awp wrote:

Came up with a couple concept sketches based on the ideas Lolginer, Sinistro and I were throwing back and forth (both in this thread and on ORC).

http://www.twinkfish.com/misc/osupippi.png

http://www.twinkfish.com/misc/osupippi2.png

Criticism are go, but, make sure you keep the criticisms to the design and not the actual drawing because fuck you I'm not an artist !!! it is also beside the point.

And beating 31Gabe to the punch, no, the girl should not be wearing the kimono. Criticisms are opinions, not statements.

Some things I was considering alternatives for was the grey leotard-ish midriff being just bare skin, and perhaps another hairstyle, maybe cropped or something. I think the hair shouldn't be pinned up in any such way (as that gives a more formal impression and a less spirited/lively/outgoing feel) but perhaps it could do to be longer.

The name is just a femininization of "peppy" that popped into my head while I was at work. If you like it, take it, if not, who cares. Not too attached to it.

Anyway, at least this is a start for the meeting tomorrow =\

I thought it came out pretty well.

awp wrote:

A parody of Chuck Norris would make for a pretty lol dancer model.

Loginer wrote:

awp wrote:

Steven Seagal and Adam West, that is.

Also @lolginer hey I don't suppose you need a back view of my designs do you?

Unless there is anything else there, no. But I like your concept art. :/

31Gabe wrote:

This is Osume Osunic, an anime-style girl with a pink kimono (even though the socks are white and the sandals are brown and red).

kage__7 wrote:

Ok here's my unfinished osu mascot just to give you an idea of what i've been working on.

kage__7 wrote:

Ok here's my unfinished osu mascot just to give you an idea of what i've been working on.

LuigiHann wrote:

Did you draw it? It's a good drawing.

Think you could tweak the outfit and hair to match AWP's concept sketches?

James wrote:

eyeglasses <3

awp wrote:

but don't be an idiot in the future, thanks.

31Gabe wrote:

kage__7, your mascot portrait doesn't have a kimono. I am of the opinion that it is better for it to have a kimono.

awpEDIT: you need to be constructive, not abusive. I've edited the post, but don't be an idiot in the future, thanks.

Echo49 wrote:

A pendant/necklace of the osu button sounds like a good idea, but remember we can't go overboard with osu buttons.

James wrote:

Wheres the eyeglasses?

Loginer wrote:

Find something I need to improve. AND IF YOU MENTION TOES/FINGERS, I'M GOING TO TRACK YOU DOWN AND SHOOT YOU.

awp wrote:

Also breasts are too high up; collarbones, anyone?

Find something I need to improve.

MOOMANiBE wrote:

:( Your anatomy is really off... x_X;;;
I drew you up an image to illustrate.

Image

If you need any specifics, just ask ^^;

Sinistro wrote:

I think this looks more like a young girl's body now, cool

MOOMANiBE wrote:

Find something I need to improve.

Wellll... <.<;;; Not to be mean, but... Your anatomy is really off... x_X;;;
I drew you up an image to illustrate.



If you need any specifics, just ask ^^;

Loginer wrote:

Poor me. ;____;
It would help if you drew a picture like that with a front view, and one with a left view, as I could use them while modeling. :/

MOOMANiBE wrote:

Loginer wrote:

Poor me. ;____;
It would help if you drew a picture like that with a front view, and one with a left view, as I could use them while modeling. :/

I could try after finals assuming you don't mind waiting. Might be hard to keep the drawings consistent enough, though.

MOOMANiBE wrote:

Loginer wrote:

Poor me. ;____;
It would help if you drew a picture like that with a front view, and one with a left view, as I could use them while modeling. :/

I could try after finals assuming you don't mind waiting.

awp wrote:

I don't think Lolginer actually needs a rendered image (right?), just basically an inked outline similar to what you were doing in your previous image. Just so we don't get the wrong idea and use up unnecessary energy.

awp wrote:

On that note, I myself would still like to see a rendered image =3

MOOMANiBE wrote:

Yeah, it's just that when you're drawing for a model you have to make absolutely sure that the proportions are the same down to the finest details in both directions, otherwise problems start cropping up for the modeler.

Sarumaru wrote:

I'm always late to the party~ >w<

SOooo I drew up some character concepts but wanted to know what you guys thought before I proceeded, this is far from done but . Their outfits are very reminiscent of cheer outfits used in Japanese/Korean school. They are currently nameless but I like the name "Asami" for the female. Just throwin' this out there~

COMMENCE CRITICISM!! XD

Sarumaru wrote:

COMMENCE CRITICISM!! XD

peppy wrote:

Sarumaru wrote:

COMMENCE CRITICISM!! XD

Male - pretty nice
Female - ugh. reminds me of sailor moon - i much prefer the previous two concept works by kage7 and awp personally.

Echo49 wrote:

@moom: it looks great, but somehow the face looks... non-human ==;

LuigiHann wrote:

I like this new design, Sarumaru. I like the legwarmers in theory, but I can't help but think they make her look more like a Gundam, lol.

awp wrote:

-Actually writing "osu" on the circles looks a little tacky imo
-Skirt could do to be a BIT longer, almost to the knees?
-Face looks a little too serious/sure of herself/experienced?

Sarumaru wrote:

Thanks awp! Speaking of which, here's another image that I drew which is -loosely- based on awp's idea (When I drew the first two chars, I did not bother reading through the thread). It's is a very rough sketch but you get the idea.

oli16439 wrote:

why does the anime person have to be a girl

Sarumaru wrote:

Thanks awp! Speaking of which, here's another image that I drew which is -loosely- based on awp's idea (When I drew the first two chars, I did not bother reading through the thread). It's is a very rough sketch but you get the idea.

Echo49 wrote:

awp wrote:

-Actually writing "osu" on the circles looks a little tacky imo
-Skirt could do to be a BIT longer, almost to the knees?
-Face looks a little too serious/sure of herself/experienced?

I agree with the "osu" one but I think skirt and face are fine. Imo her arms and legs could be more thin though :P

edit: thighs and right forearm in particular

awp wrote:

As per LH's request, played around with the three prominent designs and rolled them all into one awp-idea