Hey :3/

[General]

1. 800x600 BGs are rankable, but it'd be great if you'll be able to find a BG with bigger resolution. :<
2. Try to add some genres, it'll help us to find your beatmap! punk alternative synthrock
3. Disable letterboxes during breaks? Looks like letterbox cut this picture quite bad, because we can't see head of this guy.

[Relaxing]

1. 00:25:197 (1) - I feel like it's quite a bad idea to break consistent 1/1 rhythm here. How about trying to follow vocals this way. It will help you to keep rhythm consistent and it fits with vocals. :3
2. 00:29:812 (5) - this slider here sounds a bit weird, I'd try to place a circle at 00:30:197 - instead. It will fit here better, what's more you did similar thing with two previous circles.
3. 00:48:658 (3) - if you've applieed suggestion at 00:25:197 (1) - you should finish (3) at 00:49:428 - to keep rhythm here consistent, as well.
   Note: same goes for 00:55:197 (4) - 01:40:966 (3) - 01:47:505 (5) - 02:10:966 (3) - 02:49:043 (3) - you got the idea.

[Average]

1. 00:25:966 (3,4) - i'd replace them with 1/2 slider. Looks like this is the only triplet in this part, so it may confuse players a bit.
2. 00:46:351 (1,2,3) - can be misunderstood by players. They may read it as 1/4 triplet, try to keep spacing consistent here, this diff is alrady hard enough :<
   Note: same goes for every x0.5 spaced pattern in this diff. I like this, but I think it's too hard for [Normal] diff :<
3. 01:04:620 (1) - just pointing out that this slider is awesome. I love it.
4. 02:03:658 (1) - nazi - well, it's not a problem, but circle is overlapped with spinner's hitburst. It looks a little bit messy, can't you fix it to make your pattern even better?
   
   Diff is neat and well-mapped. But those x0.5 spaced triplets are quite confusing. This is a [Normal] diff, after all!

[Challenging]

1. Try AR7 because you use AR8 for [Insane] diff. So, diff spread feels kinda unbalanced.
2. 02:33:274 (8) - it's quite hard to guess how many repeats does this slider have. try to make it more readable? readable example

[Tough]

1. 00:58:274 (4,5,6) - try to replace these notes with a triplet to keep consistency with previous pattern.
2. 01:04:620 - I'd place here one long slider, as you did it on other diffs. It will fit here better and help you to keep consistent patterns.
3. 02:15:389 - how about placing here a circle? It will fit with backgound music pretty good, OR yu can make slider 1/4 longer. It'll give you similar effect.

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Good luck!

This map needs a SB

-Bakari- wrote:

Hey :3/

[General]

1. 800x600 BGs are rankable, but it'd be great if you'll be able to find a BG with bigger resolution. :< I'll consider that
2. Try to add some genres, it'll help us to find your beatmap! punk alternative synthrock Added alternative and synthrock
3. Disable letterboxes during breaks? Looks like letterbox cut this picture quite bad, because we can't see head of this guy. Nah.. I like how it looks the BG with it. Btw, who want to see his face?? xD.

[Relaxing]

1. 00:25:197 (1) - I feel like it's quite a bad idea to break consistent 1/1 rhythm here. How about trying to follow vocals this way. It will help you to keep rhythm consistent and it fits with vocals. :3 Oh no, I don't want slider starts or notes over red ticks in this difficulty, can cause trouble in newbies really. Btw, this slider fits perfectly with the vocals!
2. 00:29:812 (5) - this slider here sounds a bit weird, I'd try to place a circle at 00:30:197 - instead. It will fit here better, what's more you did similar thing with two previous circles. Do you have any problem with the 2/1 Sliders??? xDD. Fit perfectly the song, newbies will catch the rhythm easily.
3. 00:48:658 (3) - if you've applieed suggestion at 00:25:197 (1) - you should finish (3) at 00:49:428 - to keep rhythm here consistent, as well.
   Note: same goes for 00:55:197 (4) - 01:40:966 (3) - 01:47:505 (5) - 02:10:966 (3) - 02:49:043 (3) - you got the idea. But I didn't applied it because I don't agree with you

