a little bit
http://puu.sh/2YIfr.jpg to unstack under 01:11:735 (3) -
02:58:658 (9) - NC :3
Good Luck