[Average]

1. 00:25:966 (3,4) - i'd replace them with 1/2 slider. Looks like this is the only triplet in this part, so it may confuse players a bit. Yeah, it is the only 1/2 3-plet stacked in this diff. replaced to a 1/2 slider.
2. 00:46:351 (1,2,3) - can be misunderstood by players. They may read it as 1/4 triplet, try to keep spacing consistent here, this diff is alrady hard enough :<
   Note: same goes for every x0.5 spaced pattern in this diff. I like this, but I think it's too hard for [Normal] diff :< I thought that it would be easy for average players but tested by some average players and the didn't think that. they thought that a stack or a 1.0x spacing would be much better, so I did that, stacked some of them and spaced out another one.
3. 01:04:620 (1) - just pointing out that this slider is awesome. I love it. lol. Thanks :3
4. 02:03:658 (1) - nazi - well, it's not a problem, but circle is overlapped with spinner's hitburst. It looks a little bit messy, can't you fix it to make your pattern even better? It looks perfectly with the new Skin, in addition the better way when you want to add a note 1/1 after to the spinner is adding it in the middle of the screen.
   
   Diff is neat and well-mapped. But those x0.5 spaced triplets are quite confusing. This is a [Normal] diff, after all! Thanks, and I fixed that points

[Challenging]

1. Try AR7 because you use AR8 for [Insane] diff. So, diff spread feels kinda unbalanced. But I don't agree, did you test the diff? AR7 is really low, I had a lot of 100 after breaks/spinners when I added single notes or some like this. I tried AR8 and the problems in the gameplay were fixed, and could SS the diff. So, I'll leave that as it is.
2. 02:33:274 (8) - it's quite hard to guess how many repeats does this slider have. try to make it more readable? readable example This is really simple for a Hard, really. In addition, you just have to click when that kind of sliders appear you don't need move the mouse

[Tough]

1. 00:58:274 (4,5,6) - try to replace these notes with a triplet to keep consistency with previous pattern. Not really, the vocal doesn't go on a similar way
2. 01:04:620 - I'd place here one long slider, as you did it on other diffs. It will fit here better and help you to keep consistent patterns. It is an Insane, I prefer to follow more things in the song, not just the vocals
3. 02:15:389 - how about placing here a circle? It will fit with backgound music pretty good, OR yu can make slider 1/4 longer. It'll give you similar effect. Added a repetition in (2) instead

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Good luck!

Thanks a lot for your help -Bakari-! . Updated!!

better quality bg
other beatmaps of the same artist are using "Panic! at the Disco" http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?q=Panic ... he%20Disco

relaxing

1. 01:14:428 (2,3) - looks much better like that imo http://puu.sh/2YI3x.jpg
2. 01:15:966 - 01:16:735 - consider using this custom for that beats on sliderticks http://puu.sh/2YI7S.wav there is more places that you could use it too ofc

average

1. 00:21:351 (5) - this slider placement looks to be forced since you wanted to keep simmetry on next sliders, but imo it looks a bit better llike this http://puu.sh/2YJ5f.jpg or something like 02:53:274 (2,3) -
2. 00:43:274 (1,2,3,4,5) - this simple pattern sounds strange with the fast guitar. try this http://puu.sh/2YJgz.jpg

challenging

1. 00:13:274 (4) - dont like how this slider looks in this combo being the same shape as 00:12:697 (2) - . imo a straight slider like 00:14:428 (7) - would look better
2. 00:13:658 (5) - why 0.9x? you are not using something that small even in slow parts like 00:55:966 (1,2,3) -
3. 01:04:620 (1) - spacing could be better here. or is it intentional? 2nd point 368 y344 3rd point x264 y208 for 1.10x
4. 01:08:274 - its the only diff with a different clap, intentional?
5. 01:10:389 - circle here? i know its much lower than the other sounds but feels more natural like that imo

tough

gangnam stacks!! :>

00:51:735 (2,3,4,5) - looks a bit random made

thats all
i'm not happy with this mod, i dont have enough time to mod it as i want today, its fine if its not good enough for a m4m
star

I'll change the BG when I'll back at my home, but I will not change the Artist because this is the correct one

Hello :3

General:
Here your bg without watermark http://puu.sh/2YHic.jpg

Relaxing:
00:23:658 (4,5) - fix spacing
00:52:505 (1,2,3) - blanket http://puu.sh/2YHmt.jpg
208,180,52505,6,0,P|148:117|54:140,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,204,53658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,224,54043,2,0,P|86:288|178:274,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:04:812 (1) - rotate this -10 looks better imo http://puu.sh/2YHnD.jpg
01:19:043 (4,1) - not a big deal but http://puu.sh/2YHpC.jpg
88,316,79043,2,0,P|157:324|211:287,2,135,0|2|2,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,240,80581,6,0,P|211:202|292:267,1,180,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:

01:39:043 (2,3) - you know I love this things http://puu.sh/2YHsU.jpg
300,116,99043,2,0,P|382:88|451:160,2,180,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,178,100966,2,0,P|302:203|234:177,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Average:
00:20:197 (4,5,1) - I suggest here to move 00:20:197 (4) - to 364x320 and stack 00:21:351 (5) - on 00:19:812 (3) - and curve a little to something like http://puu.sh/2YHBw.jpg
01:06:735 (2) - rotate this a bit left http://puu.sh/2YHFw.jpg looks good imo
01:29:428 (1) - 200x244 http://puu.sh/2YHI9.jpg much better flow and stacked with 01:30:966 (3) -
02:50:966 (4) - to center? 256x176

Challenging:
00:54:620 (2,3,5) - you can move all this like http://puu.sh/2YHRi.jpg and 00:55:966 (1) - http://puu.sh/2YHRT.jpg to make 00:55:389 (5,2) - stacked not a big deal but feels good imo
01:09:043 (3) - better flow and blanket http://puu.sh/2YHXF.jpg
92,168,69043,2,0,P|68:140|56:100,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:42:889 (8) - http://puu.sh/2YI58.jpg to avoid overlap with 02:44:428 (2) -

Tough:
00:16:735 (5) - maybe move 00:16:351 (4) - little further to stack 00:16:158 (3,5) -
00:18:658 (1,2) - add jump here too plays better http://puu.sh/2YI9E.jpg
00:20:005 (7) - 256x184 to center
01:08:658 (5,4) - stack?
01:10:581 (9,10) - this jump feels sudden no strong sound on 01:10:774 (10) - no NC, hard to read
01:10:966 (1) - move a little bit http://puu.sh/2YIfr.jpg to unstack under 01:11:735 (3) -
02:58:658 (9) - NC :3

Good Luck

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

I will not change the Artist because this is the correct one

i was not sure about this information at all, but i spected the bat's that ranked the other panic at the disco maps would know

also, thats one of this group studio album cover http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/e ... irtues.jpg

Hi :3 m4m here

General
02:27:889 (1) - 70% volume while spinning at a soft part like this is too loud, turn it down in all diffs plz

Insane
adjust the placing of 00:16:351 (4) - a bit to make 00:16:158 (3,5) - stack at the same place may be better
00:27:889 (3) - add NC here, or move the NC on 00:26:928 (1) - to 00:27:889 (3) -
00:46:351 (3) - why isn't there a finish sound on head?
00:47:697 (6) - why don't make with same distance between the former and latter
00:49:812 (2) - ^
00:51:735 (2) - ^
00:54:620 (2,3) - considering the vocal, I think a rhythm like this may be better, (exchanging their oderd)
00:59:620 (2,4) - maybe make them blancket each other ? just like 01:30:005 (4,5) - these
01:41:543 (1) - why is it so far from the former note, there isn't a heave beat on the slider's head
01:43:274 (6) - make it at (200,48) or somewhere likethat, because jumps set at heavy beat fits better as I suppose
01:44:812 (1) - finish on head?
01:47:889 (1,2) - move the NC form 1 to on may be better to show that 1 is a part of the former notes
01:50:966 (1) - ^ and other similar ones
01:53:658 (7,8) - line up accurately ?
02:05:581 (3) - 3/4 slider doesn't fit the vocal well
02:08:851 (4) - really confusing rhythm. recommend to change it like this
02:40:197 (1) - finish on head ?
02:52:505 (1) - I think the vocal starts at 02:52:312 - , so the rhythm should be changed imo. also, the finish on 02:52:312 (6) - is not needed

Hard
00:13:658 (5) - equal distance
00:43:274 (1) - the starting place is too far from the center, which is not prefered for players
00:46:351 (1) - finish, as I mentioned in Insane diff. Akso in Normal and Easy diff
01:04:620 (1) - rmove the whistle on body ? Just like what you did in Easy diff
01:06:735 (3,1) - Are you sure you didn't misused the drum clap as drum finish ?
01:12:312 (5) - maybe only add whistle on haed and tell, but not on body, I think it's noisy
02:09:043 (9) - finish at end not needed ?
02:40:197 (1) - finish on head ?

Normal
01:04:620 (1) - remove the whistle on body ?
01:06:735 (2) - are you sure to use drum clap at end?
01:10:966 (1,2) - 0.90x, too close
move 01:26:351 (1) - to 01:26:543 - fits the vocal better
01:28:274 (4,5,6) - not recommended to stack notes in Normal like this
01:38:658 (1) - finish

Easy sees fine except the similar issues in other diffs, like finish sound and spinner volume

That's all
good luck

m4m from your queue

General

Uh, the BG seems to be a bit low-quality, maybe you can find something better

Relaxing

00:23:658 (4,5) - Spacing says 1.11x I think this is an error, they should be 1.00x far
00:34:043 (1) - I think that the whistle on the repeat is a bit loud, it'd be better if you remove it
00:43:274 (1) - Uhm, I think you forgot a finish here
00:46:351 (1) - Finish at the beginning
00:48:274 (2) - 122|155 would be better because the spacing in the pattern is not the same... I don't know how to explain, sorry
01:10:197 (2) - 256|24 would flow better maybe
01:56:351 (3) - I'm not sure about the clap on the repeat
02:10:966 (3) - I think it should end 1/2 later...
02:27:889 (1) - I'd add a note with finish here and start the spinner 1/4 later
02:31:735 (1) - Finish at the end? I also think the sliderticks are a bit noisy

Average

00:21:351 (5) - Isn't this supposed to be under the previous (5)? It's not important, anyways
01:00:581 (4) - I'm not sure about this... It breaks the symmetry of the previous pattern, I'd change it somehow
01:20:966 (2,3,4,1) - Uhm, I'd straighten it by rotating the whole pattern 10° Clockwise (Selection Centre)
02:03:658 (1) - I'd move it away from the centre, it can confuse newbs
02:08:658 (5) - This is strange, theorically there should be a finish also in 02:09:139 but you didn't put any note there. You should rearrange the pattern somehow to include that part of the song. Actually it's odd without it!
02:11:735 (4) - The same happens here
02:14:812 (6) - And here
02:27:889 (1) - I'd add a note with finish and start the spinner 1/4 later
02:33:274 (5) - Finish at the end?
02:50:966 (4) - Put it in the center!

Challenging

01:25:774 (7) - I'd prefer a ctrl+g with a little jump
01:53:658 (5,6) - 3 grids left for symmetry
02:09:043 (9) - The finish you put here is 1/4 earlier! Please fix it
02:27:889 (1) - I'd add a note with finish and start the spinner 1/4 later
02:46:158 (5) - 256|8 would flow better maybe
02:53:658 (2) - I'd prefer ctrl+g with a little jump

Tough

00:16:735 (5) - Isn't this supposed to be stacked with the previous (3)? No big deal anyways
01:57:889 (4) - NC?
02:05:966 (4) - Uhm, I'd put a 1/4 slider with one repeat, since there is a sound on the blue tick
02:27:889 (1) - I'd add a note with finish and start the spinner 1/4 later
02:58:658 (1) - NC like you did in Challenging diff?

_________________________________

Nothing else, nice map, good luck

Thanks for the mod and stars!

Sometimes you abused a bit with the nazi mod, but it helped me to fix aesthetic things, so thanks for that

Thanks, I had to keep some things in Tough, because I'm pretty sure what I'm doing, hope you can understand, helpful mod anyways

Thanks! :3

Thanks a lot guys, I'll mod your maps as soon as I can! Updated!!

hi there

Gonzvlo wrote:

Metadata: Use "Panic at the Disco!" as the artist in order to keep the consistency with the previous ranked maps.

For the same reason ''At'' should be ''at'' I suppose.

Full mod coming in later because <3this song

edit: I just realized there's already been talked about in the mods, however I don't understand the point that you don't change it, it should be either ''At The'' or ''at the''. Right now you've only capitalized ''At''?

When I google the band name, most of the websites say ''Panic at the Disco''

Greetings.
Okay, I'll try to post osmething usefull.

[Relaxing]
00:25:005 - I now, that Easy diff's must not contain any 1/2 things, but note here is really missing imo.
00:37:120 (1) - Is this NC is needed? I guess it'll be fine too w/o it
01:57:889 (4) - new combo here?
02:49:043 (3) - sounds better increased 1/2 imo
02:53:274 (5) - swap NC w/ 02:54:043 (1) - ?

[Average]
01:14:043 (1) - sounds 01:14:235 here better imo
01:50:966 (1) - remove NC?

[Challenging]
00:27:505 (7) - Being replaced w/ 1/2 repeating slider sounds following vocal line better imo
02:04:620 (3) - same

[Tough]
00:45:197 (8) I'd suggest to make NC here, 00:45:966 remove here and 00:46:351 NC here. So you will not have that strange NC pattern


Rest seems fine for me. Good relaxing song, so I can just sit back and relax while modding this. Good luck w/ it

Thunderstorm wrote:

Greetings. Thanks for that, it was unexpected
Okay, I'll try to post osmething usefull.

[Relaxing]
00:25:005 - I now, that Easy diff's must not contain any 1/2 things, but note here is really missing imo. I prefer to don't add 1/2 patterns in this diff. You know, it is an Easy.
00:37:120 (1) - Is this NC is needed? I guess it'll be fine too w/o it I'll keep it for consistency with the other diffs. Maybe it is not reeeeeeally necessary, but in some way remark the music change
01:57:889 (4) - new combo here? Ok
02:49:043 (3) - sounds better increased 1/2 imo As it is, follow better the vocals imo
02:53:274 (5) - swap NC w/ 02:54:043 (1) - ? Hmm.. Ok, follow fine the vocal

[Average]
01:14:043 (1) - sounds 01:14:235 here better imo I used a 1/2 slider here, sounds better now
01:50:966 (1) - remove NC? No, due to the change in the stanza

[Challenging]
00:27:505 (7) - Being replaced w/ 1/2 repeating slider sounds following vocal line better imo
02:04:620 (3) - same I think these 1/1 works better in this Hard. I don't want to spam the 1/2

[Tough]
00:45:197 (8) I'd suggest to make NC here, 00:45:966 remove here and 00:46:351 NC here. So you will not have that strange NC pattern I did something similar


Rest seems fine for me. Good relaxing song, so I can just sit back and relax while modding this. Good luck w/ it

Thanks for your unexpected mod and the star . Updated!!

Que sean dos mods o/

General

1. Nada encontrado

Relaxing

• - 01:24:812 (3) - nazi* Para darle un poco de fluidez a este slider, mueve el segundo punto a x:34 y:179
  - 01:59:043 (2) - Si mi ojo no me falla este slider se ve algo doblado por asi decirlo, podrias ponerlo recto para que de un mejor blanket con el slider anterior

Average

• -- Se ve bien

Challenging

• -- Buen trabajo

Tough

• - 02:58:658 (1) - Me gustaria ver esta nota mas al medio, ya que las otras notas le harian un circulo, quedaria algo asi

Y eso es todo, nos vemos en tus proximos maps

Todo arreglado! Gracias de nuevo

hi from my queue o3o

[Relaxing]

1. 00:20:197 (3) - 2 grind up the 2nd white tick for having a perfect blanket
2. 01:59:812 (3) - i think is better to place itlike:
   
   SPOILER

   

[Average]

1. 00:21:351 (5,1) - this 2 sliders have a bit an inperfect line,i think is better to stack the (5) - with 00:19:812 (3) - and then fixing the spacing and the line with (1) - like:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:44:235 (3) - i think this slider should be like:
   
   SPOILER

   

[Challenging]

1. 02:42:889 (8,1) - i think you should do something like this here:
   
   SPOILER

   

really nice mapset ,waaah such a noob mod ;_; sorry owo/* star-chan for you

Lally wrote:

hi from my queue o3o Hi Lally :3

[Relaxing]

1. 00:20:197 (3) - 2 grind up the 2nd white tick for having a perfect blanket I fixed that blanket a bit :3
2. 01:59:812 (3) - i think is better to place itlike: I prefer to keep the symetry with the slider beginning, it doesn't affect anything anyways
   
   SPOILER

   

[Average]

1. 00:21:351 (5,1) - this 2 sliders have a bit an inperfect line,i think is better to stack the (5) - with 00:19:812 (3) - and then fixing the spacing and the line with (1) - like: Meh.. You are not the first one in suggest me that, so fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:44:235 (3) - i think this slider should be like: Hmm.. I like it as it is.
   
   SPOILER

   

[Challenging]

1. 02:42:889 (8,1) - i think you should do something like this here: Looks better now :3
   
   SPOILER

   

really nice mapset ,waaah such a noob mod ;_; sorry owo/* star-chan for you

Thanks for the mod and Star Lally :3. Updated!!

[Tough]
We want you to mix Jumping note
If you do, The map will be more interesting

Hello! Sorry for Delay! Probably not kudosu recommended, but hey it's a mod!

[General]

1. Everything seems to be clear (AIMod/AIBat/Manually)! Nothing to point out!

[Relaxing]

1. Nothing to suggest here.

[Average]

1. 00:46:351 (1,3) - I would suggest to curve these sliders just like you did on the other choruses, unless you are trying to add variety to the music.

[Challenging]

1. 00:30:966 (1) - I believe you meant to add a finish here since you did so in your other difficulties.
2. 01:17:120 (1) - Same as above.

[Tough]

1. 02:51:735 (3,4,5,6,1) - I guess make a better star pattern? If the pattern already flows good when playing, you don't have to change.

Excellent map! Nothing much to say! Good luck!

BeatofIke wrote:

Hello! Sorry for Delay! Probably not kudosu recommended, but hey it's a mod!

[General]

1. Everything seems to be clear (AIMod/AIBat/Manually)! Nothing to point out! Oh.. Great :3

[Relaxing]

1. Nothing to suggest here. Nice

[Average]

1. 00:46:351 (1,3) - I would suggest to curve these sliders just like you did on the other choruses, unless you are trying to add variety to the music. Hmm.. Ok, you're not the first in suggest that.

[Challenging]

1. 00:30:966 (1) - I believe you meant to add a finish here since you did so in your other difficulties.
2. 01:17:120 (1) - Same as above. Nice catch :3. Both fixed for consistency

[Tough]

1. 02:51:735 (3,4,5,6,1) - I guess make a better star pattern? If the pattern already flows good when playing, you don't have to change. Hmm.. I like how it plays/looks as it is. So, I'll leave that for now.

Excellent map! Nothing much to say! Good luck!

Thanks a lot Beato! Updated!
And thanks Gonz for the stars

Just sit back, sit back, sit back, relax, relax!

• [Relaxing]
  
  *Perhaps reduce AR by -1? feels a bit too fast for an easy diff.. but it may be just me.

1. 00:28:658 (3) - Improve this blanket. This note isn't properly making blanket with 00:27:120 (2).
2. 01:26:351 (1) - This note sounds too empty. How about adding a whistle? Or are they following the vocals? I didn't undestand at all your whistle pattern :3
3. 01:56:351 (3) - The clap at the repeat of this slider is inconsistent with the rest. Please consider removing this clap and replacing it with a whistle (like you did at 01:52:505 (2)).
4. 01:59:043 (2) - The rhythm here sounds weird. The empty space between this note and the next one feels awkward. Please consider making this slider larger, make it end at 01:59:428. Sounds better with the vocals and more consistent with your previous 1/1 sliders. I know you used some short 1/2 sliders but I think this one doesn't fit here.
5. 02:00:197 (1) - This spinner starts too early after 01:59:812 (3). My suggestion is moving it to 02:00:197. It fits more the voice than in the other way imo.
6. 02:49:812 (4) - Since the vocals change here, how about adding a newcombo here?
7. 02:55:581 (1) - Same about the previous spinner I mentioned.

• [Average]

1. 01:04:620 (1) - How about removing the whistle of this slider body? sounds really noisy.
2. 02:00:197 (1) - Same suggestion mentioned in Relaxing about spinners.
3. 02:55:581 (1) - Another spinner.
   
   Nothing else, really. Very solid difficulty.

• [Challenging]

1. 00:27:505 (7) - This slider sounds strange.. because you were following a lot the vocals but here you ignored the vocal at 00:27:697. Consider making this slider end there and then add a note at 00:27:889 to keep following consistenly the vocals.
2. 01:04:620 (1) - Same about this annoying whistle sound at the slider body. Now I understand that you used it to follow the voice.. but it doesn't fit imo. Again, I suggest you to remove it.
3. 01:12:312 (5) - ^
4. 02:39:620 (6) - Very nazi xD how about moving this slider a bit down to make this pattern like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:55:389 - How about adding a note here? Sounds strange because you skip a kinda important vocal.

• [Tough]

1. 01:21:351 (5) - This slider sounds too empty. How about adding a whistle at the end of it to follow the vocals?
2. 02:00:005 (4) - Perhaps add a hitfinish here to emphasize the end of the chorus?
3. 02:47:505 (1) - This slider isn't symmetric.. if it was your intention to make it like that you should fix it.
4. 02:52:312 (6) - This hitfinish here sounds too redundant. My suggestion is removing it. A finish at 02:52:505 (1) is fairly enough imo.
   
   I'm surprised. Your style is changing a lot in every map you make. I hope to see more stuff like this from you!
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By the way mancu, you should map this Panic! at the Disco song please. IT GIVES ME SO MANY OLD MEMORIES.

Whew.. well, call me back!

Kei wrote:

Just sit back, sit back, sit back, relax, relax! :D

• [Relaxing]
  
  *Perhaps reduce AR by -1? feels a bit too fast for an easy diff.. but it may be just me. I always use AR3 in my Easy difficulties. In addition, you can see that the BPM is a bit high (and the SV is not that low), so a lower AR won't fit properly with the map

1. 00:28:658 (3) - Improve this blanket. This note isn't properly making blanket with 00:27:120 (2). Fixed a bit
2. 01:26:351 (1) - This note sounds too empty. How about adding a whistle? Or are they following the vocals? I didn't undestand at all your whistle pattern :3 lol, yes they are following the vocals. But a whistle here doesn't hurt I think, so ok.
3. 01:56:351 (3) - The clap at the repeat of this slider is inconsistent with the rest. Please consider removing this clap and replacing it with a whistle (like you did at 01:52:505 (2)). I know that, but it is the best way to follow the Instrumental and vocals at the same time, you can notice that I did the same thing in the other difficulties.
4. 01:59:043 (2) - The rhythm here sounds weird. The empty space between this note and the next one feels awkward. Please consider making this slider larger, make it end at 01:59:428. Sounds better with the vocals and more consistent with your previous 1/1 sliders. I know you used some short 1/2 sliders but I think this one doesn't fit here. Hmm.. Ok, fixed.
5. 02:00:197 (1) - This spinner starts too early after 01:59:812 (3). My suggestion is moving it to 02:00:197. It fits more the voice than in the other way imo. Oh great, follows perfect the vocals and instrumental at the same time, that's great. Applied
6. 02:49:812 (4) - Since the vocals change here, how about adding a newcombo here? Sure.
7. 02:55:581 (1) - Same about the previous spinner I mentioned. Done.

• [Average]

1. 01:04:620 (1) - How about removing the whistle of this slider body? sounds really noisy. Hmm.. Ok, you are not the first modder in suggest me that, so fixed.
2. 02:00:197 (1) - Same suggestion mentioned in Relaxing about spinners. Both fixed.
3. 02:55:581 (1) - Another spinner.
   
   Nothing else, really. Very solid difficulty. Thanks :3

• [Challenging]

1. 00:27:505 (7) - This slider sounds strange.. because you were following a lot the vocals but here you ignored the vocal at 00:27:697. Consider making this slider end there and then add a note at 00:27:889 to keep following consistenly the vocals.Again, you are not the first in suggest me that, so maybe I'm wrong xD. Fixed.
2. 01:04:620 (1) - Same about this annoying whistle sound at the slider body. Now I understand that you used it to follow the voice.. but it doesn't fit imo. Again, I suggest you to remove it.
3. 01:12:312 (5) - ^ Both removed
4. 02:39:620 (6) - Very nazi xD how about moving this slider a bit down to make this pattern like this? haha. Alright
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:55:389 - How about adding a note here? Sounds strange because you skip a kinda important vocal. Nah.. I think plays fine as it is.

• [Tough]

1. 01:21:351 (5) - This slider sounds too empty. How about adding a whistle at the end of it to follow the vocals? Nice :3
2. 02:00:005 (4) - Perhaps add a hitfinish here to emphasize the end of the chorus? Sounds good . Added
3. 02:47:505 (1) - This slider isn't symmetric.. if it was your intention to make it like that you should fix it. I fixed it just a bit because it is not that bad anyways xD
4. 02:52:312 (6) - This hitfinish here sounds too redundant. My suggestion is removing it. A finish at 02:52:505 (1) is fairly enough imo. Okie.
   
   I'm surprised. Your style is changing a lot in every map you make. I hope to see more stuff like this from you! Glad to listen that. Thanks! :3
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By the way mancu, you should map this Panic! at the Disco song please. IT GIVES ME SO MANY OLD MEMORIES.

Whew.. well, call me back!

Thanks a lot Kei. Updated!!

Perfect! Now sit back, relax, and enjoy your bubble!

Yay for album projects!

General
- SliderBorder : 66,66,66 is a more appropriate colour for your hitcircleoverlay.

Tough
02:31:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Big difficulty jump from the rest of the map, which isn't good for DT players. I hope you could rethink by simplifying the pattern or adding more kicksliders for the players with less streaming skill.

These are really my only issues with the map, so just poke me after fixes.

SapphireGhost wrote:

Yay for album projects! :3

General
- SliderBorder : 66,66,66 is a more appropriate colour for your hitcircleoverlay. Used 55,55,55 because I think 66,66,66 is too bright.

Tough
02:31:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Big difficulty jump from the rest of the map, which isn't good for DT players. I hope you could rethink by simplifying the pattern or adding more kicksliders for the players with less streaming skill. Ok, I tried other thing instead

These are really my only issues with the map, so just poke me after fixes.

Thanks SG! Updated!!

This was no accident, this was a therapeutic chain of events.

\o3o/ gratz

SapphireGhost wrote:

This was no accident, this was a therapeutic chain of events.

thanks a lot SG!

yay, congratz!

Cooooooooooooooongrats!

Congratz mancus~!!

YAAAAAAAAAY GRATS! now map the Panic at the disco song I requested u

Thanks a lot, guys
@Kei: I'll probably do it

grats

congrats

Good song<3

Congratz mancu

Thanks again!